Latest / INSPIRE STORY / I Pretended To Be A Missing Girl
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- 0:15Speaker 1: We don't come back to Creekcast today we are doing
- 0:18would you call this a Hollywood special? Now? With how
- 0:21with the recent news it's.
- 0:22Speaker 2: A bit of a crossover, I'd say, yeah, sure, Yeah.
- 0:24Speaker 1: We are reading a story from Back of the Day
- 0:28called I Pretended to Be a Missing Girl, which coincidentally,
- 0:32not coincidentally, because we're reading this because of this is
- 0:34it's the new movie Sidney Sweeney is doing. When we
- 0:37saw that there was a movie that is going to
- 0:40be about an r slash No Sleep story, we had
- 0:42to read it, and I'm excited. I'm excited to read
- 0:45this and then go see it when it comes out
- 0:47and then see like, you know, what do they keep?
- 0:49What do they change? All that kind of stuff?
- 0:50Speaker 3: Mm hmm.
- 0:51Speaker 1: Yeah.
- 0:51Speaker 3: I think this is interesting because I actually hadn't heard
- 0:55of this no Sleep story before, and it's only four
- 0:58years old, which for most no Sleep stories is pretty short.
- 1:01It's pretty recent.
- 1:02Speaker 1: Is it only? Is it only four years old or
- 1:04because sold we've seen that it was posted on multiple
- 1:09r slash websites. I think we're reading the version from
- 1:11r slash Short Stories, because I think it's the updated version. Yes.
- 1:15Speaker 3: So the author is a guy named Joe Cote on
- 1:20joeko Sleep or on Reddit. His name is Jay cot twelve.
- 1:25He originally wrote the story to r slash No Sleep,
- 1:27and it was a shorter version that actually had a
- 1:30link at the end that made it seem like the
- 1:33ending of the story was in a newspaper, like it
- 1:36was a newspaper clipan, which is pretty cool. But then
- 1:38he decided to do a rewrite, add onto the story
- 1:41a bit more, and posted a second version of it
- 1:43in r slash Short Stories. So that's the version we're
- 1:45going to be reading today. But both of those say
- 1:47they were posted four years ago. So as far as
- 1:50like horror stories on Reddit goes, that's pretty recent from
- 1:54what we've seen.
- 1:54Speaker 1: Yeah, no, definitely usually. I mean, I if you would
- 1:57have told me it, like when I first I guess
- 2:00when I first heard about it, I was thinking of, oh,
- 2:02this is like a twenty fifteen, twenty sixteen story, you know,
- 2:06that kind of golden era of people posting in there.
- 2:09So they see that it's only four years old, something
- 2:11like maybe a COVID story. Probably maybe Joe was just
- 2:15you know, sitting at home, like not doing shit. Maybe
- 2:18that's what inspired something out of this. So pretty curious
- 2:21to see though. Sydney Sweeney. Yeah, you know, master of film,
- 2:25as Isaiah said, and the you know, I really appreciate
- 2:30her her ability to find intro like the immaculate movie
- 2:35that she I don't know if she directed it, but
- 2:37I think she produced it and started it. Yeah, but
- 2:41just still kind of weird, odd horror choice here, So
- 2:44I'm wondering where that hook is going to be in
- 2:47here as well. That maybe makes it kind of visually
- 2:50interesting to translate that to the screen. So I'm hoping
- 2:52that there's some goodies here.
- 2:54Speaker 2: Always cool to me whenever actors like develop a.
- 3:01Speaker 3: Kind of role of what's the word, I'm looking for
- 3:04an investment sort of in the projects are working on
- 3:06where she's like, this looks good, I'm gonna go in
- 3:08as a producer and as an actress. And also I
- 3:12believe Eric Roth is currently set to do the screenplay
- 3:15for it.
- 3:15Speaker 2: And uh he did.
- 3:18Speaker 3: Dune.
- 3:18Speaker 2: I think he was a part of the writing team
- 3:21on Dune Less.
- 3:22Speaker 3: I'm way off. So the guy who wrote the Dune movie,
- 3:26no no, no, the screenplay, the screenplay, the guy who wrote.
- 3:29Speaker 1: It is no no, That's what I'm saying. The Dune movie.
- 3:31I'm saying the guy who wrote the the Dune movie,
- 3:34the screenplay for the movie is doing the r slash
- 3:37no sleep hooor film.
- 3:38Speaker 3: If that's true, I'll make sure. Let me make sure.
- 3:40Hold on, am I talking? He did Forrest Gump? Apparently
- 3:45hold on?
- 3:46Speaker 1: Wait the guy who did Dune?
- 3:47Speaker 2: He did Dune. Yeah, wow, he did Dune and Forrest Gump.
- 3:51Speaker 1: Good for you, good for city suited forgetting that. That's
- 3:54fucking crazy. I like, go, the guy's just like Forrest Gump, Dune,
- 3:59and then now now I pretended to be a missing
- 4:02girl class.
- 4:06Speaker 3: I'll say this is pretty stacked so far.
- 4:09Speaker 1: Yeah, this is a fucking This is a killer This
- 4:13is a killer lineup. I said, would just fucking hop in.
- 4:17Speaker 3: Also, congratulations to Joe Cote for like writing a story
- 4:21on boyd Joe four years ago to get of this. Also,
- 4:24according to what I've seen online, uh, he is a
- 4:27high school English teacher. Uh so he's just like an
- 4:30English teacher who likes stories who wrote this and that
- 4:34it's got all distractions, So congratulations.
- 4:36Speaker 2: Be sure to check out on Reddit.
- 4:38Speaker 3: I couldn't find any other definitive links to like his
- 4:41socials or stuff like that. But as this becomes more popular,
- 4:44like as the story gets made into a film, I'm
- 4:46sure it'll come out.
- 4:47Speaker 2: But congrats Joe. That is very cool.
- 4:50Speaker 1: Yeah, he seems, like you were saying, to be pretty
- 4:52active on Reddit. So go give him some support there.
- 4:54Go read some of his other stuff as well. And uh,
- 4:57you know, Joe, like you said, congratulations, man, the guy
- 4:59who fuck wrote Dune and Forrest Gump is writing the screenplay.
- 5:03That's pretty sick, pretty sick. Now here's the real kicker.
- 5:07Do I try to do a Sydney Sweeney impression for
- 5:10this episode?
- 5:12Speaker 2: What does your Sydney Sweeney impression sound like?
- 5:15Speaker 1: I'm trying to think. I've seen her euphoria a lot,
- 5:19and it's like, oh no, it's not Valley Girl. It's
- 5:24more it's just kind of I guess, just I guess
- 5:26it's just be a regular.
- 5:28Speaker 3: It's no, it's she's kind of got that. It's not southern,
- 5:32but it's like Wyoming sort of like the like, uh
- 5:36north West draw.
- 5:39Speaker 1: You know, how does that going for you? What does
- 5:41that look like for you?
- 5:42Speaker 3: I I can't do impressions. I don't want to do
- 5:44that to myself right now. It's like like it's kind
- 5:49of Valley girl. I can't you know what whatever your
- 5:52heart thinks is the right move with this one. Okay,
- 5:55I'll trust you to it, all right, we'll see. Well,
- 5:58if it's horrible, I don't want to be judged.
- 6:00Speaker 2: Okay, well you should be.
- 6:01Speaker 3: I think also, if my voice is a little rough
- 6:06in this episode, I apologize. I was on a flight
- 6:08yesterday and there was a guy behind me who just
- 6:11had the wettest, like sickly cough. I think I've ever heard.
- 6:17It sounded like he was like gurgling as he was coughing.
- 6:20Speaker 1: I was sitting and I was like, where are you
- 6:22going with this?
- 6:23Speaker 3: Like like as the cough was floating around me, like
- 6:27you could smell the pestilence in it.
- 6:30Speaker 2: It was rough. So I feeled a little under the
- 6:32weather today. I think I caught whatever he has. I am.
- 6:35Speaker 3: I'm once again a rat inside of God's hot car.
- 6:40H and I'm I'm pushing through. But if if I suffered,
- 6:46it's it's it's that guy's fault.
- 6:48Speaker 2: But also Hunters somehow.
- 6:50Speaker 1: Channel channel Sydney Sweeney's vision for this movie, for the
- 6:56for this story to turn into a movie, and let
- 6:58that guide you to a listful reading experience that we're
- 7:01getting ready to endure.
- 7:03Speaker 3: Thank you, I appreciate that. Hunter.
- 7:05Speaker 1: Here we go.
- 7:06Speaker 3: I pretended to be a missing girl. Mikayla Murray went
- 7:09missing twelve years ago on the eve of her eighteenth birthday.
- 7:13She didn't have any big plans or anything, but her
- 7:15friends described her as having been in a particularly good
- 7:19mood for what was an otherwise perfectly normal Friday. She
- 7:23gone to school, soccer practice, work, and then came home
- 7:27for a night of movies with her kid brother James.
- 7:30He was more excited for her birthday than she was,
- 7:33even wanted to stay awake with her until midnight, but
- 7:35of course had fallen asleep brought away. When he woke
- 7:38in the middle of the night, he saw her headlights
- 7:41shining through his window and watched as a rush down
- 7:44their country road, not knowing that it was the last
- 7:47he'd never see her. The poor kid was only five
- 7:50and would be forever tormented over why she'd left him
- 7:53or why she never come back. It wasn't until the
- 7:56sun came up on that cold Saturday morning that anyone
- 8:00realized something was wrong. Her parents entered her room to
- 8:03wish her a happy birthday, only to find her bed, empty,
- 8:07car gone, and phone off. They'd started their rounds of
- 8:10calls to all of Mikayla's friends, but nobody had seen
- 8:14or heard from her. Panic really started to set in
- 8:17when Michaela's car was found abandoned on the side of
- 8:19a heavily wooded road facing the wrong direction, practically in
- 8:23the middle of nowhere. There were no parks or hiking trails,
- 8:27nor were there any signs of a struggle or any
- 8:29evidence of where she might have gone next. Until Mikhaela's
- 8:33parents followed that road on a map. They knew she
- 8:35had a boyfriend, Tom. He was a year older and
- 8:39had just gone off to college. He'd been trying to
- 8:41get Michaela to come visit him, but her parents forbid it.
- 8:45But if they hadn't, this was the very road Michaela
- 8:48would have taken to get there. So while Linda Murray
- 8:51filed the missing person's report, Paul Murray sped on up
- 8:54that road all the way to Tom's university. Tom swore
- 8:58to him and later the investors that he hadn't seen
- 9:01her in weeks, that he had been in his room
- 9:04studying that night. His roommate confirmed to such with the
- 9:08added disclosure of having later gone home where he'd then
- 9:11spent that weekend. The rest was uncertain. The police looked
- 9:16deeper into Tom and found strands of Michaela's hair in
- 9:18his car, which proved nothing foul, but it spooked him
- 9:22enough into admitting that he'd seen Michaela more recently than
- 9:25he'd stated that he'd picked her up late the weekend
- 9:28prior for midnight drive. This added precisely like what had
- 9:31happened the night she'd gone missing, but police found nothing
- 9:35to substantiate it. Tom was eventually cleared as a suspect,
- 9:39and the Murrays would never let it go. They were
- 9:41certain he was involved in Michaela's disappearance, so certain that
- 9:45Paul Murray spent several nights sitting outside Tom's storm waiting
- 9:48to catch his daughter going in or out. Tom's family
- 9:51wanted to press charges, but Paul had friends in the
- 9:53Sheriff's office who assured the family that it would not
- 9:56happen again and left Paul with a very stern warning.
- 10:00But being friends with law enforcement only went so far,
- 10:03and the case would soon go cold, days, weeks and
- 10:06months passing by without any further updates. The public moved on,
- 10:11while the people in Mikayla's life were left with this
- 10:13dark cloud of uncertainty, wondering what had happened to her
- 10:17if she was out there somewhere alive. And she was,
- 10:21she was about to return home after more than a
- 10:23decade gone, because I'm Mikayla Murray and I ran away
- 10:28that night to start a new life. That's what I
- 10:31told the Murray's. Anyway, I had no idea what happened
- 10:34to that girl.
- 10:36Speaker 1: It's a friend hook, Okay, that's a fun. However, I
- 10:38will say if I was the dad, and if I
- 10:40was Paul, I would just be like, dude, I'm sitting
- 10:43outside of a fucking dorm. Ill look, I'm It'd be
- 10:45different if every day he was beating the hell out
- 10:47of Tom.
- 10:48Speaker 2: You know, a crime?
- 10:52Speaker 1: Maybe it is, dude, you can't just sit out here
- 10:54and watching We's just like, I can't watch you going
- 10:56in and out of these buildings. It's weird.
- 10:59Speaker 3: But is it?
- 11:00Speaker 1: Is it illegal?
- 11:07Speaker 3: Actually?
- 11:07Speaker 2: You're like, what's the problem is crime?
- 11:10Speaker 3: I do think it is illegal to set outside of
- 11:13a student's dorm, or at least like it's probably illegal
- 11:17at the campus, right I guess.
- 11:19Speaker 1: Yeah, because well, I guess it would be because that's
- 11:22probably private property. I would assume they one hundred.
- 11:25Speaker 3: Percent would ask you to leave, and if you didn't leave,
- 11:28then you'd be trespassing.
- 11:30Speaker 1: The problem is probably the problem is probably Paul's like, no,
- 11:34I'm not leaving here, and the security guards like, uh
- 11:39oh okay. Awkward.
- 11:42Speaker 3: He's like, I don't get paid enough for this.
- 11:44Speaker 1: But now we have we have a girl who was
- 11:48probably fucking murdered, and then for some reason, some person
- 11:52decided to capitalize on it over a decade later. What
- 11:55a psychopaths.
