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- 0:003, 10, 1, 0, ignition, liftoff,
- 0:08Ending small business failure.
- 0:11Welcome to the Small Biz Chat podcast with a number 1 small business expert Melinda Emerson.
- 0:17Bolinda's goal is to end small business failure, and she'll give you the information
- 0:21you need to succeed and live the life you've dream of.
- 0:25Now here's the small Biz lady herself.
- 0:29Melinda Emerson.
- 0:31Hi, everybody.
- 0:31I'm Melinda Emerson, the small Biz lady, and come to small fish chat here on small fish chat
- 0:37live.
- 0:37It is our goal to help you succeed as your own boss, and we never failed to disappoint.
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- 0:43Now we're gonna be switching gears a little bit and talking about traffic and how to turn your
- 0:49traffic into convergence to grow your small business.
- 0:52And we're gonna be talking right now with DigitalStrages, Sean McCool, and he is a
- 0:58terrific expert.
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- 1:31Now back to my guest.
- 1:32We are tie it's time for us to talk about making big money with your web site, which is
- 1:38why I invited my guest Sean McCool to join us here on Small Bench Chat Live.
- 1:43Sean is the founder of Sean McCool Consulting.
- 1:45He has more than 3 decades of experience creating sales and marketing campaigns that
- 1:50convert.
- 1:50He brings his award winning sales and copywriting background into the corporate
- 1:55digital marketing arena, and he advises companies big and small on how to implement
- 2:01high performing conversion based digital marketing strategies and tactics.
- 2:05I dare any of you
- 2:05guys to say that ten times back.
- 2:06Anyway, Sean McCool.
- 2:11Thank you so much for being here with us.
- 2:14Hey.
- 2:14It's a pleasure to be here.
- 2:15I'm I'm a little nervous about following Vanessa.
- 2:18That's a that's a tough act to follow.
- 2:20So, Yeah.
- 2:21She's my best.
- 2:22Jared straight program.
- 2:23Right?
- 2:23She's like, Bijay.
- 2:25Yeah.
- 2:26Bijay's not a bad b word.
- 2:27Isn't it?
- 2:27Did you hear her?
- 2:28She's like
- 2:29Yeah.
- 2:29So I'm I'm hoping I'm hoping I can help people make money where she helps them keep and grow
- 2:34it.
- 2:34Right?
- 2:35Exactly.
- 2:35You Alright.
- 2:36My theme here.
- 2:37You know, you figured out how
- 2:38I segmented you guys so that you would fall one one another.
- 2:41Right?
- 2:41Let's do it.
- 2:42So so let's talk about generating money online.
- 2:46Like, what is the best way to do because that's what everybody trying to figure out.
- 2:51Yeah.
- 2:51I mean, that's a huge question.
- 2:53Right?
- 2:54How you generate money online?
- 2:55I mean, it's, like you said, question everybody wants to know.
- 2:57And there's so many facets to it.
- 2:59I think we could probably start breaking it down a little bit.
- 3:02So, I mean, really, there's only three ways there's only 3 components to any marketing
- 3:07campaign.
- 3:08So no matter and it doesn't matter if it's online or offline, to be honest.
- 3:11So those 3 components are the copy.
- 3:13So that that's your marketing message, your offer.
- 3:16That's what you're trying to get people to do or take action on.
- 3:19And then the audience, that's where the traffic is coming from.
- 3:22So those are kind of the big three pieces So we can dive into those individually if you want
- 3:26real quick.
- 3:27Absolutely.
- 3:28Hit it for me.
- 3:28Yes.
- 3:29Alright.
- 3:29So so let's start with copy because that may be a weird word to some people.
- 3:33So copy is simply the words you use in your marketing campaigns.
- 3:36I don't care if it's a sales presentation, a brochure, your websites, anything you use a
- 3:42podcast.
- 3:42Like, if your copy is kind of the words behind your marketing, right, and and the more
- 3:47structured it is, that's why we call it copywriting.
- 3:49It's just a it's just a word.
- 3:51But here, I'm about to drop a bomb.
- 3:52You ready for this, Melinda?
- 3:53I'm ready.
- 3:54Alright.
- 3:55We all everybody, if we use the English language, we all All we get is 26 letters and
- 4:0010 numbers to make our marketing statement.
- 4:03Right?
