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- 1:30Today we go inside the twisted mind of Jim Ool's, the writer of one
- 1:38of my favorite films of all time, Fight Club, And after listening to
- 1:42this episode, I just have fallen more and more in love with Jim.
- 1:47I just have to say it. Enjoy today's episode with guest host Dave Bullis.
- 1:53Thank you for having me on, you know, yeah, well thank
- 1:57you for coming on, because you're a person who I've been trying to get
- 2:01on for I think almost a year now. Yeah, but that's that's totally
- 2:07my fault. And that's because of like, I keep trying to find what's
- 2:12the right perfect time, and it's like, you know, you know,
- 2:15you can't find the right perfect window of time. So I finally decided to
- 2:20stop trying to do that. Well, the real story is, Jim is
- 2:25I've been wearing you down and kind of stalking you on Twitter and Facebook,
- 2:29and finally you're just like, look, if I agree to this, we
- 2:30leave me a lone kid. And I'm like, sure, why, Oh
- 2:36yeah, well I wasn't supposed to talk about that, Acqurey to Yeah,
- 2:38law enforcements. That's right here in the room with me. I wasn't supposed
- 2:43to bring that up. So they need you to keep me talking so they
- 2:46can trace the call, right, Yeah, yeah, right, definitely keep
- 2:51talking. Yeah. So, you know, Jim, just to get started,
- 2:54you know, you actually got started off with I mean, would what
- 2:58would probably be like a grand Slam in terms, in movie terms, because
- 3:02you started off with Fight Club. I mean that, you know, just
- 3:06just be writing the adaptation of the novel by I think it's Chuck Palauck.
- 3:10I think as I pronounced his last name. Yeah, yeah, politick.
- 3:14Actually, I know it's still different than it sounds, but yeah. Yeah.
- 3:21And by the way, I actually got to write him a letter one
- 3:23time and he sent it back to me. Very very interesting guy too,
- 3:27but um, you know, oh he is he's great. He's like,
- 3:31he's great, and he's participated in a lot of strange things, so he's
- 3:35got a lot of stories really oh oh yeah, absolutely, And you know
- 3:40it's it's funny. I actually knew a a person who used to do like,
- 3:46um, I think she worked at Borders or at Barnes and Noble,
- 3:49and she said, whenever he did a book event, she goes it was
- 3:53like the it was so fun because all the people would come out. But
- 3:57she's like, it also is kind of a little edgy because you know,
- 4:00some of his fans and some of the stuff that he would write, you
- 4:03know what I mean, the would kind of bring out the people that uh,
- 4:06you know, um, let's just say a little more outgoing. Let's
- 4:10just lets let's let's just oh yeah, er energetic, outgoing extroverts who have
- 4:15to have a lot of tattoos and piercings and stuff. And that's kind of
- 4:20thing, right, intimidating people. Yeah, although you know what's funny about
- 4:27Chuck is Chuck is you know, he's pretty tall. I am too.
- 4:30He's like really built out and everything musc muscular, but he is like he
- 4:36talks like the softest, kindest voice you know in the world. It's just
- 4:46it's kind of like it it doesn't go with the image because he looks like
- 4:49like I'll throw you off a bridge, you know, because give him his
- 4:53wrong side. Well, I guess that that that's so it's kind of like
- 4:59the mic Hyson syndrome then, where you know, looks very intimidating that you
- 5:01hear him talking. He's very self spoken, I guess, except chuch sports
- 5:08matter high my chest is as a high voice. Yeah he does, he
- 5:12does get but but uh but yeah, you know, he was such an
- 5:16interesting guy to just to get a correspondence from. And uh, I know
- 5:20he does you know a lot of really cool things in the writing community.
- 5:24Uh. I mean there's even a thing he does on lit Reactor where it
- 5:26sells out in like seconds. Um, he does like an online class.
- 5:30But uh but you know, just such a it's such a really interesting guy.
- 5:32And you know, when he wrote fight Club, which I actually talked
- 5:35to him about, That's what I really talked to him about, was because
- 5:39I'm always interested in people's like first outing, like their first you know project
- 5:43out the gate. So basically with you, you know, his first project
- 5:46was fight Club that actually got published, and then your first project was the
- 5:50adaptation of, you know, of of fight Club. So you know,
- 5:55how did that all have come together for you. Yeah, well, actually
- 5:58I was. I was really the ad patient from the manuscript before the publishers
- 6:02actually put the ship put it on shelves, because I remember the day we
- 6:08got a copy, the adventure got to copy him the published book. But
- 6:14yeah, I was working off a manuscript at the beginning. Now I've been
- 6:19sent the manuscript by somebody I knew worked for a producer, said, every
- 6:26studio and producer in town has passed on this, but I'm sending it to
- 6:32you because I just know you're going to like it just for fun and who
- 6:39knows, just keep your attention on it and see if anything does happen.
- 6:44So I read it and it was like wow. I mean, first of
- 6:47all, blew me away. Secondly, I thought it would be such a
- 6:51great gig to be paid to it at this even though it will never be
- 6:58made to a movie. That's just to be paid to write it had pitch
- 7:01to be a great gig, right, And so I I had, you
- 7:10know, without my agent, we were like seeing while and I don't everybody's
- 7:14pretty much passed on this. And then that was around the time The Fox
- 7:18two thousand was created. As law Resistant was writing it, and she's kind
- 7:28of like, you know, I don't know. She wanted to do really
- 7:31out there stuff, and the book was considered unadaptable, probably because it is
- 7:40a monologue. The whole book is like a monologue an actor to do.
- 7:44I mean, Chuck I even told me he started by writing a monologue.
- 7:49I mean he wanted an actor to do it on stage. But we are
- 7:56I mean it wasn't going to be that long obviously, but um, it
- 8:03didn't have a lot of fully fleshed out scenes in um they were described I
- 8:11guess by the guy there. Um and uh so it had. It got
- 8:20branded unadaptable by everybody, and of course that I think Laura was sech a
- 8:26person. If you say that, that's like a red flag and trugleld basic
- 8:30equations. She was entitled idella really oh but she wouldn't hire a writer until
- 8:39she hired a drunk. So um. By this point I started getting people
- 8:48other people thoughts two thousand and the producers were Ross Bell and Josh Donnard.
