Latest / The Two Authors’ Podcast / The Andromeda Strain with Gerald M. Kilby
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- 0:00That way I can write one book a year instead of trying to write one book a month, I think.
- 0:04Yeah, yeah. I want to be you when I grow up.
- 0:07So...
- 0:08[LAUGHTER]
- 0:09And...
- 0:10[MUSIC]
- 0:13Welcome to the Two Authors podcast, an entertaining chat show hosted by bestselling mystery and
- 0:18thriller authors Douglas Pratt and Nicholas Harvey in lively, humorous and informative
- 0:24conversation with distinguished guests who share their thoughts and experience about
- 0:29a successful author career.
- 0:34Hello everyone and welcome to the Two Authors podcast with myself and the amazing Douglas
- 0:41Pratt. Amazing, I don't know about that but thank you so much or how are you today?
- 0:46Good, we were saying off air it's been a while, it's been a minute.
- 0:49No, we had a couple of weeks where we haven't had any recordings, I hadn't had a chance to chat
- 0:53with you. You went to Killer Nashville? Yeah, I went to Killer Nashville, hung out with a couple
- 0:58of a cool-- - A buddy Franklin.
- 1:01- Franklin and Mary Stone there.
- 1:03I got to hang out with a few,
- 1:04our DP Lau was there.
- 1:06He was asking about, yeah, he asked about you.
- 1:09- Very cool.
- 1:10- A lot of listeners came up to me and said,
- 1:11"Hey, you know, we've been listening."
- 1:13So it was kind of cool.
- 1:14- Both of them came up to you and said,
- 1:16"Hi." - No, we had a lot more
- 1:17than that, actually.
- 1:17A several of them came up and were like,
- 1:19"Hey, I finished up a couple of panels
- 1:22and I had some people come up and go,
- 1:24"Love listening to your show, you guys are hilarious."
- 1:26What they really said was,
- 1:28you're really hilarious, Nick's just kind of okay.
- 1:30That's fair.
- 1:31That's fair.
- 1:31Yeah.
- 1:32Yeah.
- 1:33No, they really did.
- 1:34We did get some really cool talking to listeners and stuff like that.
- 1:37That's cool.
- 1:38That's great.
- 1:38You got to hang out with Mary Stone.
- 1:40So my news is our backer kit promo for the anthology for "Authonation,"
- 1:46which is a thriller anthology.
- 1:48I have a story in and Mary Stone and JD Barker are heading.
- 1:52It's out there.
- 1:53It's running.
- 1:54It's already funded in nine hours.
- 1:56That's pretty impressive.
- 1:57So yeah, she don't wait to kind of celebrate with her.
- 1:59Yeah, so that was kind of awesome.
- 2:00- I'm really excited about it.
- 2:01Yeah, and I'm following up with the backer kit of my own.
- 2:04Backer kit is like Kickstarter, same kind of thing.
- 2:07And I'm doing my own.
- 2:09- You're doing a board game too, aren't you?
- 2:11- I got an AJ Bailey adventure board game
- 2:14that I came up with and did all the, built the whole thing.
- 2:18Yeah, it's really cool.
- 2:19And it's a pro in a box, you know, proper board game.
- 2:21It's really, really cool.
- 2:23And it's available now and this airs,
- 2:25it's the backer kit is up.
- 2:27And so you can go check that out.
- 2:28And then I'm doing my first special edition of my Kat Cromwell book one.
- 2:33So it's a hardback, foiled, end paper, spray, spray, spray, it's got a super cool
- 2:39sprayed edge.
- 2:40And the end paper, when you, when you open is, is pretty fricking sexy too.
- 2:45So head over to back kit.
- 2:46You can check that out.
- 2:47And oh, and I have all the other ones, Nora Summer.
- 2:49If anyone knows of my Nora Summer character, you know, she's got a very dry wit.
- 2:53So it's a desk calendar, 52 week desk calendar with a norahism on every page.
- 3:00A norahism.
- 3:01Yeah, so every week you get a new norahism taken from the book.
- 3:04Oh, you should put those in the show notes.
- 3:05Put those in the show notes so people can talk.
- 3:07Oh yeah, yeah, yeah, sure.
- 3:07I'll put a link.
- 3:08Put a link.
- 3:08Put a link.
- 3:09All right.
- 3:10Big thanks to our supporter and good friends at Vellum, the fantastic Vellum.
- 3:16You know, and I was thinking of something to talk about with Vellum this week.
- 3:20And you know, the basic that we've skipped over
- 3:23is their preview feature.
- 3:25So when you're in Vellum, you can look at your book
- 3:28and see how it's gonna look in the print form.
- 3:30You can look at it, how it's gonna look
- 3:32in all the different electronic devices.
- 3:34- No, iPad, Kindle, you can look on a nook.
- 3:37You could probably go back and look on an old Nokia phone
- 3:40if you wanted to.
- 3:41They probably have that set up, I'm sure.
- 3:43- Yeah, so you can see, you know, stupid things.
- 3:45Like if you have your, the beginning of a chapter,
- 3:49If you've got, you know, some people put it further down the page, we'll see how that
- 3:52looks when it actually comes up on a Newark or a Kindle or something opposed to the print
- 3:56page.
- 3:57So really cool.
- 3:58Yeah, that's pretty awesome.
- 3:59Also a big thank you to our Patreon supporters.
- 4:02We're accumulating such a huge amount of extra stuff.
- 4:06Oh, tons of stuff, yes.
- 4:08Every single guest we have on the show, we do an extra bonus and it goes in for the
- 4:13Patreon there.
- 4:14$3 a month, folks.
- 4:16$3 a month, that's it.
- 4:17Not $3 a show, $3 a month.
- 4:18You get all of that extra stuff.
- 4:20So if you're interested in that, link to the show notes.
- 4:22Even get a coffee for $3 a month right now.
- 4:25Ah, there are even more than that.
- 4:26All right, we're going to move on because our guest today is a superb guy.
- 4:30We met him at SPS London this year, earlier this year, and he did a talk on Facebook ads.
- 4:36We're going to talk to him a whole bunch about that.
- 4:37He's the best-selling sci-fi author Gerald M. Kilby, and we'll chat with him shortly.
- 4:42But first, to listen to a question from our recent guest, lovely Jen Graybill.
- 4:47- Well, thank you, Jen Graybill,
- 4:48for coming back to ask us our listener question this week.
- 4:51It's so exciting to have you back again.
- 4:53So what have you got for us?
- 4:55- So my question for you guys,
- 4:57you know, a lot of times authors spend most of their time
- 5:00sitting alone in their room
- 5:02and getting all those words on the page,
- 5:04but every once in a while, we have to come out of the cave.
- 5:07So if you are gonna do an author event
- 5:11and you have to walk out on a stage,
- 5:13What is your walk out song?
- 5:16- Ooh.
- 5:19- AC/DC, Back in Black.
- 5:21- Oh!
- 5:23I love that you had it ready.
- 5:25- Not bad, see I was--
- 5:27- I love that you were ready to do that.
- 5:28- I was gonna go either the Beatles paperback writer
- 5:31or Elvis Costello as I write the book,
- 5:34and that way you can kind of go with the most.
- 5:36- I like the Elvis Costello one.
- 5:39Yeah, mine was easy because it was the song we used
- 5:41at the beginning of our wedding, so.
- 5:43- Back in black.
- 5:45(laughing)
- 5:46- Dead.
- 5:48I rode in on a motorcycle and they played back in black.
- 5:51- Wow. - Oh, that's fantastic.
- 5:53That was a party that, oh my goodness.
- 5:56- I have to tell you that I really missed
- 5:58that I didn't get to meet young Nick.
- 6:00(laughing)
- 6:03- Should have been a joke, should have been a joke.
- 6:04- It was carefree and just like ready to go.
- 6:08Yeah, oh wow.
- 6:09- Oh, that's fantastic.
- 6:10- Wait, what does Cheryl come in on?
- 6:12I want to know because she was already there looking gorgeous standing by the lake.
- 6:16I could see her like parachuting him.
- 6:18That would have been awesome.
- 6:19So yeah, she could have.
- 6:21She could have.
- 6:22No, me and my best man rode in on a 750 Suzuki motorcycle.
- 6:28That's awesome.
- 6:29I love it.
- 6:31I absolutely love it.
- 6:32I absolutely love it.
- 6:33What would be yours, Jen?
- 6:34Yeah, what would be your song?
- 6:35Yeah, what's your song?
- 6:37Let's get the party started.
- 6:38Oh, good one.
- 6:40Good one.
- 6:40Big fan of pink.
- 6:41big fan of pink that is always one that is,
- 6:43that makes me get up and gets me dancing.
- 6:45And I absolutely love going to see her in concert.
- 6:48So.
- 6:48- Very cool.
- 6:49Very cool.
- 6:50Great question.
- 6:51Thank you so much, Jen, for a superb question.
- 6:53- Absolutely.
- 6:54You guys have a wonderful rest of your day.
- 6:57(upbeat music)
- 7:01- Jerry Kilby, all the way from Ireland.
- 7:03Thank you so much for joining us.
- 7:04How are you?
- 7:06- I'm very well.
- 7:06Very well indeed, on yourself.
- 7:09- Outstanding, outstanding.
- 7:10Better for seeing you.
- 7:11It's, we met for the first time.
