Latest / Show, don't Tell Writing with Suzy Vadori / 111. Writing with Humor- Strong Characters and Jokes that Land (Part 1)
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- 0:05Welcome to the Show, Don't Tell writing podcast with me, Suzy Vadori, where I peel back the layers of how to wow your readers with your fiction, your nonfiction.
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- 0:49I can't wait to see how this information is going to transform your writing Fasten your seatbelts, listeners, because today we have Ian Page coming on the podcast to talk about writing with humor.
- 1:04I first met Ian several years ago when I developmentally edited his debut novel, which has just come out, The Naked Ambition.
- 1:13It was really fun to work with Ian because he has so many opinions and so much to say, and to work on the tone of his humor, to work on the sarcasm, to work on the political bent that he wanted to convey.
- 1:27We're gonna talk about all of that today on the podcast, so listen up.
- 1:31If you've ever considered writing with humor, wondering how to do it, wondering if you're doing it well, wondering why you'd wanna do it, we're gonna answer all of that today.
- 1:41Ian Page draws on decades of professional geophysics in the oil patch for his debut novel, The Naked Ambition.
- 1:47Ian gained his BSc in geophysics from University of Alberta, never to set foot in the halls of academia again.
- 1:54At various times, he's been a wretched musician, an unreliable soldier, and a failed treasure hunter.
- 2:02Ian is a native of Halifax, Nova Scotia, and currently resides in the Okanagan Valley of British Columbia with his wife, where he spends ridiculous amounts of time playing hockey, golfing, walking, and goofing off, much to the annoyance of his publisher.
- 2:16As you can tell from the bio that he submitted, Ian is absolutely hilarious, and I can't wait for you to hear this episode Welcome to the podcast, Ian.
- 2:27So awesome to talk to you now that your book is out.
- 2:30Well, thank you very much.
- 2:31Appreciate being here.
- 2:33So book one is what we're gonna be talking about, although you can share snippets from the next couple of books that you're writing as well.
- 2:40The Naked Ambition, a field manual novel by Ian Page.
- 2:43What's field manual novel, by the way?
- 2:46That, that is, um, an, probably an, uh, an older term for some people.
- 2:51Field manual, there's a quasi-military aspect to that, that term.
- 2:57So when I wrote The Naked Ambition, that was intended as a standalone, and then somewhere along the line I got the idea for a couple sequels, and so I needed something to, uh, if you forgive the, the expression, a brand for the trilogy.
- 3:13And that's what I came up with.
- 3:15Yeah.
- 3:16Yeah, I love it, and I think, I mean, having read them, I think it's really appropriate.
- 3:20I think it's also tongue in cheek.
- 3:22We're here to talk about the humor in the books today.
- 3:25The tagline that is on the back of the book is, "Power, prestige and complete nonsense. Welcome to corporate warfare in the oil patch." What was it that you set… I mean, it's so intriguing.
- 3:36I just love your sense of humor.
- 3:38What exactly did you set out to write when you first started?
- 3:42Well, the, this essential problem was I had the character before I had a plot, and I had a bunch of misfires with that character.
- 3:50So the main character started as Chester Field.
- 3:53He's just all too comfortable, as the name implies.
- 3:56And I wanted, wanted to- Yeah, just, just, just one second, 'cause it, it doesn't come across necessarily on the podcast, but I wanna pause for a minute and point it out.
- 4:04His name is Chester Field.
- 4:06Like- Yes … as in a sofa.
- 4:08Yeah.
- 4:08Right?
- 4:08Like, everything in this book is amazingly well thought out.
- 4:12So keep going.
- 4:13I just wanted to not miss that point.
- 4:15Okay.
- 4:15Fair enough.
- 4:16I mean, it- He's too comfortable So yeah, he's all too comfortable and, and I wanna put him in situations where he's forced to unravel a bit, and the first few tries I had with the character didn't seem to really go anywhere.
- 4:30The stakes weren't high enough or, or it was just a little too languid.