- 11:59Speaker 3: I'm excited. Let's see where this goes. So I'm awful.
- 12:02I know, I'm not proud of myself. I was desperate,
- 12:06homeless and on the run, smoking a pack of day,
- 12:09sleeping with men from bars for money, only to spend
- 12:12it at another bar.
- 12:14Speaker 2: And do it all over again, same, honey.
- 12:16Speaker 3: I was stuck. And that's really funny to imagine you
- 12:22like going to bars and being like, hey, SUTs, you're
- 12:25looking for a Oh no, how you doing warm tonight?
- 12:28Speaker 1: Are you doing? Sweetheart? What's your name? And the guy's
- 12:30like what I do? Like you ever see heaven? He said,
- 12:37what the hell are you talking about? He's like, let's
- 12:39go in the bathroom. I'll open the gates right now
- 12:41for you. So i'd say, and I have I have
- 12:44the cutest little red skirt on pleasure, whole outfit pleasure.
- 12:50Speaker 3: You ever seen that? Just you just haven't shaved your
- 12:57hair is still like the same way, like nothing.
- 12:59Speaker 1: It's kind of at first like the heavy seene Heaven thing.
- 13:01It's I say, poetic, it's it's a bit less on
- 13:05the nose. But then by the end of it, I'm
- 13:06just like, I'm gonna suck.
- 13:07Speaker 3: Your balls, Okay, I just.
- 13:14Speaker 2: Like all yous.
- 13:15Speaker 3: Yeah.
- 13:15Speaker 1: The guy just like beats the ship on me.
- 13:18Speaker 3: Damn.
- 13:18Speaker 1: A simple note would have been fine.
- 13:21Speaker 3: It's like you're like laying in the alley out bag, right,
- 13:25I'll see you around.
- 13:28Speaker 1: You don't know what you've missed out on?
- 13:32Speaker 3: Is that all you got?
- 13:35Speaker 1: You got?
- 13:36Speaker 3: Yeah?
- 13:36Speaker 1: Spitting out teeth like a whistle.
- 13:40Speaker 3: Better? Yeah, this is you. The story is about you. Actually,
- 13:45Sidney Sweeney's playing you in the movie.
- 13:46Speaker 1: Yeah, imagine the viewer listener, Now imagine that the the
- 13:52person that's doing this is just me, but I'm dressed
- 13:55up as Sidney Sweeney. I have a blonde wig on,
- 13:57and my tits are just as big as hers, except
- 14:00umbering to push up ron.
- 14:01Speaker 3: So the recording has been going seventeen minutes and thirty
- 14:04one seconds. I was wondering how long it would take
- 14:07you to mention Sidney Swingy's chest. I was just I
- 14:10was proud of you for not doing it in the intro.
- 14:12Speaker 1: But seventeen minutes, seventeen minutes, thirty one seconds. And to
- 14:15be fair, I said that I am emulating her large
- 14:18breast with my own large breast.
- 14:20Speaker 3: Okay, but you still mention them. I just yeah, I
- 14:23just no, that's fair. Come up eventually, that's fair.
- 14:25Speaker 1: I was forcing all the blood to my face to
- 14:27not scream out it immediately. So I know, I know.
- 14:30Speaker 2: I was proud of you for not bringing it up
- 14:32in the intro. That was a big step.
- 14:33Speaker 3: I know. I'm very proud of you. Hunter.
- 14:37Speaker 2: I was stuck and needed a plan.
- 14:39Speaker 3: Then I saw her face, like Kayla Murray. It was
- 14:44on a bulletin board at some cheap motel I've been
- 14:46passing through. There were half a dozen girls out there,
- 14:49and Mikayla stood out, her blonde hair straight and pretty,
- 14:52her blue eyes as white as her smile stopped me
- 14:55doun in my tracks. Because she looked like me, exactly
- 14:59like me. I could have swapped in one of my
- 15:02old high school photos and nobody would have noticed. Not
- 15:05that anyone was paying attention to the sport or these
- 15:08girls anymore, even the lady at the motel who spotted
- 15:12me staring and said.
- 15:14Speaker 1: They ain't going home, dear, But I don't got the
- 15:17heart to dag them down.
- 15:21Speaker 3: I was curious enough to turn on the phone I'd
- 15:24kept in my bag just in case. My father had
- 15:27long stopped paying for it, but the motel offered free
- 15:29Wi Fi, and I'd used it to read more about Mikayla.
- 15:33I learned that she was only two years older than me,
- 15:36that the photo in the lobby wasn't just a one off.
- 15:39Speaker 2: She resembled me in every other photo, of which there
- 15:42were many.
- 15:43Speaker 3: Along with theories about what had happened to her, I
- 15:46couldn't have given any.
- 15:47Speaker 2: Less of a shit about that rabbit hole.
- 15:49Speaker 3: What got my interest were the earrings Mikayla wore in
- 15:52these photos, or the necklace her mother wore at the
- 15:55press conference, or the watch on her dad's wrist. So
- 15:58I dug deeper became clear that the Murray's had money,
- 16:02a fair good amount of it. After entering Jerry from the.
- 16:12Speaker 1: Oh, I think I think. I didn't think Isah caught
- 16:15himself caught himself a fly. He's a little barfly as well.
- 16:20He's like, oh, someone's in my web. I said, knock, knock, Jerry,
- 16:25who's there?
- 16:26Speaker 3: I said that, and I'm like, all right, Well that
- 16:28that was like a trap card for Hunter.
- 16:30Speaker 1: Yeah, it didn't feel like a pot of greed.
- 16:33Speaker 3: Yeah, Hunter gets to draw three additional insults from his deck.
- 16:42Speaker 1: Yeah, your day, that's just not a great deal. I
- 16:50wish you said, drawing three cards, you could just call
- 16:52your opponent gay. That'd be funny.
- 16:54Speaker 3: I mean you can from doing that. Half After entertaining
- 17:00Jerry from the bar and stealing his jacket, I ripped
- 17:04a butt. L like that.
- 17:07Speaker 2: What I ripped a butt late that night? What does
- 17:12that mean?
- 17:14Speaker 1: I think it means.
- 17:15Speaker 3: Uh.
- 17:15Speaker 1: I think it means. I think it's a might be
- 17:19euphanism for weed, or I may me think of a
- 17:22cigarette butt. But it is funny. You entering it is
- 17:26funny if you're saying entering Jerry into Emilia, I ripped
- 17:29a butt I played pot of Greed or get.
- 17:43Speaker 3: Any time I misspeak from here on out, I can
- 17:45just hear the sound of it.
- 17:53Speaker 1: Okay, let me just do this, and it's again.
- 17:55Speaker 3: After entertaining Jerry from the bar and stealing his jacket,
- 17:59I ripped butt late that night and decided one of
- 18:02those girls was coming home and it was going to
- 18:04be me.
- 18:05Speaker 1: That's it.
- 18:06Speaker 3: I like the detail that, like looking at the press
- 18:09conference photos and stuff, she noticed how much money they had,
- 18:11by the jewelry they wore, and like the earrings she
- 18:13had in pictures and stuff.
- 18:14Speaker 1: Like I don't know why I made me think of
- 18:16a gone girl of like just the press conference thing.
- 18:21Just they're not related really, but just the way that
- 18:25how I guess crafty the main character is in that movie,
- 18:29and just like able to manipulate situations and stuff. It's
- 18:32just cool. And also, yeah, if you were sitting there,
- 18:34you're like, holy fuck, I look like this person. And
- 18:36it's been over ten years. I mean, I think plausibly
- 18:39you could be like I feel like I could just
- 18:40fucking get away with this. I don't know. I hate
- 18:43sleep at night, but you know, you do what you
- 18:45gotta do.
- 18:45Speaker 3: I mean, yeah, yeah, it's like, well, you know, I mean,
- 18:49if she's already willing to like sell herself for money,
- 18:52then like lyne to a family is probably the better alternative, right.
- 18:56Speaker 1: Yeah, I mean I would much rather well, you know what,
- 18:59and this is not gonna honestly, prostitution is nowhere near
- 19:05as evil as going to a family, lying to them,
- 19:09giving them hope that their daughter is alive. And well,
- 19:12uh but I'll tell you.
- 19:14Speaker 2: I thought it much as a wild take, But that's
- 19:17that was actually fine.
- 19:18Speaker 1: Continue, Yeah, I was gonna say, I just don't get
- 19:20me wrong. Probably if you were able to live with
- 19:24yourself for being a piece of shit, that's probably a
- 19:26much better life to live, for sure.
- 19:28Speaker 3: But oh yeah, that's what I mean that like she
- 19:31one hundred percent is like this is gonna be far easier,
- 19:35Like I don't want to yeah, yeah.
- 19:36Speaker 1: Yeah, get the fuck out with these motels all that stuff. Yeah,
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- 20:56the spooky episode. Uh oh, let's get scared again.
- 21:00Speaker 3: The Murray still lived in the same house now west
- 21:05of the small Michigan towns I've been nesting in, which
- 21:08worked perfectly as I'd been toying with the idea of
- 21:10going back home to Chicago. It was a cheap way
- 21:13to justify the awful thing I was about to do,
- 21:16because in reality, there was no way I was actually
- 21:18going back home, even with Murray fortune in my pockets.
- 21:22It's frightening what we'll do to ensure were the good
- 21:24guys in our story. So dished out a small chunk
- 21:27of my arraining cash to hop on a bus. I
- 21:29felt no hesitation or fear. Sure it was risky, but
- 21:33I wasn't planning on being there for more than a night.
- 21:37I'd done enough research on Mikayla to get in, find
- 21:39what I could take, and get out. I was going
- 21:41to beg the family to give me one day before
- 21:43alerting anyone that I'd returned, to let me rest in
- 21:46my own bed before being formed by whatever media nowhere
- 21:49Indiana had to offer. After miles and miles of cornfields,
- 21:54I'd hoped to have plenty of time to escape that wave.
- 21:57When the bus arrived at the station, I couldn't help
- 22:00but notice how out of place it looked, like it
- 22:03had been copied and pasted from somewhere else. Standing out
- 22:06among the Rundown outlets, shops and restaurants, I spotted a
- 22:10seedy looking bar next to an even more questionable looking
- 22:13mechanic and thought about making a detour. I needed a drink,
- 22:17but I couldn't. I had to make sure not to
- 22:19talk to anyone. Couldn't risk being mistaken for the town's
- 22:23longest missing girl. Not here, not now. So when an
- 22:27older man approached me outside the station as I smoked
- 22:29one last cigarette, I panicked. He asked if I could
- 22:33bum him one, said that he really needed it, so
- 22:36I did, just to make him go away. He started
- 22:39rambling on about his car having broken down and the
- 22:41shithole and how he was stuck here until they fixed it.
- 22:45He told me his name and then asked me mine.
- 22:47Told him it was Abby, It's not he said. I
- 22:50reminded him of his niece back in Iowa. Something I
- 22:54pretended was interesting. Maybe I can pretend to be her too,
- 22:58I thought. When I Fini smoking, I wished him luck
- 23:01and set off for what I came here to do.
- 23:04I shot up the rest of my cigarettes and lighter
- 23:06deep into my backpack along with my real identity. When
- 23:09I turned down Lincoln Avenue, it was no longer me
- 23:12or Abby. I was Bekayla Murray. Yeah.
- 23:15Speaker 1: I was just thinking about what we see. We see
- 23:17missing reports sometimes. I'm sure that this happens sometimes, But
- 23:21what if Mikayla, Like what if there's something horrible at
- 23:24the house that she's that she escaped from that uh,
- 23:28that she was just like, I'm just gonna leave my
- 23:30life so my family can't find me, and that's you know,
- 23:32they're they're still looking for you know what I mean.
- 23:35It's almost like if you had some like you were
- 23:36living in some kind of hell and then the person
- 23:39left and it was like actually a good thing, just
- 23:41like a weird dest I don't know, my mind was
- 23:43thinking about that where when anytime you go to the Midwest,
- 23:47it's always just kind of this weird It's it's like
- 23:49a very like desolate feeling.
- 23:52Speaker 3: I don't know, I kind of suspect that might be
- 23:55where the story's going. Maybe it's fun, Like yeah, yeah,
- 24:00I kind of get the vibe. It's like, well, because
- 24:03the story is not just going to be I stole
- 24:04stuff and I left, There's going to be something that happens,
- 24:07So that.
- 24:07Speaker 2: Might be where it goes.
- 24:09Speaker 1: Also, our fake MICHAELA. Murray also saying like, I wonder
- 24:11if I could be her too, has immediately made her
- 24:14made me not like this person, Like I'm like, I
- 24:16fucking hate this person so much.
- 24:18Speaker 3: Well, she she's desperate for money and she's willing to
- 24:20do whatever it takes.
- 24:21Speaker 1: There's desperation, but then there's also, uh, I don't know,
- 24:24she's a she's a snake for sure. I don't know.
- 24:27Speaker 3: Yeah, yeah, yeah, hold on, let me piss really quick.
- 24:31Speaker 1: Uh, whip your cock out and pisses on the keyboard.
- 24:37I said, I didn't hear my funny bit about whipping
- 24:41his dick out and pissing on his keyboard. I said
- 24:44it to no laughs, and I kind of looked like
- 24:47a jackass. How foolish I am. Yeah, it was so
- 24:54clever too, the absurdity of pissing on your own keyboard.
- 25:01I'll do better. I'll do better. It'd be kind of
- 25:05funny at the guy who's like, hey, I buy a cigarette,
- 25:07It's like, sure, he's like, yeah, I just playing on
- 25:09a ripping butt. If the author, if Joe just kept
- 25:13putting that in the story, It's like, what the fuck
- 25:15does that even means?
