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- 0:13Film Hustle Podcast, Episode number six seventy five. I See Everything in Black,
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- 1:51have writer showrunner Daniel Noff. And if the name doesn't sound familiar, maybe
- 1:57the shows that he worked on has. He created HBO's Carnival, which is
- 2:02a cult favorite. If you guys have not seen it, there's two amazing
- 2:07seasons of it out there in the world. And I was a big fan
- 2:10of it when it came out in the early two thousands and at the time
- 2:14it was the most expensive television show in the world at the time. It
- 2:19was crazy how much they were spending on basically an unknown. He had never
- 2:24done anything of any major, major magnitude before then, so it was pretty
- 2:29amazing what he was able to do. And we talk all about his adventures
- 2:31and Carnival being a showrunner of that show, as well as his writing method,
- 2:38his adventures inside the writer's room and what it's like to be inside of
- 2:42a writer's room of a big show. He's also worked on shows like The
- 2:46Blacklist, Dracula, Spartacus, My Own Worst Enemy, and many many more,
- 2:53and he's been around the block a few times and it has very very
- 2:59interesting or how he got into the business and how he got his first shot
- 3:02with Carnival and that whole process of a struggling writer or someone who just love
- 3:08to write but was not getting a whole lot of traction and then one day
- 3:13Hollywood Kim Anakin and I think he was ready. So we'll talk more about
- 3:17that in the episode, which was extremely enlightening and inspirational to say the least.
- 3:23Now, if you guys want to watch the video podcast of this,
- 3:27it is on Indie Film Hustle TV, and you could go to the Indie
- 3:31Film Hustle TV video podcast to see us actually mean Daniel talk it out and
- 3:38see this interview live. It's really really a cool experience to watch it.
- 3:43So if you want to do that, just head over to Indie Film Hustle
- 3:45dot tv. And now, without any further ado, please enjoy my conversation
- 3:50with Daniel Naff. I'd like to welcome to the show. Daniel Naff.
- 3:54Thank you so much for being on the show, my friend. Oh,
- 3:58I'm happy to be here. So well, first, first off, you
- 4:00have, well you have a very impressive career and resume, so we're going
- 4:03to get into a bunch of the stuff you've done. But first and foremost,
- 4:06how did you get started in the film industry? Crazy story that you
- 4:13know, whenever and whenever you know, I do seminars sometimes, yeah,
- 4:16and inevitably it would be how do I break into film? Which is funny
- 4:20anyway, because it's like what you know, because there's Largis and he's kind
- 4:27of hard baked into the entertainment business, and so the language reflects it.
- 4:30So it's like, you don't hear people say, well, how do I
- 4:32break into accountancy? Or how do I break into plumbing? Our destruction?
- 4:38You know, it's like, but we got to do at b and E
- 4:41to get into this business, so that question will come up, and and
- 4:47it's like I'm singularly unhelpful in a way. I mean, I was an
- 4:55insurance broker and tell us I'm in forties. I did that for like twenty
- 5:00two twenty three years. I ran a business and um. And while I
- 5:05was doing it, I was I'd always wanted to be a screenwriter, and
- 5:09and I'd studied, UM, I'd studied creative writing in college and grown up
- 5:14in Los Angeles, and so I kind of had and I loved movies.
- 5:17I mean, it was my favorite thing. And but I had three kids
- 5:21and I had to raise them, and I had to make money, and
- 5:25there was a certain you know, lifestyle. I wanted to have a house
- 5:29and you know, be able to pay my bills and that kind of thing.
- 5:32So UM, I kind of set it aside. Um around the time
- 5:38I was twenty two and got married, and it was like, oh,
- 5:40yeah, this isn't what grown up to. UM. And then around the
- 5:43time I was by the time I was twenty seven, I was actually going
- 5:46insane. I mean I was like like literally like I was not a happy
- 5:50career and uh and uh, and so I was going through this crushing depression
- 5:58and I started writing and it brought me out of it, and I realized,
- 6:02yeah, I'm this isn't something that I want to do. This is
- 6:05something I kind of have to do. I'm just my brain's wired this way
- 6:11and I need to be doing something creative in order to in order to It's
- 6:16like a shark has to swim, you know, and I have to do
- 6:19this thing. Um and I mean, so when people come to me and
- 6:24say I've always wanted to write, and I think, well, I've always
- 6:27wanted to be a bird, it's like that I don't have any choice.
- 6:31It's like, so I started doing that, and I focused on really developing
- 6:38my craft and writing screenplays and reading books about screenplays, you know, sit
- 6:44Sitfield's books screenplay and other books where some of them were useful, someone were
- 6:48completely useless. Taking some seminars, going to uc UCLA Extension here in LA
- 6:55has some great classes, um and um, and just basically focusing on learning
- 7:01the craft and and I getting some mentors. I had. I had two
- 7:08very good mentors. My first mentor was Jan Fisher, who wrote The Lost
- 7:12Voice, and we met when I was in a workshop at UCLA and ended
- 7:18up writing some scripts together. Um, and and she kind of took me
- 7:25under her wing and really really taught me a lot. And then and then
- 7:29uh, I reached I hit like I hit my forties. And I said
- 7:35to myself, and I'd put it off as you know what I'm I told
- 7:42myself, if this isn't happening by the time I'm my forty, um,
- 7:46I'm just gonna do something else. I'm starting and helping novels because it's sort
- 7:48of a young man's game. And you know, breaking in is as any
- 7:54forty forty something, you're all, you know, slightly overweight, be an
- 8:01e guy. I'll tell you it's probably a lot easier when you're in your
- 8:03twenties. And I am. I thought, I come from a long line
- 8:07of like really sore losers, Like we're the guys who flipped them Monopoly board.
- 8:11You throw tennis brackets at people. You know. My brother, My
- 8:16brother always says his favorite, one of his favorite things goes show me a
- 8:20good loser, and I'll show you loser. So I just said, you
- 8:28just could take one more real run at this. That created a website called
- 8:31unmovie dot com posted the first acts of all my scripts that i'd written up
- 8:35to that point. Um, and you know, by then I've had some
- 8:41success. I had. I didn't sell a script in the in nineteen ninety
- 8:45three that ended up being a movie for HBO called Blind Justice, a Western,
- 8:50but then nothing after that. You know, it was like, yeah,
- 8:54it was like nothing. It was yeah. I was kind of like,
- 9:00you know, check Yeager, you know, bouncing his X fifteen off
- 9:03of the stratosphere. You know, it's like, wow, it's coming in
- 9:05too hot. And so I was really, you know, the customer slump.
- 9:11So I just created its website and put this stuff on. And I
- 9:16got a call from a guy, Robert Kobod, who worked for a guy
- 9:22named Scott Weinen, and Scott was an Emmy winning director, and he had
- 9:26told Robert, you know, I'm tired of reading doctors, lawyers and cops.
- 9:31Show me something different. And Robert found the first act of Carnival,
- 9:35and he contacted me, says saying, I'd like to read the rest of
- 9:37your pilot. And I'm thinking what pilot? And I remember, oh,
- 9:41yeah, you know, I'd taken this crazy two hundred page screenplay that didn't
- 9:48work, and thought maybe this isn't a feature and I collapsed the first act
- 9:54to a pilot. We'll be right back after a word from our sponsor,
- 10:03and now back to the show. And so I showed it to them,
- 10:09and I met with them, and they were very um. They were they
- 10:11were very helpful, and they told me I needed to do a Bible and
- 10:15I didn't know what a Bible was. And I did this Bible for Carnival,
- 10:20and and we took it to HBO and all of a sudden, it
- 10:22was like they bought it and and I was executive producing and in writing an
- 10:31HBO series. So I started my career at the very top of the heat.
- 10:35And I came in UM, and you know, it was weird because
- 10:41it was like nobody to work with me. I'd never done another television show.
- 10:45I had no reputation in the business. I just came out of like
- 10:48left field, and I'm running an HBO series and they're you know, they
- 10:50only would have like, you know, four or five shows on at a
- 10:54time. It was a pretty, you know, kind of a you know,
- 10:58high up kind position. And for somebody who was really a nobody to
- 11:03be in. And I mean I actually got to a point I remember reading
- 11:07on on on IMDb. That was like a rumor going around that I didn't
- 11:13exist and that I was I was a pseudonym for David Lynch, which was
- 11:16like really flattering but not really good for the brand. You come in.
- 11:22And so I did this show for two years and I really kind of hung
- 11:28on by my fingernails. So it was, it was, it was.
- 11:31It was a kind of a terrifying experience because it's a shark tank in there.
