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- 0:00Welcome to Indie Film Podcast. I'm Vic.
- 0:02And I am Chuck, for the month of October, we're going to be
- 0:05talking about how horror films have influenced our micro budget
- 0:08indie projects. To start off for this week,
- 0:11we're talking about scripts specifically.
- 0:13And Victoria, have two questions for you #1 what are 12
- 0:17inherently compelling situations that you've used from horror
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- 1:00I am too. I'm excited to watch all the
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- 1:04Yes, we watched a few of them and they're great.
- 1:06So I'm super excited about that. And I'm also excited to talk
- 1:09about scripting. Yeah, and inherently.
- 1:12Compelling situation. Yes.
- 1:15And are we going to talk about 12 of them?
- 1:17I want to point out that that A twist is not inherently
- 1:21compelling. To show an example of that, we
- 1:23actually only have 10 that we're going to talk about today, and
- 1:26that was not compelling at all. Just take that.
- 1:28M Night Shyamalan. But do you want to list the
- 1:31Yeah, do you want to do you want to, do you want to go ahead and
- 1:35read the list off? And then we're going to talk
- 1:36about some of the things that we've tried and failed at and
- 1:39some things that have worked well, especially in the horror
- 1:41genre. Yes.
- 1:43So the top 10 inherently compelling situations that you
- 1:48can use to inspire your indie films are a character being
- 1:52chased, an argument between lovers, a character stealing
- 1:56something, a character spying on someone, a character trying to
- 2:00start a fire or destroy something, a character dying, a
- 2:04character getting kidnapped, a character getting physically
- 2:08trapped, a character getting drunk, or a character on trial.
- 2:12I like it. Those are good starting off
- 2:14points and the very first one, I want to say a character being
- 2:17chased for a lower Gentry film. We had myself as an actor being
- 2:22chased by somebody with a with a gun and in a short film.
- 2:26And I got made fun of endlessly for that.
- 2:30The sprinting that I did in that because I am a barefoot runner,
- 2:34I'm one of those pretentious people where I don't have thick
- 2:37soles. And so they were making fun of
- 2:39the fact that I looked like I was my back was too straight as
- 2:43I was sprinting away. And I'm like, well, that's
- 2:45actually correct form for me because you want to land on the
- 2:47balls of your feet. And so if you go to Lower Gentry
- 2:51Studios YouTube channel, you can see Canyon County, the short
- 2:53film, which was before our web series.
- 2:55And I was sprinting in that it's not the best quality.
- 3:00It was shot on like a $200 soccer mom Cam.
- 3:03So but it was we, we tried to make that inherently
- 3:07interesting. We didn't quite execute it
- 3:08because it's more than just having the scenario.
- 3:10It's about the execution. It is.
- 3:12And I will say if it makes you feel any better, in the Pluck
- 3:16Rise of the Tweezers short film that I made about a bunch of
- 3:20tweezers trying to kill and attack people.
- 3:22We had a character trying to run and get away from them and
- 3:25trying to get into his car, which was actually my car and I
- 3:27was the the stunt driver for it. But we made it look like there
- 3:31were tweezers taped to the steering wheel.
- 3:34So they were driving away with it.
- 3:36And so, as I was supposed to be speeding away, I then used my
- 3:41blinker and braked before turning.
- 3:43Well. That's good.
- 3:44Because I was unwilling to do illegal stunt driving for this.
- 3:49So I I do want to point out that is very dangerous, yeah.
- 3:52And we're going to be talking a little bit more about that this
- 3:54month. As far as like making sure
- 3:56you're doing the right thing on your horror film sets as far as
- 3:59safety is concerned, yes. But the the driving thing,
- 4:02always be super careful for that unless you have the budget to
- 4:05have things closed off and then you have like a stunt driver.
- 4:08But I do want to point out that in Idaho, when we did shoot that
- 4:12Canyon County short film, we just called the police station
- 4:16before we started filming and we said, hey, we're going to have
- 4:18somebody running around this neighborhood wielding a gun.
- 4:23Just so you know. And just so you know, it's not
- 4:26a. It's not.
- 4:27A real gun, everything's fine. And so the police station just
- 4:31said, oh, sure, you're, you're fine.
- 4:32But we did put notices on everybody's doors so that they
- 4:34knew what was happening as well. But that was how easy it was
- 4:37back in the day to be able to just get a shot of somebody, get
- 4:41a shot of somebody, taking shots at people.
- 4:43But obviously, like we inserted the the gunshots in post and the
- 4:46flashes and all that stuff. Yeah, but that is, it's warning
- 4:49your neighbors with little, like, stuff on that.
- 4:52That was really smart. I definitely did not do that for
- 4:56one of our horror films where we were filming.
- 4:59You know, somebody's screaming bloody murder because she's been
- 5:00kidnapped and is now being tortured.
- 5:02So I did call the Police Department and say, hey, just so
- 5:05you know, there's going to be a woman screaming from my shed for
- 5:08a few hours tonight screaming, help me, Oh, God, I'm dying,
- 5:11please help me, Thanks to that effect.
- 5:13And yeah, it's like they were like, oh, that's no problem at
- 5:15all. As long as you're done by, you
- 5:16know, like 10:00 PM noise ordinances and all that, then
- 5:19that's fine. We don't care.
- 5:20But warning my neighbors that that was going to happen would
- 5:22have been nice. I should have done that.
