Latest / INSPIRE STORY / The Mystery of the Abandoned Showers
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- 0:15Speaker 1: Welcome back to creep Cast. I am your co host,
- 0:20Meet Kenyon.
- 0:21Speaker 2: Joined with me is Windagerosen the other co host.
- 0:25Speaker 1: Guide feels so weird. We've never done that kind of intronet.
- 0:30Speaker 2: I'll go with it. You want to do an old
- 0:32like fifties broadcaster? The start with how Yeah? I was
- 0:36about saying can you do the mid Atlantic accent?
- 0:38Speaker 1: There you go, Yeah, there's eleven time doown hand. I
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- 0:51little five star rating. It helps all the world. But
- 0:54today we are going over the showers, which is as
- 0:59I'm looking at you. It is the scariest story of
- 1:03twenty twelve is what it says at the very pow
- 1:06that's right where this is apparently a R slash No
- 1:08Sleep classic. Dare I say one of the one of
- 1:12the great the mount on the Mount rushmore of R
- 1:15slash No Sleep.
- 1:17Speaker 2: According to the Internet, it certainly is. It's up there
- 1:20with things like Rosco, which you know we're all still
- 1:23very scared of. I remember this being talked about in
- 1:27the same capacity things like no End House were talked
- 1:29about or nineteen ninety nine, And unlike those stories that
- 1:34I've read and remember all the details of, I actually
- 1:37don't remember the showers. I don't think I've ever read it.
- 1:40So I'm excited to get to experience it for the
- 1:43first time because most of the time, like, don't get
- 1:46me wrong, it's fun to know exactly what's going to
- 1:48happen and hold a teddy Bear up to the camera.
- 1:50It's a terrorized hunter. That's great.
- 1:51Speaker 1: Yeah, but by the way, I, how dare you? By
- 1:54the way?
- 1:55Speaker 2: Oh yeah, aud it's never got to see your reaction.
- 1:58Speaker 1: No, nobody got to see that. And I want to say,
- 2:00that's bullshit. I had people flooding, flooding me on Twitter
- 2:05after the fact and read it and everything, and I
- 2:08want to say that I've caught Like I saw the edit.
- 2:10I saw like when I was rewatching the cut, and
- 2:11I was like, this son of a bitch, I was
- 2:13like the entire time, played me like a fool the
- 2:16entire time. So I want to say, yes, I saw it.
- 2:19It's unbelievable. My mouth was a gape during the edit.
- 2:23I when I first saw the first cut of it.
- 2:25My mouth was wide open. I was like, he trolled
- 2:28me the entire time. Bro.
- 2:31Speaker 2: When you were like, I think there's a picture of
- 2:34you with a bear.
- 2:37Speaker 1: And it was holding it, I was all I could
- 2:40do was grip my teeth and clench my fists and rage.
- 2:43I was just like you, you bastard, dude, you'll, you'll,
- 2:46you make me look like a fool.
- 2:48Speaker 2: The joy I felt in that moment has to be
- 2:50comparable to holding your first born, like wow, the same thing.
- 2:56Speaker 1: Getting one over on me that much was. That was
- 2:59that pivotal.
- 3:00Speaker 2: I understand how satisfying of a burn it is. When
- 3:04you're like, I think you have its head in there.
- 3:07Speaker 1: I uh, I'm good. As soon as it's so good,
- 3:11as soon as you have your first child, I'm gonna
- 3:13go up to it. I'm gonna say we're on the
- 3:14same level, you and I. I'm gonna say to him,
- 3:17I'm gonna shake his little hand and be like we
- 3:19you and I are one and the same. Also, I
- 3:22want to say so that the title of the story
- 3:24today is The Showers. From what we see here, it's
- 3:27by Clover one zero one seven six. We'll put the
- 3:30link in the description of course, but also the way
- 3:34my hair is parted is because UH and I took
- 3:36a shower just before this, just because I knew we
- 3:38were taking the showers. It definitely wasn't because I smoke
- 3:41like shit and my hair was super greasy. So now
- 3:44this is why my hair looks like this. So I
- 3:45don't want people dogging on me. All right, I look
- 3:48like Roseanne bar whenever my hair is wet, So I'm
- 3:51sorry for that. It's very, it's it's unfortunate, but I'm
- 3:54I'm very I'm excited as always. I have never read this.
- 3:58I've just seen people the comment suggest this, so once
- 4:01again I am excited. But we have a very love
- 4:04hate relationship with UH with suggestions, viewer suggestions.
- 4:09Speaker 2: I don't know what you're talking about. I've been thrilled
- 4:11by everything we've covered.
- 4:13Speaker 1: Listen, I will say it's always been entertaining. There's always
- 4:16been some kind of peak where I'm like, what the
- 4:18hell is this? What are we doing? Whether it be
- 4:22good or bad.
- 4:22Speaker 2: Look, every single thing we've covered has been an utter
- 4:26joy and benefit to my life, for better or worse.
- 4:30That doesn't mean that they've all been good, but I've
- 4:33loved every single one of them. But yeah, I'm very
- 4:37excited to talk about the showers. I will mention to
- 4:40the audience. I'm technically high right now and shouldn't be
- 4:43operating a vehicle, not because I do illicit drugs, but
- 4:46because I do legal drugs. I had my wisdom teeth
- 4:49removed a few days ago. Oh and I am hyped
- 4:52up on pain medication right now, so I feel great.
- 4:58Speaker 1: Fentanyl flop right now.
- 4:59Speaker 2: Yeah, that's what the doctor prescribed. Fittnel.
- 5:02Speaker 1: Yeah, He's like, so this is a very popular drub
- 5:04right now. There you go.
- 5:06Speaker 2: The kids love this. So if I say anything weird
- 5:10or do anything weird, don't hold it against me unless
- 5:12it's funny.
- 5:13Speaker 1: I just want to you absolutely have told it against him.
- 5:15I would say, also, you prefacing that you can't be
- 5:17driving large vehicles. It's like, are you recording and driving
- 5:20at the same time. For a second, I thought, is
- 5:22he in his car just barreling down the freeway.
- 5:25Speaker 2: He's like, what I got? If you watch this edit
- 5:28back and I'm like, oh my.
- 5:30Speaker 1: God, I would have to make some kind of disclaimer,
- 5:33being like, I don't know what is happening, but this
- 5:36is not this is not okay. We can't. We can't
- 5:39go on like this well without further ado is I say,
- 5:42let's just let's let's hop in absolutely.
- 5:44Speaker 2: I do want to mention that the author, so yes,
- 5:48his user name on red it is clover WHATNOTU the
- 5:51author's legal name, because since this has been printed as
- 5:54a novella, it's he's worked on other things. His name
- 5:58is Dylan Sindeler Sindler. However that name is pronounced, it's
- 6:02sin and then Deller Sindler whatever. Dylan wrote the story originally,
- 6:07it's gone on to write other stuff, so he gets
- 6:09full credit for everything we're talking about. And we're gonna
- 6:11link his original post.
- 6:14Speaker 1: Oh cool. Yeah, And like you said, there is it
- 6:16has been novelized, so you can't pick up the paperback.
- 6:18Speaker 2: It looks like as with a lot of these, like
- 6:21out of pin Pal, pin Pal was like that. I
- 6:24think if I know Baraska and Left Right Game were
- 6:28made into the audio shows, I think maybe Burroska also
- 6:32had a print version if I recall, right, maybe I'm wrong,
- 6:35but yeah, a lot of this stuff kind of becomes
- 6:37popular enough that it's put into other like media formats.
- 6:40Speaker 1: I will say, I can't remember on the Reddit page
- 6:43that we had, but someone did a different cover for
- 6:45pin Pal and it looked amazing. It was really really good.
- 6:48I think they submitted it to a graphic design contest
- 6:50and one from what I saw, and it was amazing.
- 6:53So if we can, we well, we should put it
- 6:55up here because it was really really cool to see.
- 6:57I'm also trying to look right now for The Showers
- 6:59the Action physical book, and it looks it looks like
- 7:02it's like out of print. It's like it's it's apparently
- 7:05very hard to find. So if anybody has it, you
- 7:07might be sitting on gold.
- 7:08Speaker 2: It could be a collector's edition type thing.
- 7:10Speaker 1: That's what I'm saying, dude, I'm gonna have to be digging.
- 7:12Speaker 2: You could convince Hunter to buy it off of you
- 7:14for a lot of money, because if there's one thing
- 7:16Hunter loves, it's stealing money from our fans. As he's discussed, I.
- 7:20Speaker 1: I love it, give me our money. I want it.
- 7:25Speaker 2: All right, we should get to the story before you're canceled.
- 7:27Speaker 1: Let's do it. That's good. Yeah, please hurry run run
- 7:30all right?
- 7:32Speaker 2: The Showers Part one. Every area in all parts of
- 7:37the world has those area specific urban legends that just
- 7:41refuse to die. Whether the stories are about a haunted
- 7:44asylum on the outskirts of the city, a creature that
- 7:47lives in the nearby woods, or a ghost that haunts
- 7:50a lonely stretch of road outside of town, there's always
- 7:53a common thread within the tails. No one has ever
- 7:56been to these places, seen the creatures, or witnessed any
- 7:59haunting with their own eyes.
- 8:02Speaker 1: That's true. You think that's true. Do you think that's true.
- 8:05I think it's true.
- 8:06Speaker 2: With a lot of urban legends that work right because
- 8:09the person who tells them never tells the story. Oh
- 8:13I saw this. It's always the old miner who lived
- 8:18in the hills or you know, the trap. I hated this.
- 8:22Speaker 1: Yeah, yeah, he said. She said, kind of thing of like,
- 8:25oh my cousin's friend, you know, I mean something something
- 8:27like that.
- 8:28Speaker 2: Weird doubt from the storyteller or like removes like a
- 8:32line of questioning because it's not their story as someone else's.
- 8:35Speaker 1: I don't know, that's just what I heard, yeah, exactly.
- 8:37Speaker 2: It keeps urban legends alive. There are members of every
- 8:40generation who will proclaim that they know someone whose brother's
- 8:44best friend sister went to the haunted house with thirteen
- 8:47floors that used real blood and snakes and spiders, and
- 8:51is so scary that no one has ever made it
- 8:53all the way through. That sounds like how people talk
- 8:56about Mcamie manor back in the day.
- 8:59Speaker 1: No God, yeah, except those people are just actual assault victims,
- 9:03or they're just like, hey, can someone arrest this man please?
- 9:07This fucking psychopath.
- 9:08Speaker 2: Oh hi, I got punched in the face. It was fun,
- 9:10I guess God. Those same people will swear by these
- 9:15stories without ever being able to provide a shred of
- 9:18evidence or a name of someone who could provide proof
- 9:20of the claim, simply because everyone around here knows that
- 9:24it's a true story. Storytellers eventually pass the tales onto
- 9:28their children, who modified them just enough to keep up
- 9:30with the changing times, and the cycle continues. I'm as
- 9:34skeptical as anyone when it comes to these stories, seeing
- 9:37as I was like a junkie when I was younger,
- 9:39constantly searching for more terrifying stories about whatever area of
- 9:43the country I was living in at the time. I
- 9:45made up and spread stories about haunted pizza parlors in
- 9:48New York, my cousin's encounter with the Jersey Devil, or
- 9:52how my grandfather encountered a feral human like demon creature
- 9:56in the woods of Colorado. I even broke the one
- 10:00with these stories by putting myself in them. This took
- 10:02guts in hindsight, because I had to make sure that
- 10:05I always told them the same way. Surprisingly, no one
- 10:09ever called my bluff. I already I already liked the
- 10:13intro so far. I feel like, uh, I used to
- 10:15do too.