- 11:35And and just to answer your question, it's like for me to give
- 11:39advice to some of them how to get in, I can't really say and
- 11:43I can come in, you know. Oh, I was a baby writer
- 11:46for a while and I got a story editor job on another show, and
- 11:50then I you know, built that up and I went I didn't do the
- 11:52same trajectory as most TV writers do. I mean, I know what that
- 11:56trajectory is. You graduate from film school, you every every favor you can
- 12:03get, and you try to get into the into a writer's room. Um,
- 12:07whether you're in there as a office PA and you're bringing coffee, or
- 12:11whether you're writer's assistant and you're just taking notes. And that's really the way
- 12:16into TV writer. It's into TV writing it's really very much. Um,
- 12:20it's it's it's it's very much like you all, you know, like you
- 12:26know, getting into plumbing, shoemaking back in the joining the guild. Um,
- 12:31it's it's you know, but mine, I just I broke right through
- 12:35it. It's sort of the top. I worked my way down everything.
- 12:41So you said it was it was a shark tank. Can you explain a
- 12:45little bit about what was about that experience that was the shark tank? Because
- 12:48I mean, you have a very unique story, you're right, and most
- 12:52people don't start off running an HBO series. Well I wasn't running it.
- 12:58I mean, I mean, but you know what I mean, like Executi
- 13:00producing it the first year Ron was running. But well, really the main
- 13:03reason what it boils down to is there's a lot of money on the line
- 13:16and they were putting a bet on an untested talent and that's kind of terrifying
- 13:20for a major corporation. Was it was like four million an episode or something
- 13:24like that, Right, Yeah, there's three point seven five in the first
- 13:28season as far as I know, And that was at that time the most
- 13:31expensive show on TV. And we had a huge cast, and we had
- 13:35extras and elements and a lot of outside days and some special effects and so
- 13:43um it was. It was. It was a hugely expensive undertaking and they
- 13:48would have loved to have had a season hand at the top, and that's
- 13:52what they kind of wanted to do. It was like, if we can
- 13:56find a guy who can take this this other guy's crazy idea and make your
- 14:01work. I'm sure they would have scraped me off at some point, but
- 14:03they found to their kind of their horror. And I'm not saying this,
- 14:07you know, pat myself on the background here. This is what I've been
- 14:11told by other people who were involved at the time. They said what they
- 14:16found was nobody else knew how to write that show, and so they were
- 14:20suck with me. So you so you wrote yourself a niche? Yeah,
- 14:24well, I mean really what else? I mean basically, what I did
- 14:26was I created It's like it's like sitting on creating a board game where everything
- 14:31you do well is something that wins that board game, and it's custom designed
- 14:35for every single thing you do well. And they realized, I'm probably guessing
- 14:43to their abject horror that you know, that they needed me and they couldn't
- 14:46get rid of me, and it would have been easier to get rid of
- 14:50me because I was so green, and from my standpoint, I didn't know
- 14:54the rules. And getting into Hollywood and dealing with Hollywood people and the entertainment
- 15:01business is a lot like suddenly getting into time machine finding yourself in the court
- 15:05of King Louis the fourteenth. In your there's a whole battery of sort of
- 15:11kabuki like rituals and certain things that have to be said and how they're said,
- 15:16and pecking orders. And I remember my first I sent a memo out
- 15:20one time, and in Jeron's business, you send a memo out and it
- 15:24just it's here. It is here, everybody, Here's what's going on.
- 15:26Glad you know. I got called by one of the executive producers. He
- 15:31said, what do you think you're doing. It's like, what I mean,
- 15:33one of my dad I'm setting out this memo of it about you know,
- 15:37some nothing. He climbed up my ass about, oh, you have
- 15:43to put this person's name first, and this person's name second, and this
- 15:46person's name third. And so it was really a lot about just learning these
- 15:52weird customs and rituals and expectations. I also didn't know what was a reasonable
- 16:00ask, Like, you know, was it a reasonable ask? You know,
- 16:03if I said, no, let's not do this. Um, it's
- 16:10pretty easy if you don't have a really strong knowledge of physical production. And
- 16:14I didn't back then to step on the ant hill. And I did that
- 16:17pretty regularly. I learned very I'm a quick study, and I learned,
- 16:21and I make I generally, don't make him a sane mistake twice. Um,
- 16:26I just make every possible mistake once fair enough. And so it was.
- 16:32It was. It was kind of a jarring, terrifying kind of experience
- 16:37in which I was kind of hanging on by my fingernails, you know,
- 16:40at all times, and feeling like a stranger in a strange land. Um.
- 16:45But I did the full two years, and in those two years,
- 16:49I pretty much learned the lay of the land. And uh, you know,
- 16:52so after that I knew, you know, exactly how how the sausages
- 16:59made, and had I really had a love for physical production and asked a
- 17:06lot of people who are very knowledgeable questions and learning about that and and so
- 17:12you know, since then that was Carnival was kind of my film school,
- 17:17you know, it was like hell of a film school. Yeah, I
- 17:21mean, there was just there was a there was a there was an immense
- 17:22amount of there was there was there was money and stature and everything writing on
- 17:29that. Um. I mean the sad thing really is the expectations HBO had
- 17:34for the series were wholly unrealistic. And um that's one of the things that
- 17:38killed us. If we went on the air on HBO, now you know,
- 17:44they'd be considers like an unmitigated success. But they were saying, oh,
- 17:48we expect to score higher numbers with this show and The Sopranos. And
- 17:52when I the day I heard that, I was going, oh god,
- 17:55we are so dead because the Sopranos's mainstream drama and whenever you get into genre
- 18:00stuff, even more so back then than now, where genres kind of you
- 18:07know, oozed into mainstream. Back then, there were people where as soon
- 18:11as ben Heel's a little girl at the beginning of the show, they're going
- 18:17to turn it off and they're not going to turn it back on because they're
- 18:18doing that's not real, you know. And that's there's some people, no
- 18:23matter how well, it doesn't matter whether listen they were super good jazz or
- 18:30really crappy jazz, they just don't they can't differentiate because they just don't like
- 18:34jazz or rap or country western and for you know, shows to involved magic
- 18:41or supernatural or whatever. If people aren't into that, no matter how good
- 18:47you do, you're going to lose that audience. Do you think that Carnival
- 18:51would have had a better chance in today's environment, like on a streaming service,
- 18:55like they have a longer run. I suspect we would have done our
- 18:57full run if it came out. If it came out, I would say
- 19:02it even if it came out like two or three years after we did come
- 19:04out, we were really on the bleeding edge of everything and people just weren't
- 19:11really ready for that show. And it would have been easier too, because
- 19:17of a lot of what we were doing in the first season. In the
- 19:19first season drags quite a lot, but a lot of it was about just
- 19:23teaching people the vocabulary of the show and so that they would understand and people
- 19:30there had never been anything online that it was just it was It was just
- 19:34a really weird thing, you know. I mean, it had kind of
- 19:40the cryptic aspects of Twin Peaks, but it was a period drama and there
- 19:45was some historical aspects that were based on true you know, situations and true
- 19:51events and other things that that were made up. And and so we really
- 19:56felt like we kind of had to handle the audience along for the you know,
- 20:00the first first at least six episodes so they know what the rules were.
- 20:06We'll be right back after a word from our sponsor and now back to
- 20:12the show. Now, can you said some you said a term show bible.
- 20:18Um. For a lot of people who are listening, they might not
- 20:19know what a show bible is. Can you explain how what your process was
- 20:23being a newbie putting it together, just so they don't feel, you know,
- 20:29it's they're you know, it's so it's though they're they're dumb or anything.
- 20:32When when when Scott said, yeah, first you need you know,
- 20:34we need to get a bible, and I'm thinking we are going to kneel
- 20:37down and pray they buy it, you know, like King James or the
- 20:42New American Way where what name your poison? Um? A show bible is
- 20:48basically a document that goes into the milieu of you know, the world.
- 20:57First, you start basically with log line okay um um, you know powers,
- 21:06it's like on a war between good and evil as fought in the blasted
- 21:11landscape of the thirties dust bowl, you know, or whatever. So you
- 21:15come up your your sort of three liner or two line or log line,
- 21:19and then you start to elaborate on that, and you get into, um,
- 21:26the world, um, the rules of the world, UM, you
- 21:32know, the you might like, I like to put youse images just to
- 21:37set tone and give an idea of what things are going to look like.
- 21:41Um, and you you you talk about the history of all the backstory.
- 21:48You get into the description of the you know, so full blown articulation of
- 21:55the bottom three quarters of the iceberg, and talk about the characters, the
- 22:00character's history, you know, feld descriptions of who everybody is and where they
- 22:06come from. And then and then you go into um, you know,
- 22:11first season, this is your first season arc that will be quite detailed.