- 5:24Yes. Sorry, neighbors.
- 5:26Yeah, You want to, you want to make sure that everybody is
- 5:28aware of what's going on so the police don't get a bunch of
- 5:29calls, which it's not complete Wild West here in Idaho.
- 5:33As far as shooting films in public, they just changed it
- 5:38recently. So Boise, the city of Boise has
- 5:40a filming permit process now. And it was because of one of
- 5:44those situations where the police were called and I don't
- 5:47know all the details and I don't want to get into it too much,
- 5:50but so just if you are thinking about filming in Idaho, you
- 5:54can't just come in and call the police station and do whatever
- 5:57the heck you want. But although there probably
- 5:58still are some counties in some cities where you can.
- 6:00Yeah. You just got to get outside
- 6:01Boise city limits and then you can do whatever you want.
- 6:04Basically. This is advice you should trust
- 6:07and follow. Yeah, for sure.
- 6:09So inherently interesting scene being chased.
- 6:11Yes, that is. That's a great one.
- 6:13Obviously you have a good example.
- 6:14The Shining is one of my favorites, right at the end
- 6:17going through the maze. Yeah, very classic.
- 6:19I will say I think this one is a pretty common one in horror
- 6:24films, especially some films that I feel like did it really
- 6:27well. Halloween, obviously, right?
- 6:29Classic, very classic. Texas Chainsaw Massacre.
- 6:32It Follows is definitely one of my favorites because it's this.
- 6:36You came? Yeah, you came up with that one.
- 6:37And I don't know why I didn't think about it, because that's
- 6:39one of my favorite horror movies as well.
- 6:40And it's literally just somebody being chased the entire.
- 6:43Time the entire it changes who's being, you know, chased.
- 6:46But yeah, it was really good. Get out is another one, the
- 6:50descent also one of my favorites.
- 6:52The Descent will forever. I live in a very special place
- 6:54in my heart. I love that movie so much.
- 6:56So, OK, so we've had, I think my worst experience with filming a
- 7:04chase sequence for sure was not paying attention to the 180
- 7:09because it was being shot over so many different locations and
- 7:13not keeping track of who's running which direction.
- 7:18Yeah. And I was like, well, we're in a
- 7:19completely different space. It shouldn't even matter that
- 7:21much anyway. It's I'm sure it'll be fine.
- 7:22And then cutting it together. It looks like a scooby-doo chase
- 7:25scene in a Haunted Mansion where people are just popping in and
- 7:27out of random doors. Suddenly people are being chased
- 7:30by the person they were previously chasing.
- 7:32And it just got very, very confused.
- 7:33So pay attention to the 180 rule in that case.
- 7:36And you're not alone there because you can look up a video
- 7:38on YouTube that breaks down The Dark Knight and the car chase
- 7:43scene with a Joker coming after the Batmobile.
- 7:46And if you watch it, you're kind of like, I don't know what's
- 7:49going on here because the truck that he's shooting the bazooka
- 7:52from crashes through the side of this wall.
- 7:54But if you watch the breakdown on YouTube, it's because they
- 7:56keep breaking the 180 rule and you don't know where the car and
- 8:00the Batmobile are in space and you completely lose it.
- 8:02So even Christopher Nolan sometimes doesn't shot list
- 8:06appropriately and misses that stuff.
- 8:08That does make me feel a little bit better, yeah.
- 8:10So check, check that out if you're interested in learning
- 8:12about the 180 rule. So argument between lovers, yes,
- 8:16that is definitely inherently interesting.
- 8:19I feel like it. Usually is.
- 8:20Lower Gentry Studios, we made a feature film that was basically
- 8:23about that called We speak that my brother and I, I helped a
- 8:27little bit was as far as like the structure that the script.
- 8:30That one turned out well. But our very first, our very
- 8:33first film, feature film Brown Truck.
- 8:35We just completely biffed the argument between lovers because
- 8:40you need to have conflict there. Yeah, So what about it was
- 8:43biffed then? The the biffing of it was not
- 8:46focusing on it enough. Not having it was.
- 8:49It was more like the character was despondent rather than, you
- 8:54know, dialogue that was actually confrontational, which you don't
- 8:59need to have because I think Midsummer is a good example of
- 9:02It doesn't need to be directly confrontational as long as the
- 9:05audience knows what the point of.
- 9:07Of the. Argument.
- 9:08Argument is because in Midsummer there was the whole the
- 9:12boyfriend is going to Sweden and and he was like, I invited my
- 9:17girlfriend, but she's not coming to like his friends.
- 9:20And then so she ends up going to Sweden.
- 9:23Yeah, even though nobody really wanted her there.
- 9:26Yeah, but there was also a lot of other conflict in that
- 9:29relationship. True, true.
- 9:30There were a lot of other things going on, like what you might
- 9:33expect would happen if your boyfriend is like, I'm going to
- 9:35a foreign country without you by there's somebody else there.
- 9:40Which that wasn't necessarily direct conflict, but they did
- 9:43address it in kind of like a gas lighting manner, I want to say,
- 9:47which was, which was pretty cool.
- 9:48Well, I thought I guess Invisible Man kind of did
- 9:52something similar with that. Too.
- 9:54Oh yes, right where? I guess that's a little bit
- 9:56being chased because that definitely did happen.