- 7:15I'd seen your name through the mastermind chat and stuff,
- 7:19but we met for the first time at SPS in London,
- 7:22where you gave a fantastic talk,
- 7:24which we'll get to in a little bit.
- 7:25So it's, it is great to see you again.
- 7:28So kick it off with a little bit of background
- 7:30on how you first got into writing
- 7:32and when you were first published.
- 7:34- Yeah, I mean, I came to writing quite late.
- 7:36I mean, I started when I was in my fifties.
- 7:38So that's five years from now, Jerry.
- 7:40- That's, that's, yeah, that was last year.
- 7:43(laughing)
- 7:46It was bizarre, I just took an ocean one day
- 7:48to write a novel.
- 7:50Don't ask me why I just decided I was gonna give it a go.
- 7:53I know it's strange, it's so strange.
- 7:54I was out with a bunch of mates having a few pints
- 7:57and I was talking about it. - There it goes now.
- 7:58We're getting to the root of it.
- 8:00And once you said it, half licked in front of all your mates,
- 8:03you couldn't go back on it.
- 8:05- Well, I didn't say I was writing.
- 8:06I had an idea floating around in my head.
- 8:09I was talking, and I was one of my friends,
- 8:11a psychologist, who was talking character with him,
- 8:13and he assumed I was writing this.
- 8:15And I said, "No, no."
- 8:16And he said, "Well, you should give it a go."
- 8:18So I said, "Fine, I'll give it a go."
- 8:20And literally, I came home that night,
- 8:21on that evening, it wasn't that late,
- 8:23maybe at 10 o'clock or something,
- 8:24and opened my laptop, and I started to write.
- 8:28And it was the first fiction I had ever written,
- 8:31apart from school essays.
- 8:34And the strange thing about it was,
- 8:35I mean straight away it was straight into imposter syndrome.
- 8:39What are you doing?
- 8:40You're crazy.
- 8:41You can't write.
- 8:42You've never written.
- 8:43Who do you think you are?
- 8:45The, you know, all that, you know, loud and clear megaphone in my head.
- 8:49And how I got past it was I just started writing ghost thoughts down.
- 8:53I just said, you know, you're an idiot.
- 8:56You're never going to do this.
- 8:56This is stupid.
- 8:57And once I sort of got all out of my head and down on the page, so to speak, I was going,
- 9:02Okay, well, what's next?
- 9:05So what am I gonna write about?
- 9:06And then it's gonna, when I have this idea,
- 9:08and then when I finished writing that,
- 9:09I said, okay, well, let's write the first sentence.
- 9:12And once I wrote the first sentence, I was off.
- 9:14And I honestly was amazed.
- 9:17I think if people have never written before,
- 9:20think that they can't,
- 9:22well, I am living proof that you can't,
- 9:24because there's a strange thing that happens.
- 9:26- Oh, there's three of us here, I think.
- 9:28- I was saying. - There's been a convalesion.
- 9:31There is this really strange thing that happens,
- 9:33and I don't know where it comes from,
- 9:35but you may have a picture in your mind
- 9:38of the scene that you're going to write,
- 9:41but as soon as you start to write it,
- 9:44all sorts of other stuff comes in.
- 9:46I don't know where it comes from,
- 9:47it comes in from the ether.
- 9:51- I believe there's a gate that we open up.
- 9:54- Yeah, of course.
- 9:55- I think that we sit down and I start to work,
- 9:58and then somewhere there's a little guy
- 9:59who opens a little, like, the sluice.
- 10:03And all of a sudden I get these thoughts
- 10:04and then they just come in and I'm like,
- 10:06"Oh, wait a minute, I need to go do this."
- 10:08- So, I mean, I wrote away like a mad thing
- 10:10till like two o'clock in the morning or something like that
- 10:12and then went to bed.
- 10:14And then the next morning, when I sobered up,
- 10:17(both laughing)
- 10:20maybe I should go and read this and see.
- 10:22And I read through it and I was expecting, you know,
- 10:25something really awful.
- 10:26And as I read through it, 'cause I'm a big reader,
- 10:27I read a lot and I read very widely.
- 10:30I was reading through it and I was going,
- 10:32you know, I have read worse than this.
- 10:35This is not at all.
- 10:37- That's a good start right there.
- 10:38I've read worse than this.
- 10:39- You know, honestly, that should be a inspirational
- 10:42postage you have on the set.
- 10:43- I was gonna say every show we come up with a new T-shirt.
- 10:46Oh, Doug, that's on new T-shirt.
- 10:48- I've read worse than this.
- 10:50- Yeah, so I wrote a bit more and then I passed it
- 10:54around a few people that would give it to me straight, you know?
- 10:57I gave it to my wife, again, she's a big reader, my wife.
- 11:00I gave her about three chapters and she flicked at the end of the last chapter and went, "Where's
- 11:04the rest of it?"
- 11:04Yeah, well, it comes next.
- 11:07Don't give it to me.
- 11:08I want to read the whole story.
- 11:11And then a few other people said, "No, you keep going."
- 11:14So I finished that book.
- 11:15It was a techno thriller in the style of, at least I thought, in the style of Michael
- 11:20Crichton.
- 11:20And part of the reason I suppose I came to write it was that there was no Michael Crichton
- 11:24books anymore. And there was no books that really were technical thrillers. And it was
- 11:30that period where indie authors really, the whole indie world hadn't really taken off.
- 11:35I mean, it had taken off, but it wasn't. I still got my books, you know, in the book
- 11:39shop. And when I got out to the book shop, the science fiction shelf would get smaller
- 11:43and smaller and smaller. And then horror of horrors, they started putting fantasy into
- 11:49the science fiction shelf.
- 11:50Ah, and that was it.
- 11:52because they didn't know where else to put it.
- 11:54- Yeah.
- 11:55So anyway, that's part of the reason.
- 11:56So when I finished it, I went, what do I do with this?
- 12:01And I looked at kind of the traditional routes.
- 12:03So you can't just go to a publisher.
- 12:05You'd have to get an agent.
- 12:06So we'll look at the agents and then the whole thing's,
- 12:09and then you have to do a pitch letter
- 12:11and then you have to wait for 100 rejection letters.
- 12:14And I was going, well, that's just seems
- 12:16like a complete waste of time to me.
- 12:17But so I'll just put it up on Amazon.
- 12:19And I have a technical background.
- 12:21I know a lot kind of stuff. So I took it up there. But the one thing that really inspired
- 12:28me, I think that changed me as a writer was I think the first time I got a five star review
- 12:35on that book from somebody on the far side of the world that I didn't know who they were.
- 12:39And they said, "Love the book, you know, great book." And I went, "Wow." You know, so for
- 12:44me that was completely unbiased, you know, review of my book.
- 12:48I think one of mine was when I got the first like random email from somebody that was a
- 12:53reader and I was like, what?
- 12:55Somebody asked me, like, I'd seen some reviews and I thought, okay, well, people review,
- 12:58but when somebody was like, I got to take the time to review, to email you.
- 13:01And I was like, oh, I remember getting the email and I was like, holy shit, somebody
- 13:04actually read my book, you know, they tracked you down.
- 13:06They tracked you down.
- 13:06I don't change when you start getting those.
- 13:08You go, whoa, why me?
- 13:10What about my name?
- 13:11I'm not worthy.
- 13:12I'm not worthy.
- 13:14Yeah.
- 13:15And then now like tons of them come in every day.
- 13:18I just ignore them.
- 13:19I'm like, whatever.
- 13:20(laughing)
- 13:21- I try not to, I try and apply to the bubble.
- 13:23- No, I do the same.
- 13:25- And that first book was,
- 13:27am I right in saying about 10 years ago?
- 13:29- That was about 10 years ago, yeah.
- 13:31It was called "Chain Reaction."
- 13:32I rewrote it since.
- 13:34And then I gave me the confidence to write a book
- 13:37called "Colony One Mars," which is sci-fi,
- 13:39which I could really want to write sci-fi,
- 13:41but it kind of had the confidence to write it.
- 13:44Hard sci-fi, specifically sci-fi,
- 13:47that's kind of based on science fact, relatively speaking, near future.
- 13:51You know, so it's not aliens and vast and light or generation starships.
- 13:55It's not space opera in that sense.
- 13:58More like the Martian that sort of style.
- 14:00So I wrote a book called Conley one Mars and that just blew up.
- 14:03That just became massive bestseller.
- 14:05And then I wrote a whole series of books, you know, Conley two, Conley two,
- 14:09so on, I wrote about seven books in that series.
- 14:12And that became huge big bestseller.
- 14:15And that book still is my best selling book to this day.
- 14:19I think I checked yesterday and it's like ranked 4000 in the Amazon store, which if anyone
- 14:25doesn't know, when there's 20 million books on there, 4000 is pretty fricking strong for
- 14:30a 10 year old book.
- 14:31It's got about 10,000 reviews on it now at this stage, and maybe it's 11.
- 14:34I don't have a lost count.
- 14:35It was over 10, yeah, when I looked at it, yeah.
- 14:38So yeah, so that book did really, really well.
- 14:41And then I wrote a space opera set in kind of like the expanse.
- 14:45So, set in the solar system.
- 14:47Very like the expanse, actually.
- 14:49Only better.
- 14:50Only better, of course.
- 14:52Absolutely.
- 14:52Absolutely.
- 14:52So, yeah.
- 14:53Of course.
