Latest / Mythmakers / Mythmakers Season 8 Wrap Up: Top 5 Author's Tips
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- 0:05Hello and welcome to MythMakers.
- 0:07MythMakers is the podcast for fantasy fans and fantasy
- 0:11creatives brought to you by the Oxford Centre for Fantasy.
- 0:15My name is Julia Golding and
- 0:19we are taking our summer break at the moment so I've compiled together some of the top
- 0:24moments from our last season of interviews with authors.
- 0:30So we have five top tips from our top
- 0:33performing episodes where there are little nuggets about how to be a writer, how to get published,
- 0:40which I'd like to share with you now.
- 0:42So first up, I'm going to start with Darren Simpson.
- 0:46Now,
- 0:46I spoke to Darren about his long road to getting published and how, in his view, the length of
- 0:54time it takes can turn out to be a gift.
- 0:59So let's talk about the actual process of writing.
- 1:02I know a few people, some of the people listening to this will be trying to write their own novels.
- 1:08Did you have a relatively smooth sailing to being published or was it many, many years of trying?
- 1:14How did it happen for you?
- 1:15Yeah, definitely wasn't a smooth sailing.
- 1:17So my first
- 1:19published book was Scavengers.
- 1:20I got a sort of crowdfunded sort of indie book before that as
- 1:23well but very small scale um but yeah before I actually got published um by a traditional
- 1:28publisher I'd say I was going for nearly a decade I think I wrote like three or four books that
- 1:33didn't make it anywhere so it was a long journey uh and and whenever I do school visits I try not
- 1:39to sort of that question comes up how long did this take you to get published and I try not to
- 1:43put young writers off or any writers off because that sounds like it sounds like a slog it sounds
- 1:47like a lot of work but at the same time it's sometimes it can be a gift to have to go through
- 1:51that struggle um because i think if for example when i wrote my first novel if that got published
- 1:56i wouldn't quite know which author i was yet i wouldn't really have my writer's voice settled
- 1:59down just yet and so for me yes it was a long slog and i definitely was very close to giving
- 2:03up at times but um i learned so much on the way uh there's nothing i would tell uh kind of writers
- 2:09who are trying to get published that everything even you know every short story every idea you
- 2:13have that doesn't work out it's never a waste it's always practice it will always feed into
- 2:17what ultimately does become your first success.
- 2:20So yeah, for me, it was definitely a long slog
- 2:22and hard at the time, but I'm glad on hindsight.
- 2:26And do you enjoy the process of working with an editor?
- 2:29I do, yeah.
- 2:30I remember when I was much more young
- 2:32and a bit more, I don't know,
- 2:34I don't want the word bit uncompromising.
- 2:36I sort of not like the idea
- 2:37of someone meddling with my stuff, you know what I mean?
- 2:39Which is a bit on hindsight,
- 2:40it's quite a young attitude, I think.
- 2:41But now, having been through it,
- 2:43especially with, I mean, it might be that I've been lucky.
- 2:46I've always had I've only I've only I mean I'm fairly new to it so I've only had two editors so
- 2:50far in my experience but they've both been editors who really get what I do and understand what I do
- 2:54and I think I so I mean it might be different if you have an editor who sees your book as being
- 2:58something else to what you imagine it being but I've been lucky that we've always kind of clicked
- 3:03in that sense so I've always enjoyed the editing experience um a lot um I've never been afraid to
- 3:08sort of say if I disagree with something or I don't understand something but I am basically so
- 3:13far in my experience my books have always been better for that kind of fresh set of experience
- 3:18died i mean i don't know how do you how do you find it has your view of that sort of thing changed
- 3:21as you've kind of gone on no no i've always really i always feel it's um it's like i'm not
- 3:30going to go back to see a series again um there's that bit it's meant in a completely different
- 3:34context but there's a bit where eustace um turns into a dragon and um he can't change himself back
- 3:41into a boy he needs Aslan to take the dragon skin off him I often feel the editor and that's got
- 3:46religious sort of application but I'm thinking about it in terms of me as a writer that actually
- 3:51sometimes I feel as though I'm stuck in my dragon skin and I need somebody to unpeel those layers
- 3:58which are getting in the way of the story should be it happens I find that I still sometimes can
- 4:05get a major edit particularly if I'm starting um the first novel in a new series for example
- 4:12but and it gets less because then you anticipate what someone's going to say and do so
- 4:18you get less edited in a way as it goes on but what makes me laugh is possibly because editors
- 4:26do have very sensitive flowers of um authors um always the letters are couched in this sort of
- 4:33you know this is really good and you know don't get defended if i tell you that it's not perfect
- 4:37you know, they don't quite put it like that, but that's the subtext is please don't throw your toys
- 4:42out the pram.