- 8:54Yeah, I mean I was. I was having meetings with them. The
- 8:58star to turn into like where actually you're doing this with? You know,
- 9:05even though no one said like that, and they made Fox two thousand aware
- 9:13of me, and I happen to have a spect at the time that was
- 9:22I don't know it makes it made. There wasn't a blacklist then, but
- 9:26it made some kind of list of best ones not produced original specs. I
- 9:33don't know what it was. So it's kind of had a reputation. The
- 9:37script and that was what everyone read as a sample. And I kind of
- 9:46already knew Fisher. I say, he's somewhere between an acquaintance center friend by
- 9:50that because there was this place called the Pad of Guides where all these people
- 9:58would hang out, like Shane Black, who writing from UCLA. We'll be
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- 10:13And Finsher was one of the gang because you know, a good portion
- 10:18we're from the Bay Area in San Francisco, Bay Air and who moved to
- 10:24LA so we kind of do each other if they liked that script I'm talking
- 10:31about, and nobody still nobody ever said at this point, you're hired to
- 10:39me, right, And finally there's this huge lunch schedule. It's going to
- 10:48have Laura just uh, it's going to have other Fox two thousand executives it's
- 10:58gonna Fincher and me, And the idea is, oh, I reproduces of
- 11:03course, Ross Belly, Joshta and so. And the idea was, I'm
- 11:13going to have to sell myself or they'll move on. So it was sort
- 11:16of like, it's we're all having lunch, You're going to tell us why
- 11:22you have an idea of how to do this? It's up. Well,
- 11:26like most writers, I don't like pitchings, you know. So what I
- 11:35did was I started this group conversation among everybody about how, you know,
- 11:39with this work but that work, could you do this? And it went
- 11:43on and told the lunch so oh, first, sorry, I looked at
- 11:46it an important detail. I got there early enough to know what table it
- 11:52was going to be. I waited, and the next person who arrived was
- 11:54Fincher. We kind of since we knew each other. We shook handed.
- 11:58He was and he sat down and I made sure I sat down right next,
- 12:03and then everybody else came, so it already looked like like I was
- 12:11connected to Fisher, you know, Thank you, Ben. Yes, I
- 12:22ran this conversation, which never was a pitch by me, but it was
- 12:28a very interesting conversation about the obstacles of trying to you know, turn it
- 12:33into the film. And Kevin McCormick, who was basically you know, Laurasi
- 12:41becaus mean person there. I think fix two thousands of time. We're leaving,
- 12:46the lunch is over and Fisher is talking about when I should start on
- 12:52the thing. Nothing's been said. Kevin McCormick, as are walking out,
- 12:56says, you know, Jim, really give a subjective pitch. What you're
- 13:03gonna do? I said, yeah, I know, he didn't do anything
- 13:09about it, right, And the next thing, I know, my age
- 13:11is just making a deal. That's that. You know, I'm starting the
- 13:16first draft. So it was, you know, a little bit ethereal I
- 13:22don't all happen. You know that is a good strategy though a Jim.
- 13:30It's all about appearance, right, So you have to you have to always
- 13:33look and kind of kind of set things up so to set yourself up for
- 13:37the wind wins. You know. Yeah, And you know, I said,
- 13:39what's funny about that is I didn't see I didn't have that idea until
- 13:46I just absolutely got there early. And then that's when I became cunning all
- 13:52of a sudden. It's like I've never thought of that before, and then
- 13:56I was like, yeah, I'm gonna get this. I'm gonna sit next
- 13:58to ficture because like it all came to me, like I don't know,
- 14:01like kind of a split personality myself and the other personality came out and said,
- 14:07this is what you're gonna do. You know. It's kind of that
- 14:13kind of ties in a fight club too, having that split personality, right
- 14:16right, I suddenly I was Tyler Dirton. And by the way, you
- 14:18know, the first person narrator of the book doesn't have a name. Ever,
- 14:28there's no name and a narrator right right. And I think I talked
- 14:35to Ross Bell and Josh don Josh Donn and at some point I can't pinpoint
- 14:41it, but he stopped being a producer became an agent again, which he
- 14:46had been before. And so I only left Ross Bell for the first draft,
- 14:54and Fincher was doing something like just expecting me to just get the first
- 15:00draft in the well fit them, we'll look at it and talk about it.
- 15:03Right So um um, I forgot what started this, but what we
- 15:11say they got me on to this part of the conversation. We're talking about
- 15:16all my club and du dual personalities and alter egos. Oh yeah, no
- 15:22name. So yeah, we discuss I think it was most mostly me and
- 15:26Ross Bell. We should put the word narrator down as the name. And
- 15:31I said, you know, let's good. Just get really really tirsome.
- 15:35Narrator goes to the door. Narrator laughs. Narrator says, it's just I
- 15:41mean in the in the in the place where you put the character name before
- 15:46the dialogue. Okay, not too bad, but in all the actions,
- 15:50descriptions and everything, it's like, okay, well, we're going to name
- 15:56it in the script for us. It's never in dialogue, it's never in
- 16:02the movie. But we have to call him something. So I said,
- 16:07Jack. I mean, what's the first name that comes behind me? To
- 16:11make an example? All right, so what God comes into Jack? And
- 16:14he said, you know what I mean, the first thing anyone picks up
- 16:17is Jack. And I said Jack. Yeah, all right, we'll call
- 16:21the character Jack so that I could write Jack in the screenplay, is said
- 16:30narrator all the time, right, And then somewhere on the line, we
- 16:37found out the Reader's Digest completely denied permission to use their old series of articles,
- 16:47which was like I am Joe's heart, I am Joe's liver, which
- 16:52is referred to in the book because of the House on paper Streets has a
- 16:57billion old magazines all over the point, and so we said, well,
- 17:03we'll just change it to Jack and legal cleared it. Jeff, you say,
- 17:10I am Jack's whatever organ. They can't do anything. You don't name
- 17:15the magazine. I am Jack Sliver, they can't do anything. Okay,
- 17:21So that actually gets said, and some people think that the report was actually
- 17:30saying when he said I am Jack Whatever, the name of his character,
- 17:34but he wasn't. It was the name of the articles, and then he
- 17:40made parodies of them, you know, like I am Jack's complete lack of
- 17:45surprise. Actually, I bring that up because I had to write. I
- 17:51wanted him to say it out because I knew we'd be so used to him
- 17:55narrating and having his own comments that I wrote. I couldn't just leave off
- 18:03the vo because I think it's a mistake. So in addition to leaving off
- 18:08parentheses vo after Jack, I wrote in the parentheses below his name said that
- 18:17out wow, because he's been thinking this all along. I am Jack,
- 18:22steaming outrage, I am whatever, and the boss says something to him,
- 18:26and he actually says that the boss I am Jack's completely lack of surprise to
- 18:32the boss and Black. It's the only time he actually said something that he
- 18:38normally does the narration that he said it out loud like, and I thought
- 18:42that also shows that his mind there's less division between what he thinks and what
- 18:51he says because he's coming apart right right, so as the altregos go back
- 18:59and forth, right, Yeah, I mean, yeah, I mean it's
- 19:03uh, this was still before you something out loud, before he discovered the
- 19:08truth, you know, So, Jim, just to just to ask a
- 19:12quick question there. You know when you hear when when people hear things like
- 19:17about screenwriting rules and et cetera. But you know, you shouldn't do this
- 19:21in a screenplay. You shouldn't do that in a screenplay. Um, if
- 19:23somebody were to do something like this in a screenplay and they submitted it to
- 19:29a competition or what or or an agent or what have you, you know,
- 19:32what kind of response do you think they would get if they did something
- 19:34like that. Do you think somebody would think it was you know, original,
- 19:37or do you think somebody would say like, oh, you know,
- 19:40you have to kind of write a cut and dry screenplay as the first one.