- 9:58This is the more modern invisible.
- 10:00Man, yeah, I'm sorry, I should have mentioned it was 2020-2021.
- 10:04It was pretty recent. There was a version of that that
- 10:06was just about gaslighting. Yeah, it's like the more recent
- 10:09one, yeah. And it was a really well done
- 10:13way of showcasing what gaslighting kind of looks like
- 10:17from the outside. And I it was a really well done.
- 10:20I liked it anyway, but. So make sure if you have lovers
- 10:25in your film, they need to argue.
- 10:28Yeah, figure out some interesting way to do it because
- 10:30it's going to help move things along.
- 10:32And did you? Have you ever had a character
- 10:33steal something in one of your films?
- 10:39Yeah, no, I've had them steal people, but that's the
- 10:41kidnapping 1. Yeah, that's kind of like the
- 10:43because you can, you can also steal objects, which if you're
- 10:47an indie filmmaker, you've always been tempted when you get
- 10:50into one of those camera shops. No, I'm just kidding that we
- 10:52don't have here in Idaho. Yeah, exactly.
- 10:54There's no camera chefs that get wiped out from all the theft.
- 10:56I did hear another one's coming. Yes, and I'm not going to say
- 11:00their name until they pay for a sponsorship with us.
- 11:02Though I'm not going to say their name until it's open
- 11:04because I don't want to like, curse anything.
- 11:05I'm a little superstitious about it because aren't they moving
- 11:08into one of the old camera shop buildings?
- 11:10Hopefully it's not cursed and hopefully they offer gear
- 11:12rentals because that would be nice so.
- 11:13It would be so good. Yeah.
- 11:14OK, well, what about a character stealing something?
- 11:17What are some some famous examples?
- 11:22The one that I saw recently again, I rewatched Psycho and I
- 11:26thought that was really cool because the beginning of the
- 11:29movie was the premise that the main character had stolen.
- 11:33It was just a big chunk of cash. $40,000. 40K, that's what it
- 11:37was. I don't remember.
- 11:37I just remember in like today's money, it's like $400 billion,
- 11:40but back in 1959 like 40,000. Didn't she end up to?
- 11:45Buy you like an entire suburban neighborhood.
- 11:47Yeah, I was like cuz she ended up like trading in her car and
- 11:50like trade in her car and get a new one.
- 11:52It was only like 705 hundred. Something like a?
- 11:54100 bucks, yeah. And I was like, wow.
- 11:57But yeah, she was only making like $0.50 an hour or something
- 11:59probably. I don't know what minimum wage
- 12:01was back then. I don't know, and she was a
- 12:02female so it was probably even worse.
- 12:04Yeah, whatever, 70, 2% of $0.50. Well, I'm sure that the wage gap
- 12:09was wider back then. Could have been.
- 12:10I don't think it was $0.72 on the dollar then.
- 12:13Technically, it's $0.82 on the dollar now.
- 12:15Yeah, OK. Definitely dated as far as
- 12:18women's rights are concerned a little bit because the the whole
- 12:22romantic subplot is whether or not she's going to marry a guy
- 12:26that has already been married and had a divorce already.
- 12:29So he was like paying. Like this is.
- 12:31Yeah, that's so taboo. I have dragged me to hell.
- 12:39Yeah. And Don't Breathe.
- 12:41I thought don't Breathe was kind of cool because that's like a
- 12:44break in that goes real awry real fast.
- 12:47I have not seen Don't breathe. I actually would not recommend
- 12:52it. I saw the.
- 12:52Length of it and I'm like, I think I'm going to need to take
- 12:55a breath in 90 minutes. Sorry, that was that.
- 13:00Was a really bad joke. Yeah, I try.
- 13:02Don't breathe. And now I'm like stuck doubting
- 13:06myself here and I'm trying to quickly go through my notes and
- 13:09see if this was still the right one because don't breathe in my
- 13:15mind, yeah, I'm not mixing them up.
- 13:17I get don't breathe in a quiet place mixed up sometimes, which
- 13:20is probably not great, but don't breathe.
- 13:23The end is absolutely awful. It's horrifying, it's really
- 13:29disgusting, and it's super triggering.
- 13:30I I just don't recommend that movie to anybody.
- 13:33Good to know. It was an interesting concept,
- 13:35but I don't recommend that movie to anyone.
- 13:37I. Finally watched paranormal
- 13:38Activity. Oh yeah recently.
- 13:40That movie was so bad. I understand that it was unique
- 13:46for the time. It was very unique.
- 13:48It was a very different take on that style.
- 13:51Good gravy, they didn't even have a story.
- 13:53They. Tried.
- 13:57And I understand like it's unique for the time, but I don't
- 14:00even think if you showed it to somebody now that's into horror
- 14:03movies as a teenager and you show them that film, I would
- 14:07just wonder what they would think.
- 14:09Because first of all, it would be like, why?
- 14:11Why is he carrying around a giant camera?
- 14:14And two, why does that giant camera look so crappy?
- 14:17And then there's also like 3 like OK, so it's daytime, they
- 14:22have a conversation and then it's night time and we hear this
- 14:26weird rising sound effect and then like a door opens and
- 14:31there's the first 30 minutes of the movie I.
- 14:34Guess your spook. Oh my gosh.
- 14:36All right. But I.
- 14:36Think. Don't, don't.