- 22:15By episode one, you do this, episode two, this, and then
- 22:19you know, later episodes. You're kind of you know, increasingly shorthanding and
- 22:26hearing people an idea of where the thrust of the show is, what its
- 22:30destination is, where when the show kind of ends, um, if if
- 22:34it ails, I mean a lot of shows and when nobody's watching them anymore,
- 22:37I mean the most episodic dramas and when people are just tired of watching
- 22:41it, you know, but as cereal, this is a serial and that's
- 22:48that's kind of what I put together for them. And what I did was
- 22:52a very complex thing to where people are looking at and going, wow,
- 22:56is this based on like real people? Because I had like, I got
- 23:00bored with it, I said, when once I heard that in description,
- 23:03Okay, here's what you have to do. I got suit. I started
- 23:04writing it and I was going, God, this is like watching paint dry.
- 23:08And if I'm bored, whoever's reading it, who's got the misfortunate reading
- 23:12this thing? It's gonna even even more. It was Hey, I can
- 23:15do things, you know, And so I started going, let's have a
- 23:19little fun with it. And what I did is I created the whole thing
- 23:22sort of from the point of view of this intrepid university professor who had heard
- 23:29about this carnival and had done a bunch of research and gathered files about the
- 23:33actual carnival. And there were fake police reports and fake newspaper articles and fake
- 23:40religious tracks and all kinds of stuff that he had kind of gathered and put
- 23:44together. There was even an interview with Sampson when he's like seventy five years
- 23:48old in old folks home, you know, and he's this sort of you
- 23:52know, angry car mudge and you know, and and uh, you know,
- 23:56just just like, you know, can you go out and give me
- 23:57suppose you know? Um, And so I just had a blast riding it,
- 24:03and so they saw it. They've never seen anything like that. Um.
- 24:07And I've done that since on almost every show that I've developed, because
- 24:12I always figure, hey, you know, why screw a success. But
- 24:18while you're doing it, I mean, it's like I'm beginning. I keep
- 24:22hearing different things. Some people they need to come in with every dot,
- 24:25every I dot and every T crossed and manage you know, and and and
- 24:30you know trailers, you know, um, you know, promos, you
- 24:38know, the shot, you know whatever, you know, this whole thing.
- 24:41And then I hear other people saying the best beets just to go in
- 24:44with a strong pitch. I don't know what the rules are anymore. You
- 24:48know, Well, yeah, the Netflix and Hulu and those guys coming thrown
- 24:52everything off the window as far as rules are concerned, very much. So,
- 24:56and and you really, you know, it's like, um, it's
- 25:03they they set up shops so far, you know, kind of upstream um
- 25:07that they wield an immense they in the world. And this isn't just in
- 25:14Hollywood. There's the Golden rule, which is he who has the gold roles,
- 25:18and and in Hollywood that's very very very much operative. And you know,
- 25:22people like met Netflix are sitting on billions and billions of dollars and they
- 25:27say, okay, you get some, and you get some and you get
- 25:30some. And I don't know what they're you know, which projects, what
- 25:37makes them pick out what project or you know whatever. It's kind of I
- 25:42mean really, I mean sometimes I feel it's like that. There was this
- 25:45old show that was on I think in the fifties before my time, but
- 25:48it was called a Millionaire, and it was about a guy who would just
- 25:52go out to random to give a million, yeah, a million. You
- 26:00know, you can buy an island brilliant. Now you can't even buy it.
- 26:04And now you can't even buy a house in Burbank. You have four
- 26:08bedroom house and receive but you know, the the with a swimming pool.
- 26:14Probably sometimes I feel like that's what Netflix is now, you know, is
- 26:21kind of like all of a sudden boom you know, you're gifted with it,
- 26:23and so well, it's a very it's a very chaotic market, right,
- 26:29it is pretty insane. And you know, I've talked to you know,
- 26:32I talked to a lot of people like yourselves who are in the business,
- 26:33who were in the business before Netflix, and I've seen them just disrupt
- 26:38this entire industry. And now players like Disney are showing up with their streaming
- 26:44service, and Apple just talked just said, hey, we're going to put
- 26:47ours in and uh, Comcast or I think it's AT and T excuse me,
- 26:52they have one coming out. Like there's so many of these services coming
- 26:56out, and it's really just changing the way everything is done. Yeah,
- 27:00what's interesting too is the impactants had on just the way people comport themselves.
- 27:03But I think I don't know who it was. I think it was Betty
- 27:07Davis or one of those old actresses. Um was quoted as saying, Hollywood's
- 27:11the place of the one place on earth where you can get encouraged to death.
- 27:15You know, very true. It's extremely true, or as I like
- 27:19to say. And when people say, hey, you know, it's good
- 27:22for exposure, and I go, people die from exposure. You know that
- 27:27I'm gonna I'm gonna steal that line. I wouldn't steal that. That's a
- 27:30line on a desert. That's death. He was exposed exposure, so so,
- 27:40you know, But it used to be that everybody was really super,
- 27:41super super I was talking to my wife about this this morning, and I
- 27:45was just making this observation. Used to be that people were very very sort
- 27:49of sort of sort of sort of polite and genteel with each other, mainly
- 27:56because you really didn't know whether this guy who was you just had every reason
- 28:00to believe it's a completely talentless hack, okay, or just a straight up
- 28:06bosom for all you know from your experience in six years, could be running
- 28:12a studio you just didn't know, or could be the guy that everybody wants
- 28:18to do business with. So people were generally very careful with talent relations.
- 28:23You didn't want to, he wanted to. You know, it would always
- 28:26be God, we really love this, but it's just not right for us
- 28:30right now. We were developing something similar to it, or you know,
- 28:33to be always that kind of there'd always be we love you, we think
- 28:37you're great. But my agent one time called me up. It's like the
- 28:41sixth thing that it's like not soul, and he says, yeah, well,
- 28:45they really love you, and I go, no, they don't don't
- 28:51love me, because if they loved me, they would buy shit from me.
- 28:53I could wipe my ass on a piece of toilet paper and submit that
- 28:56and they face a show on it. Don't tell me they love But there
- 29:02was still that it was just sort of out of kind of out out of
- 29:04respect. I wouldn't say it's out of respect. I wouldn't say it was
- 29:07them being kind. It's not kindness. It was out of fear. It
- 29:11was fear that the persons sitting in this chair right now with us maybe somebody
- 29:17we absolutely need to be doing business with later, so we don't want to
- 29:21burn any bridges. What I found lately in talking to other writers and stuff
- 29:26is Netflix, And maybe it's because I read a little bit about their their
- 29:30internal culture of transparency. You'd say, what's on your mind, to be
- 29:34totally frank with people, and that's the way we do things is there's a
- 29:38tendency for them to say, huh, fuck off, we're not interested.
- 29:42Go away. I mean it'll be just like fuck off, go away,
- 29:45and you'll go what did you like, what fuck you we you know we
- 29:51didn't like it. You know, some didn't work for us, so go
- 29:55fuck off. You know, we'll be right back after a word from our
- 29:59spawn, sir, and now back to the show. And they don't give
- 30:07you feedback, they don't say what they're looking for. They don't want a
- 30:11follow up meeting. And and it's kurt and it's harsh. You know I
- 30:15heard that too, and and so it's like it's like it's like, what
- 30:22does that bode well for them? Um? If they come sniffing around later,
- 30:30and you know, and they're not somebody I want to do business with,
- 30:36they're probably gonna have to throw them up more money at me to get
- 30:38me, and they'll have and they'll have it. We'll be right back after
- 30:42a word from our sponsor, and now back to the show, because they've
- 30:52got the money. But I just think, you know, guys, there's
- 30:55a reason why there's so much as kissing going on in Hollywood before you got
- 30:59here, and that's because you don't understand somebody who's at the very bottom of
- 31:03the game, living out of their car this week, in six months can
- 31:08be picking up an oscar, you know, I mean that's the story of
- 31:12the guy who wrote Dances with Wolves. He was literally living out of his
- 31:15car and a year later he got an oscar. You've got to basically treat
- 31:22people well, because people who maybe you don't need this week, you may
- 31:26need desperately in six months or a year. And you know. But again,
- 31:33I mean it's like like I said, it's sort of part of the
- 31:37chaos right now. I don't really care. It doesn't affect me, doesn't
- 31:42really affect my game. My game is I just do the best work I
- 31:47can and move forward. And I'm not a peripheral visionary. I just I
- 31:52don't look at what everybody else is doing. Can't kind of Hey, I
- 31:56do my own thing and hopefully somebody was to it. No, I've always
- 32:01wanted to ask you and also just someone like you. We had that experience,
- 32:07that kind of lottery ticket win with Carnival. What was it like when
- 32:13you got the call or were you in the room. What was that experience
- 32:15where like where you're greenlit we're going to make this show. Oh, I
- 32:20can remember exactly what it's like when I sold the thing. You know,
- 32:24um, because I was, I was, I was at a little I
- 32:29was like at my daughter's softball game. I remember where I was standing.