- 4:35And then probably about seven years into the character's life, one of my colleagues at work said, "Well, you're in the oil patch. Why don't you write an oil patch story?" And- Mm-hmm … okay.
- 4:47Well, that, now we're starting to, uh, think a little more clearly and pointedly.
- 4:51And then the plot came along where I thought, all right, it, what would make a comfortable executive engineer uncomfortable?
- 4:59Threaten his job, bring in a romantic interest that he really has no interest in, but all of a sudden really wants to be interested in, and then put a couple other, uh, layers on there and, and that's where the family dynamics came up.
- 5:12So that, primarily it's, you know, write what you know about.
- 5:16Sure, that, that made a lot of sense, and that's where things really started cooking.
- 5:22Yeah, and I think it, it, you're right.
- 5:24I mean, it's really hard, 'cause sometimes writers come to me, and this was one of those cases, where the character you literally wanna show that he's comfortable and complacent And that's a tough place for a main character to be, and so we had to work on, well, what does he want, and all those things that people say, "Oh, Suzy, you're a broken record.
- 5:41You keep asking the same questions." But it's tough because you- you've got this character in mind, but for a book to work and for the whole arc to work, he has to kind of have some agency, right, and be working on things that, which he does in this book now, but that was tough because you were bringing him kind of from being complacent to being more active.
- 5:59Yeah.
- 6:00That's probably the, um, if I'm being honest, the weakest part of Chester is, as a starting point, things are all too easy for him.
- 6:09And so thematically what I was looking for was the third certainty in life.
- 6:15So, you know, we, we joke about death and taxes are the two certainties.
- 6:18The third uncertainty is, or third certainty, sorry, is you don't get through life unscathed.
- 6:24You're gonna get pushed about, you're gonna get, uh, nicked, and so on.
- 6:29So the first book is really an exploration of that alongside of the plot action.
- 6:35So the plot action, we'll call that the A story.
- 6:37There's a crisis at work, and he's gotta deal with it, and he's got competition, so he's gotta deal with rivals.
- 6:44He's got a love interest that, it baffles him.
- 6:47Uh, he's gotta deal with that.
- 6:49He's got family dynamics who all of a sudden pop up and interfere in his life, which he absolutely loathes.
- 6:55He hates it.
- 6:57And so all these things were intended to kind of come crashing down, uh, on him, and does he get through it?
- 7:04Yeah.
- 7:05Okay, so you set out to write this story about Chesterfield'cause he's just hilarious, right?
- 7:10And also complacent.
- 7:12And how did that evolve till you got, then the plot came together when you kind of wrapped into the oil field, then you tried to make the stakes higher, and you, you did a good job, not tried to.
- 7:22You did it.
- 7:23And how did that all evolve?
- 7:25What changed about your original idea about what you set out to write?
- 7:30Or did it stay the same?
- 7:31Part of it is, I'd say part of it is the number of characters.
- 7:34It's an ensemble cast.
- 7:36And with a certain amount of thought about, you know, the different parts of, of my own experiences.
- 7:42One, one of the advantages perhaps I have is I'm old, so I've got, I've got all this experience, I've got all this knowledge, which is supposed to equal wisdom.
- 7:52And so that's a natural advantage for someone who sets out to, to write something like this.
- 7:59And then bringing in all these different characters, uh, that he deals with.
- 8:03Most of them he deals with, uh, just fine.
- 8:05They're, they're, they're his pals or his, you know, his dinner club friends.
- 8:09So I was taking a lot of slice of life things and surrounding him with that.
- 8:14But then he's got the dynamics, uh, at, of what are his weaknesses.
- 8:19He hates arrogance, and he's baffled by it.
- 8:22He can't deal with it.
- 8:23And so it's a natural conflict for him.
- 8:27So that was one thing.
- 8:28The fa- family dynamics, Mother and Motherish, kind of the yin and yang of, of his, uh, each family.
- 8:34Yeah, so explain that for a moment.