- 19:44But when then then when you get a little cash, you can move
- 19:47on, right, So what what should you what is this just like you
- 19:55know, kind of how things are, you know, like he's writing parentheses
- 19:57said out loud, you know, just kind of like to try to either
- 20:00you know, in a competition or even just saying it's an agent. You
- 20:03know. Do do you think that they would ever ever get any kind of
- 20:06backlash if they did something like yeah you want that would work? I mean,
- 20:11it wouldn't be a good idea unless you had already established that this guy
- 20:15thinks these things and this bo when he says them, and you do it
- 20:22repeatedly enough over a long enough period of time that you make a point of
- 20:26saying, this time he's saying it out. I'll bet you. Okay,
- 20:32we'll be right back after a word from our sponsor, and now back to
- 20:38the show. But if it was just out of the blue, there was
- 20:45no setup, or it probably would look like, you know, not good
- 20:49form. I guess well, because you know, you always hear about the
- 20:53screenplay rules, and you always kind of wonder, or at least I wonder
- 20:56you know, how how how much should they be? Really? How much
- 21:00do they actually carry weight? You know what I mean, because I've read
- 21:03so many books onto on screenwriting, and also do you hear so many people
- 21:07talk about it, we actually start to wonder about all the different rules and
- 21:10you know where they actually came from, and if they even if someone doesn't
- 21:12even matter anymore, you know what? You know, you know what I
- 21:15mean, Jim, Because I mean, I'm sure you get a lot of
- 21:17questions too, because you know, um, you still run the writer's lab
- 21:22out there in LA and I'm sure you get a ton of people saying,
- 21:23hey, well I heard this and I heard that. I mean, do
- 21:27you get that a lot? Well, you know, I think that they
- 21:32are always relaxing rules, they're always gooding. You know, It's it's always
- 21:37been a process of slowly becoming more and more you know, however you want
- 21:44to write it. I mean within certain parameters, you know. I mean,
- 21:48if they have to know if something that's what we call a slug line,
- 21:52you know, the shocked exterior interior living room day, they have to
- 21:59know that after that there is action or description. They have to know that
- 22:04when someone's talking, they have to see the name where you put the character
- 22:08name in all caps, the center of the page, and then their dialogue.
- 22:14So some things have to look like a screenplay. But in terms of
- 22:22other rules, you're getting into style questions because there's actually a style beyond just
- 22:30obeying the format, Like, for example, you don't do too much directing
- 22:34on paper. That's not good. You know, shot his face, shot
- 22:41his watch, shot his feet step into the shot. You know, I
- 22:45mean, it's not a good idea. So Greening writers write in master scene,
- 22:52you know, they say where it's taking place, and then they just
- 22:55write the scene. Now are there exceptions of that? Of course there are,
- 23:00and there are important ones that you can use. One of them as
- 23:04the first example I always give to where you're actually talking about the camera is
- 23:11pulling back to reveal more than what you were seeing at the top of the
- 23:18seat. Thrillers and comedies use this a lot, which is like, you
- 23:25know, a comedy guy says to another guy, I will never do something
- 23:30as boring as fishing. Cut two. It's the other guy who was talking
- 23:34to him, the guy who likes to fish, just sitting there with a
- 23:38fishing pot in a boat, and you pull back to reveal that on the
- 23:44other end of the boat is the guy who said I will never do something
- 23:48as borings fishing in these fishes. Right, you first thought it was just
- 23:52the guy who likes to fish there, and you pulled back and you revealed
- 23:56the guy who just screamed that he'd never do it is sitting there all sufficient.
- 24:00So that's a reveal. And you know, thrillers do it a lot
- 24:04by showing the lead character whatever they're doing, pulling back so that they reveal
- 24:12the killer, which the lead character doesn't see. Yeah, but we do.
- 24:18Now, those are those are the things you're definitely doing writing that is
- 24:26part of your narrative At storytelling. It's not telling somebody how to shoot fill
- 24:34it's it's saying, I'm you know, this is the intention when I start
- 24:41the scene, and then I'm going to reveal somebody or something. So that's
- 24:48all right. You know, that's an example of something where you don't have
- 24:52to just writeing masters you can have a moment like that. Um, I
- 25:00think writers are I mean, from what I've read, they basically started to
- 25:04go the way into like what the camera does. I don't know if that's
- 25:12why, is if somebody's just starting out. I don't know. I know
- 25:21that there's a cringe factor to seeing something that looks like you're directing the whole
- 25:25movie on paper. So I would say you use it when the storytelling is
- 25:33saying that, you know, the suspense thriller, if you're writing it,
- 25:40you have the right to say that, we think there's this fairly peaceful scene
- 25:45with the lead character, and then you pull back to reveal that the killer
- 25:49is right behind the street. Either whatever it is, that's that is right,
- 25:56that is part of stream. But yeah, I don't know, I
- 26:03have to go down which rules we're talking about one by one to know what
- 26:08by answer your question, Yeah, I know I should have I should have
- 26:14been more specifics Jim, But I know, I know it was kind of
- 26:17a blanket statement. But you know, you just hear different rules of screenwriting.
- 26:21I mean, they even did one on script notes one time where they
- 26:23kind of went through these rules quote unquote, um, next time, I
- 26:27mean next time off to send them to you, but they kind of went
- 26:30through those script notes. Is the podcast by Craig Mason and John August But
- 26:36oh yeah, no, I know, I know. John August is such
- 26:38a great source of information uses amazing. Yeah, and man, he has
- 26:47things that people agree with people don't like. For instance, Perior is what
- 26:51typewriters, right, that's why they that's why screen place as still done because
- 27:02on the typewriter, back in the days when there was only tie a page
- 27:07equals a minute. What they don't want you to suddenly start having smaller type
- 27:11or bigger type, or they want it to look like that old typewriter.