- 32:32I remember looking at my my my, looking at her mother and going,
- 32:37oh my god, our life just changed. Well, it was like they're
- 32:43doing it. The problem was I just I've never tried to get in intov
- 32:50before then, and so I couldn't fully appreciate how amazing it was. You
- 32:55know. It was kind of like, of course they bought it. It's
- 32:58good. I guess. I was like when I was like seventeen, he
- 33:05took me to Santa Need a race track, right, and I just beginner's
- 33:09luck. I picked seven out of the nine horses on the notes, and
- 33:15I remember sitting there and I was thinking, these two dollars bets. That's
- 33:16gonna be two bucks, and I can make up that co home with a
- 33:20couple of hundred bucks. And I'm thinking, you know, maybe this college
- 33:23thing is overrated. You know the track, and the track just seems much
- 33:28more easy the way back to the girlfriend, you know, expecting to impress
- 33:32her, and I didn't. You know. It's like, yeah, they
- 33:35were like, you know, my horses was like they were shooting them out
- 33:37there. I was like, oh, yeah, I broke his front way
- 33:39and take them back, you know, I totally humiliated and realize, oh
- 33:45my god. And there were a lot of aspects of Carnival that were like
- 33:49that. I wasn't. I wasn't. I hadn't gotten beaten up enough to
- 33:54really fully appreciate it. Um in the market, I hadn't spent a lot
- 33:59of time trying to network or sell things. What I'd done is I'd spent
- 34:01twenty years, um really honing my craft, you know, and that was
- 34:07good. And if I was going to do it another I'd rather do it
- 34:10that way than the other way. I don't think Hollywood's a good place to
- 34:14learn how to write in. So so you were basically training for a fight
- 34:17that you never knew was going to come or not come. But when it
- 34:21finally came, you were ready. Oh yeah, I'd been doing like Brazilian
- 34:25Jude chits you for twenty years with in a basement somewhere you know, no
- 34:30one knew who you were on. Yeah, I was like, you know,
- 34:35I was bringing you know, just bringing guys in and breaking their nets.
- 34:38There'd be no fucking witnesses. And so by the time I was fully
- 34:43evolved, I mean I really was, I had I had honed it to
- 34:49a fine point m and in utter in a total obscurity um and a lot
- 34:57of people, you know, you get into it, but probab, I
- 35:00see, like getting into graduating from college, getting that first job, you
- 35:05reached a point where you're pulling down a six figure paycheck and you kind of
- 35:08go, well, I guess I knew everything I need to know about writing
- 35:10and your development as an artist just stops. The other thing is I had
- 35:15twenty I had twenty five. Well, by the time I did it was
- 35:20I had four decades plus of living. I'd done, and I had a
- 35:25lot of experiences, and you know, I had a lot to draw on
- 35:31versus some guy who's twenty years old and he has I had a really bad
- 35:37break up and high school, you know it was at time I got kicked
- 35:40in the yards seventh grade. I mean, it's just, you know,
- 35:47there's not a lot of complexity to what you can look back on at twenty
- 35:52two years old, whereas at forty five, I had three kids, feeling
- 35:57there had been the health there had been health problem, must have been you
- 36:00know, a million, a million things, and so it's like I could
- 36:04draw on all of that. Now you you also acted as a showrunner on
- 36:08a few shows. Can you tell which which shows you worked on specifically as
- 36:10a showrunner. I was never really the showrunner on Carnival, but I was
- 36:16kind of the showrunner by default on Carnival because the second season wrong in a
- 36:21way to do Battlestarcleactica, and I was basically the head writer. I was
- 36:27doing everything a showrunner does. But you know, but at the end of
- 36:34the day, there was another executive producer was handling most of the post production
- 36:38and you know, calling certain shots. So I wasn't really a pure showrunner,
- 36:42but I was making them a lot of creative decisions, and a lot
- 36:46of the crew were making end runs around the other guy to say, hey,
- 36:51you know, we're trying to get a decision. He hasn't, you
- 36:53know, and he's putting this one to committee and we really need to know.
- 36:57Now, I say, just do this, you know. So,
- 37:00I mean, I know what a show unner's job was, and so I
- 37:02know that in the second season, I was the de facto show runner.
- 37:06Now, what does a show runner do exactly for the audience so they understand
- 37:09the showrunner is basically responsible for, first of all, pretty much all scripts
- 37:15and the trajectory of what's going on in the writing room and the story of
- 37:19what's being submitted to the network. Dealing with all the notes to come back
- 37:22from the network, dealing with the production issues that come up, looking at,
- 37:29you know, drawings of sets that are going to be built, and
- 37:34signing off on those. You're signing off on everything. You're generally you're generally,
- 37:38you know, working directly with your key crew and your line producers to
- 37:46just make sure that everything's running and then all the trains are running on time.
- 37:51And in doing what you can do to make their job. I would
- 37:55say, I would say easier, but sometimes I think just to make their
- 38:00job possible. It's really, it's really this is this is pyramid building,
- 38:09you know, and you're building a new pyramid every week, and you're building
- 38:12each pyramid from the factory floor up and and so there's a lot of details
- 38:16that need attending to. You're also, you know, you're delegating a lot
- 38:21you can't be you know, you can't have your hand in everything. Um,
- 38:23you just have to make sure that the right people who reflect and understand
- 38:29your vision for things are in the slots. You know, Now, can
- 38:31you talk a little bit about the writer's room and what it's like to be
- 38:35in that writer's room. For people who have never been in a writer's room,
- 38:38well there's I've been in both. I've been in two kinds. There's
- 38:42really only two kinds of writer's rooms. Um, well there's there's there's lots
- 38:46of different kinds of writer's rooms. Um, there's writers rooms of work and
- 38:50writers rooms don't work. There's where you know, Um, the shows that
- 38:55I've run, the shows that I've been in charge of the writers room,
- 39:00I take great pride and when when I'm running a room, it's running on
- 39:04all cylinders and you have five or six writers in a room and I'm usually
- 39:08writer's assistant taking notes you have here, you're using cards or whiteboards in your
- 39:15breaking story. Your job is to sit as a group and break story.
- 39:20And to me, the key is, first of all, everybody has to
- 39:23feel safe, you know, they have to feel like they're not going to
- 39:28be ridicule that they come up with something silly. One thing that I really
- 39:34like. Ron Moore brought this to our room and Carnival, and according to
- 39:38him, it's it's an old gene roddenberry tip trick is a thing called a
- 39:44stupid stick, and you designate something. It can be anything, it can
- 39:47just be an object. We'll be right back after a word from our sponsor,
- 39:55and now back to the show. And if you pick this thing up
- 40:00and you hold it and pitch something, nobody can make fun of you.
- 40:04It's got supernatural powers. That's awesome. So and often it's the stupid stick
- 40:09pitch that really gets breaks the dam. Like usually the reaction is that,
- 40:16like, you shouldn't have picked up the stupid stick. That's actually really smart,
- 40:20or it'll be yeah, that's stupid. But you know if you did
- 40:25that, which flat gets every it just breaks a log jam. And I
- 40:30mean, really the key to me of successfully running a room, And I
- 40:36think the best I love analogy is that the best analogy I've found for a
- 40:39writer's room is you know, you're drawing, You're drawing juice, your drawing
- 40:46story out of the ether. As a writer, it's bubbling up through your
- 40:52story. Well, it's being informed by your own experiences. It's being filtered
- 40:55by your own experiences and interpreted by your own experiences. But that story comes
- 41:00from somewhere else. I truly believe. The more I do this that writers
- 41:04and artists, artists of all stripe are the only people on earth that are
- 41:08actually in daily um who in daily communication was with supernatural? I mean,
- 41:16I just there's it's something else. I can't tell you how many times I've
- 41:21written something in gun Where the fuck did that come from? Oh? Yeah,
- 41:24holy shit, Like that's that didn't come out of me, you know.
