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- 1:34Enjoy today's episode with guest host Jason Buff. Today we are talking with
- 1:40Steve Kaplan, author of the book The Hidden Tools of Comedy. He's also
- 1:44the creator of the HBO Workspace, creator of the HBO New Writers Program.
- 1:49So we'll be talking to Steve in just a second. I really had a
- 1:51great talk with him, and we also add a lot of fun little clips
- 1:53and things in there so that you can really get a feel for the topics
- 1:57we're talking about. Here's my interview with Steve Kaplin. Did you immediately open
- 2:02up a theater company or how that worked well? I actually came to Los
- 2:07Angeles first. Uh. We uh. In New York, we did.
- 2:12We were running this theater called Manhattan Punchline, and we used to do a
- 2:16one act festival every year. So a bunch of people wanted to bring a
- 2:22number of one ax out to Los Angeles, and so that's what originally brought
- 2:27me out there. They I helped them put up this evening of one Axe
- 2:32h and I knew I was going to stay, so I came out.
- 2:36I did a little theater, but then I tried to get a real,
- 2:39you know, big boy pants, grown up job, and it took me
- 2:46a little bit of time, but eventually I hooked up with Chris Albrecht at
- 2:52HBO. I pitched him an idea and uh he he ran with it.
- 2:57And first we did the HBO New I Just Project and that ran for a
- 3:02couple of years, and then he started the Aspen Comedy Festival, and in
- 3:09support of that, with a couple of other people, we opened up a
- 3:14performance space in Los Angeles called the HBO Workspace. It's now being run by
- 3:20Comedy Central. And what we did was we helped facilitate their search for comedians
- 3:27and comics, and at the same time, we were producing shows and showcasing
- 3:32people both for HBO executives for them to take a look at and also just
- 3:40uh to uh kind of be an asset and a service to the community.
- 3:47So uh so that's what originally That's what I originally did in Los Angeles,
- 3:53and then I got involved in management um talent management, and I uh,
- 4:04after doing that for a couple of years, I realized, Hey, I'm
- 4:06no good at this because did you tell your clients that one day? Well,
- 4:14well, either eventually eventually the clients that were left to me. Uh,
- 4:18you know, I I told. But the terrible thing about I wasn't
- 4:26an ancient. I was a manager. And the terrible thing about being a
- 4:30manager, uh is that you're you know, especially for me, because I
- 4:34took everything very personally. So if somebody you said this person is not good
- 4:38for this job, um, oh I don't like the script. I I
- 4:41felt devastated. It was like, um, it was like getting broke up
- 4:45with by a girl every every every week. Uh. And when and when
- 4:48clients leave left me, Um, it was really like getting broke up with
- 4:53a girl, especially when they started the conversation. You know, Steve,
- 4:57I like you as a person, and I said, you know, I
- 5:00I when I was in my dating years, I used to hear that a
- 5:03lot. So I realized that that wasn't that wasn't my metire. It was
- 5:11kind of a zig when I should have zagged. Uh and along the way
- 5:17I had run into a guy and uh uh and and a funny you know,
- 5:26funny story. He was he was showcasing a show and and I happened
- 5:30to leave in the middle of the show because it was it was not very
- 5:34good. And and amazingly enough, um years later he uh got in touch
- 5:41with me to take a look at a script. Uh. So I I
- 5:45looked at a script and I gave him notes and again I I was more
- 5:50cruel than kind. Uh. And amazingly enough, a couple of years later
- 5:55he said to me, um, and this is when I was really I
- 5:59was. I was about to say this, this whole management thing was that
- 6:03move? Uh And he said, I'm working with Robert McKay, and I
- 6:08think you could do for comedy what Robert McKay does for story. And he
- 6:14said, have you ever taught comedy to writers? And I said, well,
- 6:16I started out teaching comedy to actors at my theater company. Um,
- 6:24and I've worked on a lot of scripts with a lot of playwrights, and
- 6:28I assume that I can this, this will translate over to writers. And
- 6:33from there it from that little seed, a mighty oak grew. Now I
- 6:42mean it seems such a for for somebody who doesn't understand the concept of breaking
- 6:48up comedy and you know, seeing what's going on and why it's working and
- 6:54why people are are laughing at something. What was kind of like that first
- 6:58step into teaching comedy. What were the first kind of like obvious things that
- 7:02that you found that people needed to to understand about comedy. Well, I
- 7:08mean, well you should understand that the theater company that I was running,
- 7:12um UH, that I started with two other actors, Manhattan Punchline, was
- 7:17a theater completely devoted to comedy. So that's all we did. We produced
- 7:21comedy plays, we um, We showcased improv groups. Michael Patrick King,
- 7:27who later went on to write Sex in the City and Two Brooke Girls was
- 7:30was was one of the leaders of this uh improv group along with um,
- 7:35you know Don Morevero, who's now a very well known stand up comic.
- 7:41We produced late night shows with stand ups including Rita Rudner Jane Anderson who's now
- 7:48a very famous playwright. Uh. And so that's all we did. And
- 7:56the first thing I noticed about comedy is that it's fucking hard, and it's
- 8:01it's elusive. Would I would be producing a show and I would be standing
- 8:07in the back of the audience, and the show that was a riotous hit
- 8:11on Thursday was met with crickets on Sunday, and the actors would come off
- 8:16stage and they would say, what a terrible audience. But I was standing
- 8:22in the audience, and I wasn't terrible, and I was prepared to enjoy
- 8:26it. I might not laugh out loud as much as people who hadn't seen
- 8:30the show, but I I started noticing differences. I started noticing that there
- 8:35was a different approach to the material, a slight differentiation in how the actors
- 8:43were meeting the material night by night. And that's what started me on the
- 8:50exploration that that became a forty week master class, which then became a weekend
- 8:58workshop, which then became a book, which translated into Chinese, because God
- 9:03knows you need some funny your Chinese. Well you know you've arrived, yes,
- 9:07um uh, and and it's going to be translated into French. So
- 9:13so now we can be rude when we're funny. Maybe I shouldn't say,
- 9:16finally the French will have commedy. I'm su I'm supper. Yeah, I'm
- 9:20really I'm supposed to be U supposed to be going to Paris in April,
- 9:26so so hopefully they will listen to that part of the podcast. Well,
- 9:30we have a big French you know, listening exactly. So So I started
- 9:35to notice that that there were certain certain things that that were for the most
- 9:43part unrecognized or or not thought to be uh important or or or vital uh.
- 9:54And these became what I called the hidden tools of common will be right
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- 10:09I mean, all the actors and the playwrights that I was working with,
- 10:11you know, they had all gone to college or conservatory, and they all
- 10:15knew Uda Hogan and Stanislavsky uh and and great uh playwriting techniques. But but
- 10:24there were certain things that they they were not aware of that I started to
- 10:31become aware of only because I was standing the back and and oftentimes I was
- 10:35directing a play, and I would start to notice that that there were things
- 10:41that they did that decreased the comedy and things that they did that increased the
- 10:46comedy. So I mean, for instance, um, one of the things
- 10:52that that kills comedies if if you know the actor knows too much if the
- 10:58act you know, in in acting classes is called anticipating, but what it
- 11:03really is is the actor is too aware of um, of what's happening,
- 11:09what's going on, too in fact too smart. Uh So. So one
- 11:16of the things that um, that I started to realize that were there,
- 11:22there were these principles that had not been taught anywhere, or for the most
- 11:28part, had not been taught, and that great comics and comedians either picked
- 11:33up or new by by instinct, um, but that could be analyzed and
- 11:43uh and presented and taught uh to people who hadn't spent their entire childhoods uh
- 11:50listening to all the George Carlin and and Richard Pryor albums for instance. Right,
- 11:56and oh and you would like to hear one of these, Yeah,
- 12:00that would be that would be helpfully is okay? Well this podcast? Okay?