- 8:35Just like we stopped and made a point about Chesterfield.
- 8:38Mother and Motherish, right?
- 8:41Like, explain that.
- 8:43So Mother is straightforward enough.
- 8:45That's his, uh, local mother.
- 8:47He's got kind of a teeter-totter of chumminess and re- and restraint, uh, in dealing with her.
- 8:52She's, uh, a powerful woman in her own way and q- very demanding on his time, and he's not very good at dealing with that.
- 9:00And her health is in, in, is declining and, and he's trying to manage that while he's managing all these other things that, all these other crises that have just bloomed like dandelions.
- 9:11So Motherish is a stepmother, and what I call his biologic father is Rodney, who's, he's alluded to in this first book, but, uh, he pops up in the next two in, in a more substantial way.
- 9:25That's his third marriage, and of course it falls apart very quickly and, uh, but Motherish stays in Chester's orbit, or more properly, the other way around.
- 9:35And of course he's forced to kind of do her bidding from time to time because she wants to be a power wheel in the local town.
- 9:41And that's, so these kinds of dynamics, these kinds of conflicts are complicating for him, and these are part of the unraveling, the scathing issues that, uh, you know, where he's singed, he's tattooed, and, and he's basically pasted about Yeah.
- 9:57Your characters are part of, we're gonna get to the humor part in a second, but your characters alone, and their names, and everything, and all their personalities is part of the fun for you, I think.
- 10:07You know, in just working with you, it was part of what you m- most were interested in developing, and, um, you had lots and lots of characters to bring to the table.
- 10:19Who was your favorite?
- 10:21Um- Who was the most fun to write?
- 10:24The most fun to write, there's probably a few.
- 10:27I think anytime I get Jester and, and Motherish together, sparks fly.
- 10:31There's a lot of, uh, witticisms and snarking back and forth.
- 10:35And, and so I think dialogue is probably one of my, uh, greater strengths, and the characters allow for a lot of fun back and forth.
- 10:43So I'd say it, sometimes it's more the dynamics between two characters rather than a favorite character.
- 10:48If there's one that, that intrigues me more than the others over the three books, it might be the sergeant major.
- 10:55And I'll stop here just to say that I've met all these characters.
- 10:59Again, one of the advantages of, of age is that y- you run across a lot of people on your journey, and I remember them all, fortunately and unfortunately.
- 11:07And I, I met the sergeant major, the character, for all of about 15 minutes when I was in the Army.
- 11:14And I, I got in a little bit of trouble.
- 11:17I was brought up on charges.
- 11:18I had rust on my rifle, and so they were gonna take me to a kangaroo court.
- 11:24And so I, I arrived in the room.
- 11:26There's all these guys sitting around.
- 11:28One guy, he had forgotten to get his hair cut that one week, and so he, he was charged, and he had to pay a fine of $105 for that.
- 11:35So- To cover a haircut.
- 11:37That's why you didn't save anything by not getting a haircut.
- 11:39You had, you had to have a fresh haircut every week, and this was in basic training.
- 11:43So when I was, uh, in this room, a sergeant major pops out, and he was a ramrod straight, no-nonsense kind of character, very gruff and very clipped in his manner, just like the fellow in the book.
- 11:55And he marched me into the, see the colonel, and there's my captain finking on me, and it took, five minutes later I'm out the door, uh, with a fine of $89 for having rust on my rifle.
- 12:07Wow.
- 12:07Yeah, right way, you know, kind of.
- 12:09And the funny thing is we could put all these people, I do the same thing, I put people into my books.
- 12:14By the time they evolve, I mean, he's in three books now.
- 12:17He's changed and grown and all the things.
- 12:20They don't recognize themselves.
- 12:22I'm sure if that man, I don't know if you know his name, but- Nope … even if he read your book, he would have no idea Maybe you just gave enough detail on this, uh, podcast, but I'm sure other people have gotten fines for having Ross on their bike with them.
