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- 0:18Speaker 1: Good afternoon, everyone. Here we are again at the reading
- 0:22Speaker 1: room for this month. And I'm here. My name's Krista.
- 0:26Speaker 1: I'm here with Barry.
- 0:27Speaker 2: Hello.
- 0:27Speaker 1: And Sue.
- 0:28Speaker 2: Hello.
- 0:30Speaker 1: Hi everyone. And so this week we are going to
- 0:34Speaker 1: discuss an Anne Bronte novel, The Tenant of Wildfell. And
- 0:41Speaker 1: also actually we're going to have the interview with Patrick Graham,
- 0:44Speaker 1: who's also a writer, children's writer and adult writer too.
- 0:48Speaker 1: So that's going to happen just after 2.30. So we're
- 0:52Speaker 1: going to start off, I'll start off with you Sue,
- 0:54Speaker 1: because you chose the book, the Anne Bronte book. So yes,
- 0:59Speaker 1: what do you think?
- 1:00Speaker 3: Well, firstly, I always wanted to read a novel by
- 1:04Speaker 3: the third Bronte sister, Anne, who, because she was the youngest,
- 1:08Speaker 3: sometimes I think she tends to get overlooked. And the
- 1:12Speaker 3: reason I chose The Tenant of Wildfell Hall was because
- 1:16Speaker 3: I believe it was based on some of the experiences
- 1:19Speaker 3: of her brother, Ranwell. So I found the book, particularly
- 1:25Speaker 3: in the beginning, very engrossing, and I found study of
- 1:29Speaker 3: the emotions of a man by a female author unusual
- 1:33Speaker 3: for that era, and in some ways even for today,
- 1:36Speaker 3: because Charlotte wrote about Jane Eyre, and Emily shared.
- 1:40Speaker 4: Her thoughts about Cathy, as well as the male character.
- 1:44Speaker 3: So I enjoyed it, Christa. I thought it was a
- 1:47Speaker 3: brave novel for its time, and it did have me hooked.
- 1:51Speaker 3: I mean, at the beginning, I was somewhat confused by
- 1:55Speaker 3: the number of characters, but as the book went on,
- 1:59Speaker 3: she managed to define them for the reader and strengthen
- 2:02Speaker 3: them so that we could appreciate the difference.
- 2:06Speaker 1: Yeah, yeah. I'm going to pass that on to Barry.
- 2:09Speaker 1: I'll come back to you, Sue. Barry, what did you
- 2:12Speaker 1: think of the novel?
- 2:14Speaker 5: Well, nail my colours to the mast straight away. I
- 2:17Speaker 5: found it another one of those Victorian novels about rich
- 2:22Speaker 5: people with servants, which I found very difficult to associate with.
- 2:28Speaker 2: I mean, I think.
- 2:29Speaker 5: I mean, there were issues which were held within the
- 2:33Speaker 5: book which I thought were interesting to do with, you know,
- 2:37Speaker 5: alcoholism and the fact that the main protagonist, the tenant
- 2:43Speaker 5: of Wildfell Hall, Helen Graham, actually had to leave her
- 2:46Speaker 5: abusive husband and take a child which was considered, you know,
- 2:51Speaker 5: particularly the wrong thing during Victorian times. And I understand
- 2:57Speaker 5: all of the issues, but I did find it very
- 3:01Speaker 5: heavy going to read. It's written in the first person twice,
- 3:06Speaker 5: if you like, in that the first part of the
- 3:08Speaker 5: book is written by Gilbert Markham, who falls in love
- 3:14Speaker 5: with the tenant of Wildfell Hall, Helen Graham. And the
- 3:19Speaker 5: second part of the book is her diary. So the
- 3:22Speaker 5: story is told from the two perspectives. both of which
- 3:27Speaker 5: I found very, very difficult to get very interested in.
- 3:33Speaker 2: That's my.
- 3:34Speaker 1: Fair enough. Well, I actually, I liked it. I thought
- 3:36Speaker 1: it was good. I was confused by the amount of characters.
- 3:40Speaker 1: And I found that most of them had the surname
- 3:42Speaker 1: beginning with H. So that also threw me. And then
- 3:45Speaker 1: they changed from calling her Helen or Mrs. Huntingdon. Was
- 3:49Speaker 1: that right?
- 3:49Speaker 3: Yeah.
- 3:50Speaker 1: And so I did get a bit confused. But then
- 3:52Speaker 1: like you, Sue, I got into it towards the end.
- 3:56Speaker 1: And I did think it was unusual for a novel
- 3:59Speaker 1: written in the 1800s, the way that she did show
- 4:02Speaker 1: all the emotions which I could relate to today. Like
- 4:06Speaker 1: the jealousy when she finds out, you know, someone's having
- 4:08Speaker 1: an affair with her husband. And the fact that she
- 4:13Speaker 1: was trying to protect her child from all the sins
- 4:17Speaker 1: that adults do. I found that was really interesting and
- 4:20Speaker 1: the way they did look at the alcoholism. And so
- 4:23Speaker 1: I enjoyed it. I kind of looked into Anne Bronte
- 4:26Speaker 1: and her life and I realised she was only 29
- 4:29Speaker 1: when she died. Having done like two novels and quite
- 4:34Speaker 1: a tragic story with the Brontes, isn't it? They all,
- 4:37Speaker 1: the father outlived them all, which I found quite interesting.
- 4:42Speaker 1: But I did like it and I get what Barry says.
- 4:44Speaker 1: You can only do so much of historical novels because
- 4:48Speaker 1: they are a bit same same however with this one
- 4:52Speaker 1: I wasn't sure how it was going to end and
- 4:54Speaker 1: that was quite good and I'm glad it did it
- 4:56Speaker 1: was a happy ending plot spoiler but I wasn't sure
- 5:01Speaker 1: so I liked that too and I also liked the
- 5:05Speaker 1: writing I thought it was really descriptive and beautiful the
- 5:08Speaker 1: way they write and I find that even though it's
- 5:10Speaker 1: 200 years ago you can still understand what they're saying
- 5:13Speaker 1: but it's just so poetic back to you.
- 5:15Speaker 3: Sue Yes, as well as the characters, I did find
- 5:20Speaker 3: that some of the sentences were long, which sometimes made
- 5:24Speaker 3: it difficult to read. And I understand Barry's point of view.
- 5:29Speaker 3: I think novels perhaps are written differently today because then
- 5:36Speaker 3: you were writing, there was very little distraction when you
- 5:39Speaker 3: were reading a novel. There wasn't your phone going, there
- 5:42Speaker 3: wasn't the internet, there wasn't the television, there wasn't travel.
- 5:46Speaker 3: So I think people did tend to describe things more,
- 5:51Speaker 3: and choose more poetic language in some cases, as novel
- 5:56Speaker 3: writing today. But I think the way she tattled the subject,
- 6:00Speaker 3: I think, was brave because she was actually writing about
- 6:04Speaker 3: her brother. And these were the children of a curate.
- 6:09Speaker 3: So for her to step out, and Bramwell, like Henry Huntington,
- 6:15Speaker 3: died of alcoholism, and he died before them. So they
- 6:21Speaker 3: were a tragic family. I did find some of the characters,
- 6:28Speaker 3: they surprised me, as with Gilbert. I found that the
- 6:33Speaker 3: changing of the development of Gilbert's personality was slightly shocking,
- 6:40Speaker 3: especially his assault on Mr Lawrence.
- 6:43Speaker 2: Yeah.
- 6:44Speaker 4: Which came kind of out of the blue.
- 6:47Speaker 3: And the fact that he didn't regret that, this man
- 6:50Speaker 3: had done nothing to him. And I did also want
- 6:55Speaker 3: to find out what would happen next. And the way
- 6:58Speaker 3: she's layered it with you're listening to Gilbert and then
- 7:03Speaker 3: you listen to Helen, I think it's a very difficult construction.
- 7:08Speaker 3: And I think it's also unusual for that time as well.
- 7:13Speaker 1: Yeah, yeah. Barry, can you add anything?
