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- 0:03You are listening to the IFH podcast Network. For more amazing filmmaking and screenwriting
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- 0:14Podcast, Episode number seven thirty one. Screenwriting is the most prized of all
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- 1:53Now, guys, this episode started off as one thing and has ended
- 1:57up being something much much better than I originally thought. Our guest today is
- 2:02Will Hicks, and Will's been in the business for many, many years,
- 2:06working with studios in the script development area, worked in production for a long
- 2:10time, and it's just a wealth of information. And Will wrote an amazing
- 2:15book called The Screenwriter's Workout which he actually creates workouts creative workouts to get your
- 2:23mind and your craft kind of like juiced up and build up those muscles,
- 2:28and it's a pretty amazing approach. I've never seen an approach like that before.
- 2:32So we do talk about that book and some of the approaches he does
- 2:36about that, but honestly, when we started talking, it is this.
- 2:40This episode, this conversation is essentially a masterclass in screenwriting. We're talking about
- 2:47everything from plot to structure, to character development, to villains to antagonists to
- 2:53protagonists. We cover everything, and we're using examples from some of the best
- 2:58films of all time and why certain things work and why other things don't work.
- 3:04It just was a wonderful kind of stream of consciousness conversation and I absolutely
- 3:08love that. It runs over an hour and a half easily, and it
- 3:14is well worth any screenwriter listening to because it will make you think about screenwriting,
- 3:21possibly in a new way. So, without any further ado, please
- 3:23enjoy my intriguing conversation with Will Hicks. I like to welcome to the show,
- 3:31Will Hicks. How you doing well? Doing well? How about you?
- 3:35I'm doing very good, my friend, I'm doing very good. We've
- 3:37had a very spirited conversation even before we got started on this thing because today,
- 3:45as of this recording, mister James Cameron released a masterclass. And I
- 3:49generally don't fawn over masterclasses in general. Some of them are good, some
- 3:54of them are, like you know, just basically YouTube videos. But there's
- 3:59a handful of really good. But it's James Cameron. And I was fascinated
- 4:02to see what James Cameron was doing, and I've just been sitting there consuming
- 4:05it, and then we started talking about it and how he's very underrated as
- 4:10not only a filmmaker but as a screenwriter. And you actually bring him into
- 4:15your coursework, right, I do. Yeah, there's a bunch of takeaways
- 4:19you can take away from Cameron. It reminds me of a story he tells
- 4:23about I believe he was growing up in Canada and he would cut grass for
- 4:28a living and you look at these massive lawns and say, oh my god,
- 4:32this is going to take forever, just this huge, daunting thing.
- 4:36And so then he would focus on one row at a time, one row
- 4:40at a time, and he equated that to filmmaking. It just into screenwriting.
- 4:44It seems like it's this massive endeavor, but you break it down into
- 4:46its granuar level. One line at a time, one line at a time,
- 4:50and suddenly you're you're done. Not only that, just to scenecraft alone.
- 4:58When you look at I think there's this, there's this bit of a
- 5:01perception. Hey, because you have commercial success, you know your work is
- 5:05not artistic, And I just disagree with that vehemently. I think you can
- 5:10have you can have both a work that not only reaches a large number of
- 5:14people, but can also be an artistic you know it can. It has
- 5:18something to say and meaning. And just how he constructs his scenes, they're
- 5:23just tight, tight, beyond tight. His dialogue worthy of study. Yeah,
- 5:28his story structure, I mean, and you go back to watching any
- 5:32of his any any work early late mid from the recent as reason as Avatar,
- 5:39which is now a decade, Oh it was, it's over ten years
- 5:43we've seen an Avatar. It's he's he's insane, insane man in the best
- 5:47possible way. And now we're going to get four avatars back to back to
- 5:53back to back. Apparently so, but you look at a terminator right,
- 5:58read that script, read aliens. Read the abyss. Oh my god,
- 6:02the abyss true lies any of this and anytime he I remember when Titanic was
- 6:08coming out, everyone was like, oh, he's oh, this is going
- 6:11to be a bomb, this is going to be crazy, which everybody.
- 6:14That's the long story. But I always used to tell people, I'm like,
- 6:15in Cameron, I trust whatever he does, whatever he does, he
- 6:20hasn't failed me yet, which is rare for a filmmaker because most filmmakers,
- 6:25you know, stumble or didn't hit the mark. And that's okay, that's
- 6:28all artists to that. But for what reason? Cameron, every one of
- 6:31his movies, in my eyes, at least hits the mark from I mean,
- 6:34True Lies is exactly what he wanted it to be. And Aliens was
- 6:39exactly in Titanic, and then even Avatar, and even Avatar when Avatar was
- 6:42coming out, after everything he's done, people were like, oh god,
- 6:45blue people, Oh this is this looks ridiculous. And I'm like, hey,
- 6:49okay, he made a movie about a boat and we all knew the
- 6:51ending. Okay, we all knew the ending, and he used it against
- 6:56us and in creating tension, which was masterful. It's masterful how he did
- 7:00that. It's remarkable. It's so many lessons you can learn. Do you
- 7:02agree, No, absolutely, and it's funny. I think that the length
- 7:08of Titanic works for it because you know, we've reached we've reached the point
- 7:12where in the film where it's like, Okay, this movie should be ending
- 7:15sometime soon. And there's all these little moments there where Jack goes under the
- 7:19water, comes back out of the water spoiler. And if you haven't seen
- 7:24this on you guys, yeah, that was kind of my THINGU they got
- 7:28it, and then you're like, oh, he just know he didn't.
- 7:30And it starts to use its length to actually, you know, advance the
- 7:33storytelling, and then from a structural perspective, you know, talking about story
- 7:38structure and so forth, it's just like beautiful, beautiful, analyze it.
- 7:43And the real knock or the real concern with Titanic back in the day was
- 7:46everybody knew Cameron could do action. He had proven it time and again,
- 7:50so nobody in the studios weren't worried about that. It was well, we
- 7:54haven't really seen a love story. Now. To me, I go,
- 7:58it's all we've seen, thank you. That's my point. Every movie,
- 8:03every movie, from the chur Lies to Abyss to Aliens, determinator their love
- 8:07stories. And that's exactly it. And so you know you're seeing you hear
- 8:11in that scuttle and you're like, really, did you not watch the Terminator
- 8:16not Orterminator two Ortreminnator two. Like their love stories. One is between a
- 8:22man and why there was the love of a son and a daughter, a
- 8:26son and the mother. Like it's just I mean the abyss. That's all
- 8:30that is, is a love story. Yeah, and so and so that
- 8:33you know, the whole conventional wisdom it is kind of al right, whatever,
- 8:37and so yeah, I felt like we'd be in good hands. But
- 8:41in particular, you know, going back to the original Terminator, to me
- 8:45that that was kind of the finest of the two. I get into debates
- 8:48for this all the time because they're t two fans and so forth. But
- 8:52I mean, you're taking that world and bringing it upon us for the first
- 8:54time in addition to all the heavy lifting you have to do with a story.
- 8:58But yeah, mit, logically constructed just just thing of beauty to watch
- 9:03and budget and on a low budget and on a very low budget, and
- 9:07then of course launches you know, Terminator too, with you know, much
- 9:11more or much greater resources at hand. But I felt the storytelling and and
- 9:16Terminator one was just to me it was superior. And that's you know,
- 9:20comparing uh two gems and saying, oh yeah, this one has more facets.
- 9:26Okay, yeah, yeah, it was kind of cool. I uh
- 9:31I had a screenplay going to development with the guy who shut down Titanic from
- 9:37the studio, and so you know, it's kind of like, holy crap.
- 9:39This guy, you know, went down and told James Cameron, you
- 9:43know, you need to shut down and here he is working with, you
- 9:45know, little old me, and I'm like, okay, So that was
- 9:48kind of cool, my my little connection there. We'll be right back after
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- 10:01My Favorite, and then and then we will actually continue with this actual interview,
- 10:05but we just started to geek out a little bit about Cameron. Is
- 10:07that my favorite Cameron story I've ever heard it, which actually was in one
- 10:11of the book, one of his books on his career, is he was
- 10:13on the Abyss. And if anyone has not seen The Abyss, not only
- 10:18watch the Abyss, but you have to watch the documentary about the Abyss that
- 10:22comes with the DVD or the Blu ray because it is probably arguing one of
- 10:26the best documentaries up there with Hearts of Darkness about the making of a film.
- 10:30You just like see the absolute abuse that that entire crew, including Cameron,
- 10:35took to make that it was an impossibility. Who go shuts down a
- 10:39nuclear power plant or has a what a decommissioned nuclear power plant, fills it
- 10:45up with the water and builds a set at it like he's insane. He's
- 10:48an insane man, and I love him for that. But one day he
- 10:52was he was good. There was some suits that came in from from the
- 10:56studio going, hey, what's going on with this? This is getting a
- 10:58little bit over budget here, which I think he ended up being around fifty
- 11:01million in nineteen eighty eight, which which was a pretty big budget with you
- 11:05know, no major big stars in it at the time. And Cameron had
- 11:09just come up from a decompression period of about about three hours, because you
- 11:15have he was underwater so long you have to decompress, and he was always
- 11:18the last one, first one in, the last one out, so he
- 11:20had just got done decompressing. He came out and this suit starts walking towards
- 11:24him and as he gets out, he has this helmet on and these helmets
- 11:28were if you remember watching the movie, the helmets, you could see through.
- 11:33They designed the helmets themselves so they can shoot and see and listen to
- 11:37dialogue and all this kind of stuff. So as he's taking it off,
- 11:39he sees this guy and he starts to talk to him a second or two
- 11:43about but he knows who he is, I mean, he knows it's the
- 11:46studio. So he takes the helmet and throws it on top of the guy's
- 11:50head. Now, without any air, you can't breathe. There's no air
- 11:54connected to it, so now it's like he's basically suffocating. The dude grabs
- 11:58him by the tie. He hangs him over the tank feet almost dangling.
- 12:05He's just there like this, can't breathe, and he says if he falls,
- 12:09the guy's not gonna make it. I mean again, not something you
- 12:11want to do in today's world, in any time of period. But it's
- 12:16fascinating to hear these mythical stories. He was like, if you ever come
- 12:20on my set again, I will kill you. And then he throws them
- 12:22back on. They pull the head off. He got it, got in
- 12:24the car, got on the plane, and that was the last time any
- 12:28suit ever showed up on the set of Tactic. No, it's great.
- 12:33Yeah, that's called negotiations. So that is a that that's a James Cameron
- 12:37negotiation. And I've heard he is softened over the years. I mean,
- 12:41you know, I've heard he's I knew a lot of people who worked with
- 12:43him on Titanic, and I've heard the stories and also on Avatar. But
- 12:48he's still James Cammeron. He's always going to be Jafs Cammeron because he's frustrated,
- 12:50because he's he's playing at a level that most human beings aren't. There's
- 12:58and I always tell people, if there's one, if he's basically the only
- 13:03human being on the planet, arguably that could make Avatar. Who could walk
- 13:07into a studio and go, I need five hundred million. I'm going to
- 13:11take about three or four years to develop this technology. It's going to be
- 13:13about an ip that no one's ever heard of. I'm creating a new IP
- 13:18and hopefully it's going to work. Who else no one's not getting that.
- 13:24Fincher's not getting that, Spielberg's not getting that. No one else on the
- 13:28planet is going to get that and then also be able to pull it off,
- 13:31like he's one of the few people that can do it. So anyway,
- 13:35that's enough about mister Cameron. I just we just got excited about the
- 13:39new Master Class. I just wanted to talk about it. But anyway,
- 13:41will we're here to talk about you and what you do, sir, or
- 13:46how did you get into the business. So kind of the little bit of
- 13:50a long story that goes back all the way to Star Wars. The initial
- 13:56rely to that film and I saw it as a little kid. My dad
- 14:00took me to see it. Actually I didn't want to see it. I
- 14:03was at a like, I don't know, some little camp or whatever,
- 14:05and all the kids were talking about it and I hadn't seen it yet,
- 14:07so I'm like, I'm sick of this movie before even seeing it. But
- 14:13my dad had heard about Lines, so we took off from work early and
- 14:16we went to go see this film. And I walked in there just some
- 14:20little kid from a podunktown in Georgia and came out of there knowing what I
- 14:24wanted to do for the rest of my life. And it was profound an
- 14:30experience. I mean, it was in a theater and so that sort of
- 14:33set that path in motion. Now, the logical part of me was like
- 14:39crazy making movies for a living. You might as well might as well told
- 14:43my parents I wanted to deal crack, you know. It's like, Oh,
- 14:43I want to go up be a crack dealer. You know. It
- 14:46was kind of perceived that way, and of course they would be like,
- 14:48oh God, he's going to be living on our couch for the rest of
- 14:52his life. But it set that in motion. I'd never have any had
- 14:56anything move me in that way, and so that sort of launched that career.