- 41:29And it's nothing I've ever seen, and it's nothing I've ever experienced,
- 41:31for God's sake, and it's coming from somewhere else. And so you're you're
- 41:37basically a light bulb and there's a power station, you know, down down
- 41:42the street. I look at it as you know, to keep of power
- 41:45station thing going. It's like you're driving through the desert here in California and
- 41:49there's you're out towards Nevada and there's these solar collectors and it's, you know,
- 41:54hundreds of mirrors on the desert floor, all of those mirrors focused on
- 42:00a heat element at the top of a tower that is you know, moving
- 42:05turbines down below. And I look at it as a good writer's room,
- 42:10is all the people are taking that that mojo, that story mojo, that
- 42:15juice and sort of focusing it on, you know, on on the person
- 42:20who's running the room, and and it's like it's amplifying everybody there. You
- 42:27can't if you have a good, well one on writer's room, nobody can
- 42:31really remember who came up with what it. It becomes it becomes a pure
- 42:39hive mind. And they're not just saying it because I like star Trek,
- 42:44but it becomes it becomes a hive mind. And there's only one writer in
- 42:50the room. There really is only one writer in the room, but he's
- 42:54he's the combination of you know, the four for six or twelve twelve writers
- 43:00that are all sitting in the room focusing their mirrors at that center point,
- 43:05which is just you know, forging the story. Um and it all kind
- 43:09of melts together, you know, um. And so it's not you know,
- 43:15the twelve equals one twelve creates one writer, you know, and that
- 43:20that takes the immense trust um and and in the process and um and a
- 43:30measure of generosity and more than that, just making sure it's fun. And
- 43:35because because creation is play, creation is play at a very high level,
- 43:40yes, but it's nevertheless it's no different than you know, like six kids
- 43:46in a sandbox, truck playing with trucks, you know, or army man
- 43:51or something. It's you're in a state of play and you need to make
- 43:54people feel like good if not that place, yeah, because if you,
- 44:01if you, if you're making kids not feel fun, they're not going to
- 44:06play in that sandbox. What they're gonna do is they're going to retreat to
- 44:07their corners and pound. And I'm seeing that happen in writers rooms. I
- 44:10mean there's writers rooms where it's like it's just everybody's just stirring a hole in
- 44:15the whiteboard and it's like what if we what? Oh yeah, it's like
- 44:28just constipated. Just oh my god. I've been in rooms like that and
- 44:34it's just like and usually it's a function of people at the top. It's
- 44:42a trickle down effect of of of the way that ideas are received. M
- 44:47shows like that are not fun. You know. No, let me ask
- 44:52you a question. How do you deal with studio notes or notes in general
- 44:55from people who have not sat and bled on the paper like you or on
- 45:00your laptop to build that story. Well, first of all, you know,
- 45:04I keep in mind that everybody, everybody involved and wants to make the
- 45:07material good. Now you'd argue there's probably a few people out there they just
- 45:12want to get their fingerprints on it. And there's a good argument for that.
- 45:15You know. It's like they want to be able to turn to their
- 45:16wife and see, hey, see that sweater. I picked that sweater out
- 45:21for that actress or something. I don't know, I don't. I think
- 45:24that's more of the exception to the rule. Everybody is just dying to make
- 45:28something great, and and sometimes if it's coming from people who don't understand the
- 45:37process, like the executives, it may not be as well articulated as it
- 45:44would be if you were getting it from another writer, you know, And
- 45:46thank God for that, because if they were capable of articulating it as well
- 45:52as a writer, they wouldn't need us. So that's said. You know,
- 45:59I say, you know, I read every every year I see some
- 46:02article and some basically on the internet or whatever, some blog or some screenwriting
- 46:07magazine and be like, but thoughest notes will you ever got? And it's
- 46:10bunch, you're right talking about the dollst note or ever goot. And to
- 46:15this day I've never seen anybody right when saying the smartest note I ever got?
- 46:19Because I can tell you for every really stupid note I've gotten, I've
- 46:22gotten one where I'm kicking myself in the ass. I'm my way home going,
- 46:24why they hell didn't I think of that. Sometimes people come up with
- 46:29with things where it's like, oh, wow, you're absolutely right. Um,
- 46:34I think the biggest problem is a lot of the notes. They have
- 46:42a lot of executives. They want to pitch a solution they perceive a problem,
- 46:45and they tend to frame their notes as solutions to problems they perceive.
- 46:52So it'll be hey, you know, do this and you're kind of going
- 46:55h like I feel, and it's like it's if there's any executives listening,
- 47:04or any future executives, the best thing to do is just frame the problem
- 47:07first, you know what I mean, Um, oh, the second act
- 47:10or you know, and be as specific as you can. This really bumps
- 47:15for me. You know, um, this particular moment or this this second
- 47:20scene kind of drags or it seems like this one character disappears and you know
- 47:24in the second act, and you know, frame the problem. Don't try
- 47:30to just pitch a solution, because the solution it's sort of like, you
- 47:37know, you got a doctor there's only one doctor in the room. And
- 47:40then you got a bunch of people who are standing around in the room,
- 47:44and they bring a patient in and he's bleeding from the ears, and everybody
- 47:49says, for God's sake, put cotton in his ears and put some band
- 47:52aids on his ears his ears. Really, the doctor and you're going,
- 47:55now, actually, that's indication of like, you know, you know,
- 47:59that's or cranial bleeding, and we really have to get him into an m
- 48:01R. I see what's going on with his brain, you know, And
- 48:05it's not A band aid on the ear is a situation. So you know,
- 48:12sometimes it's better just to point out, hey, he's bleeding from the
- 48:15ears. Not hey, put some band aids on his ears. You know,
- 48:20it's just better to frame a problem or point out the problem and then
- 48:24propose a solution. You are good at analogies, by the way, you
- 48:28are very good at analogies. Thank you. I should open up a little
- 48:34store. You should just sell analogies for us. Now, what is the
- 48:39biggest mistake you see first time screenwriters make? The biggest mistakes screenwriters make,
- 48:50I would say the biggest mistake all writers new writers make. And even if
- 48:53you that are like along the way is not recognizing a lot of the people
- 49:00go. You know, if I get it really good the first time,
- 49:05it'll save me time on editing. You know, I can edit and write
- 49:09at the same time. I can multitask. I can work with my iPad
- 49:14and watch TV at the same time, so I can edit and write at
- 49:17the same time. And then they sit down, which in really editing is
- 49:24using a completely different part of your brain than writing. It's completely It's as
- 49:30different as the difference between oh, I'm doing an analogy, but it's just
- 49:35different as the difference between skiing and eating a banana. Right, they have
- 49:40nothing to do with each other. Now I suppose you could ski while you're
- 49:44eating a banana. Not Well, the thing is, the thing is,
- 49:50it's like it's really they're they're they're they're mutually exclusive activities. And we'll be
- 49:58right back after a word from our answer and now back to the show.
- 50:07And what I find is the effect is like when people do that and they
- 50:12go, that's where you get into the It was a dark and stormy night.
- 50:15Oh no, no, no, that sucks. It was a shadowy
- 50:20and straining night. Oh that's worth This is the recipe for complete writer's block
- 50:28of paralysis, where you're trying to make qualitative decisions about things that are just
- 50:32dumping out of your head. Okay, you cannot do it. You cannot
- 50:37do that. You can't do it. It is like like pegging the accelerator
- 50:44and the break on your car at the same time. You're gonna make shitloads
- 50:49of noise and last mode, but the car ain't going anywhere, okay,
- 50:53And so it's like it's like understand that, you know, when you sit
- 50:58down to write, you write like you're being pursued through the jungle by a
- 51:04bunch of guys with machetes. You don't think about it. You go.
- 51:07You can be thinking, oh, this is shit. I know a ship,
- 51:10but I've got to get through this scene. Okay, I know what
- 51:14the next scene is going to be, and just get through it. Get
- 51:15through it, get through it, get through it right forward. Don't,
- 51:20for Christ's sake, when you sit down and write, don't sit down and
- 51:22read everything you've written before you write, okay, because now you're editing it
- 51:25again. Stop that. So you just sit down, you read the last
- 51:30few words and you go, oh, yeah, that's where I left of
- 51:31and you just pick it up and you have to write like you're just now.
- 51:37And it's okay if you're If you go off of your outline, that's
- 51:42all right. If something happens and the character takes you into direction you didn't
- 51:45expect to go great, okay, you know, and sometimes those are great
- 51:49moments, and so go ahead. But as long as you get back onto
- 51:52your you know, onto the path again, and arrive at your trajectory and
- 51:57arrive at your ending. But just get that first draft, get it out
- 52:00as quickly as humanly possible. And I can guarantee you that the parts that
- 52:06you thought while you were writing them were just shit on ice. Actually you'll
- 52:10reread them and you go, well, this isn't bad. And the stuff
- 52:14you thought where you were, oh my god, I must be channeling,
- 52:16you know, eugenal Eel. You know, it's just garbage, you know.
- 52:22And so it's like it's like you have no way of knowing how well
- 52:25you're doing while you're creating. You can't be So that's another reason. So
- 52:30so my advice to writers is understand that process and understand editing and writing and
- 52:37editing a creative process and the editing process are two completely different things, and
- 52:45you know, and and don't try to don't try to multitask that it never
- 52:50goes well. I actually heard, I actually heard a great analogy from a
- 52:54songwriter which I think is amazing analogy for writing, which is like when you
- 53:00go into an old house and you turn on the pipes and all you see
- 53:04is that mud come out. You just gotta let it go and let that
- 53:07mud keep flowing out of the pipes, out of this faucet, and sooner
- 53:10or later, because start walk, it starts getting lighter and lighter and lighter,
- 53:14to the point where then you're getting clear water that you can actually drink.