- 14:37Do that. Don't.
- 14:39Don't do that thing where you don't have any plot or any
- 14:42interesting situation. Inherently interesting, yes.
- 14:45You need something that is inherently interesting and know
- 14:48you're how it's making weird noises.
- 14:50Is not that by itself? Yeah, it's good to connect these
- 14:54scenes through with a plot line so that it's like we spoke
- 14:58earlier, this is actually like a Trey Parker and Matt Stone quote
- 15:01is like you want to have therefore but in between your
- 15:05story. Instead of yes and.
- 15:06Instead of and then. Oh.
- 15:08That's it. Yeah, I'm sorry.
- 15:09I go to improv, Yes. And.
- 15:10Yes and yes. And well, yeah, you don't want
- 15:12to do that on a movie. And then they wake up in the
- 15:16morning and then they keep talking and and they review the
- 15:19footage from last night and see the door open and then they go
- 15:21to bed and then they turn the camera on.
- 15:23That's paranormal activity right there.
- 15:24Just saved you well an hour and a.
- 15:27Half I feel like some of the sequels start trying to tie in
- 15:30more of an actual story of like the lore of the house and the
- 15:34family line. Nice.
- 15:36And there's like a curse on the family.
- 15:37I'm pretty sure that that's the Paranormal Activity series, but
- 15:41I guess anybody who's watching can definitely correct me if I'm
- 15:44fixing that up. Just let us know in the comments
- 15:47and then you can also let us know what into what other forms
- 15:51of self torture you're into I guess.
- 15:53OK, all right. Character spying on another
- 15:56character. Yes.
- 15:57Inherently interesting. Inherently interesting.
- 16:00Because you as the audience member are like, oh, what a
- 16:03creeper. You're either thinking what a
- 16:05creeper, or you're thinking what's so interesting?
- 16:09What? Why do they want to spy on
- 16:11what's out there? Oh, that's true.
- 16:12Right. So it can build intrigue from
- 16:14either side. Yeah, so.
- 16:16I've never done a spying on somebody else film.
- 16:21I've never worked on one of those in like the indie film
- 16:23realm. But I do as far as like the
- 16:27first thing again comes to my mind because I watched it
- 16:29recently. Psycho when when he's looking
- 16:33through the he has a view of the bathroom before the shower
- 16:37murder scene. Yes.
- 16:39And so he was spying. Yes, he was spying on the person
- 16:42in there. There are some other ones.
- 16:46Well, Paranormal Activity, I feel like it's kind of just
- 16:48voyeurism because you're like just watching the security
- 16:51footage, so it kind of feels like just spying on it, but you
- 16:54as the viewer are spying on them.
- 16:55So that one's. They're kind of openly sharing
- 16:59that though, too. So that feels it's more like,
- 17:02you know, like modern day like. It's a little, it's a little
- 17:06more voyeurism and a little less spying.
- 17:08Yeah, yeah, it is similar, but just different enough where one
- 17:13just feels kind of creepy and weird and one feels inherently
- 17:17compelling. But if you're into indie
- 17:18filmmaking, the voyeurism films are definitely going to make you
- 17:21more money than just the spying ones I would imagine.
- 17:26Just a guess, not that I've done either, but.
- 17:29But you want to talk about bang for your buck, which I'm pretty
- 17:31sure is where that phrase came from.
- 17:33Right? Like it had to be right.
- 17:35Exactly. OK, that's enough of that.
- 17:37OK, so then also the ring and barbarian.
- 17:41Nice. And I was going to throw this
- 17:43out there because I was so surprised that you mentioned
- 17:45Psycho for Hitchcock. And I was like, why wouldn't you
- 17:47go with Rear Window? True rear window is.
- 17:50Just a dude spying on people. Yeah, and it's, but it's not
- 17:54really a horror movie, but I guess it kind of is.
- 17:56It's a thriller. It's a suspense thriller, Yeah,
- 17:59so. True.
- 18:00I guess you can kind of put that as a subcategory of horror
- 18:02because it's puts people on edge.
- 18:05Yeah, I mean and Rear Window does do a good job of.
- 18:07That they did. They really did.
- 18:09Super uncomfortable it it works still to this day.
- 18:13Hitchcock was great when it comes to that stuff.
- 18:15And you know. It's going to do.
- 18:16You've leveraged Hitchcock yourself.
- 18:19Yeah, for the film, Dive just ripped him off for a dive,
- 18:22basically the goal, his whole. You leveraged.
- 18:25I don't think there was a like an actual RIP off off, but he
- 18:28does have a quote that you used as inspiration.
- 18:30Yeah, which? Was an inherently interesting
- 18:32situation. Dramatic irony is an inherently
- 18:35suspenseful situation where as long as the audience knows
- 18:39something that your character doesn't or characters don't,
- 18:42then you can make anything really intense really fast.
- 18:47Yeah. And his.
- 18:47His example was if there's if the audience knows there's a
- 18:50bomb underneath the table that's set to explode.
- 18:53But the two people having lunch at said table don't know it.
- 18:56Then the audience is going to be engaged no matter how ridiculous
- 18:59the conversation. Is it doesn't matter anything
- 19:01exactly. And you've been doing well with
- 19:03the film. The film's doing well.
- 19:04It will be at the Chicago Horror Film Festival this weekend.