- 15:01I tried a bunch of different things, you know, because cognitively I'm
- 15:05like, okay, you know, the odds of making it in our businesses
- 15:09are slim. But eventually I just came back to it. I'm like,
- 15:13you know, if I don't try this, if I don't do it,
- 15:16I'll regret it for the rest of my life. There's a ditch that has
- 15:18to be scratched. I've got to at least if I try and fail,
- 15:22all right, I can deal with that. I can live with that,
- 15:24but I have to try it. And so that's what I did. Led
- 15:28to film school at the North Carolina School the Arts or the University of North
- 15:33Carolina School, the Arts School of Filmmaking, and from there I started working
- 15:39in production and did a ton of production. And you know, back then,
- 15:43my thought was, well, movies get made on the set. It
- 15:46was only later that you figure out now movies get made in boardrooms and they
- 15:50get shot, and they get shot on a set. But at the time,
- 15:52you know, I was all about that. While I was pursuing a
- 15:58career in production, I was also pursuing screenwriting, kind of trying to do
- 16:03both and balance the two. Her production career was doing extremely well, so
- 16:07it didn't leave a lot of time for screenwriting. But I was part of
- 16:11a screenwriting association and we had this outreach programm where we would teach screenwriting classes
- 16:17and so forth, and so I was tapped to do that. So I
- 16:21was teaching these screenwriting classes and one day my wife made the observation that you
- 16:26know, when you come home from your classes, you're all like excited and
- 16:30stoked and really happy, and when you come back from the set, you're
- 16:33kind of awful and miserable. And so you know, of course, when
- 16:37your wife makes a suggestion, it's kind of like, okay, but listen
- 16:38to this. But I realized she was onto something. There was something rewarding
- 16:45about teaching that I wasn't getting from making movies. Oddly enough, you know,
- 16:49and so I decided to make their career shift there. And it happened.
- 16:53Actually, I was working on I don't know if you ever saw Cabin
- 16:56Fever Eli Rolph film. Yeah, So I was working on that, and
- 17:02there was one more morning where the rest of the crew got wrong directions from
- 17:08locations, so everybody was lost. And I was already there because my team
- 17:12had been working on the set the previous week, so I knew how to
- 17:15get there. And it was just this pre dawn morning. It was freezing
- 17:19cold, all these stars in the sky, and nobody was there, and
- 17:25so I had a moment to think and reflect, which is rare when you
- 17:27work in film. Normally it's next thing, next thing, next thing,
- 17:30and you're always slammed. And had an epiphany and in that moment, I
- 17:34was like, you know what, I'm going to shift my career and I'm
- 17:36going to I'm going to teach. So that that led to well, led
- 17:41to us sitting here right now, and there you go. There it turns
- 17:45out, yeah, it's I came up to the similar I came up with,
- 17:49like I don't want to be a PA anymore. After, Like,
- 17:51you know, it's three o'clock in the morning, I'm out here. I
- 17:53got to figure something else out. I'm like, hey, there's that there's
- 17:56a computer at the office that edits called an avid. Let me learn that
- 18:00air conditioned maybe some carbal tunnel. I think that would be a good place
- 18:04for me to make my bones. And that's how I kind of started as
- 18:08well, Yeah, it's funny. It's just the different paths that you go
- 18:12down. And I was thankful for all my experiences because they informed the teaching
- 18:17obviously, but I was really fascinated by the form. And you know,
- 18:19looking back to that that day a long time ago in a theater far far
- 18:23away, and looking back to that moment, what I realized is I couldn't
- 18:30figure out why this movie Star Wars Again affected me so and I wanted to
- 18:36know why. And so that sort of set me on that journey. So
- 18:41in academia, at least I get to study the form and the purity,
- 18:45and it's there's a purity to it. It's kind of like being at the
- 18:47at the temple. Then you don't have to worry about. You know,
- 18:51some the producers coming through saying, hey, you need to make these changes
- 18:53for for reasons that have nothing to do with the story, and it's understandable
- 18:57from their perspective. I get it, but it's no I can study the
- 19:02purity of the craft and really dive into it. And you also, you're
- 19:06in good company because it also launched many other careers. That movie that started
- 19:10it in started it out. And not to go back to Jim's camera,
- 19:12but that was one of the reasons why he jumped in as well, was
- 19:15because after watching Star Wars, he was like, well, I gotta I
- 19:18gotta make a movie. It's it's funny. So one of the first days
- 19:22of film school when I when I went there, they gathered the incoming class
- 19:27and so there are you know, I don't know a one hundred of us
- 19:30or so in there, and all the professors were up front and they asked,
- 19:34hey, what movie inspired you to make movies? And you know,
- 19:37and somebody said, you know, The Searchers because I was a d's favorite
- 19:41movie. I'm like, all right, suck up. But somebody said,
- 19:45you know, Citizen Kane. Then somebody said Star Wars, and then another
- 19:48person said Star Wars, and they asked a few other people. Then another
- 19:52person said Star Wars. We'll be right back after a word from our sponsor,
- 20:00and now back to the show. So finally the professors you could tell
- 20:06they were fed up, and they just finally said, all right, how
- 20:08many of you here were inspired by Star Wars to make movies? And two
- 20:15thirds of that class raised their hand, be among be among them. And
- 20:21I sat there and sort of taken all that in. I'm like, holy
- 20:23a, I'm like, you know, I'm home, I'm with I'm with
- 20:26my peeps. But b I realized that was the impact of that movie.
- 20:32It inspired an entire generation of filmmakers, not only you know, people in
- 20:37general, but actual filmmakers who were somehow touched by that film and then wanted
- 20:41to go out and pursue this crazy art form of ours. And the funny
- 20:45thing is, though, the person who said that that Citizen Kane inspired them,
- 20:51I think that's absolutely yes, because I love Citizen Kane. I think
- 20:55it's you know, it's it's it's you know, it's it's it's it's what
- 20:59it is. It's it was a groundbreaking film, but there wasn't like a
- 21:03swash of people like you know, especially if your generation in sitting down in
- 21:07the like well, yeah, I was sitting it down watching Citizen Kane the
- 21:11other day. Like, no, man, you watched Cizen Kan because you're
- 21:14introduced the Citizen Kane by going to class. It's not a movie that just
- 21:18comd of pops up and you're like, oh, that black and white film
- 21:21looks fantastic, Like no, but the Star Wars, Yeah, that was.
- 21:25That was kind of my kind of running joke about it. It's like,
- 21:27yeah, and you know what, Kung Fu Panned two was seen by
- 21:32more people than Citizen Kane in sixty years and it's now. Does that mean
- 21:37it's that's a measure of its artistic success. No, But when you think
- 21:41about it, I mean, if you make a movie and nobody sees it,
- 21:42it's like the movie doesn't exist. And those filmmakers and I'll stick with
- 21:48Kan Fu Panda two for whatever reason, but you know, they had a
- 21:52chance to share their message, to share their art, to share what they
- 21:56think with other people. To me, that's what the film is all about.
- 22:00It's about it's about sharing your sensibilities, about what you think about the
- 22:04world. And we're able to share it with a lot of different people.
- 22:10And yeah, not a knock on Kane actually like Kane a lot, but
- 22:11yeah, exactly, But it's but it's not one of those films you're like,
- 22:15there's not there's nobody has you know, Citizen Kane dolls and uh,
- 22:19Citizen Kane action figures and Citizen Kane on the wall. Generally speaking, that's
- 22:23just not one of those films. It is a classic film and it should
- 22:26be studied, and it's what he did was remarkable on Orson Wells is a
- 22:30master and all that kind of stuff, But it's not the movie that inspired
- 22:33a generation to go to the move to become filmmakers. It's just not.
- 22:37But Star Wars, yeah, absolutely launched. God how many and even two
- 22:44thousand and one was another one, like how many you know people saw that
- 22:48and like, well, I think, well I gotta do that now.
- 22:52Yeah, that's exactly it. And and you know, ironically, you know,
- 22:56it's not that I make or would write science fiction. It was just
- 23:00it moved me somehow, and that was really the kind of the key piece
- 23:03of it. And when you find that films, I try to, you
- 23:07know, advise my students that whatever film. That is, if it was
- 23:10teenage mutant Ninja Turtles and it somehow touched you, don't ever let that movie
- 23:15go because it had something in it that said something to you, that inspired
- 23:21you, no matter what it is. Like, my favorite guilty pleasure movie
- 23:25is the old Flash Gordon film up. Yeah, of course, fantastic total
- 23:33guilty pleasure movie. When you put his hand in that thing and you don't
- 23:37know if he's gonna get oh my god, it still freaks me out.
- 23:41Yeah, And I usually like, you know, it's kind of you know,
- 23:45teaching film and stuff. You're you're supposed to like the other films,
- 23:49shall we say yes? But I'm like, now there's something about it.
- 23:52I mean, just it's the weirdest combination of things ever. You have this
- 23:55art deco style from the thirties, you have Queen doing the sound the science
- 24:00fiction film, and somehow it's like they gave you this recipe for a slushy
- 24:04and it's like, really, you're gonna put all this crap in it and
- 24:07it comes out it's like this awesome slushy and you never would guess it.
- 24:11So I don't know just that one. That one, and there's a certain
- 24:14degree of camp that I could really appreciate in the film. Yeah, and
- 24:18as film students or as a students of the craft, everyone listening here is
- 24:22that that's obviously studying the craft and wants to learn more about the craft.
- 24:27There are those films that touch you, like Star Wars touched most, you
- 24:30know, the huge amount of people, and uh. You know, there's
- 24:34certain films that when you were younger hit you, but then when you get
- 24:38older and you watch it again, you're like, that didn't meange. Well,
- 24:44Like I remember watching I remember watching blood Sport and I was like,
- 24:47oh my god, this is the greatest film I've ever seen. Uh,
- 24:51and then I watched it the other day I'm like, oh, this doesn't
- 24:55this does not hold up. So I've now made the choice of not going
- 25:00back to watch full versions of some of these old movies that I have wonderful
- 25:03recollections of because I have a feeling to that like oh that movie meant that
- 25:08to me. But then I go back and watch it and it ruins it
- 25:11sometimes, so it depends, but some movies transcend Star Wars. You can
- 25:15watch right now and it completely holds and continue. We'll continue to all and
- 25:18I think as a storytelling tool or lesson you can learn is George did such
- 25:26an amazing job with the structure of that story, using the hero's journey at
- 25:30such an expert level. I mean he was literally talking to Joseph Campbell about
- 25:34it as he was writing it. It's done so surgically that it will hold
- 25:41forever, regardless of sometimes maybe some of the visual effects might be a little
- 25:45janky things like that, But overall though, it will hold because of the
- 25:51story and because of the structure and those characters and how he was able to
- 25:55weave them all together. That thing will never I don't think that will overage.
- 25:59I mean still my kids to watch it now and their new generation who've
- 26:02grown up watching really high end visual effects and really high end storytelling, and
- 26:07they're actually much more literate story consumers than you or I was, because we
- 26:12didn't have as much content to consume as we were growing up. And it
- 26:17still hits them. It still goes right to the heart of it, and
- 26:21that's something that's you want out magic in your stories, in your scripts.
- 26:25Yeah, and I would I would say that comes that pours out of the
- 26:27characters, pours out of the characters, pours out of the tale it's being
- 26:33told. I like to think, and I teach a class called Deconstructing Star
- 26:37Wars where we dive into this that's amazing. So yeah, no surprise,
- 26:41I suppose given my background. But looking at it, to me, the
- 26:45big bang of Star Wars where all starts is that moment when Luke is walking
- 26:52out looking at the twin sunsets, and that's where it all. It's that's
- 26:57the big bang of that entire universe. Is some kid stuck on a farm
- 27:02wanting adventure, and that's everybody. But that's everybody, And that's how universal
- 27:07is that. It's and not a die and not a piece and not a
- 27:11piece of dialogue in that image. By the way, it's not like it.
- 27:15It is just the imagery. I mean, we know who the character
- 27:18is at that point, and he's a young boy living on a farm.
- 27:21But that moment there's not like, wow, I wish I had some adventure.
- 27:23No, there was no dialogue there. He just looks, and everywhere
- 27:27around the world, wherever you are, you just go, yep, that's
- 27:32what we want. We want that thing. We want to get out of
- 27:36where we are at one stage or another in our lives. We want to
- 27:38get out of where we are, or just go to another place, or
- 27:41go on a vacation or go on an adventure on something. When we said
- 27:45before, it's uh, it's it's remarkable. You're right, but that is
- 27:48the big bang of the entire Star Wars universe. I would agree with you.
- 27:52And it's interesting because you know, why do you go to movies to
- 27:56do the same thing, all right, to experience something that you can necessarily
- 28:02experience in real life or if it's a realistic film, you know, experiencing
- 28:06real life on steroids or something like that. But you know, to me,
- 28:10it's as much a film about the the about filmmaking as it is anything
- 28:12else. And then you touch on a really important point. It's something I
- 28:17discussed, you know, quite a bit in my book, but not to
- 28:19plug the book, but it really kind of cuts to the heart of how
- 28:22cinema communicates story and it's that idea that scene is silent, and the reason
- 28:30it works is because it's silent, and we the audience then insert whatever.
