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BPS 446: The Screenwriting Secrets Every Indie Writer Needs to Know with Dan Benamor · Bulletproof Screenwriting™ Podcast

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  Speaker 3: being distributed by Gravitas Ventures. We talk writing, working as
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  Speaker 3: a development executive, and so much more with guest Dan Benimore.
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  Speaker 3: Hey Dan, thanks love for coming on the show.
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  Speaker 4: My pleasure.
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  Speaker 3: So Dan, just to get started, you know, since you've
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  Speaker 3: listened to the show before, you know what the first
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  Speaker 3: question is going to be. And that question, Dan is,
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  Speaker 3: you know, how did you get your start in the
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  Speaker 3: film industry?
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  Speaker 4: Well, I mean, you know, for me, it's I mean,
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  Speaker 4: I guess the real definitive moment was I came out
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  Speaker 4: here to LA and I got an internship with a
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  Speaker 4: production company, and then I was doing Apple about six
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  Speaker 4: months and I pretty much you know, I ended up
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  Speaker 4: getting hired as an assistant and then I got promoted
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  Speaker 4: from there and eventually I became the head of development.
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  Speaker 4: So it was sort of I mean, really, I guess
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  Speaker 4: you broke it down, it would probably be when I
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  Speaker 4: just first got hired from an intern to actually being
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  Speaker 4: an assistant, and then it sort of snowball from there.
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  Speaker 3: Now does that still work in a similar way, you know,
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  Speaker 3: because you know things are always changing and with the
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  Speaker 3: changing face of distribution and everything, is it still that
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  Speaker 3: that that way where you think interns are used as
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  Speaker 3: sort of like that farm system where they can be
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  Speaker 3: brought up within an agency.
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  Speaker 4: My opinion on it, you know, was that because I
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  Speaker 4: was at a small company where basically, you know, the
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  Speaker 4: principles of the company were right there, like you know,
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  Speaker 4: you're dealing with them every day, and it wasn't you know.
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  Speaker 4: I think that sometimes if you go for an internship,
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  Speaker 4: you could get an internship with somewhere really cool, like
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  Speaker 4: you know, like say, for example, I got an internship
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  Speaker 4: with Lion Skate or something, right, so I'm a really
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  Speaker 4: big company like that, I would just be a guy,
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  Speaker 4: you know, one guy in this massive machine. I think
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  Speaker 4: in a scenario like that, it would bet a little
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  Speaker 4: bit harder to have the trajectory that I ended up
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  Speaker 4: having at a small company because in a smaller company
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  Speaker 4: you go act directly with the principles, They get to
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  Speaker 4: know you, and you know, it's a more it's so
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  Speaker 4: much more personal relationship, and so it's not I don't
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  Speaker 4: think it says when it's a bigger machine, you know,
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  Speaker 4: I think you might have a tougher time having any
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  Speaker 4: sort of you know, upward mobility like that.
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  Speaker 3: Now, So when you went in there was that was
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  Speaker 3: that your goal to be to be hired or did
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  Speaker 3: you maybe have another aspiration, uh, to you know, to
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  Speaker 3: or another goal to maybe work for another company, or
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  Speaker 3: or maybe you know, just goal on your own.
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  Speaker 4: Yeah, I mean I had no particular aspiration. I mean
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  Speaker 4: I showed up here in LA with my buddy from
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  Speaker 4: film school, and we got an apartment in Hollywood and basically,
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  Speaker 4: you know, for the first week we went to the beach.
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  Speaker 4: But then after that I was like, all right, what
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  Speaker 4: are we going to do? So I figured it would
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  Speaker 4: be worthwhile to try to learn, just learn as much
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  Speaker 4: as I could, and so I actually had a couple
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  Speaker 4: I think I had like two or three different internships
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  Speaker 4: at the same time. And I just you know, I
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  Speaker 4: had no real particular goal. I mean, I I've always
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  Speaker 4: my endgame was always to be a writer. But you know,
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  Speaker 4: when I first got to LA, I just figured as
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  Speaker 4: much as I can learn, it's all positive. So I
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  Speaker 4: just kind of showed up and you know, and things
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  Speaker 4: things took the course they took.
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  Speaker 3: Yeah, you know, And and you know that that's great
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  Speaker 3: because you know, because I have had friends who have
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  Speaker 3: moved out and uh, you know, the thinks are the
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  Speaker 3: same thing. They're like they always felt guilty about not
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  Speaker 3: being outside because they're like, look, it's a beautiful day out,
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  Speaker 3: the beach is down the street. What the hell are
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  Speaker 3: you doing inside?
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  Speaker 4: You know? Yeah, yeah, for sure, man. I mean the
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  Speaker 4: longer you're here too, the less you go.
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  Speaker 3: Until until like somebody, like a relative or something comes right,
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  Speaker 3: and then you're like.
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  Speaker 4: Oh yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah exactly.
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  Speaker 3: Uh So you know this, And since we're talking about
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  Speaker 3: this part of your career, I want to ask, you know,
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  Speaker 3: because some of the people that have been on I
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  Speaker 3: didn't get a chance to ask from this, but what
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  Speaker 3: are some of the skill sets that did you think
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  Speaker 3: that you had at this point that really helped you
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  Speaker 3: stand out? And really help them. Uh, you know, your
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  Speaker 3: bosses and your managers that that they you know, they
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  Speaker 3: they saw you, and they saw your skill set, and
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  Speaker 3: they they wanted to keep you. So do you you
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  Speaker 3: any like any of the skills off hand that that
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  Speaker 3: you think that really helped you, you know, get that promotion.
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  Speaker 4: You know, it was funny because I started and at
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  Speaker 4: the end, I was in charge of the interns. So
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  Speaker 4: I would, you know, I would kind of manage the interns.
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  Speaker 4: I would, you know, me and other people at the company,
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  Speaker 4: of course, but I think primarily I was part of
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  Speaker 4: my job, so I would kind of see, you know,
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  Speaker 4: you would give some interns, like you give them a script,
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  Speaker 4: and you know, there were times when I was really
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  Speaker 4: busy and I genuinely needed to have like a really
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  Speaker 4: in depth creative discussion about a script, and I didn't
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  Speaker 4: have time to read it. I would give it to
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  Speaker 4: an intern to read, and then I'd get up, you
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  Speaker 4: know and say, hey, do read that a script? What'd
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  Speaker 4: you think? And you really it was very noticeable, and
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  Speaker 4: it's actually interesting. So now a couple of years are
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  Speaker 4: passed since I was at that job, the guys that
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  Speaker 4: were my interns that I could tell had something extra,
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  Speaker 4: they've had continued success, like they've transitioned to other jobs
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  Speaker 4: where they've they you know, some of them would become
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  Speaker 4: produced filmmakers, some of them work at other companies now.