- 12:05Uh So, So there's there's the um, there's the dynamic of straight
- 12:11line wavy line. And that's that's my terminology for it, which which basically
- 12:16means that rather than a straight man in a comic, everybody thinks that you
- 12:20know, if you see a duo, there's a comic a funny person doing
- 12:24funny things and a straight man who's just kind of or a straight woman who's
- 12:28just kind of setting things up. And I came to realize that that dynamic
- 12:35is false, that it's not about a funny guy doing funny things and other
- 12:39people just kind of setting them up. It's really about somebody who is blind
- 12:48to the problem or creating the problem, and somebody who's struggling with the problem
- 12:52but unable to solve it because they're they're flawed. They're they're just a flawed
- 12:58human being. Way when, for instance, when John Klee started Monty Python,
- 13:03he said that when they started Monty Python, he thought that comedy was
- 13:07watching somebody do something funny. What they came to realize is comedy is watching
- 13:15somebody watch somebody do something funny. Yes, you know, it's a man's
- 13:22life in England's Mountain screen. That's what I hear. That I'm going to
- 13:26stop this sketch down and that there's anymore of this. I'm going to stop
- 13:28the whole program. I thought it was supposed to be about teeth anyway,
- 13:31what I am going to do something about teeth? I'm rustic, man,
- 13:37Alon not sleeping with that producer again. Comedy is the person who is kind
- 13:48of like us, struggling with some idiot, so that if you put Jerry
- 13:54Seinfeld and Kramer in a room, yes, it looks like Kramer is doing
- 13:58all the funny stuff, but without Jerry being a human being kind of perplexed
- 14:05and amused and confused by Cramer, there's no comedy has life on the Red
- 14:15Planet. It's killing me. I can't eat, I can't sleep. All
- 14:20I can see is that giant red sun in the shape of a chicken.
- 14:26What did you go down to the Kenny Rodgers and complaint? Oh? They
- 14:28gave me the heave hole. You know, I don't think that Kenny Rodgers
- 14:31has any idea. What's going on down them? What are you doing?
- 14:39That's tomato juice that looked like milk to me, Jerry, my rods and
- 14:50cones ross I got say, I gotta move in with you, Jerry.
- 15:00I don't know, Craig. My concern is that living together after a while,
- 15:09I might start to get on each other's nerves a little. Listen to
- 15:15me. I got a great idea. Now you're a heavy sleeper, right,
- 15:16Why don't we just switch apartments? Or I could sleep in the park.
- 15:22You can knock these walls down, make it an eight room luxury,
- 15:24Sweet Jerry, these are a load buried walls. They're not gonna come down.
- 15:31Yeah, that's no good. You have to drive that place out of
- 15:35business. How are you gonna do that like we did in the sixties taking
- 15:39it to the streets. That's one of the things that I, you know,
- 15:45mentioning that I always remember, Like Conan O'Brien, one of the things
- 15:48that makes his skits so funny is having something completely insane happening, and then
- 15:54you don't really laugh until the camera cuts back to Conan's reaction to it.
- 15:58Exactly. So if you if you start, if you watch sitcoms, good
- 16:03sitcoms, you'll notice that that the the comedy, really, the comedy is
- 16:07the comedy circuit is completed when there's a reaction to the craziness, not just
- 16:14the craziness. Uh so, uh so, what seems to be the east
- 16:19part the straight man really is essential to comedy. And if you watch a
- 16:26good SNL sketch, and there aren't you know, not every SNL sketch is
- 16:29good, but a good SNL sketch is the comedy is the human being in
- 16:34the equation. It's the it's the person who's being weirded out by the weird
- 16:41stuff that's happening, and it's only underscored by the idiot who's not paying any
- 16:45attention. Right, So uh there. I mean, just the other night
- 16:51on SNL there were you know, Adam Driver was on him. Yeah.
- 16:56I guess he didn't get such great reviews. Somebody said, well, it's
- 17:00not Trump SNL bad, but but there was a there was a there was
- 17:04a great Aladdin sketch in which he's flying on the magic carpet and um uh
- 17:14and uh the uh, the girl I can't remember. I think it's um
- 17:18Cecily Strong. I think I think that's who it was. Uh, is
- 17:22on the magic carpet and first a bird flies into her and then a bomb
- 17:29drops in hercus there over Syria, and she keeps on getting weirded out,
- 17:33and then she keeps on trying to get back into the romantic moment. And
- 17:36that is so human. Uh. And meanwhile, uh, Jeff, you
- 17:41know, Aladdin, as played by Adam Driver is completely oblivious. So that's
- 17:48the perfect example of straight line wavy line. Somebody who's on a straight track,
- 17:52like has blinders on blind to the problem or creating the problem, and
- 17:57somebody else who's struggling the problem. But because they're they're what we call a
- 18:03non hero, unable to solve the problem. And a non hero is another
- 18:08is another thing that or principle that we talk about in which it's not about
- 18:15being a ridiculous person, a clown, you know, a silly clown.
- 18:22It's really just about somebody who lacks some, if not all, the essential
- 18:26tools and skills with which to win. So sometimes the most basic skill with
- 18:32which to win is simply knowing. So so one of the best directions you
- 18:38can ever give in comedy is don't know so much don't know, And what
- 18:42that means is that if something happens, don't because you've read the script and
- 18:48you know what's happening on this page and what's going to happen on the next
- 18:51page, don't react like you've got it. I understand it. Be confused,
- 18:57let there be doubt. Doubt is the friend of comedy. Being unsure
- 19:06is the friend of comedy, and being sure being certain about things is dramatic.
- 19:11It just becomes being self reflective is a dramatic moment. And what we
- 19:17found out is that these principles aren't just here's how you be funny. It's
- 19:21really about here's how you can modulate the levels of comedy or drama in a
- 19:27scene. You want a character to be more dramatic, make them, give
- 19:32them more skills, make them more empathetic, more sensitive, more kind,
- 19:37more knowing, make them, make them less comic. Take away those skills.
- 19:42Create a comedy, create a strong straight line wavy line relationship, create
- 19:48a dramatic moment. Have everybody make you know, make eye contact and be
- 19:53empathetic with each other, and have them have them share the scene, will
- 19:59be right back after a word from our sponsor, and now back to the
- 20:06show. So those kinds of things don't apply just to comedy, but you
- 20:11can actually modulate the amount of comedy and drama in a scene by increasing or
- 20:18decreasing these principles. When you're talking about you know, you would see one
- 20:22show and then you'd see the same show and it wasn't funny for whatever reason.
- 20:26Were those improv shows or were they literally saying the same things in that
- 20:30In that case, what's happening is the actors will subtly begin to adjust their
- 20:40performance so they look less ridiculous because nobody in the world wants to look like
- 20:44an idiot. And so in a comedy, sometimes the characters are doing idiotic
- 20:49things, but the actors will subtly, subtly, just make an adjustment so
- 20:56that it's a little bit more understandable, appropriate, logical, and rational.