- 12:34Yeah, these, these are, these characters are, are, they start as an embryo, and there, there's, that's where the tinge, uh, of the, the tint of reality is, is formed.
- 12:43After that, once you get them into the situations in, in, in your writing, they do evolve, or you'd like to think that they do evolve.
- 12:51They have their own arcs, they have their own attitudes, and, and they, they, they start to spark some sort of sense of originality.
- 12:58So I could, I could say that Mother and Motherish are really one person From reality, and I simply, uh, split them.
- 13:08You know, one wanted to always play with, uh, the big boys and the, the power games, and the other was just someone who complained and someone who, who was not interested in participating in life in the same way that, that, uh, the other one did.
- 13:22So- Hmm … we, we meet lots of people in, in our life who have kind of a, almost a schizophrenic, uh, aspect to them.
- 13:30They have one side that really is driving hard f- towards things, and then they have an- another side where it's just, you know, just leave me alone.
- 13:37Yeah.
- 13:37No, I can get that.
- 13:38And for all the writers out there listening to the podcast today, I'm sure that you're putting people in there into your writing.
- 13:44It, it happens because we can write through our own lens in some respects, and that's what gives it authenticity.
- 13:50That's what gives it your perspective, everything.
- 13:52Okay, so when you set out to write this, what was the feeling that you wanted to invoke in readers?
- 13:58I actually don't know the answer to this.
- 13:59I was excited to ask you the question.
- 14:02Um- What were you hoping for?
- 14:03That, that my, my original call it point of origin thought was I wanna write a, a great beach novel.
- 14:10Uh, something that people can, you know, uh, sit in the hammock with w- whatever their favorite drink is and, and just flip pages on a vacation.
- 14:17So my aspirations were pretty limited.
- 14:22You know, I wasn't trying to write the great Canadian novel or great, uh, world f- uh, classic.
- 14:28Uh, you know, I don't look like Dumas.
- 14:31All right.
- 14:31I- But was humor always at the forefront of what you wanted?
- 14:34I, I think so, and, and, and really the, the origin for that is when I was, uh, playing on a beer league hockey team in Calgary, we got into a, um, a situation where there, there was all kinds of strange incidents on the ice during the season and, and I s- I said to my captain,"You know, we should write about this.
- 14:53Uh, let's just put, put together a little comic book and some player profiles and, and just amuse ourselves." And so we would collect all the stories at the end of each season, and we'd put it out and we'd call it the, uh, the Media Guide and Coloring Book.
- 15:05And so I would write all the stories, and I would write all the player profiles, and this went on for 11 seasons.
- 15:12So it became kind of the training grounds for the satirical voice, the edgy humor, and of course being, you know, the uber, uh, masculine rebellious types that we were on, in hockey.
- 15:24I mean, you can imagine the crassness in, in, in all of that.
- 15:28But the funniest thing to me about doing all of that was at the end of the year, we'd have a, a wind-up golf tournament.
- 15:36All the guys would show up, and they got used to the idea that, oh, the media guy's here.
- 15:42And they couldn't wait.
- 15:44And then we'd hand them out, and they'd start flipping the pages, and they're laughing.
- 15:48They're laughing out loud.
- 15:49The, the jokes are- Are they trying to find themselves?
- 15:51Their jokes are landing, and then they get to their own player profile and the laughing stopped And I just- Yeah and, and my captain, I, we, we just look at one another, "What is going on here?" And we had one fellow who was probably the closest thing to a non-evil Hugh Rectum, who was one of the characters in The Naked Ambition, a rather arrogant prick.
- 16:13I'm gonna pause again.
- 16:15Hugh Rectum.
- 16:17Yep.
- 16:17Hugh Rectum, right?
- 16:19Yeah.
- 16:19Yeah.
- 16:19These characters are amazing.
- 16:21Sorry.
- 16:21They, they- I just wanna give you credit… and, and the idea behind a lot of give you a quick shorthand, because there were just so many characters.