- 53:19But you have to get through all that other stuff first, or else
- 53:22it won't you won't get to the good stuff. So you just have to.
- 53:24You it's like, it's like it's it's it's an ugly, messy,
- 53:29smelly process. There's nothing, there's nothing. There's nothing glamorous about being an
- 53:36artist. A lot of times it really is it not when you're real creative.
- 53:40You know, when I'm I'm I'm one of those I'm one of those
- 53:44rare birds. A lot of people are like, you know, I hate
- 53:46writing. The tortures they're sitting in front of her. I've seen you guys
- 53:51sitting there, sitting there frowning at their screens. And I'm happy and giddy
- 53:58and stupid when I'm writing, you know, I mean, I'm just like
- 54:00laughing. I'm like, like, I'm just sitting here making faces. But
- 54:05oh god, look they're all gonna be crying here. This is gonna be
- 54:07so great. Well, you actually just said that right when we got on
- 54:10the on the on the line, You're like, I'm writing a ghost story,
- 54:14like you were so happy about it when you said that's because I love
- 54:17this process. I there's tons of love on the page. I just adore
- 54:22writing. I'm not one of those guys. It's like, there's all I
- 54:28like having written. It's like I like the process. I like I like
- 54:34doing it. It's one you know, it's funny. There's that I forget
- 54:37what it is. It's some recent you know, one of those self help
- 54:40business type books, and they made this prop proposal if you do any endeavor
- 54:47or activity for ten thousand hours, ye become And he's like, okay,
- 54:53so if you want to be a if you want to be a concert pianist,
- 54:57you just have to play for ten thousand. Now, what he doesn't
- 55:01say is that if you didn't like playing the piano, right, you'd have
- 55:08to be the world's dumbest asshole to waste ten thousand hours of your life doing
- 55:14something you don't like doing. People who spend ten thousand of their hours of
- 55:19their life mastering some art or craft or science or whatever they master, they
- 55:24have to love it. You have to love doing that. But there's a
- 55:30lot of people that don't. A lot of people who go to school.
- 55:34You have to love some aspect should, you know. But you know,
- 55:38I mean a lot of people fall in love with the idea of being a
- 55:42writer, you know. But I meet writers every day. They've ever written
- 55:45a word. They're just natural rock counter. It's really good in telling stories.
- 55:49They're just and it's like where I go, for God's sake, I
- 55:52wish you'd sit down and write a book or something because you're really good,
- 55:54you know. And then I meet people who are writers and they're making very
- 55:58good money. You know, if you have worked with people who are writers
- 56:01and it's like they're not writers. They've they've worked out the craft, they
- 56:05understand what follows what. They're not really writers, they're just they're just regurgitating
- 56:10things they've seen and putting a spin on everything to make them, you know,
- 56:15to make it a little fresh enough to where everybody gets, you know,
- 56:19get scared. Yeah, that's an interesting that's that's very interesting because sometimes
- 56:24you see these movies or you watch these shows and you're like, wow,
- 56:28it's just the same, the same stuff. And I've met writers too.
- 56:30I've met writers and filmmakers for that matter, who do exactly what you know,
- 56:35they understand the craft, they're technicians. But but like, you know,
- 56:39I could put the paint on canvas and I know how to do it,
- 56:43and i know the technique. But I'm not Da Vinci. I'm not
- 56:47I'm not Van Gogh. I'm not I'm not being brave. I'm not being
- 56:52you know, I'm not going out there without a net. Well yeah,
- 56:55I mean, but that's just you know, maybe that's the cards that are
- 56:58delcha. You know, not everybody is, you know, I mean there's
- 57:01probably guys painting pictures from you know, photographs down at the mall that you
- 57:08know, from a craft and from a from a craft standpoint, as far
- 57:12as mixing colors and laying down paint, I probably you know, highly evolved,
- 57:16you know. But the there's directors like that I don't name any names,
- 57:21or there's directors that are absolutely masterful, but it's just not quite substantial.
- 57:30There's a there's an it's hard to put your finger on it, but
- 57:32it's like there's a sense of a missing depth to it in my mind.
- 57:38Yeah, that that somebody like Hubrick brings to the party, you know,
- 57:44or or Scorsesey or you know, where there's there's something really to it and
- 57:50there's something underneath that there's like fifty layers underneath and you will only see it
- 57:54in twenty or thirty years of watching the movie that you'll Hubrick Ya's my favorite.
- 58:01You you know, he was aware of what he was doing and everything,
- 58:05but he wasn't aware of everything he was doing. And no artist really
- 58:07is a lot of it. You're just doing your best and it's coming in
- 58:10that way. But you really do have no idea, you know, how
- 58:17how why it works that way. You know, you're just focusing on trying
- 58:22to articulate your vision as well as you can. Yeah, I mean,
- 58:25I you know, I take you go to college lip classes and he gets
- 58:30some clown, you know, up in front he's your college lip teacher,
- 58:34and he's trying to tell you what's going through Herman Melville's head. Right,
- 58:37you know, imbe Dick or Stephen Crane's head when he was writing Red Badge
- 58:42of Courage and yeah, he was thinking about this and he's working on symbolism
- 58:45over here in South And I tell people, I go, I can tell
- 58:49you what was going through Herman Melville's head when he wrote in Hermobie Dick.
- 58:52It was like, I gotta feed my family, and this thing's doing a
- 58:54couple of months. You know, that's what's going through Herman Melville. Right,
- 59:00I got bills, you know, right, doing the best you can.
- 59:05You're running through the jungle with the machetes beyond you. That's what's happening.
- 59:08You know. It's funny because kuber Kubrick is one of my favorite artists
- 59:12of all time. And there's so much I mean, there's volumes libraries written
- 59:16about what people think he was doing in two thousand and one and in the
- 59:21Shining and then and all of those. And I just did you see the
- 59:24documentary film worker, Um, I know it's it's it's his assistant. Uh
- 59:30oh, I see, it wasn't it wonderful, was it? It wonderful?
- 59:34But you hear him and he was the guy that was literally next to
- 59:37him for thirty years, and he's like, you know the twins in shining,
- 59:40Well that was me. I brought twins in. And Kubrick said,
- 59:44well, I guess there are twins now where everybody's like, in there's twins,
- 59:46because back in the day he shot some photos of twins and they're putting
- 59:50up like, no, it just happened to be that way. It was.
- 59:57We'll be right back after a word from our sponsor, and now back
- 1:00:04to the show. The first episode of the first episode of Connival was called
- 1:00:08mil Fay, right, And I decided, you know, when I first
- 1:00:15created a show, I wanted to name each episode after each city they were.
- 1:00:19And we didn't do that the first year. We did it in the
- 1:00:21second year, you know. But I titled the episode of mill Fay,
- 1:00:25you know. And the way I found it is I got a period period
- 1:00:30map of the dust Bowl and sort of looked at dots on the map and
- 1:00:35found it a little tiny dot named Milfa and I went, oh, I
- 1:00:37like that, and so that's what I titled it. So then we make
- 1:00:39it like two years later, it's on TV and people are talking about it
- 1:00:44on the Internet and going back and forth with their interpretations, and some guy
- 1:00:47says, well, you do know and and mil fae is an anagram for
- 1:00:54family, And I'm going, Wow, I'm a serious. I couldn't have
- 1:01:04been thinking about that, you know, I couldn't have done I couldn't.
- 1:01:07I'm not going to be thinking about stuff like that, you know, when
- 1:01:10I'm making creative because I'm making ten ten thousand creative decisions in the course of
- 1:01:15the screenplay, you know, ten thousand decisions to make. You can't be
- 1:01:20thinking on that level about everything one he'd never finished. He'd still be writing
- 1:01:24the pilot today. So when Carnival came out, the Internet was definitely often
- 1:01:31running. It was already around for a little bit, and but then the
- 1:01:35message boards and all that stuff was going on back then heavily. And I
- 1:01:39remember people just you know, because it wasn't there wasn't as much content flying
- 1:01:44around as there is today. Yeah, And they really delved into the deep,
- 1:01:49the deepness of Carnival. How is it? As a creator, I've
- 1:01:52always wanted to hear this as a creator, to go on and just Lou,
- 1:01:57I'm like, you guys have no idea what you're talking about, Like
- 1:02:00what ya was? Like? I know, because like I said, and
- 1:02:04people have different interpretations for different that's nobody does that when they're talking about CSI
- 1:02:10CI right, or even shows like House. You know, they're they're not
- 1:02:15even really doing stuff like that on the Sopranos so much. But the minute
- 1:02:19they start to interpret stuff symbolism and so forth, what things really mean,
- 1:02:24connections between different elements. As soon as people start doing that, you're taught.