- 21:06And so sometimes that's why a script is Sometimes the funny is the first time
- 21:08the actors get around the table to read it, because the actors aren't aware
- 21:11of how stupid they're going to sound when they say this line. Once they
- 21:17understand how stupid they sound, they either make it sound stupid or and again
- 21:22to put on a mask to protect themselves, or they make it sound just
- 21:27slightly less stupid. Here's an example. It's hard. It's hard to think
- 21:33of a film or TV show where you can see somebody anticipating, although you
- 21:38know, they used to talk about how they would have to trick the three
- 21:42Stooges into not knowing when the pie is coming, because if they knew when
- 21:48the pie was coming, it wouldn't be funny. So what they would say
- 21:51is that, okay, we're gonna hit you on three, one, two,
- 21:53and they would hit him on two. They would do everything they could,
- 21:56and these guys were hit with thousands of pies, so they would go
- 22:00to great lengths to try to fool them when the pie was coming, because
- 22:03if they knew when the pie was coming, it wouldn't just be that they
- 22:07would flinch, they would subtly react that, oh, I'm going to get
- 22:12hit. But a better example is, uh is like bad comedy like,
- 22:18um, I'm not a fan of late Jerry Lewis. I love early Jerry
- 22:22Lewis because if you watch early Jerry Lewis like at Home in the Army.
- 22:27I think the first movie he made with Dean Martin, he is so innocent,
- 22:32so sweet, so unknowing. But later, when when you know the
- 22:37French told him he's a genius, he's he just twists himself into a pretzel,
- 22:42as though as though to say, if you just looked at me,
- 22:45you wouldn't see an idiot. So I'm gonna have to pretend I'm an idiot.
- 22:51Uh So you know, just think of any bad comedy you know,
- 22:53um, something bad with Rob Schneider, Grown Ups two in which people are
- 23:02acting are pretending to be idiots. And my point of view, what I
- 23:08always tell writers and actors is that you don't have to pretend we are idiots.
- 23:15I mean, that's who we are. We're human beings. We're we're
- 23:19we're we're you know, these stupid dupasts who are bumbling around this this planet,
- 23:26you know, hurt link through space, you know, making up all
- 23:27sorts of reasons why and we don't know, We just don't know. So
- 23:33so the art of comedy is actually the art of telling the truth about what
- 23:37it's like to be a human. It seems like the moment somebody is trying
- 23:44to intentionally be funny or you see something like you know, you can kind
- 23:48of see that, oh, look they're trying to be funny right now,
- 23:52right is the moment that it just it's not funny at all, you know.
- 23:55And you seem to see that in a lot of these comedies that they're
- 23:56just like, especially let's say whatever Kevin James movie. You know, it's
- 24:02like, okay, we're gonna have this wacky thing and there, let's do
- 24:04all these situations where oh, he's going to be put into this situation,
- 24:08in that situation, and it's just like there's nothing funny about it, maybe
- 24:11for like a five year old, but it just doesn't doesn't work. Oh,
- 24:15well I haven't seen uh Paul Blart Mall Cop two? I have seen
- 24:22it? You have seen it? Yeah? Was it great? It was
- 24:26so good? No, I mean it's it's like I love I love watching
- 24:32bad movies as well as good movies because you get to kind of like put
- 24:34it together and and you know, I mean it just it has a couple
- 24:38of moments. But I mean ask you this. Have you not seen it?
- 24:41Have you seen Hitch? I've seen Hitch Chess with the Smith with What's
- 24:45the difference in Kevin James between Hitch and Paul Blart Mall Cop two. Um,
- 24:52he's got a slight accent and fake teeth, I think is the only
- 24:57difference. That's the only difference. Well, I don't really remember Hitch that
- 25:02well, he wasn't, I mean plays he plays this sweaty guy who wants
- 25:06to marry, who wants to get with a supermodel, Right, I can't.
- 25:11What I remember about Hitch is that he was recognizable. He was like
- 25:19one of us, Okay, and he was a little clumsy, but he
- 25:25but he wasn't such an exaggerated clown that he was no longer recognizable as human,
- 25:32Right, whereas I'm guessing in Mall Cop two, he does things that
- 25:40no, no sentient human being would do. Somebody thought, wouldn't it be
- 25:45funny? If right? Yeah, well, you know most of the movies
- 25:51that you know, and a lot of things, all these situations happened that
- 25:53aren't that really aren't, you know, believable. So I think you're kind
- 25:59of watching it like, oh, that's kind of funny or whatever, but
- 26:00you don't you're not brought into the story. You don't actually believe any of
- 26:06these characters are real, right, you know. So if you look at
- 26:08a movie like um, The Other Guys with Will Farrell and and Mark Wahlberg,
- 26:15there's a moment in which, uh, in which they're walking away from
- 26:21a store and the store explodes, and then they're on the ground and Will
- 26:25Farrell's going, it hurts. They never tell you it hurts. And that's
- 26:30the comedy, is noticing what's around you and being and being aware of the
- 26:37inconsistencies, the absurdities what Dorothy Parker called having a sharp eye and a wild
- 26:42mind. As I can't here yeahs, oh my god, I walk away
- 27:03in movies without flitsy what it explodes behind that there's no way. What bullshit
- 27:10on that? When they flew the Millennium falcon outside of the desk start it
- 27:14was followed by the explosion that was bullshit. Don't you demo star Wars that
- 27:19was all accurate. I've got softishue down. There's no way. I don't
- 27:29have softission down at least. I just want to go somewhere and breastfeed right
- 27:33now. So so when a comic comes out in a club and says uh
- 27:38and says hey you in the front row and starts to make a comment,
- 27:41that's the essence of comedy, which is noticing what's around you and not taking
- 27:47it for granted and seeing the absurdity in it, and and share and and
- 27:52being confused by it, not necessarily knowing all about it and being a dick
- 27:56about it, but but just kind of commenting on it in a way that
- 28:03both expresses what you feel and also questions it and doesn't doesn't quite know what
- 28:08the answer is, which is why a comic is what about that? What's
- 28:15the deal with? It's a question? It's not a statement. Once you're
- 28:18making statements your your your politician, a question is as a comedian, So
- 28:26yeah, I mean, what what do you think is I mean, do
- 28:29you feel like, for example, when I'm writing, I you know,
- 28:33I'm also a writer. Um, A lot of the things great by the
- 28:37way, I love it. It's golden the comedy for me, Like I
- 28:41grew up always seeing things as being comic, you know, And when I
- 28:44was in as early as I can remember, I would be in just situations
- 28:47and just start laughing, and people would even get mad at me because I
- 28:49would talk into somebody and just all their little quirks and things would just like
- 28:53something would come out of that and I'd start laughing and they'd be like,
- 28:56well, what, what's so funny? You know, there's medication to get
- 28:59mad at me? Yeah, well, thank god. And when I when
- 29:03I write, it's like it's impossible even if I mean the stuff that I
- 29:07write is more kind of character driven stuff, but it's the humor just comes
- 29:11out of it. It's like I'm not even trying. And then once you
- 29:14have, once you really feel a character on the page, living and breathing,
- 29:18just the humor just comes out of it without even trying to do anything,
- 29:21just their actions. And I've never looked into it deeper to try and
- 29:25dissect why it's funny, but it just seems like that. It's like,
- 29:27I don't even know why it's funny, but it's funny that when you have
- 29:30like a real character and they do something that you're just like, oh,
- 29:34that's you know, that's that character. You know, that's how they do
- 29:37stuff. Well. In the course, what I say is that the value
- 29:41of the course is not to take what you do and change it entirely.
- 29:45It's not it's not a methodology. It's not here's how you make the sausage.
- 29:48But it's it's a toolbox, and you use tools when something is broken.
- 29:52So if if you're writing and everything's working, great, we'll be right
- 29:57back after a word from our spon answer and now back to the show.
