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- 0:56Tina Strachan: Sarah Armstrong is an award-winning and best-selling author of children's fiction, and in this episode of The Book Deal podcast, we have a wonderful chat about the success of her first survival thriller, Run, and we touch on the very big topic right now about boys and literacy, her brand new middle grade survival thriller, The Wave, how to write captivating settings that draw readers in, and how she transitioned from writing for adults to writing for children.
- 1:21Tina Strachan: We chat about how her uber critique group has helped her and how you can find your own group, and she offers us some hot tips from her years as a writing teacher Sarah Armstrong, welcome to the Book Deal Podcast.
- 1:38Sarah Armstrong: Thank you so much, Tina.
- 1:40Tina Strachan: Sarah, I wanted to start our chat today by congratulating you on all the accolades that you've received recently for your middle grade survival thriller, Run.
- 1:52Sarah Armstrong: Thank you.
- 1:53Tina Strachan: It's There's a lot of them, and I'm gonna, I'm gonna go through them.
- 1:56Tina Strachan: You've been shortlisted for the CBCA Book of the Year for Younger Readers.
- 2:00Tina Strachan: You were shortlisted for the Davitt Awards for Children's Crime Fiction.
- 2:04Tina Strachan: Also for the, the REAL, the R-E-A-L Children's Choice Book Awards.
- 2:08Tina Strachan: Longlisted for the ABIA Book of the Year for Children for Younger Children, and it's an Amazon number one bestseller.
- 2:15Tina Strachan: Sarah, tell me, that this is like a dream run.
- 2:18Tina Strachan: Excuse the pun.
- 2:19Tina Strachan: Can you tell me how it feels to have your work recognized so widely like that and why do you think Run has resonated with so many of your readers?
- 2:29Sarah Armstrong: Look it's, it does feel a bit like a dream because, you always hope a book will do well, but they don't always do well.
- 2:36Sarah Armstrong: And even good books, there are many good books out there that don't necessarily get the recognition.
- 2:41Sarah Armstrong: So I try and take both accolades and criticism with a bit of a grain of salt.
- 2:48Sarah Armstrong: I don't I'm not trying to sound ungrateful or anything like that, but if you buy too much into either, it can affect your equilibrium as a writer, I think.
- 2:57Sarah Armstrong: So it feels just wonderful, and I hope that it means more people will read it than might have otherwise,'cause, the word gets out.
- 3:05Sarah Armstrong: But I try not to let it sway me too much, and I try and just stay focused on the w- my relationship with the books and with the writing.
- 3:14Sarah Armstrong: And as to why Run has resonated, I think that it really is just, survival stories are suddenly just a bit popular, and I didn't That wasn't a thing where I thought,"Ooh, I think survival stories are about to be popular." It's just I really love survival stories, and always have, so I wrote one.
- 3:32Sarah Armstrong: So I think it's a little bit of that, and I try and write my, survival thriller stories and make them really pacey, really page-turnery, which I think can help pull in those readers who might be a little bit l- more reluctant to read a kind of book that's quite, just prose, thick text.
- 3:51Sarah Armstrong: Solid.
- 3:52Sarah Armstrong: It might be help pull them in, but also grab those more enthusiastic readers.
- 3:57Sarah Armstrong: And with While it's very sort of pacey and page-turnery, I really try and work in lots of themes and ideas and relationships- And it's a li- feels like a little bit like a, it's a bit of a Trojan horse, it's this thriller, exciting story, but inside I've got lots of, to me, interesting ideas and themes that I enjoy exploring as a writer.
- 4:22Sarah Armstrong: I enjoy both the craft of writing something that's really pacey, and exploring ideas that are meaningful to me.
- 4:29Sarah Armstrong: 'Cause I just always end up exploring versions of the same thing, and I think most writers do that to a degree.
- 4:36Tina Strachan: That's such a good answer.
- 4:37Tina Strachan: For on a few points then, I think what you were saying initially about just not letting it sway.
- 4:43Tina Strachan: It's great, and it's not that you're ungrateful.
- 4:45Tina Strachan: It You completely are grateful for all these accolades, but not you can't let it really change who you are and how you write and how y- your whole craft and how you respond to all these sorts of things.
- 4:55Tina Strachan: So I think that's a really beautiful response.
- 4:57Tina Strachan: Do you think that I'm hesitant to bring it up, but the reading for boys thing.
- 5:03Tina Strachan: Well- It's been quite big as- It's been really big, hasn't it?
- 5:09Tina Strachan: Yeah as many people who are on socials have seen recently.
- 5:11Tina Strachan: But, perhaps at the moment,'cause it It's always been a, a thing and people, searching for or looking for more books for- All audiences regardless of, genders or, and or anything like that.
- 5:23Tina Strachan: But perhaps it's just, yeah, w- it's more that we're just looking for maybe a few more books that are that fast-paced because we know that all kids, regardless of gender, need that straight up, fast, in your face now for a lot of them y-'cause that's what they're attuned to with, gaming and just the world today.
- 5:40Tina Strachan: Do you think it's more like that?
- 5:42Tina Strachan: Do you think that's why, one, one of the reasons maybe why?
- 5:44Tina Strachan: Just-
- 5:45Sarah Armstrong: Yeah, maybe.
- 5:46Sarah Armstrong: The fact is boys are reading less than girls across the board.
- 5:51Sarah Armstrong: That's what the statistics tell us.
- 5:53Sarah Armstrong: But there are a lot of like socioeconomic factors in there too.
- 5:57Sarah Armstrong: So you know the the more access boys have to books and the more books reading is modeled around them and, the better their school library and- More their parents or carers read, all of that has a really big influence.
- 6:12Sarah Armstrong: So it's not just, it's a sort of the statistics are a bit varied, but on across the board, yes, boys do read less and men read less.
- 6:20Sarah Armstrong: And that, I think, is part of the picture that if men are reading less, boys are seeing fewer ma- male role models read.
- 6:25Sarah Armstrong: I'm actually gonna do a dads and kids talk at an event at a school in Brisbane soon, which is really great, and both the, the dad and the child will have read Run- and then I come and talk to them about it.
- 6:37Sarah Armstrong: So I think that's a really good way to put the focus on the dads.
- 6:40Sarah Armstrong: The dads need to be reading in order to get the boys reading.
- 6:43Sarah Armstrong: But I didn't set out and think,"This is a book for boys," because this is the book, kind of book I loved reading as a kid.