- 4:43And I always want to say, look, just tell me, tell me what you think, because I know
- 4:47that after I've had a think about what you're saying, you've often picked on things which I
- 4:52had in the back of my mind weren't quite right, but thought no one would notice.
- 4:56Actually, it's
- 4:56really helpful if you tell me.
- 4:58So I think it's great and it's a privilege.
- 5:02So these days, the
- 5:04economics of getting published are really rubbish it was much better when i started out um so a lot
- 5:09of the joys of editing are like free work on my books for me i look at it like that um yeah because
- 5:19authors don't people out there be afraid authors don't make a lot of money unless they happen to
- 5:23hit the big time with a and but that's a different league most of us are just pottering along
- 5:29piecing together uh yeah and it's funny how that um that kind of idea of right is i mean the amount
- 5:36of schools i go to and do when i do festive events or school visits um so many well not just
- 5:40younger readers a lot of adults often assume that if you're a published writer you're rich it's still
- 5:44quite a kind of common cliche in people's minds and it probably hasn't been since maybe the i
- 5:50don't know maybe as far back as the 90s that a lot of publishers did very well for themselves
- 5:54But now, you know, I sort of have a part-time job,
- 5:59which I, again, feel very privileged to sort of have half my income
- 6:02come from writing, from doing what I love.
- 6:04And that took a long time to get there.
- 6:06But yeah, a lot of people do still assume that writers generally
- 6:08must be quite wealthy because their books are in shops.
- 6:11And this doesn't apply just to books.
- 6:12Obviously, it applies to the music industry.
- 6:13It's just the way a lot of creative industries are going,
- 6:17which is sort of partially why you do have to do it,
- 6:19obviously, not just for the money, right?
- 6:21Yeah, yes.
- 6:22Yeah.
- 6:25It's always lovely to talk to Irish writers and we spoke to Pada O'Gillian earlier in the year.
- 6:35And in our conversation, we talked about the influence of Irish history on his writing and also the role of the Irish tradition of the Fae folk, the Cis, the little people of the Green Hills.
- 6:50So have a listen to what Pada has to say about that.
- 6:56So when you're talking about this sort of history based on the Book of Conquest, was that the?
- 7:03Yeah, or Book of Invasions.
- 7:05Invasions.
- 7:06Yeah, it's got different, yeah.
- 7:09Is it, when you are sort of using that as a background,
- 7:13obviously there are strong themes here of like history and colonization and class war and wealth war.
- 7:21Because I'm thinking of the enclosure movement in Scotland and England had a similar thing where basically the poor people always get shafted in all these situations.
- 7:32So in a way, there's a kind of very obvious mapping on to real history.
- 7:41but also you've got the beautiful imagination of this idea of the the magic that goes along with
- 7:49the the fae folk which gives them power so gives them the power they didn't have before so when
- 7:57you're using it how much are you thinking if at all that you're writing a sort of modern morality
- 8:03tale and how much are you just really sort of enjoying the fantasy and seeing where it takes
- 8:08you because there's always this balance between the theme an author might be exploring which can
- 8:14end up being messaging which you don't want to do no no so how did you go about it well well i did i
- 8:21didn't i didn't deliberately aim for a theme yeah but but we all have themes in us they emerge don't
- 8:29they they emerge i mean it's it's basically like if you have an apple and you drop it
- 8:36you expect it to fall.