- 4:04Now that magic is how we arrange those letters into words, into sentences, into paragraphs,
- 4:10into what we're talking about, and what we're the offers we're making to people.
- 4:14So all got the same raw materials to work with.
- 4:17The question is how are we gonna use them to get to make people offers?
- 4:21And that's the second part of any campaign is the offer.
- 4:24So the offer is, what do you want your reader or viewer or listener to do next?
- 4:29Right?
- 4:29So my clients, I teach my clients to think of an offer as an invitation.
- 4:33Like, not some you're not telling people what to do.
- 4:36You're inviting them into your world, and you need to respect that because these are real
- 4:41people with real problems and you've got real solutions that can help them.
- 4:44So you wanna you wanna honor that relationship.
- 4:47You wanna pay respect to that relationship.
- 4:49So make it an invitation and not at telling them what to do.
- 4:52We all hate those kind of used car salesmen screaming at you to come down to their lot
- 4:58instead of inviting you into their world.
- 5:00Right.
- 5:00And then the final piece of that is the audience.
- 5:03And this is some people call it traffic.
- 5:05Some people call it the list, you know, if you're talking about an email list, but to me,
- 5:09it's just an audience.
- 5:10It's who are you who are you broadcasting your message to in whatever format.
- 5:14And one thing you need to understand about the audience is your audience has built in desires.
- 5:20You're never gonna be able to create desire in your audience.
- 5:25What you have to do instead is you have to tap into the desire that they already have and make
- 5:30your your offer match the existing desire.
- 5:34So that's the big three parts of of any marketing campaign.
- 5:38So Those are the 3 components.
- 5:42Mhmm.
- 5:42But but writing copy that converts can really be a challenge for people I know myself.
- 5:48I I write a blog for you.
- 5:50I'll write a book for you.
- 5:51But writing sales copy like a sales email is like I can't I don't feel like I have those
- 5:58skills as a mere mortal.
- 5:59So can you tell us about, like, If you're if you're getting started writing some sales
- 6:04emails and stuff, what are some tips you can give people?
- 6:08Yeah.
- 6:08So one of my tips is always use templates or swipe files.
- 6:12Some people call them swipe files.
- 6:13Some people call them templates.
- 6:14Basically, it's it's starting with something So you're not just staring at a blank page because
- 6:18that blank page, especially when you think you're supposed to be selling something.
- 6:22Also, like I said before, like, when you you think of it as an invitation instead of trying
- 6:26to get them to do something, it really takes a lot of pressure off.
- 6:30You know, it's like, hey.
- 6:32This is what we got.
- 6:33If you like it, here it is.
- 6:34So first of all, just kinda think about being more making it more of an invitation.
- 6:39But aside from that, then use templates, use swipe files, So imagine you go into the gym and
- 6:45you go to the gym with a workout like a planned out.
- 6:48Here's what I'm gonna do first, set 1, set 2, set 3, this exercise, this many reps, things
- 6:53like that.
- 6:53That's not the whole workout, but it's it's the outline of the workout that you're gonna be
- 6:57doing.
- 6:57You still gotta put in the work.
- 6:58You still gotta lift the weights and all that.
- 7:00Having a template or a swipe file is the same way.
- 7:02It gives you an outline to start with so that you know where you're going and you're not
- 7:06wasting a bunch of time staring at blank pages.
- 7:09So I've got 3 different types of templates that I like to give my clients that my clients like
- 7:13to work with, and I'd love to go through those with you.
- 7:16Sure.
- 7:17Sure.
- 7:17Give us just the snippet.
- 7:18Right?
- 7:19I need to clip those versions.
- 7:20Right.
- 7:21So the first type is what I call a short story narrative.
- 7:24So think of a short story, a 3 act play, something like that.
- 7:27An example might be, and I'll give you 3 quick bullet points on that.
- 7:30So this is the problem our clients have.
- 7:33We help them define it like this.
- 7:35We help them solve it like this.
- 7:37So if you just start with those three bullet points on your blank document and then you
- 7:41start filling in, you'll have a pretty good email or sales, you know, piece of sales
- 7:46material that you could send out to people because you're you're just walking people to
- 7:49the process.
- 7:50So that's one.
- 7:50It's called I call it a short story narrative.
- 7:53Number 2 is what I call 1 of the 3 r's.
- 7:55Now, Melody, your your world class at this, like you're doing this all the time, and that
- 7:59is to reformat other content.