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  Speaker 4: And you know you can tell the guys who basically
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  Speaker 4: had confidence, they had opinion. That's pretty much what he
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  Speaker 4: blows down to. You know, if if I got up
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  Speaker 4: and I would ask him in turn, like hey, when
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  Speaker 4: do you think of that script? And he was just
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  Speaker 4: like yeah, all right, you know, like that that's a
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  Speaker 4: that's not really what you're looking for. You know, you're
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  Speaker 4: looking for somebody who has confident as an opinion and
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  Speaker 4: also is like has a strong opinion. You know, Like
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  Speaker 4: so if I like something and you know the intern
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  Speaker 4: that I'm checking in with him and he didn't like it,
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  Speaker 4: and and I say, well, you know, I thought, you know,
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  Speaker 4: I felt this work and that work, and he kind
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  Speaker 4: of backs off his opinion. I think that is also
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  Speaker 4: another thing that like, your opinion is your opinion, and
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  Speaker 4: it's important, in my opinion, to be strong in your
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  Speaker 4: convictions because once you waffle, he kind of lose credibility,
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  Speaker 4: you know, So stuff like that, I think, and then
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  Speaker 4: also just the basics, right, like just being responsible, like
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  Speaker 4: you're if you're giving a job to do, do it
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  Speaker 4: to the best of your ability, be on time, be
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  Speaker 4: pleasant to deal with. You know. It's that that type
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  Speaker 4: of stuff really important too.
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  Speaker 3: So would you ever sit down with a lot of
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  Speaker 3: these interns and go over things like this is how
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  Speaker 3: you read a screenplay and these are the things to
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  Speaker 3: look for.
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  Speaker 2: You know?
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  Speaker 3: Would you do stuff like that?
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  Speaker 4: Yeah? Well, I mean when you would first bring them in,
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  Speaker 4: we'd usually try to get a coverage sample to show
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  Speaker 4: that they knew how to read a script basically, and
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  Speaker 4: you know, I mean we we had our own template
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  Speaker 4: and stuff like that, but that you know, typically if
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  Speaker 4: somebody is coming in to be an intern at a
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  Speaker 4: production company, we want them to have some reading experience
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  Speaker 4: because we don't want them starting from asslot the scratch,
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  Speaker 4: I mean, then they have no real place to have
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  Speaker 4: a strong care of opinion. So usually we try to
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  Speaker 4: find somebody who had some sort of background and reading
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  Speaker 4: scripts and maybe they you know, whatever that might be,
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  Speaker 4: and hopefully, you know, start from there.
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  Speaker 3: So was there ever a you know, a time when
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  Speaker 3: when you you know, you read a screenplay and maybe
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  Speaker 3: you loved it and you wanted to get a feel
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  Speaker 3: for all these interns, and maybe you gave it to
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  Speaker 3: them and there was a point where they said, hey,
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  Speaker 3: you know, hey, boss, we we rooted it like this,
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  Speaker 3: and then and then maybe you said like, hey, yeah,
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  Speaker 3: I loved it actually, and and was therever there was
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  Speaker 3: there ever a time like that?
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  Speaker 4: Sure, yeah, I mean always, I mean that's but that's why. Yeah,
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  Speaker 4: that's what you need, uh, you know, readers for basically
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  Speaker 4: to kind of check you so you can get a sense,
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  Speaker 4: especially if it's something a little bit out there where
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  Speaker 4: you're like, you know, I think this is great, but
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  Speaker 4: it's pretty pretty weird. You know, you need a lot
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  Speaker 4: of times you need that extra voice to kind of
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  Speaker 4: you know, get a sense of how it's playing. So
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  Speaker 4: often in the situations like that, I would actually have
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  Speaker 4: more than one person read it. I'd have like five
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  Speaker 4: people read it, and then I'd be able to look
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  Speaker 4: at sort of the general response and and you know
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  Speaker 4: compare and see what was consistent and stuff like that.
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  Speaker 3: Yeah, and that's two Verger takeaways too, is uh, you know,
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  Speaker 3: one have confidence and to have an opinion.
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  Speaker 3: You know, that's very important to mention Dan because I,
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  Speaker 3: you know, just through everyone listening, I you know, I
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  Speaker 3: think that's very important too in the general in the
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  Speaker 3: film industry is that you have to have your confidence
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  Speaker 3: and you have to have that opinion, which you know,
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  Speaker 3: if you're as a director, you need that. As a
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  Speaker 3: writer as you know, you need that point of view
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  Speaker 3: from where to tell your story.
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  Speaker 4: Yeah, that's and that you know, it's it's a funny
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  Speaker 4: thing because it comes back on you in so many
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  Speaker 4: different ways because if you project confidence and it's even
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  Speaker 4: on the page. You know, if you project confidence on
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  Speaker 4: the page, and you project confidence when you then later
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  Speaker 4: go into a development beating or whatever, you can kind
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  Speaker 4: of slay people. Like people want to buy into that confidence. Like,
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  Speaker 4: you know, somebody's sitting down to read script, if that
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  Speaker 4: first couple of pages is written with a really strong
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  Speaker 4: authorial voice, they'll kind of come with you, you know. And
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  Speaker 4: if you, as the writer have a really strong take
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  Speaker 4: on a story and feel really strongly about it and
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  Speaker 4: can back it up and and all that stuff, people
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  Speaker 4: you know kind of want to take that journey with you,
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  Speaker 4: and they want to trust your credibility. As a writer,
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  Speaker 4: So it's so important. Well, I think once you it's
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  Speaker 4: not to say that like, oh you know, don't be
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  Speaker 4: be inflexible, it's not about that, but it just you
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  Speaker 4: got to be confident in what you're doing because if
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  Speaker 4: you're not, and there's no ways, no one ever else
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  Speaker 4: will ever be confident and you you have to be
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  Speaker 4: confident yourself number one, and then other people can basically
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  Speaker 4: trust you. And you know, in our business it's so
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  Speaker 4: tough already that if you don't project that confidence, I
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  Speaker 4: think it makes it way tougher.
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  Speaker 3: So what are some of the things that you notice,
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  Speaker 3: Like when we were talking about confidence on the page,
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  Speaker 3: you know, what are some of the things that usually
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  Speaker 3: jump out at you and you can usually say like, hey,
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  Speaker 3: you know that writer, he believes he or she believes
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  Speaker 3: in her own her own writing.