- 14:54So, that classic, you know, bunch of guys and girls, guys and gals in a spaceship on
- 15:00an adventure to the solar system.
- 15:02Very like Firefly.
- 15:03That's sort of vibe to it.
- 15:04That did really well.
- 15:06Over the 10 years, like how has your writing process evolved now?
- 15:10You're not just going to sit down in the middle of the night and bang out a story at two in
- 15:13the morning, right?
- 15:13So, or what is your process at this point?
- 15:18Well, my process kind of evolved to, I mean, I got an idea that rattles around in my head
- 15:22for a while.
- 15:23I don't take notes.
- 15:23I don't write down ideas as they come to me during the day, right?
- 15:27And I thought I just, I followed kind of Stephen's Kings vibe where the good ideas will stay
- 15:33in your head.
- 15:34So I get an idea and it rattles around.
- 15:36I go, "Well, that's the one I'm going to write."
- 15:38And then I'll think about that for a while and gather bits to it.
- 15:43And then eventually I'll sit down and start writing notes to myself,
- 15:47which they're all over the place.
- 15:48Like a mind map.
- 15:49It's just a mishmash of ideas and bits of things that come together.
- 15:53And then after a while, I'll start to structure that
- 15:57when I think I have the basis of the story.
- 15:59And I'll apply, because I essentially write in a thriller structure.
- 16:03So all my books, even their sci-fi or technical tools, they're all essentially in that thriller
- 16:09structure. You start with a big bang and it's hell for leather through the book. I have very
- 16:16fast-paced work as well. So I'll craft all that into a basic plus, usually chapter by chapter,
- 16:23a couple of lines per chapter. And then I start writing. I get to about chapter three and then
- 16:28And then I changed my mind.
- 16:31[laughter]
- 16:32I go, "Oh, I have a better idea."
- 16:36I also like how your good ideas stay in your head and that explains a whole lot about
- 16:41why my head feels like it rattles around empty.
- 16:44So that's it.
- 16:47Well, there are things you keep coming back to, you know?
- 16:49And then generally speaking, when I get to, I mean, I type and I'm very slow, and I think
- 16:54a lot about what I'm writing and as I'm writing, but as you're writing and you get to about
- 16:57halfway through the book. Now you've lived it for a month or two and you know the characters
- 17:02and as you're going through the world you're gathering all sorts of other ideas that come
- 17:06into you and start applying them to the book. Then by then I'm re-organising the entire
- 17:14second half plot or even just writing notes back to myself about how to change it. But
- 17:18I write kind of then until I get the first draft finished and it's rough. It's really
- 17:22rough my first drafts, but I have my story and I know my character's motivations. If
- 17:28I'm really lucky, I might even have a theme to run through the book.
- 17:33Fancy.
- 17:35Yeah, yeah, fancy. I'll go down.
- 17:36Got a theme.
- 17:38Well, themes are really good if you can nail them. I wrote Shadow of Elysium, the one
- 17:44I wrote last year, which was the seventh book in that Colony Morris series. So I am, he's
- 17:51gone out to my fans. But again, I mean, I got down to the team level with that. And once
- 17:56I had a team, you know, it's easy then to try and imbue each of the characters with
- 18:00that team. So there's a kind of commonality. So the whole thing kind of comes, everybody
- 18:05has the same dilemma in a sense. So the whole book essentially. So I don't know if people
- 18:14realized that in the book. Then for my second draft, it's really when I get into the actual
- 18:18crafting the kind of structure.
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- 18:42Your process is far more like most traditional published
- 18:46writers do more than the most indies that we talk to. You plan it all out, you kind of run
- 18:54through it, plan it all out, and then you go back and then do another run, run through the whole
- 18:57thing. I mean, there's a lot of writers that work that way, but it does tend to be, the indies tend
- 19:01to be, the first draft is a pretty, you know, is 90% of what it's going to be.
- 19:07Yeah, I think, and part of the reason I think they do that is because Indie tends to reward very
- 19:13fast-paced book release. So the more you can get out there, the better. Because I rely
- 19:20so much on Facebook and advertising that, I write one book a year. That's what I do.
- 19:25So I can spend a bit of time thinking about it. But that's just the way I write. I've
- 19:32written 20 books now. So I've tried all sorts of different ways of doing it. And I've tried
- 19:36that real fast, get it all the detail down. But the same thing happens to me once I get
- 19:41to halfway through the book, I've changed my mind a bit.
- 19:45Yeah. I got a better idea about this. Yeah. One of the things that helps me is I type so slowly.
- 19:51There's plenty of time to think about what I'm writing while I'm typing. I tend to retype the
- 19:57same line and then the same paragraph and then I sort of self edit as I go. So I write quite
- 20:03relatively slowly, but it tends to be a more filled out.
- 20:06By the time Nick finishes the paragraph, he's rechanged the entire story three times.
- 20:11So he's ready.
- 20:12You know yourself when you go to conferences and you hear all these things and you come
- 20:16back and you've got your full of ideas.
- 20:17Well, I came back from the SBS conference with Tom Donnelly and Tony Lee in my ear about
- 20:24doing dictations that I would change me.
- 20:26And I said, "Okay, fine.
- 20:28I'm going to do this."
- 20:28And it was a book I was going to write and I kind of stopped it.
- 20:31And I said, "Okay, I'm going to go back to that book.
- 20:33I'm going to finish it.
- 20:33I'm going to dictate it."
- 20:35But the same thing, yeah, I was really, the words were just pouring out of me and I got
- 20:41about halfway and I went, "Whoa, I got to stop."
- 20:46It's way too fast.
- 20:49I have to slow down here and really think about it.
- 20:51So it forced me to go back and really work out the plot in absolute detail as much as
- 20:55I possibly could.
- 20:56And it was a complicated book plot-wise.
- 21:00And I came to that middle chapter and I had to stop the dictation and just go back to
- 21:04typing it because it's the only way I could tease this particular chapter out because
- 21:08there was too much going on. It was a midpoint. A midpoint in the thriller is always the point
- 21:13where the protagonist stops running and starts taking action. And that's usually because new
- 21:20information has come to light. They know a thing or two that they didn't know. It doesn't necessarily
- 21:24mean it's right, but now they're often anew. So that's that middle chapter. And I needed to really
- 21:29try and tease that because the book flips on that chapter. But I could only do it by
- 21:34sitting down typing it. And then eventually I got it structured. But again, it's first
- 21:39draft's going to be rough. The second draft, I'll tidy all that up. And then the third
- 21:44draft is usually when I get into the crafting of sentences. So I'll really polish the sentences
- 21:50and get into the rhythm of the story, get into the rhythm of the read. Because I always
- 21:54think that reading, if you can get the rhythm to the words, then it makes that reading process
- 22:00so much easier and the reader can run through the book. So that's kind of how I write.
- 22:06Got you. Cool. Hey, so you touched on that you've built your business a lot around using
- 22:13Meta Facebook ads. And that was the talk that you gave at SPS London, which was really
- 22:20brilliant. There were several things that I really liked about it. One was you did an
- 22:24example, you built a campaign on the screen, on your computer live.
- 22:29That was very helpful.
- 22:30And so it showed the dashboard as you see it and went through, which was really, really
- 22:34good and is available, I believe, those replays you can buy from SPS and get to see it if
- 22:40you want to see this whole thing.
- 22:42And the other thing was you said, "This is some stuff I've done and it's done some work
- 22:47for me."
- 22:47It works for me.
- 22:48It works for me.
- 22:49Yeah.
- 22:50My mileage may vary, right?
- 22:52This is this is kind of what has worked for me, which I thought was was really really good
- 22:57And it was very actionable
- 22:59So we'll hit you up here and get you to talk about a little bit of those major points that you brought up in the
- 23:05Talk and the first one was you were very honest in the fact that you said my Facebook ads were doing
- 23:10Superbly well, and then they brought out andromeda and then my ad started really sucking and I think you told us that was about the time
- 23:17James asked you would you talk at SPS London?
- 23:19- Oh, shit.
- 23:21Now I've got to fix this before I give a year old talk.
- 23:24So talk about the Andromeda change
- 23:26and what that meant to us as authors trying to advertise.
- 23:30- So if you flip your brain and put yourself
- 23:33in the head of Metta, okay, of Facebook.
- 23:36- Good luck with that.
- 23:37- Yeah, good luck with that.
- 23:39But their problem, and this is partly a problem of AI.
- 23:42I mean, they had the same problem of AI slot, I suppose.
- 23:45So they have millions and millions of creative ads
- 23:48been created because of the proliferation of AI. You can now generate marketing copy
- 23:54content. You can generate images. You can generate videos. You can generate fake influencers.
- 23:59You can generate so much of this stuff. So all this stuff is piling into Facebook. How
- 24:03do they sift through all of that and pick out what needs to be sent, what should be
- 24:08sent to a buyer, a potential buyer, a customer or user? Okay. So they invested heavily in
- 24:15AI to solve the problem of all this other AI that's coming through.
- 24:18So you have to also remember that Facebook is a platform.
- 24:21It's a neat commerce platform.
- 24:22It's a neat commerce marketing platform.
- 24:25Okay.
- 24:25So, so us, indie authors, even traditional authors, we're a very small little tiny sector
- 24:31in that.
- 24:33So Facebook ads and Instagram ads.
- 24:35And it's never really been built for, we've utilized it for selling our books, but it's
- 24:39not really built for selling items like that.