- 28:36You know, we could be thinking, oh, yeah, Luke is checking
- 28:37out, why are their two sons? And we could think that and it
- 28:41would work, or you know, obviously what the filmmaker intended, which is
- 28:45just longing for something. But notice, because it's silent, we put our
- 28:49thoughts in there and as a result, whatever works for you maybe different than
- 28:56works for me, but we both have the opportunity to do it as opposed
- 29:00to having yeah, other than having the on the nose dialogue and like,
- 29:06wow, I wish I had some adventure like which we see sometimes in Syriac's
- 29:10like no, just shush, shush, keep quiet. We were talking before
- 29:12we came on about finding inspiration or story elements from different weirdest places ever,
- 29:22and I was like, oh, I still remember this David Fincher commercial because
- 29:26I loved the David Fincher. I've studied all his commercial work and his music
- 29:30video work, and some of the stuff that he does is you know,
- 29:33they think of a lot of people think of him as a visual storyteller and
- 29:37you know, very technical, and his films are aesthetically you know, surgical
- 29:41almost, they really are, and they don't give them enough credit for emotion
- 29:48and character development. I think that's you know, I mean you look at
- 29:51seven, or you look at Fight Club and things like that. But this
- 29:53commercial was so simple. We'll be right back after a word from our sponsor,
- 30:03and now back to the show, which was clear for Lonnie. For
- 30:08Lonnie, I think her name is. She was the girl from Men in
- 30:11Black and Not Men in Black Meet Joe Black. And she's sitting in a
- 30:15restaurant with an older gentleman, a good looking older gentleman, in a fancy
- 30:19restaurant, and she says, you much younger green. She must be in
- 30:22her early twenties, he must be in his probably late forties, early fifties.
- 30:26And they're having dinner, and then all of a sudden, it's raining
- 30:29outside, and there's a big glass window in the restaurant, and this young,
- 30:33strapping young guy who has desperation in his face, starts very allah the
- 30:38graduate banging on the glass, going you know, hi, dockhem, and
- 30:45everyone's like, oh my god, who is this? And she sees it,
- 30:48and she's like making the decision at that point, do I stay with
- 30:49this older, stable guy or do I go on this crazy adventure with this
- 30:55young one with I have no idea what's going to happen. And she decides
- 30:57to get up, goes outside, They kiss, they embrace in the rain.
- 31:02Everyone starts clapping, and of course then you pan down and go Levi's
- 31:06But the story was there and I put all everything I just explained to you,
- 31:11I made that up, meaning like I don't know who that get.
- 31:14That could have been her father, but I don't think it was, you
- 31:18know, I actually implanted the storyline in there, and I added the whole
- 31:23thing like this this guy. That guy could be super rich, that kid
- 31:26and he could be very successful. I don't know, but the way he
- 31:30left it open like that, you implant your own emotions there and your own
- 31:33storyline and just like the two moons in look yeah, and that's and that
- 31:40to me is the power of cinema. It's that ability, and it's one
- 31:44of those things we you know, talk about like a novelist for instance,
- 31:48they'll give you a story and you supply the visuals, you know, based
- 31:52on their words. Film we're just the opposite. We're giving you the visuals
- 31:57and asking you to start assembly that story, put the story together. Now
- 32:02obviously everything is is highly guided and and just like in the in the commercial,
- 32:08but it's that idea no no no, if you want to create meaning
- 32:12it's done by the person watching it and heavily guided by the filmmaker, who's
- 32:16you know, presenting these two images and saying, all right, put them
- 32:20together. And that's uh, it's it's an interesting thing. That's one of
- 32:24the things. Not that it's not, you know, an interview about Star
- 32:28Wars I suppose, but going back, Star Wars was a very experiential film.
- 32:31And think about it, Lucas creates an entire galaxy by from a bunch
- 32:37of dudes sitting around in rubber suits in a bar, and you imply,
- 32:42and we add all of that stuff to it. We're like, oh,
- 32:45yeah, where'd they come from? And what's their backstory and so forth,
- 32:47and so we start adding all these layers to it. It's a it's a
- 32:52it's a playground for your imagination to then start filling in all those pieces and
- 32:57then you watch the film to see what did I fill it incorrectly? I
- 33:00not fill it incorrectly and so forth, and so really masterful films, I
- 33:04think that's the craft. Usually a statement I say that gets me in trouble
- 33:09is a movie is not a story. It's evidence that a story is being
- 33:15told. Oh that's a great that's actually really interesting live looking at it.
- 33:20That's can you can you dig into that a little bit because I'm curious and
- 33:22where you're going with that. Well, it's the idea that so much of
- 33:28what we do in film makes storytelling and cinematic narrative is indirect. And you
- 33:35even touched on it, you know, talking about, oh, you don't
- 33:37write on the notes, Well why not? That'll tell the story the fastest
- 33:39way possible and you can pack more story in m but it clunks. It
- 33:44almost always clunks. And then we go, okay, why you know,
- 33:49why don't we want to be told these things? What do we want to
- 33:52do here? And we want to figure it out. We want to figure
- 33:54it out for ourselves, and so much of cinematic narrative is indirect. And
- 34:00it led me to the conclusion like, oh wait, we're not. It's
- 34:06not a pure story in the sense that we're sitting down around a campfire and
- 34:10you know, telling you these things, but rather we're showing you all of
- 34:15these events and allowing you, the audience member, to put it together in
- 34:19a very Once again, it's guided, it's very guided, but putting it
- 34:22together a way to come up with the story collaboratively film is in Oh man,
- 34:28it drives me crazy when people say oh, films a passive medium.
- 34:30No, it's not interactive, is it. Yeah, it's And the joystick
- 34:35isn't here. You know, the joystick is in here, it's in your
- 34:37mind. And you start and you start watching the film saying, oh,
- 34:42okay, well why'd they say that? And so forth, and then the
- 34:45film explores those things. Really smart films are are interactive by Nietzschure, right,
- 34:50And you start thinking about subtext. I mean, the subtext is not
- 34:53a subtext is not efficient, That is not efficient in the story tell like
- 34:58you can't you can't when you're telling a story around the campfire. Subtext is
- 35:01a difficult thing to have a conversation about, like you can't be like she
- 35:06said, clean the dishes, But what she really meant to tell her husband
- 35:09is that you don't love me anymore so, and that's hard to say,
- 35:15but it's so much easier in the visual medium to say, because of acting,
- 35:22because of environment, because of those nuances that very difficult to put in
- 35:28the word, extremely difficult to put in the rint word. But in cinema
- 35:31you're allowed to do that. And again we'll go back to that scene with
- 35:34the two moons. If you would have said that like, hey, I
- 35:38wish I had adventure, It doesn't have the same umph to it. If
- 35:45you would, just if you say the exact same thing in your head,
- 35:47because you feel like you're being pulled along, that you're part of this,
- 35:52you are luke. If someone tells you what they're feeling, you're not luke
- 35:57anymore. And that's where I think a lot of screenplays and films fail is
- 36:00that they don't give the audience the opportunity to identify and become that character.
- 36:08So you know, when we watch Indiana Jones, which now part five is
- 36:13being filmed as we speak, Hey man, I'm there. Why not I
- 36:17have to there? Look, you know, will will it? Will it
- 36:22nup the fridge? I don't know. But but when you're watching Raiders of
- 36:27the Lost Arc or Last Crusade or Temple of Doom, you're you're Indy.
- 36:32When you watch a James Bond movie, you're James Bond, you know,
- 36:37and you go along these adventures with these But the subtleties of what they say,
- 36:43how these I mean, Indiana Jones is full of subtexts. I mean
- 36:45every word he says almost some sort of subtext, And you know, oh
- 36:51my god, it's so amazing the way the way they crafted that again,
- 36:53George Lucas and Steven Spielberg on that one, it's it's remarkable. But you're
- 36:59absolutely right. I really never kind of put it to words like you,
- 37:02just like how we've been having this discussion, and I hope people listening can
- 37:07really understand the power of the interactivity of the audience and only masters of the
- 37:13craft, both of screenwriting, but I think also of filmmaking because it turns
- 37:17into like there's only so much you can do on the page, and that
- 37:22it's then you have to give it over to the actors and the director and
- 37:24the day because some things happen on the day that you just can't write.
- 37:29So it is that collaborative art form. But is those masters like Hitchcock.
- 37:32I mean, I mean, he's one of the ones that everyone has to
- 37:36watch. But Hitchcock is one of those filmmakers that he even said it,
- 37:39He's like, I wish one day that I could just have a machine that
- 37:43I could touch a button and hit that in motion, and touch a button
- 37:45and hit that motion, play the audience like a piano. And that's what
- 37:50his films. I mean, you go back and watch Psycho. I mean,
- 37:54it's just a masterclass it all. I mean, moment there's a pier
- 37:59in north By, north Way, there's that period for for Togo that he
- 38:01had like six or seven his his his, his time. They're all masterful.
- 38:07They're just so masterful and you just go along with it and they still
- 38:09hold up even though they're older films and things like that, but the storytelling
- 38:14still holds up. And you're you're along for the ride. I mean you
- 38:16are, you are Oh god, what's her name in the shower? Jane
- 38:23Janetly you are Janet Lee. And when that figure comes in with the with
- 38:30the you feel like you've been you've been stabbed. It's fascinated to watch that
- 38:36sequence. It's so amazing to watch. Yeah, and with and within the
- 38:40context of the film itself because back in the day, Janet Lee was the
- 38:45star. Oh there's that, of course, and of course, you know,
- 38:50no movie kills off its star halfway through and then you're going, Okay,
- 38:53well, who do I hang out with now? Because you know,
- 38:57what's name Anthony Perkins? Like, do I hang out with this weird no?
- 39:01Yeah? And you don't have a choice. You have to. And
- 39:05it's like, Okay, well, I don't have a choice. I have
- 39:07to this is now my main character. So just the the guts. Uh.
- 39:10That was just the brilliance of the film in my mind because it played
- 39:15with your expectations. You're like, Okay, she'll somehow get out of it.
- 39:16No, no, she's gone. What do we do now? But
- 39:22there's but there's something to be said there about the curiosity aspect of it.
- 39:25Now now you're in. Now, I'm hooked. You are engaged because all
- 39:30your preconceived notions have been thrown out the window. And Hitchcock knew that when
- 39:36he was making that film. He knew that you thought that she's the star,
- 39:40she's going to keep going, and he completely flipped it. And now
- 39:44you're just like, wait a minute. If they could kill off the main
- 39:46actress, they can kill anybody off at any moment to the rest of this
- 39:50film. So I need to pay attention now. And then Wes Craven did
- 39:54it as well with Scream. We'll be right back after a word from our
- 39:59spawn, sir, And now back to the show when he killed off Drew
- 40:07Barrymore at the beginning of the before like you know, she's the best I
- 40:10was going to go to arguably arguably the biggest star in that movie. She's
- 40:15like, oh yeah, it's a Drew Barrymore movie, and she's on the
- 40:16poster and everything, and first ten minutes you're like, holy cow, it's
- 40:23I I call it now the Walking Dead effect, which is the when you
- 40:28watch the series The Walking Dead. Uh, and there's other series that kill
- 40:31off people. I think games are thrown. I never watched games with throw.
- 40:35But there's no one safe that that, no one safe thing keeps the
- 40:39audience at edge, especially if it's you've especially in long long form like television
- 40:45or streaming, that you can emotionally attached over, you know, you know
- 40:51sometimes seasons after seasons and you're like, oh my god, they're gone now,
- 40:54but knowing that at any moment it's gone. That's such a horrorful storytelling
- 41:00technique. It is, and it says that in motion. So now we're
- 41:05like, okay, nobody's safe, and you have to watch because you're not
- 41:07quite sure what could possibly happen next. And it's kind of like the I
- 41:13guess example from high school music, like the Surprise Symphony. Yeah, and
- 41:17you get this little bang. It's like, well, okay, and you
- 41:21never know when it's going to show up again, so you have to you
- 41:22always create that that level of tension in there, and films do the same
- 41:25thing, or can do the same thing if you want to go there.
- 41:28And that's why I love Bohemian Rhapsody, maybe the craziest, the craziest pop
- 41:35song ever written. And and you just sit there like, wait, is
- 41:37that an opera? Is that now? It's rock? Now? Is now?
- 41:40It's a ballad? Like what's going on? But you know that's we'll
- 41:45go That's another world we can go down later. But it's very, very
- 41:47similar though. It's like you were completely don't know what's going to happen.