- 25:18Speaker 3: He's like, ripped a butt out of the case, like
- 25:20pull the cigarette butt. But I don't think I've ever
- 25:24heard that phrase.
- 25:25Speaker 1: I've never heard of ripping a butt.
- 25:27Speaker 3: I've heard ripping a sig. I've heard of people saying
- 25:29ripping a cigarette, but I don't I just have not
- 25:32heard ripping a butt.
- 25:34Speaker 2: Yeah, yeah, don't mind me, Yeah, ribbing butt out here.
- 25:39Speaker 1: She's gonna go back and they're gonna have a nice
- 25:43they're gonna have a nice dinner tonight. And the dad's
- 25:46and to be like, Mikayla, would you like to rip butt? Mikayla,
- 25:51would you like us to rip butt together? Sure? You
- 25:55know we did that as a family.
- 25:57Speaker 3: Okay.
- 25:58Speaker 2: The Mary's lived a pretty sick, included life.
- 26:01Speaker 3: Their homes that alone in the middle of endless plains,
- 26:04their neighbors barely dots in the distance. I'm starting to
- 26:08understand why MICHAELA might have run away. Although the house
- 26:11itself was beautiful, with many protruding sections and gables wrapped
- 26:15around porch in a large two door garage. There was
- 26:19even an inground swimming pool out back, now covered and
- 26:22topped with autumn leaves, and a cute little gazebo further
- 26:25off in the field draped the numerous flags and dreamcatchers
- 26:28with flower pots lining the railings. Certainly didn't look like
- 26:32the kind of place tragedy had shruck. I stepped quietly
- 26:35up the stairs and was almost spooped by my own
- 26:37reflection in the glass at their front door. Nerves were
- 26:40definitely setting in now. I rang the bell and felt
- 26:43my stomach sink. What if my dirty blonde hair wasn't
- 26:47light enough, or if Mikayla had had some obvious birthmark
- 26:50I'd overlooked. I was sweating underneath my coat, unable to
- 26:54recall the name of the man I'd taken it from.
- 26:57When the door opened, my heart stopped. Linda Murray was
- 27:01standing there in her casual weekend where pleasantly confused hello,
- 27:08she agreed to me.
- 27:09Speaker 2: Then her face.
- 27:10Speaker 3: Went white in an instant, like her soul had left
- 27:13her body. She shrieked, and clasped her hands for her mouth,
- 27:16bursting into tearful exclamations.
- 27:19Speaker 1: Oh my god, Oh my god.
- 27:21Speaker 2: She kept repeating.
- 27:22Speaker 3: She suddenly lunged forward and squeezed me tighter than I
- 27:24would have liked, her arms attempting to wrap all the
- 27:27way around my backpack. I stood there awkwardly, bracing all
- 27:30of her weight onto mine as she surely was about
- 27:33to collapse. The dog at her legs was barking madly,
- 27:36and as Linda's tears dropped onto my back, all I
- 27:39could think about was how pissed off i'd be had
- 27:42I gotten caught because the dog didn't recognize my set. Okay,
- 27:46I will say, I guess I wasn't processing how evil
- 27:51this is.
- 27:52Speaker 1: It's horrible. It's horrible.
- 27:55Speaker 3: But the mother cried and she's like, oh, the stupid dog,
- 27:58Like it's like super villain levels are bad because in
- 28:01my head I'm like, oh, she's gonna steal money, like
- 28:03that's bad. But I wasn't thinking about the trauma.
- 28:07Speaker 1: Goddamn, a goddamn lot lizard is infiltrating a family's home, dude,
- 28:12And she's like, oh, poochie here, doesn't you know you
- 28:16better not give the family any tips, It's like it's
- 28:18a dog idiot.
- 28:19Speaker 2: Yeah, she's like, she's like irredeemable.
- 28:21Speaker 1: Yeah, what is it?
- 28:23Speaker 3: Linda, Mikaela's dad called from somewhere inside. He soon appeared
- 28:27in the doorways, button up tucked into his jeans. When
- 28:29he saw my cold, pale face poking over Linda's shoulder,
- 28:32he stumbled back, What is this? He gasped, His eyes
- 28:37went wide, and his bushy gray mustache twitched. The dog
- 28:40was still barking, reminded me that I was, in fact
- 28:43a stranger in this house. I smiled and said, I'm hume, daddy.
- 28:48Oh man, she's evil, awful hungross. That accent you actually
- 28:55just did was a pretty good Sydney Sweeney.
- 28:57Speaker 1: I think I'm trying to I think maybe with longer
- 29:00it will be good. And if I don't have to
- 29:02continuously say daddy, that will be nice. Thank you.
- 29:04Speaker 3: Yeah. I think I hope that she keeps saying that'll
- 29:09be great. There you go. I was trying to make
- 29:12myself cry, and if Linda had squeezed me any harder,
- 29:15I just might have. She held on to my sleeve
- 29:18as we let go, so afraid her daughter would run
- 29:21off again. Paul Murray was still staring at me in
- 29:24disbelief when something shifted in his face and he stepped forward.
- 29:28Speaker 1: Come here, baby girl.
- 29:30Speaker 3: Linda passed me off like a toy she didn't want
- 29:32to share. Paul pulled me into his arms and held
- 29:35even tighter than she had, rocks back and forth for
- 29:38a moment.
- 29:39Speaker 1: I can't believe it's you.
- 29:41Speaker 3: Linda rushed for the door and yelled inside, calling for
- 29:43her son James.
- 29:45Speaker 1: Come inside, baby, Paul.
- 29:46Speaker 3: Beamed as he release me, keeping a hand on my
- 29:49back and back of a mean word.
- 29:50Speaker 1: It's cold. Come come.
- 29:53Speaker 3: Moved into the foyer, where Paul asked to take my coat,
- 29:55which I happily handed him. Now that I was inside,
- 29:58I could practically smell the bar on it. Your bag,
- 30:01Sweetie shook my head and said, no, that's okay. You
- 30:06made a face, and I worried it was suspicious, and
- 30:08then worried more that my worrying was the only thing suspicious.
- 30:13Speaker 2: I had to settle down.
- 30:14Speaker 3: I nearly jumped when Paul turned the locks and hit
- 30:16a button on the alarm system. Jesus chimed louder than
- 30:19I would have expected.
- 30:21Speaker 1: See, that's what I'm that's what I'm saying, dude, I'm
- 30:24saying there's I think you're right. I just seeds are
- 30:26getting planned to do. They're just like baby girl, you
- 30:28ain't going to run away so easily. This term.
- 30:31Speaker 2: Yeah, yeah, you get that vibe.
- 30:34Speaker 3: And it's not to clarify for the audience, it's not
- 30:36a bear trap moment. It's not.
- 30:38Speaker 1: No, that's.
- 30:42Speaker 3: No, no, no, it is it's not because that's what that's
- 30:44what the description said on the article. We looked at
- 30:47the beginning and said she breaks into someone's house only
- 30:49to regret it. So knew we knew that.
- 30:52Speaker 2: Now, what is that home noise you're making?
- 30:54Speaker 1: That's the bear getting hit?
- 30:57Speaker 3: Is that the noise of bear makes It's like it now,
- 31:00spie metal trap.
- 31:04Speaker 2: Do you think a bear is like a cow?
- 31:06Speaker 1: Well, have you got a bear? Because I have many
- 31:08times my bear trap goes off quite a bit.
- 31:11Speaker 3: You shoot bears on what kind of bears are there
- 31:17in Kansas City? By grizzly grits, both of them? Yeah, God,
- 31:25it's the only place. It's the crossover. That's why they
- 31:27call Missouri the Crossover states.
- 31:32Speaker 2: Bears there you just kill all of them.
- 31:35Speaker 1: Pass for bears to walk through the Saint Louis Arch.
- 31:39Speaker 3: Its down out, say exactly, do bears have rides of passage?
- 31:48Is that a thing bears do?
- 31:50Speaker 1: That's one of them. That's one of them.
- 31:52Speaker 2: What's another one?
- 31:54Speaker 1: Uh? Eating fish mostly and sleeping kind So it's not
- 32:01really really just the most flavorful one all the other
- 32:05ones straight.
- 32:07Speaker 3: To be a bear, to like earn your bear rides,
- 32:09you have to eat fish, sleep, pass through the Saint
- 32:13Louis arch.
- 32:13Speaker 1: Yeah, well some bears also they getting caught in hunter's
- 32:17bear trap is also right a passenger?
- 32:20Speaker 2: Yeah, yeah, so your so your bear trap isn't just
- 32:22a mental thing.
- 32:23Speaker 3: You have also to be.
- 32:24Speaker 1: Fair, we don't we don't even know yet.
- 32:26Speaker 3: We don't know yet if the bear trap actually I
- 32:28think you're I think it's hit.
- 32:30Speaker 1: Okay, first off, I said, finish with you said I
- 32:34think you're right. Is what you're going to say. That's
- 32:36what you're going to say. You backed up out and.
- 32:37Speaker 3: You cut me off, and you cut me off. No,
- 32:39you cut me off. I didn't back out of it.
- 32:41You cut me off. So I'm not trying to card
- 32:43active fish. We say, so shut up. So I'm saying
- 32:47if I had a bear trap, I would coincidentally in
- 32:51this occasion set mine where yours is like, and that
- 32:54was a good leg to get as opposed to your
- 32:57seventeen other bear traps that are off in the brush somewhere,
- 33:00aren't even turned on, aren't even activated. They're just shut
- 33:02up and thrown into the weeds. This was a good
- 33:05place in this case.
- 33:11Speaker 1: They'll be afraid of the of the screams in the
- 33:14night they are just passing through.
- 33:23Speaker 3: Did you have you ever seen top gear?
- 33:25Speaker 1: Yeah? Well not, I mean, like not all of it,
- 33:27but I've seen that.
- 33:28Speaker 3: Have you seen the clip where yeah, Jeremy sets up
- 33:34clay More's for alligators around their camp.
- 33:38Speaker 1: I haven't seen that. My wife likes the Clark's farm
- 33:41or whatever. Yeah, that show too. Anyways, Well the.
- 33:45Speaker 3: Story anyway, Yeah, yeah, yeah, the story, the story which
- 33:48I'm louder than I would have expected. I wondered if
- 33:51all this had always existed, or if it was a
- 33:53result of their daughter having slipped out one night, never
- 33:55to be seen again. One of her coats still hung
- 33:58on a hook by the door, untouched after all these years.
- 34:02Now mine hung next to it, well, Danny's or whatever.
- 34:07As we moved even further inside. I was blown away
- 34:09by how nice this place was, so much so that
- 34:13I'd slipped and let it show. Nothing in this house
- 34:16was supposed to be surprising to me. It was hard
- 34:18not to be impressed by the high ceilings of bookshelves,
- 34:21or at the mini sofas beside a grand marble fireplace,
- 34:24or the fact that it was just the room that
- 34:27branched off to all the other rooms when they probably
- 34:29hardly ever used. So I continued to survey my surroundings.
- 34:33A figure high above caught my eye. It was James,
- 34:38looked down over the railing and looked more flabbergasted than
- 34:41anyone to have seen me. At seventeen, he was now
- 34:44the same age his sister was when she vanished, only
- 34:47much taller, with the same babyface.
- 34:50Speaker 1: Look, James, look who it is.
- 34:53Speaker 5: It's Sissy.
- 34:54Speaker 1: Come give her a hug.
- 34:56Speaker 3: I wanted to puke. And she is awful.
- 35:01Speaker 1: Well, I think now she's like, uh, I think she's
- 35:03feeling nervous. Now, I think that it's I think she's maybe.
- 35:07I think they're trying to humanize her a bit. I
- 35:09think I think even Joe's just like Jesus Christ. Jesus sucks.
- 35:14All right, now she wants to puke.
- 35:15Speaker 3: All right, there we go. James did it move right away,
- 35:19And when he did, it was this slow, cautious crawl.
- 35:23I figured, surely, of all people, I'd have been safest
- 35:26round James. After all, he'd hardly ever known as sister.
- 35:31That's the baby blue wives behind his jet black hair.
- 35:33We're piercing into mine, searching for the girl he so
- 35:36dearly missed. I can think of what to say to him.
- 35:39Was distracted by the field of the cigarettes in my bag.
- 35:41I needed one, It's all, he mustered, stopping at the
- 35:46foot of the stairs.
- 35:48Speaker 1: Hate guber.
- 35:50Speaker 2: I had no idea if that was something that Kayla recalled.
- 35:54Speaker 1: Yeah, she's just like dynamite, taking up pat names all
- 35:59the fly.
- 36:02Speaker 3: Okay, where's his food? Where's the dinner at Mama Sita?
- 36:05Old Pops is too fair?
- 36:06Speaker 1: The mom and dads are throwing around pet names, lot,
- 36:08baby sissy, all that kind of shit.
- 36:11Speaker 2: Yeah, so he's like goober, Yeah, I hate.
- 36:15Speaker 3: It's very funny. That's fine to imagine that, Like your
- 36:19sister runs away for like, what's it been six years?
- 36:22Seven years? No, you're like twelve twelve years, Like twelve years. Yeah,
- 36:26so now you're thirty and you're like goober.
- 36:30Speaker 1: Yeah, Well, to be fair, that could be some nice
- 36:31millennial cringe, have you? Hey, goober?
- 36:36Speaker 3: Hey goober. I had no idea if this was something
- 36:38that Kayla ever called him, but neither had anyone else.
- 36:41James and I then did something resembling a hug and
- 36:44let go. Linda looked on face red, still overcome with emotion.
- 36:48Paul was smiling at us.
- 36:50Speaker 1: Let's go, shit, Yeah, you look exhausted.