- 8:39You don't expect it to float there.
- 8:40You expect it to fall.
- 8:42It's just, you've grown up in this world.
- 8:45This is your instinct.
- 8:46This is something that you just know to be true.
- 8:50Right?
- 8:51Now, you may be wrong about that.
- 8:52You may just not have seen the apples that float.
- 8:55But as far as you are concerned,
- 8:56for your entire life,
- 8:57if you drop an apple, it floats.
- 9:00In the same way you were saying
- 9:01with the enclosures and so on,
- 9:03it's always the poor people who get shafted.
- 9:05Right?
- 9:06Maybe you're wrong about that, but more than likely, you believe that to be completely true.
- 9:12So if you're writing a book and you wanted to have some verisimilitude, you're not going to have the poor people not getting shafted most of the time.
- 9:21You know, unless that's your story, like the poor people triumph and, you know, have a great adventure and finally save themselves from a good shafting or whatever.
- 9:30But you know what I mean?
- 9:31Like if it's just the background to the world that you're writing.
- 9:37to your mind, the poor people get shafted.
- 9:39So that's not you making a political theme.
- 9:43That's just something you believe is true of the world.
- 9:46And therefore, when you're writing the world,
- 9:48that's what's going to come out.
- 9:51It's the same for me.
- 9:52I grew up on the border with Northern Ireland.
- 9:58A person living next door to me at one point
- 10:01was arrested for being in a terrorist organization.
- 10:05we used to do all our shopping on the other side of the border.
- 10:08We would come in on a Saturday morning
- 10:11and the whole road would be covered in bottles and bricks
- 10:14from a riot of the night before.
- 10:19Everywhere I lived was covered in graffiti.
- 10:22People had very, very strong opinions.
- 10:25My father was a surgeon who operated on people
- 10:28who were sometimes whisked in under great stress
- 10:34having been attacked.
- 10:36or whatever.
- 10:38So this is going to have an influence, you know, it's going to have an
- 10:42influence.
- 10:43Not necessarily, here's me making a political point, but that's just what I grew up
- 10:47with.
- 10:47It's just what I saw, you know, and if I'd grown up somewhere else, I'd have seen something
- 10:52different and come out with something different, you know.
- 10:57So that was definitely in the background.
- 11:01also in the background
- 11:02were all of these myths and legends
- 11:05I mean they were
- 11:08they were
- 11:08told in every school
- 11:11everyone
- 11:13knew these stories in the same way as
- 11:15a lot of people in Britain grew up
- 11:17with these kind of ladybird books
- 11:20you know Rumpelstiltskin
- 11:21and so on
- 11:23and Sleeping Beauty
- 11:25and all of these you can probably still picture
- 11:27in your head the illustrations from
- 11:29some of them from when you were a kid, I'll bet, you know?
- 11:31Yeah, definitely.
- 11:32Yeah, we had those too.
- 11:34But we also had this other set, you know, of stories.
- 11:43And again, they affect you, you know?
- 11:45They're a very different way of looking at the world
- 11:48from those Lady Bird books.
- 11:51Like, you know, they have a very different mentality,
- 11:54but it influences you.
- 12:00I also had a very enjoyable conversation with Marissa Linton.
- 12:06And here we were discussing about the choice to change publishers or whether it is a choice and how as a writer these days, you have to really just go where the market will take you, where the people will publish you.
- 12:20So have a listen to us being very practical about our publishing choices.
- 12:25so um you've this is your second book as we mentioned at the beginning um so how is this
- 12:35moved to hod escape about the fact that this is an adult book so it rests nicely to have a
- 12:40different publisher with an adult book because chicken house is a younger fiction publisher
- 12:47it wasn't it wasn't deliberate um just who who will publish me which is how i do it
- 12:53Yes.