- 41:52And if you, as a screenwriter can, as a storyteller, can keep
- 41:57your audience guessing in a and a thriller and a whore and an action,
- 42:02you will work for the rest of your life and you will always get paid
- 42:07to write. The bottom line. If you can keep the audience or the
- 42:10reader or the whoever's consuming your content on not knowing what's happening next, you
- 42:20want you want? Because we're so educated, for better or worse, everything's
- 42:23been done. It's so hard to surprise us. That's why when we are
- 42:28surprised with a twist. You know, remember sixth Sense Jesus Christ, when
- 42:32six Sens came out, I mean, one of the greatest, one of
- 42:37the greatest twists endings of all time. You built the entire career off of
- 42:39that. Now he's like, shit, I have to have to do twist
- 42:43endings all the time now, you know. It's it's like he had to
- 42:46build his career around twist endings. But that was one of the greatest twist
- 42:51endings ever in your as an audience member, if you can. And that's
- 42:57why that movie, I mean, it's essentially it's essentially a drama slash ghost
- 43:01story. Not really particularly scary, some scary parts, but it's essentially a
- 43:06drama. And we're all like, okay, we're all walking down the story.
- 43:09This is very nice inn but when that thing happens, everything from that
- 43:14moment before gets rewound in your head and you're just like, oh, wait
- 43:19a minute, and it just blows people's minds. And it was just remarkable
- 43:22as a storyteller. I have such respect for I mean, what he's been
- 43:25able to do and his career as a writer is remarkable. Well, and
- 43:30it kind of taps into the idea you know, of you know, a
- 43:34really good ending is not I didn't see that coming. A really good ending
- 43:37is I should have seen that coming. And you go back and watch.
- 43:42So, for instance, you go back and you know, watch sixth Cents
- 43:45like it's all there. Oh you just And that goes back to that idea
- 43:52of allowing the audience to put these elements together. It kind of goes back
- 43:54way back to the day you know, Billy Wilder you said, Ernest which
- 44:00you know, said let the audience add two plus two. They'll love you
- 44:02for it. And so it's the idea that we're sitting here looking at this
- 44:07movie as as an audience member, sticking with six cents for a little bit
- 44:10and going, okay, yeah, there's poor kid he's seeing and all the
- 44:15clues are there that oh yeah, Bruce willis once again spoiler you know,
- 44:20ain't among us these days. But we don't put it together that way because
- 44:24the way the film is presented. And then when you get the twists,
- 44:28that's the key you needed to understand to then go back and look, oh,
- 44:30no, wonder she didn't talk to him. He's not there because only
- 44:35the kid Hayley Joe Osmon whatever the kid's name is. Only he can see
- 44:37dead people. And so it's it's playing with those audience expectations and saying,
- 44:44okay, here's it's. Think of a movie as kind of like a Q
- 44:45and A session and think about the questions the audience is going to have and
- 44:49how they're going to be assembling the information you're presenting to them, and then
- 44:52you start to play around with it and allow them to draw the conclusion that
- 44:55oh, this isn't quite right, and then you can you can flip it
- 44:59on them and create those reversals and create that idea of unpredictability. It's really
- 45:02hard we think about it. You know, movie audiences today in particular are
- 45:08really savvy and they're like, okay, yeah, I see it coming.
- 45:12And if they could see that ending coming, usually not a good thing.
- 45:15But the irony is they also want the ending they want. So, you
- 45:20know, if I have I'll go back to Star Wars because any easy example,
- 45:24if I go back and Luke is there in the trench, you know,
- 45:29and use the false Luke let go, you know, and and Vader's
- 45:31like I have, you know, and blast him, and Luke just kind
- 45:35of goes and vaporizes, Well, he sucks. It'll be like this is
- 45:39the worst movie ever. You've got to be kidding me. And the Empire
- 45:43goes and blows up the Death Star and or blows up you know, the
- 45:45rebel base. We want that ending. We want the hero to be triumphant.
- 45:51We just don't want to see it coming because then it becomes predictable.
- 45:55So how do you create the predictable ending the ending we want, but make
- 46:00it unpredictable? And that's really the art of it. Well, I was
- 46:02just watching I was just watching The Handsmaid's Tale, and we're, as of
- 46:07this recording, getting towards the end of season four. I'm not gonna give
- 46:10any spoiler alerts, but something happens to a character there who's a bad character,
- 46:15and we're all going like, this guy needs to get his up,
- 46:19his coming up and uh in one way, shape or form. And then
- 46:22as you start seeing the episode, and we've been there four seasons built up
- 46:25so this, I mean, we've built this up and we're waiting for the
- 46:29character and something a twist happens for a second, like oh wait a minute,
- 46:32and our and our main character is doing something and you're like, oh
- 46:37wait, a minute, and then I literally was sitting there with my wife
- 46:39looking at and like and we're both trying to figure it out. We're like,
- 46:43is she gonna do? This? Is actually happen? Where's this going
- 46:45to go? Where are they? What's going on? And we're like,
- 46:47and we're so savvy. I mean, I'm probably a little bit more savvy
- 46:51you know, story analysts than both you know people, because I do this
- 46:55with her living so and my wife has just been with me for sees become
- 47:00one as well and shoe catch stuff. So we're like, this this we
- 47:04didn't see it coming exactly the way it happened, like we've looked. Oh
- 47:09and then afterwards you're like it was perfect, Oh my god, it was
- 47:15cool. Perfect. Well, like Breaking Bad. The end of Breaking Bad,
- 47:16you're like, you want, how do you end that. I'm not
- 47:19gonna break I'm not gonna spoil it for anyone, but you should anyone listening
- 47:22to this should have seen Breaking Bad at this point the entire series, but
- 47:24that ending, you're like, how do you end arguably one of the best
- 47:29shows ever written, ever ever produced, arguably some of the best storytelling ever,
- 47:35how do you end it? And didn't see it coming at all,
- 47:38completely original way they ended it, and it was so satisfying. And that's
- 47:43why endings of shows are so bad, because it's just it's just so hard.
- 47:49Yeah, it is. Well, you know, you think about TV,
- 47:51it's built to extend, you know, it's built to sustain, and
- 47:54it's not really built. You know, we can talk a lot about you
- 47:58know, film, at least the origins of film, they're really meant to
- 48:01be self contained, not you know, franchises, sequels and all that stuff
- 48:06disregarded. But it's meant to be a self contained story, whereas TV is
- 48:09meant to be a sustaining story goes on and on and on and so sometimes
- 48:14those endings, particularly for TV shows, are really hard because the medium is
- 48:19built differently, or at least the approach to the medium is built a little
- 48:22bit differently. Now, you you were talking to me off camera about this
- 48:27old PlayStation game called crash Bandicoot and that you found some gem of something in
- 48:36that in regards to story, can you please elaborate, Yeah, sure,
- 48:39a bit of a backstory to it. Well, my son was really little
- 48:45and I was playing this crash Bandicoot. He loved a game, he loved
- 48:47to watch it and watch me play this thing. But it wasn't just like
- 48:52the game is its entirety. It was a single level called the Great Gate
- 48:55of All Things and check it out if you haven't seen, watch I walk
- 49:00through on YouTube or what have you. But this one level, and I'd
- 49:02play the level and He's like again again, So I'd have to play the
- 49:06level again again again, Okay, and you know what you do for your
- 49:08kids, like all right, So I'll play it again and again and again.
- 49:13And he never got tired of this single level of this game. I
- 49:15must have played that thing. I don't know hundreds of times. I'd play
- 49:20with the controller upside down. I'd play with my eyes closed, you know,
- 49:22because I'm so bored to the stupid level. Right. And then there
- 49:27was this one little sequence in there where and if you're familiar with the game,
- 49:31there's a platform and it's tilted and there's this green moss stuff on the
- 49:37side of it, and then a little platform down below it. So it
- 49:40kind of looks a little bit like that, and the green moss stuff is
- 49:45flippery. And this may sound like the stupidest thing ever, but it hit
- 49:51me in that moment that, oh we were just taught a rule. Green
- 49:53moss is flippery. Now it's a video game, so very simple rule.
- 49:59We'll be right back after a word from our sponsor, and now back to
- 50:06the show. But we were taught at without steaks because there was a platform
- 50:12for you to land on so that you would be safe. Now imagine if
- 50:15you just slipped off and died, it'd be like a stupid game. I'm
- 50:19not gonna go back. Started over and what hit me in that mine?
- 50:23And then the next little sequence there they show you that, oh you can
- 50:27slip backwards, you can slip forward, and it kind of explores the idea
- 50:29of this green mos stuff. Of all things, But what dawned on me
- 50:34in that moment watching that thing, or the epiphany I had, was,
- 50:37oh, that was a storytelling element if we were to translated to film,
- 50:42that was set up without steaks. It was introduced before the game needed it
- 50:46and could then explore it. And then the connection for me and of all
- 50:52things, I was watching a duel like Spielberg TV movie and there's a shot
- 50:58close to the end, it's a really wide shout of the overturned and there's
- 51:01just a single wheel spinning and then they punch in for a close up all
- 51:07of that wheel, and I realized, oh, that's the same thing.
- 51:10That element was planted in the story to achieve the effect of just that wheel
- 51:15spinning at the end. And so the conclusion I drew from it was every
- 51:21element in the story has to be laid in before the story itself needs it.
- 51:29In other words, you put these elements in as storytelling devices before you
- 51:34actually need them to affect the narrative, affect the plot, affect the characters.
- 51:37And so that was the conclusion I drew, and it led to all
- 51:39sorts of good stuff that came out of that simple little moment there with green
- 51:44Moss and a crash Bandica game from two thousand and one or whatever. Yeah,
- 51:47and that's actually really profound. It's a really powerful tool that good screenwriters
- 51:53and good storytellers need to do. And if I'm maybing it back to mister
- 51:58Jimmy Cameron, if you go back to the scene in Aliens where Ripley at
- 52:04the beginning of the movie says, hey, I can I can drive that
- 52:07loader. I'm second level certified or something like that, and they'll like,
- 52:12go ahead, and they get into and she gets into that loader, and
- 52:14she starts walking around, starts moving boxes and stuff. There's the plant,
- 52:17right that's the plant. That's the plant right there. Because at the end,
- 52:22when she goes and fights the queen and arguably says the greatest line in
- 52:27sci fi history, get away from her, you bitch. Uh, it
- 52:31all came together at that moment, and it's all about that set up,
- 52:37payoff, set up, payoff. And if every good movie they'll drop a
- 52:42little nugget in or they'll focus on, you know, the the the letter
- 52:46opener on the desk for no reason at the beginning, and then towards the
- 52:51end, I'm like, that's what kills the bad guy, you know.
- 52:53So that is something that screenwriters really should in storytellers and directors really should focus
- 53:00on trying to do those plants and you know, set up reveal, set
- 53:02up, reveal, set up revealf And that's a yeah, And that's exactly
- 53:07the conclusion I do as well, just the power of that technique. But
- 53:12it's not just the elements within the plot itself, the content. It's actually
- 53:15how you how you tell the story itself, the devices you're going to use
- 53:21to convey the narrative, so to connect crash Baticude of all Things to Eternal
- 53:27Sunshine on the Spotless Mind. If you've ever seen that phone, it's a
- 53:30complete direct line. I completely see it, sir, Thank you. Yeah,
- 53:35we probably just lost to all the rest of your audience. But no,
- 53:37no, if you look at it early on in that film, they're
- 53:42going to show you all these different devices. So you have that's scene with
- 53:45Jim Carrey walking out of Barnes and Noble and into the living room of his
- 53:49friends and what at all frickod scene. But then you go, well,
- 53:54okay, they could have just cut you cut to the flashback of him in
- 53:57there with what's your name, Clementine, and then cut back to the to
- 54:01the living room, but they didn't, and you realize, oh, they're
- 54:05planning that as a storytelling device. In other words, be on the lookout
- 54:09because we're going to be messing with your perceptions in this movie, and we're
- 54:13going to be blending things like that and just cluing in the audience before the
- 54:16story needed to do it. And then once you've planted that device, then
- 54:21you can now use it because it's now familiar to the audience. And so
- 54:24that's what Crash Banditico did with Green Moss. But the key was that little
- 54:30platform that was there were no stakes to it, and it was just implanting
- 54:35that as a rule in the story. And so really good films they actually
- 54:38teach you how to consume the film, how to interact with the film.
- 54:44And back to what you were saying about plant playoff or set up in payoff,
- 54:49that's allowing the audience to interact with it. In other words, yeah,
- 54:52you're on board with me. You caught my setup, and now you
- 54:57catch in my payoff and informs the audience cluse the audience in that, oh
- 55:01I get this movie, I understand it, I'm with it, and so
- 55:05then you start looking for those elements and it just adds to the entertainment.
- 55:07So it really is about teaching the audience. Yeah. So then and we
- 55:10can go back to Star Wars again with the plant and payoff, which is
- 55:15the force. You set the force up so much. George sets the force
- 55:20up so much at the beginning and throughout the film about the force to force.
- 55:23The force. The jedis the force, the force. And at the
- 55:28end when he's down that he's about to shoot and he's using his technology,
- 55:31he's like, use the full sloop. That's the moment that everybody goes,
- 55:37Oh my god, it's the power is not outside, the power is within
- 55:42myself. And that is such a powerful message and it's so subtle, and
- 55:49it's and it's wrapped around a you know, a serial sci fi action movie,
- 55:55but that message hits so close to home for humanity that any struggles that
- 56:02we have, if we actually look inside, we will find the answer.