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  Speaker 4: Yeah, absolutely, I mean it's I think it's a lot
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  Speaker 4: of different things. I think I think one thing for
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  Speaker 4: sure would be starting out with a storytelling sort of
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  Speaker 4: approach where you're not you're not waiting for us, like
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  Speaker 4: you're the story's going and we're either coming with you
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  Speaker 4: or we're not. But you're not going to hang around
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  Speaker 4: and hold our hand you know, I think that that
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  Speaker 4: is something you'll definitely see in professional scripts, and it's
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  Speaker 4: a very noticeable difference from when you're reading a script
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  Speaker 4: maybe by a more beginning writer. You can tell the
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  Speaker 4: level of confidence in terms of a shorthand of communicating information,
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  Speaker 4: you know, where it's you and it's it's asking a
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  Speaker 4: lot of us as the audience that hey, you you
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  Speaker 4: got to keep up with me kind of thing. And
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  Speaker 4: I think that you when you when you read something
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  Speaker 4: like that, it actually sort of galvanizes you as a
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  Speaker 4: reader because you are suddenly empowered to like figure out
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  Speaker 4: what's going on and and it just makes it a
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  Speaker 4: more dynamic experience. The worst thing you can do is is,
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  Speaker 4: you know, have something where it's just spelling it out
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  Speaker 4: to you, you know, in every way, whether that dialogue
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  Speaker 4: or just the slowness of the presentation of information or
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  Speaker 4: presenting old ideas as if they are new ideas. You know,
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  Speaker 4: and there's there's you know, the audience now is so
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  Speaker 4: savage that it's really you know, there's a lot that
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  Speaker 4: can be done in shorthand, and if you're not using
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  Speaker 4: that shorthand, I think that's where you can kind of
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  Speaker 4: get into a scenario where it doesn't come across so
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  Speaker 4: the same level of confidence on the page.
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  Speaker 3: Yeah, I do agree. The audience is very savvy now.
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  Speaker 3: I mean, you know, sometimes I'm watching movies and I see,
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  Speaker 3: you know, cliches and and I'm always thinking to myself,
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  Speaker 3: you know, if they I wonder if if they're writer,
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  Speaker 3: the director, whoever it was. I'm We're always wondering, you know,
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  Speaker 3: why didn't they try something else? You know what I mean?
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  Speaker 3: Because you know, now, Dan, what I do with the movies.
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  Speaker 3: I'm always dissecting them in my head, not not even
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  Speaker 3: just you know, a piece of paper, but in my head,
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  Speaker 3: I'm always thinking to myself, you know, is this a setup?
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  Speaker 3: Is this is you know, what would the payoff be?
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  Speaker 4: You know?
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  Speaker 3: Uh, you know, I wonder what the inside the incident
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  Speaker 3: is going to be and when it finally comes there,
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  Speaker 3: you know you know what I mean. I mean, do
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  Speaker 3: you do the same thing? Do you said? You know
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  Speaker 3: when you watch movies? Now, are you just dissecting them
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  Speaker 3: and and sort rumors, trying to getting ahead of the
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  Speaker 3: story to see if you could, you know, predict what
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  Speaker 3: the writer was thinking.
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  Speaker 4: Yeah, I mean I'm pretty much ruined as an audience
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  Speaker 4: member at this point. I mean, I remember, I remember
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  Speaker 4: I used to when I was when I was in college.
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  Speaker 4: I would go my buddy and we would sneak, you know,
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  Speaker 4: we would both see one movie and then sneak around
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  Speaker 4: the theater and we would do that for like twelve hours,
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  Speaker 4: and we would see every movie that was in theater.
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  Speaker 4: And I can actually should and watched literally, I watched
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  Speaker 4: literally anything. But now you know, I'm such a that's
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  Speaker 4: an awful audience member. I'll find something, you know, like
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  Speaker 4: you quick something new on netflick two minutes if there's
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  Speaker 4: stuff in there that I just I'm watching it and
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  Speaker 4: I'm just like, ah, man, you know, I'll turn off,
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  Speaker 4: Like I'm I'd become such a terrifable audience member exactly
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  Speaker 4: because of what you're talking about, because we were in
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  Speaker 4: it so much that it's like you stop consuming it
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  Speaker 4: kind of as like a regular consumer. You become a
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  Speaker 4: lot more sort of like hypocritical when you're when you're
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  Speaker 4: watching stuf because they're always thinking about the design of
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  Speaker 4: it and and things like that.
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  Speaker 3: Yeah, I know what you mean, because sometimes you know,
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  Speaker 3: I watch movies, right even if you're a trailer now
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  Speaker 3: and uh, I'll say, let me guess what happens in
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  Speaker 3: this movie. And sometimes, you know, I'll stay out in
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  Speaker 3: front of my friends and they're like, how the hell
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  Speaker 3: do you would you get that from seeing this? And
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  Speaker 3: I'm just like, because I just you know what I mean,
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  Speaker 3: you see that stuff, you see those points, you know
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  Speaker 3: what I mean, Like there was you know, Okay, well,
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  Speaker 3: this is obviously last part of the movie. I know
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  Speaker 3: this sounds a little bit redundant, but the first time
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  Speaker 3: I ever had not the first time, but the most
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  Speaker 3: time it sticks out in my mind was when Paul
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  Speaker 3: Blart malcov came out and I saw the trailer and
• 15:45
  Speaker 3: a friend of mine went to always screening of it
• 15:47
  Speaker 3: and I told him exactly what I think happens in
• 15:50
  Speaker 3: the beat base based on the trailer, and he goes, wow,
• 15:52
  Speaker 3: you're really good at this. And I know I now,
• 15:55
  Speaker 3: granted obviously we don't go see Paul Blart Malkoff for
• 15:57
  Speaker 3: the writing, but but you know that's I was just
• 16:00
  Speaker 3: bring that up as a point of reference.
• 16:02
  Speaker 4: Yeah, I mean in general, you know that goes back
• 16:04
  Speaker 4: to the authorial conference thing, right, It's like, but soon
• 16:08
  Speaker 4: when you're starting the story, the audience is ahead of
• 16:11
  Speaker 4: you in the same way of what you're talking about.
• 16:13
  Speaker 4: Like if you set it up and they're they are
• 16:16
  Speaker 4: going to be predicting a certain storyline. So you the creator,
• 16:20
  Speaker 4: you got to kind of know that, and you're sort
• 16:22
  Speaker 4: of knowing that you have to give them something that's
• 16:25
  Speaker 4: at least a little bit different, because otherwise it's going
• 16:28
  Speaker 4: to be exactly like what you're talking about. The audience
• 16:32
  Speaker 4: is able to predict it like beat by beat, then
• 16:34
  Speaker 4: you're screwed. I mean, that's really you know, then that's
• 16:37
  Speaker 4: a really tough it's a tough place to get away
• 16:40
  Speaker 4: from if you're in that scenario. So you got to
• 16:43
  Speaker 4: figure some sort of wrinkle that makes it a little
• 16:45
  Speaker 4: bit different.
• 16:47
  Speaker 3: Yeah, very true. And you know, I actually, you know,
• 16:50
  Speaker 3: just as we talk about all this writing and everything else,
• 16:52
  Speaker 3: I want to, you know, get get into your writing.
• 16:54
  Speaker 4: You know.
• 16:55
  Speaker 3: So did you always you know, have the inclamation that
• 16:58
  Speaker 3: you wanted to be a writer director?