- 24:42Yeah.
- 24:43Yeah, we have products, our products are books, but the Facebook platform itself is built for
- 24:49e-commerce, selling all sorts of products and services and whatnot. So what Facebook are really
- 24:56trying to do then is they're trying to ensure that what they send to their user is giving them a
- 25:01good experience. So they're giving them the right ad at the right time in the right order.
- 25:08And they built their AI platform to sit through these billions of new creatives that are being
- 25:13shoved in there, whatever. So that essentially is what Andromeda is trying to deal with.
- 25:22And the second thing they're doing is they are taking the approach that it's not simply one
- 25:28ad that we're serving to a customer. We met a, we'll try and bring that customer down a funnel.
- 25:37Okay, so the classic sales funnel. So most of us don't buy something at first contact with it,
- 25:44unless it's really low cost, low value. But really, really shiny sometimes. Really shiny.
- 25:53Which is a very different concept for the female audience than the general male audience.
- 25:58What we consider shiny. It's a spur of shoes.
- 26:02Yeah, so, but even still, you know, most people, you won't, you have to be brought down this funnel.
- 26:09So, what Facebook are trying to do is create a platform, and again, this is coming back to Andromeda,
- 26:13they're creating a platform that brings customers down a sales funnel. Okay, they're cold, you're
- 26:22giving them some information about it and go, "Oh, yeah, that's, I might be interested in that,"
- 26:26seeing how they react and then giving them another type of ad. That's maybe a bit more formative,
- 26:31giving them more information about the product, you go, "Yeah, okay, I'm a couple you really
- 26:35interested in that." And then giving them another ad that says, "Buy now," type stuff.
- 26:40And you're bringing those to people. So this is also a kind of a way we have to think about it
- 26:45as writers now. So when we're creating, when we used to create our Facebook ads, once you kind of
- 26:51got your targeting and your kind of image and maybe a quote, best book I've ever read, type stuff,
- 26:59You could test a whole bunch of those out. One would probably do well. You'd kill the worst
- 27:03ones and keep the good ones, good one, throw money on it and that worked really well.
- 27:07And I think that made us a bit lazy because we really hadn't thought about why
- 27:14people respond to this and don't respond to the others. So now the key thing with Facebook is
- 27:20really you have to think about the actual ad, what it is you're selling to, who you're selling to,
- 27:25Who's your customer what message you want to give your customer that's going to speak to them and what your offer is what are you offering the three things and it be for selling anything it's who is going to what is saying.
- 27:35What the offer is okay so we have to approach it from that that perspective we have to take more professional sales and marketing attitude to face book ads so what does i mean in reality.
- 27:49So what it means in reality is that the creative when i say creative i'm talking about the art i mean it could be the copy could be video could be immature that's just the creative the creative aspect is is king is absolutely king now.
- 28:03You can have a real if you have a really good creative.
- 28:06Then it will compensate for a lot of bad targeting if you're targeting the wrong audience or you haven't switched this on or switch that off on facebook okay the creative is king absolutely.
- 28:17And it's not just the creative, it's giving Facebook enough creative options that it can bring people down a sales funnel.
- 28:26So what does that look like in practice? What it looks like a practice is the one thing I gave at that talk was I said I had a,
- 28:36I wrote a quick and dirty blog prompt to go and read my good reads reviews from my series.
- 28:47Okay.
- 28:48That was a great tip, by the way.
- 28:50Let me just add that Claude can't scrape Amazon or can't scrape it properly, but he
- 28:57can scrape through Goodreads.
- 29:00He can read Goodreads.
- 29:01Yeah.
- 29:02What do you mean you could take?
- 29:03You could take, I mean, you could later, you just go onto your Amazon and just cut
- 29:08and paste all the reviews, a whole bunch of them into a text document and use that if
- 29:14you want.
- 29:16But the reason being is that most of the things that people like about your books and why
- 29:21they buy them will be reiterated somewhere in your four and five-star reviews.
- 29:27Now, generally, four and five, three can be useful, and ones are, ones and twos are probably
- 29:32useless.
- 29:33There's no real information to be gained out of a one and two, but a three, actually, if
- 29:37you're just from a writing point of view, you're going to decide it can point out some
- 29:42criticisms.
- 29:43But the ones you're interested in are four and fives, and they'll tell you what they
- 29:45like about your book, books, what you are like as an author. This guy, Jail down
- 29:50Kilby is like, you know, Michael Crichton, I wish, but you know, they will tell you.
- 29:57You're alive, you got one up on him. If they say it online, it must be true.
- 30:01It must be true. I mean, I've been careful to say things like, you know, this book is better than
- 30:04The Martian, but I would never use that because that's, once I use it, then it's my opinion.
- 30:11If they have none, if they have none online, that's fine.
- 30:15So, and they'll also tell you what your book is like.
- 30:17So this book is like the Martian.
- 30:20This book is like the expanse.
- 30:21This book is like whatever.
- 30:23So from that, then you can get an idea of what it is you need to be putting into your ads.
- 30:28Okay. So I kind of break down the type of people who are out there buying books.
- 30:34There's kind of hot, warm and cold.
- 30:38Hot readers are really your super fans.
- 30:39So a lot of the time when you're doing Facebook, when people do Facebook ads, Facebook kind
- 30:43of has an idea.
- 30:44If you've done a few of them, it has an idea of who your hot readers are, who's going
- 30:48to interact, react to your ad.
- 30:51They'll send it out to your hot readers and you do really well.
- 30:53You just sell loads of books and then a couple of days later it's all gone and it dies.
- 30:57Okay?
- 30:57This is classic.
- 30:58Loads of people see this on Facebook.
- 31:00So what you need to do is you need to think about the cold readers and warm readers and
- 31:04cold readers.
- 31:05a warm reader, I classify as somebody who knows you. They may even have read one of your books
- 31:12or maybe one in a series, but they certainly know of you. You've been hovering around their
- 31:17KDP, their Amazon, also bots. That's a kind of warm reader because they're reading in your genre
- 31:26and they're reading close by what you write. And then cold readers are people who don't know you,
- 31:33but also read in your genre. Like I'm not going to sell a hard sci-fi book to somebody who's into
- 31:41romanticism, you know, or cozy mystery. It's just too hard to sell. Okay, but I will sell to somebody
- 31:46who likes techno thrillers and likes hard sci-fi, likes sci-fi in general, or speculative fiction.
- 31:52That's what I classify those three. So the cold readers would be genre, warm readers would be
- 31:59other authors that are similar to you, authors of books and hot readers that will buy anything.
- 32:03So you don't have to worry about hot readers because they will respond to any ads. The two
- 32:08types of ads you need to focus on are the warm readers and hot readers. You're talking genre
- 32:14and you're talking authors. So classic ad would be if you like Michael Crichton, then you like
- 32:22jailed and killed me okay that'd be kind of classic or you can describe the book you know in terms of
- 32:31it's it's it's the martian meets michael cryton or it's the expands meets something else you know
- 32:38see your and these are classic kind of lines that we used in hollywood when you're making a pitch
- 32:44or you're using a publisher when you're making a pitch for a book so straight away when somebody
- 32:48is on their phone and they're looking through facebook or instagram and they go oh that's an
- 32:52image. And there's a big thing that says, "The Martian Meets Michael Crichton." They go,
- 32:58"Ooh, I could be interested in that." Okay, you've got them. Straight away, you've got them.
- 33:04And then your actual sales copy, your primary text, drags them in a bit more and gets them to
- 33:14click. So, are you doing sales and traffic ads? So, let's talk about campaign level. Then we'll
- 33:18we'll go to AdSet and AdSet to get a little bit more detail.
- 33:22Yeah.
- 33:23Well, since that talk, I mean, I have moved exclusively to sales ads.
- 33:27I don't do, I do traffic ads, but I do them to the European market and their legacy, they've
- 33:34always kind of worked quite well and they still work quite well, so I leave them alone
- 33:37and they don't mess with them.
- 33:39But for US and UK, I've moved exclusively to sales ads.
- 33:44Before you go too far, could you kind of like, what would be the main difference for some
- 33:48who's a dumbass like me, like between a sales and a traffic ad, you know, because some people
- 33:53are like, "Oh, what's really the..."
- 33:56Okay, so a traffic ad is you put your ad up, you click the button by now and it goes straight
- 34:01to Amazon. Okay, go straight to your book sales page on Amazon. Facebook has no information,
- 34:07no feedback from that other than they clicked that button and it went to Amazon. They don't
- 34:12know if you bought, they don't know anything else about you. Okay, so what they will try and do
- 34:17Facebook will try and get you as many people who are going to click that button as possible.
- 34:23That's really what they're after. But you've no way of telling it how many of those bought
- 34:28and which ones that did buy. I want to find more of them. That's the downside of traffic
- 34:34ads. They are cheaper, but that's the downside of them.
- 34:37Sales ads, on the other hand, and I'm not talking about sending people to where you
- 34:43You can buy a book on your website now.
- 34:44I'm just talking about putting a page in between the Facebook ad and the Amazon landing page.
- 34:51That page is on your website.
- 34:53When they click the ad, they land on a page on your website, which reiterates basically
- 34:59what's on your Facebook ad.
- 35:01Then they click it, and then they go to Amazon sales page.
