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- 0:05Hello and welcome to MythMakers.
- 0:07MythMakers is the podcast for fantasy fans and fantasy
- 0:11creators brought to you by the Oxford Centre for Fantasy.
- 0:15My name is Julia Golding and
- 0:18today we have one of our sidecasts as we take an author's journey through The Lord of the
- 0:24Rings.
- 0:25And as an author, I'm looking at what I think J.R.R.
- 0:30Tolkien is doing with this story
- 0:32from the point of view of craft.
- 0:34We've got quite a long way through because we have reached
- 0:37chapter nine in book four of The Two Towers.
- 0:43And the chapter title is Shelob's Lair.
- 0:47So we're in
- 0:48for a very dark time indeed.
- 0:51Now, this chapter is relatively short.
- 0:55And if you're looking at it
- 0:56structurally, it is structured by the journey.
- 1:00They approach and go into the tunnel.
- 1:04They have
- 1:05this nightmarish time inside the tunnel.
- 1:08There's a kind of false dawn and a final battle on the
- 1:14other side of the tunnel.
- 1:16So it's basically in those three blocks.
- 1:20Before we get to the tunnel,
- 1:22though, how the chapter starts is we have this kind of nightmarish landscape that Tolkien is
- 1:28describing as they reach the top of the stairs.
- 1:31And what I want to sort of draw out here is,
- 1:34notice how he is depriving us of so much.
- 1:38This whole chapter is about deprivation until the
- 1:41point at which light bursts in.
- 1:43It's that contrast which is key.
- 1:46And so we have an opening paragraph
- 1:49describing a place that has no colour, other than sort of grey and black, no sound, and even
- 1:57the view is shut out.
- 1:59So it's like we're entering into this grey box.
- 2:03What we do get is smell.
- 2:06and that smell which becomes synonymous with a spider and with malice is key in this chapter.
- 2:15So when they get to the tunnel entrance and we have a very ominous note here because Gollum
- 2:20is speaking softly.
- 2:21It's a very sinister touch.
- 2:24A whispering villain is in many ways far more
- 2:29sinister than one who shouts at you.
- 2:31If you think about how Voldemort, for example, is characterized,
- 2:37it's that high whispery voice that is used.
- 2:42The person who bellows orders at you and shouts is
- 2:45far less scary.
- 2:47We have in this particular passage a rare editorial sort of interpolation.
- 2:56So we are told something that Frodo and Sam are not.
- 3:02So Gollum says where they are, but he did not speak its name.
- 3:08And then the editorial touch here is Torek Ungol Shelob's lair.
- 3:14Actually, Torek Ungol means, in translation, Tunnel of the Spider.
- 3:20Now obviously, because they speak a bit of Elvish, if he'd said that, it sort of connects
- 3:29back to that missed moment in the Faramir section where they talk about the Ungol is
- 3:36mentioned and nobody picks up on it.
- 3:38Here it's sort of better handled because they don't know the name of the tunnel.
- 3:43If Gollum had said, oh yeah, we're going down the tunnel of the spider, they'd say, what
- 3:48do you mean?
- 3:50down there.
- 3:50So they withhold that knowledge.
- 3:53But the conceit is that this is put together
- 3:59afterwards by Frodo and with the help of the other hobbits and his friends.
- 4:04So that editor
- 4:06in that framing device is, of course, the later Frodo, but we're not told he survives at this
- 4:11point.
- 4:12So that's just what's going on there, a sort of a nice bit of meta framing.
- 4:19What I like here as well, just before we enter the tunnel, is the way that Gollum, who disappears
- 4:24shortly, is still doing a wonderful deflection of what he's really up to by playing the martyr.
- 4:32He tries to make everybody, particularly Frodo, feel that he is the victim.
- 4:37So he has a final
- 4:39flourish of his full wonderful Gollumness.
- 4:45Now we get a line break before we actually
- 4:47embark and then in fact it's done with drawing a deep breath they passed inside.
- 4:54It's in
- 4:55they go.