- 19:09Yes, well, actually we're going this weekend, but this is pre
- 19:11recorded so. You're right.
- 19:12So it will have just played at the Chicago Horror Film
- 19:15Festival. But we're excited to go to it.
- 19:18So yes, inherently interesting. And it is like the the spine
- 19:22thing. I got kind of sidetracked here
- 19:25destroying. Starting a fire or destroying
- 19:28something, you have an example. I do have an example and that
- 19:33was the same one where I was being chased where we had a
- 19:36character with a gun. Shooting.
- 19:39Shooting at the car. I met your famous example to be.
- 19:42Fun. Oh, my famous example.
- 19:43But I we'll take. Yeah, I mean, I've done.
- 19:44It I've done it very badly before, like in indie films.
- 19:48But yeah, what did I write down here on that one?
- 19:51The Oh yeah, Midsummer finale. Duh.
- 19:54Yeah, Midsummer finale. Midsummer was one of my favorite
- 19:57movies. Midsummer was delightful.
- 20:00It's another one of those that it's like, I don't know if you
- 20:02could call that an outright. Horror film, because so much of
- 20:07it feels so not horror and so not typical horror.
- 20:11But I, yeah, I really liked, I really liked that movie.
- 20:16Likewise, my mine weren't Frankenstein, right?
- 20:21Angry mob. Nice.
- 20:24Usually has the. I've seen Young Frankenstein,
- 20:29that's the only Mary Shelley adaptation I've actually seen.
- 20:32The book is fantastic. The book is so good, but doesn't
- 20:35Young Frankenstein even still have?
- 20:38Yeah, they're after. They're trying to burn down.
- 20:40Yeah, they've still got the fire.
- 20:42Like the torch I. Think he was using the fire
- 20:43picks while he was doing the putting on the Ritz dance
- 20:47number. Yeah, OK.
- 20:48Brilliant. Also Carrie.
- 20:51Oh, clearly, yeah. Yeah, that one felt real good
- 20:53and also such a good good for her moment, which is another one
- 20:56of my favorite genres. And then the Mist.
- 21:00OK. Where the military kind of has
- 21:03to come in and shut everything down at the end.
- 21:06OK, you've seen about 4000 times more horror movies than I have
- 21:10seen and you're you're sticking to the main ones.
- 21:13But usually these horror movies I watch once, yeah, And then I
- 21:16kind of forget about him, except for Midsummer.
- 21:18Yeah. Well, cuz the.
- 21:20Good ones stick with you, which is why they're important to call
- 21:22out. Right?
- 21:23It's what made it stick with you so much.
- 21:25Exactly. But I also kind of feel like
- 21:29misery fits in there. And I know that's a bit of a
- 21:33stretch. Yeah, but.
- 21:36How are you shoehorning that one in there?
- 21:38Because the author, oh, I can't remember his name.
- 21:44Stephen King. No, no, the character that
- 21:48Stephen King based on himself in that in that the.
- 21:50Character's name, Yeah. I don't.
- 21:52I don't. Remember, it's not Arthur, but
- 21:54whatever it is, he's pretty desperate to get out of the
- 21:59house and is trying his best to like, start breaking things and
- 22:03just get the hell out of there. But I don't.
- 22:06Yeah, it's a little bit of a stretch, but.
- 22:09Well, that's a good example of. I'm going to jump around here
- 22:11then because we have kidnapping on there.
- 22:13Oh yeah? Well, Oh yeah, Mr. He's
- 22:15definitely kidnapping. Definitely about kidnapping.
- 22:18Such surreptitious kidnapping, right?
- 22:20Like, he doesn't even realize he's actually been kidnapped for
- 22:23at least a day or two. Yeah, that's so well done.
- 22:26He's like, just thinks he's under care.
- 22:28Being taken care of, yeah. And Stockholm syndrome never
- 22:31quite sets in. No, not the way that you.
- 22:33Hoped it would. Yeah, that's why I liked
- 22:35Midsummer. It's like that Stockholm.
- 22:37Yeah, but it was in Norway, not Sweden.
- 22:39Oh no, it wasn't Sweden. I don't remember, I know it was
- 22:41somewhere nor Dick. It was in Sweden.
- 22:43OK, yeah. So Stockholm syndrome does
- 22:45apply. That is, I think, actually the
- 22:47most apropos example of it, yeah.
- 22:49Except they were north of Stockholm, because Stockholm has
- 22:52night in the summertime because it's farther S But if you go way
- 22:55up north in Sweden, I would imagine just because of the.
- 22:58It's far up there, Latitude, yeah.
- 23:01OK, it's it's about, it's a movie about latitude.
- 23:04But yeah, I've done, I've done a film, a short film.
- 23:07It was for a 48 hour Film Festival that was about a
- 23:09kidnapping and it was a sci-fi and it was about a robot.
- 23:13And I don't know if you can find it online anymore.
- 23:16It was called Where There Is Love, There is Life, and it was
- 23:21a comedy slash sci-fi slash horror.
- 23:24But we just started with given this person is being kidnapped
- 23:28by this robot, and the robot is a murder robot, and it's
- 23:32receiving directions from its operators who are coming over a
- 23:35nebulous speaker system. And that was fun to do with the
- 23:38sound design on because I got to make a human sound like a robot
- 23:41with just like drill noises pitched up and down and then
- 23:44like heavy footsteps. And we just filmed it like all
- 23:47basically in mediums in the studio.