- 35:06When they've clicked on that Facebook or your website page, you're sending an ad to cart
- 35:11message to Facebook. Okay, so you're giving Facebook information of the type of people
- 35:17that clicked the button, okay, to go to your Amazon page. And that's probably half the
- 35:22people that actually landed on the page. Okay, but it's better information for Facebook,
- 35:26because Facebook now has an idea. It says, "Okay, I sent all these people here, and of
- 35:31those people, these 50% are the ones that this client is interested in. I'm going to
- 35:36find them more of those. It's a better class of traffic, better quality traffic if you
- 35:42want to call it that.
- 35:43Right. And it's not a buyer, but it's much closer to a buyer than someone clicking on
- 35:47the ad.
- 35:48Not a buyer, but it's not much closer. I haven't tried it as a purchase. So with Facebook,
- 35:55you can have several types of actions. So this page view is obviously the land on your
- 36:01page. That's a page view. That's really meaningless. And then, of course, we're into e-commerce,
- 36:05So you're into people who add to cart.
- 36:07I mean, these people are interested in buying something
- 36:09that they haven't quite gotten the full nine yards.
- 36:12And then the next will be purchase,
- 36:13which would be an actual purchase.
- 36:15Now, that's fine if you're running an e-commerce site,
- 36:17but we're not, we're sending it to Amazon.
- 36:19It's the best thing we can use.
- 36:21So far, I've tried is add to cart.
- 36:23Okay, so basically saying to Facebook,
- 36:25get me more people that are more likely
- 36:27to click the add to cart button
- 36:28than simply just click on the add.
- 36:30So that's the difference between the two.
- 36:33So what I found is that, again, coming back to this whole update
- 36:37and the way Facebook are going, and I was saying this at the talk,
- 36:41my feeling is the direction of travel with Meta
- 36:45is that they want to create a fully automated marketing machine.
- 36:49You just give them your products, you give them your budget,
- 36:52and they only want to find the people for you.
- 36:54OK?
- 36:55And obviously, to do that well, they
- 36:57need to have a Facebook pixel running so
- 36:59they can get some information about who's buying the product
- 37:02ultimately, okay, once they go through the hole, you know, down the funnel, finally at
- 37:07the other end, they have some information, what type of person is actually buying, and
- 37:10then they go and find you more of those.
- 37:12So I think that's why the sales are beginning to work better, actually much better for me
- 37:19than traffic ads at the moment.
- 37:21The other reason, because I have noticed that as it progresses over the week or two weeks,
- 37:27the cost of sale goes down, meaning that they're finding better people, better people all the
- 37:32time. And the number of sales I'm getting rises from the same ad and the same spend.
- 37:38The other thing I think, and this is just me speculating now why I think it works better
- 37:42in some ways, is that because we are now generating so many different types of images and graphics
- 37:49and messages on our ads, it could be a multitude of stuff we're using and that there's a bit
- 37:53of a churn because you have to keep doing it every couple of weeks and every month.
- 37:56Then invariably, we rarely use our book cover.
- 37:59Okay?
- 38:00Unless you want to look at a few people to have a book cover, that is just amazing.
- 38:05But in general, most people don't use their book covers because it doesn't really work
- 38:07very well.
- 38:08I also think if you use a book cover, you're basically saying, "This is a book," whereas
- 38:13what you're trying to sell is not the book.
- 38:17You're trying to sell the experience of reading the book.
- 38:20Classic sales, okay?
- 38:23You're not buying the car.
- 38:24buying the lifestyle.
- 38:27Right, but you're filtering, when you do your audience, you're filtering it by like
- 38:31Kindle and Kindle Store and stuff.
- 38:33So it's already somewhat guided there, right?
- 38:37Yeah, yeah.
- 38:38I've stopped that as well.
- 38:40I start that to test it out.
- 38:41Okay, what I want to try and do is get rid of all the, get control of everything so
- 38:45I can see where it's going wrong.
- 38:47So I'm going to narrow it down by location, so it's just the US or UK.
- 38:51And then I narrow it down by interest.
- 38:52So I'd say I'm just interested in people who are interested in science fiction movies,
- 38:58magazines, whatever.
- 39:00And also people who are interested in Amazon Kindle and Kindle Store.
- 39:04So you've narrowed it down to people who are interested in science fiction or interested
- 39:07in reading.
- 39:07That's a pretty good audience.
- 39:10So now, and then I'm narrowing it down by placement, although that's kind of changing
- 39:14that at the moment.
- 39:15So when I have that out of the way, then I'm focusing on the ad.
- 39:17I'm trying to find the best ad that's going to engage.
- 39:20And if it's not working, I know it's more likely to be my ad than it is to be the audience,
- 39:27the placement.
- 39:28So that's why I was doing that.
- 39:29And then once I kind of got to grips with understanding the ad structure and what sort
- 39:34of messages I was sending out, what sort of readers I was trying to target, then I started
- 39:40going back to full open just everybody in the US, everybody in the UK.
- 39:45Really?
- 39:46Just that wide and just sending it out to everyone?
- 39:48Why I was suggesting that at the SPS conference is just for people to just kind of close everything
- 39:54down, you know, get rid of the things that are the problem and then concentrate on your
- 39:59ads and find out where the issues are.
- 40:01Once you get your ad right, then great happy days.
- 40:03You can then open it up to the world type of thing.
- 40:05But if you do it the other way around, then you're going, "Is it my targeting?
- 40:09Is it placement?
- 40:10Is it, you know, you don't really know.
- 40:11Is it the ad?
- 40:12You don't really know."
- 40:13Process of elimination.
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- 40:43What's the metric you're really using to tell whether an ad is working?
- 40:48Because attribution links have really...
- 40:50Because you can use attribution links both when you're talking about a landing page,
- 40:54you're sending the pixel back from the click of the button out of the landing page, but
- 40:57then you've got an attribution link that then if you're on Amazon and you're selling to
- 41:01Amazon, if you're selling to Apple, then this is a different ballgame.
- 41:04But if you're going to Amazon, you've got an attribution link.
- 41:06If you're doing a traffic egg, you've got an attribution link.
- 41:08But the attribution links have been...
- 41:11There's all kinds of problems, right?
- 41:13In the word either word you're looking for is is they don't work for shit
- 41:16So that's that's a kind way of putting it
- 41:18Well a big problem is right if they're doing it on their phone like an iPhone will not send them to the Amazon app
- 41:25It did diverts them to the website and blows up, but it doesn't use the pixel
- 41:28So you're getting a lot of bogus information. So so what's your metric that you're really going by much abuse links?
- 41:39So we've established
- 41:41They don't work with a dam
- 41:43But Jerry's using them. Okay. Talk to me. How do how how are you using it? You're using it as a point of reference
- 41:50Well, well, you're not wrong. They are shit. Okay, but so so people don't know what an attribution link is an attribution link is
- 41:56Is it you can use it on Amazon so you you can create a link?
- 42:01That'll track people coming on to your Amazon sales page. Okay, and it'll also track whether they buy
- 42:07Make a purchase and it'll also track if they buy page reads Kindle page reads. Okay, so it's it's a it's a metric
- 42:15You can use so X number of people land on your page from whatever you add you've clicked they've clicked
- 42:21X number of people buy a book X X number page reads of a card, okay
- 42:25Then you can cross reference that with how much I spent so I do it on the seven-day rolling
- 42:29So I look at seven days how much have I spent on this ad on?
- 42:37Facebook
- 42:37Okay, remember not selling one book. I'm getting you into the series. This doesn't work for
- 42:43somebody who's selling one book. This is only works for people who are selling a series,
- 42:47okay? Because you get them into first book and then you have a whole lot of books for
- 42:50them to buy and the margin of that is much higher. So it's $20, $30 depending on size
- 42:55of the book and so on. So I'm looking over seven day and I say, how much have I spent
- 42:59on this ad over those seven days? Okay. And then I look at my Facebook, my attribution
- 43:05links which haven't really fully caught up because it takes two, three days before they
- 43:09cut up.
- 43:10But I get a general idea.
- 43:11Let's say how many book ones has that attribution shown for the last seven days?
- 43:18Okay, let's say it's 20.
- 43:20Just divide one by the other and that gives me a cost of sale for book one, okay, which
- 43:26I know because attribution links are shit that it's under reporting.
- 43:31So I'll double that because we've probably sold 40 books.
- 43:35Okay, because after a while you get a feel for how, but the general consensus that I've
- 43:40talked with all the authors, it's about 100 reports by about 50%.
- 43:45Okay, so if it says 10, it's probably 20.
- 43:48If it says 100, it's probably 200.
- 43:50And that gives me a cost of sale.
- 43:52And I say, well, for every book one that I've sold in the last seven days, it has cost me $5.
- 43:58Okay, and I know I have calculated how much a series is worth to me.
- 44:03Okay, I know how much getting somebody into that series is worse.
- 44:06And let's say it's worth $20 or $25.
- 44:08I've made $20 in the fullness of time.
- 44:13I haven't made it today, probably not tomorrow, but over a couple of weeks,
- 44:17a couple of months, I will make that $20.
- 44:19I know because I've looked back at all my stats and I can see that, you know,
- 44:24or a period if I take a 30 day period.