- 10:16Speaker 1: I used to do that as a kid.
- 10:17Speaker 2: I used to like try to eat up stories, like
- 10:19scary stories from people I heard, and I would like
- 10:22retell them, but sometimes I would embellish them a little bit,
- 10:25you know, maybe make them a bit more intense or stuff.
- 10:28I yeah, this is kind of homie so far.
- 10:31Speaker 1: It is one thing that I like to so far
- 10:33that the author is doing is admitting to that they
- 10:36he fabricates or they fabricate their own stories, right, And
- 10:40admittedly it's just like, yeah, I lie, and no one
- 10:42really calls my bluff, And I feel like it's setting
- 10:44up a good It's setting up an interesting ball where
- 10:47I think it's gonna be boy cried wolf kind of situation.
- 10:50Is what I'm is what I'm thinking.
- 10:51Speaker 2: Yeah, and again I'm actually Normally I just gaslight you
- 10:54by being like, yeah, sure, Hunter, that sounds cool. We'll
- 10:57see because I know where this is going. Uh, this time,
- 11:00I'm actually like, yeah, could be, but I don't know.
- 11:02Speaker 1: I'm glad finally the sadistic mastermind himself can't play one
- 11:07over on me, or you could be lying I have
- 11:10no idea.
- 11:12Speaker 2: That's right, go back into your as I'm setting here
- 11:16holding a shower head up to the camera.
- 11:20Speaker 1: You're taking a shower right now.
- 11:24Speaker 2: You rewatched the episode. I'm completely naked in just like.
- 11:27Speaker 1: Yeah, yeah, I'm like, I see your cocking balls. We
- 11:31cannot put this in. I don't know why you had
- 11:33to stand so far away from your Logitech web camera.
- 11:38Speaker 2: I was just recorded on an iPhone exactly.
- 11:42Speaker 1: I'm like, this is this is unsettling anyway.
- 11:49Speaker 2: I like to think that I've had some wonderful contributions
- 11:52to various urban legends around the Midwest and Northeastern states.
- 11:56I moved around a lot. There was always a surge
- 11:58of joy whenever I would wander the halls at school
- 12:01and hear one of my classmates retelling my stories to
- 12:03another one of their friends, adding little bits here and there.
- 12:06Like a massive game of telephone. I knew, of course,
- 12:10that the stories were complete fiction, but I stood my
- 12:12ground whenever someone asked me about them. I would even
- 12:15manage to act a little bit, speaking with a shaky
- 12:18voice or looking scared when I would recount a situation
- 12:21that I supposedly experienced myself. I suppose this aspect of
- 12:27my childhood has led to my current predicament, which I
- 12:30will recount in full for the Internet to take from
- 12:33it what they will. I've laid this little introduction out
- 12:36as a sort of disclaimer I aimed particularly at those
- 12:39who would call my story into question. I've been like
- 12:42the boy who cried wolf for years. I assure you,
- 12:45with every ounce of honesty and integrity that I have,
- 12:50that this time the wolf is real. That I called
- 12:54the boy who cried wolf, so I did so much.
- 12:59Speaker 1: God shooting from the hip again. I like that though,
- 13:03I like that the I like that also that string
- 13:06of sentences too. Of I have been like the boy
- 13:08he cried wolf for years, but I assure you, with
- 13:09every ounce of honesty integrity that I have, at this
- 13:12time the wolf is real. I think that's fun. Yeah,
- 13:14I like that line a lot. That's really cool.
- 13:17Speaker 2: I think, yeah, yeah, the wolf is real.
- 13:21Speaker 1: Yeah, that's that's fun. This is interesting too. Is very
- 13:26well written so far, but also very it seems a
- 13:29lot and I know we've said this before, but like,
- 13:32you know, this is a twelve year old story by
- 13:35this point, right, and it seems like back like the
- 13:38older the stories are the less bullshit they throw in.
- 13:41Like it's very like they give you a nice plump
- 13:44beginning and then they like it doesn't feel like there's
- 13:46a lot of fat, Like I feel like he's really
- 13:47ramping us up to something versus before or later on
- 13:51in the series. I think people liked found out that
- 13:53people like to actually chew on these things a lot,
- 13:55so they really have a lot of preamble, you know,
- 13:58I mean like a lot of like a lot of
- 13:59not not necessarily unnecessary build up, but stuff where it's
- 14:02like you probably could have cut that in the story
- 14:03would have been fine. But I like that this is
- 14:05probably the part right here where we're gonna get thrown
- 14:08right over the roller coaster's edge into where we're going.
- 14:10Speaker 2: I also feel like back in the day, creepy pasta
- 14:13communities were very much so kind of like it's weird
- 14:19to call them like a practice grounds because you're still
- 14:23publishing it for people to see, but especially because of
- 14:26like the anonymity and kind of the nicheness of the community.
- 14:29For a while, a lot of people would put like
- 14:34these sections into their creepypasta. I feel to kind of
- 14:38see how it worked to be like, can I kind
- 14:41of ramble about this for a bit? Does this work
- 14:43for a good tagline? Let me try it?
- 14:45Speaker 1: Right?
- 14:45Speaker 2: Because it's like, oh, absolutely, It's like kind of low stakes, right.
- 14:49I remember when I used to write like horse stories
- 14:51and stuff like that. I'd hear a cool concept and
- 14:53be like, can I do something with that? Let me
- 14:55go see. So I think a lot of these creepypastas
- 14:57kind of do that. So in a way, I kind
- 14:59of feel the ride is testing their own writing of
- 15:03building out, like you're you're inflicting the literal elements of
- 15:08the story, like a child who love to tell stories,
- 15:10but you're also introducing some kind of themes, like it
- 15:12says boy who cried wolf, or of someone that's always
- 15:16been obsessed with stories their whole lives, so now they're
- 15:18just telling a different one. It lays the groundwork for
- 15:21a lot of stuff at once, and I think I
- 15:23think it works.
- 15:25Speaker 1: No, I think it does too. I mean I think
- 15:26that you're incredibly right that especially especially I know people
- 15:31say they get mad way say especially well, I mean,
- 15:34you know what, fuck it, I'm gonna keep saying it,
- 15:35especially when uh, when you have the twelve years ago right,
- 15:42I don't know what the how infamous are Slash and
- 15:44No Sleep was, but there's no way that people would
- 15:46probably look at it with the same regards as having
- 15:48actual published work or something. Yeah, you know what I mean.
- 15:51It's the same kind of thing when people look at
- 15:54like YouTubers who make movies, right, and then they're like, well,
- 15:57until you make that actual like network or uh studio
- 16:00produced film, that's what makes it, that's what legitimizes it.
- 16:03So this is just a way for people to anomalous,
- 16:06anomalously anomalously, uh be like make these stories and there's
- 16:13really probably at the time, there's really no kind of
- 16:15weight behind it. You're just like, oh, I'm just doing
- 16:17this for fun, to see what you can do. So
- 16:19it really does feel like these early days of stuff
- 16:21there really was just like a very pure, like unfiltered
- 16:25way of testing out storytelling.
- 16:27Speaker 2: That's a good word for it.
- 16:28Speaker 1: It's pure.
- 16:29Speaker 2: It's just like here, here's me, you know all the
- 16:33I'm not worried about. Oh, I can only have two
- 16:35paragraphs to set up this. I can only have one here,
- 16:39Like they're just talking in the way they want to speak.
- 16:42And I think that's why a lot of really interesting
- 16:43stuff came out of it.
- 16:45Speaker 1: Definitely, I mean like, no gods, no master's kind of
- 16:48approach of you don't have to like you're not doing
- 16:50it for anybody but yourself, you know what I mean.
- 16:52And I think that that's really cool. I agree, right,
- 16:54go ahead.
- 16:55Speaker 2: From my introduction, it is probably apparent that I moved
- 16:58around the country quite a bit in my and high
- 17:00school years. Neither of my parents had anything to do
- 17:03with any branch of the armed forces. They simply didn't
- 17:06intend to hang around any given place for too long.
- 17:08I suppose it had some sort of effect on me,
- 17:10but I wasn't hurt by it or anything.
- 17:12Speaker 1: Of the sort.
- 17:13Speaker 2: Growing up, I was a complete ham. I made friends
- 17:17very easily, was often the class clown, and because of that,
- 17:20was often disliked by my teachers. Again, this was never
- 17:24an issue, as I was usually in another state by
- 17:26the time the next semester rolled around.
- 17:28Speaker 1: Have you ever heard anyone refer to themselves as a ham.
- 17:31Speaker 2: I've heard the phrase ham it up, but I've never.
- 17:34Speaker 1: Heard ham it up, but I've I have a bit
- 17:40of a clown. I'm a bit of a jokester. I'm
- 17:42a honey roasted ham me.
- 17:44Speaker 2: I'm known as the hammer around the.
- 17:47Speaker 1: I am the ham. People also call me oscar Maya.
- 17:50I'm a bit of a meatman myself. Yes, and my teachers, Oh,
- 17:54they don't like it. Yes, Oh you talk about Jacoby. Yeah,
- 18:02he's just a ham me. Yes, I'm a ham. Hello,
- 18:07don't confuse me with the Turkey, because I'm not. I'm
- 18:10a ham. I'm no bud. I'm a piggy. Okay, I'm
- 18:15this is this is going nowhere.
- 18:16Speaker 2: I just gave me flashbacks to a really funny story.
- 18:20So I haven't heard the name Jacoby in years. When
- 18:24I was the sixth grade, I remember so like I
- 18:28was like Christian kid, I was homeschooled for a few
- 18:31years in elementary schools like socially in like the or
- 18:34sorry seventh grade, I wasn't like up to date with
- 18:37like other guys my age, so I remember I was
- 18:40out a sleepover and the other guys were talking about
- 18:44girls they thought were hot, and I was like, I
- 18:47thought girls were pretty, but I never like I was
- 18:50never i'd say, like physically attracted in the way that
- 18:53like most teenage boys are until like eighth grade, right,
- 18:56So anyway, seventh grade there asked me, it's like, oh,
- 18:58who do you think's hot? So I made up I
- 19:00literally did the she goes to a different school thing.
- 19:03So I made up a girl and I gave her
- 19:06the name Jacoby because I heard that name. It just
- 19:09like just picked the name out of the eighth and
- 19:12I was like, yeah, she's she's really hot, she goes
- 19:14to different school. So for the rest of seventh grade,
- 19:18those because they immediately saw through it. They were immediately like,
- 19:22this guy's never spoken to a woman when you're talking
- 19:24about They made fun of me constantly and they knew that,
- 19:32Like my parents were like like get religious and stuff.
- 19:35So they kept me like I'm gonna tell your mom
- 19:37that you said a girl was hot or whatever. I'm like, no, please,
- 19:40Like I'm don't tell my mom. I like girls, please.