- 27:17Okay, and that's Perior twelve point point that's what they wanted in period.
- 27:27So I don't even know what that point I was me see see, I
- 27:37told you, I told you, Jim, I get too heady. And
- 27:40now we're going down that path right right, right now. I like that
- 27:44part. Yeah, well, what are the rules? What are the rules
- 27:47you're talking? Oh oh no, wait, sorry, I know what they're
- 27:49gonna say. John August agrees with and a lot of people do that.
- 27:56In Perior twelve point five, which it looks like a type you used to
- 28:00look like. If you put a period, it's have two spaces after it.
- 28:06And the reason for it typewriter was with that font a period with only
- 28:15one space sort of you could miss that it. I guess your eyes go
- 28:22over. It might not. It doesn't make the statement that this simms ends
- 28:27and this one begins. So I know that John thinks we should get to
- 28:36a space effort, which is the traditional way of using that font. But
- 28:41other fonts, since now we have computers and thousands of fonts right, don't
- 28:48necessarily deep to spaces after a period. And some people have brought it back
- 28:52to screenplays. To Courier twelve points, I'm only putting one space, John
- 29:00says two. I just half the business says too. Half the business says
- 29:07one. You know, it's kind of a mocking Oh well, you know,
- 29:11if you want to give a way that you're older, put two spaces,
- 29:15you know. So you know people are rapidly only putting in one space
- 29:19after a period because by god, they're not going to look older, you
- 29:22know. But um best an example of something that you know actually is so
- 29:30inconsequential. I don't even know why I talked about it. So you've got
- 29:37to give me another rule. I don't know some of them all the top
- 29:41of my head. I have to look at that list. Uh that was
- 29:44actually uh because that list was more like definitive with kind of a heart and
- 29:48fast rules but but um, Jim, are we at a time? No
- 29:55oh no, no, no, we're not actually U the things that I
- 30:02was going to go to is starting like forty five minutes later it was originally,
- 30:07so I'm not I'm fine, okay, awesome, so we'll keep going.
- 30:15Say I have a I have a ton of other questions, but that
- 30:18so, you know, I think just to get back, you know,
- 30:22because we were talking about you know, uh, just screenwriting in general.
- 30:26So I know you you do a lot of work with the Writer's Lab.
- 30:30You actually also did the Class of Creative Live, you know, so you
- 30:34know what the writers. I just wanted to say this look like, just
- 30:37so it's publicly out there or you're calling in the Writer's Lab there it's still
- 30:41going on. Called safe Us. We'll be right back after a word from
- 30:48our sponsor, and now back to the show. That's the name I came
- 30:57up with because the idea is it's only the writer actors that are involved in
- 31:07it that are there. You can't bring in someone who has could be a
- 31:11buyer. And the purpose of that is experimentation. This complete experimentation. You
- 31:17could do stuff and it might not work, but you don't want to do
- 31:22something that doesn't work in front of buyers. So we don't want that atmosphere,
- 31:26right, so I call it safe house. It's definitely still going.
- 31:34And so I mean you say you still do that, and then you still
- 31:37do. You know, you have the class of creative life. You know
- 31:40just about the art and craft of screenwriting. You know, so as you
- 31:45kind of have done this journey of screenwriting over the years. Um so you
- 31:48know again you you were able to break in in nineteen eighty nine with Fight
- 31:52Club, you know, as you kind of, uh, you have gotten
- 31:56all this knowledge over the years. You know, what are some of the
- 32:00you know, some of the things that you've seen or some of the advice
- 32:01that you could give to people who are out there just starting their own screenplay
- 32:06right now. Well, I mean I've probably said this before and somewhere else,
- 32:15but I mean I think you should. People people who are beginning can
- 32:22really obsessed with their first script. Like this first script it's just to make
- 32:28They're stuck with it. It's like I've got to get this perfect and it's
- 32:32and it has to people the one that it's And I think that when you
- 32:38I think you should right all the way through a first draft of it,
- 32:43type the end, you're all the way through it, and then take your
- 32:49attention. You know, in the typewriter days they would have said throw it
- 32:55in a drawer, So metaphorically, throw it in a drawer and start writing
- 33:04a different screen player, because okay, then you have to then get all
- 33:09the way through the first draft. Let spring play number two and then take
- 33:15your attention off of it, and then a third screenplay all the way through
- 33:22to the end first draft. Then I didn't go back to first because the
- 33:31kind of objectivity and even the wisdom you've gained by writing two more free play
- 33:38makes you a different person looking at your first screen play, you're a different
- 33:44writer. You're a better writer, really, no matter why. You're a
- 33:50better writer if you've done three and you're going to look at it differently,
- 33:58and you're going to get hit with a lot of great ideas that would probably
- 34:05never have occurred to you if you had to have that much time away from
- 34:08it. And then when you've worked on that, well, your path is
- 34:15set. What do you go to? Where do you play number two?
- 34:20Wow, you're looking at that one like you never looked at it. If
- 34:23you do this with three, in terms of working starting out writing for no
- 34:37money, right aspect, If you do a second draft of three screen different
- 34:44screen pot, I think you've done almost all the work you need to do
- 34:52before turning your attention way more rapidly to the business part of it. But
- 35:00in terms of writing that that, you know, I don't think anything's lacking
- 35:06there a second draft of three screenplays. I mean, you're you're just you're
- 35:13better. They're better, and you have more than one thing to show,
- 35:21which means that you're somebody who could be hired because you keep writing. You're
- 35:27I mean you didn't just write one screenplay. I mean, how many people
- 35:30have written one screenplay? Is probably you know, half this country has written
- 35:35one screenplay, you know. But that's that is that you've earned the right
- 35:45to like seriously change your focus too ustling on the business side, because you've
- 35:54done two drafts each of three screenplay, the second of which is an enormous
- 36:02improvement over the first. And that, by the way, can all be
- 36:09done without a teacher, without an instructor, or any writing because and I'm
- 36:15not saying it should be without it could be enhanced greatly by being part of
- 36:21something where an instructor is you know, guided or whatever. But what I'm
- 36:25saying is, if you don't have that, if you can't afford that,
- 36:29if whatever, if you're in a town that doesn't have that, you can
- 36:34write three screenplays right, second drafts of all three, and you are a
- 36:42better writer. I don't care where you are or who's seen it. You're
- 36:49a better writer, and the second drafts are all better. Verse. That's
- 36:53just going to happen. So that's screenwriting without a teacher. You so screwing
- 37:02without a teacher. You I like that. So basically, if you were
- 37:08to take that, you know, just take that out even a step further.