- 7:16Speaker 5: Yeah, no, I think that, I mean, following on from
- 7:18Speaker 5: what you said, Krista, and what Suze just said, you know,
- 7:21Speaker 5: like that it was a happy ending and that, you know,
- 7:25Speaker 5: bearing in mind Gilbert's attack on the guy who turned
- 7:29Speaker 5: out to be Helen's brother, I thought he was a wrong-un,
- 7:33Speaker 5: you know, so I don't see it as being a
- 7:34Speaker 5: happy ending at all, really, because, you know, I don't
- 7:38Speaker 5: think attacking somebody with a metal-edged... stick or whatever is
- 7:44Speaker 5: like normal behaviour and bearing in mind that you know
- 7:47Speaker 5: he describes it himself you know it's like you know
- 7:53Speaker 5: you wonder what the real story is in there bearing
- 7:56Speaker 5: in mind of course they're all fictional characters but you
- 7:58Speaker 5: know what I mean it's like if you're trying to
- 8:00Speaker 5: build up a person who would go and do that
- 8:03Speaker 5: you know whether or not or whatever his reasons were
- 8:07Speaker 5: because he thought that the other guy was actually sort
- 8:11Speaker 5: of had designs on the love of his life, as
- 8:15Speaker 5: it were. It's not a reason to go around attacking people.
- 8:19Speaker 5: And so, you know, to end up with him, you know,
- 8:22Speaker 5: should maybe just enter the fire, you know. But the
- 8:25Speaker 5: other thing is, if I can just continue with that,
- 8:28Speaker 5: is that the problem I have isn't necessarily the flowery
- 8:32Speaker 5: language or the, you know, and the complicated language. way
- 8:37Speaker 5: of writing because some of that can be very good
- 8:40Speaker 5: taken in small parts and savoured so I'm not against
- 8:44Speaker 5: the idea of that. I think it's more the characterisation
- 8:47Speaker 5: of these historical novels where these are all about rich
- 8:51Speaker 5: families who have servants and I just don't feel that
- 8:55Speaker 5: I can identify with those. None of my ancestors would
- 8:58Speaker 5: ever have been rich people with servants and nor am
- 9:01Speaker 5: I And it's not even something I hanker after. I mean,
- 9:06Speaker 5: I found it very strange, her maidservant, Rachel, who was
- 9:10Speaker 5: prepared to sort of carry on serving her and looking
- 9:13Speaker 5: after her and using her own money to do so,
- 9:15Speaker 5: which I just thought, you know, flippin' heck, love, you know,
- 9:19Speaker 5: get a life, you know.
- 9:20Speaker 1: I get that, but then she would have been destitute,
- 9:22Speaker 1: wouldn't she, without her? I think that's why she had
- 9:24Speaker 1: to have somewhere to live. That's what I kind of
- 9:27Speaker 1: got from that.
- 9:28Speaker 2: Maybe.
- 9:29Speaker 5: I don't think, like I say, there's too many extremes
- 9:32Speaker 5: in these things. And basically, you know, they're all about
- 9:36Speaker 5: rich people with servants, you know, and it's not something
- 9:39Speaker 5: which really interests me as a topic. So, you know,
- 9:43Speaker 5: I'm against it from the start, if you like.
- 9:45Speaker 1: Yeah, and I get that. But I also found with it,
- 9:48Speaker 1: it was frustrating because they were in love and she
- 9:50Speaker 1: kept postponing it. And maybe that's what they had to do.
- 9:53Speaker 1: But the fact that they didn't live as long as us,
- 9:56Speaker 1: And she's like, come back, in six months time and
- 9:59Speaker 1: nine months time when they're losing time I find it
- 10:05Speaker 1: frustrating but it is part of that era I think. Sue,
- 10:09Speaker 1: can you add?
- 10:11Speaker 3: Yeah, I think that Rachel would be of a certain
- 10:16Speaker 3: age and she wouldn't have anywhere else to go. She
- 10:18Speaker 3: would be too old to be employable by anybody else
- 10:23Speaker 3: and i think um sometimes we call them servants but
- 10:27Speaker 3: they were more like.
- 10:29Speaker 5: Friends companions or something yeah maybe.
- 10:33Speaker 3: Just servants um and sometimes you have the nanny in
- 10:38Speaker 3: some of the books it's more that the children are
- 10:41Speaker 3: closer to the nanny than they are their own parents
- 10:44Speaker 3: yeah So I think it's a bit of a grey area.
- 10:48Speaker 3: And like Barry, none of my family were rich. So
- 10:51Speaker 3: sometimes I think it's difficult for me to understand that
- 10:55Speaker 3: kind of relationship because of the era in which I
- 11:00Speaker 3: was born.
- 11:00Speaker 4: But some of my relations were actually in service.
- 11:05Speaker 1: Yes.
- 11:05Speaker 3: You know, I had an aunt that was in service.
- 11:07Speaker 3: I had a great aunt that was in service because
- 11:13Speaker 3: in many ways, It was better than being down the pits,
- 11:16Speaker 3: if you were a woman.
- 11:17Speaker 6: Yes.
- 11:18Speaker 4: It was better than being in a factory.
- 11:21Speaker 1: You see, I'll just say... Yeah, sorry, Sue, carry on.
- 11:24Speaker 3: So, but the book, I found that the construction of
- 11:30Speaker 3: it was clever, and she reminded... I like the way,
- 11:36Speaker 3: in my particular edition, page 46... that she put a
- 11:41Speaker 3: reminder in there that Gilbert was still writing to Halford
- 11:45Speaker 3: and that his recollection, that's to us, to guide us.
- 11:49Speaker 3: And it made me feel as if I was reading
- 11:52Speaker 3: someone else's mail or someone else's diary.
- 11:56Speaker 1: Yeah.
- 11:57Speaker 3: I think it's a dark book, but I like the
- 12:01Speaker 3: way she puts some humour into it, such as, like,
- 12:04Speaker 3: the names on the... Mr Boreham, like, boring them. And
- 12:09Speaker 3: I actually laughed out loud about the thing about pouring
- 12:14Speaker 3: the milk into the saucer. It's sort of like a
- 12:18Speaker 3: tea setting. Now, I do think that one of the
- 12:22Speaker 3: things I like about the book is that none of
- 12:25Speaker 3: the characters are holier than thou. They've all got some
- 12:30Speaker 3: trait in them.
- 12:33Speaker 4: So, like, I felt sorry for Helen.
- 12:36Speaker 3: But then, the way she treats Mr Hargreaves pain that
- 12:40Speaker 3: he might have been changed my mind at that point
- 12:42Speaker 3: because I thought she was treated cruelly by the person
- 12:48Speaker 3: she loved it was awful but she treats she treats
- 12:53Speaker 3: this particular person in much the same way and it
- 12:57Speaker 3: seems to be acceptable to her so I did like
- 13:01Speaker 3: the fact that the characters were flawed and did have
- 13:05Speaker 3: a lot of I suppose inner rage.
- 13:08Speaker 1: Yeah, I liked that too. I thought it was very
- 13:11Speaker 1: interesting what they touched upon, you know, even like having
- 13:15Speaker 1: a child and running away and being a single parent.
- 13:18Speaker 1: And I did like, and I liked the characters because
- 13:22Speaker 1: of that too, Sue. But I also thought it could
- 13:26Speaker 1: have been a lot shorter in a way. It kind
- 13:29Speaker 1: of prolonged, especially I think towards the end when I
- 13:32Speaker 1: just wanted to get on with it and know what
- 13:34Speaker 1: was going to happen. And she seemed to prolong the
- 13:37Speaker 1: last couple of chapters. which I was just eager to finish.
- 13:41Speaker 3: I agree with that, Krista, that I've got an idea
- 13:44Speaker 3: of saying that at the end of the book, I.
- 13:45Speaker 4: Felt it was overlong.
- 13:47Speaker 1: Yeah.
- 13:48Speaker 3: Unlike you, I just wanted it to be resolved.
- 13:54Speaker 1: Yeah, yeah. And it was. For me, it was a
- 13:57Speaker 1: good ending because I like happy endings. But like Barry said,
- 14:01Speaker 1: it wasn't a happy ending for everyone because, what was it, Mrs. Loughborough,
- 14:06Speaker 1: was it, who went off to Europe and, And she
- 14:11Speaker 1: was destitute and died there. And yeah, it was all
- 14:15Speaker 1: the things that I suppose you look back and.
- 14:18Speaker 3: It wasn't the happy ending for Henry Huntington. I mean,
- 14:22Speaker 3: I found his disintegration bleak, frightening and well-portrayed.