- 12:55That's my way.
- 12:56You will have the benefit of my books.
- 12:58Yeah, it wasn't like that.
- 13:01Yeah, yeah.
- 13:01I mean, I'd written these books and been turned down by just about every agent.
- 13:05And if I have a message for anyone listening who's writing fiction, keep going.
- 13:10Yeah.
- 13:10Keep going and also find your community.
- 13:13Those are my two messages, really, because it is very tough.
- 13:17I wrote, as I said, I wrote The Booker King that became The Binding Spell very much in
- 13:22isolation.
- 13:23Got turned down by everybody, but then it won this big prize.
- 13:26It won the Times Chicken House Prize.
- 13:29And part of the prize is that they published it.
- 13:31So that was done and dusted.
- 13:35Circle of Shadows then got taken on almost immediately afterwards
- 13:39because publishers had heard of my success with The Binding Spell
- 13:46long before it was published.
- 13:48So I actually had two books.
- 13:52Oh, sorry.
- 13:53It was a cat.
- 13:54That's really exciting for everybody who's watching this on YouTube
- 13:59because I was warned.
- 14:01We've been joined by a most delightful, beautiful cat.
- 14:04She's not very delightful.
- 14:06I might have to move her because, sorry, I will.
- 14:09We will do a little pause in the proceeding.
- 14:11Do pause just for a second.
- 14:13That's quite funny.
- 14:14We might have to keep the cat in because it was a very pretty cat.
- 14:17Even if, yeah.
- 14:19So we're talking about moving to,
- 14:22from writing for a YA audience,
- 14:24which is very different,
- 14:25well, not very different,
- 14:26but it has different things that you have in mind
- 14:29when you're doing that,
- 14:30to writing The Circle of Shadows for an adult audience.
- 14:34Are you thinking of this as a series,
- 14:36this particular book?
- 14:38The Circle of Shadows is a two book deal.
- 14:40Ah, so there's-
- 14:41I am writing the sequel as we speak.
- 14:45that is what I spend my time doing yeah fantastic have you got a title for it it probably won't stay
- 14:50the same though I found I have a title but I don't know if they'll yeah that um so I probably
- 14:58shouldn't yeah no don't no I'll say when you stop recording people yeah people don't realize
- 15:05how little power authors have over their own titles I've had books that have been published
- 15:10under one title in one country and then another and a completely different title both in English
- 15:17which is very confusing and you worry sometimes that people might by mistake buy both and find
- 15:22it's the same book but it's not the author's fault it's to do with the market you're in
- 15:28yeah so do you enjoy the process of working with an editor and being edited because that's one of
- 15:33the privileges of actually doing a professional route to being published as opposed to self
- 15:39publishing something or that kind of route.
- 15:42I've loved it.
- 15:43Yes.
- 15:44When you get an editorial letter, do you always feel, some people feel attacked by it and sort of,
- 15:51you know, clam up and try and defend what they're doing.
- 15:55If only you understood how
- 15:57brilliant I am, or do you actually sort of say, right, this is my opportunity to make this better?
- 16:05the editors I've worked with have been brilliant I can imagine what you're saying that it you can
- 16:11imagine a circumstance where somebody wants you to basically shred the book as you've imagined it
- 16:17and that would be yes that would be really really hard and you would have to say at what point do I
- 16:24sort of dig my heels in and say this is this is not my book this is something else I could
- 16:29And yes, I certainly could imagine that scenario happening,
- 16:32but it wasn't my experience.
- 16:34My experience with both books has been really positive
- 16:37in that I felt that both editors for The Binding Spell
- 16:41and then for Circle of Shadows wanted the best for the book,
- 16:45really cared for the book.
- 16:47And if you trust the editor and you feel they're engaged with your book
- 16:52and your world and your characters, then you can trust the process.