• 17:01
  Speaker 4: Well, no, so I have. I've directed one movie and
• 17:04
  Speaker 4: some shorts, and then you know, for me, in the
• 17:08
  Speaker 4: experience of directing my movie, which is called The Trade,
• 17:12
  Speaker 4: pretty much told me that I would prefer to just
• 17:14
  Speaker 4: be the writer, which you know, I enjoyed it, but
• 17:17
  Speaker 4: it's just so all consuming. So I give a lot
• 17:20
  Speaker 4: of credit to my cousin in Orange, who directed our
• 17:23
  Speaker 4: movie Initiation. It's really an immersive thing that she kind
• 17:28
  Speaker 4: of just you give up. You got to put a
• 17:31
  Speaker 4: lot of yourself into it. So for me, I prefer
• 17:35
  Speaker 4: being the writer. I mean, the experience that we had
• 17:37
  Speaker 4: making this film, it's kind of like exactly what I
• 17:40
  Speaker 4: love about the being of the writer is that I
• 17:42
  Speaker 4: was able to come in and contribute to the story
• 17:45
  Speaker 4: and then they went off and made the movie and
• 17:48
  Speaker 4: I watched the movie. I mean that's you know, that's
• 17:50
  Speaker 4: like so that's when it's cool being a writer, because
• 17:53
  Speaker 4: it's literally like you wrote something on a piece of
• 17:55
  Speaker 4: paper and then you get to see that it exists,
• 17:58
  Speaker 4: and you know, it's pretty pretty neat.
• 18:01
  Speaker 3: Yeah, very true, you know, because I you know, I
• 18:03
  Speaker 3: looked dry MDB. I did see you have the short
• 18:05
  Speaker 3: then you you did direct Portrade, and you know, I
• 18:09
  Speaker 3: wanted to, you know, just ask you know, what was
• 18:11
  Speaker 3: the biggest difference that you found when you when you
• 18:13
  Speaker 3: had to direct. I mean, was there any like, you know,
• 18:16
  Speaker 3: challenges that you weren't anticipating or you know, did you
• 18:20
  Speaker 3: just say, you know what, I prefer to be a writer.
• 18:23
  Speaker 4: I mean, I think that when you're gonna direct, I
• 18:27
  Speaker 4: mean I very much. I love working with the actors.
• 18:29
  Speaker 4: I think working with actors is so fun. And you know,
• 18:31
  Speaker 4: if I ever end up directing again, it will be
• 18:33
  Speaker 4: because of that. The part that I felt, you know,
• 18:37
  Speaker 4: and you kind of have to be all in or
• 18:39
  Speaker 4: not in at all. For me, that was the visual authentic.
• 18:43
  Speaker 4: I had a really great uh cinematographer on my film Betrayed,
• 18:47
  Speaker 4: and you know, he was really good about like basically
• 18:51
  Speaker 4: checking me and being like, hey, that's not gonna look good.
• 18:54
  Speaker 4: Let's do it like this. You know, when you're when
• 18:56
  Speaker 4: you're promarier writer, you don't necessarily think in that and
• 19:00
  Speaker 4: visual in the way that a director can to become
• 19:03
  Speaker 4: the same tools. You know, if you're if you're someone
• 19:06
  Speaker 4: who's confident directing stuff and your aspiration is absolutely to direct,
• 19:10
  Speaker 4: then you're gonna be doing the same study that you
• 19:13
  Speaker 4: and I do for a writing right where we we
• 19:16
  Speaker 4: know it so in and out and we know all
• 19:18
  Speaker 4: the tools and tricks and things like that. I think
• 19:21
  Speaker 4: that you know, uh, and obviously you and you want
• 19:24
  Speaker 4: you lean on your sematographer as a director, of course,
• 19:26
  Speaker 4: but I just felt like for me, I enjoy sort
• 19:31
  Speaker 4: of trying to master this one facet of it as
• 19:34
  Speaker 4: opposed to like trying to I felt like it would
• 19:37
  Speaker 4: be kind of a jack of all trade situation if
• 19:39
  Speaker 4: I tried to do directing thing. As much as I
• 19:42
  Speaker 4: like it, I don't. I don't have the same you know,
• 19:45
  Speaker 4: energy with it as I do with the writing.
• 19:49
  Speaker 3: Yeah, I you know, when when I I haven't directed
• 19:52
  Speaker 3: anything for like five years.
• 19:55
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• 20:01
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• 20:04
  Speaker 3: But you know, I find that it's not because I
• 20:07
  Speaker 3: don't want to. It's just because I've learned Dan that
• 20:10
  Speaker 3: the writing has to be not good, but great, you
• 20:13
  Speaker 3: know what I mean. Before you're going to do any projects.
• 20:15
  Speaker 3: I've learned that it has to be you have to
• 20:19
  Speaker 3: like you yourself whoever, you know, for everyone listening to this.
• 20:21
  Speaker 3: If you're writing something, you and yourself have to get
• 20:25
  Speaker 3: so excited about it, you're like, how the hell is
• 20:27
  Speaker 3: this not a movie made? Or Freddie if Nook, you
• 20:29
  Speaker 3: know what I mean, And you have to be so
• 20:30
  Speaker 3: And that's something that I've learned. So what I've I've
• 20:33
  Speaker 3: been doing. Is I took one step forward to take two.
• 20:36
  Speaker 3: I'm sorry, I took one step back to take two
• 20:38
  Speaker 3: steps forward. And basically what I mean by that is
• 20:41
  Speaker 3: I just wanted to make sure that I got better
• 20:44
  Speaker 3: at things. And during this whole five year period, I've
• 20:46
  Speaker 3: actually produced stuff. I've actually had a graphic novel get made,
• 20:51
  Speaker 3: you know, stuff like that. And but but it's really,
• 20:54
  Speaker 3: you know, it comes back to, you know, making sure
• 20:56
  Speaker 3: that writing is phenomenal and you when you when you
• 21:00
  Speaker 3: talk about writing, you know, I can you know, I
• 21:02
  Speaker 3: can hear you get excited about it in your voice,
• 21:04
  Speaker 3: and that's good exactly. You need that, right, So I
• 21:07
  Speaker 3: wanted to ask you, Dan, when whenever you're writing, you
• 21:10
  Speaker 3: know what I mean, like, is there any things that
• 21:13
  Speaker 3: you keep in mind to you know, make sure that
• 21:16
  Speaker 3: you're always sort of going forward if you know what
• 21:17
  Speaker 3: I mean.