- 6:52Sarah Armstrong: I guess I hope that it would grab there are certain readers of, any gender who this might not appeal to, my, my books, because they're into sort of a more gentle, maybe romance, whatever.
- 7:04Sarah Armstrong: They're not into this kind of book, and that's fine.
- 7:06Sarah Armstrong: But I guess I worked in a bookshop in Byron Bay for a while in the kids' section, and I saw, I felt like there was an opening in this kind of more pacey thriller/survival kind of stories for middle grade.
- 7:23Sarah Armstrong: There are definitely some amazing books out there in that space, but I feel like there's room for more.
- 7:28Sarah Armstrong: 'Cause kids can go through a book a week.
- 7:29Sarah Armstrong: It's If they're really reading, so we need a lot of them.
- 7:33Sarah Armstrong: So I, that was part of my thinking.
- 7:35Sarah Armstrong: I thought,"Oh, I can see there's a bit of a space for more books in this area," and also, these are the books I loved reading.
- 7:40Sarah Armstrong: So I wasn't really thinking about gender, and y- I think that it's the gatekeepers- Who often have more ideas about there being boys books and girls books more than the actual boys and girls.
- 7:53Sarah Armstrong: I think boys are actually happy most of the time to read books with girl main characters.
- 8:00Sarah Armstrong: I was talking to someone the other day, a librarian, who said it's the cover that matters.
- 8:03Sarah Armstrong: If the cover feel, feels too sort of- You know, girly in inverted commas, boys might not be drawn to it.
- 8:11Sarah Armstrong: But the story inside, you know- it's either gonna grab them or it's not, and they're not so concerned about girl main characters.
- 8:17Sarah Armstrong: So yeah, I don't think there's boys' books and girls' books.
- 8:21Sarah Armstrong: But I do think we need to make an effort to get kids across the board into reading more, and that's a, it's a really complex and nuanced question.
- 8:29Sarah Armstrong: What are the solutions to that?
- 8:31Sarah Armstrong: But definitely boys are lagging behind and, it's where I think the male role models, that's one thing they can do, is really, step up and read and talk about what they're reading and spend time reading with their kids.
- 8:45Sarah Armstrong: And not as necessarily reading to them, although that's good, too.
- 8:48Sarah Armstrong: But reading at the same time and then talking about it.
- 8:51Sarah Armstrong: So yeah I think, there are lots of boys who love my survival stories, but lots of girls, too.
- 8:58Tina Strachan: Yeah, absolutely.
- 8:59Tina Strachan: Yeah, it's an age-old problem, isn't it?
- 9:00Tina Strachan: I didn't actually wanna touch on this topic at all.
- 9:03Tina Strachan: It wasn't my intent, but I guess it just kinda swayed that way.
- 9:05Tina Strachan: But yeah, it's an age-old problem, isn't it?
- 9:07Tina Strachan: I remember my little kids coming home from kindy saying something like,"Oh no, but that's a girl color." And you're like, hang on.
- 9:14Tina Strachan: How...
- 9:14Tina Strachan: What makes something a girl color or a boy color or a girl toy or a boy toy?
- 9:18Tina Strachan: It's and you're right, it's those gatekeepers or it's the, the adults that are saying that to them.
- 9:23Tina Strachan: Same goes for book covers.
- 9:25Tina Strachan: There's no girl book covers or boy book covers, and it is just what appeals to whichever child wants to read whatever, isn't it?
- 9:32Tina Strachan: So yeah, it's...
- 9:33Tina Strachan: And there's many more things that I think they, we know now can improve reading, and it's really probably what the cover looks like is probably very low on that list of things- Yeah isn't it?
- 9:43Tina Strachan: It,
- 9:43Sarah Armstrong: it's interesting, I heard'cause this topic has been hot recently because- Luke Bateman talked about it on Australian Story, and then he interviewed Scott Stuart, the kids author, on Scott's, on Luke's podcast.
- 9:56Sarah Armstrong: And Scott Stuart quoted some research, which I haven't actually put my finger on yet, where he was saying that when boys are choosing books for themselves, they don't choose what are stereo- necessarily stereotypically regarded as boys' books.
- 10:12Sarah Armstrong: They'll choose anything.
- 10:13Sarah Armstrong: Girls on cover, girls main characters, whatever.
- 10:17Sarah Armstrong: But if they're choosing a book for another boy, they will tend to go for the more stereotypical boys' books, which is really interesting- I thought.
- 10:26Tina Strachan: That is interesting, isn't it?
- 10:28Tina Strachan: Yeah.
- 10:28Tina Strachan: Oh, I'm sure it's a good thing that it's back in the spotlight because we're all working, to, to...
- 10:34Tina Strachan: It's good that we know what we need to do, in a way, to help.
- 10:37Tina Strachan: And the talk that you're doing where both the parents and the kids are reading RUM sounds incredible, and I can't wait to hear how that goes.
- 10:44Tina Strachan: We need more of them.
- 10:45Tina Strachan: That's Is this like a Father's Day thing,'cause Father's Day's coming up?
- 10:50Sarah Armstrong: Oh, that's a good point.
- 10:51Sarah Armstrong: Maybe it is.
- 10:52Tina Strachan: Maybe we should make Fa- Not sure some- a Father's Day annual, Dads Reading With Kids thing.
- 10:58Tina Strachan: That sounds like such
- 10:59Sarah Armstrong: a fun- Each read
- 11:00Tina Strachan: the
- 11:00Sarah Armstrong: same book thing Talk about it together.
- 11:02Sarah Armstrong: Yes.
- 11:04Sarah Armstrong: Yeah.
- 11:04Sarah Armstrong: I think that- Yeah,
- 11:04Tina Strachan: okay.
- 11:05Tina Strachan: Let's work on that
- 11:06Sarah Armstrong: let's start a campaign.
- 11:06Tina Strachan: Okay.
- 11:07Tina Strachan: We'll table that for another time.
- 11:08Tina Strachan: All righty.
- 11:09Tina Strachan: So but back to survival thrillers you were following up on the success of Run with another survival thriller that I'm sure will follow an even more successful trajectory with your very soon to be released novel, The Wave.
- 11:24Tina Strachan: Can you tell us- Yes about The Wave?
- 11:26Sarah Armstrong: Sure, yeah.