- 37:10You know, just a person without you know, any type of you
- 37:14know, manual or anything to go by. They're just you know, it's
- 37:19just them maybe a pad of paper and a pen in a room somewhere.
- 37:22Um, you know, what are your thoughts on you do you do you
- 37:25recommend outlining or do you think it should just be one of those cases where
- 37:29you just you have an idea and just kind of fly by the seat of
- 37:31your pants. Well, um, well, I was saying, I hate
- 37:37I hate pitching, although I have done, by the way, there have
- 37:40been times when I later I tried to start a conversational and said, no,
- 37:44we're not out of the conversation. Yeah, what's the pitch? I
- 37:46did work? But despite the fact that I hate it, I have done
- 37:53good pitches. Um, And how why does I feel the same way about
- 37:58it? I'm not very very very shortlessly to the idea of outlines. And
- 38:04here's the reason for it. An outline is something that documents what you're going
- 38:09to write before you write it. Now, if you're telling your entire story
- 38:17before you tell your story, I mean, it fundamentally doesn't make sense.
- 38:23But also, an outline is clinical. It's it's a very bloodless clinical thing.
- 38:32I mean, if you have an emotional scene, you just say they
- 38:36have an emotional scene, Like wow, that just when I've read that,
- 38:39should they have an emotional scene? I just broke down a good yeah.
- 38:45It's like no, of course not. An outline has nothing in it except
- 38:52literal blocked. I mean, you can take time to maybe describe the character
- 38:58or whatever. You can obviously have your character behave in their way in a
- 39:04way that just makes them distinct. You can do all this stuff in an
- 39:06outline, but ultimately it's still clinical. Now I can't say, don't write
- 39:12outlines, because don't be people who hire you want an outline first, and
- 39:17you're going to write it. So what I like to do is switch off
- 39:29my time between an outline and just some scenes. The scenes give me what
- 39:39I call the sense of blood, which means I'm I'm in there. I'm
- 39:43with living, breathing people, and they're starting to come alive. They're behaving
- 39:49and speaking, and I can't go back to the outline, and I feel
- 39:52like I'm creating on that other level. So that it allows me to feel
- 39:59bit or about the album because I know that I've got these scenes where these
- 40:04characters really are working. We'll be right back after a word from our sponsor,
- 40:14and now back to the show. So that's what I do. I
- 40:19kind of go back and forth between the two things. I mean, if
- 40:25they need an outline by X amount of time, obviously I'm not gonna be
- 40:28writing a lot of scene on the side, but some enough to just feel
- 40:35like I know these people you know, and they work and I'm excited about
- 40:39So okay, I'll just continue with the plot autumn if I don't have to
- 40:46write it out. I don't think I ever do. I don't I don't
- 40:52consider it fine by the seat of my pants. I think that I have
- 40:58enough of an idea to move forward. But the thing about writing the script
- 41:05is if you allow yourself you you discover as you go, and that's really
- 41:14where the best stuff comes from. Something you discover you had pre thought it.
- 41:22You know, the characters were behaving and something happened. You know what's
- 41:28going to happen. Now, that's when it really gets but and exciting to
- 41:34do it. And that best can't be pre determined or wouldn't be what I'm
- 41:40talking about right right, But you do have to have an idea, you
- 41:46know. I mean, I think you have to have an idea. And
- 41:49I even think there's a form this is that there is a mutative form of
- 41:55allied and script that is basically but it's sometimes it goes to full script right
- 42:04there in the outline. I think it goes back to outline form. I
- 42:07think they call it a script like combining script and treatment. Um that that
- 42:15could be a way that works for you, that that is definitely something you're
- 42:20doing for yourself. I mean, I don't think there's anybody highers I want
- 42:23to script. You know, if they want an outline, they want an
- 42:27outline, but in terms of how you work on your own, I think
- 42:31that's that that's a viable option to do it that way at first. You
- 42:38know, when I was talking about Chuck earlier, one of the pieces of
- 42:43advice he gave me was to, you know, have have some kind of
- 42:49opening, uh in mind, have some kind of ending in mind, and
- 42:52write the end. So it kind of so whatever your writing feels finished and
- 42:55then he goes. So you have your your beginning, and you kind of
- 42:59in vision how this story would end. You're kind of imagining how the characters
- 43:04are transformed. So you're basically imagining this. You're not You're not like you
- 43:07know what has to happen, so to speak. If if I'm making this
- 43:10clear enough, but basically you kind of have the ending in mont. You're
- 43:15you're kind of letting you they don't have to start filling in all those gaps
- 43:17of how we got from point A to point you know B or point Z.
- 43:22Really yeah in the story. Yeah, I think I think, yeah,
- 43:25me, he's got a great point. I think I think I probably
- 43:28just think that way. I mean, I always think, like, because
- 43:31you're you're going in that direction. That's also why I think you should have
- 43:35a title. My joke about it is untitled dirty cop, Porno, ring,
- 43:42pizza, joint, ool's project or something untitled, and then it has
- 43:46all these words in it because you see that's with stuff that's not titled.
- 43:52Um, I don't think that helps you to write something, but it's just
- 43:58untitled. A title points view. In a lot of everything's in the same
- 44:06direction, same story, character, they're all going in that direction, but
- 44:12that title is pointing. And sometimes you know, in the middle of the
- 44:16process that title you're holding onto, that that's you're suspended above a huge abyss
- 44:23and that's the only thing you're holding onto sometimes, So I m titles think
- 44:30the ending that's all good because you're allowing yourself to go, Okay, I'm
- 44:37going to get there, but I'm gonna I'm gonna discover how I get there,
- 44:45which is great. Definitely, yeah, because that kind of takes away
- 44:52from the kind of um, like you mentioned, where it's kind of robotic
- 44:55or kind of you know, our I guess cliche where you kind of have
- 45:00an outline and it's kind of set in stone. But the problem is it's
- 45:04not spontaneous. It feels kind of contrived. You know what I mean.