- 30:06Don't look at it, don't say well what is Blake Snyder and and Robert
- 30:11McKee and Steve Kaplan, No, just keep going. But when there's a
- 30:15scene that doesn't work, that's when you can use a tool. Um,
- 30:18that's when you can try to figure out what we teach is what comedy is,
- 30:22how it works, why it works, what's going on when it's not
- 30:26working, and what can you do about it. So when you if you
- 30:30have something that's not working. Then you have some tools to try to figure
- 30:33out and you want the scene to be comic. Um, that's when you
- 30:37can figure out, well, what could I do here? Can I?
- 30:40Can I use a metaphorical relationship? Can I should there be a straight line
- 30:44wavy line relationship. Now, when you look at somebody like Judd Apatow and
- 30:48I just recently watched again this is forty, it just seems like so much
- 30:52of that we're always kind of riding this line between what's kind of going too
- 30:56far, what's going to be something to And you know, with a lot
- 31:00of the comedy podcast too, the comedy is not coming out of people trying
- 31:03to be funny. It's coming out of really difficult situations and people, you
- 31:08know, fighting about things and whatever. What How do you look at that
- 31:11kind of comedy versus all these kind of stupid slapstick kind of you know,
- 31:17silly coms. I mean, my my favorite comedies are the comedies that tell
- 31:19the truth about about people. Now, it could you could tell the truth
- 31:23in a fantastical situation like groundhog Day one of my favorite comedies, but one
- 31:29of my other favorite comedies his forty year Old Virgin and One of the reasons
- 31:33I love forty year old virgin is because they don't make him a ridiculous character.
- 31:38You know, after the poker game, and you know, he's kind
- 31:41of ridiculous. He's he's riding a bike, he's never he's he's he's you
- 31:45know, he's frozen in this adolescence. But after the poker game, he's
- 31:51humiliated. Yes, it is question, are you a virgin? Are you
- 31:56a virgin? Yeah? Yeah, since I was ten, it all makes
- 32:01sense. You're a virgin. I am shot. How does that happen?
- 32:06He's a fucking virgin? All knew? If that makes so much sense?
- 32:08Man, virgin, You guys are hilarious, right, don't be mean.
- 32:14I'm not being mean. I'm trying to help the part now. I'm trying
- 32:15to say. I want to get you laid. Dude, I understand what's
- 32:17going on. Guys. I'm so up your asses the MAGA san Come on,
- 32:34man, you can do better than that. You are so stifend.
- 32:46Come on, Uh, it's gonna be fine. They don't even remember.
- 32:53Those guys are cool and you feel for him. It's not like I It's
- 32:58not like some I don't know Rob Schneider I assume he's a very talented guy.
- 33:02I'm just using Rob. If you were listening to this, I'm just
- 33:06using you as kind of an icon of not good comedy. Without Rob,
- 33:10this is Steve So I mean, they're not just making him some idiot.
- 33:19They're humanizing him. And he goes he rides home. Uh. He he
- 33:23has this primal scream and it's so in touch with true emotions, what we
- 33:29would all be going through. And then he goes back into work and he
- 33:34thinks, maybe I'll just maybe they won't remember it. And yeah, they
- 33:37say, Hi, how you doing, And all of a sudden, everybody's
- 33:40ragging on him, and uh and and uh, you know, loo,
- 33:45let's get the virgin laid and he us not the store. And the thing
- 33:49that made me love the movie was was Paul Rudd running after him, trying
- 33:53to help him. Right, human sweet, Uh, not ridiculous. So
- 34:01they never you know, Yes, there are some outlandish, very very broad
- 34:07things in that movie, but for the most part, it's grounded in a
- 34:10human condition. In the in in What would Happen to Us? Uh,
- 34:16Chris Rock was talking about his evolutionist as a filmmaker, and he was talking
- 34:22about that that he's learned a lot from Louis c. K and that now
- 34:25uh, whereas in the past he would go for any joke possible, but
- 34:30now especially with um his uh I can't remember the name of the movie five
- 34:37Things or top five uh. That he basically said, put somebody in a
- 34:43situation and say what would they do now? And to me, that's the
- 34:47best way to develop a comic premise is you come up with a with a
- 34:52fantastic premise, something that's impossible or implausible, and then put in you know,
- 35:00our typical comic comedy characters and then see what would they do now,
- 35:04what would happen now? And develop it, like you say, through character
- 35:08as opposed to plot. Yeah, it's it's interesting, you know, going
- 35:14back to the forty year forty year old Virgin. One of the things that
- 35:16people forget about that is if you go later in the film, once his
- 35:20relationship with Katherine Keener develops, it actually becomes a very like you know,
- 35:25it's still comic and everything, but it's more like it's a real heartwarming story,
- 35:30you know, and he's you know, showing the dealing with the daughter
- 35:34and all that stuff, you know what I mean. I love I love
- 35:36that scene where he's like, you know, I speak sarcasm too, and
- 35:39he's got you know, he does a magic trick and she's like, do
- 35:42you walk around with the ear in your pocket? You know? I mean,
- 35:45I love those scenes, but they're not like you know, they're they're
- 35:47more of like a drama, you know, it's like a real story.
- 35:51It's and and because they because they don't feel the need to do a joke
- 35:58or a bit every ten seconds. That a favorite team of mine is when
- 36:04he takes the daughter to the planned parenthood the clinic. Now you're all here
- 36:10because you're interested in obtaining birth control. Any questions. Here's a cute story.
- 36:15I came home the other day and he is with his girlfriend in my
- 36:20marital bed doing things that are illegal in Alabama, sex acts right, things
- 36:24that my wife won't do. Okay, did you have a question? How
- 36:29do I get my wife to do that? Does anybody else have a question?
- 36:31My daughter is, for lack of a better word, dumb. How
- 36:37do I stop her menstrual cycle? You want her to stop having a menstrual
- 36:40cycle? I want to stop it, maybe just for a few years.
- 36:44Yeah, I don't think that's a good idea. Does anybody else have a
- 36:47question? I have a question. I think some of the people here might
- 36:52be sexually inexperience. Is it true that if you don't use it, you
- 36:57lose it? Is that a serious question? No, it wasn't. Now,
- 37:01there are a lot of activities that you can engage in without having sex
- 37:07that are both fun and safe. What sort of activities I think everybody wants
- 37:10to know about the activities. Well, instead of having intercourse, you could
- 37:15have outer course. Outer course? Oh what's that? Yeah? What is
- 37:21that? Well? Outer course is anything that isn't vaginal intercourse. I prefer
- 37:27a vaginal intercourse. He really does. Now, there are ways of having
- 37:32sex without intercourse. Let's see. There are things like body rubbing or dry
- 37:38humping. You could try hump. There's masturbation, masturbation, play with yourself,
- 37:44mutual masturbation, play with a friend, deep kissing, there's erotic massage.
- 37:50All that sounds like it would be nice. Oral sex play sounds like
- 37:53my Friday night upset we went to temple. Okay, are there any virgins
- 37:58here who are thinking about having sex for the first time? Wait, so
- 38:05you're a virgin? I tapped that. Oh yeah, you tap that,
- 38:10Seth, what do you think you're cool with your little jew frow? We
- 38:14don't say tap that? What what are you talking about, Seth? You
- 38:17know what, I'm a virgin too, that's we're virgins too. Yeah,
- 38:27no, you know what. It's a it's it's a personal choice. And
- 38:30okay, um, I can't listen to any more of this because it's making
- 38:34me six up by You can get this information on your website. Right.