- 1:02:30Now that's what people do about art, okay, and that means succeeded
- 1:02:35and even made art. It's not just a TV show, You've made art.
- 1:02:38And so that was the biggest thing. I mean, I'm not going
- 1:02:40to say, oh, you're wrong, because they could be right. I
- 1:02:45mean, to me, it's it's it's it's there's a collaboration happening between the
- 1:02:50artists and the audience. If the audience draws something out of it the artist
- 1:02:53didn't intend, does that mean it's not there? Absolutely not. You know
- 1:02:58that, Well, yeah, why wouldn't it? It should be If it's
- 1:03:02open to multiple interpretations, that's a good thing. That that's because You're reaching
- 1:03:07people different people in different ways. It's almost like the story in the Bible
- 1:03:14of the apostles speaking tongues or something, and everybody's here different language. Um,
- 1:03:20that's fine, that's good. Well. Yeah, like to go back
- 1:03:24to Kubrick, every one of his movies has been interpreted a thousand different ways
- 1:03:28and will continue to be interpreted for them for decades and decades to come in
- 1:03:31different ways. That's because his work is hard, which which brings me to
- 1:03:35my poetry. I should pitch my quote. Please, please pitch your poetry.
- 1:03:38Yeah, I was gonna ask you, what's next on your plate?
- 1:03:40Well, I'm doing a bunch of stuff. I'm I mean, it's like
- 1:03:44I've been I've been creating shows that don't go on. You can check them
- 1:03:51all out. I mean it's like people go, well, push, you
- 1:03:52haven't done anythings. You're creating anything since Carnival. It's like, No,
- 1:03:55I've created like a bunch of show. I don't know why. I've read
- 1:04:01a bunch of women. I was saying, this is good, this could
- 1:04:04go to morrow. I don't know what the deal is. But I've got
- 1:04:10a site called an Off TV and you can see it's it's unusual because you
- 1:04:14can see the actual pilots in their entirety on some of the projects. There's
- 1:04:17another thing called a bible, which we talked about earlier in the show,
- 1:04:21and you very rarely get to see show bibles on the internet. This will
- 1:04:25give you an idea of what a bible looks like, like what a show
- 1:04:28bible looks like. Um, So it's a nice resource for new writers.
- 1:04:31And then and then, and then there's these things we call decks, which
- 1:04:35are sort of like anywhere between an eleven and fifteen page version of a Bible,
- 1:04:41like mostly sizzle, very little stake, just giving. It's kind of
- 1:04:45thing they call leave being mind. You might take it to a pitch meeting
- 1:04:47with you and leave something behind for the executives best up the chain of command.
- 1:04:51So some of those two so they're they're helpful selling things. And that's
- 1:04:55all on n Off katon Auf dot TV and I'll put it in the show
- 1:05:00notes. Um. The other thing. The other thing is I recently I
- 1:05:06got I started writing poetry again. I wrote it. I wrote poetry,
- 1:05:10and I first started writing, um, as you know, when I was
- 1:05:14an art major, and then I flipped over to creative writing, and and
- 1:05:18I was john to that. I did a lot of poetry and worked with
- 1:05:21a lot of really great had a lot of great poets or teachers. That
- 1:05:25was where I sort of cut my teeth in. Um. I started writing
- 1:05:29again about six seven years ago, and for like five years I was writing
- 1:05:33these these poems and just post him on Facebook. I would just post them
- 1:05:39on Facebook. And because it's like who gets paper, right, pas,
- 1:05:42Why am I going to submitted to called poetry poetry magazine? Yeah? Yeah,
- 1:05:47poetry, yeah, jugs and poetry the Jugs of Polotry magazine. Yeah,
- 1:05:54so we we magazine. Does that still even exist? I don't know.
- 1:05:58And so so I just post them in this this this woman was actually
- 1:06:03collecting them and she contact me said I've got You've got my thirty five poems
- 1:06:09and and um, I thought, wow, maybe we should do a book.
- 1:06:14So I called it another person I knew, and it's a publisher,
- 1:06:15and she said, I would love to publish poems by you. And so
- 1:06:21we did this thing. It's called NoHo gloaming. I mean, if you
- 1:06:26go on if you want my Facebook page or Twitter, you'll find it.
- 1:06:30Um, if you go on the net, you want to find it,
- 1:06:31just put it in Clash Books is the publisher um c l A c E
- 1:06:39c l A s H Books, and the book it's NoHo n O h
- 1:06:44O gloamings g l A m A n g um And there's links all over
- 1:06:50my web, my my my social networks and so forth. And it's um,
- 1:06:57it's about as pure. I mean, it's like when you do TV.
- 1:07:00I'm like, you're not about the note process. It's your your vision
- 1:07:04is mitigated by a lot of people. You know. It's very rare where
- 1:07:09you can't really the raw stuff up because it takes so many people just to
- 1:07:15make these damn things, you know, um, and you know everybody's you
- 1:07:20know, it's going to waver from the way you might have imagined, you
- 1:07:23know, down to know props and camera angles and it's all a myriad of
- 1:07:28details. And it was so nice to return to a form where I'm creating
- 1:07:32the end result right there on a page and so and it's very approachable.
- 1:07:38It's not. It's not if you don't like, if you think of poetry
- 1:07:45the way I think of minds, okay, and you're allergic to poetry and
- 1:07:51you're going, uh, you know, it's not this precious stuff. It's
- 1:07:56it's very relatable. I believe that if somebody, I believe people will read
- 1:08:00it and they'll connect very deeply with it. There's one poem at the end.
- 1:08:04It's an epic poem that's just crazy and kind of funny, and it's
- 1:08:10it's the story of a guy in the Witness Protection program. Um. Yeah,
- 1:08:14I mean it's not I mean, I'm not writing about ravens and angels
- 1:08:18and you know, dead king trees. Yeah. I writing about stuff like
- 1:08:24Sitco gas stations. Right. My influences were Charles Bukowski and this whole Los
- 1:08:30Angeles Brian Rogue school. Um. And it's very down to earth and sort
- 1:08:36of grounded, straight up stuff. And sometimes I'm using and sometimes moving.
- 1:08:41So I urge you to check out my poetrait. If you like my TV,
- 1:08:45they'll really like that. Awesome. And I'm gonna ask you a few
- 1:08:48questions. I ask all of my guests, Um, what advice would you
- 1:08:51give the actress thing? Yes, yes, yes, yes, exactly exactly,
- 1:08:57just like the actors to do odd type. Don't do that. It's
- 1:09:00not going to if you are a chery. No, I'm joking. What
- 1:09:04advice would you give a screenwriter wanted to break into the business today, I
- 1:09:10would say the best thing you can do is skip film school and just start
- 1:09:14shooting film, because you can do that. I couldn't do that when I
- 1:09:18was starting out as a filmmaker. As a filmmaker, yeah, I would
- 1:09:23film school. You will learn everything you learn in four years of film school
- 1:09:28in five days on a set. Pretty much. It's a film school is
- 1:09:32the world's biggest waste of money, unless you go to UCLA or n YU
- 1:09:38or USC and otherwise, if you're going to some other college to get a
- 1:09:44communications degree or film degree or that, you're totally wasting your time. If
- 1:09:48you want to be a filmmaker, take take shit, take twenty five.
- 1:09:55Tell your parents saying, okay, I want to take twenty five percent of
- 1:09:57what you would spend on a college, and I want to make them movie
- 1:10:00with it. We'll be right back after a word from our sponsor. And
- 1:10:08now back to the show. Just make movies, write them, get your
- 1:10:14friends together. Sony has a good eye, and make him the director.
- 1:10:17Now just make go out and start making movies. And you know you might
- 1:10:24not monitor, but you'll get from here to there much faster than you will
- 1:10:27if you go to film school for core and how about screenwriting? For screenwriting,
- 1:10:31you know, I think the most important thing I would tell a writer
- 1:10:35who wants to be a dramatist, which is a very specific kind of writing.
- 1:10:40People think that novelists think, oh I cannot I can adapt this into
- 1:10:45a script. They usually can. It's very specific. Shasepeare was an actor
- 1:10:49before he was a writer, and I really I didn't really learn how to
- 1:10:54be a dramatist until I studied acting. And I studied acting by accident,
- 1:10:58I thought I want to be a director. And so one of my second
- 1:11:00mentor who was really important in my development was a guy named Cliff Osmond who
- 1:11:05was an acting to an acting coach. He was Armanda Sante's acting consultant,
- 1:11:12and I met him on a set and we got to be good friends,
- 1:11:15and I said, I want to take some of your classes because I want
- 1:11:16to learn about the process so I can interact with actors as a director.