- 16:30So you immediately are reminded, until you reach a point where, "Oh, yeah, I know who that is," rather than trying to come up with some Hollywood great hero name or whatever, a great female name or something.
- 16:41Anyway, the, the, the most narcissistic character we had on our hockey team, he was the only one who laughed at himself, and I found that fascinating.
- 16:50And, and- Ah… he's a, he's an interesting guy.
- 16:54He's become a recluse now, but he was a bright executive, had a gambling problem.
- 16:59He was just, he was just a really interesting guy, uh, with, with all these, these bizarre frailties, but he always had the best suits.
- 17:07He always smelled the best, and he always looked the best.
- 17:09He was the only guy who brought a hair dryer to the dressing room.
- 17:12Oh my goodness.
- 17:14So- That's unheard of.
- 17:16That's unheard of … so these, these are the, these are the characters and, and, and these are the, the situations, and that, that 11 years probably provided more training ground than any creative writing classes I could take, and I did take- Yeah, I mean, that honed your humor.
- 17:30You got real-time reactions from the people that you were writing about- Yes … or who knew.
- 17:35I mean, that's like amazing feedback.
- 17:36And, and, and, and that's an advantage.
- 17:37You, you, we talk about or we read about actors and, and what, do you prefer film, TV, or stage?
- 17:45And w- the general answer usually is, "I like the stage." Why?
- 17:50Yeah.
- 17:51Because they get the immediate response.
- 17:53They know if they're hitting it, right?
- 17:55Yeah.
- 17:56In film, you don't know.
- 17:57And you can adjust, and you can adjust, and you can pause, and that's the thing.
- 18:00I mean, writing humor is tricky, and I wanted to talk about that specifically on this podcast because you're so good at it, but at the same time, you know, even when we're working through things, it's important to get that feedback because on the page, the writing, sarcasm in particular, is very difficult to convey- Yes in writing without kind of calling out, "He said sarcastically," or something, right?
- 18:24Like, you almost have to say it because you don't have the advantages that we have in life, which are timing and intonation and pause for effect and, um, and sort of that emphasis, right?
- 18:37Now, and you have the- Like, we don't have any of those tools that's right, and n- and the obvious example is, is, um, when you get an email answer to something you've said, uh, and it doesn't even have to be sarcasm, and, and, and you're, you're looking at their response.
- 18:52They must have misunderstood me.
- 18:53That's not what I wrote.
- 18:55Yeah.
- 18:56Uh- And then you reread your email, and you're like, "Ooh, I could see where they-" Well, yeah.
- 18:59Yeah.
- 18:59Yeah.
- 19:00Yeah, you could see that.
- 19:01And you know, the Twitter wars or, you know, social media, you know, backlash or something like that, you've got those kinds of problems because a misunderstanding or misdirection, sometimes on purpose, can be, um, great fuel for humor, for sarcasm.
- 19:19But from the point of view of the reader trying to grasp all that, you have to have some sort of obvious signpost or s- or series of signposts for the characters.
- 19:29So one of the things you had pointed out when you went through my first book as an editor was, I get it But it has to be more on the page.
- 19:40Mm-hmm.
- 19:41It has to be, there, there has to be elements there so the reader can go, "Aha." And then- Yeah, and- Either enjoy the book- I'm like that though sometimes.
- 19:48I, yeah, sometimes I have to read things two or three times'cause I'm like, "Oh, what?" And then I'm like, "Oh, I get it." But it- Yeah … but, but readers aren't necessarily gonna take that time.
- 19:58I have to as an editor, but you're right, and, and I can point out those places where it didn't land quite right.
- 20:04That's right.
- 20:05Um, because you want them to be able to digest it the first time, and sometimes we need to be incredibly obvious even though it feels like if this is how you and your hockey team talk all the time, it may make sense.
- 20:17When you read it to yourself, you've gotta know that it's gonna land the way that it's gonna land, or it either won't make sense, it might offend somebody, it might, you know, like lots of different things can happen.
- 20:28Humor is often based in insults and, and in inside jokes and things.