- 56:07That's what that is, and that's what the force is, and that's why
- 56:10people you know, there's actual people who run the religions around Jedi and all
- 56:15that stuff, which there's there's books, there's the Jedi Bible, and there's
- 56:19all this kind of stuff. I mean, I'm speaking from people who obviously
- 56:22aren't watching this. I have a life sized Yoda behind me. Obviously everyone
- 56:24knows that I'm a Star Wars fan. So but I do not go that
- 56:27far. I've never dressed up, not that there's anything wrong with it,
- 56:30but I've never done anything. I've never gone that far. But that concept
- 56:35is so so so powerful and one of the reasons why that film. And
- 56:39you obviously teach a class in this, So are you on board with what
- 56:42I'm saying? Oh, absolutely, Yeah, it's that universal aspect of it.
- 56:47No, I've never been a you know, on a desert planet,
- 56:51a in a galaxy far far away, and my dad isn't Darth Vader spoiler,
- 56:58but I can I can relate to that notion that there's some there's something
- 57:04else there and that that ability is inside you. And even Vader has that
- 57:07line in the original Star Wars. You know, don't be too proud of
- 57:09the technological arory constructive. Yes, it's not about the technology, dude,
- 57:14It's about believing in yourself and then diving into kind of Lucas's background and what
- 57:20led to the making of Star Wars. You see, this is a very
- 57:22personal story that's laid inside this huge you know you death stars and all that
- 57:28other stuff. It's at it's heart, it's a personal story, and so
- 57:31I think it gets the best of both worlds. Yeah, it's about his
- 57:34dad. It's about his relationship with his father. I mean, that's what
- 57:36he said very much, So that's what I mean, That's what Yeah,
- 57:38it's what Star Wars is about. It's a personal story. So there's that
- 57:43added level as well that you can sense there's an authenticity there in that relationship
- 57:49with with Darth Vader. And the best thing about it is that set up
- 57:53isn't paid off until the second movie because we don't know that he's his father.
- 57:59We don't know that until and arguably the greatest twist ending in movie history,
- 58:06you know, as a success aside is Empire Shark's back. Obviously,
- 58:12Oh no, that that's that's money, and it's like holy smokes. Now,
- 58:15ironically, at least my understanding is that wasn't the original plan. Yeah,
- 58:22and that sort of came about. It resolved a lot of story issues
- 58:24and it's like, oh yeah, let's make him his dad. It works
- 58:28perfectly, and indeed it did, but originally he wasn't the dad. But
- 58:34then you go, okay, Darth Vader, dark father or whatever. But
- 58:38I think, you know, looking at that, and it really is a
- 58:43telling moment, and it's one that I I kind of think about a lot.
- 58:45In that one particular class is when Obi Wan you know, Luke asks
- 58:51him, you know what about my dad? You know, Andy's like,
- 58:54well, you know, Vader betrayed and murdered your father. And there's this
- 58:58little pause there and I asked my students, you know, what's so we
- 59:01want thinking right there, and almost all of them it's like, hey,
- 59:05he's about to lie. But the original intent was no, it was just
- 59:08something. It was a painful episode. At least my understanding that Lucas didn't
- 59:13quite have that father thing figured out that came about as a result of writing
- 59:16imparsrespect right. And that's the thing too, is things that we see in
- 59:21cinema history that are like, well, that's exactly the way it was supposed
- 59:23to be. Wasn't at all the way the initial people were, the initial
- 59:30creators were thinking of. I was talking to somebody the other day who was
- 59:32telling me you should read the first draft of Back to the Future and then
- 59:37read the shooting draft about it a completely different movie. Did you ever read
- 59:40the first draft that Back to the Future. I've not read the first draft.
- 59:44You should send it to me totally. So the first draft, there
- 59:47is no clock tower. We'll be right back after a word from our sponsor.
- 59:58And now back to the show. There is no lightning. They were
- 1:00:04going to go to our nuclear power plant to recharge the car to go back
- 1:00:08in time. Oh wow, that was where that was a whole thing.
- 1:00:12But then the studio said, hey, guys, we haven't got the budget
- 1:00:15for this, you're gonna have to do it on the back lot. And
- 1:00:16then Zamechis and Gale, both the bobs both looked. But there's a clock
- 1:00:20tower. I don't know, let lightning hit it and that's enough energy.
- 1:00:23All right, let's do that. A brilliant solution. It's a much better
- 1:00:29solution. But that's the thing. And a lot of times there is kiss
- 1:00:32me that happens with with storytelling and things that I mean. Obviously, the
- 1:00:39one of the great scenes in Raiders of the Lost Ark is that whole scene
- 1:00:43where this guy, you know, the wheeling the knife and and there was
- 1:00:47I think Spielberg said that they shot it like six or seven times. There
- 1:00:51was a full action sequence to finally Harrison just like pulled out a gun and
- 1:00:54shot him. And we're like, well, that's the take. Why didn't
- 1:00:57we figure that out before? That wasn't on the page, But on the
- 1:01:00day it just made the most sad It's for one of the best laughs of
- 1:01:02the entire movie. Oh yeah, it totally takes what works. We're expecting
- 1:01:07this big, huge fight sequence and if I recall correctly, like I think
- 1:01:12Arison forre was sick with stomach flue. Like the folks almost set were sick,
- 1:01:15so we couldn't really do it, and oh, what an elegant solution.
- 1:01:19And it kind of goes back to that whole idea of limitations fostering creativity
- 1:01:22and coming up with a much more creative solution than what we intended, because,
- 1:01:27like he we could show you all this, but you know, just
- 1:01:29because we can show do I mean we should And I think the original Star
- 1:01:32Wars benefited from that in the sense that I can't show you. I don't
- 1:01:37have the budget to show you the entire galaxy, and so as a result,
- 1:01:40I'm going to show you little snippets of it, which then allowed the
- 1:01:43audience to fill all that in. And you know, I think when we
- 1:01:46look back at that some of these craft films from you know, back in
- 1:01:50the day that were really well crafted, but they had all these limitations to
- 1:01:52what they could show. That was indeed exactly what they created was a place
- 1:01:58for audiences to put the to add to the story, to to interact with
- 1:02:01it, and so forth. And so you know today and even Lucas talked
- 1:02:07a little bit about it. He's like, yeah, sometimes I have gotten
- 1:02:10my vision on the screen, and nobody really much cared for it, okay,
- 1:02:15but to me it was it was always, uh, you know,
- 1:02:16when you George Luis, you can do that. But to me, it
- 1:02:21was like, oh, this is cutting against what cinema does best, which
- 1:02:23is creating these moments and allowing us to find meeting in them. When we
- 1:02:28provide the meeting as filmmakers. When we complete the picture, we we kind
- 1:02:32of nuke the audience. We removed part of the entertainment value of it because
- 1:02:37it's your vision and not our vision. It kind of goes back, Gosh,
- 1:02:44always are leading back to Star Wars today for some reason, you know,
- 1:02:47to the idea. I saw a picture of Lucas, you know,
- 1:02:51wearing a hand shot first T shirt. I'm like, dude, you don't
- 1:02:53want to changed it. Of course, hand shot first. But it's really
- 1:03:00funny because then you go, well, Lucas's version of Han, the character
- 1:03:07is very different than our version of Han, and we took and so we're
- 1:03:10like, Noah, the character would never do that. But then who are
- 1:03:13we, I mean, we're telling the dude who created the character, you
- 1:03:16know, like, no, your character would never do that. It's a
- 1:03:19co construction. It's us the audience saying no. And that's and that's why
- 1:03:22there's so that's why there's so much vitriol towards Lucas sometimes about Star Wars,
- 1:03:29because people are so passionate about the like the prequels were an abomination, how
- 1:03:34dare you? The re releases We're an abomination? How dare you? And
- 1:03:37there's just so much passion about it. And I always, I'm always from
- 1:03:40the from the school of thought. I'm like, it's his. It's his,
- 1:03:44man, It's like it's his painting. If he wants to change a
- 1:03:45couple of strokes, that's up to him. Man, that's not our like
- 1:03:50we can enjoy it. But but that's how it's it's it's his. It's
- 1:03:54his blessing and his curse. He was so good as engaging the audience,
- 1:03:59but now he's got to deal with the audience. Yeah, and then we
- 1:04:02go, that's not that's not how I put it together, dude. And
- 1:04:08so no matter what he does, it's wrong. And I think, you
- 1:04:10know, as a filmmaker, he's like, all right, well, you
- 1:04:12know that it is. But I want to tell these stories, so I
- 1:04:14will, and you know, got on them for that. But me at
- 1:04:17the end of the day. I think when something is so beloved, it
- 1:04:20becomes no, this is not how we built it, and you know,
- 1:04:26it's like, well, that wasn't my intended at all anyway as a filmmaker,
- 1:04:30So it is kind of a yeah, it was a blessing and a
- 1:04:32curse. I think you put it quite well, and I think that the
- 1:04:36going back a little bit to that Indiana Jones scene play, if you,
- 1:04:40as a screenwriter can play with the expectations of the audience so that perfect scene
- 1:04:44illustrates that so wonderfully that we're expecting a full blown fight sequence and then in
- 1:04:50a second we don't get it, and it's such a pleasurable surprise because you're
- 1:04:56playing with our expectations. Hitchcock did that with the cycles Psycho and killing off
- 1:05:00the lead actress. If you can play with the audience's expectations a bit in
- 1:05:05your writing, again, you will work forever. Yeah. It's it's you're
- 1:05:13messing with the audience. That's what you're doing, and you're you're taking and
- 1:05:16it's tough because you go, well, gosh, an audience has made up
- 1:05:18a bunch of individual human beings, all with different you know, thoughts and
- 1:05:21ideas and so all right, how do I do that? And you actually
- 1:05:25create an audience, you can you build an audience in your film. Films
- 1:05:30start off, as you know, the successful ones in my opinion, start
- 1:05:33off as being aiming at a very broad sensibility and then begin to narrow and
- 1:05:40become more self referential. They start teaching you things. Here's the teacher saying,
- 1:05:44films teach, but they start teaching you things inside the film, and
- 1:05:47those are those setups. And then the payoffs come along. And what happens
- 1:05:53is you turn a group of individuals into an audience, and by the end
- 1:05:58of the film the film, most films typically become increasingly self referential. They
- 1:06:02were relied back on things they've shown you earlier in the movie in order to
- 1:06:06pay off their endings. And so films that do that tend to do really
- 1:06:11well because it takes into account, Yeah, I've got a bunch of individual
- 1:06:14people who are watching this thing. I can't please them all by no stretch,
- 1:06:18and I'm going to be communicating in a very indirect way. But what
- 1:06:23you do is you start to guide the audience into that place where you want
- 1:06:27them to be, and the reaction you want to get out of them at
- 1:06:30the end, and so it's just inefficient. But that's the power of cinema,
- 1:06:35at least in my mind. Yeah, and there's are also some films
- 1:06:40that in some stories that age that are ahead of their time, and they
- 1:06:44age much better than they were when they first sort of initially were released.
- 1:06:46So a film like fight Club, which we're talking about the twist ending something
- 1:06:53that you need to again, it is such very much like the sixth Sense
- 1:06:56where you're like, oh my god, yeah, and they go back and
- 1:06:58show you all the things. They're like, you should have seen the signs,
- 1:07:00seen the signs comment she had seen a sign of But that story,
- 1:07:03I mean, if it's still one of my favorite films of all time,
- 1:07:06you watch it today, it holds, It holds so brilliantly, even though
- 1:07:11some of the technology might be dated as far as like you know, the
- 1:07:14computers and the windows and things like that. But the style of it,
- 1:07:18the storytelling power of that film, I still argue is probably it's probably his
- 1:07:25best, maybe other than The Social Network, because to make the Social network
- 1:07:30interesting is you're a master You're a master man. It's a story. Remember
- 1:07:34when that came out and you're like, oh, they're gonna tell the story
- 1:07:38of Facebook. Who cares about the story of Face? Man just cares?
- 1:07:42And look I mean good. No, I was going to say, yeah,
- 1:07:47both those films. I'm a superb. Actually, Social Network is another
- 1:07:50movie I teach in one of my classes. Just exquisitely structured. But if
- 1:07:56you watch it, it's going to use those setups and payoffs just brilliant like
- 1:08:00and it's going to use some of the techniques we were talking about here in
- 1:08:02terms of being able to insert us inside the mind of that character and how
- 1:08:08it does it. It just really flick and it's like, okay, yeah,
- 1:08:14there's the craft. When we look at film and in terms of being
- 1:08:17an interactive medium and involving the audience, it's a collaboration with the audience.
- 1:08:24It's a Q and A. Oh yeah, it is actually Q and A.
- 1:08:27You're always asking questions, Well, what is he going to do next?
- 1:08:29What is she going to do next? How are they going to meet?
- 1:08:30What's going to happen? Is the bad guy going to get away?
- 1:08:33Is that it's always these questions and answers going back and forth with the audience.