- 11:27Sarah Armstrong: So The Wave is about 13-year-old Max, who's home alone on his, the island where he lives when he gets the warning that a tsunami, an unexpected tsunami is coming, and he's gotta get out and get to higher ground straight away.
- 11:42Sarah Armstrong: But he can't find his dog, Ralph, and he has to make the decision, do I stay and do I look for Ralph, or do I, get a lift to higher ground?
- 11:53Sarah Armstrong: And, the minutes ticking by and he still can't find Ralph, and he still can't find Ralph.
- 11:57Sarah Armstrong: And he ends up banding together with a couple of other kids who are also alone on the island to survive the tsunami and the aftermath.
- 12:07Sarah Armstrong: And so it is about, it's about surviving, but it's also about their relationships.
- 12:12Sarah Armstrong: And there are some themes in there because much the town near me, Byron Bay Max's home island has really been affected by tourism in that a lot of people have turned their houses over to Airbnbs or holiday accommodation or, houses have been sold just to be holiday houses, and they're not lived in full time, and a lot of people have had to leave the area or pay exorbitant rents or live in really substandard accommodation.
- 12:37Sarah Armstrong: There's a real housing crisis in my area.
- 12:39Sarah Armstrong: And so I brought that into the novel too.
- 12:43Sarah Armstrong: Which actually it does work in, because, when the tsunami comes and the whole town is underwater, everyone is equally affected.
- 12:52Sarah Armstrong: All the houses are equally- destroyed.
- 12:56Tina Strachan: Yep.
- 12:57Tina Strachan: That's very leveling, isn't it?
- 12:58Tina Strachan: So d- in many ways.
- 12:59Tina Strachan: Yes.
- 13:00Tina Strachan: Yeah, I...
- 13:00Tina Strachan: And I love that, and like you were saying before with the Trojan Horse, we don't wanna outwardly just spew lessons at them in the books, do we?
- 13:06Tina Strachan: It's part of that emotional story, isn't it?
- 13:08Tina Strachan: And you do that very well.
- 13:10Tina Strachan: It doesn't feel like there's any major lessons to be learnt, but it's just naturally happening, isn't it?
- 13:14Sarah Armstrong: And, those things are happening.
- 13:16Sarah Armstrong: Life is like that, we're living our life, and things like that are happening around us, and so it is just part of life, so it works to be part of a book, I think.
- 13:27Sarah Armstrong: I think it would feel much less emotionally satisfying if it didn't have all the sort of social and interpersonal and personal elements- that I add.
- 13:39Tina Strachan: Yeah.
- 13:39Tina Strachan: Yeah, it has to be relatable.
- 13:40Tina Strachan: That's real life.
- 13:41Tina Strachan: And kids relate to all of that, so it's, that's why they are loving these books, I'm sure.
- 13:45Tina Strachan: So you're very gifted, Sarah, at creating a sense of place in your books, and your settings always feel very real and very alive, and it's very easy for the readers to immerse themselves in your words, to the point where w- when, when I was reading The Wave I f- quite, felt quite anxious to be honest about The Wave because, I remember the tsunami.
- 14:08Tina Strachan: Can't remember what year that was.
- 14:09Tina Strachan: That was-
- 14:11Sarah Armstrong: 2004, I think
- 14:12Tina Strachan: was it 2004?
- 14:13Tina Strachan: And so it brought a lot of that back for me, but I, and I guess...
- 14:17Tina Strachan: But, I guess a lot of your readers probably weren't around then, may not have even know about it.
- 14:20Tina Strachan: But it did feel very real, which I'm sure is exactly what you were going for.
- 14:25Tina Strachan: So are you drawing from real life a lot of the time?
- 14:29Tina Strachan: How are you...
- 14:30Tina Strachan: how have you honed this skill to just make it so real and alive?
- 14:34Tina Strachan: And is it settings or experiences that you've had before?
- 14:37Tina Strachan: And what tips and advice do you have for other writers to nail this very fine art of creating such rich settings?
- 14:46Sarah Armstrong: I certainly have not had an experience of a tsunami thankfully.
- 14:49Sarah Armstrong: I was super obsessed with them as a kid, and I think a lot of kids are.
- 14:53Sarah Armstrong: The idea of natural disasters, but particularly for me, the ocean, because we moved to live near the ocean when I was about nine, and I had my sort of first real experiences of the ocean's power and actually being really badly dumped and being kinda trapped out on the br- at the breakers and not being able to get back in'cause the waves were coming so fast.
- 15:12Sarah Armstrong: So I got this very vi- visceral experience of the ocean's power and felt, a bit afraid of it for quite a while.
- 15:19Sarah Armstrong: And tsunamis are really In the way you could back then go down rabbit holes in the encyclopedias and such.
- 15:27Sarah Armstrong: There was no internet rabbit hole to go down, but I went down my own form of rabbit holes.
- 15:31Sarah Armstrong: And so I guess I'm drawing on that, the memories of how I felt about tsunamis and the ocean back then.
- 15:37Sarah Armstrong: And I'm still I've gotta say, I don't go out super deep in the ocean even now.
- 15:41Sarah Armstrong: So you know, I still have a very healthy respect for the ocean's power.
- 15:46Sarah Armstrong: And in terms of setting, look, to be honest, I set most of my stories, and that includes all my adult books, around the area where I live or somewhere very similar.
- 15:54Sarah Armstrong: In my mind, the island that Max lives on is basically Byron Bay but turned into an island And I can see it in my mind.
- 16:03Sarah Armstrong: I can actually see that island and I can see the forest that Kaz was in.
- 16:08Sarah Armstrong: And I think knowing a setting well helps y- helps me conjure it because I think I'm, like a lot of writers, I'm quite observant about what's around me.
- 16:22Sarah Armstrong: I just take joy in noticing things and then thinking,"How would I describe that?" Even when I'm just walking around town or whatever, I see something interesting and I think,"How would I describe that?" And in my head I write a little phrase to describe it.
- 16:35Sarah Armstrong: It's just something I've always done.
- 16:37Sarah Armstrong: And so I think I just get a lot of practice at describing places.
- 16:42Sarah Armstrong: And, often in my first drafts my description of place is, a bit rudimentary or cliched, and it sometimes takes a few drafts to, extract that and make it a bit, hopefully a little bit fresher, and original.
- 16:56Sarah Armstrong: And sometimes I'm actually pulling out description'cause it's too much, and it's more effective to keep it very simple.
- 17:02Sarah Armstrong: Not try for the fancy metaphor or, you know- Lots of adjectives or whatever.