- 19:44Speaker 3: She's realized, like my girlfriend's name is Steve Wallace, which
- 19:52when you said the name Jacoby, it shot spikes through me.
- 19:55Speaker 2: Just I haven't heard that name. And for every second,
- 19:58I'm like.
- 19:58Speaker 1: Don't tell my mom.
- 20:00Speaker 2: No, wait, don't tell her.
- 20:02Speaker 1: I like what I don't tell my mom and dad?
- 20:10Speaker 2: Yeah, I had to share that. I could have let
- 20:13that one.
- 20:14Speaker 1: That's a nice piece of you know that. That's a
- 20:16good piece of cringe. I appreciate that. Thank you so much.
- 20:18Speaker 2: The author of the Showers is listening to this, like,
- 20:21can they just read the story?
- 20:25Speaker 1: No, they're probably listeners are like, I too had a girlfriend.
- 20:33Speaker 2: Yeah, I also think Jacoby is a man's name, and.
- 20:36Speaker 1: It absolutely is. I have a friend named Jacoby. It
- 20:39absolutely is a man.
- 20:41Speaker 2: I swear I met a girl named Jacoby, which is
- 20:43why that.
- 20:44Speaker 1: Jacob is the name. It makes me Jacob, of the
- 20:47why it makes me Jacoby. You're like, wait, that's not
- 20:51a girl.
- 20:52Speaker 2: Okay, but there's like a butt like okay, you have
- 20:54Alex and then you add an I s and it's
- 20:56a lexus. It's a girl's name.
- 20:58Speaker 1: Now, Like there's a ton of things true, Like I
- 21:02don't know if Jacoby sounds very feminine.
- 21:05Speaker 2: Okay, she's really she goes to another school, but she's
- 21:10really hot.
- 21:11Speaker 1: Goes to a different school. I remember this.
- 21:17Speaker 2: I remember the other guys would like told the girls
- 21:21in the class like, hey, he made up a girl
- 21:22that he thoughts pretty, so like the girls would bully me.
- 21:25They'd be like, oh, like, what did Jacoby look like yourself?
- 21:32I literally I was so scrawny and weird in seventh
- 21:36grade that I this is I am in I'm like
- 21:41I said the pain medicine. Don't hold this against me.
- 21:45Speaker 1: It became regular, learn yourself such a hole like I should.
- 21:49Speaker 2: There was an empty trash can on the way to
- 21:53the uh to the bathroom at school, and if I
- 21:56passed one of the like eighth grade students going to
- 21:59her from the bathroom room without saying a word, without
- 22:01like making a fuss about, they would just pick me
- 22:03up and put me in the trash can. And just like.
- 22:08Speaker 1: I have, I have no response. I don't know how
- 22:11I'm supposed to this is this is so sad. That's
- 22:14not just unbelievable.
- 22:16Speaker 2: We'll move on, but I promise that's not the worst fit.
- 22:18That was the stuff that was funny. There was other stuff.
- 22:20I got bullied a lot for being, like for having
- 22:23I had a lisp, and I liked dragon ball Z
- 22:26I was.
- 22:26Speaker 1: Not Yeah, and I made up women. I want to
- 22:33put you in a trash can right now without your talking?
- 22:36Speaker 2: Yes, okay, yeah, sorry, yeah, but dunking. This is why
- 22:40I prefaced the pain medicine, Okay, because I knew it
- 22:42would be I knew I would overshare.
- 22:44Speaker 1: Okay, I love I love it, and I love Goku
- 22:48so much. Please, Okay, that wasn't my lisp, my lips.
- 22:52Well have you see have you seen a seven foot
- 22:55tall woman named Jacobi walking around? I'm missing her?
- 22:59Speaker 2: I do like I'm okay, so maybe I did tall.
- 23:04Maybe that's how they talk through it.
- 23:06Speaker 1: I don't.
- 23:09Speaker 2: We get back to the standard.
- 23:11Speaker 1: I'm not even gonna like, can we get back to
- 23:12the story. You're hijacking this and you're you're like doll
- 23:16your whole sad life right here, I'm trying to remember
- 23:18where the hell were at ats.
- 23:24Speaker 2: My friendships were often fleeting. Okay, here's the one who
- 23:29said to Kobe, this is your fault. If you've used
- 23:31any other name, none of this would have happened.
- 23:34Speaker 1: Okay, I'm sorry. I didn't know what.
- 23:36Speaker 2: Is this podcast?
- 23:38Speaker 1: I don't know. I'm blo I'm I'm I'm literally doing
- 23:42a podcast with Guy High on Finanel right now. I
- 23:44have no idea what the hell's going on.
- 23:51Speaker 2: My friendships were often fleeting, as were any positive relationships
- 23:56that I ever had with my teachers. Because of the
- 23:58events that followed, my memory of one teacher in particular
- 24:02is probably slightly skewed, but I will attempt to give
- 24:05the least biased version of our friendship that I can.
- 24:10Speaker 1: Miss.
- 24:11Speaker 2: I really hope this is another pedophile story. It's God
- 24:15every time we like because I accidentally slipped into it.
- 24:18If all the other ones, I have set up his
- 24:20land mines for Hunter, but I don't want to get
- 24:22tricked by you.
- 24:23Speaker 1: All every time that it's just like it's an old
- 24:26All these stories always such a sewed up where it's
- 24:28just like, yep, my name's Bryce, I'm eight, and this
- 24:32is my relationship with a forty two year old man.
- 24:34And you're just like, what's going on? And he's like, yeah,
- 24:40there was weird clown. He was really scary. You're like, okay,
- 24:43all right, why do we have to always have to
- 24:46go here? Which, to be fair, you know we're gonna
- 24:48get have ourselves. Let's see what happens with mister Mays.
- 24:51Speaker 2: I'm going to hold out hope that he's not that.
- 24:53I hope he's cool. Yeah, mister Mays was one of
- 24:57my social studies teachers in the early years my high
- 25:00school experience.
- 25:01Speaker 1: Being older.
- 25:02Speaker 2: Now, I can understand how horrible children are to deal
- 25:04with around that age, and I respect him to know
- 25:07ends for the way he was able to connect with
- 25:08his students. Okay, good, thank god. I was about being
- 25:12like being older now, I see some problems.
- 25:14Speaker 1: But no, He's like, yeah, well, I'm still holding my breath.
- 25:17I don't trust it. Still.
- 25:20Speaker 2: He seemed like one of us. He talks like us,
- 25:24made pop culture references that were current, listen to cool music,
- 25:28and sometimes he would even say hell or damn while
- 25:31he was giving a passionate lecture about Native American history
- 25:33or something like that. A teacher that swore even a
- 25:37little bit was the epitome of cool to a freshman
- 25:39in high school. That's actually true. I remember in high school,
- 25:42like very trying some teachers that swore, and I was like, I,
- 25:45this is the coolest thing I've ever seen.
- 25:47Speaker 1: Like, yeah, I think I heard one of my history teachers.
- 25:50This is actually kind of fucked up. I heard one
- 25:52of my history teachers back in the day when I
- 25:53was like, I think a freshman in high school. He
- 25:56was like, Robert E. Lee was the shit, and I
- 25:58was like, whoa, that's awesome and I and then looking
- 26:00back at it, I'm like, is it cool to say
- 26:03that the Confederate War general was this ship?
- 26:06Speaker 2: You were you were so caught up with the with
- 26:09the swear that ship.
- 26:11Speaker 1: That's awesome. Roberty Lee is super cool.
- 26:14Speaker 2: That's how you red pill. Like high school kids, you
- 26:18just swear while talking about something.
- 26:21Speaker 1: They're like based based.
- 26:25Speaker 2: Little hunter talking about based Confederate soldiers their flag.
- 26:30Speaker 1: Sure is cool. My mom's like no.
- 26:32Speaker 2: No, no, no no stop.
- 26:34Speaker 1: No no no no, no other way, child, other way.
- 26:39Speaker 2: My memories of mister Mays mostly stemmed from the way
- 26:41that he really got into anything that he was doing.
- 26:44The instance that is still very vivid in my mind was,
- 26:46of course, around Halloween of my sophomore year. Mister Mays
- 26:51had the typical teacher decorations around the classroom, smiling jack
- 26:54o' lanyards and black cat cartoons, typical and boring in
- 26:58the minds of egotistic high school students. However, on the
- 27:02thirty first of October, when most other teachers were rolling
- 27:05their eyes of the fact the teenagers still took dressing
- 27:08up and costume on Halloween seriously, mister Mays took the
- 27:11whole cool teacher thing to a new level. We walked
- 27:15into the classroom and were surprised to find the blind
- 27:17strawn sheets over the small windows, candles lighting the room,
- 27:21and a single frowning Jack o' lantern sitting on a
- 27:24stool in the front.
- 27:25Speaker 1: Of the desks.
- 27:26Speaker 2: Mister May said at his desk, just watching the students
- 27:29come into class and take their seats, you didn't have
- 27:32to ask anyone to be quiet, because the moment everyone
- 27:34walked into the room, they were either too excited to
- 27:37care about petty conversations or too confused to bother with them.
- 27:41The students took their seats as mister Mays began his lecture,
- 27:45he spoke quietly to set the mood and took a
- 27:48seat on a chair right next to the Jack o
- 27:50lantern in the center of the room.
- 27:53Speaker 1: Today is probably my favorite day of the year. Class.
- 27:56Halloween is my favorite holiday, and I want to share
- 27:59you with you exactly what why I love it. So much.
- 28:02Speaker 2: One girl raised her hand with a concerned look on
- 28:04her face.
- 28:05Speaker 1: I'm pushing the due date for your papers next Tuesday.
- 28:08Speaker 2: Said mister Mays, without bothering to look at the girl.
- 28:10We slowly put her hand down, looking around at the
- 28:13students with the hint of embarrassment.
- 28:15Speaker 1: God, is he just shut her right the foot just
- 28:20like raise her hand up. She's like, you can nerd.
- 28:24Speaker 2: I remember we had one teacher in high school. He's
- 28:27looking looking back. He's one of the coolest teachers ever.
- 28:30He like he had He was a literature teacher, and
- 28:33he had us read The Road in high school, which
- 28:37is an insane book to get junior high school students.
- 28:40But I remember reading McCarthy and then like developing a
- 28:43love for stories. I really attribute a lot of what
- 28:45he taught to where I am now. Uh, And I
- 28:48remember he had this policy that if any like student,
- 28:52we couldn't game it. But if naturally any student was like, uh,
- 28:55you forgot to take up the homework, he'd be like,
- 28:57that's lame, no homework.
- 29:00Speaker 1: Yeah, like that, we'll say too. That was kind of
- 29:03just kind of sweet to get to let kids read
- 29:05Cormack McCarthy at an early age I think is I
- 29:08think is actually pretty fucking cool.
- 29:10Speaker 2: I remember still.
- 29:11Speaker 1: Like heavy subject matter, but I think I think obviously
- 29:15it's written by like, I mean, a literature savant, so
- 29:18it's it's I just think that kind of stuff is
- 29:21always Also, I think his stuff is hard reads, but
- 29:23I would never say it's smut or it's like no
- 29:25gratuitous to be or two you know what I mean,
- 29:27not at.