- 44:27So you should do this, take a 30 day period of a series and take all the income
- 44:31for the series, take the eBooks, the print books, the page reads. Don't worry about audio,
- 44:39but just look at the income from that series over that 30-day period. And then divide that
- 44:43income by the number of book ones, eBook ones that have been sold. Okay? And you'll get a
- 44:49figure. Okay? I'll say $20. See, you can roughly say with reasonable accuracy that a sale of
- 44:57book one e-book is worth $20 to you. Okay, if you think about it, okay? Now, people will
- 45:03say, "Well, you know what about this one? Don't worry about them. Don't overthink this."
- 45:08Okay? Simple. If you go back...
- 45:11Don't worry. I never overthink anything, so don't worry.
- 45:14Don't have to think it.
- 45:15Yeah.
- 45:16Just like, if you go back to the previous 30 days and do the same calculation, you'll
- 45:19find it's remarkably similar. It's a very accurate figure. Okay? Even if you go to a
- 45:2330 days where it's half the income, it'll still be half the number of bookworms in your
- 45:27soul.
- 45:27So roughly speaking, you're just saying, "Okay, I know if I sell a bookworm, it's worth $20
- 45:31to me."
- 45:32That's how I can calculate using attribution links.
- 45:35So you basically say, "How much have I spent on ads this week?
- 45:38How many bookworms has the attribution told me I've sold?
- 45:43Divide one by the other, you get a sales figure.
- 45:45It's costing me $5, $6, $10, whatever it is."
- 45:49I know in my head that series is worth $20, $25, $30 to me.
- 45:54Okay, so I know I'm gonna make that money.
- 45:55I'm not gonna make it today or tomorrow or the next day.
- 45:59I'll make it over the next couple of weeks
- 46:00or a couple of months and I won't get paid
- 46:01for another 60, 90 days.
- 46:03Okay, so it's a cash flow problem you're dealing with.
- 46:07So you're saying to yourself,
- 46:08"Okay, I'm gonna spend all this money
- 46:09in Facebook ads now, but I know I'll get that money back
- 46:13further down the line."
- 46:15- Okay, cool.
- 46:16So audience-wise we touched on it.
- 46:18when you're starting off and trying to figure out your creative and what creative is really
- 46:21working, then gate it as best you can. They've taken away so many of the targets now, but
- 46:28there are still broader ones that you can use.
- 46:32You can try open. Just remember that if you do.
- 46:36Put your guess in, right?
- 46:38Yeah. I think the thing with Facebook arts that people need to take away is that the
- 46:44creative is king now. Okay? The top number one thing you should be concerning yourself
- 46:49with is how am I going to craft the best possible ad?
- 46:53That's your picture, your texture, everything that's in there.
- 46:56Yeah. That is the absolute king. Everything else really, whether it's open, whether you're
- 47:02nailing it down by interest groups, doesn't matter a whole lot. The reason why I was
- 47:07suggesting that in the first place was to give you some breathing rooms so you could
- 47:10find the right kind of creative. Okay. So nail your target down to some people that,
- 47:15"Yeah, kind of now I really like this sort of stuff." Okay. And it gives you some breathing
- 47:21room to try and find the best creative that's going to work for you.
- 47:25All right. Let's talk about the dreaded Advantage Plus.
- 47:28Yeah.
- 47:29Oh boy. So if you haven't been on the Facebook dashboard lately or you're new to it, prepare
- 47:39yourself, maybe a stiff drink alongside you when you go in there.
- 47:42It changes almost daily and they are pushing the Advantage Plus stuff so heavily they really
- 47:51hide the ways of getting around it.
- 47:53But currently you still can avoid almost all of it, can you not?
- 47:58Yeah, no you can.
- 47:59You can.
- 48:00You can avoid almost all of it if you click the right buttons and you can avoid almost
- 48:05all of it if you know what it is you're trying to find.
- 48:08The problem with new people who are coming into Facebook now is they don't know what
- 48:10they're trying to find unless they do a course or somebody shows.
- 48:14But what's happening is this is Facebook, this is Matter pushing you towards this fully
- 48:20automated marketing machine.
- 48:22Don't worry about the audience, we'll find it for you.
- 48:24Don't worry about placement, we'll do that for you.
- 48:26Don't worry about this, we'll do all that.
- 48:27Don't worry about creatives, we'll create the creatives for you.
- 48:31We'll generate all the images and text copy and movies.
- 48:34Yeah, yeah.
- 48:36Oh, there's some doozies they come up with.
- 48:38My lovely protagonist, female 30-year-old protagonist, looked like a 50-year-old wrestler,
- 48:46a male, in one of them they came up with.
- 48:49It was amazing.
- 48:51Well, you should have tried.
- 48:52You should have tried that one to see if it worked.
- 48:56It probably would have been like, "Well, that thing took off."
- 48:59And I'm like, "Hey."
- 49:01Yeah.
- 49:02- Go on, Tim and he read throughs the book too.
- 49:05- Yeah, well you think it's a good image.
- 49:07I mean, Tom Donnelly sent me images going,
- 49:09"Why doesn't this work?
- 49:10"You're not going to get a great image."
- 49:11But you have to be agnostic about these things.
- 49:15So what is critically important for people to understand,
- 49:18and I think this is a good place to start,
- 49:21is to know who it is you're trying to sell to.
- 49:23So for me, for example,
- 49:24one of my target demographics would be kind of older male
- 49:29who have read a lot of classic sci-fi, you know,
- 49:32Arthur C. Clarke and that sort of stuff.
- 49:35So I can say, I'm going on target them.
- 49:37What is the message I'm going to craft
- 49:39that's going to reach them?
- 49:40So, you know, what problem does my book solve for them?
- 49:43The problem my book solves for them
- 49:45is that there is no more Arthur C. Clarke.
- 49:47(laughing)
- 49:48Same as the Michael Criken problem.
- 49:51And you know, if you love Arthur C. Clarke
- 49:53or if you like such and such, such and such,
- 49:56then you love Geraldette Killie.
- 49:58Okay, so I'm crafting a message that's targeting to them.
- 50:01And then I'm bringing them,
- 50:02I want to get back to the sales,
- 50:03because I think it's very important.
- 50:06Why I think sales ads work better than traffic ads.
- 50:10And why I think people, it is the direction of travel.
- 50:13And why I think people should be kind of trying,
- 50:16trying it out at least.
- 50:17So I've created my image, I've crafted my message,
- 50:20I've targeted my person, I think it's going to be interested
- 50:24in this with the message.
- 50:25They click on that, well, a traffic guide, they could click on that and they land on
- 50:29my Amazon sales page.
- 50:31But the image is different.
- 50:33Okay?
- 50:33I'm using one image on the ad and then suddenly there's my book cover and they're going, "What
- 50:37is this?
- 50:37Is this the same thing?"
- 50:39And the text is obviously different because I have my blurb.
- 50:41I can't change my blurb on my book every 10 minutes.
- 50:45I have to stick with one blurb, but the text on the ad is completely different.
- 50:49Again, you're selling what it's like to read this book, not the actual book.
- 50:55not selling them the plot of the book, that's selling features. You don't sell features,
- 50:59you sell the benefits. So there's a bit of a mismatch between what's on the ad and what's
- 51:06on your Amazon sales page with the traffic ad. So I think why sales ads, this intermediate
- 51:12page between Facebook and Amazon works well is because you can make that bridge. You can
- 51:20have exactly the same text you have on, so they click on the ad, they see a certain text,
- 51:24to go to your landing page.
- 51:25That is exactly the same text, probably in the same font
- 51:29and everything else to make sure they make that connection.
- 51:33Then you can introduce the book cover.
- 51:34Okay, so they're going, yeah, this is the same thing.
- 51:37And then they click on it, go to your Amazon page
- 51:39and the book covers match,
- 51:41even though the text doesn't match.
- 51:43So I think it's a better transition visually for people.
- 51:48And the third thing I think there's a kind of side benefit
- 51:50to it as well is that it helps Amazon's algorithm.
- 51:54So if you're sending very qualified traffic
- 51:56to your Amazon sales page, okay, Amazon is going,
- 52:00"Hey, this guy looks great,
- 52:02"because one in 10 people buy a book."
- 52:04And then it's much better,
- 52:05these other people over here are one in 100,
- 52:07one in 200 buy a book, okay?
- 52:10So a bit of a side benefit from doing that as well.
- 52:13So, and the third thing is that I think
- 52:18the whole Facebook, see it's not just,
- 52:21people talk about Facebook pixels,
- 52:22not just Facebook, Pixel, there's a Facebook
- 52:25conversions application interface,
- 52:27which sends an awful lot of data,
- 52:28not just clicks and stuff back to Facebook.
- 52:31It overcomes a lot of the kind of iOS 14 update
- 52:35when it killed a lot of pixel data and stuff like that.
- 52:38So there's an awful lot of information that goes back
- 52:40to Facebook about the type of people
- 52:41that are clicking on your ad and what they're doing.
- 52:43Okay, particularly if you want to get people
- 52:45who are going to click that add to cart button.
- 52:46So I think it does really, really help.
- 52:48And as the more of that you do,
- 52:49the more Facebook has a better idea
- 52:51what it is, who it is you're trying to target and who you're trying to sell to.
- 52:54One of the things that, and I've been aware of this, very aware of this for a few years
- 53:01now, and you're reiterating it strongly again, is what is your book?