- 36:53Speaker 3: He wasn't wrong. I couldn't wait to sit down. There
- 36:56probably wasn't a piece of furniture in this place less
- 36:58comfortable than the mattress had been living on for the
- 37:00last decade. I hauled in my amazement as we marched
- 37:04from room to room, deeper and deeper into the house.
- 37:07Speaker 2: Linda was still exhaling.
- 37:09Speaker 3: This stuttered painful, sob kept reaching to touch me in
- 37:12any way and on the back or a light brush
- 37:14of the hair. It was annoying, but then again, I
- 37:17never learned how to have a mother.
- 37:20Speaker 2: When I shrugged only the off, she looked heartbroken.
- 37:23Speaker 3: Would you shrug her off? It was at that moment
- 37:25that I followly began to feel like the asshole I knew.
- 37:28Speaker 2: I was okay, there you go. There's there it is.
- 37:31Speaker 3: There's a little bit of like a human reaching out
- 37:34from deep down there. After passing through the kitchen and
- 37:37down another hall, we stopped in their second, larger living room.
- 37:42It was very open, the ceiling reaching all the way
- 37:44up to the third story, with photos lined as high
- 37:47as the ladder could reach. I followed Michaela's progression of
- 37:50school photos, remarking how early similar they were to mine
- 37:55and how they were one photo short. There was an
- 37:57upper level behind us, where a grand piano set in
- 37:59one corner and a bar in the other, separated by
- 38:02yet another fireplace.
- 38:04Speaker 2: I imagined how nice.
- 38:05Speaker 3: A Christmas tree must have looked in here, even during
- 38:08the day, with the natural light coming in through the
- 38:10sliding glass doors to the back porch. Each Murray dropped
- 38:13onto a separate couch on the lower level. Paul gestured
- 38:17for me to sit next to Linda, who of course
- 38:19was eager to be next to me. James was slouched
- 38:22directly across, staring down at the ground. The rest of
- 38:25us were darting our eyes waiting for someone to begin.
- 38:29Speaker 1: Let me just start by saying that we're not mad.
- 38:33Speaker 3: Linda was nodding feverishly in agreement. Paul went on, we
- 38:36just want to know what happened. Something inside my gut wrung.
- 38:40If my actual dad had showed even an ounce of
- 38:43this concern, I might not have run away myself. Stead
- 38:47he took his brother's side, my abuser. I dropped my head.
- 38:51Speaker 1: I needed to get out of here. I felt trapped,
- 38:53and I didn't mean to hurt anyone. I just didn't
- 38:56know what else to do. I'm really sorry.
- 38:59Speaker 3: Certainly wasn't all worthy, but I wasn't playing the long con.
- 39:03I only needed to be passable long enough for me
- 39:05to swipe several of the items we'd passed along the
- 39:08journey to this room. Paul nodded, slowly, gazing off somewhere
- 39:11over my shoulder. Okay, yeah, what kind of an answer is?
- 39:16I just needed some air. That's why I was gone
- 39:19for twelve years.
- 39:20Speaker 1: I just needed to get out of here, alright.
- 39:22Speaker 3: But don't worry, Dad, It was your fault. That's why
- 39:25I felt like I needed to leave.
- 39:27Speaker 1: You're just that terrible person.
- 39:29Speaker 2: It's just awful, and I hated being around.
- 39:30Speaker 1: I hated being your little sissy, little guy.
- 39:32Speaker 3: I'd preferred to start my entire life over at eighteen.
- 39:36Speaker 1: It was new.
- 39:37Speaker 3: It was somehow worse than anything else he could have said.
- 39:40For all I knew, Mikayla had had a great life
- 39:43here with a loving family. Now I was making them
- 39:45feel responsible. Each of them was staring off somewhere, let
- 39:49my stories sink into their minds. I wanted to sink
- 39:51into the couch. Where did you go, Mikaela, Linda suddenly wondered,
- 39:56pauling forward.
- 39:57Speaker 1: No, Linda, it's okay. She's not a little g anymore.
- 40:01That's her business. Listen, baby girl, we don't have to
- 40:05talk about if you don't want. All that matters now
- 40:08is that you're home and you're safe.
- 40:10Speaker 3: Funny enough, by the way, audience, that's just what Hunter
- 40:12sounds like when he's not recording videos, baby girl, That's
- 40:16exactly what it sounds like. It's it's his Midwest accent
- 40:19coming out. Like when we're like recording, he's like talking
- 40:22in his normal, like you know, kind of YouTube speak,
- 40:26just general American accent. And then the one we get off,
- 40:28he's like, oh right, are we looking to go?
- 40:35Speaker 1: Also, I will say it's kind of fucked up that
- 40:36every time I read baby girl, I hear you when
- 40:38you say it. You say you say baby girl a lot.
- 40:42Speaker 2: I say baby girl a lot. Yeah, I do say
- 40:45baby girl a lot.
- 40:46Speaker 1: Don't you do that in gamer?
- 40:48Speaker 3: I just does that bother you a lot?
- 40:53Speaker 1: Not really, it's just that's just we're talking about.
- 40:55Speaker 3: Do do that a lot?
- 40:56Speaker 1: Any time?
- 40:57Speaker 2: About? Like start talking to her of like, hey, Gamer,
- 40:59what's up?
- 40:59Speaker 1: I got that good.
- 41:02Speaker 3: My friend Operator drew Ski, who's a YouTuber, says gamer
- 41:06all the time, and I started taking that from him
- 41:09because he'll always call me gamer. So I started calling
- 41:11everyone else gamer. The baby girl I think was my
- 41:14own invention. I always say sounds a good baby girl.
- 41:17That's very cute that when you hear baby girl you
- 41:19think of me. That's so cute.
- 41:21Speaker 2: The fan man is that that.
- 41:25Speaker 3: Editor is going to love that.
- 41:26Speaker 2: Yeah, you seeing that a.
- 41:30Speaker 1: Thirty year old man calls me baby girl. That's that's
- 41:32a great.
- 41:33Speaker 3: I'm twenty five round up?
- 41:35Speaker 1: We can round up.
- 41:37Speaker 3: I think if I round it.
- 41:38Speaker 2: Up for you, it'd be like seventy eight for one.
- 41:40Speaker 1: We're splitting hairs at this point.
- 41:42Speaker 3: But it doesn't matter anytime someone anytime here, you have
- 41:46a moment on the podcast where we say something slightly
- 41:49uh flirty or romantic all of the so someone will
- 41:53go post it on Reddit or TikTok, and all the
- 41:56comments will say do they know it's legal? Like do
- 41:59they know they don't have to hide it? Like that's
- 42:01what they're gonna say to those clip that.
- 42:04Speaker 1: Well, I'm grossed out by it, but that's just me.
- 42:07Speaker 3: That's good. Whatever you say, baby girl. He reached for
- 42:09my hands and held on gently. It was strangely comforting.
- 42:13For the first time in my life, I'd felt cared for.
- 42:16It's safe. In my short time there, I'd completely flipped
- 42:20my thinking. What if Michaela was just another stupid teenager
- 42:24rebelling against her parents who were only trying to protect her.
- 42:26What if she'd sneaked out to celebrate her eighteenth birthday
- 42:29with her college boyfriend at some prat party, but if
- 42:32he slipped.
- 42:33Speaker 2: Something into her drink, or if she got too experimental.
- 42:36What if someone offered.
- 42:37Speaker 3: Her something she never tried before, and she took it
- 42:39to be cool show off in front of her college
- 42:42boyfriend's college friends.
- 42:43Speaker 2: I spent my whole life wishing I had hers. What
- 42:46if she just left it?
- 42:48Speaker 3: You know?
- 42:48Speaker 2: What I have an idea, Paul said with a clap.
- 42:52Speaker 1: Linda, why don't you go out and get stuff for
- 42:54pork sandwiches and I'll cook up some tayor tosy.
- 42:57Speaker 3: He was looking at me with raised eyebrows like I
- 42:59was supposed to know what he was talking about. So
- 43:02I pretended to This must have been some sort of
- 43:05Murray tradition or Michaela's favorite meal.
- 43:08Speaker 1: That sounds great.
- 43:09Speaker 3: I tried to smile at James, but it was clear
- 43:11he wasn't ready to forgive his sister for abandoning him.
- 43:14Linda hopped up, Mikaylas, sweetye, do you want to come
- 43:17with me? I hated how often she was saying her
- 43:19name and how she spoke to me like I was five.
- 43:23Speaker 2: Before I got a chance to respond, Paul chimed in.
- 43:25Speaker 1: Hun let her breathe run to the store and I'll
- 43:29get things started here and you, he said to me,
- 43:33go rest up. It's going to be crazy here by tomorrow.
- 43:37I just want to have one night as a family first.
- 43:40Speaker 3: I could not have agreed more. Everything was going exactly
- 43:43as I'd planned, maybe better. There's a really shiny diamond
- 43:47studded base across the room, calling my name, right next
- 43:50to an autograph jersey of some football player I never
- 43:53heard of. It's gonna walk out with one while wearing
- 43:56the other.
- 43:57Speaker 1: Going up to your room. We'll come get you was ready.
- 44:01Speaker 3: Linda pulled me in for another hug and kissed me
- 44:03on the side of the head. She looked over at
- 44:05James and saw that he was looking rather lifeless. She
- 44:08got his attention and made a tipping motion toward her mouth,
- 44:12to which James replied, I tucked them already. Finally glanced
- 44:17my way, but it wasn't quite the look I wanted
- 44:19to see. There's more than just betrayal in his eyes.
- 44:22Speaker 1: Yeah, he's probably saying, why the fuck did you come
- 44:24back to this? Hell? Dude, gg I bet you're right
- 44:28way to go.
- 44:30Speaker 2: It's like, why would you come back?
- 44:31Speaker 3: Yeah? No, that wasn't you just said the thing be
- 44:35That's not what a bear sounds like when it gets
- 44:37hit in a bear trap. Okay, everyone broke at once
- 44:44and dispersed, Paul heading for the kitchen and Linda making
- 44:48her way out. I grabbed my backpack and followed a
- 44:50sluggish James up the stairs, feeling good about how things
- 44:53were going so far un till it occurred to me
- 44:56that I'd had no idea which room was Michaelo's. Wasn't
- 44:59so thing She'd never have forgotten, not even after twelve years.
- 45:04James and I ran to the corner and were faced
- 45:06with a long, narrow hallway with several doors. I feared
- 45:10I was gonna have to guess the right one when
- 45:12James threw me a lifeline.
- 45:13Speaker 2: Hey he began. He stopped in front of his door
- 45:17and turned to me.
- 45:18Speaker 1: You want to hang out, watch a movie or something?
- 45:20Speaker 3: Even this had come out tense, like he was being
- 45:23forced to ask. Then I remember that this had been
- 45:25the last thing Key and Michaela had done together.
- 45:28Speaker 1: Yeah, sure, I don't think I'm ready to see my
- 45:31room yet.
- 45:31Speaker 3: Anyway, James nodded, and the knot of my stomach and twisted.
- 45:36When we entered his room, I was surprised by how
- 45:38neat it was, so much so that it felt wrong
- 45:41laying my dirty bag down. James baggy jeans the MESSI
- 45:44hare gave me a totally different vibe. But his bed
- 45:46was made, the walls were bare, and the desk in
- 45:49the corner looked like it had hardly been used. The
- 45:52one window in the room had a perfect view of
- 45:54the setting sun beyond the fields. Shadow cast a line
- 45:57between the pool below and the gazebo. It was just
- 46:00barely visible from this vanish point. I heard a lock click.
- 46:04We need to go now, okay, all right, this is
- 46:08the noh, that's not this is what it's not making
- 46:12the bare noise. This is what the article said, and
- 46:16we clicked on the story. So we had for warning you.
- 46:19Speaker 2: What I will give you a bear trap about. I'll
- 46:21give you a single bear pau is.
- 46:23Speaker 3: The reason James was so upset is that he was like,
- 46:26why did you come back for correct? Okay? He let
- 46:33his neutral expression drop into one of panic. I watched
- 46:36a confusion as he rushed over to his closet and
- 46:39threw on a sweater, cursing under his breath as he
- 46:41did so. When he looked up at me again, it
- 46:43was like he'd forgotten I was there.
- 46:45Speaker 1: What are you talking about?
- 46:47Speaker 2: James shook his head.
- 46:48Speaker 1: He knows, he knew the whole time.
- 46:51Speaker 3: My brain was automatically rattling off ways to salvage this,
- 46:54but there was no point. I was caught, and something
- 46:56other than my identity was bothering him. That made me nervous,
- 47:00gave it away. He looked at me like I was crazy.
- 47:03Speaker 1: Do you have any idea what's going on here? He
- 47:06killed her, he buried her.
- 47:08Speaker 2: Oh whoa, yo? Okay, that's really cool. Okay, so think
- 47:19about it this way.
- 47:20Speaker 3: They murdered their daughter, or he murdered the daughter and
- 47:25then buried her and then like to try to pass
- 47:28it off. They're like, oh, our daughter's gone missing, No,
- 47:30can anyone find her daughter? And then a girl shows
- 47:33up years later pretending to be and they immediately know,
- 47:36but go along with the facade to get her inside.
- 47:39Speaker 2: That's so cool.
- 47:40Speaker 3: Yeah, yo, yeah, And I'm wondering they're sitting there, everyone in
- 47:44the room knows that she's a fake, and she's try
- 47:48to pass it off. You do have to assume the
- 47:49mom knows too, right, Yes, almost certainly. Yeah, that's a
- 47:53good twist. This is fun. My heart stopped. What that
- 47:59was it in any of the theories I'd read online?