- 38:37Oh yes, thanks, nice meeting everybody? Any other questions, give me
- 38:40extra large condoms us Seth, you've got a tiny penis, and he's asking
- 38:45more questions than anybody else. But then he's sitting around all these people,
- 38:50all these all the you know, the the kid who thinks he's hot stuff,
- 38:54and and uh, the guy who just wants, you know, his
- 38:58daughter to be here. Can we can we make sure that she doesn't have
- 39:00any sex till she's thirty five? And then on the drive home, um,
- 39:07uh, the daughter just turns to him and says, you're a virgin,
- 39:13right, and he's And rather than pretending, which which some some uh
- 39:20script teachers will teach, will tell you that the key to comedy is deception.
- 39:27And you know that's such a uh yeah sometimes. But but if if
- 39:34you take that to its logical illogical, you know, to its logical conclusion,
- 39:38you never tell anybody the truth. And that's exhausting. It's exhausting.
- 39:43And what I love about the scene is he just says, yeah, but
- 39:46don't tell your mom. Okay, well, what are you gonna do it?
- 39:50Well, I'm getting around to it. It's so I keep on going
- 39:52back to that word. It's human. It tells the truth about the human
- 39:57condition. Will be right back back after a word from our sponsor, and
- 40:05now back to the show. Drama helps us dream about what we could be,
- 40:10but comedy helps us live with who we are. Comedy is the truth.
- 40:15Drama is the exaggeration. Drama is the idealization of life. Would that
- 40:22we were as tortured and as sensitive and as poetic and as intellectual as Hamlet?
- 40:29Right we're watching Hamlet. Oh what he's going through? Have you ever
- 40:32seen a production of Hamlet? Um, I've seen the movies? Okay,
- 40:37okay, you seen him, rookie of Hamlet? Have you ever seen in
- 40:38the movie? Did Hamlet fart? Not in the ones I saw? So?
- 40:43What would what do you think would happen. If Hamlet's going to be
- 40:45or not to be, I probably would enjoy it a lot more. And
- 40:52but yet people do fart, right, yeah so so, but by making
- 40:57him more human, you make it immediately more comic. So I hate comedies
- 41:01that pretend or let me, let me put it this way. I hate
- 41:05comedies where every ten seconds they're going, wouldn't it be funny if this happened?
- 41:08Wouldn't it be funny if that happened? Because I'm more interested in what
- 41:13would happen if this really happened to these characters? What would they do?
- 41:16What would all these different characters do? Because you don't have to invent shit,
- 41:22you don't have to make shit up. Put three people in a room,
- 41:25they're gonna go in three different directions. Half the time, they're going
- 41:29to run into each other because that's who human beings are. So just let
- 41:32them. Let them deal with the situation in their own way. If you
- 41:36if you haven't duplicated characters, you're going to create your conflict and your obstacles
- 41:43just because of the characters you have on screen or on stage in that situation.
- 41:49I do an experiment in my workshops. We call it the classic,
- 41:54the classic problem of the three lawyers. I have three people come up.
- 41:59I make sure that they're not actors or improvisers. I ask for writers who
- 42:04have never performed, and I tell them they're all three lawyers, and that
- 42:08the most important case of their careers began in a courthouse four blocks away,
- 42:13five minutes ago. And I say, if you through that door and whatever
- 42:17room that we're in, whatever meeting room or banquet room we're in, I
- 42:22say, through that door, is the court has four blocks away, you're
- 42:27five minutes late. And then I have two of them leave, and I
- 42:30tell each one separately that for some crazy reason, they have to be the
- 42:37second person out the door. I'll do that for everyone. I'll say,
- 42:40listen, this is gonna be done. I'm gonna give everybody something different.
- 42:43But for you, I just want you to know that, for some crazy
- 42:46reason, you have to be the second person out the door. And then
- 42:50I'll bring all three of them back and I'll say start. And what will
- 42:53happen is most times that they'll run to the door and they'll stop, and
- 43:00the audience, of course knows what's happening, and there there will be this
- 43:06great dance of trying to figure out how to get how to be the second
- 43:12person out the door if they're all trying to leave, and then I'll usually
- 43:16say to shout out you have you have the permission to win, in which
- 43:22case I usually put two big guys in a small girl in the group and
- 43:28you see you're anticipating, right, yeah, I'll say you, I give
- 43:32you the permission to win. And usually one of the big guys will pick
- 43:36up the small girl thrower out and then he'll be the second guy to go.
- 43:39And it's usually a very funny scene. And when I did this a
- 43:42dream works once with three animators who have never performed. The one animator was
- 43:49this tall, skinny guy and the two guys tried to throw him out of
- 43:52the room and he put one foot on one side of the door and one
- 43:54foot on the other side of the door, and he was like completely horizontal.
- 43:59It was it was amazing. I've never seen that before. And my
- 44:02point is that you don't need you don't need clever dialogue, you don't even
- 44:08need you don't need directors, you don't even need writers. You just need
- 44:14characters, humans in a situation with a with something unusual or not easy.
- 44:22And see what happens and you and half the time's more than half the time
- 44:25comedy work will occur. Now you raise an important important topic about characters and
- 44:30having two characters interacting. Do you feel like you need to have, for
- 44:36example, one guy who's going to be the straight man, one guy who's
- 44:38going to be the the you know, the comic part or whatever you want
- 44:43to say. I mean, when you're when you're creating comic moments, do
- 44:45you have to have that sort of conflict between your characters when when you're talking
- 44:49about characters, you don't. It's not so much the conflict, it's it's
- 44:52you want our typical character. If you think about any commedia troope, you
- 44:58would have the lectris old man, the wily, tricky, clever servant,
- 45:02the young, innocent, the fool and you. You just make sure that
- 45:07you have those artypical types in in your story. I mean, who is
- 45:14the um think of? You know, just in terms of winning the Pooh?
- 45:16Who's your tigger? Who's your e or you know who who's your who's
- 45:21your pooh? Who's the tin man? Who you know? This is Chris
- 45:24South? Who you know who talks about you know, the the Wizard of
- 45:29oz method of character development. You know, who's the tin man, who's
- 45:31the scarecrow, who's the who's the lion, the child, the the animal,
- 45:37uh, the the thinker? So yeah, you it's not. No
- 45:42one is a straight man. Paul Rudd is not a straight man in in
- 45:46forty year Old Virgin, although he's more the voice of reason than anybody else.
- 45:52But he's got his own thing because he's you know, pining for Mindy
- 45:55Kaling uh, And he's this he's this romantic who's all you know, fucked
- 46:00up in his head. So so I don't think that the whole idea that
- 46:06there's a straight man is again is a misnomer. And I think I think
- 46:10a false dynamic. If you take a look at the other guys at any
- 46:15one moment, one of them is insane and the other one is sane but
- 46:22not quite knowing what to do. In this situation, when Will Farrell brings
- 46:27Mark Wahlberg home, he's married to some hottie, and Allmark Whorlberg can say,
- 46:31is she really your wife? Hi must be Terry. I'm sorry I've
- 46:39been hiding, honey, but this dinner was tricky for you. I'm doctor
- 46:45Sheila gamble his wife. Come on, seriously, who is that his old
- 46:49lady? Sweetie? It's a workstation. It can you come in here dressed
- 46:53like a hobo. It's distracted. I know you're working. I'm so sorry.
- 46:58Come on, seriously, come on, what who is that? Stel
- 47:01feel Ball and Jane get over here? Not right now? Okay, look
- 47:08they're not all first round picks. Okay, come on, are you gonna
- 47:12tell me who that is? Are you really Alan's wife? Mhm? I
- 47:15know people are shocked because he's Episcopalian and I'm Catholic, but somehow it works.
- 47:22Are you gonna change? I already did. It's no big deal.
- 47:27You look really, really nice, Terry. You don't have to be polite.