- 29:27Speaker 2: All, Like sure there's heavy themes in it, but it's
- 29:29just good books with heavy themes.
- 29:32Speaker 1: I'll tell you this really quickly.
- 29:34Speaker 2: The moment that I kind of decided I wanted to
- 29:37dive into like why people tell stories and stuff like that.
- 29:40We so it was The Road, right, and he had
- 29:43been a literature teacher for like fifteen twenty years, and
- 29:49he said that he taught the Road when he first
- 29:51started teaching, but he hasn't taught The Road in like
- 29:55the past, like ten years or whatever. So he gets
- 29:59up there in class on the first day we're about
- 30:01to read it, and he says, I'll let you all know,
- 30:04I haven't read I haven't taught this book since my
- 30:09son was born. So now I'm not just looking at
- 30:12it as a man in a wasteland. I'm looking at
- 30:14it as a father seeing his son. So he opens
- 30:18the book and he starts reading, and he reads the
- 30:21line that says the father looked at his son that
- 30:25if his son were not the voice of God, then
- 30:27God never spoke. And as soon as he read it,
- 30:29he cried like a tear came.
- 30:31Speaker 1: Out of his eye.
- 30:32Speaker 2: And I remember I remember seeing that and thinking, this
- 30:35book matters to that guy. I want to find out why.
- 30:38I want to read it myself, and I went home
- 30:40and read the whole book in one night, became obsessed
- 30:42with it, wanted to get more into literature, and now
- 30:45I'm here. So yeah, like teachers who actually care about
- 30:49their work and put themselves into it can have such
- 30:51a profound effect on kids.
- 30:53Speaker 1: Oh absolutely. You also had a very mature response to that,
- 30:56because remember one time we watched I think it was
- 30:58Gone with the Wind, and it's a part where the
- 31:00woman rides the horse and dies and her teacher was
- 31:02crying and the entire class was just laughing at her,
- 31:09I mean, without without hesitation. I think the woman says,
- 31:13just like Paul, and my teachers like tearing up and crying,
- 31:16and we're just like I mean, like hysterically laughing. It's
- 31:21like could not be pull her up more poll opposite
- 31:24to your story.
- 31:28Speaker 2: Okay, I you know what, without comment, let's continue. The
- 31:35class erupted in quiet cheers, and mister Mays waited for
- 31:38the inevitable silence. He began his story immediately after the
- 31:42classroom had calmed down. I will attempt to recreate the
- 31:46amazing story that mister Mays told us told the class
- 31:49that day. The way in which he told this story
- 31:52rendered the horror junkie speechless and the rest of the
- 31:54class terrified. The same girl that had raised her hand
- 31:57to ask about the paper was holding her knees to
- 31:59her chest by the end of it, look of terror
- 32:01on her face. The important thing to know was what
- 32:05the story was about. The specific split my mind now
- 32:09and aren't too relevant. I'll try to recount the parts
- 32:12of the story that matter the most, but don't hold
- 32:14me to it. Basically, mister Mason and his friends set
- 32:17out on a road trip around the country after graduating
- 32:20from college. It took a truck, loaded it with camping
- 32:23gear and set out to sight see for the entire summer.
- 32:27The group went from the Poconos in New Jersey, down
- 32:30to the coast of Florida, New Orleans, to California, and
- 32:33up to Washington. From there, they went to the Rocky
- 32:36Mountains in Colorado and then back home to New York.
- 32:40This concept of the freedom to travel anywhere had the
- 32:43entire class hooked in an instant. Mister Mason was the
- 32:45coolest teacher ever in my eyes. Being adventurous college kids,
- 32:50the group didn't bring a map. There were no time constraints,
- 32:54so they just kind of drove in the general direction
- 32:57that they wanted to go and eventually found a town
- 32:59to stay in or someplace that looked interesting. He told
- 33:03us that after spending a week in Colorado, he and
- 33:06his friends had to travel through miles and miles of
- 33:08corn plains and more corn. He assumed that they were
- 33:13in either Nebraska or Kansas when they decided to pull
- 33:16their extra cash and stay in a hotel for a night.
- 33:18They settled into a motel in some town that mister
- 33:21Mays could barely remember the name of. When one of
- 33:23his friends realized that they were somewhere near his grandfather's farm,
- 33:28he wasn't entirely sure where it was, but being adventurous
- 33:31college kids, they decided to get a quick refund from
- 33:33the motel and try to contact the friend's grandpa. They
- 33:38were unable to get a hold of the grandpa on
- 33:40the phone, so the group figured it would be fun
- 33:43to just show up. Mister May's friend was adamant that
- 33:46his grandparents would take them in and feed them without
- 33:49a moment of hesitation. So group set out with an
- 33:53hour of sunlight, seeking the salvation of a comfortable house
- 33:56to stay in Kansas or Nebraska, go wherever it may
- 34:01have been. There are on a whole lot of natural
- 34:03markers that could guide lost travelers. Any directions given to
- 34:07someone who didn't live around the area basically amounted to
- 34:10go up a couple of miles to the corn, take
- 34:13a ride, and go down a dirt road to the
- 34:15other corn. There should be some wheat on your right. So,
- 34:19as is the case of most scary stories, the group
- 34:21got lost. Never wanting to admit defeat, they drove into
- 34:25the night, making wrong turns every five minutes until they
- 34:27found themselves on a wooded road that mister May's friend
- 34:31was certain that his grandparents lived off of. Mister Mays
- 34:35described the road as basically a dark path to hell.
- 34:39I wasn't entirely sure how true this was, because he
- 34:41got very excited and a bit ridiculous with his explanations
- 34:45of the trees that almost tried to grab the car
- 34:48and the red eyes of countless animals looking at them
- 34:51from the darkness. Regardless, the typical horror tropes worked on
- 34:55most of the class, everyone was terrified.
- 35:00Speaker 1: Of guys.
- 35:00Speaker 2: Drove on this dark road for about fifteen minutes before
- 35:03they came to a clearing and a small building with
- 35:05lights in it and what seemed to be a silo.
- 35:09They figured that at the very least the people who
- 35:12lived here would be able to help find where the
- 35:14guy's parents lived. The whole idea of everyone knows everyone
- 35:18in these hick parts of the country fueled his hope.
- 35:22They pulled the car up near the building, realizing when
- 35:25they were out of the car that it appeared to
- 35:27be like the kind of places where one would try
- 35:30to store a whole bunch of chickens, not a home. Still,
- 35:33the lights were on, so they figured they would give
- 35:35it a try. They approached the building as a group,
- 35:38looking in the semi open sliding door to find a
- 35:41big empty room hanging fluorescent lights lit the room like
- 35:45it was daytime and they couldn't see a soul. There
- 35:49were no cars, but one of mister May's friends was
- 35:52convinced he'd seen someone as they pulled up, so they
- 35:55decided to go inside see if there was an office
- 35:58or something where someone might still be working. Why else
- 36:02would they have this huge place lit up like that.
- 36:05There were no doors on the inside of the building. Again,
- 36:08it was just a giant, empty hall. So the group
- 36:11roamed around the property and over towards the silo. As
- 36:15they got closer, they noticed what appeared to be a
- 36:18cellar door. At this point, I remember mister Mays telling
- 36:23the entire class to learn from his idiocy. He told
- 36:27us that he hadn't seen many horror movies before that
- 36:29time and didn't think twice about approaching a creepy cellar
- 36:32door in the middle of a dark, scary foreign place,
- 36:37so that approaching the door was one of his biggest regrets.
- 36:42Mister Mays let the whole class know that he was
- 36:44going to tell us as much as he deemed appropriate
- 36:47about the experience. He felt that we were mature enough
- 36:50to handle it, but advised anyone that was squeamish to
- 36:54leave class early, several students quietly gathered their things and
- 36:58walked out the door, a couple of them being stoners
- 37:01who saw this as an opportunity to smoke behind the
- 37:03school before their next class. I didn't even give the
- 37:06announcement a second thought. Like I said, I was and
- 37:10am a sucker for this kind of stuff, and mister
- 37:12Mays was telling a story much better than anything I
- 37:15had ever conjured up. I wanted to learn from this guy,
- 37:18even though I didn't believe much of the story.
- 37:21Speaker 1: I think that people also that maybe haven't grown up
- 37:25in the Midwest or people that have grown up in
- 37:27the Midwest, will relate to this. But I'm from Missouri
- 37:31right on the Kansas border as well. There's something that's
- 37:34like very eerie about like Midwest open pastures and cornfields
- 37:40and stuff. It's very much like the ocean. It's very
- 37:42easy to get lost in there, and it's like a
- 37:44big sea of nothing. And it did sometimes like kind
- 37:47of stumble upon these houses and stuff, like this old
- 37:50kind of building or whatever. It's so uncanny in a
- 37:54lot of ways, like it's obviously it's just like, oh,
- 37:55it's just farmland. It's a guy's farmhouse. Whatever, but it's
- 37:58still just like so weird to like it's almost like
- 38:01a small island in this like sea of like blank
- 38:04empty I mean nothing, I mean plants and all that
- 38:08kind of stuff. And even that little description of him
- 38:10saying like when you went down the roads and the
- 38:11trees are grabbing at us, like before he's come about
- 38:15the red eyes looking back at us, I thought that
- 38:17was kind of peticuliar, because I've been down many you know,
- 38:19just old dirt roads where the trees are kind of
- 38:22growing into almost the road itself, so you're almost like
- 38:25your car is almost scraping past some of these branches.
- 38:28Speaker 2: It's like they're trying to retake the ground there, right,
- 38:31like they're slowly approaching over it.
- 38:33Speaker 1: Yeah, you're also encroaching on something too, where it's like
- 38:37these trees have not been trimmed. You're kind of like
- 38:40you're you're going to some place where it's like no
- 38:41one cares to clean this up, Like there's not enough
- 38:44traffic to go through that would make this place of via.
- 38:47You know, like if even like people driving down to
- 38:50themselves and knocking the branches over or whatever. It's just
- 38:52it's such an untapped part of like, I don't know, Earth,
- 38:57it's very it. I wish that more stories would elicit
- 39:02more aesthetics from the Midwest. It's so empty and like
- 39:07just so void of life in a lot of places
- 39:09that I think it's such a perfect spot.
- 39:11Speaker 2: There's something weird about like looping geometry almost or looping
- 39:17like a landscape over and over, you know, where it
- 39:21does kind of become something you could easily be lost,
- 39:23and there's no place markers for it. It's a good
- 39:26setting for something like those.
- 39:28Speaker 1: It's also a lot more chaotic than something like the
- 39:30Left Right game, where you know, Phoenix the city or
- 39:33like cities themselves are built on grid systems and stuff.
- 39:36And while there's plots of land and farm lands and
- 39:38stuff like that, there's so much stuff that isn't marked,
- 39:41like man made roads, man made trails, all kinds of
- 39:44stuff that's just completely hidden from public maps or public
- 39:48information and stuff. So I don't know, it's just it's
- 39:51very creepy, but I'm stoked. I'm curious to see what's
- 39:54in this cellar.
- 39:55Speaker 2: Yeah, I'm very invested. It's rare that I get to
- 39:58read one of these for the show and I don't
- 40:00know what's about to happen, So I'm excited.
- 40:02Speaker 1: I'm stoked.