- 45:07It's kind of like the story by formula. Yeah, I mean, I'm
- 45:13not even necessarily saying you all lie makes you write down cliches or you know
- 45:20what I mean. You could be writing an outline with places. It's really
- 45:22fascinating. It's just that you're not. You're not playing with behavior action a
- 45:30dialogue at all, really, and you want to be in that, you
- 45:36know. Um, but that's but yeah, I mean yeah, because alls
- 45:45could be completely written with wow, every idea this is. I'm not saying
- 45:51at all that they forced you come up with cliches. They don't. It's
- 45:57just not a script, that's all. Really. It kind of takes the
- 46:00emotion out right, because that's what you want, you know, you want
- 46:04the That's what I think. Yeah, I think, I mean, unless
- 46:07you're going to like go novelist on it and really shut you right, you
- 46:15know, because if you're writing a novel of yeah, then you can get
- 46:17all that, you can have, emotion, you can have. But that's
- 46:20a novel, you know, I mean. An outline is just tell me
- 46:27what happens in this show. That's not the same as a novel, and
- 46:37it's certainly not the same as a screenplay, right right, And that's why
- 46:43when I you know, imagine with with that advice that you just gave,
- 46:45and you're the one that Chuck gave two, it's kind of like you can
- 46:50see how Fight Club kind of came together from that. Um, you know,
- 46:53you start off with a guy who absolutely you know has something missing in
- 47:00his life, and he ends with you know, um well spoiler alert everybody,
- 47:04just in case you haven't seen it yet. Um, you end up
- 47:07with you know him at the end, with with Marla and they've just blown
- 47:10up a bunch of buildings in Wilmington, Delaware, right right. I mean
- 47:15the book had a coda, which we just think it wouldn't have worked.
- 47:22The book doesn't stop there, right, which is too Yeah uh yeah.
- 47:32I mean he realized he had to he had to create this person to be
- 47:37everything he couldn't get himself to be, you know, and then he didn't
- 47:44meet this person any more, and this person was like insane and pointed a
- 47:46lot of stuff that had to be stopped. Yeah. Um, but it's
- 47:52kind of gost writers Jim, right, Yeah, he creating alter ego and
- 47:57it kind of ends up consuming you. Yeah that's true. Well, yeah,
- 48:06that was happening to me right before wherever you were calling, I would
- 48:08be like, right in the middle of this, and I fixed it.
- 48:12But you know I was done, So all is okay. Uh. So
- 48:21you know, uh, you know, Jim, I wanted to ask,
- 48:22you know, uh with you know, we've been talking about screenwriting and everything
- 48:25like that. You know, uh what what are you currently working on?
- 48:31I mean, oh, sorry, go ahead, no, no, I'm
- 48:37sorry. I was just gonna say, like, you know, I know
- 48:38you can't go to details, but you know, just in general, you
- 48:40know what kind of projects you work on? Now? Well, I mean,
- 48:45um, the screenplay gig so to speak that I have is doing an
- 48:51adaptation uh actually a series graphic novels um that come from South Korea, and
- 49:01we're changing, you know, I mean that we're we're departing from the source
- 49:07material in a lot of ways. But it's you know, it's it's it
- 49:15could be put you called in the action genre, but within that, I
- 49:22try to do as much character work as possible and make it relate to the
- 49:25action that's happening. If there do have to be like there has to be
- 49:30some breathtaking action, and I think sometimes I find that more challenging anything.
- 49:37It's like, how what's going to make this a different kind of moment of
- 49:43action? So um, but anyway, yeah, I'm doing that. And
- 49:52let's see that there's some there's some things that are just honing the pictures for
- 50:00television, which is one of the pitching industry. And so I don't know,
- 50:07I divide my time out between these things. We'll be right back after
- 50:15a word from our sponsor and now back to the show. So basically,
- 50:24do you decide what to work on, you know, just based upon your
- 50:29I mean, do you juggle projects a lot? As what I'm trying to
- 50:30say, Do you juggle projects multiple projects at one time? Yeah, I
- 50:37mean I have. It's usually, um, they're stacked so they're sort of
- 50:43legally protected from each other in a way. That's yeah, if you won't
- 50:46start this until this whatever, But if that happens. But if not,
- 50:53if I'm just wearing one thing to pay, then I'm still spending some time
- 51:00working on ideas for other things, you know, my own ideas. Um,
- 51:07so it gives me a lot to do. So so, Jim,
- 51:15I wanted to ask, are you ever going to direct your own film?
- 51:17Would you ever consider directing your own film. Um, I don't know.
- 51:22I've been about three or four screenplay started that are The impulse was that I
- 51:31would direct him. I have never got them finished, but I probably should.
- 51:44I I've done some shorts that are not really for public distributed. They
- 51:51were just exercises and I found that it was a mentality I could get into.
- 52:00But it, you know, it does involve every single human being around
- 52:04you is looking at you for an answer, you know, all the time,
- 52:08so it's intense. But answer the question. I think it's possible I
- 52:16might. So basically, did you go onto this set of Fight Club and
- 52:22see like what Fincher was going through and you were like, There's no way
- 52:25I'm doing that. Screw that? Well, I mean you couldn't really tell,
- 52:32you know. For I think what I what I know from director to
- 52:37short is you can't watch the director and know what it feels like. You
- 52:44can't guess what it feels like. You can't you have no consen because when
- 52:49you're directed, then you know, there's only one way to know what it's
- 52:53like with everybody is looking at you for the answer and the next answer and
- 52:58the next danger, and that is if you're in a position you can watch
- 53:02someone else, but I think you could have an idea of it, and
- 53:06you probably have some idea of it, but you don't know until you're doing
- 53:13it. And you know, I watched him and his master detail. I
- 53:21think all this stuff came to him instinctually. Just it was just amazing.
- 53:25You know, it had been really great just to work with him on the
- 53:29scriptum, meaning not to talk about Les changed this change that. That was
- 53:36a lot of fun. And I know that I didn't see it, but
- 53:40I know I can kind of demand, you know, on the crew.
- 53:47I mean I just saw everything looking like it was being shot by a master,
- 53:52which it was. Yeah, so it was great. You know,
- 53:58I actually had on Bob signs. Bob was an actually was an actual cab
- 54:04driver in Zodiac, also directed by David Fincher. So he was he was
- 54:08he was telling an anecdote that, uh he was. He was So him
- 54:13Bob as the cab driver is driving Jake Joe on Hall and they did about
- 54:16one hundred takes of this and finally Jake Joe just just popped his head into
- 54:22you know, he got out of the cab and this and that. So
- 54:23he looked in he goes to Bob. He goes, Bob, do you
- 54:27want to do this anymore? And he goes, what do you mean?