- 4:56The weird thing about this section, a weird memory of it coming up in an English
- 5:02exam of all things where we had to comment on his passage of English prose.
- 5:09And I came
- 5:10across this and it really threw me because I already knew the passage really well and
- 5:15it's the first time I'd ever found that.
- 5:17So whenever I read that, my own association
- 5:20takes me back to that young person of, I suppose I was 16, writing their O level exam.
- 5:28And
- 5:28even then what I remember writing about is how this passage of description is noteworthy
- 5:35for all the things it takes away from you.
- 5:39So how does he do that?
- 5:41Well, the first of
- 5:42all is Tolkien has been ringing the sort of similarity between places all the way through.
- 5:50Here, what he reaches for is Moria.
- 5:52The last time they were somewhere so dark was in Moria.
- 5:56But of course, they had the fellowship with them at that time.
- 5:59And Tolkien goes on to say, there, there were airs moving and echoes and a sense of space.
- 6:08Here, the air was still, stagnant, heavy, and sound fell dead.
- 6:18So if you look at the structure there, you've got this mirroring structure.
- 6:22Over there, it was like this, but here it's like that.
- 6:26And this chapter is full of these mirrors between light and darkness, but this one is
- 6:32between two kinds of darkness.
- 6:35And I really liked the touch here that he makes you think of what the space around you is.
- 6:40And there's a kind of revving up Tolkien's prose here.
- 6:45It's really worth going back and reading the way through because he sort of starts
- 6:52going into this language about how it was veritable darkness.
- 6:59And it ends with this,
- 7:00this little paragraph ends with this phrase, night always had been and always would be
- 7:09and night was all.
- 7:11There's a vegetarian cadence to that.
- 7:14There is a religious cadence to it too.
- 7:17It feels like a kind of litany.
- 7:20Um, so sort of very heightened language here.
- 7:25What is this doing as an author?
- 7:26Well, I think it's underlining again and again, and yet again, and I'll do it a
- 7:31bit more for you as well, that this is an extraordinarily dark, tough place.
- 7:39I'm going to tell you it every way I possibly can.
- 7:42bleak air.
- 7:44And that's why I think we can really remember it for that.
- 7:48If I had asked you,
- 7:51what do you remember about She Loves Lair?
- 7:53One of the, you might have said the smell
- 7:55and it was dark.
- 7:56And we really are plunged by the way the language kind of wraps around
- 8:01us in the same way as the experience is wrapping around the characters.
- 8:07So whilst we've got the sort of description of just the bleak, you know, the darkness
- 8:13and the smell, we also have got the way the characters respond to it in the way that their
- 8:19own senses are being stripped away.
- 8:21It's like a cumulative effect.
- 8:25And it sort of builds
- 8:25and it builds.
- 8:27I'm looking at page 327 for those of you who are reading along with me.
- 8:32And we build and it builds until this point where they almost break with it.
- 8:36But how long was it?
- 8:38How much more of this would they have to endure or could they endure?
- 8:44So he doesn't say that at the beginning.
- 8:47He's leading us through and he's putting that question in at the point where we are kind
- 8:52of feeling it's got too much as well.
- 8:55Don't forget, if you're writing, to add in your foreshadowing.
- 9:00and where we get it here is this extremely creepy hint of the long tentacles or hanging growths
- 9:08perhaps when i was reading this because i've been doing a lot of screenwriting recently
- 9:13it reminded me of how you would structure a horror sequence
- 9:18um or a passage from dante one of the circles of hell because there is this feeling of it gets bad
- 9:26And it gets even worse and it gets worse again.
- 9:28There's this sort of build and then we're coming to it.
- 9:32But then there's also false relief before the really big scare.
- 9:37It's like a breadcrumb trail that we are led on.
- 9:41So here we go.
- 9:42And still the scent grew.
- 9:44It grew until almost it seemed to them that smell was the only clear sense left to them.
- 9:53And that was for their torment.
- 9:56that's Dante Dante moment the things that happen to the circles of hell is that the one thing
- 10:04becomes your torment the one thing you can experience is your so it's a very bleak place
- 10:10we have reached so how do the hobbits respond to this well one of the things I really want to
- 10:16highlight here is this tender relationship between Frodo and Sam.