- 17:07Sarah Armstrong: And sometimes I just keep it very simple because the reader has got such a source of images and experiences to draw on.
- 17:16Sarah Armstrong: 'Cause every book, of course, is a unique meeting between the reader's imagination and the writer's imagination.
- 17:22Sarah Armstrong: And everyone's, version of the island that Max lives on will be different, will be completely different, and none of them will be exactly like my version, and that's okay.
- 17:31Sarah Armstrong: So yeah, sometimes I think I need to trust the reader and what they bring to it as well.
- 17:36Tina Strachan: Yeah.
- 17:37Tina Strachan: No, that's true.
- 17:38Tina Strachan: You gotta They've gotta fill some gaps in themselves too.
- 17:40Tina Strachan: But I think you do, you absolutely find that in between.
- 17:44Tina Strachan: In my...
- 17:44Tina Strachan: You know what I was picturing in my mind, and I see it now when you say it's Byron, I probably should have thought that'cause I live not too far from Byron too, and yes it does feel a lot like that.
- 17:52Tina Strachan: I was thinking of I used to live up north and I used to live n- near this very...
- 17:56Tina Strachan: At the time it was a very, I don't know, have you heard of Tannum Sands?
- 17:59Tina Strachan: It's up near, like Gladstone and that.
- 18:01Tina Strachan: And it was, it's very...
- 18:02Tina Strachan: When I was there, there was nothing.
- 18:03Tina Strachan: It was like dirt roads, and you just used to pull your car up and just jump in the ocean.
- 18:07Tina Strachan: There's no lifeguards.
- 18:08Tina Strachan: There was nothing.
- 18:09Tina Strachan: Back when you're a teenager and you've got no cares in the world.
- 18:11Tina Strachan: And I envision it as that, because I know now that it's just there's apartment buildings there's Woolworths, there's shops, there's roads, like, and I know that's what's happened there now.
- 18:20Tina Strachan: So that's actually what was, I was envisioning in my mind when I was reading it.
- 18:23Tina Strachan: Oh.
- 18:24Tina Strachan: Very similar thing.
- 18:25Tina Strachan: Yeah.
- 18:26Tina Strachan: Yes.
- 18:27Tina Strachan: Okay, so- survival thrillers, Sarah you do seem to have a knack with them it seems.
- 18:32Tina Strachan: And but it is a bit of a jump from what you've written in the past, isn't it?
- 18:37Tina Strachan: Because previously to this, you- your first middle grade books were a little bit more sort of magical and fantasy-based, and before that you were actually writing for fiction for adults.
- 18:48Tina Strachan: So can you tell us a little bit about your previous books and your journey through writing adult fiction and arriving at middle grade?
- 18:55Sarah Armstrong: Sure.
- 18:55Sarah Armstrong: So I started I was a journalist originally, and then I just I'd always wanted to be a writer, ever since I was, a kid, and I just journalism seemed like the next best thing.
- 19:05Sarah Armstrong: And in fact, was a good move because I got to experience the world and people and so on.
- 19:10Sarah Armstrong: But I wrote my first novel, and I didn't even think about writing for kids, even though at the time I was married to a children's author and illustrator.
- 19:19Sarah Armstrong: You would think it might have occurred to me, but I just wrote for adults.
- 19:23Sarah Armstrong: And so I wrote three novels for adults all set around Mullumbimby, where I live, even if I didn't call it that.
- 19:31Sarah Armstrong: And then I had a child, and that took me back to writing.
- 19:38Sarah Armstrong: It took me back to kids books.
- 19:39Sarah Armstrong: And just It was just this beautiful kind of return to my own experiences as a child reading.
- 19:47Sarah Armstrong: We didn't have a television when I was growing up.
- 19:49Sarah Armstrong: My parents got rid of it.
- 19:50Sarah Armstrong: There was only one screen in the house, but they got rid of that, and I just read like a book a day.
- 19:58Sarah Armstrong: I read heaps.
- 19:59Sarah Armstrong: And the books, there weren't as many great books around then.
- 20:03Sarah Armstrong: We're in a golden age of children's literature right now.
- 20:05Sarah Armstrong: But there were some good books, some of the classics.
- 20:09Sarah Armstrong: And so I just read so much, and I just felt such joy when I revisited that reading to my daughter.
- 20:16Sarah Armstrong: It was just like,"Oh, this just feels like my homeland," kids books feel like my homeland, and there's so many beautiful books that I was able to read to her, from picture books through to middle grade.
- 20:27Sarah Armstrong: And I just thought, this is the space I wanna be writing in." And it's just been fantastic from the first moment.
- 20:37Sarah Armstrong: I like the parameters around kids books, like what you can and can't write about.
- 20:43Sarah Armstrong: I like the fact the ending has to have a note of hope, because that helps me, I love the kid lit community.
- 20:51Sarah Armstrong: All the, authors, and illustrators, and teacher-librarians, and publishers, and everyone in that world, the booksellers, are just a really great group of people.
- 21:01Sarah Armstrong: Because, you spend a lot of time on your own as a writer, so it's lovely to have that sense of a community, and it's a really excellent community.
- 21:07Sarah Armstrong: And then of course the readers are just the best thing about writing for kids, is the meeting the kids.
- 21:14Sarah Armstrong: And'Cause I go into schools and do school visits.
- 21:17Sarah Armstrong: When you meet, when a kid comes up to you with tears in their eyes and says,"This is my favorite book ever in my whole life," it's like, wow, that's like everything.
- 21:27Sarah Armstrong: And another kid came up to me,'cause in Run, Max lives with his aunt'cause his dad can't look after him.
- 21:35Sarah Armstrong: He's not able to.
- 21:36Sarah Armstrong: He's, And this kid came up to me and said,"I've never read a book with a i'm in the same situation.
- 21:41Sarah Armstrong: I live with my aunt because my mom and dad are not able to take care of me, and I've never read a character like me in a book." And it was obviously really meaningful to that kid that there was someone like them in the book.
- 21:54Sarah Armstrong: Yeah.
- 21:55Sarah Armstrong: I think the kids are the, the very, very best thing- About writing for kids.
- 21:59Tina Strachan: That's pretty powerful, isn't it, when a child can see themselves in your book, in your character, isn't it?
- 22:03Sarah Armstrong: Yeah.
- 22:04Tina Strachan: It's incredible.
