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- 0:00Welcome to the Deep Dive. You know how this works.
- 0:03We take the material you send us and well, we dive deep to find
- 0:07the interesting bits. Exactly.
- 0:09And today, we're tackling something maybe a little
- 0:11different in Amazon.com page, right?
- 0:14Specifically for the Kindle edition of a book called Bow
- 0:16Down When Abri Brew submits by someone named Authoris
- 0:20Masterpiece. Yeah.
- 0:21And you might think it's just the sales page, but there's
- 0:23actually a tonne of info packed in there, OK.
- 0:26Like what? Well beyond the obvious book
- 0:28details, you get customer reviews, author bio stuff,
- 0:31related books, even just the Amazon layout tells you
- 0:35something so. The mission today is basically
- 0:37to unpack this one web page. Pretty much see what it tells us
- 0:40about the book, its reception, the author give you a quick but
- 0:44thorough understanding from just this digital snapshot all.
- 0:47Right, let's get into it. The title definitely catches the
- 0:49eye. Dow down when a brewery submits.
- 0:52It does. Author is authoris Masterpiece
- 0:54editor, listed as Janine Corneel.
- 0:57And we're focusing on the Kindle version, but it looks like it's
- 0:59also at an audio book, hardcover and paperback.
- 1:02Which already suggests you know a certain level of backing or
- 1:05ambition for the book. They want it available
- 1:07everywhere. OK, let's talk basics.
- 1:09Print length is 275 pages. English language publication
- 1:14date January 15th, 2024, so fairly recent.
- 1:17Yeah, very recent file size is 7 O 9 KB standard Kindle stuff.
- 1:22But the pricing is where it gets interesting.
- 1:24How so? Well, the print list price for
- 1:27the paperback is the $30.00. The hardcover is even more,
- 1:31$45.00. Wow.
- 1:33But the Kindle it's either 0 bucks if you have Kindle
- 1:36Unlimited or just two $0.99 to buy outright.
- 1:39That's a massive difference, 90% off the paperback price.
- 1:43Exactly. It really shows you the
- 1:44economics of digital versus print, doesn't it?
- 1:46And how they push ebooks. Definitely, and there's an
- 1:49audiobook option too. Yep, with audible narration it
- 1:51says you can add it for $7.49 even though the regular price
- 1:55listed is much higher. So more promotional pricing
- 1:57there. It's all about getting you into
- 1:59their ecosystem, isn't it? Pretty much, and Amazon makes it
- 2:01clear when you buy the Kindle version you're getting a content
- 2:04licence subject to their terms. Right.
- 2:06That whole digital ownership thing, it's not quite the same
- 2:09as having the physical book on your shelf.
- 2:10Not at all. Different set of rules.
- 2:12OK, so what's the story about? All right, the synopsis gives us
- 2:152 main characters. First, Mark Hilla, nickname
- 2:18Bossy. She's described as a full
- 2:20figured woman runs rehab clinics.
- 2:22Oh, OK. But she's kind of closed off to
- 2:24love because of past trauma. Classic setup and the other
- 2:28character. That's SIM, Amir or Dinero.
- 2:32He's a financial advisor, maybe a CEO type.
- 2:35Also does debt collection on the side?
- 2:37Oh, interesting combination. Yeah, and like Markela, he
- 2:40avoids romantic intimacy. So 2 guarded people, how do they
- 2:44meet? The description says she
- 2:46literally came crashing into him.
- 2:48Be cute, maybe? Could be, and it suggests this
- 2:51chance meeting really shakes things up for both of them,
- 2:54challenges how they see relationships and desire.
- 2:58Yeah, the description mentions themes like authentic and
- 3:01unexpected love, so maybe something real grows out of.
- 3:04It but it also explicitly talks about exploring darker desires
- 3:07related to dominance and submission.
- 3:10OK, which ties right back to that title.
- 3:12Bow down. Exactly.
- 3:14It promises twists and turns, comfort and no boundaries.
- 3:18It's pretty direct about the D's elements.
- 3:20It even asks if Cymer will make the reader question their own
- 3:24desires about, you know, submission.