- 48:02Like everyone else, I'd been so sure it was the
- 48:04boyfriend Tom. It was obvious, but the look of fear
- 48:06washing over James's face was hitting me as well. How
- 48:09do you know that took me by the arm and
- 48:11dragged me to the window lock. He spat with an
- 48:13outward finger against the glass. Far beyond the covered pools
- 48:16at the gazebo, lifeless and weather borne, with noticeable chips
- 48:19in its white paint. Only its right side was visible
- 48:22from behind the rest of the house. I could see
- 48:24the flags and circling its beams, waving calmly above a
- 48:27row of gardening supplies. James was breathing heavily as he
- 48:31stared out at it, his eyes fixed even as he spoke.
- 48:34Speaker 1: He built it right after she disappeared, and we're not
- 48:37allowed to use it. Calls it his garden. I claimed
- 48:40it once when I was tending, he beat the shit
- 48:42out of me. But I've seen him out there at
- 48:44night a couple times, spraying the plants, fixing the dirt
- 48:48and look.
- 48:49Speaker 3: He hurried to his dresser and rummaged through before pulling
- 48:52something out and jaming it into my gut and reached down.
- 48:55It was a dirty purple bracelet, all stretchy and rubber
- 48:59and Michaela's name on it. I played with it in
- 49:01my hand.
- 49:02Speaker 1: Really dug that up last year, dropped it right at
- 49:05my feet, and I remember it. I remember her wearing
- 49:09it that night.
- 49:09Speaker 3: I stared at it and let it slide down onto
- 49:11my wrists, trying to find any counter to his theory.
- 49:14Speaker 1: You saw her drive off, I reminded him. I saw
- 49:17her car drive off.
- 49:19Speaker 3: There's a voice in the back of my mind telling
- 49:21me he was delusional, But the voice that believed him
- 49:24was louder and much more afraid. I watched mouth agape
- 49:27as he struggled to tie his shoes. He kept messing
- 49:30up and starting over, spitting more curses under his breath.
- 49:33My thoughts were swirling.
- 49:35Speaker 1: James, why haven't you called the police because I can't.
- 49:39Speaker 3: It was louder than he'd intended. He stood up and
- 49:42recollected himself.
- 49:44Speaker 1: My dad is friends with the sheriff. If the cop
- 49:46pulls up, he'll kill us. If I run, he'll he'll
- 49:50kill my mom. I don't even think she'd believe me.
- 49:52Speaker 2: Okay, so the mom doesn't know.
- 49:54Speaker 3: Yeah, that's what my mom probably thinks, that she's actually disappeared.
- 49:57Speaker 2: Yeah, okay, yeah.
- 49:58Speaker 3: I put my hands up to him, but the fearful
- 50:00cry he'd been holding in had burst out. He covered
- 50:03his mouth to push it back in, along with the
- 50:05snot and tears that were oozing out of him. He
- 50:07rushed over to his bedside drawer and picked up a
- 50:09bottle of pills, swiftly popping a few into his mouth.
- 50:12My chest was getting tighter.
- 50:14Speaker 1: Why can't we just play along a little longer. I'll
- 50:16leave tonight. If we go downstairs, we're dead. We were
- 50:19dead the second you got here. The police, the news,
- 50:22they'll all be here tomorrow, whether you're here or not.
- 50:24They could find her. I could tell them, but my
- 50:27dad might snap like he did on Mikayla. You don't understand.
- 50:31He'd rather die than get caught, and he'd take us
- 50:33with him. I know it. So we need to go
- 50:36out the window now. We'll just run.
- 50:38Speaker 3: At that point, it no longer mattered to me if
- 50:40James was right or if he was out of his mind.
- 50:42I wanted to get out of there. I looked out
- 50:44the window again. It was starting to get dark. I
- 50:47would have preferred a more casual escape over jumping off
- 50:50the roof, but if what he was saying was true,
- 50:52then we had no choice. I was craving a cigarette
- 50:55more than ever, and that alone was almost enough to
- 50:57get me on that roof.
- 50:58Speaker 1: We could take a bus. I got here, it's only
- 51:01a couple of miles that way. I know where it is.
- 51:03We should to stay off the roads. We can use
- 51:05the fields for cover, and then once weit.
- 51:07Speaker 3: There was the knock on the door.
- 51:08Speaker 1: James, it was.
- 51:09Speaker 3: Paul tried turning the handle.
- 51:12Speaker 1: Everything all right in there.
- 51:13Speaker 3: Without hesitation, James ran for the window and opened it.
- 51:17I could hear the faint chime of the alarm from
- 51:18somewhere out in the hall. Paul's jiggling off the locked
- 51:21door grew more aggressive.
- 51:23Speaker 1: Now what the hell's going on in there? Open the
- 51:25door and started pounding on it.
- 51:27Speaker 3: I threw on my bag and joined James, who was
- 51:29already halfway out the window. Together we scurried on the roof,
- 51:33hopped onto the back porch, and dropped down onto the
- 51:35rather large portico above the back door. I'd almost fallen
- 51:39down the side, but James held me up. A loud
- 51:42crash came booming from back up in his room. I
- 51:44looked up. Don't stop, James yelled. He jumped first onto
- 51:48the lawn and I followed. Both of my feet and
- 51:50knees took the impact hard. The ground underneath the autumn
- 51:53foliage deceptively solid. James held me up and we took off,
- 51:57running against his advice. I looked back and saw Paul
- 52:00peeking out james window. He shouted to us and then disappeared.
- 52:04James had already separated himself a good distance from me.
- 52:07I kept pushing my legs as he called back for
- 52:09me to do so, my backpack bouncing off My ass
- 52:11would each stride. There was a road in the distance,
- 52:14the same road I drudged along to get here. I
- 52:17could see where it met the orange and purple sky.
- 52:19It felt like it was never getting anything closer. Gunshot
- 52:23rang loud, ripping across the plains. Paul was now standing
- 52:26by the back door, aiming a rifle in our direction,
- 52:29his crimes chasing use behind the gunpowder mine word another
- 52:34bang in My legs buckled. When I reached the gazebo,
- 52:37I hid behind it to catch my breath.
- 52:39Speaker 2: There was a sharp, debilitating pain in my side.
- 52:42Speaker 3: I held myself up one of those railings and thought
- 52:44I could feel my heart beat vibrating against the wood.
- 52:47I swore, if I'd survived this, I would quit smoking.
- 52:50Peached around the corner and saw Paul hurry into the garage,
- 52:53James calling out for me by the road. But as
- 52:55I stood there, frozen against the gazebo flags caressing my shoulder,
- 53:00I thought about the girl buried underneath. What if James
- 53:02was right? What if nobody ever found Mikaela's remains. What
- 53:06if we didn't make it out of there, nobody ever knew?
- 53:08Speaker 1: What are you talking about?
- 53:10Speaker 3: Like?
- 53:10Speaker 1: What if James's right? James is right?
- 53:13Speaker 3: Jordan, wake, no, no, no about about Like if we
- 53:17don't leave now, we're dead?
- 53:18Speaker 2: What if James is right about no one knows about this?
- 53:21Speaker 1: What's I mean? I'm like, of course he is, and
- 53:22Paul is shooting at it. Like I wouldn't even question
- 53:24that anymore.
- 53:25Speaker 3: I'd be like, you didn't get that, that's fair, that's fair,
- 53:28I guess, I guess she said, like, what if.
- 53:29Speaker 2: James is right that we're gonna die and no one
- 53:31will ever know?
- 53:32Speaker 1: Yeah?
- 53:33Speaker 3: Oh he's right, that's right, he's right, You're gonna die.
- 53:36I no one's ever gonna know. You know.
- 53:38Speaker 1: I think it's interesting, which, you know, there's still more
- 53:41story obviously to go, But I like kind of how
- 53:44quickly the story ripped off the band aid, because at
- 53:46first I thought it was gonna be Okay, well, now
- 53:48I'm in a sticky situation where I have to go
- 53:49along with this plan and just like hope the dad,
- 53:52you know, or like maybe that's like the midpoint reveal
- 53:55of you know, him being like my sister died or
- 53:59he killed her whatever, and it's just like, oh, this
- 54:00whole time, you know, like more of a build, but
- 54:02it's just kind of like, you know, it's like almost
- 54:04like a fucking greyhound race. The things are just like
- 54:07dead sprinting. Now.
- 54:09Speaker 3: I thought for a while it would be like the
- 54:10whole liar revealed seting. Yeah, but it's like nope, Nope,
- 54:14that's not what we're doing here. It's like, okay, well
- 54:21here we are. What if we didn't make it out
- 54:22of there nobody ever knew. I thought of my own story,
- 54:25unheard and not believed. When I told my dad what
- 54:28my uncle had done all those years he hit me.
- 54:30Couldn't let the story stay buried, too. Took up my
- 54:33lighter and lit a flag, and then another fire burned, slowly,
- 54:37picking up quick as it caught onto more flags and
- 54:40dream catchers than down to the plants below. Some went
- 54:43back and watch the flames spread and dance along the
- 54:45darkening sky. I hoped at the very least it would
- 54:49be a distraction, and more so enough to attract law enforcement.
- 54:52I could hear linda shrill voice crying out at the
- 54:54side of it. She rushed around the side of the
- 54:56house with groceries in her hands, calling out for her husband,
- 54:59who had just sped off in his truck. He was coming.
- 55:02I made one last dash for James, who was impatiently
- 55:05waving me on, took my arm and led me across
- 55:07the road his father would soon be turning on to.
- 55:10He slipped into the corn field and kept going until
- 55:12we heard the war of an engine pass by broz
- 55:15until there was nothing but the wind, the pain in
- 55:17my side still nagging me. Stark as the sky had
- 55:20rapidly grown, it was even darker in that field, the
- 55:22corn towering over us, clinging to life as much as
- 55:25we were. Paul's headlights were shining through from not much
- 55:29farther ahead. He waited in tear for a crunch or
- 55:33a shout, or ideally for the truck to zoom off.
- 55:36Another gunshot rang high into the air. I gasped and
- 55:39had to cover my mouth to quiet my breathing. What
- 55:41do you do with my son, Paul called in a
- 55:44sing songy fashion. We could hear him walking about over
- 55:47the sound of his engine purring.
- 55:49Speaker 1: Where the fuck are you?
- 55:52Speaker 3: His footsteps wandered around farther, closer than farther, again separated
- 55:56only by the sound of swishing corn, as he searched
- 55:59randomly along the end edge. There's a pause, followed by
- 56:02a door slam and shut. Ball struck world and sped
- 56:05back down the road. I exhaled as Shames tugged on
- 56:08my arm and instructed to keep going. He pushed through
- 56:11more corn and followed along the road as best as
- 56:13we could. I never would have imagined being in this
- 56:15situation when I walked down it earlier that day. Now
- 56:19I was wishing I never had. Siren suddenly wailed nearby
- 56:22and eventually rushed past us. The glow of the flames
- 56:25grow noticeably brighter in the distance, smoked visible high above
- 56:28the fields.
- 56:29Speaker 1: Holy shit, come on, we need to keep moving. Are
- 56:32you okay? Yeah?
- 56:35Speaker 3: I wasn't. We shuffled farther through the corn, shoving it
- 56:38aside more aggressively as we went. I could hardly see
- 56:41more than a few feet in front of me. After
- 56:43a while, we could hear a steady buzz of passing vehicles,
- 56:46indicating that we'd reach the city, but also the end
- 56:49of the cornfields. We stepped out onto a road and
- 56:51into the glove streetlights. I felt like I could breathe
- 56:55again for just a moment.
- 56:56Speaker 1: You ready, We gotta move quick, but we got to
- 56:59blend in.
- 57:00Speaker 3: I'd realized in that moment how truly young James was,
- 57:03and how insane I was for having put my life
- 57:06in his hands. I was twenty eight, but felt just
- 57:09like the same little girl I was all those years ago,
- 57:12hoping her father would protect her, only hope James was
- 57:14better at it. We dashed across an empty street and
- 57:18then slipped into the downtown area. I kept my head down.
- 57:21Most of the businesses on the strip were closed for
- 57:23the night, but the bar I'd seen earlier was now
- 57:26glowing in its knee on signs, which did a good
- 57:28job masking its otherwise unapproachable facade. There were locals standing
- 57:33outside having to smoke, drunkenly arguing about nothing. James and
- 57:37I cross the street. When we reached the bus station,
- 57:39I was relieved to see the lights were still on.
- 57:41This relief would not last.
- 57:43Speaker 1: And coming only, folks, did I have to wait until morning? Sorry?
- 57:47Speaker 3: I was already making my way for the exit. James
- 57:50caught up with me.
- 57:51Speaker 1: What are you doing? I'm getting the fuck out of here?
- 57:53What am I supposed to do?
- 57:55Speaker 3: He followed alongside me, being more conspicuous than I would
- 57:58have liked, stopped and leaning close.
- 58:01Speaker 1: I don't fucking care. Come with me or don't. I'm leaving.
- 58:05Speaker 3: I was on the verge of crying, the lump of
- 58:07my throat growing larger. James stood there to complete loss.
- 58:11I looked at him and saw the five year old
- 58:12boy who woke up in the night all alone, the
- 58:14street lights above shining in his eyes like the headlights
- 58:17he'd watched disappear.
- 58:19Speaker 1: I'm sorry, I just want to go home.
- 58:23Speaker 3: I couldn't believe I had said it and meant it.
- 58:25Then I realized James couldn't go home. My fire failed.
- 58:29He was going to be on his own, on the run,
- 58:31and homeless at seventeen, just like I was.
- 58:34Speaker 1: They're gonna find Mikaela, then you'll be safe.
- 58:37Speaker 3: He was trembling.
- 58:38Speaker 1: What if they don't.