- 10:24They respond by moving together
- 10:27and holding hands.
- 10:29There's something innocent, something human about this.
- 10:34And also, as much as
- 10:36Peter Jackson does many things right, he puts Frodo here alone.
- 10:41That's not how it happens in
- 10:42the book.
- 10:43They are there together.
- 10:45And the reason why that is important is Frodo here is
- 10:51that maturity of Frodo that's absent from the film.
- 10:55He's going to have an amazing moment of
- 10:59being a brave hobbit and putting them together.
- 11:02He feels responsible for Sam is part of that.
- 11:06so we get the underlining after that that the reek and the malice are one and we reach this
- 11:13beat of the most intense physical expression of as they reach this opening from which the smell
- 11:23seems to emanate and this is where you get the horror sequence because passing that they think
- 11:32okay, they're not exactly relaxing, but they think the worst is behind them.
- 11:40And this is what you do before you give the jump scare.
- 11:43You know, it's the sort of you go into the
- 11:45room, it's actually empty, but then you see the reflection of the creepy clown in the mirror.
- 11:51You know, it's that.
- 11:52You stack it up like that.
- 11:53You don't just open the door onto the creepy clown.
- 11:56That is more scary because we're anticipating something awful happening.
- 12:03We get them calling for Gollum or Smeagol.
- 12:07Frodo is kindly still trying to call him Smeagol.
- 12:12And then in this deprivation chapter, we're now deprived of him.
- 12:19There was no answer,
- 12:22not an echo, not even a tremor of the air.
- 12:26And of course, Sam goes straight to the point,
- 12:30really gone this time, I fancy.
- 12:33I don't think Frodo disagrees with him.
- 12:34Frodo has always been
- 12:36saying, if his force is force.
- 12:38So yeah, they realize they have been left.
- 12:41And this is what
- 12:42all of those fears have been adding up to.
- 12:47But they still don't quite know the whole of it, do they?
- 12:52Because at this point, when they're abandoned, alone, and they are without any of their senses,
- 13:00except this very distressing one of smell left to them,
- 13:04that's when we get some of them creeping back in along with Shelob.
- 13:11It's worth looking at the architecture of how Shelob approaches.
- 13:15First of all, we get sound.
- 13:18So sound comes back into the picture.
- 13:20And it's not a reassuring sound.
- 13:22It's a gurgling, bubbling with a venomous hiss.
- 13:29and they are in pitch darkness
- 13:33and Sam touches,
- 13:34so we've got touch,
- 13:35he touches his blade,
- 13:37which he got from the barrow,
- 13:38which Tom Bombadil gave him
- 13:41on that previous experience
- 13:43of a dark and scary moment.
- 13:46And this, by connected thoughts,
- 13:49leads him to remember the light.
- 13:52It's worth just reading that
- 13:53because it shows how Tolkien works.
- 13:57So first of all, Sam thinks, I wish old Tom was near us now.
- 14:02Then it's like he's almost invoked the memory of Tom.
- 14:06Then as he stood, darkness about him and a blackness of despair and anger in his heart,
- 14:13it seemed to him he saw a light, a light in his mind,
- 14:18almost unbearably bright at first as a sun ray to the eyes of one long hidden in a windowless pit.
- 14:25Then the light became colour.
- 14:27So we've got colour coming back in.
- 14:29Green, gold, silver, white,
- 14:32all the colours that aren't there.
- 14:35Far off, as in a little picture drawn by elven fingers,
- 14:39he saw the Lady Galadriel standing on the grass in Lorien, and gifts were in her hand.
- 14:46Again, it feels like a religious moment.
- 14:49The touch on the sword leads to the thought of Tom,
- 14:52which leads to the thought of light.
- 14:54It is like the answer to a prayer in a way, which
- 14:58leads us to the Lady Galadriel and the memory of the star glass.
- 15:04So in a way we've been
- 15:05led down into darkness and we're being led back up to a memory of light.