- 40:03Speaker 2: After the class had thinned a bit, mister Mays continued
- 40:06with the story. He told the remaining few that he
- 40:09and his friends opened that cellar door, releasing a smell
- 40:12that he only described as the most putrid thing my
- 40:15senses have ever experienced. The group was no longer concerned
- 40:19with finding the owners of the property, but was now
- 40:22said on finding the source of that smell. They went
- 40:25down the steps into the cellar, which was lit by
- 40:27a single bulbs space sporadically along the ceiling of a
- 40:31long hallway. Now once folk things had gotten too strange.
- 40:36The walls were lined with metal sheeting, similar to the
- 40:39roofing on farms. The hallway itself was crooked, and the
- 40:42ceilings constantly lowered in rows, like a tunnel that was
- 40:46hastily dug and then never touched up. There were sections
- 40:50where the boys had to almost crouch in order to pass.
- 40:54Speaker 1: Are we assuming that the lights are on there? Or
- 40:56are they just looking at the empty bulbs and they're
- 40:58just saying.
- 40:58Speaker 2: I think they're on, because otherwise, in a crawl space
- 41:01like this you couldn't see anything.
- 41:03Speaker 1: It's reading almost like a uh, it's reading almost like
- 41:07a like kind of like a kill pig pen or something. Yeah,
- 41:12it's reading very much like that. For people that don't
- 41:14know that that that they kind of use that kind
- 41:16of like edged, very cheap thin middle siding and they
- 41:20just have the pigs go through there. But usually it's like,
- 41:22you know, it's a slaughterhouse or something.
- 41:25Speaker 2: The worst part, mister Mace told us, was that the
- 41:27light bulbs continuously flickered. There's your answer to if.
- 41:30Speaker 1: They're on or not.
- 41:31Speaker 2: Okay, there sometimes acting like a strobe light and making
- 41:34it very difficult to move through the winding and unstable hallways.
- 41:38In hindsight, he was certain that his mind was playing
- 41:41tricks on him. But you remember seeing flashes of things
- 41:43that couldn't be there. He said that when you are
- 41:47that focused on something, or if you are that nervous,
- 41:51your mind can do that to you. It can simply revolt,
- 41:55showing you things or people that aren't there. Could you
- 41:59usually describe the I was on the edge of my seat.
- 42:02The halls were windy and seemed to go on forever.
- 42:05Mister May's guests they were somewhere under the creepy forest.
- 42:09They had driven through when they found a door, but
- 42:11he couldn't be sure. He said that they came upon
- 42:15a door after walking for what felt like a mile.
- 42:18It was simple and wooden, but it looked like it
- 42:21belonged outside of a suburban home. It had a nice design,
- 42:25seemed to be freshly painted red, and had a very
- 42:28nice knob and knocker on it. It was a door
- 42:31that belongs at the entrance to a nice house, not
- 42:33one that should be sitting in a dirt tunnel in
- 42:35the middle of nowhere. His friend walked towards the door,
- 42:39moving carefully because of the flashing light bulb and increasingly
- 42:43and increasing uncertainty about the stability of the surrounding walls.
- 42:48He turned to the group, the rest of which were
- 42:50nervous at the very least, and attempted to lighten the
- 42:54mood with a laugh before he said.
- 42:57Speaker 1: I should probably knock first.
- 43:00Speaker 2: Ter May's friend grabbed a steel knocker and hid it
- 43:02against the door several times, mockingly.
- 43:04Speaker 1: Quietly uttering is anyone home?
- 43:08Speaker 2: The group waited about thirty seconds before their tension broke.
- 43:11The guy next to the door shrugged his shoulders and
- 43:14went to walk back to his friends, but as he did,
- 43:18the light bulb between them surged and exploded. The boys
- 43:22shielded their eyes and looked back to their lone friend
- 43:24by the door. As he lowered his hands, one of
- 43:27the metal sheets of the makeshift rof trot at the
- 43:31edge of the sheet fell directly on the boy's forehead,
- 43:33slicing it open, sitting a wave of blood down his face.
- 43:38The impact apparently knocked him out, and he fell back
- 43:40against the door, knocking it open in the process. The
- 43:46entirety of the group rushed through the dim light to
- 43:48their friend, barely noticing the seemingly pitch black room that
- 43:52now lay before them. Mister Mays was the first to
- 43:54make it to his friend's side. He lifted the guy's
- 43:57head to his arms, immediately taking off off his jacket
- 44:00and putting it over his forehead to attempt to stop
- 44:03the bleeding. Once the group had calmed down, mister Mays
- 44:06noticed that the arm that had been bracing his friend's
- 44:08head was soaking wet. He was confused about this and
- 44:11was attempting to sort it out when one of his
- 44:13friends started talking. He said something along the lines of
- 44:17the light we have to go, and mister Mays took notice.
- 44:22Speaker 1: You know when you turn off a light and everything
- 44:24is almost pitch black except the light of the bulb
- 44:27dying out or cooling down. It was like that, but
- 44:32there were so many of them. At least twenty light
- 44:34bulbs had lit the room seconds ago and now only
- 44:37looked like little stars in the darkness. That was definitely terrifying.
- 44:42But that wasn't the scariest thing.
- 44:44Speaker 2: There was still a very dim light coming from the
- 44:46hallway behind them, though it was weak, lit the room
- 44:49up just enough to see the shape of tens of
- 44:52people stating less than ten feet in front of them.
- 44:56Oh shit, mister May's friend went to say something else
- 44:59as one of the to the right flicker to life.
- 45:03Let me interrupt at this point and say that mister
- 45:05Mace was a generally playful guy. He had that tone
- 45:08of voice that makes you want to respond. Basically, he
- 45:11could say.
- 45:13Speaker 1: Let's go jump off a cliff, guys.
- 45:14Speaker 2: And you would want to respond.
- 45:16Speaker 1: With, all right, mister Mays, show us the way that is.
- 45:22Speaker 2: That is a ridiculous statement, but it gets the point across.
- 45:25Speaker 1: Oh yeah, hey, guys, let's go drunk driving. All right,
- 45:29I'm already drinking. Let's go jump off a cliff. All right,
- 45:33It's like, what are you talking about? He'd follow him
- 45:35off a cliff. The fuck are you talking about? Weirdo?
- 45:39I think I think he was just I think you're
- 45:43the weird one. He's very much the weird guy. He's like,
- 45:46he's the best. We had this guy when I was kad.
- 45:53When I was a kid, there was a teacher head
- 45:55named mister Dikes. Yes I know, and he uh, he
- 45:59would like aways joke around with people and stuff, and
- 46:02there was just like this really kind of like weird
- 46:04kid in the class. But he would always like he'd
- 46:06like make fun of me, mister Dykes, and he's like, no,
- 46:08I died, I'm okay. He's like, give me a nickname,
- 46:11call me an idiot, and he would like scream that
- 46:13out in the class. And this is the narrator is
- 46:15slowly becoming that guy. And I'm trying to not picture it,
- 46:17but it's becoming very hard.
- 46:20Speaker 2: Do you know what happened to that guy? If he
- 46:22grew up after high school? This could be his story.
- 46:24Who knows.
- 46:25Speaker 1: I don't know. Who knows.
- 46:27Speaker 2: He was a charismatic guy. The whole story up to
- 46:29this point had been told like a campfire story. He
- 46:32had the voice inflections of someone attempting to be mysterious
- 46:36and scary, which worked, but was noticeable. At this point
- 46:40in his tall I recalled that changing completely, he was
- 46:44no longer attempting to spook anyone. I could tell that
- 46:47this section was difficult for him. Either he was a
- 46:49very good actor or it was really a terrifying memory
- 46:53for him to relive. He told us that the light
- 46:56bulb came to life and illuminated the group of people
- 46:59in front of him. In the dim light, he could
- 47:01see children, at least twenty of them in just the
- 47:04visible light. They were all dressed in nightgowns that looked
- 47:07to be tattered and torn, staying dark with something. Their
- 47:12hair was long. Every single one of them looked like
- 47:15they had not had a haircut since birth. Some of
- 47:18the children were almost completely obscured by the length of it.
- 47:22Every single one of them didn't appear to have seen
- 47:24a shower or a nice bath in their entire life.
- 47:28Mister Mays told us that the most terrifying part of
- 47:30the whole thing was that none of the children were moving.
- 47:34They were all standing staring, most of them only visible
- 47:38from the faint light reflecting off their eyes. His whole
- 47:42group was paralyzed with fear for several seconds when they
- 47:45heard what sounded like an animal in the distance yelping.
- 47:50The way it was described was like the sound of
- 47:52a dog cry multiplied by ten. This spurred the group
- 47:56to light. Just as the children began to step forward,
- 47:59his friends grabbed the he injured one, and lifted him
- 48:01out of the room and into the hallway in an instant.
- 48:03Mister Mays took another second to move and had difficulty
- 48:06finding his bearings. He reached to his left in an
- 48:09attempt to find a wall to lean against and ended
- 48:11up finding a handle, then pulled hard, never losing his
- 48:14vision of the children, He bolted for the door right
- 48:19as he noticed what he had grabbed onto. A shower
- 48:22head protruded from a cement wall, reaching maybe a foot
- 48:26into the room. There was something leaking from it, but
- 48:30it was too dim to tell what it was. He
- 48:33realized that it had been lenking on to him that
- 48:35he didn't care. There were now children stammering towards him,
- 48:39as an animal cried in the distance, and his friends
- 48:42was seriously injured. As he left the room, he made
- 48:45a point to emphasize that he could make out several
- 48:47more shower heads on the wall near the single dim
- 48:50light bulb.
- 48:52Speaker 1: This is why I called the room the showers.
- 48:55Speaker 2: Mister Mays told the class. I was transfixed, sitting as
- 48:58far forward as my desk would bracing for more.
- 49:02Speaker 1: I slammed the red door behind me. I ran through
- 49:04the hallway faster than I ever run before or since.
- 49:08But it made back to the car and we drove
- 49:10out of there like a bat out of hell.
- 49:13Speaker 2: A couple of students snickered his use of the word hell.
- 49:18Speaker 1: So when you're out Trigg or Treeing tonight, make sure
- 49:21you know exactly where you're headed, and don't go to
- 49:24any abandoned farmhouses. I mean, there aren't many around here,
- 49:28but you're all smart kids. Picks up Jerry.
- 49:32Speaker 2: The class laughed and the mood lighted. As the bell
- 49:34rang for passing period. Mister Mace turned the light on,
- 49:38thanked everyone for listening, reminded them about the paper due
- 49:41next week, and told us to have a safe and
- 49:43happy Halloween. Students all around me were a buzz with
- 49:46theories about the story they had.
- 49:48Speaker 1: Just heard, but it was some sort of crazy Nazi hideout.
- 49:52Speaker 2: Said one girl.
- 49:54Speaker 1: I'd think that they were all ghost babies, that they
- 49:57were killed by a dog.
- 49:58Speaker 2: Said another. I couldn't theorize in the slightest I was
- 50:03still caught up in the moment. The way that mister
- 50:05Mays had told that story, in the detail that he
- 50:08included in it, left me feeling like we didn't get
- 50:10the whole story. A couple days later, I stayed after
- 50:14class and asked him about how it really ended, what
- 50:17happened to his friend. He laughed and said that his
- 50:19friend was fine and that it was honestly, he whispered this.