- 14:27Speaker 1: Yeah, I did too. I thought that was good. I'm
- 14:29Speaker 1: just thinking, Barry, you should read some Charles Dickens maybe
- 14:32Speaker 1: to look at things from a different perspective.
- 14:34Speaker 3: No, thanks.
- 14:35Speaker 5: No, I'm nothing against Charles Dickens. It's just that, yeah,
- 14:42Speaker 5: I think, I mean, part of the thing is when
- 14:44Speaker 5: you say about Hargreave, I mean, Hargreave was trying to
- 14:48Speaker 5: seduce Helen Graham while she was still married. So I'm
- 14:51Speaker 5: not sure. that he deserved any better treatment than anybody else, really.
- 14:56Speaker 5: And I think that in terms of... I mean, this
- 15:00Speaker 5: is part of the point, you know, because they weren't
- 15:02Speaker 5: just sort of, you know, rich people who were sort
- 15:06Speaker 5: of maybe benevolent to the people who worked on there.
- 15:09Speaker 5: I mean, as far as I could tell, Huntington, his
- 15:13Speaker 5: basic thing was going hunting and getting drunk and philandering,
- 15:17Speaker 5: you know, and so.
- 15:20Speaker 5: And Hargreave and his other chums were like that as well.
- 15:24Speaker 5: And the women who were in their circle were not
- 15:27Speaker 5: much better. And it's not like me to pass judging
- 15:30Speaker 5: on them. They didn't seem to have anything gainful to
- 15:33Speaker 5: do in any of it. It was just like spending
- 15:36Speaker 5: their money. And I think that in a lot of
- 15:38Speaker 5: these historical novels, fixation with bad boys I find difficult
- 15:45Speaker 5: to understand. And I think that... I mean, I read,
- 15:49Speaker 5: as a result of us doing Death Comes to Pemberley,
- 15:51Speaker 5: I read Pride and Prejudice, which for me is a
- 15:53Speaker 5: far better written and far better characterised and the characters
- 15:58Speaker 5: are much more believable and the writing is a lot wittier,
- 16:02Speaker 5: you know. And so, you know, it's not like you
- 16:05Speaker 5: can compare like with like, but if I was recommending
- 16:09Speaker 5: to somebody to read one of those books, it would
- 16:11Speaker 5: be Pride and Prejudice rather than any of.
- 16:13Speaker 2: These, I would say.
- 16:15Speaker 1: The Brontes. But I suppose, you know, for that era,
- 16:18Speaker 1: it was really risque, wasn't she? And the way she portrayed...
- 16:21Speaker 1: I'm sure it was. She had, like, the man. She
- 16:24Speaker 1: was the man in it, wasn't she? As well as
- 16:26Speaker 1: the woman. So she was being kind of out of
- 16:28Speaker 1: her comfort zone, putting down how she thought men thought.
- 16:33Speaker 1: And I think that would have been quite unusual.
- 16:35Speaker 2: And indeed, Anna. Yeah, sorry, Sue, you can't.
- 16:38Speaker 3: I'm sorry, I was just going to say, she got
- 16:40Speaker 3: a lot of that from Brownwell.
- 16:41Speaker 4: Yeah.
- 16:42Speaker 6: Yeah.
- 16:43Speaker 3: Because Brownwell did fall in love with a married woman
- 16:46Speaker 3: and had an affair with her and was planning to
- 16:50Speaker 3: marry her. He was there to tutor the children. And
- 16:55Speaker 3: in the end, the husband died and Brownwell thought he
- 16:58Speaker 3: was going to marry this rich widow. And she turned
- 17:02Speaker 3: him down and didn't want to marry him. But he
- 17:05Speaker 3: was a philanderer and an alcoholic. And he's a very,
- 17:09Speaker 3: very sad man. character because the Brontes weren't rich but
- 17:15Speaker 3: they did have a couple of servants but the home
- 17:18Speaker 3: was dependent on the father because.
- 17:22Speaker 4: He was the vicar.
- 17:25Speaker 3: But with Branwell he was kind of overshadowed by his
- 17:28Speaker 3: three sisters there were five girls originally and one boy
- 17:33Speaker 3: and all the hopes were on Branwell two older girls
- 17:36Speaker 3: died and the mother died and the aunt came in
- 17:40Speaker 3: to look after them. So he was very overshadowed. And
- 17:44Speaker 3: when you think of Anne living in a parsonage in
- 17:47Speaker 3: a remote area of Yorkshire, as it was then, she
- 17:50Speaker 3: would not know the inner turmoil of a character like Huntington,
- 17:55Speaker 3: but she saw it in Branwell.
- 17:57Speaker 1: That's interesting. Did any of them marry, like Charlotte or Emma?
- 18:01Speaker 3: Yes, Charlotte married the curate, father's curate, and died in
- 18:06Speaker 3: childbirth when she was 36.
- 18:08Speaker 1: Wow. And what about Emily? Did she marry?
- 18:11Speaker 3: Oh, no, Emily died within a year. They lost Brownwell,
- 18:16Speaker 3: they lost Emily, and then they lost Al. So the
- 18:20Speaker 3: three of them died within a year.
- 18:22Speaker 5: Wow.
- 18:23Speaker 3: And it was just Charlotte left looking after her father.
- 18:26Speaker 3: And then she married his curate and stayed and looked
- 18:31Speaker 3: after her father. And then she died in childbirth and
- 18:34Speaker 3: the child died. So in the end, it was Charlotte's
- 18:38Speaker 3: husband that looked after Mr. Bronte, and I think he
- 18:41Speaker 3: was 80 when he died.
- 18:42Speaker 1: Wow, and no heirs, hey?
- 18:45Speaker 3: Sorry?
- 18:46Speaker 1: No heirs to the property or anything?
- 18:49Speaker 4: No, no, there was nothing.
- 18:53Speaker 1: That's really quite interesting, isn't it, and very sad.
- 18:57Speaker 6: Yes.
- 18:57Speaker 1: You can go to their house, can't you, in Howarth?
- 18:59Speaker 1: You can do it. I think I went to Howarth.
- 19:01Speaker 1: I didn't go to their house.
- 19:02Speaker 5: I haven't been. I would be tempted to go to
- 19:05Speaker 5: it just out of interest.
- 19:06Speaker 1: To put a cross on it.
- 19:09Speaker 5: No, I think the thing is, it's like, I mean,
- 19:12Speaker 5: you know, apparently Charlotte disapproved of this novel.
- 19:17Speaker 1: Yeah.
- 19:18Speaker 5: I mean, I think that, yes, you need to understand
- 19:21Speaker 5: the context in which it was published and what the
- 19:23Speaker 5: mores of the time were. and, you know, how it
- 19:26Speaker 5: went against it. One of the principal ones in terms of, like,
- 19:30Speaker 5: a feminist perspective, you know, of Helen actually refusing her
- 19:35Speaker 5: husband's sex, you know, which was, you know, at the
- 19:38Speaker 5: time considered to be, you know, to be wrong as well,
- 19:41Speaker 5: you know, and, in fact, didn't change for a long
- 19:43Speaker 5: time into the last century. But, you know, those sort of.
- 19:50Speaker 5: Those sort of things although they are obviously relevant and
- 19:55Speaker 5: when you look at it in terms of that particular
- 19:58Speaker 5: time it still doesn't make it easy reading when you're
- 20:04Speaker 5: reading it now if you know what I mean so
- 20:07Speaker 5: you can understand the significance of it but it doesn't
- 20:11Speaker 5: mean it's a page-turner.
- 20:12Speaker 2: You know.
- 20:13Speaker 1: Not for some people. Interesting how they got to all
- 20:15Speaker 1: write under men's names, didn't they?
- 20:18Speaker 2: Yes, indeed, yeah.
- 20:19Speaker 1: Which I thought was quite interesting. Did they all write
- 20:22Speaker 1: under men's names, the three?
- 20:24Speaker 3: Yes, yeah, they had to, Christa, at that point, because
- 20:27Speaker 3: as women, there was two reasons. One, the work wouldn't
- 20:31Speaker 3: be considered by a publisher coming from a woman. And also,
- 20:37Speaker 3: to protect.