- 16:57and in neither case did they force me to do anything.
- 17:01There was no kind of get rid of that character.
- 17:04Oh, my God.
- 17:06It wasn't like that.
- 17:08And I think if an editor really cares about your book
- 17:11and engages with it, they can help you see things that you've missed.
- 17:17So if there are other problems, we all have problems,
- 17:22technical problems along the way.
- 17:24This bit doesn't work so well.
- 17:25how do you get these characters from here to here?
- 17:27Is this motivation quite worked out?
- 17:30Is this backstory working?
- 17:31Those kinds of things.
- 17:33If you trust the editor, they can help you find the best way up the mountain.
- 17:36That's how I see it.
- 17:38They can say, well, have you thought of this path?
- 17:41And it can be quite a shock when you get the editorial letter
- 17:46because you haven't thought about that path.
- 17:49You didn't even know that path existed.
- 17:51But if they're really engaged with it, then yeah,
- 17:54I would listen to what they say really closely if they want the best for the book
- 18:00and they really know what they're talking about.
- 18:03And I had that.
- 18:04And yeah, that was brilliant.
- 18:05And I think both my books are a lot better for that editing process.
- 18:12Yeah, I do think so.
- 18:13I do remember right at the beginning of my career back in 2004, something like that,
- 18:20I had a sort of development deal with a publisher Oxford University Press for my first set of
- 18:26fiction fantasy fiction books and I did a rewrite after a sort of big edit letter and the editor
- 18:36said to me after that when I saw that you would take an edit that's when I decided to give you a
- 18:42contract.
- 18:43So it's a really good skill to try and learn to be edited.
- 18:47It's really important
- 18:48to not feel attacked, but to think what they're trying to do is make this the best book it
- 18:55can be for a market into which it's going.
- 18:59So I never really considered myself writing
- 19:02immortal prose anyway, you know, so I'm quite happy to be told where I can be improved.
- 19:08It's really important to be able to do that.
- 19:13I also spoke with Naomi Ishiguro, who wrote a book called The Rain Shadow Orphans, inspired by Japanese culture and history.
- 19:24And we talked about whether or not it's ever plain sailing for a book and what happened during COVID for many writers.
- 19:36So was the journey to writing this a smooth plain sailing all the way or did you have many stops and starts?
- 19:42Was it actually quite a tough write?
- 19:45I don't feel like anything is ever plain sailing in writing.
- 19:49That's a trap, that question.
- 19:51Yeah, with listeners who, if you write, you'll know that it never is.
- 19:57But yeah, so I published a couple of books in the pandemic.
- 20:02And just the experience of that was, you know, I mean, there were many, many, many worse things that happened to people in the pandemic.
- 20:08I'm definitely not complaining.
- 20:10but it was it was just very discombobulating and I think just sort of being exposed to the industry
- 20:15for the first time was quite stressful so I wanted to carry on writing but I actually sort of decided
- 20:21I wasn't going to be like a career writer and trained as a secondary school teacher and was
- 20:25working as a high school teacher so I was working with teenagers for a couple years after my first
- 20:31book and that was so my agent was you know he kept he kept me on and he was like you could try
- 20:38writing a different kind of book like what have you wrote about teaching what have you wrote
- 20:41non-fiction and then he sort of said what have you wrote for for young people like what have you
- 20:45wrote with your students in mind like with a different audience and I was a bit like yeah okay
- 20:49um but then I actually thought like yeah what if I what if I did sort of do because it's not a
- 20:54children like it's not a YA it's being published as adult but it is it's with the sort of and I
- 20:59was you know I was teaching like up to like 18 year olds so um but yeah it's sort of with with
- 21:05with my students in mind was kind of how it sort of first came into being.
- 21:11And yeah, I think once I
- 21:14once I decided to write it, it was actually quite not easy.
- 21:18But it came quite quickly.
- 21:20And
- 21:21I just found myself like very excited by the whole process.