- 50:22Speaker 1: Part probably due to some of the drugs that we
- 50:26were doing at the time.
- 50:27Speaker 2: Mister Mays winked at me as if to say, don't
- 50:30tell anyone about the drugs. Bit kid, and I smiled
- 50:33and left. I lived in that town for another couple
- 50:36of months, and then was rapidly moved halfway across the
- 50:38country to Milwaukee, Wisconsin. I twisted the story around and
- 50:43told it around campfires as I got older, and it
- 50:46was always a hit, but always changed the ending, letting
- 50:49the friend die of blood loss or from being dragged
- 50:51away by the children. Wasn't until college that I got
- 50:54a chance to talk to mister Mays again. Okay, initially,
- 50:58what do you think so far? How do you feel?
- 51:02Speaker 1: I'm curious. I feel like, I mean, he's right, there's
- 51:06no way that's the full story and stuff. And I
- 51:08think that mister Mays is you know, hiding probably some
- 51:12of the graphic stuff from the children and stuff and
- 51:14just you know whatever. But I think we're getting ready
- 51:18to take our first big nose dive into some real
- 51:23shit that's getting ready to happen, especially like now he's
- 51:26in college, he's older. We're assuming that he's basically eighteen
- 51:28to twenty one years old here, and he's running into
- 51:31his old his old you know, freshman teacher from high school.
- 51:36So I'm curious. I'm very curious to see what happened.
- 51:38What do you think about? You?
- 51:39Speaker 2: What do you think about So the way the story
- 51:41played out to me is there going down the tunnel
- 51:46and then the friend gets to a door, the roofing
- 51:50falls on his head. He knocks open the door, and
- 51:52when they go to pick him up, that's when he
- 51:54sees everyone is standing in the room past the door.
- 51:58Speaker 1: Correct, correct, Yeah, So it's there, and there there was
- 52:02like the shitty metal like barn sighting metal dropped hit
- 52:07the guy in the head. He like blacks out from
- 52:09the gash in his head. He falls to the door,
- 52:12and from the light in there, you can just kind
- 52:15of barely see essentially twenty children with like nightgowns, extremely
- 52:20long hair, and you can just kind of see the
- 52:21light in their eyes a little bit, and they're kind
- 52:23of slowly moving towards them.
- 52:24Speaker 2: Yeah, I've got to say initially, like I really loved
- 52:29the writing style. I almost kind of forgot that I
- 52:33am reading a fictional story about another fictional story. It
- 52:35felt like someone a real person, recounting a story they heard, right.
- 52:41It feels very legitimate, very earned a lot of it.
- 52:44I like mister Mays as a character, especially that part
- 52:48where he's like, it's probably some of the drugs, if
- 52:50I'm being honest, you know, trying to play it off.
- 52:52But yeah, I'm sold on it so far. I'm hook line.
- 52:55Speaker 1: And see they did a nice They did a nice
- 52:58thing here too, where he's been very joky the whole time,
- 53:01and even the author made a note to be like,
- 53:04oh he his tone changed, which when I was listening
- 53:07to it, I assume at first he's like, oh, this
- 53:09is a scary story from you know, something happened to
- 53:12me whatever. And then as he's recounting it, I think
- 53:14that even he himself got kind of lost in retelling it,
- 53:17and I think he's kind of like reliving that terror
- 53:19and he has to kind of snap himself back and
- 53:21be like, oh, but you know, we made it out
- 53:22and we had it, you know. And so I like
- 53:25that juxtaposition that happens there. But I think I'm curious
- 53:30to hear what he says here when he sees him
- 53:31as a college student.
- 53:32Speaker 2: Yeah, I went to college in northern New York, not
- 53:35for any reasons associated with this story. College was a
- 53:39fun time for me. I continued being the same Ham
- 53:42that I'd always been.
- 53:44Speaker 1: God the fucking Ham comment day.
- 53:46Speaker 2: It's got to be regional. It has to be a regional.
- 53:48Speaker 1: It has to be regional. It is, it has to be.
- 53:51Speaker 2: It wasn't until sometime around my junior year that I
- 53:53ran into mister May's at a bar that I frequented. Inditionally,
- 53:57I couldn't be sure that the person I saw lane
- 54:00his head buried in his arm at the bar was
- 54:02mister Mays. The only trait that grabbed my attention was
- 54:05a sweater that he used to wear on his birthday
- 54:07during class. The shirt simply read I'm the birthday boy.
- 54:12That's sad, that's amazed, trash, it's sad by himself just
- 54:16hammered on with the shirt that says I'm the birthday boy.
- 54:19That's the most depressing thing ever. Man. I told my
- 54:24group of friends to grab a table and that I
- 54:26would join them in a second. Then walked over to
- 54:28the man at the bar. Mister Mays, I said, and
- 54:32the man looked up. The man took a second to
- 54:34look at my face before he smiled, put a hand
- 54:37on my shoulder and.
- 54:38Speaker 1: Said, hey there, son, how have you been.
- 54:42Speaker 2: I could smell some strong whiskey on his breath, and
- 54:44his cheeks were flushed. Look in his eyes told me
- 54:47that he was three sheets to the wind and probably
- 54:49had no idea who I was.
- 54:52Speaker 1: Mister Mays, it's Jack. I was a student of yours
- 54:55for a couple semesters about six or so years ago.
- 54:58Speaker 2: His face changed a bit, A genuine look of recognition
- 55:01set in, took a calmer tone, smiled and.
- 55:04Speaker 1: Said, how you been? Jack?
- 55:07Speaker 2: We talked for a solid twenty minutes. I told him
- 55:09what I had been doing for the last several years,
- 55:11and he told me apparently he was still teaching at
- 55:14the same school, doing the same old stick, as he
- 55:17called it. I asked if everything was all right, and
- 55:20he said that they were as good as they ever
- 55:22have been or wherever going to get It took me
- 55:25a while to realize that I was an adult that
- 55:27was having a conversation with another adult. Every time I'd
- 55:31spoken to mister Mays. Previously, I had been in the
- 55:33student teacher relationship, but now I was just a guy
- 55:37having a drink with a friend at the bar. My
- 55:40friends eventually left and I continued to drink with Mister Mays.
- 55:44Told me all about his divorce and his kids, things
- 55:47I never would have asked or cared about previously, but
- 55:50now I cared. He was a real person to me,
- 55:53not just an idol anymore. This was a guy who
- 55:56had real problems, not the invaluable teacher that I once
- 56:00thought he was. It had been several hours before I
- 56:03even brought up his story about the showers. I told
- 56:07him all about my history with urban legends and scary stories,
- 56:09and he just laughed when I mentioned the story that
- 56:12he had told us years ago. He almost seemed uncomfortable,
- 56:16finished his whiskey, signaled for another, and then turned to
- 56:19me and got very serious.
- 56:22Speaker 1: Listen, Jack, I don't know why I kept telling that
- 56:25story year after year.
- 56:28Speaker 2: His words were slurred or my hearing was messed up.
- 56:31We were both sufficiently blitzed at this point.
- 56:34Speaker 1: That was what my therapist told me to do when
- 56:37I was younger. I had to tell people it, to
- 56:41come to groups with it or some shit.
- 56:43Speaker 2: Took a big swig of his drink.
- 56:46Speaker 1: Wait, your therapist, I said.
- 56:49Speaker 2: Mister Mays laughed heartily and looked at me.
- 56:52Speaker 1: Of course, Jack, you think that something like that wouldn't
- 56:56fuck a person up?
- 56:57Speaker 2: I was confused, but smiled. Nonetheless, things just gotten very strange.
- 57:04Speaker 1: But I mean, you said you were all on drugs
- 57:07or something, right, No one was too terribly hurt. You
- 57:10were all okay, right?
- 57:12Speaker 2: He got almost cartoonish with his sadness in the next
- 57:15several seconds.
- 57:17Speaker 1: Of course, we didn't, Jack, Why do you think I'm
- 57:20here right now?
- 57:22Speaker 2: I was puzzled, quickly filled with a thousand questions I
- 57:25wanted to ask him, but I let him carry.
- 57:28Speaker 1: On tim fucking. He didn't make it, Jack.
- 57:33Speaker 2: He laughed, and his laugh turned suddenly to tears.
- 57:38Speaker 1: Fucking took him, they did. I don't even know. The
- 57:43cops told us we were just drunk and that he
- 57:46wandered off and got taken by wildlife. But he didn't know.
- 57:51He didn't see it, Jack.
- 57:53Speaker 2: I was absolutely stonefaced at this point. Mister Mays was
- 57:57carrying along like I knew the actual story, but I didn't.
- 58:00His friend disappeared, I didn't know.
- 58:04Speaker 1: I wish that they had found my body, though, then
- 58:08we could have shown them. That's a bad place, Jack,
- 58:13I don't know anything else to say it. It's a
- 58:15bad place.
- 58:17Speaker 2: Carried on for a couple of minutes more about his
- 58:19friend and the fun that they had before they went
- 58:21on that trip, and I let him talk. It was
- 58:24only a few minutes later that his phone rang below.
- 58:27Speaker 1: Sweetheart, I'll be on a second.
- 58:32Speaker 2: I love you, baby, person on the other end hung
- 58:35up the phone. Mister Mays got up to leave.
- 58:38Speaker 1: It's been nice seeing you, Jackie. You got a good
- 58:41head on your shoulders, boy, make sure you use it.
- 58:45Speaker 2: He began to walk out of the bar. Mister Mays,
- 58:48I yelled after.
- 58:49Speaker 1: Him, Yeah, Jack.
- 58:51Speaker 2: He turned back towards.
- 58:52Speaker 1: Me, where'd you say all that shower business took place where? Hell?
- 58:58Didn't I mention it? It's somewhere outside Broken Bow, Nebraska,
- 59:03Fucking hell on the earth if you asked me.
- 59:05Speaker 2: Mister Mays walked out of the bar after waving to me,
- 59:08running into the wall before eventually finding the door. That
- 59:12was the last time I would see him. I'd never
- 59:14be able to tell him the impact that he had
- 59:16on my life, or rather the impact that his story
- 59:19had on me. You never know about the trip we
- 59:22took after graduation, almost mimicking the one he and his
- 59:25friends had made. He would never know that the things
- 59:28he saw at that place were real. Why well, he
- 59:33died about a month later as liver failed on him.
- 59:37It's all right, though, because his family was with him
- 59:39in the hospital room. He got to dice around people
- 59:42that cared about him, And that is all I can
- 59:45ask for a man like that. I experienced that place
- 59:49too several years later. That is where my story turns.
- 59:54The following is the story of how I came to
- 59:56find the showers and why I will never ever go
- 1:00:01anywhere You're Nebraska ever again. But it's the story when
- 1:00:05I'm sober, the memory is clear enough.
- 1:00:09Speaker 1: That is the end of part Oh yeah, part one end.
- 1:00:13I am ready.
- 1:00:16Speaker 2: That felt that it didn't felt you know, it just
- 1:00:20when it hits right, and it's just kind of like, yeah,
- 1:00:24that that's the natural conclusion for those endpoints. That's a
- 1:00:27good setup for what's coming later.