- 58:40Speaker 3: I had no answer, not one he would have liked anyway,
- 58:43Even if he made a call to the police. That
- 58:45very moment, I could already see Paul going home and
- 58:48putting the rifle to lend his head before putting it
- 58:50in his mouth. I wondered if he already had I
- 58:54think James did too. He leaned into me and started
- 58:57to cry. He was a whole foot taller than me
- 58:59and bony, but I held on to him, not like
- 59:02I had with Paul or Linda, but with ernest. Excuse me,
- 59:06A voice suddenly called out to us. I was about
- 59:08to run when I saw a familiar face. The old
- 59:11man I'd smoked with earlier was approaching us from the
- 59:13mechanic slot next to us. His face twisted when he
- 59:16recognized me.
- 59:17Speaker 1: Back, Oh with you, abby, right? Everything all right over here?
- 59:22Speaker 3: James and I looked at each other but said nothing.
- 59:25Idea crossed my mind.
- 59:26Speaker 1: Actually, no, sir, we're stuck here too.
- 59:30Speaker 2: The man whose name I'd forgotten grinned.
- 59:32Speaker 1: Huh, well, cars fixed, I want to head out if
- 59:35you guys need a lift.
- 59:36Speaker 2: We added, anywhere. Smile faded right.
- 59:41Speaker 1: Okay, sure, that's fine. I'm gonna be driving west down
- 59:44eighty for a while if that works, y'all. Yes, that's perfect.
- 59:48Speaker 3: James and I followed the man back to the lot
- 59:49and hopped into his old station wagon.
- 59:52Speaker 2: I took the front. I think.
- 59:53Speaker 3: The old man repeatedly even offered him gas money, but
- 59:56he refused it, said he was happy to help. He
- 59:59introduced himself to to a catatonic James in back, reminding
- 1:00:02me his name was Frank. Eyes kept darting between Frank's
- 1:00:05and the rear view mirror he was periodically checking. James
- 1:00:09was huffing short painted breaths. Wondered if he needed his meds.
- 1:00:13Speaker 1: Drove in solnce for a while.
- 1:00:14Speaker 3: You couldn't see anything beyond the headlight's path, just a deep,
- 1:00:17empty void. The old man tried to spark up conversation,
- 1:00:20but neither James nor I were up for it, as
- 1:00:23if we wanted the radio on or off, if we
- 1:00:25were hungry, if we were cold hot. Each time I
- 1:00:28told him we were fine, took the hint, and we
- 1:00:31drove for hours down the same stretch of highway, having
- 1:00:33barely spoken till James had fallen asleep.
- 1:00:36Speaker 1: I know it ain't my business, young lady. Are you
- 1:00:38sure you and your friend were okay?
- 1:00:40Speaker 3: Frank kept his voice just above the hum of the radio.
- 1:00:43I assured him once more. We were fine, And even
- 1:00:45though my mind was still back on Lincoln Avenue, wondering
- 1:00:49what had been happening in that very moment at the
- 1:00:51Murray household, the flames revealed the truth below, or if
- 1:00:54they were extinguished before they got the chance. I played
- 1:00:57an imagined scene in my mind, over and over the
- 1:00:59fired trucks, the inspection of the damage, Paul watching eagerly nearby,
- 1:01:03ready to run, the discovery of bones, called at the sheriff,
- 1:01:07the arrest of the man he'd known and tried to
- 1:01:09help all those years ago, or whom he might now
- 1:01:12have to hunt down.
- 1:01:13Speaker 1: Will at least tell me your real name.
- 1:01:15Speaker 3: Frank ass bringing me back to reality. He had so
- 1:01:18clearly been with holding the truth from this poor man,
- 1:01:20Alli one was just a small piece of it, may
- 1:01:23so we could justify the crazy thing he had done
- 1:01:25that day. Looked down at my fidgeting hands and noticed
- 1:01:27the purple bracelets still tight on my wrists, the pink
- 1:01:30lettering of Mikayla's name flashing every passing street light.
- 1:01:35Speaker 2: I'd forgotten that I was still wearing it.
- 1:01:37Speaker 3: I thought about how badly I wanted to give her
- 1:01:40the ending she deserved the one she'd won for her self,
- 1:01:44an escape freedom. How easy it would have been to
- 1:01:47do it, to say your name, it's Rachel hundred. Instead,
- 1:01:51Frank smiled at.
- 1:01:52Speaker 1: Me, Well, Rachel, it's nice to finally meet you.
- 1:01:55Speaker 3: I'll let him drive us another hour. It was almost
- 1:01:58midnight when I woke James to get out. He jumped.
- 1:02:02I had Frank drop us off at a cheap bed
- 1:02:04and breakfast, something I'd grown quite accustomed to over the years.
- 1:02:07I tried once more to pay him, but he wound
- 1:02:10up giving me money instead. It wasn't much, but the
- 1:02:12gesture alone was beyond kind. In spite of everything I'd
- 1:02:15been through that day and all that came before it,
- 1:02:18it wasn't any less meaningful. Company crossed someone's genuinely good
- 1:02:21as that man. I felt bad that I lied to
- 1:02:24him about my name again.
- 1:02:26Speaker 1: It's a fun little way to end that little section
- 1:02:28of the story. It was still an hour.
- 1:02:31Speaker 3: This story has I'm like the emotion worked, you know,
- 1:02:35like the like her, like she she came from a
- 1:02:39troubled background and now she kind of sees James in
- 1:02:42the same position she was, So she feels like this
- 1:02:44kind of like duty to help him in spite of
- 1:02:47herself and stuff like that. Like even if it's kind
- 1:02:49of a kind of played out thing of like the
- 1:02:52person who went through trouble wanting to help someone else
- 1:02:54through the trouble. I like it.
- 1:02:55Speaker 1: Well it's not it's not only James, but I mean
- 1:02:57it's stumbling across a different version of her own life
- 1:03:00of a man who was abusing this girl, or had
- 1:03:06been abusing, but basically murdered his daughter the same way
- 1:03:10that like her father neglected her. It's just like a
- 1:03:12different outcome. It's like reliving that basically, that past horrible
- 1:03:17experience and now kind of given the opportunity to right
- 1:03:20the wrongs of this girl and give her a proper
- 1:03:23send off, you know, right now. And I think that's
- 1:03:25where the direction is going to head, as her being
- 1:03:27like fuck this. They deserve like she deserves to have,
- 1:03:30like a that people deserve to know, you know, like
- 1:03:33to not have to you don't have to live in
- 1:03:35that lie of like oh she's missing, because that's the
- 1:03:37whole thing too, is that with her own thing of
- 1:03:39with her uncle doing the said things as well. That's
- 1:03:43something that no one ever believed or no one cared
- 1:03:45to believe. So now it's time to reveal that I
- 1:03:48think that's going to be the Redeye.
- 1:03:49Speaker 3: Maybe I can't write what happened to me, but maybe
- 1:03:52I can write like the narrative around this girl. Yeah.
- 1:03:54Speaker 1: Yeah.
- 1:03:55Speaker 3: James and I shared a bed, sleeping head to toe
- 1:03:57beside a rattling air conditioner. I wouldn't have slept anyway.
- 1:04:01I was plenty happy with the four hours I got.
- 1:04:04I woke early the following morning, I stepped outside for
- 1:04:07a cigarette and enjoyed every moment of it. I'd quit
- 1:04:10another day. James was sitting up in bed by the
- 1:04:13time I went back inside, his hair an awful mess,
- 1:04:15his tired eyes red.
- 1:04:17Speaker 2: He'd asked me what our plan was.
- 1:04:19Speaker 3: He was impatient, and I understood, but told him that
- 1:04:22we should eat breakfast first and figure it out from there.
- 1:04:26That it had almost been an entire day since i'd last Eden.
- 1:04:29When we entered the dining area, we saw that there
- 1:04:31was only a few other guests inside. I still wanted
- 1:04:35a table in back, but James insisted we sit by
- 1:04:37the bar, where a TV was playing the news. I
- 1:04:40gave it. He's worried about his mother, and I couldn't
- 1:04:42blame him for that. I'd have been worried about mine too,
- 1:04:45if she were still alive. I was really hoping this
- 1:04:48aspect of our lives remained different. James was glued to
- 1:04:50the TV even as the waitress came and took our order.
- 1:04:53Speaker 1: You're gonna drive yourself crazy.
- 1:04:55Speaker 3: Told him as she walked away. Shook his head at
- 1:04:57me and kept his eyes fixed. We said in silence,
- 1:05:00says we waited for our food. Potentially news your coat.
- 1:05:03Speaker 1: You lift your coat at my house.
- 1:05:05Speaker 2: I laughed, to which James blinked, it's not my coat.
- 1:05:09Speaker 1: Whose is it? Some guy named Scott? I think maybe Jordan.
- 1:05:12Speaker 3: It wasn't long before the wags arrived with our meals.
- 1:05:15We were did the same thing, only my eggs were scrambled.
- 1:05:18There was something about the smell of bacon and home
- 1:05:20frize that brought comfort strong enough to make you forget
- 1:05:23that you were on the run. I moaned at the
- 1:05:26first bite. Probably could have eaten both plates. Even you
- 1:05:30didn't have to moan. I even thought I saw a
- 1:05:32moment of calm in James's face as he ate TV
- 1:05:34caught our attention.
- 1:05:35Speaker 1: Thank you, John, authority said. They were responded early last
- 1:05:38night to a fire and one very familiar Indiana home,
- 1:05:41the home of Michaela Murray.
- 1:05:43Speaker 3: James Stererley fell out of his seat, dropped my fork,
- 1:05:46home fry, fell on the floor.
- 1:05:47Speaker 1: It's like since two thousand and eight. Michaela's disappearance is
- 1:05:50one that rocked the small town of Millersburg, Indiana, but
- 1:05:53left many hopeful that she was still out there listening.
- 1:05:56But when authorities found her car abandoned near Elkhart River,
- 1:05:59just miles from her home, friends and family began to
- 1:06:02fear the worst. Mikhaila was gone, her whereabouts never discovered
- 1:06:06until now.
- 1:06:07Speaker 3: I wanted to turn back to James, but was afraid
- 1:06:09of the look on his face.
- 1:06:11Speaker 1: When authorities cleared the scene last night at one one
- 1:06:13zero eight Lincoln Avenue, they made a shocking discovery that
- 1:06:16would answer a decade long mystery but spark a new one.
- 1:06:20Speaker 3: It cut to the sheriff's press conference. He spoke matter
- 1:06:22of factly while camera was clicked all around him.
- 1:06:25Speaker 1: The fire department responded to a nine one one call
- 1:06:27around five am last night. There was a gazebo on
- 1:06:31fire in the yard of the Murray residence, and when
- 1:06:33we assessed the damage, we discovered a bunker hidden underneath.
- 1:06:38Upon further inspection of the bunker, we found the body
- 1:06:40of a young woman and child. We need confirm the
- 1:06:43woman to be Mikayla Murray, but have no further information
- 1:06:46at this time.
- 1:06:47Speaker 3: James quilled, it's Founder'm that is insane that that actually worked.
- 1:06:52Speaker 1: Yeah, yeah, I'll be honest.
- 1:06:54Speaker 3: I'm like, I did not think that would happen. Yeah,
- 1:06:59I was like, hold on a young woman and child. No,
- 1:07:04there's a child's body down there.
- 1:07:05Speaker 1: There's two bodies, but one of them they said they
- 1:07:07can't confirm is Michayla.
- 1:07:09Speaker 3: So one of them is definitely Mikayla, but there's also
- 1:07:11a child down there.
- 1:07:12Speaker 1: Well it could be. It almost sounds like it's the
- 1:07:13original wife and daughter. Maybe.
- 1:07:16Speaker 3: Oh that's a good point, Okay, so well maybe but anyway,
- 1:07:20oh god, or it's.
- 1:07:21Speaker 1: Mikayla and it doesn't. I'm not gonna good.
- 1:07:25Speaker 3: Yeah. I know what you were thinking. I know where
- 1:07:28your brain because my brain also put that together. But
- 1:07:30I'm like, I'm not gonna entertain that out loud. Yeah,
- 1:07:33I ignored him my face. Sunken waitresses and patrons were
- 1:07:37noticing our panic state. Something wasn't right. She been buried
- 1:07:40under there for so long, there shouldn't have been much
- 1:07:43to find, and a child.
- 1:07:45Speaker 1: It is believed that Mikaila had been held cappin inside
- 1:07:47the bunker since that faithful day twelve years ago, until
- 1:07:50last night, when tragically both she and the child suffered
- 1:07:53fatal smoke and all like.
- 1:07:54Speaker 2: Oh my gosh, oh, my God.
- 1:08:03Speaker 5: No, no, Rachel, he was in the bucker.
- 1:08:10Speaker 1: No, oh, Jesus. It is believed that Michaela had been
- 1:08:13held cats inside the bunker since that faithful day twelve
- 1:08:15years ago and until last night, when tragically both she
- 1:08:19and the child suffered fatal smoke inhalation inhalation resulting from
- 1:08:24the fire. Authority said he had to confirm the identity
- 1:08:26of the child or who started the fire. Michaela's mother, Linda,
- 1:08:29is being questioned by police, while federal official search for
- 1:08:32father Paul and brother James, both of whom are now missing.
- 1:08:35Give any information on their whereabouts, please call this number
- 1:08:38and stay tuned for more on this story.
- 1:08:40Speaker 5: My God, talk about it. Yo.
- 1:08:48Speaker 3: Oh no, oh, the humanity. She was alive until last night.
- 1:08:58Speaker 1: Wait what wait? What? Oh my god? Keep reading.
- 1:09:02Speaker 3: I couldn't feel my body. I turned around and stared
- 1:09:05down at my shaking hands on the table. The world
- 1:09:07caven in on me.
- 1:09:08Speaker 1: What happened?