- 23:49Yeah, it was like it was just blank.
- 23:51Backdrop and so everything was sound design on that one.
- 23:53So that was kind of fun. I was happy with that one.
- 23:55And it was it did help to have a given like character is
- 23:59kidnapped, trying to escape and then having the character try to
- 24:03overcome obstacles that consistently fail.
- 24:07And, and what we learned on that one was that you need to, the
- 24:11more you push it. And we were having a
- 24:13conversation the other day about comedy and how if you continue
- 24:17to, like, let the joke linger for a really long time, like,
- 24:21the audience gets quiet and then it gets funny.
- 24:24Again, Yeah, the seagull. You got to wait.
- 24:26You got to wait for the, if you're, that is a very long
- 24:31example that I will not go into and that's on this podcast,
- 24:34especially because it's a podcast.
- 24:35It involves a lot of like flapping your arms as if you
- 24:37were a bird and that will not play well for audio only
- 24:40audiences. But the idea was laughter always
- 24:43comes in waves, and you just got to ride it out and wait for that
- 24:46next wave because it will come. You will get that third one for
- 24:51that final payoff. But sometimes you're going to
- 24:53feel like an idiot standing up in front of a bunch of people
- 24:55flapping your arms like a bird for a long time.
- 24:57Yeah. And if you're having somebody
- 24:59try to escape from something, the same rules apply where if
- 25:03you set the objective in front of them and you let the audience
- 25:06believe that this is going to be the way that they escape, and
- 25:08then that doesn't work out. Then that is even more
- 25:12stressful. Yeah, and so on.
- 25:14I think on the short film, in 6 minutes, we wanted to have three
- 25:17different avenues of escape present itself to this
- 25:20character. And then at the final one, it
- 25:24ended because he didn't actually escape, even though he thought
- 25:27he did. And so it worked out pretty
- 25:29well. Like, I was happy with it,
- 25:30obviously. Like, you know, it's indie film,
- 25:32low budget, 48 hours, yeah, nothing's going to be perfect,
- 25:35but. But it's, yeah, kidnapping,
- 25:37inherently interesting. Kidnapping is inherently
- 25:39interesting. I just remember really screwing
- 25:42up the logistics and practicing the stunt work on having
- 25:48somebody be kidnapped, where it was supposed to be a really
- 25:51quick scene where basically you just show a woman getting thrown
- 25:55into a trunk, somebody slamming the door, car driving away.
- 25:59We didn't really take into account the logistics of how
- 26:01difficult it is to throw a struggling, moving live body
- 26:05into a trunk. So did you hire an actor or were
- 26:07you just grabbing people off the street for this short?
- 26:09Film. I wanted the authenticity.
- 26:11So we were just kidnapping people was.
- 26:13This before the show Jackass or after the show Jackass?
- 26:17Definitely after no, it was a it was very much of A consenting
- 26:21actress. A very talented 1 here locally.
- 26:23Thanks again, Sheila. Inherently compelling situation.
- 26:26Actually kidnapping somebody. There we go.
- 26:28There's your inherently compelling situation.
- 26:30Committing an actual crime on film.
- 26:33Yes, it is very stressful for everyone involved.
- 26:35Because you will. You will be Which?
- 26:37Includes filming without a permit because that's
- 26:39technically a crime. It is.
- 26:41Oh, why is this film inherently interesting?
- 26:44Because we didn't get a filming permit.
- 26:45We didn't. That's not inherently
- 26:46interesting. Please don't do that.
- 26:47That sounds like a awful that. Doesn't sound as exciting as
- 26:50you. Want.
- 26:50Or maybe you can make it good. Actually, people could make it
- 26:52good. Yeah, if you're creative enough.
- 26:54People could think that work OK, then Next up.
- 26:58Getting trapped. I was going to go back to
- 27:00character dying. Yeah, we.
- 27:01Jumped around, we jumped around. So character dying, yes.
- 27:05I wanted to throw out like basically any vampire slash
- 27:13creature feature where you get to watch them turn right.
- 27:16So any vampire film, you're going to usually see a lot of
- 27:19people die. So I didn't feel the need to go
- 27:21into a bunch of specifics. Specifics on that one.
- 27:24Nightmare on Elm Street, I really like the Witch.
- 27:27I thought that was a really good example of it 'cause like, and
- 27:31then also I think possession movies as a whole kind of fit
- 27:35into this 'cause they are dead, but then undead, depending on
- 27:41the lore of the possession, I guess.
- 27:43But I liked that a lot. And then I really liked Smile.
- 27:47I don't know if you saw that one.
- 27:48No, I haven't seen Smile. Smile's really good.
- 27:50The sequel was fine, but the first one was really good and I
- 27:54was really into it. And it was.
- 27:58The whole thing is just basically people committing
- 28:01suicide in very different ways because this force is making
- 28:04them. And then of course, I don't
- 28:06think it's fair to not mention Happy Death Day.
- 28:09Just definitely one of my top absolute favorite horror films
- 28:14of all time. I love Happy Death Day.
- 28:17I think it's incredible. And it's just this repeat of
- 28:20this woman waking up every day and then she dies and then she
- 28:24wakes up again and she died. And it's just a matter of trying
- 28:27to figure out why this is happening.