• 21:19
  Speaker 4: Yeah, there's a million things. I mean. That's the part
• 21:21
  Speaker 4: that kind of it kind of sucks about the more
• 21:25
  Speaker 4: you learn about it, right because I mean when when
• 21:27
  Speaker 4: when I started, you know, you would it was a
• 21:30
  Speaker 4: little bit more free because you were just like, yeah, man,
• 21:32
  Speaker 4: you know, it's once you learn so much about it,
• 21:36
  Speaker 4: then there's so many different things that you got to
• 21:38
  Speaker 4: be thinking about, and so it actually makes you know
• 21:41
  Speaker 4: once you actually get on the page, I'm good. But
• 21:43
  Speaker 4: the planning, the planning stage, you know, there's a lot
• 21:47
  Speaker 4: that you have to be thinking about, and it helps
• 21:50
  Speaker 4: to just do it a million times. You know, I'm
• 21:54
  Speaker 4: very grateful for the time that I was a development
• 21:56
  Speaker 4: executive because I basically you know develop, uh, I mean
• 22:01
  Speaker 4: dozens of scripts and we made a bunch of the
• 22:04
  Speaker 4: movie too, so I really got to see the whole
• 22:07
  Speaker 4: process many times. And so that that helps because you
• 22:10
  Speaker 4: sort of get almost like a muscle memory for it.
• 22:12
  Speaker 4: But yeah, you've got so much stuff you have to
• 22:14
  Speaker 4: think about. You got you know, theme and character and
• 22:17
  Speaker 4: dialogue and arc and structure and mood, and it's, uh, yeah,
• 22:23
  Speaker 4: there's a lot to kind of manage.
• 22:27
  Speaker 3: Yeah, you know, one thing I've learned, and you know,
• 22:30
  Speaker 3: like you said, you the more you learn, the more,
• 22:32
  Speaker 3: uh you know, the more the more you do, the
• 22:34
  Speaker 3: more you learn, the more you learn, you know, you
• 22:37
  Speaker 3: realize how complex this gets. And you know, I've read
• 22:39
  Speaker 3: every screenwriting book on the market. I literally you know,
• 22:42
  Speaker 3: you can't see it because it's the podcast, but I
• 22:44
  Speaker 3: have every screenwriting book out there, and I've read it
• 22:47
  Speaker 3: from cover to cover. H you know, I've done what
• 22:49
  Speaker 3: everybody else does. You start with screenplay by Sidfield and
• 22:52
  Speaker 3: you work up to save the Cat. Then you get
• 22:54
  Speaker 3: story by the Key, you know, any sort of and
• 22:57
  Speaker 3: then you sort of branch off from there if you
• 22:59
  Speaker 3: read the Three Works, because you know, everyone sort of
• 23:01
  Speaker 3: talks about it. But one thing I've learned over the
• 23:04
  Speaker 3: years is that everything comes back to character, you know
• 23:07
  Speaker 3: what I mean, like everything, you know, when we talk
• 23:10
  Speaker 3: about scenes, when we talk about favorite parts of a movie,
• 23:13
  Speaker 3: when we talk about this or that, it always stems
• 23:16
  Speaker 3: from a character.
• 23:18
  Speaker 4: I mean, it's very true. Yeah, I mean I would
• 23:20
  Speaker 4: always say when we would you know, when I was
• 23:22
  Speaker 4: a I'm executive and we try to put a movie together,
• 23:25
  Speaker 4: it was pretty in every ready we made that actually
• 23:27
  Speaker 4: ended up getting made, there was always a moment where
• 23:31
  Speaker 4: we would attack somebody that was meaningful, whether that was
• 23:34
  Speaker 4: an actor or director or whatever, and that person when
• 23:40
  Speaker 4: they would come in, it wasn't like they said, you
• 23:43
  Speaker 4: know why I'm doing this movie because I love the
• 23:46
  Speaker 4: you know the midpoint, Like no nobody ever said that.
• 23:48
  Speaker 4: It was always about whatever the emotion was of it
• 23:53
  Speaker 4: or whatever the character thing was that we were doing.
• 23:56
  Speaker 4: That was what they would key in on and say, man,
• 23:58
  Speaker 4: you know, I really meant something to me and I
• 24:01
  Speaker 4: got company out of that. So yeah, nobody, it's it's
• 24:04
  Speaker 4: all you know, the plot is informed by the character,
• 24:07
  Speaker 4: and then they have to they have to not only
• 24:09
  Speaker 4: coke this, but actually sort of be intrinsic to each other.
• 24:13
  Speaker 4: Like the the best movies are movies where the plot
• 24:17
  Speaker 4: has to happen because of the character. Like those two.
• 24:20
  Speaker 4: They can't exist out plot of each other.
• 24:23
  Speaker 3: Yeah, you know, it's very true. And I think the
• 24:26
  Speaker 3: mistake a lot of writers make and and I've made
• 24:28
  Speaker 3: this mistake, you know, more times than I can count, is,
• 24:31
  Speaker 3: you know, developing a plot and trying to plunk characters
• 24:35
  Speaker 3: insaid plot, if you know what I mean.
• 24:37
  Speaker 4: Yeah, And I think.
• 24:38
  Speaker 3: When when you yeah, when you try to reverse that,
• 24:39
  Speaker 3: when you try to reverse engineer or something like that,
• 24:42
  Speaker 3: I think that's where you sort of get stuck. Yeah,
• 24:47
  Speaker 3: so you know, when you know your new movie initiation, uh,
• 24:50
  Speaker 3: it's it's being you know, distributed by Gravitas Ventures. Congratulations,
• 24:54
  Speaker 3: by the way, that's freaking huge.
• 24:56
  Speaker 4: Yeah. No, we're we're we're very excited, you know, and
• 25:00
  Speaker 4: we're very proud of the film.
• 25:03
  Speaker 3: Yeah, I mean that that is, you know, absolutely phenomenal.
• 25:06
  Speaker 3: And I wanted to ask, you know, where, so where
• 25:08
  Speaker 3: did your idea come from for the film? You know,
• 25:10
  Speaker 3: did was this an idea that came to you or
• 25:13
  Speaker 3: was this just something that you know that that you've
• 25:15
  Speaker 3: been sort of working on for years?
• 25:18
  Speaker 4: So this this is actually something that you know, my
• 25:21
  Speaker 4: cousin Orn he had the initial idea. He had a script,
• 25:25
  Speaker 4: and he basically, you know, we being cousins, we both
• 25:28
  Speaker 4: live in LA I would always come hang with him,
• 25:31
  Speaker 4: and you know, he mentioned he was working on this
• 25:33
  Speaker 4: and at one point he you know, he I talked
• 25:35
  Speaker 4: about working on it together. And so basically I came
• 25:38
  Speaker 4: in and I co wrote it. I I you know,
• 25:41
  Speaker 4: we we ended up writing, revising that script and and
• 25:45
  Speaker 4: uh working on it together through to the end. And
• 25:48
  Speaker 4: and he directed the film and edited it and produced it.
• 25:51
  Speaker 4: And so I this was a situation where basically I
• 25:55
  Speaker 4: came in where there was already a product that existed,
• 25:58
  Speaker 4: and I just gave my sort of creative energy to it.
• 26:01
  Speaker 4: And I think that we both kind of compliment to
• 26:04
  Speaker 4: each other in that process, and you know that was
• 26:08
  Speaker 4: that was the process played out on this one.