- 1:09:09Speaker 3: James cried, his breathing was heavy, his eyes pulging out
- 1:09:13of their sockets, staring at me, bewildered. I finally looked
- 1:09:16at him. I killed Mikayla.
- 1:09:19Speaker 5: She set the fire that killed that's your story.
- 1:09:24Speaker 3: That's the whole thing.
- 1:09:31Speaker 1: Depressing.
- 1:09:32Speaker 5: Oh my, you find out, God, she's alive, this girl
- 1:09:38who the whole, the whole ethos has been like, I'm
- 1:09:40gonna make her truth know, and I'm gonna make her
- 1:09:42story known.
- 1:09:43Speaker 3: I'm gonna do for her what no one did for me.
- 1:09:45And then did she don't killed her? She killed her.
- 1:09:50Speaker 1: She was alive at the basement.
- 1:09:52Speaker 3: So the implication is that the baby was like an
- 1:09:54incest baby.
- 1:09:55Speaker 2: Yeah, yes, that's the idea.
- 1:09:58Speaker 1: Yeah, yeah, yeah, dude to a whole extra Yeah, sorry
- 1:10:04to add to add literal insult to injury like that's
- 1:10:08like unfucking real. Also, I'm guessing that there's there's no
- 1:10:14there's no shot that the mom does not know about this, right,
- 1:10:20I mean maybe she does.
- 1:10:21Speaker 3: Maybe she doesn't know that her daughter isn't a bunker outside, you.
- 1:10:25Speaker 1: Know, so the dad is buying the dad is buying
- 1:10:28baby clothes secretly and taking them.
- 1:10:31Speaker 3: Babies was having like toys and babies are us back.
- 1:10:36This was sort of this is certainly like a fallout bunker.
- 1:10:40Speaker 1: I don't think I think it's gonna be a he's
- 1:10:43like down there. That's so it's God, God, what God?
- 1:10:50What a bummer?
- 1:10:52Speaker 3: Ending Well she will, but we killed her.
- 1:10:55Speaker 1: The story what the story is saying? The story just
- 1:10:58from your dad's going to like assault you. Like there's like,
- 1:11:03I don't even know what the fuck I'm trying to
- 1:11:05get out of this.
- 1:11:06Speaker 3: She had more in common with Mikayla than she thought.
- 1:11:09Speaker 1: Oh god, yeah, well but well her life was like
- 1:11:13her choice to run away was apparently the correct correct option.
- 1:11:18You know who the michaela no nor away our main
- 1:11:24characters what I'm saying, yeah, yeah, So Mickayla gets kidnapped
- 1:11:28by her dad, thrown in the bunker. That explains why
- 1:11:32he suspects James of knowing something and then shoots at
- 1:11:34our protagonist as they're running away, because like he's trying
- 1:11:38to keep his like, uh, his daughter who he's holding
- 1:11:41is like a mother mother of skin.
- 1:11:43Speaker 3: Like in the bunker and he's like shooting out him
- 1:11:46as they're running away.
- 1:11:47Speaker 1: I mean, I guess.
- 1:11:50Speaker 3: I mean, one hand, the fire worked by exposing what
- 1:11:53he was doing, but it also killed Michayla.
- 1:11:57Speaker 1: That's such a crazy angle to take it. It is
- 1:12:00pretty awesome it has there's so many there's so many turns,
- 1:12:04so this is like this isn't a super.
- 1:12:06Speaker 3: Fast twisted like five times honestly, Like you know, I
- 1:12:10was complimenting it earlier over the how fast.
- 1:12:14Speaker 1: It was going. I really kind of wish that it
- 1:12:16was one of those things where because whenever, as soon
- 1:12:19as she said at the beginning, when she was like, oh,
- 1:12:21I'm only gonna be there for night, I'll be in
- 1:12:23and out, I was like, okay, well this is going
- 1:12:25to turn into something where it turns into a week
- 1:12:27or something or like months, right because at first thing
- 1:12:30when she walks in, she's like, this house is so nice,
- 1:12:35you know. It's it's this thing where it's like, why
- 1:12:36the fuck would I just steal this thing and go
- 1:12:38from motel motel again? I mean I could just like
- 1:12:40ride this gravy train for a bit or whatever. And
- 1:12:43I mean the most sinister thing the dad did obviously
- 1:12:48besides like shooting and whatever. I've just been like in
- 1:12:50terms of like the dialogue is like the the idea
- 1:12:52of being like I'm gonna make tater tots is like
- 1:12:55the most disturbing like threatening things, such a mindful I
- 1:13:02had more of that daughter, you know, or even something
- 1:13:04too where like you know, she's walking in the grounds
- 1:13:07or like she's doing this thing and the dad still
- 1:13:08isn't really sure what to do. Because I think that
- 1:13:10I read it now that the mom doesn't know, which
- 1:13:12feels a little weird, like almost I feel like it's
- 1:13:15kind of it would have been I don't know, cooler.
- 1:13:19Speaker 3: Well I'm not cooler, but I just have more demented
- 1:13:21the dad's a psychopath and the mom like genuinely cares
- 1:13:24about her daughter and doesn't know that her husband is
- 1:13:27holding her daughter as like a slave wife.
- 1:13:30Speaker 1: And yeah, yeah, what I'm saying is it's it's even
- 1:13:33more demented and fucking creepy to me if it's like
- 1:13:37the family thing, like she knows, but she's just like, oh,
- 1:13:40you know, I don't know, like the mom not knowing.
- 1:13:43And then like, because I guess that's true if you
- 1:13:45have it to where the mom doesn't know. Then it
- 1:13:48makes it harder for the dad to like boot this
- 1:13:50kid out or like this new the daughter, like this
- 1:13:52person that's pretending to be the daughter, because.
- 1:13:54Speaker 2: Yeah, because mom knows, she walks in and they just
- 1:13:57kill her.
- 1:13:58Speaker 1: Yeah, and then you can have had some fun things
- 1:13:59where she's like walking around or like James is like
- 1:14:02this is where he buried her. But then you can
- 1:14:04like you know, she like goes back one night and
- 1:14:05you like hear like you know, like screaming or some
- 1:14:10kind of thing, like she's screaming for help. There could
- 1:14:12have been. There's a lot of different directions. I mean
- 1:14:14this first off, just gonna make fucking wild movie.
- 1:14:16Speaker 2: I A wild movie, That's what That's what I was thinking.
- 1:14:19Speaker 3: I'm like, this is a pretty short story compared to
- 1:14:21like how long you could take this idea, So making
- 1:14:24a film out of this, there are so there's so much.
- 1:14:27Speaker 2: Potential to expand it. Right, there's no shot level, there's no.
- 1:14:32Speaker 1: Shot that the movie can end with them at a
- 1:14:34waffle house and then like the news.
- 1:14:37Speaker 3: Comes on and I would I would, I'd be down
- 1:14:39for it if it was satisfied up.
- 1:14:41Speaker 1: I'm just saying that for a movie, I think that
- 1:14:42you get more out of like the reveal there, like
- 1:14:46the climax of the movie is the is kind of
- 1:14:48what we had here with like the chase scene, the
- 1:14:50cornfield running away, whatever. But then it's probably a thing
- 1:14:53where she's like, we have to go back and save her.
- 1:14:55This is prime, this is primed for, uh in terms
- 1:15:00of a movie and how it goes, or even in
- 1:15:02this story, what would have happened is our character, our
- 1:15:06nameless protagonist is finds out that she's alive, and she's
- 1:15:13also like, you know, not even that the abused thing whatever.
- 1:15:15She finds out that she's alive, and then she's like,
- 1:15:18I'm not I cannot leave her because she's been acting
- 1:15:21on selfish impulses this whole time to wear at the end,
- 1:15:23she's like, fuck that, I'm going to save this person
- 1:15:26the same way that I was never no one saved me.
- 1:15:28I'm going to save this person. And you go back
- 1:15:30and it's going to be kind of like a pull
- 1:15:32her out that kind of way, you know what I mean.
- 1:15:34But then that's what I'm saying is if the mom's
- 1:15:36in on it too, you think she's all sweet the
- 1:15:37whole time, and all of a sudden she's the one
- 1:15:39who like pulls a gun out too.
- 1:15:41Speaker 3: You know.
- 1:15:41Speaker 1: It's just like there's so many different ways you could
- 1:15:43do it, but there are ways.
- 1:15:44Speaker 3: You could take it. I think the way the setup
- 1:15:46work though the mom can't know, because I think it's
- 1:15:48stronger that way.
- 1:15:49Speaker 2: Yeah, yeah, yeah.
- 1:15:51Speaker 3: And like if if this girl pretending to be Mikayla
- 1:15:54walks into the house and the dad knows and the
- 1:15:56mom knows and they can just like yeah and they
- 1:15:59and they both though that James is suspicious, they can
- 1:16:02do whatever they want.
- 1:16:02Speaker 2: They can like kill they can kill this new girl
- 1:16:05or whatever.
- 1:16:06Speaker 3: So I think that the way the story's written here,
- 1:16:10it has to go that direction. But I mean, Mayo
- 1:16:13du talk about a ride like going from oh, we're
- 1:16:15gonna manipulate this family into they know they're not missing
- 1:16:20because he killed her. Then they're shooting out of stuff,
- 1:16:21and then the end reveal that they killed her in
- 1:16:23the fire.
- 1:16:24Speaker 1: Like dude, I uh, there was so much it was.
- 1:16:29It's just so weird because so many so fast paced,
- 1:16:33Like even the dad, which is kind of realistic if
- 1:16:36you think about, like you go to a cornfield, the
- 1:16:39people go, they're able to like skirt around things and
- 1:16:41they kind of like hide from him. And now the
- 1:16:43dad the house is on fire, he's like, fuck this,
- 1:16:45I'm leaving. You know, he's gonna be a fucking like
- 1:16:48a pussy and run whatever. It's like it all feels realistic,
- 1:16:52but it's one of those things where it's like you
- 1:16:54just I'm like, man, I'm man, I just wish there
- 1:16:57was just a so much more meat on the storage
- 1:17:00because it was so so fun.
- 1:17:01Speaker 3: Well that's that's what that's what the potential it has
- 1:17:04when it goes into a film.
- 1:17:05Speaker 1: Yeah, well I hope it'd be cool if Joe had
- 1:17:07some kind of input on that too, of like maybe
- 1:17:09their idea.
- 1:17:09Speaker 3: Is see I think I saw an article that said
- 1:17:12he did, or I saw something somewhere that's like he's
- 1:17:15being adapted with it, or he's a part of the
- 1:17:17writing team or something like.
- 1:17:18Speaker 1: So crazy the dude that wrote Forrest Gump is doing
- 1:17:20this now. He's like he's going to sit there and
- 1:17:23he's going to write like interior rate bunker a woman.
- 1:17:29I mean, it's like he's it's just like the kind
- 1:17:31of like it's just such a polar opposite to like
- 1:17:34a fucking he's like all right. I'm usually have Neanderthals
- 1:17:39eating boxes of chocolate, but this time I guess I'll.
- 1:17:42Speaker 3: Live to dude, that's h I was looking at Eric Roth.
- 1:17:45He also wrote like Killers of the Flower Moon. He
- 1:17:48has so many like he's maccolades. I'm curious to see
- 1:17:51what dramatic listen to listen to this Forrest Gump, Killers
- 1:17:56at the Flower Mune, The Curious Case of Benjamin Button,
- 1:18:00The Curious Case of pet.
- 1:18:01Speaker 1: But he comes out young but gets old like really quick,
- 1:18:05and then he starts getting young again. He's like, all right,
- 1:18:08and scene in scene Brad Older, Brad Pitt has sex
- 1:18:13with pretty hot woman exterior.
- 1:18:18Speaker 3: Okay, yeah, I.
- 1:18:21Speaker 1: Will say this. I think Sydney Sweeney is going to
- 1:18:23be a fun uh, a fun.
- 1:18:26Speaker 3: Cast for this, a fun pick for the she.
- 1:18:29Speaker 1: I think she embodies the like that like kind of
- 1:18:31we were saying earlier, that valley girl vibe.
- 1:18:33Speaker 2: But I think that she's also she's a great final
- 1:18:35girl type.
- 1:18:36Speaker 1: Oh dude, and even euphoria. She has some fucking crazy
- 1:18:40moments of like she could be like a very unhilla
- 1:18:43kind of crazy character, like very very high strung, so
- 1:18:47having this kind of uh, I'm curious it's just gonna
- 1:18:50be a lot of fun to see who uh who
- 1:18:53they have. I really hope that they don't make the
- 1:18:54kid lanky and bony, like we were saying before. It
- 1:18:58would be so funny if James, I was kind of
- 1:19:00hoping James is like a like a fat neck beard,
- 1:19:03like rooms, like a net beer nest.
- 1:19:05Speaker 2: I forget the actor's name.
- 1:19:06Speaker 3: In my head, I imagined him as the guy who
- 1:19:09plays the zombie and warm Bodies James.
- 1:19:13Speaker 1: Oh the fucking no, No, he's too handsome, and he's British.
- 1:19:18Speaker 3: That's true.
- 1:19:19Speaker 1: I think what you have to do is you have
- 1:19:21to do you either have to do uh yeah, would
- 1:19:25be so funny, just like a British guy.
- 1:19:27Speaker 2: Hell uh, my sister's under the gazebo.
- 1:19:33Speaker 1: My sister's under she's dead, but a girl and child
- 1:19:40are found. Oh god, it was much worse. It was
- 1:19:45much worse. Not MICHAELA. Yeah, I don't know. I'm this
- 1:19:52is man, what is it? Just a fun trip? I
- 1:19:54had just so much. I want to say so much
- 1:19:56different fucking things. I I want to uh.