- 47:30Okay, she looks kind of shitty. I don't speak to her like
- 47:34that. Alan. Look, if I put that in my Cosmo Fashion app,
- 47:36you probably get a D minus. Alan and his apps, he loves
- 47:39him. You know, he's designed three of his own. One of them.
- 47:43Can tell him one of them. You can take a pitch of anybody's
- 47:46face and I'll tell you what the back of his head looks like. Faceback,
- 47:51face back. Got some horrible reviews coming out of the gate. It's
- 47:53gonna hit, it's gonna catch me. Why are you with Alan? I
- 47:57mean, that's not what I meant. I meant um. How did you
- 48:00guys meet? It's a really typical how we met story, Terry, You're
- 48:04gonna be bored by it. I was a dancer for the Knicks while finishing
- 48:07my residency at Columbia Hospital. Alan came into the ear with poison ivy on
- 48:12his rectum. Needless to say, I fell for him immediately. It's funny.
- 48:15It's it's like a scene from that one movie always forget the name of
- 48:19it with Meg Ryan. Yes, I don't remember a moving with Meg Ryan
- 48:22meets a guy with poison ivy business. I'll think of it. I'll think
- 48:24of it. So what about you, Terry? Do you have a girl?
- 48:29I did? Yeah, I'm supposed to get married, but she backed
- 48:31down. It's complicated, Terry shot Derek Jeter, shut up, Alan,
- 48:35this is before That's okay. Ah, she's got mail. That's the name
- 48:38of it. That's it, honey. But Tom, thanks right, and
- 48:42Meg Ry right, he didn't have poison ivy ask Yeah, yeah, way
- 48:46up there. Well, Terry can't thank you enough for coming by. What
- 48:50a what a wonderful, lovely evening. Thank you so so nice, my
- 48:54pleasure. Thank you. Remember all I ask of you is you don't let
- 48:59him get hurt. She tells me that every day before I leave. Yep
- 49:01I do. I come downstairs and I make him as fresh cut strawberries and
- 49:06I say, listen, my little sugar balls, whatever you do today,
- 49:08you just don't get hurt every morning. And then I show him my breast
- 49:13and I say, these these are waiting for you when you get back home.
- 49:16You know, Terry, they're they're not the biggest breast he's ever seen,
- 49:19but man, not by a long shirkey. And they are firm,
- 49:22and they are yours. They're a nice lady. Thank you for coming.
- 49:28Detectives, Hoych and gamble. Detectives, Hoych and gamble over, I found
- 49:34your red priests right. I was trying to vote for Ralph Nader. Come
- 49:37on, okay, sugar balls, list enough. It's gonna be fingerprints in
- 49:39that car, and tomorrow I'm gonna run those fingerprints through the system. If
- 49:44we get a hit, this case is gonna eat a faster than a junkie
- 49:46spoon. You do one thing when you wake up tomorrow. Bring it,
- 49:50thank you, Oh go bring it good night, good night, Thank you,
- 49:53Sheila. Bye Terry, by Sheila. I'll never forget tonight. Bye
- 49:59Terry. All right, whatever, go inside bay, Sheila. We'll be
- 50:07right back after a word from our sponsor. And now back to the shows.
- 50:19And it's hysterical because one of them at any moment is aware of what's
- 50:25happening around him without having the complete answer of what to do about it.
- 50:31One of the things I wanted to talk about too is going back through the
- 50:34history um and talking about somebody like Buster Keaton. So for him, he's
- 50:37always been kind of an example for me of um, somebody for whom like
- 50:44for example, Uh, you know what happened with the Silent Films is he
- 50:47was hugely popular up there with chaplain and everything. In the moment he was
- 50:51asked to speak, it changed the dynamic of his comedy. Well, it
- 50:54can't be the great Stone face and speak at the same time, right,
- 50:58So I was curious about if you you know, went into any sort of
- 51:01thing like that, that people have to be in the right kind of comedy
- 51:05for their kind of personality or whatever. Uh, Well, we we do
- 51:09talk about the history of comedy, just in terms, just in terms of
- 51:12the development of Western comedy that comes from these are typical characters that that you
- 51:19know was uh kind of codified in the commedia, but really goes back all
- 51:24the way to the Greeks, uh where the the the new Greek comedy was
- 51:30all about our typical characters, cowardly braggett soldiers, lectures old men or miserly
- 51:37old men. And you see you see these characters in Shakespeare, you see
- 51:40them in more year, you see them on sitcoms. Who's the idiot,
- 51:45who's the the wise cracker, who's the um the uh, the the space
- 51:50kidet. I mean that's I've just described friends. Uh. So so what
- 51:58you what you wanted, what you what you want to know is that is
- 52:02that these are typical characters appear and reappear and reappear in in dozens of movies.
- 52:10Uh. And they they they're there for a reason because those they embody
- 52:15certain aspects of the human condition, uh personified. And it's a good idea
- 52:22to have a good mix of them. Do you need all of all of
- 52:25the different character types? No? But uh, when I read scripts sometimes
- 52:30I'll say you have three three best friends. You really need three best friends
- 52:35and they're all exactly the same. Maybe maybe one should be uh different?
- 52:42Um, or maybe they should maybe they should be different? For instance,
- 52:45Uh, here's here's a we do a comic premise exercise where where we have
- 52:52h we break people up into groups and they work on comic premises. So
- 52:59let me give you a premise. Um, it's not a great movie,
- 53:02but this is something that actually that a group actually came up with. Um.
- 53:07So here's the premise of this comedy movie. Uh. A college football
- 53:10team discovers that the only time that they can win is when they get the
- 53:16nerd laid. Now that's already a good start for a premise because it made
- 53:22you giggle. So tell me who's in this movie. Well, you've got
- 53:25the jock, You've got the best friend. Excuse me? What position is
- 53:30the jock? Quarterback? I guess quarterback. Who are his friends on the
- 53:34team? You got the big fat guy, you got the lineman. Okay,
- 53:37you got the lineman. Who else? See? But I don't know
- 53:40anything about football. You're you're you're already there. Okay, you have the
- 53:44lineman, and who else should be there? Uh? One of his friends
- 53:47is a big fat guy. Who's the who's the other friend? Gotta have
- 53:51the skinny guy that okay, the skinny guy guy? Okay? Who?
- 53:53So you don't know anything by football, but but the uh the team can
- 53:59only win when they get the nerd late. So who else needs to be
- 54:00there? Well, you got your nerd. You're the nerd. Okay.
- 54:04You gotta have the most attractive girl in the school girl And what what position?
- 54:07What what does she do? Uh? He cheerleader of course, cheerleader.