- 22:04Tina Strachan: Yeah, that makes it all worthwhile.
- 22:07Tina Strachan: So did you f- can I ask you, did you find it hard or was there any When it comes to publishing across not genres, but age groups even, genres even is hard to Or sometimes there's some, roadblocks in the way when trying to swap genres from the publishing side.
- 22:23Tina Strachan: Did you find there was any when you started pitching books for children, was there any sort of questions about you're a, you're an adult's You write f- adult fiction." Anything like that, or?
- 22:34Sarah Armstrong: I think there w- not so much of that.
- 22:35Sarah Armstrong: More just,"Are you gonna keep writing for kids?"'Cause, for publishers- when they take on a new author- it's quite an investment.
- 22:40Sarah Armstrong: And they- It's a better investment for them if they know you're gonna keep producing, kids books for them, ideally.
- 22:50Sarah Armstrong: If they're good.
- 22:51Sarah Armstrong: So I guess there was just a question about that, are you gonna keep writing in this space or are you gonna go back to writing for adults?
- 22:56Sarah Armstrong: And I can say, really honestly, look, at the minute I can only imagine keeping writing in this space.
- 23:01Sarah Armstrong: And, look at my first I wrote, the first kids book I wrote did, my agent did send it round and there was no interest, so it is still sitting in my drawer.
- 23:10Sarah Armstrong: Although amazingly, a lot of the themes in it have, And bit, bits of it have just found them their way into subsequent books.
- 23:17Sarah Armstrong: So the sort of my first kids book didn't really go anywhere, and then I wrote Big Magic and I think having an agent really helps.
- 23:25Sarah Armstrong: My agent is Pippa Masson at Curtis Brown, and she was, connected me with Hardy Grant Children's Publishing, and Marisa Pintado there.
- 23:33Sarah Armstrong: And I don't think there was I don't recall anything about, questions in terms of me having written for adults except,"Do you see yourself continuing to work in this space?" That was it.
- 23:42Tina Strachan: Yeah.
- 23:43Tina Strachan: Yeah, and that's a fair question.
- 23:44Tina Strachan: Yeah.
- 23:44Tina Strachan: Yeah.
- 23:44Tina Strachan: I think there's a sometimes a bit of hesitance with authors who have written in one genre or for one age group to then,"Can I pitch it?
- 23:52Tina Strachan: Is it, is it- is there anything against me doing that?
- 23:54Tina Strachan: Is there something that's gonna hold me back?" Yeah, so it sounds like- See,
- 23:57Sarah Armstrong: I've got a few- just give it a go I've seen a fair, quite a few YA authors, or and middle grade, moving into adult writing at the minute.
- 24:02Sarah Armstrong: It's interesting, there's a few people writing adult books, which is interesting.
- 24:06Tina Strachan: Yeah.
- 24:06Tina Strachan: Yeah, that is interesting.
- 24:08Tina Strachan: Okay.
- 24:08Tina Strachan: You have also been teaching writing for over 20 years, haven't you?
- 24:13Tina Strachan: And currently I see that you're s- you've started offering some online courses.
- 24:18Tina Strachan: Yeah.
- 24:19Tina Strachan: Which I think is such a wonderful idea because as much as in person is so valuable for so many things, especially in this day of and age of everything being online but by being online you can reach a lot more people.
- 24:31Tina Strachan: T- can you tell us a little bit about those courses and what you're offering and who should sign up and why, and where?
- 24:36Tina Strachan: Yeah.
- 24:37Sarah Armstrong: Sure.
- 24:38Sarah Armstrong: Yes.
- 24:38Sarah Armstrong: I have taught writing, like yeah for a long time, and I love teaching.
- 24:42Sarah Armstrong: And, I guess I just decide I was just thinking about how to do it online, and I'm still developing the shape of the sort of main course.
- 24:51Sarah Armstrong: But what I've got out there at the minute, and it can be found on my website, which is www.sarah-armstrong.com, are a couple of free courses where people can get a sense of my teaching style and Th- they- they've got exercises in them and help them get, a certain number of words down and come up with an idea if that's what they're seeking to do.
- 25:14Sarah Armstrong: And my plan is a little bit later in the year to offer some courses that will involve some live work on Zoom, question and answer time, and chat about craft time, as well as little videos about aspects of craft.
- 25:29Sarah Armstrong: 'Cause I during COVID I was teaching a course, a 12-week writing year of the novel course, and we ended up having to go to Zoom and I recorded a whole lot of videos.
- 25:38Sarah Armstrong: I'm not using those very same videos, I'm recording new ones, but it just showed me how helpful it can be to have little video lectures, for want of a better word, that people can, revisit and go back to, as well as some live face-to-face not face-to-face, live Zoom to Zoom stuff.
- 25:56Sarah Armstrong: So yeah, that'll be later in the year and I people can sign up for my intermittent newsletter from me.
- 26:02Sarah Armstrong: But also my partner, Alan, is also a writer and we have a Substack happening called The Writer's House where we talk about aspects of craft and what we're reading, what we're writing, what we're watching.
- 26:13Sarah Armstrong: So that people are really welcome to join, sign up, subscribe to that as well,'cause we do quite a lot of chat about craft there.
- 26:20Tina Strachan: Okay.
- 26:21Tina Strachan: Yeah, so that's a good idea.
- 26:21Tina Strachan: So sign up to the Substack or newsletter, and then you'll find out when these additional courses come out.
- 26:27Tina Strachan: And but those, the free ones are a fantastic idea, and even the other ones where you're recording the videos.
- 26:33Tina Strachan: I think in this day and age, people like to just self-pace it, because it's hard to get everybody in a room all together at once, and it's so valuable for, especially, for parents as well who, you've got kids, if things are held in the evening and, it's hard to get a bit of space so you can sit and do it.
- 26:48Tina Strachan: But you could do, you can do it later.
- 26:50Tina Strachan: I listen to lots of things in my car.
- 26:52Tina Strachan: I've done full courses, self-paced courses in my car on the way to and from work.
- 26:55Tina Strachan: Yeah.
- 26:55Tina Strachan: Because it's Yeah, it, that's just the world that we live in now, so that's gonna be super helpful as well.
- 27:01Tina Strachan: Can I Now, I just wanted to chat about critique groups.
- 27:04Tina Strachan: Because you are in a very well-known critique group that many people are very envious of.
- 27:10Tina Strachan: Can you tell us a little bit about your critique group?