- 1:19:59Speaker 2: Well, same king, this is your podcast.
- 1:20:01Speaker 1: Well I'm just saying there's just I mean, I could
- 1:20:03just you know, rant and rave about all the different
- 1:20:06things that you could do. But it was it's a
- 1:20:09fun story also just fucking bleak. God damn. I will
- 1:20:13say the ending rough like there's like there's just really
- 1:20:17no there's really no character arc in the story at all.
- 1:20:22It's just kind of something that's just like you're you're
- 1:20:25kind of like growing with this character. You're finding things,
- 1:20:28and then all of a sudden, it's like here's your
- 1:20:30giant bar of soap that you get a bite into.
- 1:20:33Speaker 3: I mean, there's a little bit of our main character
- 1:20:37being like I don't want him to be the way
- 1:20:40I was.
- 1:20:41Speaker 1: Yeah, like.
- 1:20:43Speaker 3: Wanting to take him with her.
- 1:20:44Speaker 1: That's not at that's not really a character arc, especially
- 1:20:47when the when she says to the kid like, uh
- 1:20:52like come with me or don't. I don't give a fuck,
- 1:20:53I'm leaving. Like she's pretty selfish all the way through.
- 1:20:57You know. Really, the the character that had the most
- 1:20:59gumption and like drive was the seventeen year old James.
- 1:21:05You know, we were at the part we were at
- 1:21:07the part in this story right here where non Mikayla.
- 1:21:10This is the part where she's like I'm turned, Like
- 1:21:13this is the turn, you know, this is the part.
- 1:21:15This is the part where you would find out that like, uh,
- 1:21:18there's not a news broadcast. That's just like an exposition
- 1:21:21dump of like this is what happened. Holy shit, By
- 1:21:24the way, did we tell you that there's a you know,
- 1:21:26you know, all this different stuff instead there's somebody in
- 1:21:29town or you know. She's like, we gotta go. We
- 1:21:32have to go back, like we have to. We need
- 1:21:34to like let people know about the Her body is
- 1:21:37there and they think that she's dead still, and when
- 1:21:40they go back, that's when you find out that she's like,
- 1:21:42oh no, she's a fucking prisoner inside this thing and
- 1:21:44it's a whole other can of worms, but she sticks
- 1:21:47with it. And that would be and like that's like
- 1:21:49the kind of like punchy like rally behind this character
- 1:21:53who you fucking hate so far, because I really just
- 1:21:54don't the non Mikayla character really not like like not
- 1:22:00a likable.
- 1:22:01Speaker 3: Yeah, of course, of course, but she did have there
- 1:22:04and I think this is probably where the movie will go.
- 1:22:06She did have a tone midway through of like maybe
- 1:22:08I need to tell someone's story just because mine couldn't
- 1:22:11be told. Stuff. So there's like the story tries to
- 1:22:13set up an understanding of why she's the way that
- 1:22:15she is, with her previous abuse and stuff like that,
- 1:22:17and then it's like, maybe I don't have to be
- 1:22:20like this just because I grew up like this.
- 1:22:21Speaker 2: Like the story starts to give her.
- 1:22:23Speaker 3: An about face when it comes to her motivations and ethics,
- 1:22:27but then that's ripped away from her because it turns out, no,
- 1:22:29you killed the girl who you're trying to write the
- 1:22:30story of, which is brutal slap down.
- 1:22:33Speaker 1: Not intentional murder. But I mean that's like the uh.
- 1:22:37Speaker 3: Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, But it's just like I'm trying
- 1:22:39to tell the story for this girl.
- 1:22:41Speaker 1: Oops, yeah, it is. It is a big bundle of
- 1:22:44oopsie daisies, for sure. It is a big bouquet of
- 1:22:47oopsie daisies, for sure. But the I think, uh, just
- 1:22:51just more of that, because I think you can have
- 1:22:52a character that's like I've been. I'm a victim of
- 1:22:56the circumstances that are fucking horrible, and I really enjoy that.
- 1:22:59It's like this girl is this, this person who was
- 1:23:02supposedly dead is a victim now of these circumstances as well,
- 1:23:06And it's a thing of being like I have the
- 1:23:07strength now and the courage now to step up and uh,
- 1:23:12you know right, like help somebody that I wish somebody
- 1:23:15would helped me with, like being that like guardian angel
- 1:23:17for somebody else. And it just gets like worse and worse.
- 1:23:21You know, it's a there's a lot there, but you know,
- 1:23:24as it is now, yeah, it does. It feels like
- 1:23:26I just got kicked in the face. I seriously felt
- 1:23:29like I got winded at the end of it, as
- 1:23:31soon as I heard, as soon as the whole thing
- 1:23:33of like I just finally looked at him and as
- 1:23:34I killed Mikaela and it's just like if you just
- 1:23:37see the down like the uh, the up boots and
- 1:23:39common numbers, I was like, are you fucking kidding me?
- 1:23:41That's it, that's it, that's for Yeah.
- 1:23:46Speaker 3: What what's funny is I'm looking at the original version
- 1:23:48that was posted to No Sleep. So the original version
- 1:23:51ends with that conversation in the car where the guy's like,
- 1:23:54well you at least tell me your name, and she
- 1:23:55gets out, and then it ends and says, uh, I paused,
- 1:24:01I look down at my hands. I'd forgotten I was
- 1:24:03still wearing it, and then says relaxed. I didn't do
- 1:24:06what you think I did. That would have been a mistake.
- 1:24:08But when the old man dropped me off at the
- 1:24:09rest stop early the next morning, I saw that I'd
- 1:24:11already made a much bigger one. And then it links
- 1:24:14to a picture of a news article, a newspaper article
- 1:24:17that tells us the same thing that says missing girl's
- 1:24:20body found late last evening authorities responded to a house
- 1:24:24fire and Lincoln Avenue, and then we get the same
- 1:24:26breed out of what happened, And that's how the original one.
- 1:24:29Speaker 1: There's interesting setups there too, with like this man that
- 1:24:33is kind of like a weird older guy who seems shady,
- 1:24:37and you know, we've done these. She's basically been prostituting
- 1:24:40herself out to other people. But then it's you have
- 1:24:44a character, this male character who is just helping her
- 1:24:47out of the kountess of her heart and does help
- 1:24:48her out, gives her money and there's no like sexual
- 1:24:50interaction or whatever. It's a nice it's a little seed
- 1:24:55that I think is a good plot motivator too, for
- 1:24:59a character to be like not everyone is horrible, Like
- 1:25:02I can't like let this thing define me whatever, and
- 1:25:05there's good people out there, right, that's like a.
- 1:25:07Speaker 2: And James was a good person.
- 1:25:08Speaker 1: Yeahs and James was and James is cool too. It's
- 1:25:11it's one of those things where it's like you get
- 1:25:13to humanity can be shown that like lets you because
- 1:25:17her being a like, because she's like a selfish person.
- 1:25:21It's like that makes total sense that you were You've
- 1:25:24been on your own, You've had just like do horrible
- 1:25:27shit to survive. So yeah, you're gonna be jaded, you're
- 1:25:29gonna be bitter, and you're gonna be a character that's
- 1:25:31just like I don't give a fuck. I'm gonna focus
- 1:25:33on myself, but you can have that moment where little
- 1:25:37pieces of humanity are coming through. I kind of like this.
- 1:25:39This uh this comment, by the way, the top comment
- 1:25:42on this post is a girl Pringle six ninety seven says,
- 1:25:46I love this one. I thought she was gonna live
- 1:25:48with them for a while and drain their money. Nice twist,
- 1:25:50super sad and fucked up ending, very well written. And
- 1:25:53then our boy, our boy Joe comments and this is
- 1:25:55what he says, and this is I think this is
- 1:25:57kind of fucked He says, thank you, This one really
- 1:26:00kicked my butt, but I was super late. I was
- 1:26:02up super late almost every night trying to get it right.
- 1:26:04So seriously means a lot that you all enjoyed it.
- 1:26:06That's what it's all about. You're right though it was
- 1:26:09pretty fucked up. It was. It was a pretty fucked
- 1:26:11up in Huh. I feel bad even though it was
- 1:26:12under my control. Crying, laughing, like what a psycho path.
- 1:26:19He's like, yeah, it was fucked up, but it's just me.
- 1:26:22Speaker 3: I had quirky You like that, you like caring about
- 1:26:26these characters.
- 1:26:27Speaker 1: Watch you like that? It's done. That's kind how it feel.
- 1:26:30It's just like done.
- 1:26:31Speaker 2: That's what you get.
- 1:26:32Speaker 1: It's just like there it is bedtime.
- 1:26:35Speaker 3: So it's interesting looking at the newspaper clipping ending, which
- 1:26:38I haven't read the entire version on No Sleep, but
- 1:26:40going off the newspaper clipping, it seems like in the
- 1:26:42original version she ran away on her own and James
- 1:26:45didn't go with her or got separated from James at
- 1:26:47some point, and there's no mention of Mikayla in the
- 1:26:52bunker having a child.
- 1:26:53Speaker 2: It just says she died in the fire, her body found, and.
- 1:26:56Speaker 3: Then it says, uh parents, Paul and Linda have been
- 1:26:59placed under a rest with their remaining child James now
- 1:27:02being questioned by the FBI. So in the original it
- 1:27:05was more ambiguous, like who was a part of it? Yeah,
- 1:27:07stuff like that. But I mean I like James.
- 1:27:11Speaker 1: I like James being the catalyst of basically telling our
- 1:27:16protagonists that his sister was murdered and that they need
- 1:27:20to get out of here. I really think that if
- 1:27:23we spend more time in the house, you could get
- 1:27:25more out of not only the awkward interaction, but I
- 1:27:28think there needs to be more development with James as well,
- 1:27:31like almost in a way of you have a character
- 1:27:35who we think is dead and is still being like
- 1:27:37two children that are being abused in a household. I
- 1:27:40don't think James, you don't need to have like be
- 1:27:42two fucking separate instances of assault in that way. But
- 1:27:45even just like the dad, like I don't know, like
- 1:27:48he slaps the back of his head, he's like, come on, man,
- 1:27:49you know, or like what like just kind of like
- 1:27:51a weird just some other kind of uh, I think,
- 1:27:57like some other kind of abuse or like you know,
- 1:27:58like kind of just a shitty how hold. And then
- 1:28:01I think that builds his character up to to where
- 1:28:03when he's taking action and doing things, it's also our
- 1:28:07protagonist being able to help him as well, and like
- 1:28:11as somebody who is alive and is going through some
- 1:28:14shit can be I don't know, yeah, just like a
- 1:28:18kind of like a beacon or like a guide for
- 1:28:20our character to also help out in that time too.
- 1:28:23But also the end of just like the child thing,
- 1:28:25that's just like a demented cherry on top of the story.
- 1:28:30Speaker 3: Yeah, yeah, I think, I mean that was great. I
- 1:28:33really enjoyed that. That was a fun story. And also
- 1:28:36this is like primo material to get turned into a film,
- 1:28:40because yep, there is a lot of the time it
- 1:28:43bothers me when something takes like a whole novel and
- 1:28:46then adapts at one for one and doesn't make any changes,
- 1:28:48because sometimes it's like, well, for one, we already had
- 1:28:50the book for that, and two not everything translates perfectly
- 1:28:53from you know, page to screen.
- 1:28:55Speaker 1: Well, a whole novel, also a four hundred page book
- 1:28:58translating into a hour and a half very hard, you're.
- 1:29:01Speaker 3: Gonna lose so much. You're gonna lose so much, and
- 1:29:03like it becomes a different format. And there's certainly some
- 1:29:05things that do it right, but they have to understand
- 1:29:08what needs to be changed right. It's not an easy
- 1:29:10one for one. But this is the other way around,
- 1:29:12where you have this short, interesting idea with a lot
- 1:29:14of really cool plot moments, and you can band in places,
- 1:29:17you can add, you can change, Like I think this
- 1:29:20is This would be a great film. Sidney Sweeney's perfect
- 1:29:23to be a part of it. From the other projects
- 1:29:24she's been in, like Immaculate and stuff like.
- 1:29:26Speaker 1: That, Air Cross Saw Doggins screenwriter Walton Doggins would be
- 1:29:30a good Paul.
- 1:29:31Speaker 2: Yeah, that'd be cool.
- 1:29:33Speaker 1: Yeah, I think that'd be sick.
- 1:29:35Speaker 2: This is This is great.
- 1:29:36Speaker 3: So I'm excited to see this is becoming a film
- 1:29:38and I definitely get why it is. And I really
- 1:29:40enjoyed this story. That was fun.
- 1:29:42Speaker 1: Yeah, no, it was a great little read.
- 1:29:44Speaker 3: Uh.
- 1:29:44Speaker 1: Y'all, we appreciate you. Be sure to go give some
- 1:29:46love to Joe, maybe go congratulate him as well. It's
- 1:29:49pretty fucking huge to have a story of yours be
- 1:29:51adapted into a full blown movie. So that's fucking awesome, Joe.
- 1:29:54We appreciate you, man. Also, Joe was very active on Reddit.
- 1:29:57We'll have to check out some more of his works
- 1:29:58in the future as well, But go give some love guys.
- 1:30:01Until the meantime. As always, be sure to check us
- 1:30:03out on Spotify, Apple Podcast give us the nice ratings there.
- 1:30:06It really does mean a whole hell of a lot.
- 1:30:09Thank you so much for joining us this week, and
- 1:30:11we'll see you in the next one.
- 1:30:13Speaker 3: Bye bye, We'll see you in the next one. And
- 1:30:15don't forget about early in the episode of the mention
- 1:30:17of Hunter bar diving in a red pleather skirt. Okay, bye,
- 1:30:22thanks bye be any