- 20:39Speaker 3: Their status in society because they were the vicar's daughters
- 20:44Speaker 3: and the vicar's daughters should be cleaner than clean if
- 20:48Speaker 3: you understand what I mean and the subjects that they're
- 20:51Speaker 3: touching on would not be deemed suitable by certain members
- 20:57Speaker 3: of the congregation a.
- 20:58Speaker 6: Bit racy yes yeah and also touching I think touching
- 21:04Speaker 6: a little bit on what went on behind closed doors
- 21:08Speaker 6: yeah absolutely.
- 21:09Speaker 1: Yeah yeah yeah Well, I think Wuthering Heights was quite
- 21:12Speaker 1: racy too, wasn't it? Oh, yes.
- 21:14Speaker 3: I mean, the sort of this bit where Heathcliff hangs
- 21:18Speaker 3: a child over a banister.
- 21:20Speaker 1: Right, yeah.
- 21:21Speaker 3: It's like, wow. You know, if I saw that on
- 21:23Speaker 3: TV today, I'd be a bit like, wow, that's a bit,
- 21:27Speaker 3: you know. But in the year in which they lived,
- 21:32Speaker 3: I think they were particularly brave.
- 21:35Speaker 1: I think so too, yes. Like I said, I quite
- 21:38Speaker 1: enjoyed it. we haven't got as much time today because
- 21:41Speaker 1: we've got an interview coming up. So I'm just going
- 21:43Speaker 1: to ask Sue, you've got a poem, haven't you, about
- 21:45Speaker 1: the Brontes?
- 21:46Speaker 4: Oh, yes, yes.
- 21:47Speaker 1: Can you share it with me? You've got a cold,
- 21:49Speaker 1: haven't you, Sue, like me?
- 21:50Speaker 3: Well, I've got, Chris, it's an allergy.
- 21:53Speaker 1: Oh, is that what it is? Yeah, I've got a
- 21:55Speaker 1: bit of a cold.
- 21:55Speaker 3: My allergy has flared up, so it's given me all
- 21:58Speaker 3: kinds of hay fever and stumping at the moment.
- 22:02Speaker 6: Oh, gosh.
- 22:02Speaker 1: Well, thanks for coming on.
- 22:04Speaker 6: Sorry?
- 22:05Speaker 1: Thanks for coming on the show.
- 22:06Speaker 4: Oh, no, no, you're welcome, you're welcome.
- 22:09Speaker 2: Yeah.
- 22:10Speaker 3: So this is called The Spirit of the Brontes Muse
- 22:15Speaker 3: and it's about their life, the four children at the
- 22:18Speaker 3: vicarage and it's seen from the inspiration that they sort
- 22:23Speaker 3: of gave to one another. So The Spirit of the
- 22:26Speaker 3: Brontes Muse. Sharp cutting wind was glittering outside and thin
- 22:33Speaker 3: ice fingers of snow seemed to tap on thick leaded
- 22:37Speaker 3: panes where we were inside. Dreaming fearful images as we
- 22:42Speaker 3: sat at the highly polished table, talking childishly about this
- 22:47Speaker 3: and that. Then Aunt Brownwell would tell us a fable,
- 22:51Speaker 3: staring our deepest health fears into fact. Yes, there were
- 22:55Speaker 3: always five of us at tea. Brownwell, Charlotte, Anne, Emily
- 23:00Speaker 3: and me. As we grew up, we would walk on
- 23:03Speaker 3: the moors. Where darkness and trees bent double with age
- 23:07Speaker 3: Would move us towards the wind that roars And we
- 23:11Speaker 3: would flee home, our minds in a rage To put
- 23:14Speaker 3: down our thoughts on a virgin white sheet Lands full
- 23:18Speaker 3: of mysteries, armies, monsters and sea Bloody battles where some
- 23:23Speaker 3: would face defeat In our magical kingdoms where all were
- 23:27Speaker 3: free Yes, there were always five of us at tea Brownwell, Charlotte, Anne,
- 23:33Speaker 3: Emily and me Clocks ticked on and we had to
- 23:37Speaker 3: leave house and enter the kingdom of harsh real life
- 23:41Speaker 3: to earn a living and prove our worth. But for
- 23:44Speaker 3: each it ended in tears and strife.
- 23:47Speaker 4: So back home.
- 23:48Speaker 3: We came to our magical home where in fever we
- 23:52Speaker 3: wrote desiring to be read. Success came and suddenly we
- 23:56Speaker 3: were well known but it quickly turned cold for Bramwell
- 24:00Speaker 3: was dead. Now there were only four of us at
- 24:04Speaker 3: tea Sweet Charlotte, Cheyenne, Emily and me. Harsh grey shadows
- 24:10Speaker 3: hung over us, making us fear. Then they wrapped poor
- 24:14Speaker 3: Emily in her shroud. So strong and evil they were
- 24:18Speaker 3: soon snatching frail Anne away from her sister, so proud.
- 24:24Speaker 3: Charlotte alone with her grief would continue to weave magic
- 24:28Speaker 3: with her words and her lines until death returned and
- 24:32Speaker 3: took her away too. but they live on in other
- 24:35Speaker 3: people's minds. Today there is only one left at tea.
- 24:41Speaker 3: No Brownwell, Charlotte, Anne, Emily.
- 24:45Speaker 4: Just me.
- 24:47Speaker 1: Yeah, how harsh. It's actually quite unbelievable, really, that he
- 24:51Speaker 1: was left the father on his own. It's just so tragic.
- 24:58Speaker 3: Six children and he outlived them all.
- 25:01Speaker 1: I know. That could be a novel in itself, couldn't it?
- 25:05Speaker 4: It could. It could.
- 25:06Speaker 1: Okay, before we choose our next book, okay, we're going
- 25:09Speaker 1: to just maybe rate out of ten for this novel. Okay,
- 25:14Speaker 1: so I'll let you go first, Sue. Out of ten?
- 25:18Speaker 2: Eight.
- 25:18Speaker 6: Eight. Barry?
- 25:22Speaker 2: Five.
- 25:22Speaker 1: Five. I think eight as well for me. I did
- 25:26Speaker 1: enjoy it, but I do like the historical novels as well,
- 25:28Speaker 1: and I thought it was a bit different. So I
- 25:31Speaker 1: quite enjoyed it. OK, Barry, can you have the honours
- 25:34Speaker 1: of picking the next novel for next month? And by
- 25:38Speaker 1: the way, anyone who's listening, you're very welcome to join us.
- 25:41Speaker 1: You can read the book. You can even come into
- 25:43Speaker 1: the radio station and join us on the reading room.
- 25:46Speaker 1: We generally have the reading room on a Thursday afternoon
- 25:49Speaker 1: at two o'clock every month. So, Barry, let's see what
- 25:54Speaker 1: the next novel is.
- 26:00Speaker 2: Aldous Huxley, Brave New World.
- 26:02Speaker 1: Okay. How's everyone looking? Barry's looking at me because he
- 26:07Speaker 1: knows it was my choice. Has anyone ever read it?
- 26:12Speaker 4: I've read it a long time ago, yes.
- 26:15Speaker 1: Well, it's not a historical novel anyway.
- 26:17Speaker 5: It probably is now, actually.
- 26:21Speaker 1: It's more of dystopian, isn't it, which I like. What
- 26:24Speaker 1: were you going to say, Sue?
- 26:25Speaker 3: I was just going to say it's quite the opposite.
- 26:28Speaker 3: It's like science fiction, but I enjoyed, I will say
- 26:33Speaker 3: I enjoyed it first time round, but it'll be interesting
- 26:36Speaker 3: now to see how I appreciate it.
- 26:39Speaker 4: Shall we say, as an older person.
- 26:41Speaker 1: Yeah, that'll be interesting. Barry, do you know what it's about?
- 26:45Speaker 1: Have you any idea?
- 26:47Speaker 2: Well.
- 26:48Speaker 5: No, I'm guessing it's a novel about a dystopian future.
- 26:53Speaker 1: True, that's... Yeah, didn't take much to think that. Sue,
- 26:57Speaker 1: didn't you want to share some events with us as
- 26:59Speaker 1: well that's happening in St Helens?
- 27:01Speaker 3: Yes, I did, Krista. The first one is actually next Wednesday,
- 27:07Speaker 3: so I hope I've got rid of this allergy.
- 27:08Speaker 1: Yeah.