- 3:27So. It's not shying away from the
- 3:29erotic and power dynamic aspects at all.
- 3:31No, definitely seems upfront about the content.
- 3:34It's interesting how it pairs that with the authentic love
- 3:36idea though. It is, and judging by the
- 3:38reviews which we'll get to, that combination seems to work for a
- 3:42lot of readers. Maybe the authenticity comes
- 3:44from facing those desires together.
- 3:46Could be. Let's talk about the author,
- 3:48authorist, masterpiece. Right, the page tells us she's a
- 3:51full time author based in Lancaster, CA.
- 3:54And she got into urban fiction way back in junior high, reading
- 3:58Coldest Winter Ever by Sister Soldier.
- 4:00Oh wow, yeah, that's a huge book in the genre.
- 4:03A real touchstone. So you can see the influence
- 4:05there. She started with poetry,
- 4:06apparently. Yeah, and her first novel, If
- 4:08Not Me Then Who, came out in 2020.
- 4:11So she's been publishing books for a few years now.
- 4:13What stood out to me was her focus, she says.
- 4:16She writes about realistic topics, mental illness,
- 4:19depression, adult blossoming. That does add some depth,
- 4:24doesn't it? You might not expect that just
- 4:26from the title and the DS theme. And she's very specific about
- 4:30writing about full figured plus sized women and promoting
- 4:34women's empowerment. Right, those seem like core
- 4:36commitments for her and likely connect strongly with her
- 4:39readers. She also seems pretty engaged
- 4:41online. There's a Facebook group
- 4:42mentioned Masterpiece readers. Yeah, and she lists her Facebook
- 4:46and Instagram handles to author as masterpiece and author as
- 4:49masterpiece. That direct interaction, yeah,
- 4:51it's so common now, building that community.
- 4:54Absolutely, and the page notes she has multiple bestsellers on
- 4:57Amazon charts, so she's clearly found her audience.
- 4:59OK, so that sets the stage. We know the book's premise, the
- 5:03author's background. What are actual readers saying?
- 5:06Well, the overall rating is really strong, 4.6 out of five
- 5:10stars. And how many ratings is that
- 5:11based on? 1657 global ratings.
- 5:16That's a decent number. Not massive, but substantial.
- 5:19Yeah, definitely enough to get a good sense. 4.6 is high.
- 5:22It is, and the breakdown is even more impressive. 71% gave it
- 5:26five stars. 71% wow and. Another 19% gave it four stars,
- 5:32so you're looking at 90% of raters giving it four or five
- 5:35stars. That's huge.
- 5:37Very little negativity then. Almost none. 9% give it three
- 5:40stars, only 1% give it two stars, and 0% gave it one star.
- 5:46So people who read it seem to really, really like it.
- 5:48Why do you think it's hitting so well?
- 5:50Well, like we said, the synopsis is clear.
- 5:52People probably know what they're signing up for and the
- 5:55author's focus on representation.
- 5:57That seems key. Amazon has that AI summary
- 6:00feature now, right? What does it pull out?
- 6:02Yeah, it highlights things customers talk about here.
- 6:04It lists readability, story quality, language, emotional
- 6:08depth, spice level. OK, spice level makes sense.
- 6:11Character development and content, so it hits the expected
- 6:14erotica notes, but also story and character and emotion.
- 6:18Exactly, it aligns well with what the author seems to be
- 6:21aiming for, the depth alongside the steaminess.
- 6:24Let's hear some actual quotes. What are people saying?
- 6:26OK, here's one. Loved this entire book from
- 6:29front to back. The intimate scenes are top tier
- 6:32and so passionate. I could read this book again.
- 6:35That's enthusiastic top tier. Definitely.
- 6:38Here's another This was enjoyable and downright nasty,
- 6:42they add. This is my first ever erotica
- 6:45and it was enjoyable. So it worked even for a newcomer
- 6:48to the genre seems. Like it they also mentioned also
- 6:51the plot twist was twisting. I recommend to beginners in
- 6:54erotica and seasoned vets. This was a fun time.
- 6:57The plot twist was twisting. I like that.
- 7:00So it has narrative surprises too.
- 7:01Apparently so, and this next one touches on that depth.