- 28:29And I know that trope has been used quite a few times and it's
- 28:31not earth shattering or anything like that.
- 28:33I get it. I don't care.
- 28:36The way they executed this was so well done.
- 28:38It was beautiful. So happy Death Day.
- 28:40I think it's the IT is in the execution though, because
- 28:43basically a lot of stories have been told and they've been told
- 28:46since. Yeah.
- 28:47I mean, what is it? There are only like X number of
- 28:49actual stories and everything fits into one of those
- 28:52categories. Yeah, exactly.
- 28:53Unless it's really art house. These this is not a formula to
- 28:56actually write a script. We're just talking about some
- 28:59hopefully some ideas that we've seen from horror films that will
- 29:02get the juices flowing. If you're kind of at a stage
- 29:05where you're stuck on something. And I actually have a bit of
- 29:08trivia that I want to share right now because that's a good
- 29:11point. So I recently recently rewatched
- 29:13Cabin in the Woods which is a horror comedy that makes fun of
- 29:17all the horror tropes. Yes, about cabins and teenagers.
- 29:21And did it really well. Yes, and just so you know, Cabin
- 29:25in the Woods writers Drew Goddard and Josh Whedon, they
- 29:29wrote the script in three days, and I pulled that factoid off of
- 29:34IMDb. OK, that's really impressive.
- 29:37But it was only a first draft, and so I had to do a little bit
- 29:40more digging into that. They did a long weekend retreat
- 29:44for three days at a hotel room and they already had 10 pages
- 29:49for the film done. Oh, so they'd already ideated
- 29:52and begun writing this and then locked themselves into a hotel
- 29:55room for through for a weekend? Correct.
- 29:57They had they had an outline and then after they did the three
- 30:01day retreat, they took that first draft and continued to
- 30:05modify it over several months before they got the green light
- 30:09to shooting. So anytime you hear that
- 30:12somebody cranked out a script in like such a short amount of
- 30:16time, I would be a little incredulous about that because
- 30:19usually that means first draft and a lot of times the drafts
- 30:23could be up in 78910. We talked about that on.
- 30:25Another I think it goes so much higher than that they could do.
- 30:28Dozens of drafts and you don't know what the final draft is
- 30:31versus the one that they wrote initially.
- 30:34It is a good idea though, just to crank stuff out.
- 30:37Just get something on a page. Yeah, get it done, because you
- 30:40can always go back and then use some of those ideas in a later
- 30:43script if you don't use it for the script that you're going to
- 30:45end up shooting. But, you know, crank it out.
- 30:48But no, they did not actually write the final shooting script
- 30:50in three. Days.
- 30:51What we saw on screen was not what they wrote in 72 hours.
- 30:56No OK. But that was just like a little
- 30:57factoid that they had on their IMDb page, so hey.
- 31:00Hey, what was interesting on that note then?
- 31:04Yeah, I think the what is it, the character getting drunk?
- 31:10Oh, yes, yeah. Cabin in the Woods is, I would
- 31:13put it in that one because they do emphasize the trope of like
- 31:17the drunken teenager. Yes, because obviously Evil Dead
- 31:20has some of that too. Oh.
- 31:21Yeah, for sure. I actually personally think
- 31:24Cabin Fever did it best OK, because it was a much different
- 31:29twist on that stereotypical we're a bunch of teenagers who
- 31:33were going to get drunk in the woods.
- 31:35Because for those of you who haven't seen either version of
- 31:38Cabin Fever, they're both identical.
- 31:40They're not completely identical.
- 31:41I don't know why they did the remake.
- 31:42Anyway, sorry personal opinion. Well I mean they did the same
- 31:46thing with Psycho. It was.
- 31:48I'm pretty sure Psycho the remake was like shot for shot.
- 31:51Was it? If I remember correctly, it was.
- 31:53Really. I think I've seen the remake.
- 31:54Oh, it was really similar. There was a Psycho remake.
- 31:56Oh yeah, yeah, I think that was in early 2000s.
- 31:58I don't know enough about it but.
- 32:00Well, now I'm going to go look that one up because I don't
- 32:02even, I don't even remember hearing.
- 32:03It was, it was really, really close.
- 32:05It was super, super similar. And so it's just kind of like
- 32:08we're just going to remake the same movie 40 years later.
- 32:10Good job. Good job.
- 32:12Well, cabin fever was basically the water is contaminated with
- 32:17this really grossly infected dead body.
- 32:20Yeah, so everybody who's drinking water is getting
- 32:23infected. And the ones that were just
- 32:27drinking booze, the teenagers that were just partying hard and
- 32:30not drinking any water were the only ones who had a shot at
- 32:32living. Oh nice.
- 32:33Yeah, so I thought that was a really fun.
- 32:35Just a little bit of like medieval slash early US
- 32:38settlement history. Yeah, for you.
- 32:40Exactly. That's why everybody used to
- 32:42drink beer. It was safer than the water.
- 32:44It's a lot safer. The water was dangerous.
- 32:47Yeah. Kill you.
- 32:48It's not great. OK so then getting physically
- 32:52trapped is the next or no? Do you have a character getting
- 32:54drunk example before having fun. No, I like The Shining.
- 32:58I do like the. Because he hints at the fact
- 33:00that he was on the wagon like he wasn't drinking.