• 26:11
  Speaker 3: So for those for those listening who aren't familiar with
• 26:13
  Speaker 3: the film, could you give us a brief exclamation about
• 26:16
  Speaker 3: the film then?
• 26:17
  Speaker 4: Yeah. So it's basically a group of strangers are kidnapped
• 26:22
  Speaker 4: and they're taken to this kind of my serious house
• 26:27
  Speaker 4: and they basically come to realize that they've been kidnapped
• 26:30
  Speaker 4: to take place in an initiation ritual for a cult.
• 26:34
  Speaker 4: And to be initiated into this cult, you have to
• 26:36
  Speaker 4: fight somebody to the death. And so these people that
• 26:38
  Speaker 4: are complete strangers to each other, they're just random people
• 26:42
  Speaker 4: and they're thrown into this insane situation and they have
• 26:45
  Speaker 4: to try to figure out a way to survive. And
• 26:47
  Speaker 4: that's what the movie is about.
• 26:50
  Speaker 3: Very cool, and it's actually cool that it's coming out
• 26:52
  Speaker 3: right around this time, you know, this full Halloween time,
• 26:55
  Speaker 3: you know what I mean. It sounds like the movie
• 26:57
  Speaker 3: that's wrapped out Alleyway.
• 26:59
  Speaker 4: Yeah, I mean, you know, it's well, what's what's been
• 27:02
  Speaker 4: cool about it is that it sort of it towes
• 27:04
  Speaker 4: the line between action and horror. So, you know, we've
• 27:07
  Speaker 4: been we've been really happy to see that a lot
• 27:10
  Speaker 4: of horror websites have reviewed the film and given us
• 27:13
  Speaker 4: nice notices because I think that it it's something that's
• 27:16
  Speaker 4: a pun movie for people that like horror movies, but
• 27:18
  Speaker 4: it's also a fun movie for you know, an action
• 27:20
  Speaker 4: fan thriller type of thing.
• 27:23
  Speaker 3: Yeah, that is very cool. And you know because I mean,
• 27:28
  Speaker 3: whenever you can see the horror you know, horror sites,
• 27:30
  Speaker 3: whenever they can get excited about something, you know, it's
• 27:33
  Speaker 3: always awesome because like we were talking about, with all
• 27:35
  Speaker 3: the films you know that we've seen and you know,
• 27:38
  Speaker 3: being able to sort of you know, spot the story.
• 27:41
  Speaker 3: You know, they've seen ton of horror films, so you know,
• 27:43
  Speaker 3: when you can get them on board of something, you
• 27:45
  Speaker 3: know what I mean, it's like, okay, great, now you
• 27:47
  Speaker 3: got something you know it could have if they like it.
• 27:49
  Speaker 3: I mean, what what's the general public going to think?
• 27:51
  Speaker 3: You know what I mean?
• 27:52
  Speaker 4: Right? Yeah, nol, And we've been I mean we've you know,
• 27:55
  Speaker 4: we have shown the film to a lot of people
• 27:57
  Speaker 4: at this point, and you know enough people where it's
• 28:01
  Speaker 4: it's a funny thing your relationship with your own work, right,
• 28:03
  Speaker 4: I mean, anytime you show us something to somebody that
• 28:06
  Speaker 4: knows you. You're kind of like, well, you know, they
• 28:08
  Speaker 4: might they might just tell me to be nice. So
• 28:11
  Speaker 4: they thought, like, but we we've shown it to so
• 28:13
  Speaker 4: many people, and then obviously I think we have you know,
• 28:17
  Speaker 4: on IMDb there's some some reviews linked and uh and
• 28:20
  Speaker 4: you know, Bloody discussed and gave us my review. And
• 28:23
  Speaker 4: we know these people that have no reason to tell
• 28:26
  Speaker 4: out one way or the other. Right, So when when
• 28:28
  Speaker 4: somebody that has no relationship to you tells you they
• 28:31
  Speaker 4: got something out of your work, then that that's uh,
• 28:34
  Speaker 4: that's big because then you figure, Okay, well maybe you know,
• 28:37
  Speaker 4: maybe it does work, you know, And and this is
• 28:39
  Speaker 4: a sort of more objective for that.
• 28:43
  Speaker 3: Yeah, exactly. And you know, I see that on the
• 28:47
  Speaker 3: IMDb page. It's up on Amazon Video right now. Is
• 28:52
  Speaker 3: there is there any other places that that people could
• 28:54
  Speaker 3: find the movie.
• 28:55
  Speaker 4: Yeah, it's all over. It's on It's on iTunes, on Amazon,
• 28:59
  Speaker 4: It's on PlayStation, it's on it's on a lot of
• 29:02
  Speaker 4: cable on demand providers. I was in I was home
• 29:05
  Speaker 4: in Baltimore, and I I saw it on my parents,
• 29:07
  Speaker 4: you know, cable at their house. It's on Blue Doo,
• 29:12
  Speaker 4: It's it's on the majority of video on demand providers.
• 29:18
  Speaker 3: And I will link to that everyone in the show notes.
• 29:21
  Speaker 3: I will make sure to links all those places that
• 29:23
  Speaker 3: you can check out the initiation. Uh, you know, I
• 29:27
  Speaker 3: wanted to ask, you know, also about the initiation. You know, Dan,
• 29:30
  Speaker 3: what's what's one thing you wanted you able to take
• 29:32
  Speaker 3: away from the film? I mean, did you I mean,
• 29:33
  Speaker 3: you know, did you want to have people leave going
• 29:36
  Speaker 3: you know, damn that was intense? Or was there any
• 29:38
  Speaker 3: other sort of theme that you wanted people to walk
• 29:41
  Speaker 3: away from that walk away from?
• 29:43
  Speaker 4: A friend of mine just watched it, and that was
• 29:45
  Speaker 4: pretty much what he emailed me, he said, and that
• 29:47
  Speaker 4: was intent the the you know what was cool about
• 29:52
  Speaker 4: it for me was that I think we succeeded. It's
• 29:55
  Speaker 4: something that I'm always trying to do, which is aked
• 29:57
  Speaker 4: with the genre movie and basically invest it with a
• 30:00
  Speaker 4: real meaning.
• 30:03
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• 30:09
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• 30:12
  Speaker 4: Meaning that it's not just kind of an empty genre
• 30:15
  Speaker 4: exercise that's actually it has a message and a point
• 30:19
  Speaker 4: to it that is emotional, that is you know, I mean,
• 30:22
  Speaker 4: this will be basically about the idea that no matter
• 30:26
  Speaker 4: what situation, you're kind of put into if you have
• 30:29
  Speaker 4: this sort of inner strength to defeat it, then no
• 30:32
  Speaker 4: one there's nothing anyone can do to you. And you know,
• 30:35
  Speaker 4: we sort of explore that in a lot of different
• 30:38
  Speaker 4: ways than the film, but it was something that, you know,
• 30:40
  Speaker 4: meant something to me, and I think that it gives
• 30:43
  Speaker 4: the film a weight that you know, if we sort
• 30:46
  Speaker 4: of just relied on all the genre stuff, it wouldn't
• 30:48
  Speaker 4: have that same weight to it. So that that was
• 30:51
  Speaker 4: the thing to me that I was most satisfied with.
