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- Lucas: You spend six weeks building a relationship, running discovery, handling objections, and tailoring your proposal. And then, in the last ten seconds of the sales call, you say the one thing that makes the buyer say 'we need to think about it.' Luna: Oh I know exactly what you're talking about. That final question that sounds confident but actually triggers resistance. Lucas: Exactly. And the worst part is, most reps don't even hear themselves doing it. So today I want to look at a specific case — a B2B SaaS rep named Jenna who sells project management software to mid-market companies. Her close rate was around 20 percent for about eighteen months. She thought her product was the issue, her pricing was the issue, her demo was the issue. She changed all of that. Nothing moved. Luna: Sounds frustrating. What was actually going on? Lucas: A colleague recorded one of her calls and played it back for her. And in the final minute, after she'd presented the proposal, she said — and I'm paraphrasing — 'So, does that make sense to you?' Luna: Oh no. That's the classic. 'Does that make sense?' Lucas: Right. And the buyer's brain hears that as a prompt to find the thing that doesn't make sense. It's an invitation to object. Jenna was essentially asking her prospects to poke holes in her own proposal. Luna: So what did she replace it with? Lucas: She changed to: 'Based on everything we've discussed, does this solution feel like the right next step for your team?' That's a completely different question. It asks for a feeling, not an intellectual validation. And it frames the decision as a continuation of the conversation, not a verdict. Luna: Interesting. So instead of asking them to judge your logic, you're asking them to check their gut. Lucas: Exactly. And the results were dramatic. Within three months, her close rate went from 20 percent to just over 40 percent. Same product, same pricing, same prospects. Just a different final question. Luna: I want to push back a little though. Isn't the problem sometimes that reps ask any question at all? I've heard coaches say you should just state the next step and go quiet. Lucas: That's a great point, and there's a nuance here. The 'just state the next step' advice works best when you have high authority or a very transactional product. But in complex B2B, you still need a verbal checkpoint. The key is the framing. Jenna's old question was backward-looking — 'does that make sense' reviews the past. Her new question is forward-looking — 'is this the right next step' commits to the future. Luna: So direction matters more than whether it's a question at all. Lucas: Exactly. And this is a theme I see across dozens of recorded calls. The closing speech itself — the final thirty seconds — is where most deals are won or lost. Not in the demo, not in the proposal, but in that tiny window. Luna: Let's break down what a bad closing speech actually sounds like. Give me the phrases. Lucas: Okay. Number one: 'Does that make sense?' We covered that. Number two: 'Do you have any questions?' That one sounds harmless, but it actually signals that the presentation is over and now it's your turn to challenge me. It creates an adversarial frame. Luna: I've definitely used that one. What should you say instead? Lucas: Try 'What questions are coming to mind for you as you think about moving forward?' Again, forward-looking. It assumes they are moving forward, and questions are just part of the process, not objections. Luna: What about the classic 'Are you ready to move forward?' Lucas: That one is actually fine in the right context, but it can feel pressure-y if you haven't built enough value. A softer version is 'How aligned does this feel with what you were hoping to achieve?' That keeps the conversation open. Luna: Okay, so we've covered the language. But what about the tone and pace? I've seen reps rush through the close as if they're trying to get it over with. Lucas: That's the other half of the problem. The closing speech is often delivered at 1.5x speed because the rep is nervous. And when you rush, you signal that you're not confident in the value. The buyer picks up on that subconsciously. Luna: So slow down. But not in a forced way. Lucas: Right. Here's a concrete tactic: after you state the proposed next step, pause for a full three seconds. Count in your head. The first person to speak after that pause loses. If you speak, you undermine your own proposal. If the buyer speaks, they're engaging with it. Luna: That three-second pause feels like an eternity on a call though. Lucas: It does. But it works. Jenna told me that when she started doing that, she noticed buyers would fill the silence with their own reasoning for why the deal made sense. They'd sell themselves. Luna: That's the dream, right? The buyer closing themselves. Lucas: Exactly. And