- 15:12And Frodo, who
- 15:13is overwhelmed by this malice, when Sam prompts him, he says, and now indeed light alone can
- 15:20help us.
- 15:23The prose of the passage that follows as he pulls out the star glass comes as a
- 15:27huge relief.
- 15:28You've got to remember this mirroring effect in this chapter.
- 15:31So we had that sort
- 15:32of heaviness of the descent into the tunnel.
- 15:37Now we've got this lifting up into the light
- 15:40and it builds beautifully.
- 15:42It doesn't come all at once.
- 15:46Slowly his hand went to his bosom
- 15:48And slowly, so that's repetition of slowly there, he held aloft the file of Galadriel.
- 15:54For a moment it glimmered, faint as a rising star struggling in heavy earthward mists.
- 16:01You've got to earn this moment.
- 16:04It's all the better when it comes if it's earned.
- 16:07And then, as its power waxed and hope grew in Frodo's mind, it began to burn and kindled to a silver flame.
- 16:17minute heart of dazzling light
- 16:21as though Earendil had himself come down
- 16:23from the high sunset paths
- 16:26with the last Silmaril upon his brow.
- 16:31So it's a pinprick of light
- 16:36but it associates itself with one of the greatest stories
- 16:41Earendil and the Silmaril
- 16:44and who is the star in the sky.
- 16:47That's where one of the Silmarils ends up.
- 16:50So it's both small and vast.
- 16:55And this prompts Frodo to sort of cry out in Elvish,
- 17:01Ea Erendil Elion Ancalima.
- 17:05Sorry if you're a pure speaker out there, that's my approximation.
- 17:11and Tolkien himself links this to a line of Anglo-Saxon poetry
- 17:18that started off this whole Middle Earth project.
- 17:23A line which I really need Simon Horobin here to read
- 17:25because he does it beautifully.
- 17:27But in his letters, he mentions it's derived at a long remove
- 17:34from Eäla Eärendil Engla Beorthast,
- 17:39sorry about my old English pronunciation,
- 17:42which is from an old English poem, Christ.
- 17:45And it was that mention of Eärendil there
- 17:49that led Tolkien to write a poem about Middle-earth,
- 17:55which in turn led him to following his philological interest
- 18:01and the rest is Middle-earth history.
- 18:04So, it is a moment charged with all sorts of weight.
- 18:10Remember the discussion in the last chapter about how they connect to tales?
- 18:15We understand that what we're witnessing is not a small story of two hobbits.
- 18:21It is a story that connects these larger tales and has gone back to one of the greatest myths and legends history of Middle-earth.
- 18:29because of course Erendil is Elrond's father.
- 18:32So he's both a mythic and a historical figure.
- 18:37So there is lots going on.
- 18:39This is what I love about looking deep, deeply into Lord of the Rings.
- 18:43And what I hope you're also enjoying is how it feels like you,
- 18:47if you do scratch the surface, you don't reach, you know, some cheap surface.
- 18:51You reach further depths.
- 18:54There is yet more beneath the surface.
- 18:58and we have this sort of summation here frodo gazed in wonder at this marvelous gift
- 19:04that he had so long carried not guessing its full worth and potency so he has touched the
- 19:12file of gladiol before and it helped him drive a of the black rider but this is the first time
- 19:19it's really shone out in this way and here we've got that old adage of chekhov's gun if you
- 19:26give a gun in the first act you must fire it by the third and also the that elvish phrase
- 19:36is experienced by frodo as another voice speaking through him it's it's like a counter to the malice
- 19:43from shelog so it is a sort of channel for the goodness that's why the light shines brightly
- 19:50in his hand and perhaps that's a sense of a kind of spiritual quality in him where powers beyond
- 19:57him are using him or helping him perhaps we should say so unfortunately what this beautiful light
- 20:05reveals is a horrendous spider-like creature um and the first thing that is noticed is the compound
- 20:15eyes.
- 20:16So the point is made, I think Tolkien pointed this out, that Shelob is spider-like,
- 20:24not a spider, because I don't think spiders have these kind of eyes.