• 30:54
  Speaker 3: You know, just as a side note, you know, a
• 30:56
  Speaker 3: screenwriting professor once told me a great piece of scream
• 30:59
  Speaker 3: writing advice, and that was when you're sitting down to
• 31:03
  Speaker 3: you know, brainstorm a concept or whatever for for your movie.
• 31:06
  Speaker 3: He said, this is a question you asked yourself, what
• 31:10
  Speaker 3: do you want audiences to leave? What do you want
• 31:14
  Speaker 3: audiences when they leave to take away from this movie?
• 31:16
  Speaker 3: Do you want them to say, oh my god, that
• 31:17
  Speaker 3: was hilarious? We know, And he's like that helps guide
• 31:20
  Speaker 3: you throughout the process when you're making the movie.
• 31:24
  Speaker 4: Yeah, for sure. I mean, you know you got to
• 31:27
  Speaker 4: you gotta do it for a reason. There's just too much.
• 31:29
  Speaker 4: There's too much stuff out there, all this it tasts
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  Speaker 4: too long, it's too much of a pain in the
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  Speaker 4: ass if you're not doing it out of some strong
• 31:37
  Speaker 4: impulse of And it doesn't necessarily always have to be heavy,
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  Speaker 4: you know. I mean, we're like right now we my
• 31:43
  Speaker 4: cousin and I are talking about doing another film together,
• 31:45
  Speaker 4: and we're we're talking about doing one. It's a little
• 31:47
  Speaker 4: bit more sort of light at least in the tone.
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  Speaker 4: And you know that that can be fine too, But
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  Speaker 4: it's just whatever that impulse is that you have that
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  Speaker 4: makes it interesting and exciting for you. You know, you
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  Speaker 4: got to really feel strongly about that and kind of
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  Speaker 4: and and key on that throughout the whole thing, you know,
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  Speaker 4: because that's what you want the person who watches it
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  Speaker 4: to have that thing feeling.
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  Speaker 3: Yeah, And that's exactly right. And uh, you know, I
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  Speaker 3: I think, you know, when we can finally convey that,
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  Speaker 3: you know what I mean, Like I think, uh, you're like,
• 32:19
  Speaker 3: for instance, Quentin Tarantino, whenever he writes I'm thinking, that's
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  Speaker 3: the same thing that people pull away from, is the
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  Speaker 3: same mood he's in, you know what I mean, Particularly like,
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  Speaker 3: heyful late, I have I have a you know, that's
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  Speaker 3: sort of like a it was the same, but it
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  Speaker 3: was different for him. And I sort of think that,
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  Speaker 3: you know, you could sort of pull away what he's
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  Speaker 3: what you know, what he puts into the script, if
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  Speaker 3: you know what I mean. And and you know, I
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  Speaker 3: wanted to ask, you know, Dan, as we know we
• 32:43
  Speaker 3: were talking about your your your future projects. I wanted
• 32:46
  Speaker 3: just to ask, you know, what does a typical writing
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  Speaker 3: day for you look like?
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  Speaker 4: Man if I can just get some time, it's really
• 32:56
  Speaker 4: time is the most important thing. I mean, I I'm
• 32:59
  Speaker 4: not for me. It's not like I'll write anywhere. I'll
• 33:03
  Speaker 4: write it at any time. I don't need to like,
• 33:06
  Speaker 4: you know, consult the muse or anything like. I can
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  Speaker 4: just down it and bank some stuff out. But I
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  Speaker 4: think that I have a tough time. I'm sort of
• 33:14
  Speaker 4: an impatient person, which I think is probably a pretty
• 33:17
  Speaker 4: important part of any fixed out that I have had
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  Speaker 4: or will have is down you know. I'm just I'm
• 33:23
  Speaker 4: not patient to like just let things come as they may.
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  Speaker 4: Like I want to get stuff done, and you know,
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  Speaker 4: kind of that's always my ethos. So when I the
• 33:34
  Speaker 4: planning part of it, that's the part that takes forever,
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  Speaker 4: like I'll do research, you know, on initiation. I did
• 33:41
  Speaker 4: research into military stuff on other projects I've written, you know,
• 33:45
  Speaker 4: I'll read like three books about it. But once it's
• 33:47
  Speaker 4: time to write and I actually have figured out the story,
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  Speaker 4: I'm so I have such a burning desire to just
• 33:52
  Speaker 4: get it out of me and get it onto the page.
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  Speaker 4: It's almost to the point where like I feel like
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  Speaker 4: I'm going to lose it if I don't that it
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  Speaker 4: comes very fast, you know, and I almost, I almost
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  Speaker 4: will consciously try to set aside, you know, just a
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  Speaker 4: couple of days or whatever where I know it's going
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  Speaker 4: to just be kind of flowing out of me and
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  Speaker 4: uh and just be able to kind of bang pages out,
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  Speaker 4: because you know, that's I don't. I don't, Yeah, I mean,
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  Speaker 4: it's just a difference in process. Right for me, The
• 34:18
  Speaker 4: real cracking of the story comes in the planning. The
• 34:20
  Speaker 4: actual writing is just putting the planning on a piece
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  Speaker 4: of paper. So the writing itself is the fun part.
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  Speaker 4: The hard part of the is coming up with the
• 34:30
  Speaker 4: actual story.
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  Speaker 3: Yes, I could not agree more. That's something that I
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  Speaker 3: found too, is that, you know, uh, because once I
• 34:37
  Speaker 3: have an outline or a treatment or anything, you know,
• 34:40
  Speaker 3: what I mean, like any even if it's a piece
• 34:41
  Speaker 3: of paper with some ideas, you know, scribble down on
• 34:44
  Speaker 3: it that looks like the journal from seven you know,
• 34:47
  Speaker 3: just something, I know where I'm going, you know what
• 34:49
  Speaker 3: I mean? And you know the biggest part that was
• 34:53
  Speaker 3: always you know where the plot is going. But then
• 34:56
  Speaker 3: I've realized always comes back to where the characters start,
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  Speaker 3: you know what I mean. So you know when the
• 35:00
  Speaker 3: when the when the script starts is where the movie starts.
• 35:03
  Speaker 3: So then where do we find our characters when the
• 35:05
  Speaker 3: script starts?
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  Speaker 4: You know, you know what I mean?
• 35:07
  Speaker 3: Or do they have something? Do they not have something?
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  Speaker 3: You know, what's their desire?
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  Speaker 4: Uh?
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  Speaker 3: You know, what's what's their intention? With's their obstacle?
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  Speaker 2: Yeah?
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  Speaker 4: Yeah, for sure.