- 54:10And then who's the who's the uh? Then there's a coach, right
- 54:14okay? Sure? Okay? Uh? And how is the cheerleader uh connected
- 54:19to the coach? Uh? Daughter? Daughter? Okay? Because one of
- 54:22the things that Molier teaches us is that comedy's a closed universe because the old
- 54:29guy who's wandering around Enact one always turns out to be the uncle of the
- 54:32two orphans in Act five. So you have the quarterback, the linebacker,
- 54:37the wide receiver. That's the skinny guy, the nerd, the cheerleader,
- 54:42the coach okay nerd Steve Correll, quarterback, Paul Rutt line big lineman,
- 54:46Seth Roken, um, skinny guy, Rominey Malco cheerleader, a young Catherine
- 54:52Keyner coach James, you've just given me the cast, a forty year old
- 54:57virgin. There's a reason why these these these are typical characters appear and reappear
- 55:05and reappear because they tell stories. You can tell any story you want if
- 55:09you have all the right characters there. That was pretty mind blowing. I
- 55:14like that. That was our Ted talk moment for the conversation. Well Tom
- 55:19Ted tell Ted I applied to Ted. They haven't gotten I thought it would
- 55:22be a great Ted talk. Well they listen to this, so you know,
- 55:27just just wait, it'll happen. So Ted listens as well as the
- 55:30French. Yes, and Rob Schneider and Rob Shire Rob, I love you,
- 55:37copy guy. That was the best thing on snlka um So I want
- 55:43to talk for a second also about Ben Stiller, because you mentioned Ben Stiller
- 55:45in your your book um and one of the things that book I I have
- 55:52skimmed the book. Unfortunately, my um my credit card got had some problems
- 55:58at Amazon, so I had to go back. I can change some things
- 56:00and then buy it again. And then I was kind of the clock was
- 56:04against me. So I'm gonna yeah, but I do. A lot of
- 56:07my stuff is from other podcasts and from you know, YouTube, so luckily
- 56:13there's a wealth of knowledge out there. Okay, So if any of my
- 56:16questions sound exactly the same as some other people, oh no, no,
- 56:21I don't. I don't think I ever insulted as many people on other podcasts
- 56:25as I have on yours. I am honored. Thank you. Well.
- 56:29I wanted to talk about Ben Stiller for a second because you you know,
- 56:31you'd talk about him. And one of the things that I remember when Ben
- 56:36was, you know, my buddy Ben first kind of was getting popularity,
- 56:40was that the kind of comedy that he was doing was so like, not
- 56:47um obvious. I guess you could say, it was just he was so
- 56:53much the character and so uncomfortable and so kind of, you know, different
- 56:59than what I had seen before. And there have probably been other people who
- 57:00have done that kind of comedy, you know, like there's something about Mary
- 57:06and stuff like that. But I just, for some reason that just stayed
- 57:08in my mind. Is that being you know, why is that funny?
- 57:12Why is what he's doing funny? And you know why is just his nervousness
- 57:16or his like being in that situation making me laugh. And I had never
- 57:21really felt like that with anybody else, you know what I mean? Well,
- 57:23I think because one of the things that he does well. Now,
- 57:28he's a smart guy, right, I mean, he had his own sketch
- 57:30show on Fox when he was in his twenties. He's a smart guy.
- 57:35But he lets himself be seen as less than smart very well. In There's
- 57:40something about Mary. He's about to go on a date with Mary, and
- 57:45Chris Elliot's telling him, have you, you know, pulled pulled the pud?
- 57:49Have you you know, spanked the monkey? Uh? Have you flogged
- 57:53the dolphin? And and rather than Ben still are going what are you talking
- 57:58about? He goes, huh huh and what are great comedy lines? Because
- 58:04they see something they're just not quite sure what they're seeing. Uh. And
- 58:07he lets himself be talked into, you know, uh, masturbating just just
- 58:12before the date. Uh. And and it's it's ridiculous, it's you know,
- 58:16it's it's gross out humor. But there's something very vulnerable and uh and
- 58:25and and not in charge uh that that I think appeals to all of us
- 58:34because that's how we feel, we feel that we're not completely in charge.
- 58:37That we're uh that we're less than, and he embodies less than in a
- 58:44very unforced way. He doesn't pretend to be less than, he just is.
- 58:51There's one of my favorite moments in There's Something About Mary is when they
- 58:57do the flashback and he's about to ask take Mary out to the prom,
- 59:00and he's got these great braces on and he's wearing this tope tuxedo. She
- 59:07goes to the door and David Keith, oh I believe is playing the dad
- 59:12comes out and David Keith is an African American. Mary, of course is
- 59:15Cameron Diaz, who's not African American. So she, you know, Ben
- 59:20Stiller looks at David Keith, looks up at the door number, Am I
- 59:23in the right place? Usually that gets a laugh just by not being sure.
- 59:28And then David Keith says, she's already gone to the gone to the
- 59:31problem with woogie, and he goes woogie, Yeah, woogie. And then
- 59:37and you can't really see this over a podcast, but I'm kind of grinning
- 59:43sadly and going okay. And I usually when I do my workshops, by
- 59:49the way, I have a workshop coming up at the end of January,
- 59:52which we'll talk about hopefully at the end of the podcast, I usually freeze
- 59:57frame on that we'll be right back after a word from our sponsor, and
- 1:00:06now back to the show. And I say, if the movie ended,
- 1:00:10there, hasn't he broken your heart? That's the essence of comedy is The
- 1:00:16essence of comedy is not to pretend that there's no pain. It's all silliness.
- 1:00:21The essence of comedy is We're always in pain. Life is a painful,
- 1:00:24painful deal. How are we going to deal with it? What are
- 1:00:29we going to do? The comedian is the courageous person who gets up in
- 1:00:34front of a group of strangers and admits to being human and and basically says,
- 1:00:38you know, gives us shrug and says, you'll live. It's tough,
- 1:00:43you get kicked, but you'll live. And that's a very life affirming
- 1:00:47way of looking at the world. So if that was written as a drama
- 1:00:52and not a comedy, well, if it was written as a drama,
- 1:00:55he wouldn't be an idiot, he would know more. He would be good
- 1:01:00looking, he would be wearing braces. Like I said, if it was
- 1:01:04a drama, he would be something that we would aspire to as opposed to
- 1:01:09something who we can recognize as us. Look at the movie that I always
- 1:01:15saw, The Maze Runner or The Virgin. Those kids are gorgeous, you
- 1:01:20know. And in the Apocalypse, are we all going to look that good?
- 1:01:24I mean, of course, am I going to have tapped teeth?
- 1:01:29You know? In a dystopian future? I wish, you know, that
- 1:01:31would be great. Only the good looking survive. One of my favorite Ben
- 1:01:38Stiller performances is in Tropic Thunder Oh, one of my favorite movies, when
- 1:01:44he is you know, captured and they make him reenact his character simple Jack.
- 1:01:50Simple Jack. That to me is like the pinnacle of his career.
- 1:01:54But the moment that I love is when he and Robert Downey have the conversation
- 1:02:00about why he didn't get the oscar. Yeah, exactly. You know,
- 1:02:02there were times when I was doing Jack that I actually felt retarded, like
- 1:02:07really retarded it. I mean it bush my teeth retarded, I rode bust
- 1:02:13retarded in a weird way. I had to sort of just free myself up
- 1:02:16to believe that it was okay to be stupid or dumb, to be a
- 1:02:20morong Yeah, to be moronical, exactly, to be a moron an imbecile.
- 1:02:25Yeah, doctor, dumbest motherfucker to devil live. When I was playing
- 1:02:30the character Wendy was secure. Yeah, I mean as Jack, definitely Jack,
- 1:02:34stupid ass Jack trying to come back from that. In a weird way.
- 1:02:37It was almost like I had to sort of fool my mind into believing
- 1:02:42that it wasn't retarded, And by the end of the whole thing, I
- 1:02:45was like, wait a minute, you know, I flushed so much out,
- 1:02:47How am I gonna jump started up again? It's just like, yeah,
- 1:02:52yeah, right, he was foughting in bathtubs and laughing the asso.
- 1:02:55Yeah yeah, yeah. But simple Jack thought he was, or rather didn't
- 1:03:00think it was retarded. So he can't afford to play retarded. Being a
- 1:03:02smart actor playing a guy who ain't smart but thinks he is. That's tricky,
- 1:03:07tricky. It's not working for Mercury. It's high science. Man,
- 1:03:12it's odd for him. Yeah, you're an artist, that's what we do,
- 1:03:15right, Yeah. Yeah, hats off for going there especially. No,
- 1:03:17nothing Academy is about that ship m about what they're serious. They don't
- 1:03:27know. Everybody knows. You never go full retarded. What do you mean?