- 20:28But anyway,
- 20:30scary enough, we know what he's getting at.
- 20:32But seeing this actually gives Frodo his bravest
- 20:38moment since the barrow.
- 20:40We've had the barrow just sort of evoked in Sam touching the sword
- 20:46that he got there.
- 20:49And he does hear what he did back in the barrow.
- 20:55He chooses not to run.
- 20:58He actually turns and says, running is no use.
- 21:03and we get a heroic climbing of the language describing this little hobbit's moment
- 21:09it falls on page 330 if you're following along in a book
- 21:15and again it's slow he's not this sort of superman type thing who's just able to
- 21:22whip into action he has to fight against his instinct to run
- 21:27Galadriel he called and gathering his courage he lifted up the file once more
- 21:34and so it goes on and then you get this wonderful image of him then holding the star aloft that's
- 21:41the file and the bright sword advanced that's the sword sting Frodo hobbit of the Shire
- 21:50walked steadily down to meet the eyes.
- 21:54It's his greatest moments in some ways.
- 21:59He has many great moments, but this is pure pluck.
- 22:04And it's no surprise that Sam's response to this
- 22:07is to connect again to the story making,
- 22:10which they were considering in the previous chapter.
- 22:14He says that elves should make a song about it
- 22:18and he hopes to live to hear it,
- 22:20which of course is why The Fields of Cormalin is such a,
- 22:24it's the crescendo of the book for Tolkien.
- 22:28Okay, so going back to this idea that Tolkien is structuring this like a horror film,
- 22:33but we get now the false escape.
- 22:38So there's several of them in quick succession, actually.
- 22:41So they run because Shelob has backed away from the light
- 22:47and they hit the webs over the exit.
- 22:51And Sam tries three times, rule of three, to get through and fails
- 22:56and says, oh, it's, you know, no use.
- 22:59And then this is where Sting is brought out.
- 23:02Sting is the finer weapon and the lineage of it is evoked here
- 23:10because Frodo says that in the dark ravines of Beleriand,
- 23:16there were spiders and this was made in Gondolin, which is, it's all part of that early history
- 23:22of Middle-earth.
- 23:24So, you know, they, the people who made it, the elves that made it would
- 23:27know of this kind of web.
- 23:30And here he is acting as mentor to Sam, the comforting commanding
- 23:37officer.
- 23:39He gives him orders.
- 23:39Here, take the star glass.
- 23:42Do not be afraid.
- 23:43Really important.
- 23:46telling Sam to not be afraid.
- 23:48Hold it up and watch.
- 23:51I don't think he means just watch me do this brave thing.
- 23:53He means keep watch.
- 23:56And of course his sword manages to get through the webs.
- 24:01But Frodo, for having been this brave person who faced the danger,
- 24:07forgets his own wisdom because he is struck by a fey mood.
- 24:15that's never a good thing.
- 24:17It's a sign of losing it in Tolkien.
- 24:21He thinks that it's just a short race, a sprinter's course,
- 24:24and he would be through.
- 24:25He feels he's almost at the end of his journey.
- 24:28And it's Sam who is now the one who is wary.
- 24:31And you get, just before another ominous line break,
- 24:37the narrator agreeing with Sam that she, Shelob,
- 24:41had many exits from her lair.
- 24:45Now, you would expect it to go straight on at this point.
- 24:48But one of the things that you notice in horror films or any sort of scary passage in that kind of screenplay situation is you sometimes do a cutaway to make the suspense even more excruciating.
- 25:05It's the filmmaker, or in this case the novelist, torturing the reader a little bit.
- 25:10And here we go back, we cycle back, we get the history of Shelot and how she relates to Ungoliant.