- 27:10Speaker 3: And it's actually 4th of November... And it's St Helens
- 27:15Speaker 3: in 50 buildings, and it's part one of it. And
- 27:19Speaker 3: it's an illustrated talk. And it's at one of your
- 27:22Speaker 3: favourite churches, Clifton. It's at St Helens Parish Church.
- 27:25Speaker 1: Okay, yeah.
- 27:28Speaker 3: And it's £ 5. And its booking is on 01744 22909.
- 27:34Speaker 3: Can you repeat that, please? 01744 22909. 22909, which is
- 27:45Speaker 3: the church. I'll pay on the door.
- 27:48Speaker 2: Okay.
- 27:49Speaker 1: And what time is that?
- 27:50Speaker 3: And that's 7.30 till 9 o'clock.
- 27:53Speaker 2: Okay.
- 27:54Speaker 1: I've actually got something booked in for that night, but
- 27:56Speaker 1: I'm always intending to come. You know I am, Sue.
- 27:59Speaker 4: I know.
- 27:59Speaker 3: I know that, Chris.
- 28:01Speaker 1: We're all very, very active people, aren't we? You've got
- 28:04Speaker 1: to be, especially in the winter.
- 28:05Speaker 2: I know.
- 28:07Speaker 4: And the second one.
- 28:09Speaker 3: It's Winter Chills, and it's Seasonal Gold Stories, written and
- 28:13Speaker 3: performed by myself. That's on Friday the 20th of November,
- 28:19Speaker 3: and that's 6.37, and it's, again, at Mr. Chan's Restaurant
- 28:24Speaker 3: in North Road, St.
- 28:25Speaker 6: Helens.
- 28:25Speaker 1: Yes, I know that place.
- 28:27Speaker 3: Indeed, and it's £ 20, including the delicious complimentary dim sum.
- 28:34Speaker 3: Booking is essential, and the number to ring, which is
- 28:37Speaker 3: Charlie's number, that's the restaurant number, 01744 451388. So I'll
- 28:45Speaker 3: just repeat that for you, Krista. It's 01744 451388. Okay.
- 28:53Speaker 1: If anyone is interested in coming and they haven't got
- 28:56Speaker 1: those numbers, you can email me, and I am at
- 29:00Speaker 1: krista-schafer at... lcr, l-c-r.co. I'll check on that actually.
- 29:10Speaker 2: Yeah.
- 29:10Speaker 1: But anyway, you can, you can email me even at
- 29:12Speaker 1: KristaShafer at yahoo.com too. You could email me there and
- 29:16Speaker 1: I can give you the information. Okay. So I'm going
- 29:21Speaker 1: to play the interview with Patrick Graham, who is, like
- 29:24Speaker 1: I've said before, he's a writer. He's written children's books
- 29:29Speaker 1: and he's written an adult book too. So We'll discuss
- 29:33Speaker 1: our next meeting. And yeah, thanks for coming, everyone. And
- 29:37Speaker 1: we'll see you in a month.
- 29:38Speaker 2: Okay bye thank you.
- 29:40Speaker 1: Bye sue speak to you soon bye bye bye sue
- 29:44Speaker 1: can you stay on the line for a bit yes
- 29:46Speaker 1: we'll do so this month's reading room guest is patrick
- 29:51Speaker 1: now patrick i don't know much about you you um
- 29:54Speaker 1: somebody recommended that i interview you because you are a
- 29:57Speaker 1: writer and an actor, possibly, script writer. So can you
- 30:03Speaker 1: just tell me what actually you do?
- 30:06Speaker 2: Well, as a job, I work for the Leaving Care Service,
- 30:12Speaker 2: working with children, just coming out from children's social care,
- 30:16Speaker 2: and we mentor them into adulthood, independent living, accommodation, employment, training,
- 30:22Speaker 2: that type of thing. That's my main job.
- 30:25Speaker 1: Okay.
- 30:26Speaker 2: But, My other passion is creative writing, which I've done
- 30:31Speaker 2: for a number of years. But I'd say I've took
- 30:34Speaker 2: myself seriously and I openly call myself a writer for
- 30:37Speaker 2: like the last five, six years now. Okay.
- 30:40Speaker 1: And what made you start to write? Have you always
- 30:44Speaker 1: written when you were younger or did you just start
- 30:46Speaker 1: to write as an adult?
- 30:48Speaker 2: Well, obviously in school you did bits of writing and
- 30:51Speaker 2: stuff like that. But when it comes to creative writing,
- 30:55Speaker 2: it was in later adult life. But yeah, I did
- 30:58Speaker 2: like writing in school, like writing stories and whatever, but
- 31:02Speaker 2: I never ever finished any. And the teacher would always say, oh,
- 31:04Speaker 2: that sounds really good, but you never seem to finish them.
- 31:07Speaker 2: And then by the next lesson, you've moved on to
- 31:10Speaker 2: something else. And I didn't have that in me at
- 31:13Speaker 2: the time to take that home and carry it on.
- 31:16Speaker 1: So after many, many years of not writing, or did
- 31:18Speaker 1: you write just for yourself in those years before you
- 31:21Speaker 1: started to write books?
- 31:23Speaker 2: No, it wasn't so.
- 31:23Speaker 1: You just one day woke up, basically?
- 31:25Speaker 2: Yeah, adult life where... I've started trying to hand that
- 31:28Speaker 2: writing from trying to write plays, poetry. I do write poetry,
- 31:34Speaker 2: still do write poetry, but trying to hand that plays.
- 31:37Speaker 2: You know, I've had one or two plays performed on
- 31:40Speaker 2: community theatre level. So, yeah, because I got involved in
- 31:44Speaker 2: a local drama group going back maybe 30 years now.
- 31:48Speaker 2: It was called Shawfields Community Theatre. I then changed the
- 31:51Speaker 2: dingle then. They're still going in some capacity now and
- 31:54Speaker 2: they operate out of the Valley Theatre.
- 31:57Speaker 1: So when you say you got involved, did you participate
- 32:00Speaker 1: or did you run it?
- 32:01Speaker 2: I participated as an actor and got involved in a
- 32:04Speaker 2: couple of plays. Toll Puddle 6, I remember, was one
- 32:07Speaker 2: play we'd done. And there was a couple of others.
- 32:12Speaker 2: I can't remember the names off the top of my head.
- 32:14Speaker 2: And then at one point, going back to City of
- 32:17Speaker 2: Culture year 2008, if I'm right, I was asked to
- 32:20Speaker 2: write a play myself then. And I did. That was basically,
- 32:26Speaker 2: even though I'd attempted to write plays in my own time,
- 32:28Speaker 2: nothing that I'd ever shared with anyone. So this was
- 32:31Speaker 2: literally a drop in the ocean. And I did write
- 32:34Speaker 2: a play. And I was asked to write a play
- 32:37Speaker 2: during October. Well, it was for October. It was a
- 32:41Speaker 2: creative week exploring different themes and black history and so on.
- 32:46Speaker 2: So I was asked to write a play about the
- 32:49Speaker 2: Tugasi Airmen in America, like the Black Air Force pilots
- 32:54Speaker 2: during World War II. But I thought, well, no. Not
- 32:57Speaker 2: that I didn't want to write about them. I thought, well,
- 32:59Speaker 2: I'm born and raised in England, and I've noticed a
- 33:02Speaker 2: lot of Black history centers on America. So I thought, well,
- 33:05Speaker 2: let me do something that connects me, being born in Britain,
- 33:11Speaker 2: having heritage in the Caribbean, and still keeping in the
- 33:16Speaker 2: theme of World War II. So I came up with
- 33:19Speaker 2: a story where I researched real people and then created
- 33:23Speaker 2: a fictional story around some of their real life events.
- 33:28Speaker 2: And I called it My Mother's Children Don't Like Me.
- 33:31Speaker 2: And I came up with the name first and then
- 33:34Speaker 2: worked backwards and thought, well, how can I now represent
- 33:37Speaker 2: that as a play? So it was based on a
- 33:40Speaker 2: Jamaican brother and sister and a Guyanese teacher and a
- 33:44Speaker 2: Guyanese pupil. who had all listened to various radio shows.
- 33:49Speaker 2: There was a program that was called This Is England Calling.
- 33:52Speaker 2: It used to be broadcast on the BBC at the time.
- 33:55Speaker 2: And in the different respectful families, they listened to these shows.