- 1:03:35Check it out? Dustin Hoffman ray Man Luke retarded at retarded, not
- 1:03:38retarded, can't two picks to your cards artistic shop. Not retarded, ain't
- 1:03:45a time of hands for us? Gump slow, Yes, retarded. Maybe
- 1:03:47he braced his owners bed, but he chomed to pass off next to and
- 1:03:51they want to pin pong competition that he retarded. He was goddamn war hero.
- 1:03:54You know what, he retired war heroes? You full return man,
- 1:04:02never go full return. You don't buy it, Yeah, Sean pent two
- 1:04:06thousand one. I am saying no when full retire. And and that's such
- 1:04:13a beautiful moment because it's the first moment in the film where they're really just
- 1:04:16relating to each other and they're connecting, and they're not they've let their their
- 1:04:20rivalries go. And and Robert Downey goes, you don't know. You can't
- 1:04:26go full Todd. You went full time. You can't go half Todd.
- 1:04:29You can't go full Todd. It's great, great, I mean, those
- 1:04:34those human, simple human moments where people share what makes them vulnerable, what
- 1:04:43makes them silly, what makes them lost, what makes them human? And
- 1:04:48and and that's that's why in terms of straight line wavy line, uh,
- 1:04:54you you know, Mark is funny. But you can't have Mark without mindate
- 1:04:58mh. You to have a human being in the equation at every moment.
- 1:05:02So even your silliest character can have a moment where they're human and they're having
- 1:05:10a human experience. Well, everybody else is acting crazy around them. And
- 1:05:16that's why the division of funny guy in straight Man is incorrect, because everybody
- 1:05:20gets to has a chance to be funny. Everybody has a chance to be
- 1:05:26you know, the same one. Well, tell me if if you had
- 1:05:30the same feeling as I did. But watching that, if you've got Robert
- 1:05:32Downey Jr. You've got Ben Stiller, and then you've got Jack Black,
- 1:05:35and Jack Black, to me, like most of the stuff that he did
- 1:05:40in the film kind of fell flat. Though I don't know how you you
- 1:05:43kind of perceived that, but it just seemed like one more person there that
- 1:05:45like didn't necessarily like add to it. I don't know, Well, I
- 1:05:49mean, I can see that point of view. I'm not going to argue
- 1:05:55that he's the best thing in the film, but he's there because you needed
- 1:05:58a primal character. Again, we go we go back to to our typical
- 1:06:03characters, the archetypes, the comedia. You have your clever, tricky servant
- 1:06:09that's Robert Downey Junior. Uh. You have your nerdy guy that's Jay Barrichelle.
- 1:06:15You have your idiot that's uh, or your fool. Yeah, that's
- 1:06:17that's Ben Stiller. Uh. Then you have your primal character, you know,
- 1:06:21and he's got he's got primal needs. I need, I need my
- 1:06:26drugs, um uh and uh. And out of that mix comes comes the
- 1:06:32comes this disjointed, uh dysfunctional family that all comedy aspires to. All comedy,
- 1:06:41especially tele comedy, aspires to create dysfunct large, dysfunctional families that that
- 1:06:47we can relate to and in some way uh enjoy being with because they remind
- 1:06:54us of our dysfunctional families, only we don't have to be with them that
- 1:06:58much. So So yeah, so's is Jack Black? You know? Is
- 1:07:01that Oscar Oscar nominated performance? I'm not sure, but I see the I
- 1:07:06see the use for him because you need that unbridled energy. Now is that
- 1:07:13unbridled energy the best it could be? I don't know. I wasn't crazy
- 1:07:17about the about the the blonde buzzcut, um, but um, you know,
- 1:07:28I mean I was just wondering if there was something we were not available,
- 1:07:31right, I mean that would be that would be John Belushi or John
- 1:07:35Candy or Chris Farley. That would be their role. That's what they would
- 1:07:39be there for. And maybe they would have brought a little bit more what
- 1:07:44I call the Shemp factor, you know. So Shemp was the stooge that
- 1:07:47made you care. So that's what John Candy and Chris Farley would do.
- 1:07:51They would make you care. And Jack Black, I guess, just make
- 1:07:56you care that much because Jack Black, if if I'm going to analyze it
- 1:08:00from your point of view, Jack Black gave was too much a performance that
- 1:08:05he was outside of as opposed to owning it. He wasn't sharing his addiction.
- 1:08:13He was making this character's addiction the focus. And when you distance yourself
- 1:08:19from your character and you distance yourself from the audience, there's that distancing factor
- 1:08:24that doesn't work for some people. In five hundred BC, the first comedy
- 1:08:29written, the actor comes out and talks to the audience directly in a different
- 1:08:33way than they did in Greek Tragedy. There's a connection that comics make with
- 1:08:38their audience. It's an actor centric art and it's about telling the truth about
- 1:08:44what's happening right in front of all of us. I'm an actor, I'm
- 1:08:47on stage, you're watching me. Let's go, and so there's truth there,
- 1:08:51and so you might be you might be reacting to the fact that he
- 1:08:57wasn't as connected and as truthful as the other actors. That's my guess.
- 1:09:02But it didn't bother me as much. But I can see from your point
- 1:09:04of taking a look from your perspective, I can see what you're talking about.
- 1:09:10Yeah, I mean, it just kind of fell flat sometimes I'm going
- 1:09:13to he just was he fucking sucked? Okay, I mean it's kind of
- 1:09:17like late Jerry Lewis, like you're saying, it just felt like a performance,
- 1:09:20you know. Anyway, Right, I'll get off that all right.
- 1:09:25Um, we're at about an hour. I wanted to make sure that you
- 1:09:29discuss the things that are coming up with you and how people can get in
- 1:09:30touch and sign up for your classes. Um, you want to talk about
- 1:09:35that a little bit. Uh. Yeah, I'm Libra, I'm lonely.
- 1:09:39I like long walk long walks on the beach. I'm on staff. No
- 1:09:43no, no, no, I'm I'm I'm I'm happily married. But um,
- 1:09:47you can you can tweet met at SK comedy. That's SK comedy comedy
- 1:09:56with a C. Because I'm not a hack. I don't do that comedy
- 1:09:58k thing. We'll be right back after a word from our sponsor, and
- 1:10:06now back to the show. My website is Kaplan Comedy one word dot com
- 1:10:13and you can email me at Steve at kaplan Comedy dot com. And right
- 1:10:18now, in January thirtieth and thirty first, in Los Angeles, we're having
- 1:10:23a workshop at the Marriot Burbank and you can register for it online. And
- 1:10:30if you're in Ireland, we're going to be in Ireland in early June,
- 1:10:35London the week later. I think we're going to be in Paris in April,
- 1:10:40and we're going to be in Denver in October. And you should read
- 1:10:44my book The Hidden Tools of Comedy. We it's translated into Russian, Chinese
- 1:10:48and French. But for you for the Indie Film Academy podcast listeners, we
- 1:10:55have it for you in English and it's available on Kindle. You can download
- 1:11:00it, but make sure that your credit card doesn't get screwed up like Jason's.
- 1:11:03And and it's also available through Amazon, and you can also buy it
- 1:11:12on our website for an autographed copy. I want to thank Jason so much
- 1:11:15for doing such a great job on this episode. If you want to get
- 1:11:18links to anything we spoke about in this episode, head over to the show
- 1:11:21notes at Bulletproof Screenwriting dot tv. Forward slash tune ninety nine. Thank you
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