- 27:13Tina Strachan: How it came about, how it's helped you, and how you help each other?
- 27:18Sarah Armstrong: Sure.
- 27:18Sarah Armstrong: So my critique group includes Tristan Bancks, Zanni Louise, Deb Robella, and Lian Tanner, all of whom write in the kid lit space.
- 27:27Sarah Armstrong: And Tristan and I have been friends for a long time, since he made a film about the first short story I ever wrote.
- 27:35Sarah Armstrong: When I left the ABC and moved up here, I wrote a short story, and it won a local award, and he then made a short film about it.
- 27:41Sarah Armstrong: So we've been friends even before he started writing for kids and before I s- wrote for adults.
- 27:47Sarah Armstrong: And Zanni I met through a mothers group.
- 27:51Sarah Armstrong: Our daughters are the same age.
- 27:53Sarah Armstrong: And they knew, because they'd been in that children's literature space for a little while before me, they knew Lian and Deb.
- 28:00Sarah Armstrong: And it is a really fantastic part of my writing life, I have to say.
- 28:06Sarah Armstrong: I feel so, so lucky to be part of that critique group.
- 28:10Sarah Armstrong: We meet basically once a month, although generally not in August for reasons that most people will understand, it being book month.
- 28:17Sarah Armstrong: And we send each other writing a day or two before we meet.
- 28:22Sarah Armstrong: We read each other's work.
- 28:23Sarah Armstrong: It's up to, 2 to 3,000 words.
- 28:26Sarah Armstrong: And then we meet, and we We're pretty strict on time, 15 minutes chitchat, and then each person has 15 minutes of time where they're given feedback on their writing.
- 28:35Sarah Armstrong: And these guys, over time we've developed a culture where I feel like we've just really nailed the right mix of encouragement and constructive critique.
- 28:47Sarah Armstrong: And I think we know each other well enough to know if someone needs a bit more of one or the other, depending just where they're at at that time.
- 28:55Sarah Armstrong: So it They really help me with my writing, and they help me with being encouraging.
- 29:03Sarah Armstrong: They're like a cheer squad.
- 29:04Sarah Armstrong: And they've helped me because I've newer to the children's literature world than them, they've sort of- Given me lots of really useful information about publishing and about school visits, and so I'm really grateful to them.
- 29:19Sarah Armstrong: And it's i've been in writies- writers groups since I started writing, and they've always meant a huge amount to me.
- 29:26Sarah Armstrong: And it's a certain sort of intimacy you have with someone when you share your early drafts with them because, early drafts are early drafts.
- 29:33Sarah Armstrong: They're often, a bit dodgy and, it's a vulnerable thing to show someone your early drafts.
- 29:38Sarah Armstrong: And I think it creates this certain intimacy and camaraderie that, I find really valuable.
- 29:45Tina Strachan: Yeah, it does.
- 29:45Tina Strachan: I love the 15 minutes chit-chat and then 15 minutes for your feedback for each person.
- 29:50Tina Strachan: I love how you've organized that.
- 29:51Tina Strachan: But you do have to be like that, don't you?
- 29:53Tina Strachan: Because especially, like it sounds like you're very good friends.
- 29:55Tina Strachan: You get on there and a half an hour or 45 minutes goes, and you realize that you haven't even started.
- 30:00Tina Strachan: I think we tried to do a, like a writing session.
- 30:03Sarah Armstrong: And we just chatted.
- 30:04Tina Strachan: We just chatted and ate lemon meringue- Yeah with Kate Foster.
- 30:07Tina Strachan: And so we need to but we've always next time we'll make we'll do that.
- 30:10Tina Strachan: We'll do a quick just 15 minutes catch up.
- 30:12Sarah Armstrong: As long as there's also a lemon meringue.
- 30:14Tina Strachan: Yeah, you need the lemon meringue to fuel the writing.
- 30:16Tina Strachan: That's absolutely true.
- 30:18Tina Strachan: Yeah I, so I love that organization, and I'll have to bring that to my own critique group.
- 30:21Tina Strachan: But, not everybody can have such a dream critique group as that.
- 30:26Tina Strachan: Any advice for anybody who's looking for some gaining a crit- critique group?
- 30:30Tina Strachan: Where can they find one?
- 30:31Tina Strachan: Especially the vulnerability about sharing your work is quite important too, because a lot of people, if it's their first group or they're just starting writing, it can be a bit scary.
- 30:39Sarah Armstrong: Yeah.
- 30:40Sarah Armstrong: I think finding people who are roughly at the same level as you of experience with writing is probably helpful.
- 30:47Sarah Armstrong: A lot of people for- form groups they're gonna do a workshop somewhere or a class somewhere, and they meet people and form a group.
- 30:53Sarah Armstrong: And because of, Zoom, you can, like people can be anywhere in the country.
- 30:58Sarah Armstrong: So it may be just you meet someone somewhere who's also a writer, and you might just start with three people, and then you might add someone.
- 31:04Sarah Armstrong: And as to the s- the vulnerability and the sort of culture within the group, I think it's really great to be very transparent and upfront about expectations around that.
- 31:17Sarah Armstrong: And I think a lot of people feel like they've just got to be critical in order to be helpful.
- 31:22Sarah Armstrong: But, when I'm teaching writing, what I'm encouraging people to do, particularly in first draft, is identify what you really love about this piece of work, your own work or someone else's.
- 31:33Sarah Armstrong: Identify what you love and build on that.
- 31:35Sarah Armstrong: And the other stuff will drop away because first drafts are inevitably flawed.
- 31:38Sarah Armstrong: They're imperfect.
- 31:40Sarah Armstrong: And- It's not that helpful to get in and be super critical of a first draft particularly at nitty-gritty level like sentence level and stuff.
- 31:48Sarah Armstrong: We would never give each other feedback on,"Oh, you've got a typo there," in a first draft.
- 31:52Sarah Armstrong: It's like, that's really unhelpful.
- 31:55Sarah Armstrong: It's more big picture stuff around character and plot and pacing and so on.
- 32:00Sarah Armstrong: So I think having a really open discussion with the other critique group members about what are our expectations here and thinking about the most constructive way to give feedback, and sometimes that can be saying to someone,"What would be the most helpful feedback for you today on this piece of writing?"'Cause someone might be just really struggling with a particular aspect of the work, and that's what's most helpful for them to hear.