- 20:33And like you said, the comics that you used to do, the people loved everybody else's.
- 20:38They didn't so much like it about themselves, right?
- 20:40No.
- 20:41Um- No.
- 20:41We, we, holding up a mirror to ourselves is fraught with problems.
- 20:45I think the, from a humor perspective, you have to recognize that even within your own cultural group, call it your, you know, your dinner club gals or, or your, your golfing buddies or, well, it could be any number of combinations.
- 20:57Could be mixed company.
- 20:59There's usually a shorthand that gets developed over time, and you can exploit that shorthand with your own jokes amongst your friends, but none of those jokes would make any sense to an outside party who's just not hung around with you.
- 21:14Yeah.
- 21:14So that problem amplifies once you get into writing for a broader audience.
- 21:20And in the first time through, I recognized that there were a number of jokes and a number of, uh, of things that I was writing about that, you know, they seemed absurd.
- 21:30My mind is basically a Tilt-A-Whirl of, of, you know, an endless engine of observations.
- 21:36I've probably left thousands of jokes in my head on the cutting room floor.
- 21:43Mostly because I can't remember them all, but partly because, well, that doesn't make sense to, to- Yeah… a reader.
- 21:48Or, or how do you walk them through?
- 21:50And so part of the trick, and you've done a good job of this in this and the subsequent novels that you're still working to release, um, with a giant cast of characters, what you need to do is bring the reader along on those inside jokes and make them part of the gang so that they can see where the joke developed, and then when it's used later, they understand it, right?
- 22:10So it's kind of like one of those things when you're writing humor that you need to have the setup and you need to bring that reader along that you don't always think you need to do.
- 22:18It's kind of like world building or magic or all the things that people throw in as another element that we have to teach the reader along the way.
- 22:27Your job is to actually teach them how to interpret the humor so that in that moment when you need them to really get it, it works, right?
- 22:35So there's work to be done to trace that or to thread that through, and I think you did a really good job.
- 22:41And you- and, and you're probably gonna have to make a decision if you decide that you wanna write something humorous, you're gonna have to just decide what the warmth level is.
- 22:49So think of it, uh, as a, a light bulb.
- 22:52You know, you can go into Home Depot or any store these days and you can get the cool white, or you can get the warm, you know, warmish light that p- what people used to call incandescent light And you have to decide how warm you want to be.
- 23:08And the problem that, that I faced in writing especially the subsequent books, now the universe is kind of established, how consistent can I keep that warmth level?
- 23:19Do I wanna get into the shock humor on the cool side, or do I wanna be something more warm and witty like a, like a, a Wodehousian kind of, uh, writer would?
- 23:30The problem for humor is keeping that tone consistent so that, uh, the, the readers aren't enjoying, enjoying, enjoying, and all of a sudden they get slapped.
- 23:40Yeah.
- 23:41And they, they go, "Well, that, where'd that come from?" That's really kind of like a terror- Which is something you can do in real life or you could do as a comedian on the, on the stage.
- 23:49You could have sweet humor all the way along, and then slap your audience, and it would be a shock, and you could wait while they recover.
- 23:55You're there to coddle them when they're reading your book, so you're right, you kind of have to set the tone.
- 24:00It also might attract a different reader.
- 24:01Yeah, and, and then that, that creates a second problem, and, and that is the difference between, you know, landing the joke in the present tense of, of, you know, the situation that the characters are in, and throwing a little, you know, not really a breadcrumb, but a little bit of foreshadowing.
- 24:16So in the second book called Patron Games, which is a theatrical farce, the plot lines, uh, there's, and there's several that, that collide, detonate, and, and create, you know, lots of, uh, fun disaster, uh, at the end.
- 24:31They need a lot of foreshadowing, so there's a long buildup.
- 24:36The architecture of how that got put together was different than The Naked Ambition, which is more of a straightforward intrigue.
- 24:43Y- you know what the end is gonna be.
- 24:45That's the ticking clock.
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