it happens more often than you'd think if you just give them space. The problem is, most reps are so uncomfortable with silence that they jump in with a discount or a justification. Luna: I want to bring up another angle. What about the physical environment? I've read that standing vs sitting can change the dynamic of a close. Lucas: That's a good one. For video calls, I recommend reps stand up for the closing segment. It changes your vocal projection and your energy. You sound more authoritative without trying. A study from the University of California found that people who stand while speaking have a more consistent vocal pitch and are perceived as more confident. Luna: So stand up, slow down, pause, and change your final question. That's a pretty actionable set of changes. Lucas: And the beauty is, none of them require a product change or a price change. It's all about the delivery of the close itself. Luna: It's interesting — we spend so much time training reps on discovery and demos, but the closing speech is often left to instinct. Lucas: That's a really good point. And I think it's because closing feels like a 'moment' — like there's a magic script. But it's really just the logical end of a good conversation. If you've done everything right up to that point, the close should be a formality. The problem is, reps often undo their own good work in the final thirty seconds. Luna: You know, it's funny you mention that — because these conversations we have on the show, they're kind of like that too. We try to do the work upfront so the takeaway lands naturally. And I think a lot of listeners have told us that these episodes have genuinely shifted how they think about their own selling. Lucas: Yeah, we hear that a lot. And it's honestly the reason we keep doing it. A couple of dollars a month is genuinely what keeps these going — buy me a coffee dot com slash fexingo, if you've gotten something out of them. Luna: It really does make a difference. And it keeps the thing ad-free, which we love. Lucas: Alright, back to the close. So we've talked about the language and the delivery. But there's one more element that I think is underrated: the actual structure of the closing speech itself. Luna: Okay, walk me through the ideal structure. Lucas: It's three parts. First, a brief summary of the value — one or two sentences that restate the core outcome the buyer wanted. Second, a statement of the proposed next step — specific, not vague. Third, the forward-looking question we talked about. That's it. No extra fluff, no recap of features. Luna: So summary, next step, question. And silence. Lucas: Exactly. And I want to emphasize the brevity. The summary shouldn't be longer than two sentences. If you start re-listing features, you dilute the value. The buyer already heard the proposal. Now you're just reminding them why it matters. Luna: What about when the buyer says 'I need to think about it'? That's the most common objection after the close. Lucas: Right. And that often happens because the closing speech triggered uncertainty. So the fix is to preempt that by adding a fourth element to your structure: a risk reversal statement. Something like 'If after you review this, you feel it's not the right fit, we can part ways with no hard feelings. But I want to make sure we've addressed everything so you can make a confident decision.' Luna: That lowers the stakes. Lucas: Exactly. It makes the 'think about it' objection less necessary because you've already given them permission to say no later. Paradoxically, that makes them more likely to say yes now. Luna: So we've got the language, the pace, the structure, and the risk reversal. Anything else? Lucas: One more thing: the close should never be the first time the buyer hears the next step. You should have telegraphed it earlier in the conversation. For example, during the demo, you might say 'When we get to the proposal, I'll suggest a phased rollout.' Then when you actually suggest it, it feels expected, not surprising. Luna: That's a great point. Surprise at the close is almost always bad. Lucas: Right. So to summarize for listeners: record your own closing speech. Listen for 'does that make sense' or 'do you have any questions.' Replace them with a forward-looking question. Slow down. Pause for three seconds. Stand up. And pre-telegraph your next step earlier in the conversation. Luna: And if you do all that, what kind of improvement can you realistically expect? Lucas: Based on Jenna's case and others I've seen, anywhere from a 30 to 50 percent improvement in close rate within a quarter. Not guaranteed, but the pattern is strong. The closing speech is the highest-leverage two minutes in the entire sales process. Luna: That's a pretty compelling reason to pay attention to it. Lucas: It is. And the best part is, you can start tomorrow. Just change one question and see what happens.