- 32:26Sarah Armstrong: Or they might say,"I'm feeling really shaky today and feeling imposter syndrome and-" I don't think I can handle anything too, strong.
- 32:34Sarah Armstrong: So I think lots of transparency is very helpful so that'Cause I know of people who've been in groups that were quite critical, and it didn't serve them, and it didn't serve their writing.
- 32:46Sarah Armstrong: And what you wanna do is be in a group that's going to support you and help you, help your work become the best thing it possibly can.
- 32:54Tina Strachan: Yeah.
- 32:55Tina Strachan: Yeah, there certainly is a knack to delivering feedback as well.
- 32:59Tina Strachan: It's And it, I think it's two-way street, isn't it?
- 33:01Tina Strachan: Like you said, delivering it- and also receiving it.
- 33:03Tina Strachan: But I think that was a really important top point that you said there about just transparency and being open and, because I've Sometimes I want to send something and I'm like,"I know this is super rough.
- 33:14Tina Strachan: Just so you know it's super rough, really drafty.
- 33:17Tina Strachan: But does the overall I'd Or what I'm after is just the overall gist.
- 33:21Tina Strachan: And is, does this seem, pacey enough or interesting enough?" Or, I'm traditionally someone who writes in past tense, but I've recently just tried something in present tense, and I know that I've flipped and changed back and forth between the two the whole way through, and I'm like,"Please ignore all of that.
- 33:37Tina Strachan: I don't need to know any of that.
- 33:38Tina Strachan: But before I start going through a line edit, can you tell me if y- you think this is enjoyable, couple of chapters?" Things like that.
- 33:46Tina Strachan: So just really asking for what you want.
- 33:49Sarah Armstrong: Yeah, and I think that you make a really good point about receiving feedback.
- 33:53Sarah Armstrong: 'Cause it, sometimes you'll get In a, even in our group, you'll get two people who say the exact opposite thing.
- 33:58Sarah Armstrong: "That didn't work for me because X, Y, Z." And someone else will say,"No, I really love that bit.
- 34:02Sarah Armstrong: Don't get rid of it." Yeah.
- 34:04Sarah Armstrong: But if everyone in the group says,"You know what?
- 34:06Sarah Armstrong: That bit there just didn't quite work for me," then you really need to listen if everyone's saying the same thing.
- 34:13Sarah Armstrong: And I think some i've given a lot of feedback in my time as a teacher, and I try to be very careful about how do, how I do it.
- 34:20Sarah Armstrong: Some people are very able to take feedback.
- 34:23Sarah Armstrong: They can really take it on, and some people are not.
- 34:27Sarah Armstrong: And the people who are not and who get defensive, their writing is not gonna shift and change so much because they're It's not that everything I s- people should take on everything I say, but I think there's, you need to have a sort of willingness to hear what people are saying to you.
- 34:44Sarah Armstrong: Just have a think about it, it's when you get a structural notes from your publisher, like the first big editorial notes on a manuscript.
- 34:52Sarah Armstrong: It's like I won't make every single change that's suggested.
- 34:56Sarah Armstrong: I love them.
- 34:57Sarah Armstrong: I feel really excited by them.
- 34:58Sarah Armstrong: Some people don't.
- 34:59Sarah Armstrong: They read them and feel despairing,'cause all they read is the criticism, and then they need to come back to it a few days later.
- 35:04Sarah Armstrong: But what I read when I read those notes is like,"Here's a chance for me to make this even better, to realize my vision even more effectively."'Cause the best structural notes will be tuned into the vision I had for the book, and they're just helping me try and realize that.
- 35:21Sarah Armstrong: And that's what the best critique will be too.
- 35:23Sarah Armstrong: It's not about I write, sort of romance, and you haven't got enough romance in there.
- 35:27Sarah Armstrong: It's more like what are you trying to, what are you trying to achieve with this book, and how can my feedback help you achieve that better?
- 35:34Sarah Armstrong: So I think that's the thing.
- 35:35Sarah Armstrong: It's like we're trying to give feedback based on what the author's intention is.
- 35:40Tina Strachan: Yeah.
- 35:41Tina Strachan: No.
- 35:42Tina Strachan: And I guess if someone's Regardless of if you wanna take it on or not, if someone's mentioned something, there's kind of a reason why, and whether you agree with it or not, it's always just worth having a little look into it and- Yeah and thinking where has this actually come from their point of view.
- 35:55Tina Strachan: Yeah.
- 35:55Tina Strachan: 'Cause there's so many things that we don't see when we're the, we're writing it.
- 35:58Tina Strachan: We're in it, and we maybe we haven't explained it properly, and it's, there's a usually a reason why it's come across that
- 36:03Sarah Armstrong: way.
- 36:03Sarah Armstrong: And sometimes in justifying why something is a certain way, that's helpful too,'cause we get real clarity about, oh, no, this is why I've done this.
- 36:12Sarah Armstrong: And sometimes that can make you think, oh, maybe I need to do a bit more of that elsewhere in the piece or Yeah.
- 36:17Sarah Armstrong: So even just justifying why you don't agree with their feedback can be helpful.
- 36:22Tina Strachan: Yep.
- 36:22Tina Strachan: Yep.
- 36:23Tina Strachan: So S- Sarah, what's next for you?
- 36:25Tina Strachan: I know The Wave's just coming out very shortly, so you're gonna be very busy with your whole promotion period.
- 36:31Tina Strachan: But as we know, there's always lots of things going on at the same time, isn't there when you're writing?
- 36:36Tina Strachan: So tell us what's next for you?
- 36:38Sarah Armstrong: I'm working on another sort of survival story that's got a bit of crime in it, this one.
- 36:43Sarah Armstrong: Bit of survival-
- 36:44Tina Strachan: Exciting
- 36:45Sarah Armstrong: sort of crime.
- 36:45Sarah Armstrong: And I'm about 30,000 words in.
- 36:49Tina Strachan: Wow.
- 36:50Sarah Armstrong: I've actually finished the first draft, but the end is a bit sketchy.
- 36:54Sarah Armstrong: A bit thin.
- 36:55Sarah Armstrong: So I'm now working my way through and fleshing it out.
- 36:58Sarah Armstrong: Because it's got the crime element, had to really get the plot sorted.
- 37:02Sarah Armstrong: Because, there's clues to drop and so- A lot
- 37:05Tina Strachan: more sort of plotting, isn't there, with the- A lot
- 37:07Sarah Armstrong: more plotting.