- 8:02So I know you like to take a lot of your stuff and then put it into a blog and, you know, add
- 8:06some stuff here and there, but you're basically just reformatting some other stuff.
- 8:10That's a great way to do it.
- 8:11And a lot of people are like, well, Sean, that's content.
- 8:13That's not sales.
- 8:14But I think my personal opinion and and some of the direct response, like die hards, would
- 8:19probably you know, hang me out to drive for this, but I think content and sales copy are
- 8:25are blurring every day.
- 8:26And I think the most effective sales copy is a lot more like content and the best content is a
- 8:32lot more like sales copy.
- 8:33Like, it's it's really coming together.
- 8:36Because it needs to provide value.
- 8:38It needs to provide information, proof, a lot of different things.
- 8:42And then the the final thing is what I call a persuasion map.
- 8:45Again, this is just a kinda like if you had a map of the if you're going on a hike and you
- 8:49you wanted an overlay of the trail, it's not the trail itself, but it kinda gives you a, you
- 8:53know, you know, which way to turn and about when to turn.
- 8:56So the persuasion map that I like to use that's stood the test of time is called PAS problem
- 9:02agitate solution.
- 9:03So you present the problem your prospect feels.
- 9:05That's the problem.
- 9:06Then you agitate that problem a little bit.
- 9:08You you kinda poke at the problem until they can really feel it.
- 9:12Remind them of kinda what that feels like, and then you present your solution to that
- 9:17agitation.
- 9:18And if you do that well, they'll take whatever solution you've got.
- 9:22So you gotta poke the paint a little bit.
- 9:24And then Got a poke it up.
- 9:25Gotta poke the bear.
- 9:26Right.
- 9:26You gotta poke the paint and say, but wait.
- 9:28I can help.
- 9:29Right?
- 9:30That that's how you do it.
- 9:31Right?
- 9:31Absolutely.
- 9:32So listen.
- 9:33I wanna ask you one more question before we go to break.
- 9:37What are some of the best ways to track conversion?
- 9:41Cause I know and what is a conversion, right, because that's part of it too.
- 9:44You have to define what conversions even are.
- 9:46Yeah.
- 9:47So that's that's a, again, it's a big question.
- 9:49And and as the as our online worlds and offline worlds and social media and websites and
- 9:54everything starts entangling Like, these questions get deeper and deeper and bigger and
- 9:59bigger.
- 10:00But, basically, I would say to me, a conversion is is anything where you can get your client to
- 10:06intentionally take the next step.
- 10:08Now that might be just to comment on a blog post.
- 10:11That might be to retweet a Twitter tweet That's that's hard to say.
- 10:16You know, to comment on a Facebook post to reply to an email, to click a link in an email.
- 10:21Like, there's there's literally dozens dozens of of conversion actions, and you need to be
- 10:27clear about what you want to track.
- 10:29First of all, it's not always a sale.
- 10:31You know, sometimes you just need to move pro people further down the relationship so that a
- 10:36sale could be made later.
- 10:37It doesn't have to be made day 1.
- 10:39So some of the tools that are available and there's lots of tools, but for instance,
- 10:43there's there's tools like, do you wanna go high end?
- 10:46There's tools like wicked reports.
- 10:47They can literally track your social media post, your YouTube channel.
- 10:53You like, just anything you wanna dump in there, they can track all of that social
- 10:57organic engagement along with your sales engagement, and you can really get a good
- 11:02picture of over time where you you might think that a sales letter is doing all the work, but
- 11:07actually it's this little organic video you got going over here.
- 11:11Okay.
- 11:12That is getting people interested enough to start reading your sales letter.
- 11:15So so finding those types of tools are really good for tracking conversions.
- 11:21And sometimes you just need a a a very base basic Excel spreadsheet to track your email and
- 11:26open rates and see, hey.
- 11:28That one's really not doing well in the follow-up sequence.
- 11:30Should probably change the subject line because nobody's opening that one, but they're opening
- 11:34the one before and after
- 11:35it.
- 11:35So there's there's a lot of there's a lot of ways to do that, and it's just it it's really
- 11:39just kinda start thinking about common sense and then looking for good tools.
- 11:42Alright.
- 11:43Well, I'm gonna put a pin in that.
- 11:44When we come back, we're gonna talk even more about this.
- 11:47And about some sales funnels too.
- 11:49I'm Melinda Emerson, the small business lady, and we will be right back.