- 54:29He goes, do you want to do this this scene anymore? Because I
- 54:30don't, uh, And he went up to David like so, and Jake
- 54:35bump to David Fincher goes, I just can't do this anymore because David,
- 54:37we have one hundred takes me getting out of a cab at some point it
- 54:40has to look good. And Dave was like, no, no, no,
- 54:43no no, and then Jake so so Jake goes, you know,
- 54:45you know, he goes, you know what, I'm done. He goes,
- 54:47It's finished. And my friend Bob was still singing the cab like should
- 54:52I get out or as this thought, I don't know, but uh but
- 54:55yeah, yeah, I'm just a funny, uh funny story. I told
- 54:59Bob say he should have just kind of stand, you know, just kind
- 55:01of drove the cab off at that point and called it, called it a
- 55:05day. But now he um, I think that would actually be funny if
- 55:08he just drove off the set. He left exactly. Yeah, no,
- 55:16I mean I never saw anything bad, intensely repeated myself. But you know,
- 55:22certainly he he would shoot and sometimes it wasn't because you know, every
- 55:30take is wrong until I get the right one. Sometimes he was doing things
- 55:34that have choices, so he do them a little differently, you know.
- 55:37So I didn't see anything like that where you described, um, but yeah,
- 55:45it reminds me. I think there's a in the seventies. You know,
- 55:49there was a movie where the director said, well, it was the
- 55:52actor who wanted to keep doing takes, the movie star, that is,
- 55:58and the director said, uh, okay, well I'm done with this today.
- 56:01As you left and the actors kept doing the movie star, I kept
- 56:07doing he takes it, you know, because he controlled the situation. Really
- 56:12so um. Anyway, that's that's It's just funny. It reminds me there
- 56:17what you're saying, because you know, it's just because you know, that's
- 56:22a mistake I made. I'm just doing my short films. Was I didn't
- 56:25get different the takes weren't different for different choices. Uh. That's something I
- 56:30learned, and I was like, you know, I should have did this,
- 56:32I should do that. So when I started making other ones, I
- 56:35would make sure that different takes, you know, things were said differently.
- 56:37Uh, you know, there was different, different, you know, reactions,
- 56:43big small stuff like that, you know, so that you have something
- 56:45in the editing room to choose from when you're picking and choosing all your your
- 56:50piecing all this together, right right? Yeah, Um, I think it's
- 56:57pretty smart to do that. I don't know what what's going on with the
- 57:02cats and so, yeah, but I do think that having choices as smart.
- 57:09I mean, and I saw him do it, so it just seemed
- 57:13like, yeah, it could be this that I think that's well, pretty
- 57:19intelligent. Well that's why I get David Fincher on this podcast to talk about
- 57:22it. So, and I'd be willing to bet you, Jim ten dollars
- 57:27that he probably would say, I have no idea what you're talking about,
- 57:30so because he wouldn't remember me. Everything does seem instinctual, if that's what
- 57:36you mean. He does seem to like it just sort of comes out of
- 57:40it because he's been asked, what do you realize that this pattern and this
- 57:45what end the way that person behaved? Whether you must have purposely done that?
- 57:50And he like he has this looked like what are you talking about?
- 57:54But he is doing it the fact that he's doing it instinctually doesn't change.
- 58:00Actually he's doing that, then he knows he's getting where he likes, you
- 58:04know. Um, so he's operating off instincts. Is really a good idea
- 58:10for him. It's just uh worked out well. Yeah, yeah, definitely
- 58:17it has worked out well. Um. You know, the Growth of Dragons
- 58:21had to Zodiac Fight Club. Um, and you know it just he's uh,
- 58:27you know, he's a he's a machine. Um. Definitely definitely one
- 58:30of the best directors working today. You know that about it. Yeah.
- 58:36So and when I when I was when I was working with him, you
- 58:38know, there was it was it was just maybe after slightly after a time
- 58:44or maybe it was still very time when some people were saying, you know,
- 58:47these visual directors, these MTV directors you know or whatever. I guess
- 58:54meaning you know, obsession something visual or cutting a lot or I don't know
- 58:59what it was. And when we worked, when we sat down and talked
- 59:02about the Scriptica was one hundred percent good talking about everything character, plot,
- 59:13um, you know, scene structure. He was fantastic. I mean I
- 59:19never saw anything he wasn't good at. Actually, I mean he doesn't particularly
- 59:23right himself, but I mean I'm just saying in terms of dealing with other
- 59:29people that he's working artistically with. He he had everything. I mean they
- 59:38were calling him. I don't know, I think I probably after seven I
- 59:43think everybody got it, this guy is amazing whatever, but possibly before that.
- 59:51Oh, the visually obsessed, well he isn't. He's obsessed with every
- 59:55part, every element of the MO and he thinks about all of them.
- 1:00:02Really. Well, get back in tom as. So many always said,
- 1:00:07you know, we'll be right back after a word from our sponsor, and
- 1:00:16now back to the show, right which is which is great? Yeah,
- 1:00:24I know exactly what you mean, because sometimes you know, uh, I
- 1:00:30remember, I remember when they were saying, like the MTV generation of directors,
- 1:00:34the one they always pointed to was Guy Ritchie. Um, if you've
- 1:00:37ever seen Lockstock or Snatch, I don't know if you have, Oh yeah
- 1:00:40yeah, oh yeah absolutely. And you know, I think they were great
- 1:00:46films. But like you know, when people were always saying native things about
- 1:00:51him, and you know, in the reviews it was always about how it's
- 1:00:53an MTV style of editing and shooting, et cetera. I just think it's
- 1:00:59it was. Uh. I don't agree with that assessment. I just think
- 1:01:02that sometimes when people don't know what they're actually looking at or maybe it's a
- 1:01:06it breaks the mold of what they're used to. It kind of it kind
- 1:01:08of breaks it kind of breaks that mold and they can't kind of handle that
- 1:01:13change, if you know what I mean. Yeah, yeah, yeah,
- 1:01:15well, I mean yeah, at the time I'm talking the period of time
- 1:01:19I'm talking about, it was kind of like that was the the theme to
- 1:01:25attack, you know, that was the that was the popular target for certain
- 1:01:32critics. You know, not at all, but I remember that it sort
- 1:01:37of was its own thing, like let's go after those IMPV directors. You
- 1:01:42know. It's like, first of all, they're all different and saitly,
- 1:01:46you know, they think about everything. I'm assuming. I mean, I
- 1:01:52can't speak for everybody everyone who was accused of being that way, but you
- 1:01:57know, I think they think about everything. Yeah, absolutely, I mean
- 1:02:02and they and if anyone's talking about them, they have to be on something
- 1:02:06right, right, If someone even knows your name, if somebody even knows
- 1:02:10your name, you've got to be doing something right. Oh right, Yeah,
- 1:02:19I heard the work goes and actually, you know, I am sort
- 1:02:22of creeping up on the time, bore. I'm gonna have to go m
- 1:02:27oh, no problem. Well, actually, Jim, I was gonna say
- 1:02:29this what parameters were? So I told you it's it's uh, it's my
- 1:02:36you know, it's just this uh, this idea that you know, because
- 1:02:38we had I know, we had a time schedule, but uh, I
- 1:02:42didn't know now that you were able to go a little bit over. But
- 1:02:45you know, Jim, actually I just have one fuinal question. And just
- 1:02:47in closing, do you want to put a is there anything you want to
- 1:02:52say that we didn't talk about, or anything you want to say now to
- 1:02:54kind of put a period at the end of this whole conversation, um,
- 1:03:00any any party wisdom anything? Well, you know, I think I did
- 1:03:07it. That was the thing I did was the three scripts with somebody starting.