- 1:00:29Speaker 1: Yeah. Yeah, yeah, no, I think that that's really really fun.
- 1:00:33I think at first it was kind of it did
- 1:00:36have it's kind of interesting. It had like a nice
- 1:00:38little uh, what is it like? Uh, it had like
- 1:00:41a nice way of like, oh, this does feel like
- 1:00:42it kind of like a child is writing this, or
- 1:00:44like it has like a very kind of I would say,
- 1:00:47albeit uh childish tone in a way, not that the
- 1:00:52writing is juvenile, but like it's very lighthearted. It didn't
- 1:00:55go really too anywhere, too crazy whatever. But then by
- 1:00:58the end there it really did shift. How as he
- 1:01:00got older to it felt like even the tone of
- 1:01:03the writing was shifting. It felt it got like a
- 1:01:05little bit more dark, a little more serious. I really
- 1:01:07enjoyed that. M Yeah. I went from like, is this
- 1:01:10only two parts? Do you know?
- 1:01:11Speaker 2: It's only two parts to my knowledge?
- 1:01:14Speaker 1: Okay, all right, so yeah, this is awesome. I'm very stoked.
- 1:01:18Speaker 2: Yeah, the first part is him as a kid learning
- 1:01:20about it than part two is the actual journey. What
- 1:01:23I will say is I like, like you mentioned, there's
- 1:01:26more of a maturity to like the tone, especially the
- 1:01:29subject matter, because it goes from like, oh, it's cool
- 1:01:31he said hell or dam to like he died of
- 1:01:35liver failure. You know, he's he's on his birthday at
- 1:01:39a bar, going to some girl in the parking lot
- 1:01:43who he may not know that well, you know, like
- 1:01:45it's a very different place. But I like there's kind
- 1:01:47of a there's a respect in the end, like he
- 1:01:49died surrounded by his family, which is all I could
- 1:01:51ask for a man like that. That's like, that's a
- 1:01:55very it's solemn, sure, but it's also almost I don't
- 1:02:03even know how to phrase it. It feels like the
- 1:02:06way you would speak about some king or old legend, right, like.
- 1:02:11Speaker 1: We definitely somebody you hold it high respect, which I
- 1:02:13think that they've done that they've done very well. One
- 1:02:16thing that he's done very well is so stating how
- 1:02:18much that this person has made an impact on his life.
- 1:02:22And you know, and even he has regurgitated that story
- 1:02:25he made the way that I like to tell this
- 1:02:28story is pieced together so far is he makes it
- 1:02:30very adamant thing about like, oh I love urban legends.
- 1:02:34I like, you know, I sway them to myself. I
- 1:02:36you know, I change them up. And then after he
- 1:02:38hears this story, even Jack takes the story and he
- 1:02:43makes it his own as well, retells it kind of
- 1:02:46makes up his own endings and stuff. But in a
- 1:02:48way too. He then follows in mister May's footsteps that
- 1:02:52happened with his friend, which this was the question I
- 1:02:55was going to ask here. It's kind of a two parter.
- 1:02:59Do you'd like the idea do you have mister Mays
- 1:03:01as a character, because I like mister May's character a lot.
- 1:03:04I think that it's just a guy. You can tell
- 1:03:05he did something here, kind of a cool teacher, like
- 1:03:07the way he set up do you think that? And yes,
- 1:03:09he was drunk as well, but him telling him the
- 1:03:13town feels if it's such a pivotal and horrible thing.
- 1:03:17I feel like, I'm like, why would this guy then
- 1:03:21tell him this? Right, obviously he's drunk and stuff, But
- 1:03:23in a way, I'm like it made me suspicious of
- 1:03:25him or his thing until they immediately shot down that
- 1:03:29idea with him dying a month later. I don't really
- 1:03:32know if we needed that. I was like kind of
- 1:03:33like hoping that it would just be like, oh, yeah,
- 1:03:35did I not tell you? And it would be some
- 1:03:37kind of weird setup for something else down the road.
- 1:03:40Did you like that whole sequence there?
- 1:03:42Speaker 2: I did? But I are you saying do you think
- 1:03:45it would have worked better if he didn't tell him
- 1:03:47the location, or if it didn't tell us he died.
- 1:03:50Speaker 1: I'm saying that it's just oddly suspicious that a guy
- 1:03:53who's just like this is like a horrible place, it's
- 1:03:55fucked up, right, and then he's like, oh, I didn't
- 1:03:58tell you where it was, Oh it was in this
- 1:04:00town outside of whatever. It feels like. If it's that
- 1:04:02horrible and he's like a tell on earth, it'd be like,
- 1:04:04don't even because you're doing two things here, you need
- 1:04:07to set up that. Mister Mays is like, don't fucking
- 1:04:09go there, don't be me right. But then when he dies,
- 1:04:12you could have Jack maybe like go to his funeral
- 1:04:15or something and they're like, oh, yeah, he would always
- 1:04:16talk about this town in Nebraska, and then maybe someone
- 1:04:18else who would tell him right, Or I think that
- 1:04:22you need to just have him find it and then
- 1:04:23we just never hear of mister May. I just don't
- 1:04:25know how I like him dying there, Like I don't
- 1:04:27know how necessary that is, Like I feel like he
- 1:04:29could have just left and then Jack never saw him
- 1:04:31again or something.
- 1:04:32Speaker 2: Yeah, yeah, maybe he goes to the funeral. So I
- 1:04:35get what you mean that. If it's such a serious
- 1:04:37saying to him, why would he blurt that out. The
- 1:04:38only thing that I could excuse that as is it's
- 1:04:42describing mister Mays as super drunk. Like it says that
- 1:04:46he runs into the wall before going to the door, right.
- 1:04:49Speaker 1: Yeah, no, he's he's severely intoxicated, and that then that's
- 1:04:52like reason enough. But to me, I'm just like I
- 1:04:54kind of wish that even mister Mays, it just you
- 1:04:57kind of like it made I'm just like, God, damn it,
- 1:04:59you stupid drunk bastard, you know what I mean, which,
- 1:05:03which you know it's totally fine, but I would almost
- 1:05:05like mister Mays to just be like just have that
- 1:05:07moment where he's just like, don't go, like, don't even
- 1:05:10I'm not gonna tell you. Don't worry about it, and
- 1:05:11it sends Jack into the spiraling thing of like, holy shit,
- 1:05:14I gotta know what this place is. Regardless, it was
- 1:05:17just a thought I had. I'm still complete.
- 1:05:20Speaker 2: I think that I get what you're saying. I kind
- 1:05:23of I think i'd like it if there was more
- 1:05:25in Beauty Left. It's kind of open and shut. I
- 1:05:28like the kind of idea. It works for me, the
- 1:05:31idea of like mister May's kind of being like the
- 1:05:33mentor character that dies early and the story sort of
- 1:05:36sends the character on his journey or what have you.
- 1:05:39I think it works. But I think you're right. Maybe
- 1:05:41it would work better if he kind of kept that
- 1:05:44secret till he was dead and the and Jack finds
- 1:05:47out some other way. Yeah, I could see.
- 1:05:49Speaker 1: That, just just something just foo for thought, because I
- 1:05:52really the story built up so is so far, and
- 1:05:54I'm so excited to get into part two. But that
- 1:05:57was just one thing at the end of part one
- 1:05:58where I was just like, ah, you know, I wish
- 1:06:01that there was maybe a more satisfying way where he
- 1:06:04would have found that place, you know what I mean,
- 1:06:06just a little food for thought. But I'm very bought in.
- 1:06:09I'm very excited, and I you know, part two this
- 1:06:12is the last part here, So it's kind of crazy.
- 1:06:15It's like I didn't know if we were getting ready
- 1:06:17to go into like a penpalate venture where it's six
- 1:06:19different many stories or whatever. But now with just like
- 1:06:22last part here, which I'm just assuming is Jack and
- 1:06:24his friend's adventure. So yeah, well we'll have to say.
- 1:06:29Speaker 2: Let's begin with part two, Part two. I'm awake now,
- 1:06:36semi sober, and ready to finish this for you guys,
- 1:06:39the internet and whoever cares to hear it. I didn't
- 1:06:42find out that mister Mays had passed away until a
- 1:06:45couple months after the funeral service. Initially I was going
- 1:06:49to seek out his family in order to send my condolences,
- 1:06:52but it wasn't as if mister Mays and I were
- 1:06:54best friends or anything like that, so I refrained. I
- 1:06:57continued through my college career and graduated a year or
- 1:07:00so after our bar meeting. Graduating with English as my
- 1:07:03major wasn't a mistake, but it wasn't exactly something that
- 1:07:07landed me any sort of immediate jobs after college. Okay,
- 1:07:10I like that for one, that the guy who wanted
- 1:07:12to be a storyteller and like was so obsessed with
- 1:07:15a story kind of follows in the footsteps of the
- 1:07:17teacher almost becomes an English teacher.
- 1:07:18Speaker 1: Oh sure, yeah, that makes total sense. Perfect evolution there. Yeah.
- 1:07:23Speaker 2: Now, I had saved a pretty solid amount of money
- 1:07:25while I was in school and decided that I deserved
- 1:07:28a bit of a vacation, if you will. I took
- 1:07:30my spare cash, got together with my college buddy Steve,
- 1:07:33packed up and hit the road, aiming for somewhere in
- 1:07:36the Rocky Mountains. I had lived near Littleton, Colorado when
- 1:07:40I was younger and remembered loving the area, so this
- 1:07:43destination was as good as any.
- 1:07:45Speaker 1: The trip was a success.
- 1:07:47Speaker 2: We made it somewhere around Estes Park, Colorado, and found
- 1:07:50a cheap cabin that we rented for about a month.
- 1:07:52The days were filled with lounging, hiking, and generally things
- 1:07:56that involved little to no work on our part. Our
- 1:08:00rental was through, we packed up again and headed on
- 1:08:02our way back east. Sometime during the strip we had
- 1:08:07met up with a couple Estes part natives in one
- 1:08:08of the local bars. We never typically hung out with
- 1:08:12them or anything like that. We just had conversations now
- 1:08:14and then over drinks and food. One night, these guys
- 1:08:18were paying their tab and packing up to leave awfully early.
- 1:08:21They were usually there until the wee hours of the morning.
- 1:08:24When we questioned them about it, they told us that
- 1:08:26they were headed to a little get together with some
- 1:08:28friends of theirs, and they invited us. Having nothing else
- 1:08:31to do, we hopped in the car and followed them
- 1:08:33to the party. The party itself was very low key
- 1:08:37and ultimately inconsequential to the story. However, the important thing
- 1:08:41about it was that at some point in the night,
- 1:08:43we were all sitting around the fire and swamping ghost stories.
- 1:08:47At this point in my life, I wasn't as much
- 1:08:48of a ham as I was in my younger years.
- 1:08:52They're sprinkling that in there just for you, hunter, just
- 1:08:55to bother you.
- 1:08:55Speaker 1: I feel it. You know what I like it? Now,
- 1:09:00go ahead hit me to it.
- 1:09:04Speaker 2: But with a little bit of encouragement, I started on
- 1:09:06a couple of stories that I remember telling in my youth.
- 1:09:09Eventually I made it to mister May's story about showers.