- 1:08:38Good movies are and I always like, I always like analyzing bad movies,
- 1:08:42like why doesn't this work? And you know, there's my favorite bad
- 1:08:46movie of all time is The Room. But the reason why the Room is
- 1:08:49so bad is that because I always I always say this is like when movies
- 1:08:55transcend, they're so bad that they transcend to good. That's one of those
- 1:09:01movies. There's just bad movies, and the Room is so bad that it
- 1:09:04becomes good. And if you analyze The Room, which it's hard because it's
- 1:09:11so bad, nothing works. Nothing works on a story level, on an
- 1:09:16acting level, on a craft level, none of it works. But the
- 1:09:21only reason why people stand in line to watch that movie, it's not because
- 1:09:26it's a bad movie, is because the creator was trying to create a good
- 1:09:30movie. And that's what came out the authenticity of because he didn't go out
- 1:09:35to make one of the greatest cult bad movies of all time. He truly
- 1:09:40believed he was making a masterpiece. And that's what made it so good.
- 1:09:45Oh yeah, that's the you know the Sharknado's of the world. Well,
- 1:09:49no, but Sharknado knew. But shark Nado knew what they were doing the
- 1:09:53second they came up with Sharks of the Tornado. We'll be right back after
- 1:09:58a word from our sponsor, and now back to the show. So it's
- 1:10:05and they tweaking it. But like you don't see the people in lining outside
- 1:10:10to see Sharknado in theaters. You know, there's not people with fan clubs
- 1:10:14about Sharknado, like not really the room. It's a freaking worldwide phenomen Oh
- 1:10:19yeah, yeah, I mean we can go. I don't know if you
- 1:10:20remember Birdemic, remember that thing? I get Birdemic? There's that was conscious.
- 1:10:26Yeah, that was a conscious thing. And you can tell a troll
- 1:10:29too, you know when you watch Troll two, which I by the way,
- 1:10:31I felt my soul die a little bit after I watched that movie because
- 1:10:35it was so bad. I actually enjoyed the documentary about the movie much more
- 1:10:40than the movie itself. It was so bad it was I can't. I
- 1:10:42literally died a little bit when I saw that film. But that was a
- 1:10:45film that the director had a vision and was thinking of making the greatest,
- 1:10:50you know, horror troll movie of all time. Uh, and there's you're
- 1:10:55right, but it's it has to be unintentional. If you go in intentionally,
- 1:10:59it doesn't work yeah, and that was kind of the thing with Burdemic
- 1:11:02that's sort of like, ah, yeah, it just doesn't feel and it
- 1:11:05ties back into of all things truth, and it's an idea. You know,
- 1:11:12I have a filmmaker who's trying to capture truth, and you boy,
- 1:11:15the audience can sense it. And if we get the sense that nah,
- 1:11:18they're just trying, they're purposely trying to achieve this effect by making it bad,
- 1:11:23then it unwinds the truth of the film and then we walk or you
- 1:11:27don't get quite the same reaction that. Really, that's a really great way
- 1:11:30of looking at that. I never really thought about that, but that is
- 1:11:32I use the word authenticity, but it is truth. It is the truth.
- 1:11:35As a filmmaker, you have this kind of social contract with the audience
- 1:11:42that you're going to try to entertain them, and you're going to try to
- 1:11:44do it in the truth of the story. Obviously, Star Wars is not
- 1:11:47a true story, but there is truth in it. There is universal messages
- 1:11:55in it that ring true. That's why it's so universally beloved throughout the world.
- 1:12:00And we're still talking about a movie that's what yours is now, I
- 1:12:04mean, fifty over fifty is at over fifty years old at this point,
- 1:12:08almost almost fifty, almost fifty, yeah, almost fifty, yeah, seventy
- 1:12:11seven. So yeah, So it's almost fifty years old now. And I
- 1:12:15hate to say, there's not a lot of films that are at that age
- 1:12:18that people constantly talk about. Rocky would be another one, Like you can
- 1:12:21watch Rocky one right now, and if you don't know the story of Rocky,
- 1:12:28it hits. It hits so perfectly. And I mean, and that's
- 1:12:33another person we talked about Cameron earlier. Still Owe such an underrated writer.
- 1:12:39I mean, he created Rocky Rambo and so many other things. He writes
- 1:12:45almost anything he does. I mean, but Rocky is you know, Jesus
- 1:12:48Christus Rocky. Yeah, No, I mean, and many many films later,
- 1:12:53And when you look at it, it's it's all character. It's you
- 1:12:59feel for this guy who's just kind of down on his luck, and you
- 1:13:02know, it's not the underdog story. Sure that's a component that feeds into
- 1:13:05it, but it's just another character who's aspiring for something and just things aren't
- 1:13:12working out. But universal is that, uh, and then gets a shot
- 1:13:15and then gets a shot that nobody in the world would ever get Like,
- 1:13:17you get a shot at the title and you're a bum. It's like,
- 1:13:21it's like a filmmaker going Steven Spiueber just called you up, and you're going
- 1:13:25to direct a two hundred million dollar movie. Yeah, but I've never been
- 1:13:30on set, uh, like you know. And then that was called Project
- 1:13:33green Light, but not quite but you know what I mean. But that's
- 1:13:39the equivalent of oh my god. And he gets a shot, and he
- 1:13:44initially refuses it, as he should because he's not insane, right, and
- 1:13:48it's like, oh, it wouldn't be very good. I mean, he
- 1:13:51just you know, and he has to be persuaded that there's our reluctant hero
- 1:13:57and our you know, refusal of a call. Mythologically speaking, mm hmm.
- 1:14:00But but within the context of the film, it totally makes sense,
- 1:14:03and we understand why he would refuse, you know, because he doesn't see
- 1:14:06himself as being much of anything. But then he goes for it, which
- 1:14:12you know kind of becomes the message of the film, right and then and
- 1:14:15and he needs Mickey to convince him to do it. The guy who saw
- 1:14:20the potential in him, but he never saw it in himself. He needed
- 1:14:24that that mentory figure. It all goes back to Joseph Campbell. Uh,
- 1:14:27that mentory figure that brings him, brings that out of him, and even
- 1:14:31in his own mind, he has to tell himself the story. I'm like,
- 1:14:34I'm not going to beat the champion of the world. I'm not going
- 1:14:39to win this fight. My goal is to stand on my feet and go
- 1:14:45the distance. That is the only goal I have in this this entire endeavor.
- 1:14:48I just want to stand and stay at a distance with the champ.
- 1:14:51That's all I want to do. When I stay there, I want to
- 1:14:54prove that to myself. I know I'm not good enough to beat this guy
- 1:14:57because he's the world champion. And even that one little story arc because they
- 1:15:01originally had him winning. They shot both endings, they shot both endings,
- 1:15:05they shot that he won, but they felt that the more powerful one is
- 1:15:09that he didn't win, of course, setting up sequels upon sequels upon sequels,
- 1:15:14but also he did And and you're exactly right in the scene prior.
- 1:15:17You know, he's there talking with Adrian and he's like, you know,
- 1:15:20nobody' difficult at a distance with Creed. You know, he's kind of doing
- 1:15:25his thing, and he's setting up, here's my victory condition and then we
- 1:15:28see we see how it plays out. But yeah, it would have been
- 1:15:31it would have been hey me, and especially at that era, so we're
- 1:15:34talking nineteen seventy six, so you know, we're still coming out of kind
- 1:15:39of American New Wave when most of those films ended, you know, downer
- 1:15:42notes, and boy, that would have been I think a big pill for
- 1:15:45the audience to swallow then, which is to have him emerged triumphant, because
- 1:15:49like, come on, dude, it undermines Apollo's character because Apollo, you
- 1:15:54know, it's the master of Disaster, the Count of Monti Fisto. It's
- 1:15:58so good. You know, you're good. Yeah, and even you know,
- 1:16:02part of me for kind of rambling, but even thinking of the character
- 1:16:04names, when you look at him, you have a rock going against Apollo,
- 1:16:10a god brilliantly you're right. Never even thought of that, but you're
- 1:16:14absolutely right. He's Apollo the god, and he's a rock. Yeah,
- 1:16:18hard who's gonna win this? They're good. Rocks are good at lasting,
- 1:16:25uh and taking punishment and taking punish and taking punishment. Yeah, and of
- 1:16:30course, you know, I mean, he's more along lines of rocky Marciano
- 1:16:32from a historical perspective, but just the you look at those small small details
- 1:16:38in there and they just work so well for the story and it's just kind
- 1:16:42of one of those things where it all comes together. But no, they
- 1:16:44they're the right ending for that movie is to not have him win, but
- 1:16:46have him win his self respect. And the funny thing is is because I
- 1:16:49know Stallone wrote up until I think the fourth one, and I'm sure if
- 1:16:53he wrote the fifth one or not, but he might have, but up
- 1:16:56into the fourth one. On the it's an arc of if you look at
- 1:17:00the first four Rockies, the set up and reveal, the setup and payoff,
- 1:17:04set up and payoff, You've built up this relationship with Apollo where now
- 1:17:09mister T is the bad guy and Apollo needs to help him, and that
- 1:17:13builds up that relationship to the point where a Rocky four everyone goes I still
- 1:17:17remember everyone like they killed the pola, they killed the pole, and that
- 1:17:23just I remember that, so like I'm like, I mean, You're like,
- 1:17:25what, how, what's going on? Then everyone rushed out to see
- 1:17:29the evil Russian guy, you know, beat the I just break you.
- 1:17:32Dolph Loungern and arguably one of the best performances of his life. He has
- 1:17:36like six lines and it's so amazing. But yeah, it was, it
- 1:17:42was, It was perfection. Even on that level, Stolone understood the audience
- 1:17:47and what he had built with those characters and was able to just play with
- 1:17:53the expectations again, because if you would have told me after watching Rocky One,
- 1:17:58I'm like, oh, in two movies from now, Apollo is going
- 1:18:00to become his best friend and help him defeat a new villain. Oh and
- 1:18:04by the way, then he's gonna have to pay revenge because some other guy's
- 1:18:08going to get Like you would have said, no, that's impossible. So
- 1:18:11you're playing with those expectations again over the course of multiple movies, which we
- 1:18:15all hope to have at one point or another. We have the ability and
- 1:18:17and the privilege to be able to tell a story over so many movies.
- 1:18:21Oh absolutely. And then it ties in really to the idea of Apollo not
- 1:18:27being a villain. He's an antagonist. Apollo is the hero of a Polo's
- 1:18:31story always. Yeah, and that's you know, that ties into two really
- 1:18:36good villains or antagonists, I should say. And so then it's like,
- 1:18:42oh, what a great, What a wonderful way of kind of reconcilement because
- 1:18:45always liked Apollo, it was cool. And to have him now helping or
- 1:18:49working with a hero, it's like, oh, that's that's just beautiful.
- 1:18:54What a nice compromise, because no, he's not evil at all. He
- 1:18:59was trying to you know, he sort of took the fight lightly as he
- 1:19:01should have, and it displayed hubris, which the ancient Greeks would have busted
- 1:19:05his shops for. And you know, Rocky you know, emerges triumphant eventually,
- 1:19:13but he was never a villain. He was antagonist and kind of delves
- 1:19:16into a little bit of difference between the two and still unsavle knew that he
- 1:19:20was able to you know, prode that character with you know, a tragic
- 1:19:25arc, but certainly an arc nonetheless. And that's the thing. Even in
- 1:19:29Rocky one, Apollo he was never a bad guy. He never did anything
- 1:19:33bad. If anything, he was giving him opportunities, yes, for selfish
- 1:19:39reasons, because he wanted to to get his image to be better. That
- 1:19:44was the reason why he, you know, chose this ridiculous idea of bringing
- 1:19:46a nobody in to fight the champ. Can you imagine like in the days
- 1:19:49of Tyson when he was at his power, Like he just brings some bum
- 1:19:53off the street who maybe had three or four fights or whatever, get destroyed,
- 1:20:00will be right back after a word from our sponsor, and now back
- 1:20:05to the show. But the brilliance of it that he was not a villain,
- 1:20:12and this actually leans into another conversation, which is the part of a
- 1:20:16villain. And I think that bad villains and bad antagonists don't have good They
- 1:20:24generally don't have a good story that they're telling themselves. So the idea of
- 1:20:30the twisting the mustache at the trail at the train station while the woman is
- 1:20:34tied up and the hero's coming to save it, that story at the time
- 1:20:40was very like, oh my god. But now you look at it,
- 1:20:42I'm like, why is he tied her up? What's the purpose? Why
- 1:20:45are you doing? You're just being bad for bad? That's boring. Bad
- 1:20:48for bad is absolutely boring. But someone like Thanos, who you know,
- 1:20:56they built Thanos up over the course of ten years, oh you know,
- 1:21:00dude, dripping him down like little little little easter eggs throughout all those movies.