- 1:03:10I mean it's probably the other thing would be to read screenplays. So
- 1:03:16I mean, and I mean a lot um I have read online somebody saying
- 1:03:23that they've gotten this advice. Who's going to sit around and read? Well,
- 1:03:28no, I don't. You know, I don't think you should spend
- 1:03:30all your time reading screenplays when you're not writing. But it's a good idea
- 1:03:37to have a flow of them going and kind of keep up with reading them.
- 1:03:45I don't mean keep up with as in the most current you could be
- 1:03:47reading screenplay from the thirties or something. But just keep reading them. You
- 1:03:54know, doesn't have to consume all your time, doesn't have to consume that
- 1:03:59much of your time. But it's a good idea to just because I mean,
- 1:04:03you know, they're though they are in the format, but they're different.
- 1:04:06There's different things about different screenplays. I think that. And you can
- 1:04:12even read you know, there's different sort of setups. You can differ yourself.
- 1:04:16Like I'm going to see a movie. I didn't read the screenplay.
- 1:04:19It's by the way. It was just a better idea than doing it the
- 1:04:24other way around, because read the screenplay that you go to the video you've
- 1:04:27you've already read it or you know, if it's a classic or whatever,
- 1:04:34you've seen it maybe a while back, go back and see what the it's
- 1:04:39like to read the screenplay. And I think that is a good part of
- 1:04:46the exercise of learning it. And it's And no, I don't think anyone
- 1:04:51should be buried under a pile of scripts or something, or they're all in
- 1:04:57the computer or whatever they are. Um, yeah, had I don't think
- 1:05:04I'm not saying it has to be overdone, but I think it should be
- 1:05:10sort of a steady practice, you know, because it helps. It could
- 1:05:16be kind of like the fight club house. Jim. We're instead of you
- 1:05:19know, reading a bunch of of of old magazines, it's just old screenplays.
- 1:05:25They're just reading old screenplays. Yeah, I guess. But as I
- 1:05:32said to you, I'm not telling anyone if they should overdo it. Umball
- 1:05:41once as many as possible, and once it's just just just sort of like,
- 1:05:44you know, just sort of keep keep them going. That's all,
- 1:05:49you know, Jim. Before we go, I just want to tell you
- 1:05:51a quick little anecdote very quickly. One time a friend of mine had to
- 1:05:58It was it was like he called me up and he goes, hey,
- 1:06:00Dave, can I ask you for help with something? He goes, I
- 1:06:02have his friend. He lives, you know, in the middle of nowhere,
- 1:06:05and he needs some help with some it stuff and this and that,
- 1:06:10and I go, well, and you know, he talks me into it.
- 1:06:14So you know, I say fine, because I did kind of sort
- 1:06:16of go in that general direction anyway. It was gonna go pass where I
- 1:06:20needed to go. But you see, you kinda. You gotta get where
- 1:06:24I'm going with this. So the guy on the way goes, oh,
- 1:06:26yeah, he goes their house. I call it the fight Clubhouse, and
- 1:06:30I go why he goes, well, well, way do you see it?
- 1:06:33So we get there, Jim, and the house was just like the
- 1:06:36house and fight Club. It was like falling apart. There was like exposed
- 1:06:42wires everywhere, and I'm just like, what the are they squatting in this
- 1:06:45house? So eventually with the guy, so as I'm helping the guy out
- 1:06:49with his computer, which thankfully, thank god, it was really really easy,
- 1:06:54he starts telling me how Justin Bieber had been tweeting at him and I
- 1:06:58look at him. I go Justin Bieber. He goes, yeah, he's
- 1:07:00talking to me privately. He's on tour and he's talking me privately, and
- 1:07:03he's like, you want to see these tweets? And I go, yes,
- 1:07:06I want to see these tweets and direct messages and it's clearly some dude
- 1:07:11just just fucking with them. And this guy had no clue, and I'm
- 1:07:15like, all right, man, you know best to luck with that man?
- 1:07:17And uh, I gotta go fix him. And he's like, hey,
- 1:07:19you should come back sometime, you know, thanks for all this help.
- 1:07:21And I'm like, now, no, it's cool, man, Yeah,
- 1:07:24I'll definitely come back some time to the to the house. And uh
- 1:07:29so I left there and I told my friend the whole when I when I
- 1:07:31when we were leaving, I told my friend, I said, don't ever
- 1:07:33ask me to do this again. I said, I literally felt like I
- 1:07:38was about to get stabbed in that house at any point in time. But
- 1:07:40uh, but it was funny because it was they called they called it the
- 1:07:46fight clubhouse. Uh, and uh, it was just it was just that
- 1:07:49that That's the anecdote I wanted to tell you, Jim, But um,
- 1:07:53but you know, so just in closing, Jim was probably, yeah,
- 1:07:57there's probably other houses like that all over I've seen a few houses like that
- 1:08:02in Philadelphia, Um, because that's where I'm actually at. And I've seen
- 1:08:06a few houses where it's just you walk in there there's you know, waters
- 1:08:10dripping in from the third floor all the way down to the basement. Uh,
- 1:08:14and you're like, why the hell has in this house just been you
- 1:08:15know, bulldozed or demolished. But uh, you know, but so just
- 1:08:19in closing, Gym, where can people find you out online? There's no
- 1:08:25there's no seeing it. Um right, I could be bad about remember just
- 1:08:32check in on anyway. That's it. Well, you know I mean you
- 1:08:40and I unicate on Twitter. Who Jakay Jim Oules, thank you so much
- 1:08:47for coming on, sir, Well, thank you, Dave. I'm glad
- 1:08:50we did it. It was a lot of stuff. I want to thank
- 1:08:55Dave so much for doing such a great job on this episode. If you
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