- 21:25And I had a great time writing it.
- 21:26And
- 21:27it just sort of like everything kind of seemed to come together in the world.
- 21:32sort of made sense.
- 21:34And I just had like a fan because with fantasy, you can source ideas from
- 21:38all sorts of different places and people and it's just such a fun process.
- 21:42So it was actually kind
- 21:43of wonderful once I'd started, but I think that that sort of sense of what am I going to write
- 21:49took a while.
- 21:50But I think that's sort of very common with writers because once you sort of
- 21:53write a novel, you've sort of said everything you have to say.
- 21:56You pour like years of thinking into
- 21:58it and then you have to sort of spend some time sort of living and and gathering more uh thoughts
- 22:04and observations about the world yeah so the world building um i'm correct me if i'm wrong but i was
- 22:13seeing it as having a sort of japanese basis for the culture and um but it's not japan it's not our
- 22:20own world i mean obviously once you realize there are three moons um you know you're somewhere else
- 22:26which sort of frees you up from any sort of attempt to connect it um so what kind of world
- 22:32builder are you are you the sort who has loads of notebooks where you're um you know already
- 22:37creating a world and then you go ahead with the story or do you create the bit of the world that
- 22:42fits that bit of the narrative um i think it's a difficult one because i love world building just
- 22:48for fun um i think it's just a wonderful like it's it's a great activity you get stuck there
- 22:53can't you because it's so and it's something quite different from from writing a novel i think so you
- 22:59can create a sort of perfect fun world and then you think oh it's not really in service to the
- 23:04story and the characters and the themes i really want to explore because like writing a novel is
- 23:08is really about theme um so i think yeah i mean for me like i did say that the sort of land and
- 23:14the sort of politics of the land was very much that came from the themes but um yeah there's a
- 23:18whole kind of solar magic system that's kind of roughly based on i guess sort of ideas of like
- 23:24numinous energy flows through the world or kind of chi um uh and there are kind of creatures called
- 23:30sun spirits um who like i've invented but are sort of based on um just ideas that like slightly uh
- 23:36sort of japanese yokai um and like uh the animism in the shinto tradition of sort of kami being
- 23:42these sort of spirits um these gods that are sort of physically present in places um yeah
- 23:49I think with the world building
- 23:51with this book there were bits that were sort of there
- 23:53and they were the ones that were in service to
- 23:55the theme and the character
- 23:57the characters
- 23:59and then I sort of wrote the draft
- 24:01sort of getting the story
- 24:03and then I had sort of
- 24:05three friends who ended up sort of helping
- 24:07a lot, three kind of
- 24:09beta readers I guess
- 24:11one of them was just a sort of amazing literary novelist
- 24:13who read a draft and
- 24:15was sort of questioning some of the politics
- 24:17of it sort of being like okay so how does this island's economy really really function you've
- 24:20said that it kind of runs on these uh the labor of these like undocumented migrants who are in
- 24:25this sort of like almost refugee camp like how does that actually work like what like and what
- 24:31is the role of this gang the lucky crows that you have like what are the actual kind of mechanics
- 24:35of injustice here like let's draw that out a bit more um uh yeah and and sort of looked at sort of
- 24:43the history of the island and that kind of thing with me.
- 24:46And that sort of solidified that.
- 24:48I have
- 24:49a friend who's a professional theoretical physicist, which is always handy.
- 24:53It's great
- 24:54to have one of those on speed dial.
- 24:57So I asked him about the magic system and just being like,
- 25:01so does this, is this logical?
- 25:03Like, does this make sense in terms of like some kind of physics?
- 25:07And sometimes the answer would be yes.