- 33:59Speaker 2: So at some point, they all decided to join the
- 34:03Speaker 2: war effort. And then there was a series of happenings.
- 34:06Speaker 2: Some of it was based on true accounts of people
- 34:09Speaker 2: who had researched. And then I wove a fictional story
- 34:13Speaker 2: to join it all together.
- 34:14Speaker 1: So you'd never written a play before?
- 34:16Speaker 3: No.
- 34:17Speaker 1: And you were able to write a play? Yeah. Had
- 34:20Speaker 1: you watched plays? I'd watched plays, I'd.
- 34:22Speaker 2: Been in plays, I'd seen scripts a lot, so that
- 34:25Speaker 2: gave me a lot to work from, you know what
- 34:27Speaker 2: I mean? It was like almost having a recipe book,
- 34:29Speaker 2: in a sense, I could look at it like that,
- 34:31Speaker 2: and from that, I was just trial and error, and
- 34:34Speaker 2: It actually was a community theatre level play, but it
- 34:37Speaker 2: was really quite successful at the time.
- 34:39Speaker 1: You must have been really proud to see your play
- 34:41Speaker 1: being performed. That's an amazing achievement.
- 34:43Speaker 2: It was performed in a couple of venues in 2008,
- 34:46Speaker 2: and then the following year, or the year after, got
- 34:50Speaker 2: it performed again. In fact, I think we were the
- 34:53Speaker 2: first performers that took place in the new John Moores
- 34:56Speaker 2: Arts Centre.
- 34:57Speaker 3: Wow.
- 34:58Speaker 2: Down the side street where the old Irish Centre used
- 35:00Speaker 2: to be. We were the first people to perform in there.
- 35:04Speaker 2: We've packed it out to a good crowd of whatever
- 35:08Speaker 2: the capacity was to 300 people.
- 35:10Speaker 1: That's amazing. And so after you've written that play, is
- 35:13Speaker 1: that when you started to write your novels?
- 35:16Speaker 2: Well, incidentally, 2008 is when that play was written. And
- 35:23Speaker 2: my first children's story, Three Little Jamaicans English Adventure, was
- 35:28Speaker 2: born in 2005, if I remember correctly. And that was
- 35:33Speaker 2: a BBC Writing for Radio course that was running through
- 35:40Speaker 2: BBC Merseyside. And I wrote that as a radio play.
- 35:45Speaker 2: We learnt radio play formats, so I wrote it, which
- 35:48Speaker 2: was good. Learning all the different crafts and playwriting for stage,
- 35:53Speaker 2: playwriting for radio. story writing so it was good learning
- 35:57Speaker 2: things like that so that was written originally like that
- 36:00Speaker 2: and then not uncommon and four or five years later
- 36:06Speaker 2: I decided to change the format same story you know
- 36:10Speaker 2: but change it to a story format and then I
- 36:14Speaker 2: had a couple of beta readers one of them was
- 36:16Speaker 2: my niece I had my son reading he was like
- 36:18Speaker 2: oh that's good dad and I was like took him
- 36:20Speaker 2: with a large pint of salt my niece with someone
- 36:24Speaker 2: a bit more forward who would say what she felt
- 36:27Speaker 2: and she made certain constructive criticism, very good for like
- 36:31Speaker 2: a 10 year old. And it was aimed at that
- 36:33Speaker 2: age group, six, seven to 10, 11 anyway. So I
- 36:37Speaker 2: took into account what she said and then revamped it.
- 36:40Speaker 2: And then I left it again for years. Then I
- 36:42Speaker 2: worked on it again a few years later, then left
- 36:45Speaker 2: it again. And then during lockdown, the Phoenix rose then.
- 36:49Speaker 2: And it was like, everyone was stuck at home mainly,
- 36:52Speaker 2: nowhere was open. I had no more excuses not to
- 36:55Speaker 2: be properly creative. And I thought, you know what? This
- 36:58Speaker 2: story I've been harping on about, let me put myself
- 37:00Speaker 2: on the spot. So I made a little one-minute video
- 37:03Speaker 2: saying I'm going to publish a book at the end
- 37:05Speaker 2: of the month and put it on Facebook. And I thought, right,
- 37:08Speaker 2: it's out there now. If I don't publicise this, I'm
- 37:11Speaker 2: leaving myself open for questioning and criticism.
- 37:15Speaker 1: That is fantastic. You must have good, strong self-discipline to
- 37:18Speaker 1: do something like that because a lot of people in
- 37:20Speaker 1: lockdown were just... vegging out weren't they in front of
- 37:22Speaker 1: the telly well done you for doing that.
- 37:24Speaker 2: It was just a great time to be creative and
- 37:27Speaker 2: procrastination I had no excuse there was nothing to do well.
- 37:32Speaker 1: That's fantastic well done and you self published it was
- 37:36Speaker 1: that a mission in itself to do that.
- 37:39Speaker 2: It's funny how it came about because for a little
- 37:42Speaker 2: spell of two years I worked on the taxis between
- 37:46Speaker 2: 2018 and 2020 and Taxi men are known for talking.
- 37:51Speaker 2: So you'd get in and you'd strike up conversations with
- 37:55Speaker 2: all different manner of people, you know what I mean?
- 37:57Speaker 2: And one guy was talking about he's a writer. I
- 38:00Speaker 2: was like, oh, okay, I do some writing or dabble,
- 38:04Speaker 2: you know what I mean? I wasn't brave enough to
- 38:05Speaker 2: call myself a writer. And during the journey, maybe a
- 38:09Speaker 2: 10-minute journey, I literally dragged as much information out of
- 38:12Speaker 2: him as possible. And he was saying, no, if you write,
- 38:15Speaker 2: you're a writer and blah, blah, blah. And he's published
- 38:18Speaker 2: something himself and he's self-published and whatnot and whatnot. And
- 38:22Speaker 2: he was saying how he'd done it through something called
- 38:25Speaker 2: KDP Amazon. And then within days, weeks after that, I
- 38:30Speaker 2: met someone else at a writing group who had also
- 38:34Speaker 2: done the same and then exchanged numbers and he sent
- 38:38Speaker 2: me a little video link about how to do it
- 38:41Speaker 2: and So the rest was history from there. It wasn't
- 38:45Speaker 2: difficult because I'm someone who's not that techie. You know
- 38:49Speaker 2: what I mean? I do the basics, navigating, but literally
- 38:52Speaker 2: you watch a YouTube video, which is about 12 minutes long.
- 38:56Speaker 2: I was literally just pausing it and following the instructions
- 38:59Speaker 2: and it just took you through it step by step,
- 39:01Speaker 2: how to format it in Word and then how to
- 39:04Speaker 2: upload it into KDP Amazon and publish it like that.
- 39:08Speaker 1: Did you find you had to do a lot of
- 39:10Speaker 1: social media to get it out there?
- 39:13Speaker 2: Well, that's the thing, you see, when you self-publish, publicity
- 39:19Speaker 2: and marketing goes so far and you hit what I
- 39:22Speaker 2: would call a brick wall because, yeah, you've got social media,
- 39:26Speaker 2: you've got, you know, a certain following, couple hundred I
- 39:29Speaker 2: think at the time I had about 2,000 people on
- 39:32Speaker 2: Facebook I'd not long joined Instagram and it was like
- 39:39Speaker 2: well out of them 2,000 who actually interacts the algorithms
- 39:43Speaker 2: determine how far it goes and so on so it's
- 39:46Speaker 2: hard always constantly pushing it I was fortunate enough at
- 39:49Speaker 2: the time, I got an interview on BBC Mergeside. Also,
- 39:54Speaker 2: the community reporter for The Echo gave me a little
- 39:57Speaker 2: story about why I wrote the book. You know what
- 40:00Speaker 2: I mean? So that was like a free advert. So
- 40:02Speaker 2: that was all good. You know what I mean? And
- 40:03Speaker 2: then after that, it seems to stop. It's just you
- 40:06Speaker 2: repeat yourself on social media and, you know, you need
- 40:10Speaker 2: to get that. I'd say there is an element of
- 40:13Speaker 2: luck in publicity and stories because you could have the
- 40:16Speaker 2: greatest story, but if it's not, in front of the
- 40:18Speaker 2: right person or the right hands, it can lose traction.
- 40:22Speaker 3: Absolutely.