- 37:08Sarah Armstrong: Yeah.
- 37:08Sarah Armstrong: Yeah.
- 37:09Tina Strachan: That's fun.
- 37:09Tina Strachan: Okay, I'm excited for that.
- 37:11Sarah Armstrong: Yeah.
- 37:11Sarah Armstrong: So yeah, that'll, hopefully be out around this time next year, fingers crossed, all being well.
- 37:16Sarah Armstrong: But yeah, I'm really loving writing, writing it.
- 37:20Tina Strachan: And working on your courses that are probably going to be available maybe towards the end of the year?
- 37:23Sarah Armstrong: And I'll be working on my courses that'll be available towards the end of the year.
- 37:27Sarah Armstrong: That's right.
- 37:28Sarah Armstrong: I've I've pretty much sketched them out.
- 37:30Sarah Armstrong: I just need to record the videos and get them up.
- 37:33Sarah Armstrong: I've learnt a lot about the back end of online courses.
- 37:38Tina Strachan: It's always new skill- always new things to learn, isn't there?
- 37:40Tina Strachan: That's
- 37:40Sarah Armstrong: right.
- 37:41Tina Strachan: Okay.
- 37:41Tina Strachan: So Sarah, do you have one final top tip for aspiring and emerging authors?
- 37:47Sarah Armstrong: Oh, one top tip.
- 37:48Tina Strachan: Or any writers in general.
- 37:49Tina Strachan: Anything.
- 37:50Sarah Armstrong: I think- My main one would be to, and this is the really big thing I had to come to understand is that the first draft is just that.
- 38:01Sarah Armstrong: And that rewriting is where a story really comes to life.
- 38:06Sarah Armstrong: And that rewriting Actually, true rewriting involves big changes.
- 38:13Sarah Armstrong: Like I was at a school two days ago and I had a two-hour session with a group of keen writers, and I showed them...
- 38:21Sarah Armstrong: They'd all read Run, and I showed them the first draft of the prologue and the first draft of chapter one, and even I was shocked at how different they were and how many things had changed.
- 38:34Sarah Armstrong: And they were like,"What?
- 38:34Sarah Armstrong: Where's that dog come from?" And you know- all this stuff.
- 38:38Sarah Armstrong: And I hadn't realized that I'd made such big changes, and I told them like there was a mum character and a grandmother character, and they bit the dust.
- 38:45Sarah Armstrong: Like I got rid of them, and like there were some really big changes in the rewriting of Run.
- 38:52Sarah Armstrong: So I guess my encouragement to people is to really be open to those big changes that sometimes need to happen, whether it's losing characters, bringing new characters in, changing locations, just ditching whole sections that you've written.
- 39:06Sarah Armstrong: We can get very attached to things we've written.
- 39:08Sarah Armstrong: And on that front, I don't polish my f- first couple of drafts all that much.
- 39:15Sarah Armstrong: Because, I learned with my very first novel for adults, I polished and polished before I'd really sat back and looked at the overall plot, and then I ditched this whole section in Hobart.
- 39:25Sarah Armstrong: There's a whole section in Salt Rain that happened in Hobart that has never made it into the book.
- 39:30Sarah Armstrong: And I must have spent hundreds of hours polishing that.
- 39:34Sarah Armstrong: And it got lost.
- 39:35Sarah Armstrong: Let a first draft and the early drafts be early drafts, and be willing to make the big changes.
- 39:40Tina Strachan: Yeah.
- 39:41Tina Strachan: On that note then, do you, when you have that step back and you look at it as a whole once you've done your, draft, do you do any plotting or planning, or do you do a story grid thing or a Save the Cat or anything like that to see if- to see if it's actually hitting, some of those compulsory scenes and points in your story?
- 40:03Tina Strachan: Is that one way that you check- Yeah or do you just-
- 40:05Sarah Armstrong: I do
- 40:05Tina Strachan: vibe it?
- 40:06Sarah Armstrong: No.
- 40:06Sarah Armstrong: I don't vibe it.
- 40:07Sarah Armstrong: I I sometimes use butcher's paper on the floor to track particularly like subplots and find where turning points, but I do use Save the Cat- For the novel.
- 40:17Tina Strachan: Yeah.
- 40:17Sarah Armstrong: I find that really helpful.
- 40:19Sarah Armstrong: And I don't follow it absolutely.
- 40:21Tina Strachan: Yeah, it's a guide.
- 40:22Tina Strachan: But
- 40:22Sarah Armstrong: I find...
- 40:22Sarah Armstrong: It's a really good guide.
- 40:23Sarah Armstrong: I find that sort of screenwriting approach with, midpoints- Yeah turning points and things quite helpful.
- 40:28Sarah Armstrong: I also like that video, what's it called?
- 40:31Sarah Armstrong: Insanely Good Endings, something by Michael Arnt.
- 40:36Sarah Armstrong: He's a screenwriter.
- 40:37Sarah Armstrong: He wrote Little Miss Sunshine, and he's got this video on YouTube where he talks about structure.
- 40:43Sarah Armstrong: And the ending in particular, and what makes a truly satisfying ending, and I find that quite a helpful thing to look at as well.
- 40:49Sarah Armstrong: So I definitely do think about structure, and I think about it a little bit on the way through, just lightly, and then I sit down and apply it more carefully.
- 40:57Sarah Armstrong: And I often find that it's more or less there already, and I just need to amp it up or- tweak the placement of certain scenes.
- 41:07Tina Strachan: Yeah, it can even help you shorten, like you said, tweak the placement, and sometimes you can realize that, oh, whoopsie, I've Like, all my points are there, but this one just took a really long time to get there.
- 41:16Tina Strachan: And that's when you just can go back and have a look at those chapters and think can one go, or can they be shortened?" That's right.
- 41:22Tina Strachan: Can you get rid of Hobart, is it sarah, thank you so much for joining me today on The Book Deal Podcast.
- 41:29Tina Strachan: Congratulations on your new book, The Wave.
- 41:32Tina Strachan: Out Probably by the time this goes to air, it'll probably be out in stores.
- 41:36Tina Strachan: Everyone grab yourself a copy.
- 41:37Tina Strachan: Thank you so much for sharing all that wonderful advice today, Sarah.
- 41:41Sarah Armstrong: Great.
- 41:41Sarah Armstrong: Thank you so much for having me, Tina.
- 41:43Tina Strachan: Anytime.
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