- 53:07And one of the things we should always be asking ourselves, and this is one of the things
- 53:11we preach when we talk to new authors just getting started that have this great idea
- 53:16about this book and over here and they've go, "Okay, describe it by telling me what
- 53:20it's like. And do that to yourself. And as authors, we go into this long-winded explanation
- 53:26of, "Well, it's sort of got a bit of this and it's a bit of that and everything." Try
- 53:30and put that in ad copy. You can't. So the most successful ads, Doug's got a great one.
- 53:36Here's his Reacher on a Boat. That's his Chase Gordon series. It's Jack Reacher on a Boat.
- 53:40What more do you need to know? It's a beefy guy, big stud guy that's going to beat the
- 53:44shit out of loads of people and he's on a boat. So it says everything. I think it's absolutely
- 53:49So he's off to a great start.
- 53:50One of my biggest problems that I have is that of my three series, I've only got one
- 53:55that I can go, "It's like this."
- 53:57The other two, they're not like other things and it's completely my fault.
- 54:02Yeah, but did you take that prompt I did at the London Conference and run it through
- 54:07you, the reviews for that series?
- 54:10And there's got to be something in there.
- 54:12I can run you through it off, actually.
- 54:14the people, but I did a remarkable job of creating two series that are slightly unlike
- 54:20anything. And the comps they are like are just wrong enough where it's hard to use.
- 54:28You know, you could say they're on a, you know, they're both on a Caribbean island,
- 54:31right? So you could use Death in Paradise, which is, you know, very big in the UK. Well,
- 54:36they change them every five minutes. So the
- 54:39(laughing)
- 54:41- The whole new show.
- 54:41- Got a death in paradise for nothing.
- 54:43- Exactly.
- 54:44(laughing)
- 54:45- Who's death was that?
- 54:46(laughing)
- 54:47- Wait, wait, they just changed the cast again
- 54:50right now while we're doing it.
- 54:51- Right, exactly.
- 54:52So it places a police procedural type thing
- 54:55in a Caribbean island, which is great.
- 54:57That's one of mine certainly.
- 54:59But it's completely the wrong vibe.
- 55:00They're not comedic like that at all.
- 55:03So it's tricky.
- 55:04It's really, really tricky.
- 55:06But what I'm saying to you is, and reiterating your point.
- 55:10- Well, it's police procedural, then.
- 55:11It's police procedural in the Caribbean.
- 55:14- Well, that's not very exciting to read, is it?
- 55:15It's like across the top of the text of your copy.
- 55:19(laughing)
- 55:21- Police procedural with sun.
- 55:24- With sun, yeah, with a sun tan.
- 55:25- Oh, no, blue blood, yeah, blue blood.
- 55:27- It's police procedural when I had the warm beer.
- 55:30There we go.
- 55:31(laughing)
- 55:31With that warm beer, yeah, good.
- 55:33- In a bikini.
- 55:34- It's a, yeah.
- 55:35Time's not gonna be a kidney.
- 55:37- I'm in, okay.
- 55:38- You're so there.
- 55:39You're a cheap click.
- 55:41So what I'm trying to reiterate, Jerry,
- 55:45is for those of you out there trying to figure out
- 55:48how to do your creative,
- 55:49that's the number one first question to ask yourselves.
- 55:53How do you describe your book in a short enough sentence
- 55:56that you can fit it on the top of a graphic
- 55:58that's gonna go in your Facebook ad?
- 56:00If you can't do that, start from square one.
- 56:03I'm not saying write your whole series over.
- 56:05I got 18 books in one of the series.
- 56:07My horse is bolted, man.
- 56:08I gotta still try and find a way to do it.
- 56:11So, but what you can do is do your Goodreads scrape
- 56:14or look through if you wanna just manually look
- 56:16through your reviews.
- 56:18That's a brilliant system of coming up with.
- 56:20I did all that when I came back from the talk actually
- 56:23and went through it all.
- 56:24And it did give me some--
- 56:25- And then you went, oh no, this is worse than I thought.
- 56:28- Yeah, it pretty much went, well, I'm fucked,
- 56:30But it was a good exercise.
- 56:34- Yeah, yeah, yeah.
- 56:37You should try it again.
- 56:40You know, I mean, you could craft your own prompts,
- 56:43you know, 'cause that's just a quick prompt I put together.
- 56:47But you could craft your own prompt
- 56:48to get some better information
- 56:50to kind of focus in on what it is you're trying to get at.
- 56:53So you're trying to say, look, I want to try and figure out
- 56:57what it is about my book that these readers really like
- 56:59that I could use in a Facebook ad.
- 57:01It could be obviously, you could say that.
- 57:03- Yeah, and other books, movies, TV shows,
- 57:07anything's game, right?
- 57:08- Yeah, and it'll, so 'cause that's what you're interested
- 57:10in finding out, you know, and seeing what it comes back with
- 57:13and that might spark some ideas.
- 57:15- And to reiterate your point once again,
- 57:16is out of my three series, the one set of Facebook ads
- 57:20that are really doing quite well,
- 57:22that I built post your talk is the one
- 57:24where I can really identify that trope, you know,
- 57:27and those are working, so.
- 57:29- So, Jared, can you kind of give us an idea?
- 57:32Like, one of the things that we've talked about before,
- 57:34like the whole idea, well, I guess,
- 57:36what is your ratio as a good start of like,
- 57:39failed ads to successful ads?
- 57:41Like, how often do you have to go,
- 57:42well, this ad's not working and we cut it off and--
- 57:44- It's hard to say.
- 57:45I can usually tell within a day or two that it's not working.
- 57:50Like, I've done so many, I kind of look at it and go,
- 57:52well, that's not what I expect to happen
- 57:54and I just kill it and start again.
- 57:56Once I kill an ad, I try and figure out what it is about it that didn't work.
- 58:03Usually, I can kind of identify, well, maybe it's my messaging that's not working.
- 58:10That's nearly always the reason my ad doesn't work.
- 58:13It's not the right messaging.
- 58:16It's not speaking to a specific demographic with the right message.
- 58:21So I start a whole new kind of idea, a message say, "Well, I'm not going to target books.
- 58:26Maybe I'll target authors."
- 58:28I'll change it around a bit and see if I can find something.
- 58:31But usually, one or two, I'm pretty much get it there.
- 58:36You'll find that an ad will, generally speaking, depending on the budget, you need to understand
- 58:41how meta works once you put an ad live, depending on your budget.
- 58:45So it goes, "Right, our friend here is sending out a new ad."
- 58:50I know pretty much the type of people are going to be interested in buying his books,
- 58:53because you've done lots of stuff before.
- 58:54I'm going to send this to them.
- 58:56And you usually get a bit of a bump.
- 58:57Your click price is low, and then a couple of days later it just dies, because it now
- 59:02has no more people or that group of people has spent, it's burnt out.
- 59:07Yeah, it sent it to the low hanging fruit, right?
- 59:10And it's gone through that.
- 59:12Yeah.
- 59:12So, a good ad is one that you can scale.
- 59:16That's the definition of a good ad.
- 59:18A good ad is one that you can spend $100, $200, $300 a day on.
- 59:22Okay, and it still makes a return for you.
- 59:24They're hard to find.
- 59:26- Yep.
- 59:28- But it doesn't necessarily mean
- 59:29that you can't get a half decent ad,
- 59:31and you can spend $20 or $30 a day on it over a year,
- 59:35and it will keep returning.
- 59:37Okay, but a really good ad is one that you can scale.
- 59:39And the reason being is because once you up the budget,
- 59:42Facebook has to go and find other people.
- 59:44They're not your hot readers.
- 59:45Now you're into the warm readers.
- 59:47They might have heard of you.
- 59:48Okay.
- 59:49And then if you increase the budget again, they go, well, we've run out of one readers.
- 59:51Now we have to go cold readers.
- 59:53These people have never heard of you, but reading your genre.
- 59:55Okay.
- 59:56So that's why you need to kind of think about the message for those readers in your ad.
- 1:00:01Okay.
- 1:00:01Because if you can get that right, then you can scale your ad.
- 1:00:04You can spend $100, $200 a day on it until still return.
- 1:00:09Okay.
- 1:00:09Because it's going to a much broader audience.
- 1:00:13Someone once described it to me as like dropping the pebble in the center of a still pond.
- 1:00:18It's the first ring that goes out as you're low hanging fruit, the people that follow your
- 1:00:22Facebook pages, the Metagraphs.
- 1:00:24Then each ring that goes out a little wider is getting colder and colder and colder across
- 1:00:29the pond.
- 1:00:29So at some point, sometimes they break.
- 1:00:32It's also why you could run exactly the same campaign at everything.
- 1:00:37then if you ran exactly the same thing separately, the two will perform differently because the
- 1:00:45rings never go out the same way twice. In theory, they should, if they're both good,
- 1:00:51it should overcome it at some point. But it cannot work that way because they're never
- 1:00:57the same twice because it's never the same group of people that are looking at their
- 1:01:00phones at the same time as the rest. And you start blowing that up over hundreds and thousands
- 1:01:05of people, then it takes a different route, right, and can go a different way.
- 1:01:09I'm not pointing, I mean, it could be the reason sales ads work for me is because maybe
- 1:01:13Facebook is targeting a completely different group of people because it's a sales ad and
- 1:01:17not a traffic ad. I don't know. It's a possibility.
- 1:01:21I had a curiosity. Like, what is it that you consider like a good number of ads? How many
- 1:01:25ads do you have running at any one time? And how often do you go into killing them?