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- 12:36I'm Melinda Emerson, the small biz lady, and we are live with my guest Sean McCool.
- 12:41And he's talking to us about traffic and convergence and everything in between.
- 12:46So let's get right back to him.
- 12:48Sean, tell me about how do you develop irresistible headlines?
- 12:53That's like the hardest thing for me.
- 12:55I'll write a great article, and I'll struggle with what to call it to give people click on it
- 12:59to open it.
- 12:59Can you give us a little bit of tips on that?
- 13:02Yeah.
- 13:02I can I can give you that?
- 13:03So, again, go back to kinda swipe files and templates.
- 13:05I'll give you what I call my IL 9 secret.
- 13:08So the IL 9 secret is in most grocery stores now, there's a magazine aisle.
- 13:15And if you go down, like, physical magazines, remember those, they still exist.
- 13:18You know, they're not they're not like Bigfoot.
- 13:19They actually do still exist.
- 13:21If you go down and look at the the magazine covers, they'll have the blurbs on there.
- 13:25You can look both in your industry and then outside your industry.
- 13:29And those headline blurbs that are on the covers of magazines are are written by some of
- 13:33the world's best copywriters.
- 13:35So you grab 3, 4, 5 of those magazines, both in your niche and outside of your niche to get
- 13:40some ideas.
- 13:41So you might see one that says, you know, 13 ways to lose £50 this summer.
- 13:46So what you do is you start thinking about based on your product or your service, what
- 13:50numbers would I need to change?
- 13:52What's the big goal that my clients want?
- 13:54And I start playing with that formula x ways to lose or to get x result with, you know, in y
- 14:02time, you know, something like that.
- 14:04So you just kinda use those as as starters And again, it it's just it's so much easier when
- 14:09you have something to work with instead of trying to stare at a blank page and just, like,
- 14:13just stare at it.
- 14:14So what I do is I have magazines.
- 14:16I actually subscribe to them and have them come to the house.
- 14:18And I will read the magazines, but then what I'll do is every month, I'll off the cover, and
- 14:23I put them in a in a file folder and a file cabinet, and then that I know that's old
- 14:26school.
- 14:26But then when I'm ready to write, I'll just lay a couple of them out.
- 14:30I'll look at them at the on the desk, and I'll kinda rearrange, pick some stuff.
- 14:33And voila, that's that's a as good a way as any to to get the a really good headline.
- 14:39I like that.
- 14:40I like that.
- 14:41Now tell me about sales funnels.
- 14:44I know that, you know, once you get this customer you get somebody to give you their
- 14:48email address, what should you be doing to sort of like nurture the relationship with them?
- 14:55Yeah.
- 14:55So that's a good great question.
- 14:57So if it's a if it's a sales funnel where you've given them something like an opt in or a
- 15:00free report or something like that, to get them to give you the email, then what I would
- 15:05encourage you to do is the first 2, 3, 4, maybe up to 5 emails depending on on what kind of
- 15:11report they got or video they got or maybe you sent them a podcast episode is I wouldn't I
- 15:17would help them consume that information.
- 15:20And then I would help them take action on that information so that they're actually getting
- 15:25value from the free thing that you gave them in exchange for the email.
- 15:28Then you've earned the right to sell them the next thing.
- 15:32But, honestly, you don't have the right, in my opinion, to try to sell them something else if
- 15:37what they got did even really help them.
- 15:39And that that could be on them, and it could be on you.
- 15:41But as as people who provide a service, whether that's a product or a service, We have a
- 15:47responsibility to our people to serve them and part of service is making sure they take action
- 15:54even in spite of themselves sometimes.
- 15:56So the first thing I would do is try to get them to consume and walk them through whatever
- 16:01it is they signed up for.
- 16:03Got it.
- 16:03So now what if I want to hire a professional copywriter to to develop a sales phone for me.
- 16:11And they do and then my sales funnel doesn't convert.
- 16:16Yeah.
- 16:16What kinda, like, is there a money back guarantee in your industry?
- 16:20Like, what, like, what do I how do I how do I resolve this?
- 16:24Because I've actually had this experience in my own business several times, but I think
- 16:28sometimes there's there's there's a lot of snake oil salesmen out here in every street.
- 16:32And so I kinda wanted to know what are the right questions and things you should be asking
- 16:36someone even before you engage them so that maybe, you know, I mean, certainly everything
- 16:41everybody writes doesn't convert.