- 40:23Speaker 1: And then from this book, this is a children's story,
- 40:25Speaker 1: you said. What happened? Did you write any more books?
- 40:28Speaker 2: Well, at the time in lockdown, during the October of lockdown,
- 40:35Speaker 2: I joined, I'd been on a few writing courses with
- 40:38Speaker 2: different organisations, but there was a course called Write to Work,
- 40:41Speaker 2: which was run by an organisation called Writing on the Wall. Yeah,
- 40:44Speaker 2: I've heard of it.
- 40:46Speaker 1: And I thought, well, okay.
- 40:47Speaker 2: I'm out of work at the moment. Not many people
- 40:50Speaker 2: were working, so I thought I'll go on that. And
- 40:54Speaker 2: it was over 10 weeks. There was two sessions a
- 40:57Speaker 2: week on a Tuesday and a Wednesday, like an hour
- 41:00Speaker 2: or two each. One of the sessions was the same
- 41:04Speaker 2: tutor for the 10 weeks, and the other 10 sessions
- 41:08Speaker 2: was somebody different each week. So you had someone who'd
- 41:11Speaker 2: come in and wrote for theatre, someone who wrote poetry,
- 41:13Speaker 2: someone who wrote children's stories. someone who wrote for TV,
- 41:16Speaker 2: someone who wrote for film, someone who wrote copywriting, someone
- 41:19Speaker 2: who wrote for games, you know, video games, stories that
- 41:24Speaker 2: have stories in them. So it was a brilliant, it
- 41:29Speaker 2: was like being a chef and being given access to
- 41:32Speaker 2: this massive kitchen where all the ingredients are there and
- 41:36Speaker 2: you take what you need. And from all them different workshops,
- 41:39Speaker 2: I was taking what I need. There's some things you say, oh,
- 41:42Speaker 2: I know that. So, yeah. but there was so much
- 41:46Speaker 2: that I didn't know, and you took a little bit
- 41:48Speaker 2: from everyone, and that, there was little writing exercises where
- 41:52Speaker 2: they'll give you the prompt, it could be a word,
- 41:54Speaker 2: it could be a picture, and say, okay, you've got
- 41:55Speaker 2: seven minutes, write away, and like, then you'd read it
- 42:01Speaker 2: back and get feedback, and some of the little short
- 42:03Speaker 2: stories I wrote, a lot of people were impressed, and
- 42:06Speaker 2: were like, wow, have you just thought of that now?
- 42:07Speaker 2: And I'd be like, well, yeah, and I got a
- 42:10Speaker 2: knack for writing off prompts, so, um, the, Anthology of
- 42:15Speaker 2: short stories that I give you there, stories that make
- 42:18Speaker 2: you ask quiz, quid, quando, ube and qua, which is
- 42:21Speaker 2: Latin for who, what, when, where, why. I think eight
- 42:24Speaker 2: of the stories in that were written off a prompt.
- 42:26Speaker 2: I know two of them were definitely off a picture. No,
- 42:29Speaker 2: three of them were off a picture. And others were
- 42:32Speaker 2: off maybe one word or a sentence. And I'd just
- 42:35Speaker 2: start writing. No time to think about it, just writing.
- 42:40Speaker 2: I'd literally... whatever, you just go into a zone and
- 42:43Speaker 2: you write and what comes out comes out. And then
- 42:45Speaker 2: obviously in seven minutes, you never finish it, but you
- 42:49Speaker 2: get a little scaffolding, so to speak. And then over
- 42:53Speaker 2: the next weeks, months, even years, because you might write
- 42:56Speaker 2: that and not touch it for six months and you
- 42:58Speaker 2: mess around with it for the day or two, then
- 43:00Speaker 2: leave it again for another year. And then, and that's
- 43:02Speaker 2: what I was doing over the, between 2020 and take 22, 23,
- 43:06Speaker 2: messing about with them. every now and again, and then
- 43:14Speaker 2: in 2024, I thought, you know what, I've got maybe
- 43:17Speaker 2: 30 short stories, you know, most of them finished the
- 43:22Speaker 2: first draft, second draft, but not ready to share with
- 43:27Speaker 2: anyone to read or the public, so I thought, let me,
- 43:30Speaker 2: there's got to be a collection there somewhere, so I
- 43:34Speaker 2: dragged out 10 stories that I really liked, and then
- 43:38Speaker 2: edited them, edited them, edited them over and over, 10, 15,
- 43:42Speaker 2: because as a novice writer, your editing skills develop the
- 43:46Speaker 2: more you edit. So, you know, someone else might have
- 43:49Speaker 2: done three or four. I've done 20 and 30 in
- 43:53Speaker 2: read over. Well, it's a short story. It could be 1,000 words, 1,500.
- 43:56Speaker 2: But you'd be surprised sometimes how long it can be
- 43:59Speaker 2: to do one edit, the early edits of 1,500 words.
- 44:03Speaker 2: You know, it could take three, four hours or more.
- 44:06Speaker 2: So it doesn't matter. Got them to the point where
- 44:09Speaker 2: I was fortunate to be on a writing course with
- 44:13Speaker 2: Walter Mosley. Okay. And I remember asking him, how do
- 44:19Speaker 2: you know when your story's ready? And his answer was,
- 44:24Speaker 2: you write it and write it until you feel you
- 44:26Speaker 2: can't get it, take it anymore. Then it's ready to share.
- 44:30Speaker 1: That's quite difficult though, isn't it? Because that could take forever.
- 44:33Speaker 2: Yeah, so I did that and I wrote and corrected
- 44:35Speaker 2: and I thought, If there's mistakes there, even a punctuation,
- 44:39Speaker 2: I can't see it. I'm that close to it. I've
- 44:41Speaker 2: left it even for a week or two and gone back,
- 44:43Speaker 2: so I can't see it. So I started giving it out.
- 44:46Speaker 2: Between the 10 stories, I'd give them out to different people.
- 44:50Speaker 2: So on each story, I was getting five, six sets
- 44:55Speaker 2: of feedback of different people, different ages, backgrounds. And some
- 45:00Speaker 2: I was taking into account or the parts I'd say, well,
- 45:03Speaker 2: no way. I'm ignoring that. there's parts where someone says, well,
- 45:06Speaker 2: that confused me. And I'd be like, yes, I wanted
- 45:09Speaker 2: to confuse you. That was me aim. I didn't think
- 45:12Speaker 2: it worked, but it was all said that. So that's
- 45:16Speaker 2: a box ticked. And when I got it back, I
- 45:19Speaker 2: went back to editing again and taking into account what
- 45:22Speaker 2: I wanted. And then I put it together. And again,
- 45:24Speaker 2: so published that last year in May.
- 45:26Speaker 1: That's amazing. So basically you have to be self-disciplined and
- 45:29Speaker 1: believe in yourself and enjoy the journey, I suppose, as well.
- 45:33Speaker 2: Definitely. Yeah. On one of them writing course, I remember
- 45:36Speaker 2: one of the tutors, like a lot of tutors say
- 45:38Speaker 2: similar things and a lot of them say so many
- 45:40Speaker 2: different things. They're all right and they all can't be wrong.
- 45:45Speaker 2: That's how I look at it because I think, well,
- 45:47Speaker 2: that one size doesn't fit all in creative writing because
- 45:51Speaker 2: people say, oh, you need to just concentrate on one
- 45:53Speaker 2: thing and work on that and finish it. And I
- 45:56Speaker 2: find the majority say that. That doesn't work for me.
- 46:00Speaker 2: I'm scatty brained where I describe myself as, like a
- 46:04Speaker 2: five-year-old with £ 50 in a sweet shop unsupervised. I want
- 46:09Speaker 2: some of everything. So I'm writing children's books, adults' books, novels,
- 46:12Speaker 2: all at the same time, whatever. So I can't procrastinate
- 46:17Speaker 2: because if I get stuck on one, I can just
- 46:18Speaker 2: go to the other. What all people always say is,
- 46:22Speaker 2: whilst you're writing, you're being productive.
- 46:24Speaker 1: Exactly, yes, and not wasting time.
- 46:26Speaker 2: So for me, that's good. So I can bounce from
- 46:29Speaker 2: one to the other. And it works. My brain can
- 46:31Speaker 2: work like that, and it works for me. And other
- 46:34Speaker 2: people say, oh, I don't know how you could do that.