- 25:08And sometimes like, no, not quite, but what if you
- 25:09did this um and that's just that was really fun just to throw around ideas and to get ideas for
- 25:14like future books of like just kind of things that could happen that may never like we did a lot of
- 25:18just kind of co-world building that may never actually end up in the books but uh was really
- 25:22fun as an activity so that did make me think it's quite dangerous you can just world build infinitely
- 25:26um and yeah i have a friend who has an mst in japanese studies from oxford which despite me
- 25:33being half japanese i'm definitely definitely don't have that um uh so she read through the
- 25:37book and just kind of gave me more advice on the cultural aspects because it does borrow quite a
- 25:42lot from Japanese sort of culture and tradition so she was sort of my cultural advisor so I think
- 25:48with fantasy it's great because you get to draw on the expertise of the people around you and
- 25:53yeah my previous books felt very much like me on my own like this is just me whereas this has felt
- 25:58like I've written it but it feels very much like a kind of team effort of me going around and
- 26:03sourcing like interesting people and having interesting conversations and there's definitely
- 26:07like more like research uh experiential research that has gone in has gone into building this world
- 26:13definitely yeah i've got a friend who is a primary care doctor in the developing world you know so he
- 26:20goes into the the kind of places that you know like yemen and somalia and you know places that
- 26:26you wouldn't go on holiday at the moment um but he's very helpful because if i say um what happens
- 26:32if you get bitten by a cobra?
- 26:34What happens if,
- 26:35what happens if you get hit by a sword?
- 26:37You know, what really happens
- 26:38as opposed to like fantasy,
- 26:39you know, film violence?
- 26:41Yeah.
- 26:42What's, what kind of infections
- 26:43might you have after?
- 26:44You know, sort of,
- 26:45and unfortunately he knows
- 26:47because of the nature of where he works.
- 26:49So he often gets a dedication and a thanks.
- 26:54And finally, I spoke to a friend of the podcast
- 26:58and good friend of mine, Malcolm Geit,
- 27:00who has begun on an epic Arthurian journey in poetry.
- 27:07And we talk about where the inspiration to do something
- 27:10which hasn't been done since probably Tennyson
- 27:13and the ambition that he has set out on to write
- 27:17four cycles of Arthurian-themed poetry.
- 27:24what did you feel like answering that call to stop think and then start to tell the tale again
- 27:33and how did you persuade a publisher to go with you well yes indeed i mean well first of all i've
- 27:38wanted to do this for years and years and years ever since my mother told me the stories when i
- 27:42was little but i was in fact mentioning charles williams and those kind of high modernist lyric
- 27:47cycles of Taliesin through Logres, and I was a bit daunted.
- 27:52I knew I didn't want to do the big
- 27:54Tennysonian blank verse thing.
- 27:55I think the problem is, and my problem was form, really.
- 28:00I knew I
- 28:00wanted it to be poetry.
- 28:02But Tennyson, A, it had already been done, and B, I think after Milton,
- 28:07it's almost impossible to write a long blank verse poem without kind of blundering into kind
- 28:12to ponder as sub-Miltonics.
- 28:14It's just been done so well by Milton, you can't get out from under
- 28:18his shadow, as Eliot observed.
- 28:21So I had a problem of form.
- 28:22I mean, I love David Jones, but then
- 28:24again, this is very high modernist prose poetry that's kind of an absolute thicket of footnotes
- 28:32everywhere in four or five languages, and I didn't want it to be recherche like that.
- 28:37Eventually, I realized the answer was staring me in the face.
- 28:39I'd written a long
- 28:43meditation and reflection on Coleridge's Rime of the Ancient Mariner in a book called Mariner,
- 28:48in which, of course, I just looked at how he took the common ballad form and turned it into this
- 28:53really delicate instrument.
- 28:54He kept its vividness and its directness and its repetitions and its
- 28:58strong rhythm, but he would occasionally extend the stanza or shorten it or do various things
- 29:04that heighten the effect.
- 29:07And so I just thought,
- 29:11I think I'll have a go in the ballad form
- 29:13and make it much more accessible.
- 29:15My original plan was to do a combination of prose and poetry.