- 16:43Right?
- 16:43But how do you kinda test things a little bit better so that you don't completely burn?
- 16:48Yeah.
- 16:48So first thing I would say, you know, from the copywriter side is that copywriting's a lot
- 16:53like anything else, sales, baseball.
- 16:56You're probably gonna get 1 out of 3 to get a base hit and probably 1 out of 5, maybe worse,
- 17:03is gonna be like a home run.
- 17:04Like, it takes work to get these and its investment just like any other anything else.
- 17:09Now I'm not supposed to say that as a copywriter.
- 17:11I'm supposed to say that, like, everything, you know, is amazing, and then we just put these
- 17:14fancy formulas together and poof.
- 17:16You're a
- 17:16$50,000,000 company and all that, but that's not how that's not how it works.
- 17:20Like, it takes effort.
- 17:22So I think the number one thing is is to find a copywriter that that you can see some samples
- 17:27from that you have a good relationship with.
- 17:31They don't just take an order from you to write something.
- 17:33They ask you a lot of questions back.
- 17:35They push back a little bit, and they wanna they they really dig in and ask good questions
- 17:40about your product.
- 17:41Maybe questions that you've never thought to ask.
- 17:43That's a really good sign.
- 17:45If they can start tomorrow, that's probably not a good sign.
- 17:48Just like a like a construct contractor, you know, construction contractor.
- 17:51You don't want the guy that can start tomorrow.
- 17:53Which is the reason he can start tomorrow because he doesn't have work.
- 17:58Most of the good copywriters will be booked out several weeks, if not several months in
- 18:03advance.
- 18:03Okay.
- 18:04And So just set really clear expectations, ask the question, hey.
- 18:09Do you offer money back guarantee?
- 18:11Most of them will not because it is a lot of work to write us write a piece of sales copy,
- 18:15depending on what it is.
- 18:17But you can set expectations on what you would like to have happen.
- 18:22And if they agree or don't agree, then, you know, just set clear expectations like any
- 18:26other relationship.
- 18:27Okay.
- 18:28Okay.
- 18:28I think that's more than fair.
- 18:30Alright, Sean.
- 18:31What is your favorite business app?
- 18:33Yeah.
- 18:34I'm gonna go with rev, r e v.
- 18:36It's a transcribing service.
- 18:38One thing that peep most people don't know about it is you can the app on your phone, you
- 18:41can actually record an audio, like, while you're driving, you got an idea.
- 18:45You're walking the dog.
- 18:46And then that can just immediately be transcribed.
- 18:48It's a great way to do quick blog posts, things like that.
- 18:52So Rev.
- 18:53I've used Rev before.
- 18:54I really, really like Rev.
- 18:56That's actually a really good one.
- 18:58What is your favorite old school marketing tip?
- 19:02Wow.
- 19:02Old school marketing tip.
- 19:04Oh, school.
- 19:06And I
- 19:07kinda gave away my best one with with looking at the magazine covers.
- 19:11But it's probably just it's probably swipe file and to collect.
- 19:15Like, if you're flying on the on the plane and you got Sky Mall magazine, you see a good ad in
- 19:20there, rip it out.
- 19:20If you got take a screenshot of it with your phone.
- 19:23You know, take a picture with your phone, save it in the notes.
- 19:25That that that's just a swipe file is is by far the best thing you could be doing.
- 19:30I'm I'm a big fan of swipe files.
- 19:32I I believe that successfully use clues everywhere.
- 19:35So rather than trying to figure it out, copy somebody else's great idea.
- 19:41That's for sure.
- 19:41Or should I say improve upon?
- 19:43Improvement.
- 19:44Yes.
- 19:44Great idea.
- 19:46Share your favorite podcast.
- 19:49Oh, man.
- 19:49Is is it wrong if I plug my own?
- 19:52It's a little pamphlet, but I'll let you do it.
- 19:54If you feel so compelled, no.
- 19:57Yeah.
- 19:58So, yeah, persuasion by the pint.
- 20:00So we talk about marketing and influence and persuasion while having beer.
- 20:04So Okay.
- 20:05So it's it's it's a lot of fun.
- 20:07Yeah.
- 20:07So that's that's my shameless plug.
- 20:10Okay.
- 20:10Persuasion behind the pint.
- 20:12Alright.
- 20:12Alright.
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