- 46:36Speaker 2: And I say, I think, well, I don't know how
- 46:38Speaker 2: you could just concentrate on one thing and work on that.
- 46:42Speaker 2: It just doesn't work for me.
- 46:45Speaker 1: Have you got anything in the pipeline at the moment?
- 46:47Speaker 2: At the moment, I do want to... Well, I am
- 46:50Speaker 2: working on another anthology because, as I mentioned before, they
- 46:53Speaker 2: had over 30 short stories. Now I've got close to 50.
- 46:57Speaker 2: Some of them, you know, need a lot of work on. Others...
- 47:02Speaker 2: There's about four or five which I've edited a lot.
- 47:05Speaker 2: One or two of them I've been sending off to
- 47:07Speaker 2: short story competitions every now and again because I've took
- 47:11Speaker 2: them to where I think I kind of had feedback
- 47:13Speaker 2: on them and whatnot. So I'm working on them for
- 47:16Speaker 2: the anthology. I'd say my babies because these would be
- 47:21Speaker 2: like twins even though I haven't worked on them for
- 47:24Speaker 2: a while. One of them is there's a story there
- 47:27Speaker 2: called The Golden Water and the Enchanted Forest and this
- 47:34Speaker 2: other story was started maybe just before that one. And
- 47:40Speaker 2: it wasn't related at the time, but it will be
- 47:42Speaker 2: connected in some way. And this one's called The House
- 47:46Speaker 2: of Almost All Known Things. And I entered that into, again,
- 47:51Speaker 2: a writing on the wall competition called Pulp Idol. And
- 47:55Speaker 2: what it was is you give in the first chapter,
- 47:58Speaker 2: or the first chapter or 3,000 words, whatever you want
- 48:02Speaker 2: to do. Wow, a lot. I think I put in
- 48:03Speaker 2: about 15, 1600 words. If you were chosen, you went
- 48:09Speaker 2: into the heats. If you got through the heats, you
- 48:11Speaker 2: went into the final. I was fortunate enough to get
- 48:15Speaker 2: through to the final. And everyone in the final is
- 48:18Speaker 2: a winner because even though they have a first, second
- 48:20Speaker 2: and third, you're the winner because all them final entries
- 48:24Speaker 2: got put into an anthology of first chapters. So I
- 48:27Speaker 2: got my House of Almost All Known Things into that anthology.
- 48:31Speaker 2: And during the heat, the first heat, I remember there
- 48:35Speaker 2: was supposed to be 12 people, but someone pulled out
- 48:38Speaker 2: last minute, so there's 11. I think I was like
- 48:41Speaker 2: ninth to read. And as I'm listening to the stories,
- 48:44Speaker 2: by about the sixth, seventh story, I'm thinking, oh, my God,
- 48:47Speaker 2: these are all like adult stories. Mine's a kid's story.
- 48:50Speaker 2: And I started getting nervous in my head. And then
- 48:53Speaker 2: after hearing the eighth story, I was thinking, you know what?
- 48:56Speaker 2: Given after all adult stories and mine's a children, maybe
- 48:59Speaker 2: I will stand out more. So I looked at that.
- 49:02Speaker 2: I turned what was... becoming a negative into a total
- 49:05Speaker 2: positive and that just boosted my confidence tenfold where I thought, well, yeah,
- 49:09Speaker 2: mine's got to stand out more because it's a children's
- 49:11Speaker 2: story and everyone else's were adults.
- 49:13Speaker 1: I love that. Did you read it yourself?
- 49:15Speaker 2: Yeah, yeah.
- 49:16Speaker 1: Oh, wow.
- 49:16Speaker 2: Yeah, I had like three minutes to read and, you know,
- 49:19Speaker 2: the judges were, liked it. They asked questions and really
- 49:22Speaker 2: flowed good because I was able to just give answers.
- 49:25Speaker 1: That's fantastic. Listen, we're running out of time now, so
- 49:27Speaker 1: I'm just going to ask you if you want to
- 49:29Speaker 1: tell the audience where they can get hold of your
- 49:31Speaker 1: books or if they can follow you on Instagram or
- 49:34Speaker 1: Facebook or Twitter or something. So can you just give
- 49:36Speaker 1: your information out?
- 49:37Speaker 2: I am on Facebook. I don't use it as much
- 49:40Speaker 2: as I should, but I'm getting back into the habit
- 49:42Speaker 2: of using it. But I am on Facebook. I have
- 49:47Speaker 2: my Facebook page, which is called Black... underscore out, underscore productions.
- 49:53Speaker 2: And Blackout Productions, incidentally, is my creative writing name.
- 49:56Speaker 1: So black out, black underscore out.
- 49:58Speaker 2: Underscore productions.
- 49:59Speaker 6: Yeah.
- 50:00Speaker 1: Okay.
- 50:01Speaker 2: You know, if you put Patrick Graham and put that,
- 50:03Speaker 2: you will get it.
- 50:03Speaker 1: Or Patrick Graham, yeah.
- 50:05Speaker 2: As you can see, the logo on my hat is
- 50:07Speaker 2: like a redacted document. Oh. So that was the idea.
- 50:12Speaker 3: Yeah.
- 50:12Speaker 2: Yeah. Blackout Productions was born out of what we see
- 50:15Speaker 2: in redacted documents on TV shows. And I thought, well,
- 50:19Speaker 2: someone who writes poetry about life, about history, who looks
- 50:23Speaker 2: at black history and reveals things, I decided to come
- 50:26Speaker 2: up with a logo, which is a contradiction of what
- 50:28Speaker 2: I do. So I created a little statement and redacted it.
- 50:32Speaker 1: Very clever.
- 50:33Speaker 2: And just left out three words. So that's my performance
- 50:37Speaker 2: stroke stage name, if you want to call it that.
- 50:39Speaker 1: Yeah, that is brilliant.
- 50:40Speaker 2: So, that's on Facebook. On Instagram, again, under the same name,
- 50:44Speaker 2: black underscore out underscore productions. Um, And I think I've
- 50:52Speaker 2: got this logo on Instagram as my profile picture. So
- 50:56Speaker 2: it's very distinguishable. You know what I mean? You can
- 50:59Speaker 2: easily spot it. A redacted document with Blackout Productions, three words.
- 51:03Speaker 2: The books are all available. The Three Little Jamaicans English Adventure,
- 51:07Speaker 2: The Golden Water, and The Enchanted Forest. And stories that
- 51:11Speaker 2: make you ask quiz, quid, quando, ube, and qua, which
- 51:14Speaker 2: is Latin for who, what, when, where, why. Just to
- 51:16Speaker 2: add to the mystery. That's an anthology of 10 short stories,
- 51:20Speaker 2: mainly for adults. You know, 15, 16-year-olds should be able
- 51:23Speaker 2: to deal with it. The other two are children's stories.
- 51:26Speaker 2: They're all available on Amazon. And they're all available on
- 51:31Speaker 2: News From Nowhere Bookshop in Bold Street. Great bookshop.
- 51:34Speaker 1: It is a great bookshop.
- 51:35Speaker 2: So please support them, Independent Bookshop. And they offer great
- 51:38Speaker 2: support to local writers as well. And also the same
- 51:41Speaker 2: goes for Still Out of Print Books on Smithdown Road.
- 51:45Speaker 2: which is just facing the Mystery Park main entrance as
- 51:48Speaker 2: you go towards Allerton Way.
- 51:50Speaker 1: You know, Patrick, it was really a pleasure to talk
- 51:52Speaker 1: to you. And you are an inspiration. I feel like
- 51:55Speaker 1: I'm going to write a book next. No, I do
- 51:57Speaker 1: a bit of writing myself in any way. So thank
- 51:59Speaker 1: you so much for coming on to the show. And
- 52:02Speaker 1: hopefully you'll come back and let us know what happens
- 52:04Speaker 1: in the future.
- 52:05Speaker 2: Yeah, definitely. It's been a pleasure. And thank you for
- 52:08Speaker 2: having me. I enjoy talking about writing. Time goes so quick,
- 52:11Speaker 2: as I If we sat here for three hours, I
- 52:13Speaker 2: wouldn't realise we've got to get back to work.
- 52:15Speaker 4: I know.
- 52:16Speaker 1: Well, thanks again and best of luck for the future.
- 52:19Speaker 2: Thank you.
- 52:19Speaker 1: Bye now.