- 29:17I thought I'd do it as a travelogue around Great Britain
- 29:21with a prose narration in the modern day,
- 29:23the surface roundabout,
- 29:25and then invoke each Arthurian place in poetry
- 29:28and have the place,
- 29:29so the matter of Britain was like literally the matter,
- 29:31the physical matter of Britain.
- 29:33But then I thought, that's too Trixian, postmodern, and double narrative.
- 29:36I just don't...
- 29:37I'm really going for a second naivete here.
- 29:39I think I'm done with that.
- 29:41I really think we need wonder and enchantment.
- 29:44And that was the other side of it, of course,
- 29:46because the word chant is inside the word enchantment.
- 29:50And I think I wanted this...
- 29:53I have a little note at the beginning saying,
- 29:54read this aloud, and then you'll get it.
- 29:57So anyway, persuading a publisher.
- 30:00Now there you put your finger on something.
- 30:02because, I mean, you're right.
- 30:05Tennyson is the last really long treatment of this
- 30:07as an epic poem in 12 books.
- 30:10So we're talking 1850s and 1860s.
- 30:12There is a rather extraordinary little book in between
- 30:15in the 20th century by John Heath Stubbs
- 30:19called Artorias,
- 30:20which is in 12 books in varied metrical forms.
- 30:24But they're little books.
- 30:25I mean, it's one fairly slim volume.
- 30:28And unfortunately, I mean, it's full of brilliant things,
- 30:30but unfortunately also like T.H.
- 30:32White, he can't resist being satirical or ironic.
- 30:38And I just wanted no satire or irony anywhere in this.
- 30:42I wanted it to be cleansed of that.
- 30:44We've had more than enough of that.
- 30:47So this is the first really big retelling.
- 30:50So, I mean, they say publishers or anything,
- 30:53you're supposed to have what they call a USP, a unique selling point.
- 30:56So my unique selling point was this hasn't been done for the last 150 years.
- 31:01But I had to point out that might also be the unique sinking point in that there might be a reason for that.
- 31:06But I was willing to bet that the time might be right for this kind of retelling again, the sense of the need for re-enchantment, lots of things coming together.
- 31:16and I thought nobody else literally nobody else is going to do this I'm you know I've spent
- 31:21you know decades learning the art and craft of of metrical writing and and use of rhyme without
- 31:30torturing the syntax and that kind of thing I don't know I mastered the sonnet which is obviously
- 31:34a much shorter form but I thought if I don't do it nobody will and if I don't do it now
- 31:39starting as the thing says on that midsummer morn when I did indeed walk out one morning
- 31:45I'm not going to finish it
- 31:48because you know I'm in my 60s
- 31:49so it was now or never
- 31:51and I decided to go for it
- 31:53and unfortunately
- 31:54Rabbit Room in America
- 31:56got totally got what I was doing
- 31:57and we're going to do it beautifully
- 31:58I mean I think they sent you
- 32:00an advanced reader's copy
- 32:01which is paperback
- 32:02but the real thing is
- 32:03hardback and glorious
- 32:06and then obviously
- 32:07I didn't want to write a British epic
- 32:09without it being published in Britain as well
- 32:12so I got Rabbit Room
- 32:13and Canterbury Press into conversation with each other
- 32:15and then Canterbury Press jumped on board as well.
- 32:18So I ended up with two publishers, you know,
- 32:21taking a chance on me, as Abba would say.
- 32:26Yeah, I didn't pick up any other Abba references
- 32:29amongst the network of references.
- 32:34But in that little...
- 32:35Abba was a reference to the rhyme scheme in Memoriam,
- 32:39A, B, B, A, but there you go.
- 32:44I hope you enjoyed meeting all our authors during this season.
- 32:49And I look forward to speaking to others when we kick off again with the new season.
- 32:54If you have a favourite fantasy writer, particularly someone who is new or has been neglected, do let me know and I'll see if I can get them to come on and have a chat about their writing process and what they're working on at the moment.
- 33:08Thank you so much for listening.
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