- 33:03And then he has a drink with a ghost and you're like, well,
- 33:06there isn't even any booze at the hotel, but then he's somehow
- 33:10getting drunk with his ghost. And I just thought that was kind
- 33:12of like a cool scene that that is a fun.
- 33:14It wasn't necessarily just him getting drunk, but it was him
- 33:17having even deeper of a mental breakdown than you realized.
- 33:20Yeah, which is kind of cool. That's a fun little note.
- 33:23OK, All right. So then physically trapped.
- 33:26Physically trapped people, yeah, obviously saw.
- 33:29Saw as a real Yeah, they were definitely physically.
- 33:31Trapped. They're kind of, that's kind of
- 33:32like kidnapped and or trapped, but yeah.
- 33:35Well, the descent also physically trapped in this cave
- 33:39underground, Yeah, with all these creepy people ish things,
- 33:43yeah, super fun. Oh yeah, I haven't seen that one
- 33:46in forever. I love that one.
- 33:47I keep trying to get my girlfriends to cosplay that at
- 33:50like horror cons with me. Just show up covered in blood
- 33:52and in like climbing gear, it'd be really easy.
- 33:56Oh, those see those Speaking of being getting trapped, if you've
- 33:59ever watched those those videos of people that are that do the
- 34:02spelunking where they climb into those caves where it's you can
- 34:06they put the camera out in front of them and you can see them
- 34:08squeezing their chest through these super tight cavities.
- 34:11It makes you feel claustrophobic even though you're sitting in
- 34:14like an office. Anxiety inducing for sure.
- 34:17So yeah, just do that for your horror movie.
- 34:19Very inherently stressful or, you know, enticing or, or
- 34:24whatnot. I do want to call out Gerald's
- 34:26Game too, though, 'cause that one was kind of funny, but not
- 34:31funny, but a little bit funny 'cause it's this couple.
- 34:34Have you seen it? I don't remember if I've seen it
- 34:37or not. OK, so couple having problems in
- 34:40their relationship because of course there's an argument with
- 34:42a lover, yes, but they both want to fix their relationship.
- 34:45So they're going away to this like, you know, romantic getaway
- 34:48weekend. And when things are starting to
- 34:50get a little hot and heavy, just a little bit spicy, they, like,
- 34:54have handcuffs and they're like, handcuffed to each other.
- 34:57And then he dies. Oh, I have seen that.
- 35:02One and then she's stuck handcuffed to this body in bed
- 35:06like that's right next to him as he's like starting to compose
- 35:09and everything like that was just so messed up.
- 35:12It's so good and kind of funny. Not funny, but anyway, yeah, OK
- 35:16now. With cell phones, that'd be a
- 35:17pretty quick fix. Yeah.
- 35:18You just call somebody. Yeah.
- 35:19But back in the day, if the hotel line was too far away from
- 35:22you, you'd have to eat your own hand off.
- 35:24Yeah. You wouldn't.
- 35:24You wouldn't be OK. Yeah, there's just been a lot
- 35:27more people not losing their hands since cell phones were
- 35:29invented. Thanks, cell phones.
- 35:31Yeah. OK.
- 35:33And last character on trial. I could only think of 2 for this
- 35:36one. Yeah, and I couldn't think of
- 35:37any. I have the exorcism of Emily
- 35:40Rose and then the conjurings. The devil made me do it.
- 35:44Oh nice. Which are both about trials in
- 35:48their own way, but funny enough, both about how they're on trial
- 35:53for committing this murder, but their defense is that a demon
- 35:57was possessing them and that they can't be held responsible.
- 36:00Yeah, they're crazy. They're crazy.
- 36:01Or no, not technically crazy, just possessed.
- 36:05Not crazy, just possessed. Well.
- 36:08For characters on trial, there have been an entire television
- 36:11series dedicated to the fact that a character on trial is
- 36:14inherently interesting. So.
- 36:16Well, yeah. Law and order.
- 36:18I love that show. Yes, OK, those are those are our
- 36:2310, not 12 inherently compelling situations specifically drawn
- 36:28from horror films, but obviously can easily be repurposed to any
- 36:31other film. Like for example, getting
- 36:33Trapped, 127 Hours. Yes, kind of a thriller, but I
- 36:36don't think I would call that a horror film.
- 36:38No, these are universally used like usable tropes.
- 36:43But you know, we actually came up with quite a few of them at
- 36:46Lower Gentry Studios. It seems like these ones are a
- 36:48little bit more horror focus, but if you watch films and you
- 36:52could probably just talk to AI at this juncture and they can
- 36:54give you like a, a list of things.
- 36:56If you're stuck on your writing process, go watch another movie.
- 37:00And maybe if you see just kind of pay attention to the
- 37:03surroundings, the environment and the characterization and
- 37:05those scenes that you feel yourself gravitate towards, and
- 37:08then maybe figure out a way to get your own story arc to lead
- 37:12into one of those situations. Yeah.
- 37:14And hopefully it's a situation that you can film too.
- 37:17That's even better when it's also practical.
- 37:20Yeah, you know, like a character stuck in an airplane Might be
- 37:23tricky if you're on a very low budget.
- 37:25If you're on a very low budget and you aren't willing to sneak
- 37:28your camera onto a plane. Yeah, tricky stuff.
- 37:30All right, Well, shall we end with assisting?
- 37:32Farewell. I think so.
- 37:34Excellent. Goodbye, Bye.