- 1:21:06Thanos as a villain because he is a bad guy but his story that
- 1:21:12he tells himself, he's trying to do good. He's like, look,
- 1:21:15the universe is overpopulated, and I think the solution for that it's just the
- 1:21:18skill half everybody off. You know. It's just very pragmatic. It's just
- 1:21:23a very pragmatic way of going about things. Is it wrong? Yes,
- 1:21:26But in his stories like this is the only way I see. I'm trying
- 1:21:29to do a greater good in a very bad way. And most villains throughout
- 1:21:32history you start looking at, you know, power hungry dictators and things like
- 1:21:36that, and even throughout cinema history, the best villains always have just misguided
- 1:21:45visions of something good, trying to solve a problem, but just misguided in
- 1:21:50solving that problem. Magneto in The X Men, you know, he's just
- 1:21:55like, you know, oh, there is no working with these people.
- 1:21:58We are the superior race and we're now going to take over the world as
- 1:22:02mutants, you know. But then Professor Actes's other sides like, no,
- 1:22:05we could work with them, we can help them, we can. So
- 1:22:09it's like that, that whole thing. But he's an interesting villain as opposed
- 1:22:13to just a villain like I just if he would have said I don't like
- 1:22:16anybody else. I think I'm just going to kill people. It's boring.
- 1:22:20It's boring. There has to be a better story. Yeah, And when
- 1:22:26we think about that, so we look at the like the protags and antagonists,
- 1:22:29we're looking at two sides of the theme. And when you have the
- 1:22:32villain who's on the other side just saying just being evil for the sake of
- 1:22:35evil, you kind of think then it's like, there's no other side of
- 1:22:42the theme being presented. I think it's just one sided, and that becomes
- 1:22:45propaganda and we sense it and we're like, oh, okay, it's just
- 1:22:49all right, And so it starts to lose those layers. And then that
- 1:22:53ties back in a little bit too with the idea that the shadow archetype.
- 1:22:57You know, when we talk talk about hero's journey inside of the shadow represents
- 1:23:01a fallen hero, someone who was trying to be good, and when we
- 1:23:06look at their characteristics, you'll see, oh, there, they have a
- 1:23:10lot of wonderful traits, and then there's this one component. Typically it's it's
- 1:23:15related to selfishness. In other words, they're in it for themselves rather than
- 1:23:18for the benefiting others, and there's that that dividing line. The example I
- 1:23:26like to use is Hannibal Lecture of all people, who's a shadow archetype When
- 1:23:31when you look at the character really deeply, who who turned and who turned
- 1:23:34into an anti hero? Yeah, and that relationships cool too, But it
- 1:23:42makes sense because it draws on their their fallen heroes, their heroes who started
- 1:23:45out on the path of good or on the path to help others and realized,
- 1:23:49hey, wait a second, I've got all these powers, nobody's doing
- 1:23:51stuff for me. Then they decide to go into it for themselves. But
- 1:23:58if we look at Hannibal Lecter as a character and rattle off a list of
- 1:24:00traits like, oh, he's intelligent, it's admirable. He's a good artist.
- 1:24:09If you recall, you know, all the drawings he drew, all
- 1:24:12those from memory, doctor lector, you know that kind of like he's a
- 1:24:15fine you know, I guess he could run like a recipe channel. That'd
- 1:24:18be kind of cool. But he's polite, he's exceedingly polite, well mannered,
- 1:24:25like well mannered, like, yeah, he doesn't like the fact that
- 1:24:28together multiple makes and in the next cell, you know, it was rude
- 1:24:30to clarice, so he had him swallow his own tongue. If we rattle
- 1:24:35this list of traits, it's like, holy smokes, guy sounds great,
- 1:24:39and then you lay in, oh, yeah, okay, he maybe had
- 1:24:43you know, he eats people, goes one thing, he eats that thing.
- 1:24:46Yeah, one thing, he eats people. And that's the brilliance of
- 1:24:48that character and of that story. It's that, Yeah, you love you
- 1:24:54love Hannibal. You know you, you absolutely are you. You are in
- 1:24:59love with a cannibal, a vicious killing handled cannibal. And that's the brilliance.
- 1:25:08So that when you can love a villain that much, so much so
- 1:25:13that the villain then eventually turns into a hero in other movies, in other
- 1:25:17movies, and even arguably in Silence of the Lambs, it's it's he's the
- 1:25:21one that helps catch the ultimate bad villain of Buffalo Bill, who has no
- 1:25:27redeeming value whatsoever, none like he He's a sick, just sick person who
- 1:25:31has obvious issues, and obvious issues to say the least, does a few,
- 1:25:38but there's no redeeming. There's nothing redeeming about him. He I mean,
- 1:25:42that's nothing. I think the only redeeming thing about Buffalo Bill is his
- 1:25:45puppy. He doesn't hurt the animal he does, and that's like his only
- 1:25:49weakness is like, you know, that was the thing that finally, you
- 1:25:51know, one of the things that it was the puppy. That's the only
- 1:25:55thing I can remember of that character that's even remotely redeeming that he likes animals,
- 1:26:00Like you're reaching, I'm reaching on that one. Yeah, it's a
- 1:26:02bit of stretch. Yeah, dude, Okay, And that's exactly right.
- 1:26:11And so there's a difference between our our you know, shadow archetype and an
- 1:26:15antagonist. And so it's that notion of that fallen hero who kind of gave
- 1:26:20into themselves. And I don't know where we started or how we got started
- 1:26:25on this topic villain villains. It's those villains who do have like, Okay,
- 1:26:33I can see your motivations. I get it. And once again that
- 1:26:36ties us into how we relate to the film. We get it, we
- 1:26:40understand where they're coming from. And it's an intriguing question what would you do
- 1:26:43if you were putting those those shoes? And the filmmakers pop that as a
- 1:26:46question and now we may say, no, I would never kill off half
- 1:26:50the population. No, that's just wrong. But I can certainly see where
- 1:26:54Thanos is coming from, psychritic character identification with the villain. Once you do
- 1:26:59that, well, you got a good playground to play in a much more
- 1:27:01complex character than just you know, hanging out on the train tracks. I
- 1:27:04mean, so asked in the question, if you had the power of the
- 1:27:08Infinity Gauntlet, instead of killing off half a million or a half half the
- 1:27:13population of the universe, why not double the universe and have more places?
- 1:27:18Why not have more places for every more resources, Double all the resources,
- 1:27:21Triple all the resource make the resources infinite with the Infinity Gauntlet. The Infinity
- 1:27:29Gauntlet. Do you see, Thanos? You're wrong, sir, But but
- 1:27:32that's but that's a perspective. It's all about perspective on what he felt that
- 1:27:36was that was the way of going about it. But his and also he
- 1:27:41had so much pain because of that specific problem where they killed off his family
- 1:27:46and all this kind of stuff when he was younger. That that's why that
- 1:27:50pain caused him to go not towards the I'll just create more resources to I'm
- 1:27:56gonna have to kill half in his missiided way to do it exactly and notice
- 1:28:04what that does for us as an audience is that that cluses us in as
- 1:28:08to who he is as a person. Oddly enough, it reveals his character
- 1:28:14and it isolates it down. There's something we talk about like isolating the variable.
- 1:28:18It's a math term, but it's the idea that that personality, trait,
- 1:28:24whatever it is that drives that character. And I talk a lot about
- 1:28:27character design. I'm a design freak when it comes to the storytelling. But
- 1:28:32what it does is it isolates it down to, yeah, you could have
- 1:28:35chosen that, but you didn't, and that tells us something about who he
- 1:28:39is and also clues us into that aspect of pain, which can be relatable
- 1:28:44as well. And so really smart films will do that where it'll it'll say,
- 1:28:47yeah, you've got this choice, and you chose this why you know?
- 1:28:51And it kind of the questions implicit and then we watched the film to
- 1:28:55find out. Yeah, so you know, obviously one of the greatest films
- 1:28:59of wal time, Darth Vader. You know, at the core of Darth
- 1:29:00Vader, he's not a bad guy. He's angry, he he feels lost,
- 1:29:09but there's a humanity inside that villain. At the beginning, we don't
- 1:29:13see that. We just see the bad guy. But during the course of
- 1:29:16even the original trilogy, you see him arc to the point where he then
- 1:29:21becomes the savior. He becomes the redeem he becomes redeemed at at the end
- 1:29:28of Return of the Jedi. But that villain, you know, and then
- 1:29:33once you go back into the prequels, you kind of see where all that
- 1:29:38pain came from and the loss and everything like that that turned him into what
- 1:29:42he tended. But at the end of the day, though, he's still
- 1:29:46he's still he was still a good guy inside. Oh yeah, I mean,
- 1:29:50when you think about him, he's another He's similar to Hannibal Lictor in
- 1:29:54that regard. There's all these positive traits. Will be right, b after
- 1:30:00a word from our sponsor, and now back to the show. He's strong,
- 1:30:09he's intelligent. He wants to bring order to the galaxy. Okay,
- 1:30:12the galaxy is a messy place. He's going to tidy it up. He
- 1:30:15wants to reconnect with his kid. Think about it, Luke never sent him
- 1:30:17a Father's daycard and he wants to connect with him. Okay, that's nice
- 1:30:23too, and oh yeah, by the way, I want to rule the
- 1:30:26galaxy. Of his father and son. Okay, and you're willing to choke
- 1:30:30people and do a lot of chaos in order to achieve all these things.
- 1:30:34And so there's that once again loaded up with all these positive attributes, and
- 1:30:39there's that that trait that gets at what's wrong with that character, their character
- 1:30:45flaw. In some ways, you touched on something that's kind of cool.
- 1:30:49We can look at the idea between our protagonists and antagonists as one who arcs
- 1:30:55versus one who doesn't, and ask yourself this check out check out movies,
- 1:31:00typically the villain does not arc, they don't change, they don't learn the
- 1:31:01lesson of the movie. The hero does and succeeds. The villain does not
- 1:31:05and is destroyed. And for movies you mentioned seven earlier, brad Pitt,
- 1:31:12you know What's in the Bogs, Brad Pitt doesn't learn the lesson of the
- 1:31:16film and gets destroyed by it. Right A spoiler again, But that's the
- 1:31:24idea at the core of really's story and at the core of what films tend
- 1:31:28to do. The successful ones, in my mind, is when a character
- 1:31:32learns that and is willing to grow and change as a result of you know
- 1:31:36what the film is presenting them with they tend to emerge triumphant. When they're
- 1:31:40not, they tend to be destroyed. Yeah, that's a really great point
- 1:31:43of view because I mean, Brad Pitt obviously never learned a lesson, and
- 1:31:46the only person, even even Morgan Freeman, he doesn't learn a lesson.
- 1:31:50He knew the lesson the entire time and he was trying to teach it.
- 1:31:54But yet he was like, oh my god, I've I've failed. The
- 1:31:57whole movie ends on the counter. I mean, they'll well it's a down
- 1:32:00or and there's no question about it. Even John Doe's character, he knew
- 1:32:05what was going on. And John Doe throughout the entire movie doesn't change,
- 1:32:11doesn't he doesn't want to change. He's he's a villain, and no one
- 1:32:16really knows why John Doe does what John Doe does. There was no there
- 1:32:20is no motivation. He is a pure villain from the beginning to end.
- 1:32:27And he does have a slight, a slight twisting of the mustache. But
- 1:32:34he does a slight, a slight bit of twisting of the mustache because he
- 1:32:38doesn't have and I'm not going back into the movie. I'm like, but
- 1:32:43for him, it's a game and that and that's what moves and motivates him,
- 1:32:47is like, oh, there's a new pawn on the table, on
- 1:32:51the on the chess board, and that's in that summer set, in the
- 1:32:54summerset Brad Pitt's character, Uh, and I'm gonna play with him. Now.
- 1:32:59That happens midway through the movie, you know, midway, like,
- 1:33:01oh okay, now the game has changed. And again once that middle midpoint
- 1:33:05is the point of no return, it does it. You can't go back
- 1:33:09now. Oh now, now John don't knows who you are. It's screwed.