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  Speaker 3: So Dan, I mean look going down on average, how often,
• 35:22
  Speaker 3: I mean, how many hours a day do you write?
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  Speaker 3: I mean, is it like sometimes like a thirty minutes,
• 35:25
  Speaker 3: then sometimes maybe it's like two hours.
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  Speaker 4: I think that on a day when I actually can
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  Speaker 4: really you know why, I have nothing going, I can
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  Speaker 4: really just hit and focus on writing, I'll usually I
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  Speaker 4: think after like three or four hours, you got to
• 35:40
  Speaker 4: stop and I've done it. I've I've had times were
• 35:44
  Speaker 4: off Fitt, and I'll write for like, you know, I'll
• 35:46
  Speaker 4: write the whole day. But I think, as a general rule,
• 35:50
  Speaker 4: unless it's something where I've gone insane or I have
• 35:52
  Speaker 4: to you know, I think that three or four hours
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  Speaker 4: of a focus writing, after that it t has to
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  Speaker 4: become diminishing return just your brain kind of. It takes
• 36:02
  Speaker 4: a certain sort of brain muscle, I think to come
• 36:05
  Speaker 4: up with this stuff, and after a while you start
• 36:08
  Speaker 4: like you don't have that theme because you know, I mean,
• 36:11
  Speaker 4: it's sort of what we were talking about before, Like
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  Speaker 4: each scene that you write, you really got to sit
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  Speaker 4: and think about it and think about like, Okay, you know,
• 36:18
  Speaker 4: here's the regular version of this scene. Why is this
• 36:21
  Speaker 4: scene going to be somewhat cooler than the regular version?
• 36:24
  Speaker 4: Like how can I make it different? How can I
• 36:27
  Speaker 4: make a different not just in what happens, but in
• 36:30
  Speaker 4: how the characters interact with each other, with the visual
• 36:33
  Speaker 4: thing that I'm doing in this scene, with the reversal
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  Speaker 4: in this scene. So it's so much like mental effort
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  Speaker 4: to go into it that I think after three or
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  Speaker 4: four hours I got to stop. So for me, a
• 36:42
  Speaker 4: good three or four hours of writing and then maybe
• 36:44
  Speaker 4: some research. You know, in the afternoon or a lot
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  Speaker 4: of prep for the next day, you know, like okay
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  Speaker 4: and tomorrow. I know, I got to write these thenes
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  Speaker 4: just kind of what I'm thinking, and I at least
• 36:53
  Speaker 4: have a little bit of a roadmap of the actual
• 36:56
  Speaker 4: precise execution, and then you can kind of flow into
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  Speaker 4: the next day.
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  Speaker 3: Yeah, that's kind of like which I think Stephen King
• 37:04
  Speaker 3: maybe said that. He said basically, he he ends on
• 37:06
  Speaker 3: a high note that way, and the next thing he
• 37:08
  Speaker 3: comes in, he knows exactly where he's gonna go, and
• 37:11
  Speaker 3: he keeps that flow going on every day.
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  Speaker 4: Yeah. I tend to do that as well.
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  Speaker 3: Great mindset go alike. Uh, you know, and that and
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  Speaker 3: that's great advice by the way. So you know, Dan,
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  Speaker 3: in closing, you know, is there maybe anything that we
• 37:26
  Speaker 3: can talk about that you wanted to or any sort
• 37:29
  Speaker 3: of parting thoughts you want to want to add to
• 37:31
  Speaker 3: this conversation.
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  Speaker 4: No, I mean, you know, I think the thing that's
• 37:35
  Speaker 4: cool to me about this project specifically, and I think
• 37:38
  Speaker 4: is relevant to what we're talking about and probably to
• 37:41
  Speaker 4: a lot of people listen to your podcast to you know,
• 37:43
  Speaker 4: this is something that any of us could do. You
• 37:45
  Speaker 4: could you you could have made this movie. You know,
• 37:48
  Speaker 4: anybody listening to this could have made this movie. It's
• 37:50
  Speaker 4: a movie that we made for a low budget. But
• 37:53
  Speaker 4: you know, one of the reasons that it's been so
• 37:55
  Speaker 4: cool getting some nice reviews from some herts cycles that
• 37:58
  Speaker 4: they basically said, yeah, it's a low budget movie, but
• 38:02
  Speaker 4: the sort of ingenuity and the effort that went into
• 38:04
  Speaker 4: it and that that made it it didn't. It doesn't
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  Speaker 4: feel a little budge it, you know, like it's not
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  Speaker 4: It's the point being that there's nothing stopping any of us.
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  Speaker 4: I'm just going to make in a movie, and not
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  Speaker 4: just a movie that we sort of is enabled gaming
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  Speaker 4: for our own edification, but a movie that anybody can
• 38:22
  Speaker 4: sit down and watch and enjoy at a real movie,
• 38:25
  Speaker 4: you know, even if you have to do it for
• 38:26
  Speaker 4: a low budget. You know, and I think that this
• 38:30
  Speaker 4: is sort of to me a good case study of
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  Speaker 4: that that we actually went made this movie, got it
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  Speaker 4: distributed by a very legitimate distributor. It's out everywhere, you know,
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  Speaker 4: and you know, we we've got a lot of nice
• 38:42
  Speaker 4: responses to the movie. So we do think that the
• 38:44
  Speaker 4: movie works, and you know, we we just look forward
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  Speaker 4: to hopefully having people discovered, you know, and and maybe
• 38:50
  Speaker 4: we can go make another one.
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  Speaker 3: You know, and that's that's phenomenal and uh, you know, honestly, Dan,
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  Speaker 3: I'm gonna make sure check out the The initiat I
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  Speaker 3: will everyone, I will link that in the show notes. Dan,
• 39:03
  Speaker 3: where can we find you out online?
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  Speaker 4: I mean, you know, just stuck with the movie. I'm
• 39:08
  Speaker 4: not I'm like the worst person ever for all this.
• 39:10
  Speaker 4: I don't have a Twitter or I'm not a social
• 39:15
  Speaker 4: media dude. But The Initiation movie we have a website
• 39:18
  Speaker 4: with Facebook page, and obviously it's on iTunes, it's on Amazon,
• 39:22
  Speaker 4: it's all these other platforms.
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  Speaker 3: Dan, I want to say thank you very much.
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  Speaker 4: For coming on my pleasure, good conversation, Oh my pleasure, sir,
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  Speaker 4: Take care, take care anyway, I want.
• 39:36
  Speaker 2: To thank Dave so much for doing such a great
• 39:37
  Speaker 2: job on this episode. If you want to get links
• 39:39
  Speaker 2: to anything we spoke about in this episode, head over
• 39:41
  Speaker 2: to the show notes at Bulletproof Screenwriting dot tv for it. Slash,
• 39:46
  Speaker 2: thank you so much for listening to guys. As always,
• 39:48
  Speaker 2: keep on writing no matter what. I'll talk to you soon.
• 39:52
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