- 1:01:30Okay, well, I need to kind of define the sort campaigns. Okay, so a campaign is I am targeting
- 1:01:39a particular series. Okay, let's say Colin Mara series or the belt series or Moon based
- 1:01:43Delta, whatever it is, to a specific country, US UK, Australia, Canada, usually US UK, that's a
- 1:01:49campaign. And then within that campaign, I have an ad set and that ad set, it says, you know,
- 1:01:56place this ad here and target these people that's the ad set level and the ad itself i have one ad
- 1:02:02but within that i will have about ten six to ten different images and about two or three different
- 1:02:08ad copies primary text and then the headline will have some sort of call to action and facebook can
- 1:02:14then mix and match those and try them out different ways okay that to me is an ad.
- 1:02:19So I'd have maybe so in campaigns I have maybe seven, eight, nine campaigns, but they're all
- 1:02:26targeting one series. One series, one country. One series, one country. Okay. So theoretically,
- 1:02:33I could have at any one time three different campaigns because I have three different series
- 1:02:38to each country. If you want to add in, so that's kind of the structure. Okay. If you want to add
- 1:02:44in more expand your ad or add in more creative into a campaign. So I am targeting this series
- 1:02:50in this country. I have one ad in there that is saying, "If you like the Martian, you like
- 1:02:56Company Mars." But I might add another ad in there that's targeting, say, something like,
- 1:03:04"If you like a blend of Weir and Heinlein." Cacada Steel speaks to that same group, but it's a
- 1:03:10a different message. Okay. And if my budget is on the campaign, then I'll let Facebook
- 1:03:15decide where it wants to spend that money. So you can create, you can create an ad, group
- 1:03:19an ad within each ad set, within one ad set. And that, but each ad has to have a specific
- 1:03:25message. So think of it this way, this ad is targeting this demographic with this message.
- 1:03:29Okay. And then another out below that is targeting maybe the same demographic with a different
- 1:03:34message. Okay. And you can have a third one if you want. And you get all those built,
- 1:03:39They're all kind of stacked inside that one little campaign.
- 1:03:42So, okay.
- 1:03:42Yeah.
- 1:03:43And then Facebook has loads of things to play with to see what way it can bring people in
- 1:03:47and what they're responding to.
- 1:03:49Okay.
- 1:03:49And I don't kill any of it.
- 1:03:51It's not a question of you're trying to find the winning ad because it doesn't work that
- 1:03:54way anymore.
- 1:03:55It's not a winning ad.
- 1:03:56It's a winning campaign where you've got, you're bringing them down the funnel.
- 1:04:01So there's no point in going in and saying, "Hey, it's spending all the money on that
- 1:04:03one.
- 1:04:03It's not spending on this one.
- 1:04:04Let's kill this one."
- 1:04:06you've just killed might be the one that's closing the deal. Okay?
- 1:04:11Right, right, right, right. There's less people there. But, you know,
- 1:04:14it's a vital part of the campaign. I mean, obviously, it's spending money on the
- 1:04:19cold readers trying to get them down the funnel.
- 1:04:21Wow, this has been amazing, Jerry. We've got plenty long here and we could keep you another
- 1:04:27half a day going through this stuff and drilling down into more detail. But thank you so much
- 1:04:31for giving us this much time. And a couple of questions we always wrap up the show with.
- 1:04:36So let's jump back to you, put your author hat back on instead of your marketing hat.
- 1:04:39And what is your author's superpower?
- 1:04:42Oh, that's a good one.
- 1:04:43Running Facebook ads seems to be a fairly strong author superpower.
- 1:04:48Yeah, yeah, yeah, it does.
- 1:04:51But I do, to be fair, I do write a very specific type of book that isn't, you know, it's a
- 1:04:58fairly niche market I write into.
- 1:05:00So hard sci-fi, fast pace, thriller structured, hard sci-fi, that's what I...
- 1:05:06I don't have a lot of competition.
- 1:05:09There isn't like 200, 300 different authors that I'm competing with.
- 1:05:13That's kind of my superpower really is because I'm able to write that sort of book and I
- 1:05:17really enjoy writing that sort of book.
- 1:05:20And I'm also acutely aware that if I'm to stay in the game, I need to be learning how
- 1:05:25to do Facebook ads.
- 1:05:27way I can write one book a year instead of trying to write one book a month or so.
- 1:05:31Yeah, yeah. I want to be you when I grow up. So this has been fantastic. You've brought
- 1:05:39some real insight into the other authors out there trying to run these ads. So last thing
- 1:05:44we got for you, we're going to spin the wheel of questions.
- 1:05:46Our wheel of questions.
- 1:05:49Don't believe.
- 1:05:51You literally have a wheel here.
- 1:05:53You have a wheel.
- 1:05:56And it's spinning.
- 1:05:57And I don't believe the jackpot.
- 1:05:59This isn't cut right through, Jerry.
- 1:06:01That's right, no. This is weird.
- 1:06:03The real deal here.
- 1:06:05So, okay, what is an achievement
- 1:06:08or something maybe on your bucket list,
- 1:06:10something you want to do in the next five years?
- 1:06:13Oh, gosh.
- 1:06:15That's a good one.
- 1:06:16Yeah, can it be anything? Does it have to be right or related?
- 1:06:19Anything. Oh, don't you think?
- 1:06:20Anything. Yeah.
- 1:06:22Yeah, banjo playing, monocycle.
- 1:06:24Yeah, I let you into a secret. I have a hankering to go and buy myself an analog synth.
- 1:06:35Okay. Okay. Are you do you have a music background already?
- 1:06:41Yes. Yeah, back in the day. And I've just I love I've been getting back into listening to a lot
- 1:06:47of kind of ambient and 80s, tangering dream stuff and I'm going and then I'm going maybe maybe I
- 1:06:54(laughing)
- 1:06:55- Or five, or six.
- 1:06:57So yeah, maybe that's my,
- 1:06:59what I want to try to do in the next, you know,
- 1:07:01is get into that.
- 1:07:04- Love it.
- 1:07:05That's brilliant.
- 1:07:06- All right, Nick, what about you, sir?
- 1:07:07- Me?
- 1:07:08- Oh yeah, you get the answer too.
- 1:07:10- My goal is to make fucking Facebook ads work.
- 1:07:13(laughing)
- 1:07:16So we're gonna have--
- 1:07:17- So you can go and buy the sit.
- 1:07:19- So I can go learn to play my freaking ukulele
- 1:07:23that I have that has been sitting there.
- 1:07:25- The ukulele, cool.
- 1:07:25- Oh man, we get you and him on the synth.
- 1:07:29- Ambient ukulele sounds.
- 1:07:31- We've got a cover band for next year in London.
- 1:07:35- If Ambient sounds the cat's dying,
- 1:07:37then yes, I would be Ambient sounds.
- 1:07:39That's my ability.
- 1:07:40Doug, what do you got?
- 1:07:41What's your dream for the five years?
- 1:07:43- It won't be musical
- 1:07:44'cause I could only play the radio.
- 1:07:46So I definitely think, well, getting Facebook guys to work,
- 1:07:50but there's some travel.
- 1:07:52I love traveling, so there's a huge couple places
- 1:07:54I just wanna hit on the other side of the world
- 1:07:56that I need to get to, so.
- 1:07:58I wanna go everywhere, kinda like Johnny Cash,
- 1:08:00I wanna go everywhere, so.
- 1:08:02- All right, Jerry, thank you so much for joining us.
- 1:08:04We really appreciate it.
- 1:08:05- No problem, anytime, guys.
- 1:08:07(upbeat music)
- 1:08:13- Well, that didn't disappoint, did it?
- 1:08:15- Not at all.
- 1:08:16I don't know about you, but I was taking notes
- 1:08:18pretty furious that I was out here.
- 1:08:21- Yeah, I'm gonna really listen to it,
- 1:08:22just to pick up on a couple of things.
- 1:08:25- I have to, just to understand some of it.
- 1:08:27I was like, wow, I was like, yeah,
- 1:08:28it was just trying to keep up with it.
- 1:08:30- And we kept on going afterwards.
- 1:08:31I mean, his bonus stuff for our Patreon subscribers
- 1:08:34was brilliant too.
- 1:08:35So yeah, a little plug for our Patreon there,
- 1:08:37if you wanna check that stuff out,
- 1:08:39it's $3 a month meant for to support the show.
- 1:08:42And you can get some gems over there from every guest.
- 1:08:46- Some good stuff over there, yeah.
- 1:08:47- This was a really good one.
- 1:08:48Big thanks to our friends at Felham
- 1:08:49for all their support, the show, go to trivellum.com/twoauthors to find out more. Everything's in
- 1:08:56the show notes, links to Jerry's stuff. And I'm going to tell you right now, no, Jerry
- 1:09:02Kilby does not run ads for anyone else. Before you inundate him.
- 1:09:08Don't bother him.
- 1:09:09Yeah.
- 1:09:09He does not.
- 1:09:10Before you inundate him with emails. You're welcome to send him an email that says, "Hey,
- 1:09:12enjoyed you on the Two Authors podcast." But please don't go after him running your
- 1:09:18ads for you. So great guy, great guy. All right. Until next time, be cool to each other.
- 1:09:23Fair wins and follow-up scenes.
- 1:09:24You've been listening to the Two Authors podcast with Nicholas Harvey and Douglas Pratt.
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- 1:09:35(upbeat music)