- 1:33:12You can't go back. It's such a great yeah, and oh yeah,
- 1:33:16and it's the right end for the film. But kind of going back
- 1:33:20to that midpoint, that's something you know, we talk about from a structural
- 1:33:24perspective. You know, I've referred to it as the apex or the big
- 1:33:27twist where the film will flip on its head just to kind of refresh the
- 1:33:32narrative halfway through, because you know, movie can be long, and if
- 1:33:35you're hitting the same beats over and over again, it can feel really redundant
- 1:33:40and slow. And so watch watch that sixty minute mark, or watch that
- 1:33:45apex beat that middle point of the film, and you'll see where they'll twist
- 1:33:47it just to you know, kind of revive the second act and add additional
- 1:33:53complications that will lead into the third. Yeah. So yeah, no moment
- 1:33:57and no it is. And you start analyzing all the movies that are have
- 1:34:00had any success in the world in the cinema history, they all have that
- 1:34:04midpoint. There is a point where the character can't go back to the ordinary
- 1:34:10world. If we're using Joseph Campbell's or terms. Uh, there is that
- 1:34:15point where you're like, Okay, I've now crossed the threshold. I can't
- 1:34:17go back, even if I wanted to, I can't go back. So
- 1:34:20that that perfect example in seven, once John knows who Brad Pitt's character is,
- 1:34:28there's no going back now, whether he wants to or not, it's
- 1:34:30over now. It's gonna go it's gonna go down this road. And uh,
- 1:34:34and you need that as a story in the story, you do need
- 1:34:38that point where at any moment that first half, the character goes, you
- 1:34:44know what, because before before he meets John Doe, John Doe sees who
- 1:34:46he is, he goes says, you know what, I'm just gonna drop
- 1:34:48out of this case, is this just too hard? I don't want to
- 1:34:51deal with this anymore. He could leave, arguably, but once John Doe
- 1:34:56knows it's over, you can't go back. It's now out of your control
- 1:35:00on it. And what's the midpoint in Star Wars I'm trying to figure out
- 1:35:04off the top of my head. I can't remember, but there's a midpoint
- 1:35:06where Luke, I think is when Luke goes off with Obie. I think
- 1:35:10that's the point where like you, oh, no, when when the farm
- 1:35:14burned, like you can't go back off. There is a hole, it's
- 1:35:16been burnt. So that's the point where we're like, well, I guess
- 1:35:19I gotta go down this way. Yep. I only have one path left
- 1:35:23and I have to pursue it and I have to follow it. And yeah,
- 1:35:27it's one of the things that you know when you think about different structures
- 1:35:30and different ways to approach your story and storytelling as a whole. And I'm
- 1:35:35a fan of what I call a structural overlay, which are two structures laid
- 1:35:40on top of each other. And one is that hero's journey structure that we've
- 1:35:45been discussing, and another is what I call the aturn structure, which is
- 1:35:48more of a character based structure, and it's the idea that through the pursuit
- 1:35:53of the plot, of solving the plot, we reveal who this character is,
- 1:35:58what their flaw is, what they have to deal with internally. That's
- 1:36:01that internal storyline. And if we really want to look at the story in
- 1:36:04a very broad sense or cinematic narrative, in a broad sense, I would
- 1:36:09maintain it's the external force of plot against the internal force of character, and
- 1:36:15these two things colliding, and that midpoint is where that internal storyline starts to
- 1:36:24come up to the surface where we can see it and get at it.
- 1:36:26We may have thought it, we've hinted at it prior to, but now
- 1:36:30it's like, oh, in order to solve the plot of the film,
- 1:36:32whatever it may be, I'm going to have to change this aspect of my
- 1:36:36character. And there's the character's arc. That's what it's presented there. So
- 1:36:42it really is two structures kind of laid on top of each other. In
- 1:36:44one is what I would maintain, even things like Save the Cat. If
- 1:36:49you were to look at that approach and that storytelling model, it's kind of
- 1:36:55taking those two structural paradigms and spelling out what happens at those junctures there.
- 1:37:01But it really is those two things that's the source material for all of it.
- 1:37:04It's kind of cool. But those two, those two structures that I
- 1:37:09just discussed overlaid on top of each other. One is telling you the plot
- 1:37:13storyline, and one is telling you the character journey inside. Very very very
- 1:37:17cool. And I also, you know, we've been going on and on.
- 1:37:20This has been a fantastic conversation and we can continue to talk about stuff
- 1:37:24forever, and I have a feeling, but I also wanted to bring attention
- 1:37:28to your book the screenwriters workout. Now, when I first saw the title
- 1:37:32for this, I was like, this is interesting. And and then when
- 1:37:35I started digging into a little bit of like, oh no, like he's
- 1:37:38talking about reps, he's talking about sets, Like this is like for a
- 1:37:42writer. So can you talk a little bit about the screenwriter's workout? Oh?
- 1:37:46Sure? So that was that was the thought process. You know,
- 1:37:49I was thinking about mentioning earlier that Oh yeah, I tried just about everything
- 1:37:55else I could other than film, And so I was a science major exercise
- 1:37:59piseology. That makes sense now, Okay, So it's like, yeah,
- 1:38:03there's the connection. But when you think about any sort of performance sport,
- 1:38:09if you will, or even a performance art, you know, you go
- 1:38:12to the gym, you strengthen certain muscles, that you strengthen certain aspects so
- 1:38:15that you can use those in the pursuit. So as a football player,
- 1:38:18I need to, you know, be able to be very strong so I
- 1:38:21can push the line of scrimmage and tackle someone or run through a tackle or
- 1:38:24something like that. And for me, I was like, well, hey,
- 1:38:28screenwriters can do the same thing. It's not that now. Obviously we
- 1:38:31get we get better by reading screenplays, writing screenplays, and doing all those
- 1:38:35things, but we can also strengthen the skill sets that we can go to
- 1:38:40the gym and hit the equipment. And so what I try to do is
- 1:38:44create a gym for screenwriters where you can go there and strengthen certain aspects of
- 1:38:46your craft to improve your storytelling essentially. And so that was kind of the
- 1:38:49core approach to it. And then what I realized is I was going through
- 1:38:56the book, is crap. I got to do all that. I have
- 1:38:58to teach all this stuff in order for the later lessons to make sense.
- 1:39:01So the first part, you know, has quite a bit of theory that's
- 1:39:03going behind it so that you can get to some of the activities and exercises
- 1:39:08later on that should strengthen your storytelling craft. A lot of these were hounded
- 1:39:15in my classes, and so what I would do is try different exercises all
- 1:39:18my students to you know, not as an evil scientist or anything, but
- 1:39:23like, hey, try this and see if it helps. And so I
- 1:39:25was able to kind of glean which one seem to improve their storytelling to a
- 1:39:30high degree. And so then I tried to incorporate those into the book as
- 1:39:33well. And so it's kind of a combination of those two things. Some
- 1:39:36of the exercises are really you know, kind of you know, if you
- 1:39:41were a soup, what would you be, like, what does this have
- 1:39:43to do with screenwriting? But what I'm trying to do is strength is stretch
- 1:39:46your mind in terms of understanding the metaphoric connection between the actions that characters take
- 1:39:54versus the things we can see on the screen. You know, they're eating
- 1:39:57a ball, a terrible example, eating a bowl out little bit, sup?
- 1:40:00What does that mean? We'll be right back after a word from our
- 1:40:03sponsor, and now back to the show. Everything on that screen has meaning
- 1:40:13to us, So we're trying to look for meaning in those in those elements,
- 1:40:16and so I tried to put together a book that would explore and strengthen
- 1:40:20those skills in addition to your storytelling chops as a whole. Looking at it
- 1:40:26from a structural perspective, from a character design perspective, Like I said,
- 1:40:30I'm big into design. I think most of the issues that we find in
- 1:40:32a screenplay are based on a faulty design right from the get go. And
- 1:40:40to not be overly eloquent about it, it's kind of like what I would
- 1:40:44call a chocolate covered turd. You know, it looks great, it's got
- 1:40:47you know, raspberry sprinkles on it, and it's all like, man,
- 1:40:50this thing looks awesome, and then you take a bite and it's like I
- 1:40:53got a mouthful of crap. And it's no fault of the writer per se.
- 1:40:58It's just the design. The story wasn't designed from the get go to
- 1:41:01really work together and fit together. The elements don't don't quite go together right,
- 1:41:06and so no amount of artistry, no amount of of craft, can
- 1:41:12can resurrect it. It's just doomed right from the get go. And so
- 1:41:15There are elements talking about that in the book as well, just trying to
- 1:41:20to really get it. Story design and designing your story right from the get
- 1:41:25go, and then providing you know, a lot of the other soft skills
- 1:41:27that go into screenwriting. Now, I'm gonna ask you a few questions.
- 1:41:30Ask on my guests, what are three screenplays that ever screenwriters should read.
- 1:41:35Oh man, your other guest gave such really good ones. Let's see,
- 1:41:43I'll try to pick some that perhaps might not be quite so obvious. The
- 1:41:48Devil Worst Product, great script, Yeah it is script. So yeah,
- 1:41:55that'll that'll be one. Uh my best friend's wedding another greatest script. I'll
- 1:42:03pick that one. And in particular, uh that one for how the screenwriter
- 1:42:10was named Ron Bass, how he put his action description just kind of really
- 1:42:14cool. And then uh, okay lethal weapon, Oh well, Shane Black,
- 1:42:18of course, I mean death. I mean just just for description,
- 1:42:21just for descriptions alone. Descriptions are amazing. Yeah, And if you and
- 1:42:28if you want to stay in shame black world, I might suggest Last Boy
- 1:42:30Scout the original instead of that one. The original one he was a surfer
- 1:42:34and not Damon Wayne's Oh no, no, the the the script itself.
- 1:42:42I think if you read the action description in there, it's it's just it's
- 1:42:45a further distillation of lethal weapon. And I picked those for different reasons,
- 1:42:48but most of them have to do with words on the page, yep.
- 1:42:53And just how you how you create a movie on the page, because it's
- 1:42:57not the easiest task to do. And if you what advice would you give
- 1:43:00screenwriter trying to break into the business today, Know your craft? Ultimately,
- 1:43:08it's all gonna boil down to that you know, right gooder, But it's
- 1:43:14oh my god, that's a T shirt. That's a T shirt? Right
- 1:43:15good? Yeah, Most most of my lessons are like bumber stickers, is
- 1:43:19like come on man, or memes, No, no, no, seriously,
- 1:43:24it's know your craft, hone your craft. When you think you know
- 1:43:27it, you don't keep working at it. It's it takes so long to
- 1:43:33master these skill sets. It really does. And I think film school it's
- 1:43:36really cool. It serves a purpose of getting you further along that journey than
- 1:43:41perhaps you would do on your on your own. But it really is boiling
- 1:43:45down to a good story, well told, vibrant characters. They will they
- 1:43:49will find out, they will find the audio and find a home, a
- 1:43:53second guests the marketplace because you're gonna behind every time, every time. Yeah,
- 1:43:57what is the lesson that took you the longest to learn? Whether in
- 1:43:59the film industry or in life. I don't know. I'm still learning.
- 1:44:03No, structure is not formula. Yeah exactly there was, you know,
- 1:44:14young younger me. If I look back and it's like dude, yeah,
- 1:44:16okay, you're trying to be this artistic putts like, no, I'm above
- 1:44:20structure. No, nobody's above the craft. Nobody. As soon as the
- 1:44:24filmmaker thinks they're above the crafty, they just ended their career. I'm happened
- 1:44:28to Dchcock. Sorry, but it happens to to a lot of filmmakers.
- 1:44:32But no one is above the craft. It is so it's I think of
- 1:44:38beauty once you see it, but that that would be the one lesson.
- 1:44:42It's just like, yeah, it's not just because it's it's a structural paradigm.
- 1:44:45It's not a formula. There's reason for structure, and it's it's kind
- 1:44:49of cool that way, and once you understand the reasons, I'm I'm kind
- 1:44:53of a why guy. It's like, well, you know, very sis.
- 1:44:55Weall you need complicant film, you know, And I'm like terminator,
- 1:44:58you know why, you just do why? You know? I keep asking
- 1:45:00the same thing, and it's like, oh, here's why, and you
- 1:45:04start to understand there are reasons why certain things happen in movies, and it's
- 1:45:12you know, you can try to reinvent the wheel, and there's totally cool.
- 1:45:15I can appreciate the impulse, but ultimately that wheel's got a roll.
- 1:45:18If you reinvent the wheel, and then it doesn't roll, it's not a
- 1:45:20wheel. And and so you know, sometimes in our in our well intentioned
- 1:45:27of hey, I want to do things different and original, and certainly that
- 1:45:30would that would describe, you know, how how I wanted to approach the
- 1:45:32page. It's understanding there are certain reasons why certain things happen in a film,
- 1:45:41and it's now you provide your originality to that probe the originality to the
- 1:45:45content, unnecessarily the form. And it's a long answer enough, but yeah,
- 1:45:49hopefully and glean something out of it. And three of your favorite films
- 1:45:53of all time? Oh, I think we already discussed them. Yeah,
- 1:45:59that one, that one I'll have to list. It's funny before the class
- 1:46:02I hadn't watched it in years. It's kind of back to what you were
- 1:46:06talking about. So Star Wars Life is beautiful. Yeah, that one,
- 1:46:14that's beautifulul. I like the fact that it pulls in motion. And then
- 1:46:24seven Summer another and you can't go wrong with any of those at all.
- 1:46:30Well, man, thank you so much for taking all the time out.
- 1:46:32I know you have your busy schedule. You were in between classes right now,
- 1:46:36so I do appreciate you taking the time. It has been an absolutely
- 1:46:39enjoyable conversation about the craft and and hope we could do it again sometime.
- 1:46:44But thank you so much for dropping these knowledge bombs on our tribe today.
- 1:46:46So I appreciate it, my friend. Oh, thank you, and then
- 1:46:49do it again sometime. I want to thank Will so much for coming on
- 1:46:54the show and sharing his knowledge bombs with the tribe today. Thank you so
- 1:47:00much. Will. If you want to get links to anything we spoke about
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