- 1:11:21And what I did was I ended up learning how to write. I really
- 1:11:26learned. I was really good at packing the trunk and I knew how to
- 1:11:30to break a story and figure out what follows this and what follows that.
- 1:11:35When it came to my character work, I was faking it until I studied
- 1:11:41acting. And you'll learn one thing you learned in acting is is to act
- 1:11:45in the moment. Now, if you're you got stage fright. I have
- 1:11:48terrible stage fright. When I'm playing somebody other than myself, I could get
- 1:11:53up in front a zillion people being damned off. Yeah, But if I'm
- 1:11:56playing a character, it's scary, and you know, I just can't build
- 1:12:02that fourth wall. But when I'm alone in a room I came in,
- 1:12:08I'm writing in the moment. I'm mostly my scene work feels like I'm just
- 1:12:12taking transcription. I know my characters so well, I know what they're saying.
- 1:12:15Oh I'm doing is just trying to keep up with them while they while
- 1:12:18they're talking going through a scene. I never am going M what would he
- 1:12:25say there? M? What would she then say? Another thing I'd say
- 1:12:30the young actors or young young writers, is that sort of a sort of
- 1:12:35attached to that is if you're going to a place like that and you're going,
- 1:12:40what would I say if I was in that situation? What would I
- 1:12:43say if somebody said that to me? Is nobody really gives a fuck what
- 1:12:47you would say, okay, because you're really not interesting. Actors aren't doers.
- 1:12:54Actors are watchers. If you're boring, just boring boring people, and
- 1:13:00so nobody cares what you'll say. You have to understand your character and what
- 1:13:04the character would say. They all have to have different voices out to be
- 1:13:09real, you know. So again, I would really strongly suggest studying,
- 1:13:13spending at least a couple of years, um, you know, in any
- 1:13:16way you can, and whatever resource your town or city has, um getting
- 1:13:24up and studying acting and doing scenes and seeing how hard it is. And
- 1:13:28it also helps the develop a really strong respect for your for the actor and
- 1:13:32how hard they're And that's something that's sorely lacking with many writers in Hollywood,
- 1:13:39where I'll hear I'm a book, Oh yeah, you say you just sucks,
- 1:13:44and it's like, has it occurred to you that you know you're writing
- 1:13:47shitty stuff? For him to say, there's no way to make it work?
- 1:13:51Well as if Mary, if Meryl Streep was saying, it wouldn't have
- 1:13:56worked. Yeah, I mean, if you can to where you write and
- 1:14:00when you're in there and you're doing you're working with actress, you know,
- 1:14:02actors. You get to understand the kind of stuff that actors want to say,
- 1:14:08that the kinds of moments actors want to play. And if you know
- 1:14:11that and you get them on your side, I mean, you know that's
- 1:14:14good. That's something that's gonna make you stand out. You know. Now,
- 1:14:18can you tell me what book had the biggest impact on your life or
- 1:14:21career the biggest the book that had the biggest impact in my life or my
- 1:14:29career, or or or either or I would say at this point, you
- 1:14:33know, I was a late common too, was um, well, let
- 1:14:40me think there's there's so many of whichever one comes to your mind. The
- 1:14:44Alchemists, of course, I love The Alchemist. That's one of my favorite
- 1:14:47books. It's an astonishing like everybody should everybody should read it. It should
- 1:14:54be required, it should be required for everybody in the world, but especially
- 1:14:58those who are artists. I think, I think, yeah, but I
- 1:15:01think for everybody. I think so. I think it's a good It's about
- 1:15:04as close a thing to like, if Homo Sapiens came with an owner's manual,
- 1:15:13it would be The Alchemist. I with you, good answer, Good
- 1:15:18answer? Now, what is the lesson that took you the longest to learn,
- 1:15:21whether in the film industry or in life. M hm, Um,
- 1:15:30that I'm not always right? You know that sometimes. Um, I've been
- 1:15:38in situations where I'm absolutely sure something's not gonna work, and and that person
- 1:15:44has, you know, higher rank than I do, so everyone sho get
- 1:15:46to call a shot. And I'm thinking, he is, it's gonna not
- 1:15:49work. It's I'm gonna work as well as the way I would have done
- 1:15:53it. And then all of a sudden I watch it and it works beautifully,
- 1:15:56you know, and I go, you know what I was wrong?
- 1:16:00Um? You know it's like this is the way you know, just because
- 1:16:04it's the way you would do it, doesn't mean it's the best way to
- 1:16:06do it. And um, And when it comes to a collaborative art,
- 1:16:13passionate rules today. And you know what it boils down to is the person
- 1:16:17who's most passionate it's probably gonna win that fight. Don't get hung up on
- 1:16:24little stuff. If people want this change, the worst place you can go,
- 1:16:30the least productive, most toxic place you can go, is to this
- 1:16:33place that almost every shitty writer goes, which is they're trying to reck my
- 1:16:41work, you know, and it's like, yeah, they're dumping shitloads of
- 1:16:45money into this and they just want to rack it because they don't like you.
- 1:16:49They mean people they want to do let's go come on for God's say,
- 1:16:55you know. I mean sometimes sometimes another way it does work, and
- 1:17:00sometimes it works even a little better than the way you had in mind.
- 1:17:03Just don't don't think that you're ever gonna watch something that is exactly the movie
- 1:17:09you had in your mind when you conceived it and wrote it. It's always
- 1:17:12going to be a little different. Some parts you're going to be better,
- 1:17:15some parts you might win. Sad um, hopefully the you know, the
- 1:17:19former is more numerous than the latter. You know, very good. And
- 1:17:24then the toughest question of all three of your favorite films of all time,
- 1:17:28Oh, that is tough. North to my Northwest. I love I love
- 1:17:30it. Um. I think, um, uh this see there's a lot
- 1:17:39of I'm just gonna see it pops into my head off Casaitlina of course.
- 1:17:45Um. And then I think it's probably uh, it's probably a jeez.
- 1:17:50It's really kind of a dead heat between Chinatown and uh and and and the
- 1:17:59Shining Oh, I really love the shot, but I can a dozen.
- 1:18:04Of course, those four right exactly, that just came into mind right now.
- 1:18:10I agree with you, per and We're everything David Lynch, Does that
- 1:18:13count everything? Everything by Kubrick, Everything by and every other movie by the
- 1:18:18Cohen brothers. It's like that every other You're right, it is almost every
- 1:18:26other movie. Because but when they hit it, they hit it out of
- 1:18:30the park. I know. But when they strike out, but you know
- 1:18:34what, though, no even strike out, it's an interesting strike exactly what
- 1:18:39I was about to say. I was about to say. Even when they
- 1:18:41strike out, at least they're going to places that is pushing them creatively,
- 1:18:45in places that we might have never even been to. So for every there's
- 1:18:48no country for all men. There might be a lady killer. Hey do
- 1:18:51you do you do editing on this thing? After you're done? I do
- 1:18:55not. You don't we go straight through? Can? I'm gonna say,
- 1:19:00honey, keep it down, I'm on the radio. No. My audience
- 1:19:05is used to this, So it's all good. Don't worry. And then
- 1:19:09where can people find you? And you just dropped the person on the table
- 1:19:14probably sounded like like a bomb. It's all good. It's all good.
- 1:19:16Now, where can people find you? In your work? People can find
- 1:19:20all of these things I've done at nos TV, and then you can find
- 1:19:25my stuff. I mean, you know, I mean it's I'm pretty active
- 1:19:30in in on Twitter and social networks. There's interviews, you know, just
- 1:19:35google my ass and you'll pop up rough. Don't google my ass because there
- 1:19:45you can find me all other places. And as far as what I'm doing
- 1:19:46right now, right now, I'm kind of I finished up. I did
- 1:19:49three years in the Blacklist, and I'm kind of been doing a lot of
- 1:19:53development, so I'm right now, I'm kind of I'm I'm I'm kind of
- 1:19:58I'm between jobs. Okay, we'll be right back after a word from our
- 1:20:03sponsor, and now back to the show. You know, as Henry and
- 1:20:15the Racer Head would say it, I'm on a vacation. I'm on vacation.
- 1:20:21You're on sabbatical, sir, You're on sabbatical. You are a psychic
- 1:20:28Daniel. It's been an absolute pleasure talking to you. Thank you so much
- 1:20:31for being so kind and generous with your time. Thank you. I enjoyed
- 1:20:36it. I want to thank Daniel for dropping some major knowledge bombs on the
- 1:20:43tribe today and sharing his experiences his unique experiences as a showrunner and a writer.
- 1:20:50And guys, if you want to get notes to anything we discussed in
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