- 25:19Ungoliant, the spider, absorbed the light of the trees, the sort of wonderful light of the Undying Lands,
- 25:29destroyed that age of one of the early ages of um middle earth this spider hates the light so
- 25:37the lesser offspring but sure she's pretty bad it's a bit like melkor to sauron or morgoroth
- 25:45to sauron it's that kind of thing that the mythic characters are even worse but we've got a pretty
- 25:50bad one present in our time as well and we don't just get the the sort of description of
- 26:00how she came here we also get a sort of description of of what she's about an evil thing in spite of
- 26:08form and Tolkien actually knew that this character was intriguing lots of people and he has a sort of
- 26:16letter where he says it's fine if people think that his
- 26:24she-lob was down to the fact that he was bitten by a tarantula when he was little in South Africa.
- 26:31But he does go on to say that he doesn't actually have anything against spiders and he rescues them
- 26:37from the bath when he finds them there.
- 26:39So yes, I think all of us would be scared of a spider if we
- 26:45were bitten by a tarantula.
- 26:47So we can allow that to happen, but I don't think it was any particular
- 26:51phobia of Tolkien.
- 26:53At least he's saying it isn't.
- 26:56Anyway, so that's the spider, spider-like thing.
- 27:00But we also get Gollum's point of view and what he's been thinking, how he's been experiencing
- 27:08this journey with Frodo and Sam.
- 27:11So remember our framing device.
- 27:13This is a story put together
- 27:15later.
- 27:16So let's imagine in this sort of creation of how this story is written, Frodo and Sam are
- 27:24saying what Gollum thought, or it's just straightforwardly the narrator talking.
- 27:30But we see his point of view, how he's been plotting and how he thinks he can use the
- 27:38spider.
- 27:38There's this triangle here.
- 27:40So we've got Gollum thinks he can use Shelob.
- 27:44Shelob
- 27:44understands Gollum, Sauron thinks he can use Shelob and Shelob thinks she can use Sauron.
- 27:52So there's this sort of little smug little triangle of evil using each other.
- 27:57And in the
- 27:57case of Shelob and Sauron, the narrator says, so they both lived, Shelob, Sauron, delighting in
- 28:07their own devices and feared no assault, no wrath, not any end of their wickedness.
- 28:15That goes back
- 28:15to the idea that evil cannot imagine what it's like to be the other.
- 28:21That's their fatal flaw.
- 28:24Sauron assumes that Shelob is his pet.
- 28:30She is independently evil.
- 28:34And Gollum is sort of picking
- 28:36up his own he's got his own agenda as well which is to get the ring which is of no interest to
- 28:40Shelob in a way in in that sense Shelob is like the dark version of Tom Bombadil who also had no
- 28:47use for the ring who might have thrown it away because it didn't matter to him anyway with all
- 28:53this going on we go back to Sam who and here we've got that stance where it's like watching
- 29:00an accident happen before you and the powerlessness, the dreamlike dread that you can't stop it.
- 29:08He's seeing his master run off.
- 29:09He sees the spider come between them, but he can't get there.
- 29:12And
- 29:12he's trying to say, it is like a nightmare, isn't it?
- 29:15He's trying to say, watch out.
- 29:17And then Gollum
- 29:20leaps on him.
- 29:22This is necessary, isn't it?
- 29:24Because they've been rubbing up against each other,
- 29:27battling all the way through since he joined them many chapters ago.
- 29:34And they're finally coming to blows.
- 29:37And it's actually an extended fight scene here.
- 29:40A very well-described tussle.
- 29:42Do go back and read it.
- 29:44Action is really hard to describe.
- 29:48And Tolkien does do it very well here,
- 29:49the way he explains where everybody is,
- 29:55how the weight shifts between the two of them.
- 30:02And in fact, Sam resorts to a wrestling trick from the Shire,
- 30:08good old Shire, and falls back on Gollum.
- 30:12And there's this phrase of having a sturdy hobbit land on you,
- 30:16which puts Gollum out of the match.
- 30:20But how does the chapter end?
- 30:23Well, it's got a terrible end.
- 30:26Not terrible as in badly written.
- 30:28I mean, terrible as in
- 30:29frightening.
- 30:31Because by the time Sam has overcome Gollum, he turned back.
- 30:36We just get this sentence, he was too late.
- 30:40And we now have reached the final chapter in this book,
- 30:45which is the choices of Master Samwise.
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