- 7:04We mentioned health and therapeutic levels of care and
- 7:07how she sheds light on people with mental health issues,
- 7:09especially in the African American and brown communities.
- 7:12Wow, that's powerful feedback connecting to fiction, to real
- 7:15world issues and awareness. It really is shows the book is
- 7:18doing more than just ticking the genre boxes for some readers,
- 7:21it's resonating on a deeper level.
- 7:25It can't be universal praise, surely?
- 7:26Yeah. Any criticism?
- 7:28There are a few, yeah. It's important to see those 21.
- 7:32Reviewer felt the writing got a bit lazy near the end,
- 7:35specifically about one conversation and another just
- 7:38didn't connect. Thought it was maybe 50 pages
- 7:41too long and didn't click with the characters.
- 7:43Right. Which happens not every book
- 7:45works for every. Reader exactly.
- 7:46It provides balance, but overall the reception is overwhelmingly
- 7:51positive. OK, what about the related
- 7:53books? The customers who bought this
- 7:55also bought section. Right, that gives us context.
- 7:58You see titles like Cuisine, the Second King Inferno, another one
- 8:01called The Filth Kings which is also by authoris masterpiece.
- 8:05OK, so her other work shows up. Yeah, several times.
- 8:08Vision a BBW romance, curvy obsessions love me naked a bleo
- 8:13romance. All hers.
- 8:14Lots of BBW romance there. You mentioned that acronym
- 8:16earlier. BBW.
- 8:17Yeah, it stands for Big Beautiful Women.
- 8:20In romance, it specifically means the heroine is plus sized
- 8:22and that's often, you know, a positive focus of the story.
- 8:26Gotcha. So this book fits firmly in that
- 8:28subgenre, and the author writes a lot in it.
- 8:31Definitely. The related books confirm that.
- 8:33You also see things like Intrigued by Danger, The
- 8:36Billionaire's Secret Heart, Bad Boys and Billionaires, so
- 8:41general romance and erotica themes, often with alpha male
- 8:43types, are popular with this readership too.
- 8:46It's like looking at the shared bookshelf of these readers gives
- 8:49you a feel for the neighbourhood.
- 8:50Exactly right urban romance, erotica, strong focus on BBW
- 8:54themes and clearly loyalty to this author.
- 8:56And finally, just to acknowledge it, the the page has all the
- 8:58standard Amazon stuff, right? Search bar account links cart.
- 9:02Yep, all the usual navigation categories like Kindle store
- 9:06ebooks, then drilling down into black and African American, then
- 9:09women's fiction in the erotica. Which is how people actually
- 9:12find these books in that massive digital store.
- 9:15That categorization is key. It really.
- 9:17Is discoverability depends on it?
- 9:19OK, so let's wrap this deep dive up.
- 9:21What have we learned from this one Amazon page?
- 9:24We'll bow down When a Blue Submits is clearly a successful
- 9:28Kindle erotica novel. It's got very strong, positive
- 9:32reviews. Yeah, readers seem to love the
- 9:34story, the characters, the emotional side and of course,
- 9:37the steamy stuff. Right and the author, author is
- 9:40masterpiece. She's built a real connection
- 9:42with her readers. Focuses on themes like
- 9:44empowerment, realistic issues especially for plus sized women.
- 9:48And she's clearly doing well. Multiple bestsellers in this
- 9:51niche. It's a great example of finding
- 9:54your audience online. It really is.
- 9:56Which leads to maybe a final thought for our listeners to
- 9:59chew on. Go on, think about how much
- 10:01power these online reviews have now they can shape an author's
- 10:05whole career Guide reader choices.
- 10:08Yeah, that direct feedback. Loop.
- 10:10Exactly. And what does it say about
- 10:12reader expectations in a genre like this?
- 10:15When people comment so specifically on spice level or
- 10:18emotional depth, it tells you what they're actively looking
- 10:21for. That's a great point.
- 10:22It's a very direct conversation between readers and implicitly.
- 10:26The author, So if any of what we discussed, the themes, the
- 10:29positive buzz, the specific focus sounds interesting, well,
- 10:32maybe Bow Down is worth checking out.