- 1:09:14Every time that I told it after hearing it from
- 1:09:15mister May's, I had spliced it up a little bit,
- 1:09:19but out of some sort of subconscious respect for my
- 1:09:22former teacher, I went straight into the version that he
- 1:09:24told my class in my sophomore year of high school.
- 1:09:29The group enjoyed my stories for the most part, the
- 1:09:31showers being the mutual favorite among the partygoers. Steve and
- 1:09:35I left for the cabinet around five in the morning,
- 1:09:37and he asked me about the story on the drive home.
- 1:09:39I told him all about mister May's that class, my
- 1:09:42love for everything horror related and whatnot, and he suggested
- 1:09:45that we try to find the place on our return
- 1:09:47trip to New York. Initially I was bastard, What did
- 1:09:51you say?
- 1:09:52Speaker 1: I said, you dumb bastard?
- 1:09:53Speaker 2: All right, hold on, bro, If you and I had
- 1:09:55were in this exact scenario, would one of us not
- 1:09:59be like, well, we have to go find it.
- 1:10:03Speaker 1: God, I mean probably you and I'd be like, you
- 1:10:05dumb bastard.
- 1:10:10Speaker 2: Yeah. Oh, I can't wait to see you in New Orleans.
- 1:10:14I can't wait to torment you with this stuff anyway.
- 1:10:17Speaker 1: Yeah, there's gonna be Yeah, should we go down this
- 1:10:19creepy cave? I'm like, you, dumb bastard. This is what
- 1:10:22I'm saying every time, you dumbas.
- 1:10:26Speaker 2: I love when the fan art people draw us, it's
- 1:10:28always you crying awful.
- 1:10:34Speaker 1: Yeah, yeah, keep that feels pretty. That that feels very
- 1:10:38that feels very real.
- 1:10:39Speaker 2: It's very very real. Keep traumatizing, and please, I enjoy it.
- 1:10:44It's all for you, it's for me. Initially I was reluctant,
- 1:10:47simply because I didn't feel like aimlessly wandering through Nebraska
- 1:10:50for days looking for some old farm building that was
- 1:10:52probably demolished at this point. But a couple of days
- 1:10:55before we left Colorado, I told Steve that it sounded
- 1:10:58like fun. We weren't going to be able to do
- 1:11:01another trip like this for a long time, so I
- 1:11:04figured that we might as well make the best of it.
- 1:11:06Somewhere in the back of my mind, I thought of
- 1:11:09it as a little tribute to mister Mays, the guy that,
- 1:11:12in retrospect, helped me realize that I wanted to be
- 1:11:15a writer anyway.
- 1:11:17Speaker 1: But I think that feels a little. I think that
- 1:11:18feels pretty fair. I think that, like, I mean, if
- 1:11:21you had a teacher come to you like that and
- 1:11:23say the story right, and he is drunk, mind you yea,
- 1:11:26would you believe that story to be true? Or would
- 1:11:28you just kind of be like, you know, oh that
- 1:11:31he's on hard times whatever, he's an alcoholic. I mean
- 1:11:33a month later he died his liver failed, right, would
- 1:11:37you just assume that it's just playing or what I mean, like,
- 1:11:39what would you just make you know what?
- 1:11:41Speaker 2: I'm what I would imagine if I if I heard
- 1:11:44this story as a kid, and then years later he's
- 1:11:46like crying like, no, it's it's real. My friend died.
- 1:11:49I would think something actually happened. I would think maybe
- 1:11:52there was a farmhouse, maybe his friend died there. I
- 1:11:54don't know if i'd believe the supernatural elements, but maybe
- 1:11:57it was something that killed his friend. Right, That's that's
- 1:12:02what I would think. Something happened. There was an accident basically, So.
- 1:12:06Speaker 1: If you thought that the accident did happen, I mean,
- 1:12:08I guess I'm still bought into the idea of him
- 1:12:10being like, yeah, his friend got hurt and it was
- 1:12:12probably a bad deal. It's not like they're going to
- 1:12:14go there and like, you know, disrespect the idea of
- 1:12:16like his friend's passing or something. But even just be
- 1:12:19there and be like, wow, this is what this is
- 1:12:20where it happened, you know what, I mean, to pay
- 1:12:24some kind of respect or something that to me that
- 1:12:26tracks with the guy who has been obsessed with this
- 1:12:28story for a long time. I kind of liked that
- 1:12:31idea of him being like, oh, you know what, I'm
- 1:12:32going to go pay respect to this guy, you know,
- 1:12:35and actually be able to experience that place in person
- 1:12:37and kind of like maybe following his footsteps without because
- 1:12:40if it would be different. I think if he was like, yeah,
- 1:12:42I believe in all the paranormal stuff and then you're
- 1:12:45just like, well, why would you go? Then you know
- 1:12:46what I mean?
- 1:12:47Speaker 2: Yeah, yeah, I agree, I think so. Anyway, we left
- 1:12:52Colorado and made the long, boring and barren drive to
- 1:12:54Broken Bow, Nebraska or Hell on Earth Specier Mays had
- 1:12:58to put it. I had to a motel intown and
- 1:13:01hung around for a couple of days, venturing out one
- 1:13:03hundred miles or so in any given direction each day.
- 1:13:05After that, I've remembered mister mast on us that it
- 1:13:09was somewhere outside of Broken Bow, but I don't think
- 1:13:12he got any more specific than that. We tried asking
- 1:13:15the towns folcus they had any information about the showers,
- 1:13:18but we were usually met with blank stairs or eye
- 1:13:20rolling when we told them what exactly this place was.
- 1:13:23The Only person who seems to know anything about. It
- 1:13:25was an older lady that worked at a gas station
- 1:13:27on the outskirts of town. I don't recall her name,
- 1:13:30but this woman was just one of those cheerful old people,
- 1:13:33very helpful and generally interested in what anyone had to
- 1:13:36say to her. Steven started talking to her at checkout,
- 1:13:40and she asked about our license plate comment about the
- 1:13:43fact that we're very far from home. We had nowhere
- 1:13:46in particular to be so. Steve and I ended up
- 1:13:49talking to this woman for about fifteen minutes, at which
- 1:13:52point we brought up our hunt for the place known
- 1:13:54as the Showers. Initially the name did it ring any
- 1:13:58bells with the woman, which made sense seeing as mister
- 1:14:00Mays had just given it the name after his experience there.
- 1:14:04When I began to describe the details that I remembered
- 1:14:06from his story, friendly old woman interrupted me, which alm
- 1:14:10was not scornful or mean in any way, but she
- 1:14:13became very tense and deliberate with her words. From that
- 1:14:16point on.
- 1:14:17Speaker 4: People don't deal with anything relating to that sort of
- 1:14:20business around here anymore.
- 1:14:22Speaker 1: That was all a long time ago.
- 1:14:25Speaker 2: Following her statements, she attempted to be cheerful again. Excusing
- 1:14:29herself to the restroom and wishing us the best on
- 1:14:31our return trip to New York. Okay, if this is
- 1:14:36a Barosca scenario, I didn't do it.
- 1:14:39Speaker 1: Okay, No, But I'm wondering. I'm wondering if there's maybe
- 1:14:44some sort of infamous family or something also like that.
- 1:14:46She's just like, excuse me, I have to go take
- 1:14:48a shit. She's like, have a good return trip.
- 1:14:52Speaker 2: Like children tunnels.
- 1:14:56Speaker 1: Yes, of course. I yeah.
- 1:15:01Speaker 4: Now I've gotta go take my regular afternoon poop.
- 1:15:05Speaker 1: The uh the the thing about her though, commenting like, oh,
- 1:15:09you guys are really far away from home is very suspicious.
- 1:15:12As soon as I as soon as you read that,
- 1:15:13I was like, okay, uh, oh.
- 1:15:15Speaker 2: It can be. It certainly can be. And I had
- 1:15:18a bit of a tense there too. But at the
- 1:15:19same time, I've said that to people like I've been
- 1:15:22at a gas pump and seen someone with like a
- 1:15:24Pennsylvania attack and be like, we'll bring you down this
- 1:15:26way or whatever. It's just a Southern thing.
- 1:15:28Speaker 1: I think, you creep.
- 1:15:30Speaker 4: Yeah, a place to be from your home down Pennsylvania.
- 1:15:37Speaker 1: What brings you down here? Now?
- 1:15:39Speaker 4: If you wanted to go down to the bog. Feel
- 1:15:42free to peek around there.
- 1:15:44Speaker 1: Late at night. Friend, I'm just a regular citizen down here.
- 1:15:49Speaker 2: Is that you have a creole accent?
- 1:15:52Speaker 5: Now?
- 1:15:52Speaker 1: Is that? Yeah? Down? Yah?
- 1:15:54Speaker 4: Well, you're gonna go down to the swamp, and I
- 1:15:57wouldn't say, old mister Weller's what's down there? But good
- 1:16:01luck now, mister Pennsylvania man, big.
- 1:16:06Speaker 2: City man, coming on down to this swamp.
- 1:16:09Speaker 5: You seas, oh, big city boy, awfully fall from.
- 1:16:14Speaker 2: Miss coming down to this year swamp. You're here, see
- 1:16:19and thinking he can get by you.
- 1:16:21Speaker 1: See.
- 1:16:21Speaker 2: But if old mister Weller season, then mom.
- 1:16:25Speaker 4: Yeah, say mister Weller's name three times down by the ball.
- 1:16:31Speaker 2: Say his name by the bog. City boy.
- 1:16:35Speaker 1: Yeah. But anyways, you take Canda. You sound like exactly
- 1:16:42average average Isaiah gas station moment, be like, you know,
- 1:16:49I hate when people say like, oh, like when I
- 1:16:52have like Missouri my Missouri plates and I'm like, I
- 1:16:54had to drive like h l A when I first
- 1:16:56graduated college and peopleould be like, oh, Missouri, well you're
- 1:17:00very far out, and I'd be like, why the fuck
- 1:17:02does it matter to you? Leave me alone? I don't
- 1:17:04know who the fuck are you. Yeah, I'm goodation good
- 1:17:09fucking observation. Dude, Hey, what do you want my social
- 1:17:12Security number? Next you creep.
- 1:17:13Speaker 2: There trying to talk?
- 1:17:15Speaker 1: What's your blood type? That's your second question? You always
- 1:17:17ask people, Oh, are you a universal donor?
- 1:17:22Speaker 2: Mister Weller's locks them universal donu.
- 1:17:25Speaker 5: Oh type whole negative, his favorite blood type. Miss mister
- 1:17:30Weller is going to be please mister mister Willer is
- 1:17:35going to be very excited, mister from Pennsylvania when mister Wellers.
- 1:17:40Speaker 2: Gets his universal donor blood time from Pennsylvania. See, it's
- 1:17:44a good season round here. You see.
- 1:17:47Speaker 1: He runs a plasma He runs a plasma blood bank.
- 1:17:51Speaker 2: Yeah, they get down there in the ball, they get
- 1:17:54down to the swamp and it's just like, Oh, I'm
- 1:17:55doctor Wellers. I run a local blood clinic.
- 1:17:57Speaker 1: Heedy, how are you doing? How are you? He's like
- 1:18:01very normal that you're in the You're like behind like
- 1:18:03an old oak tree. What did I tell you? He
- 1:18:06loves you? No, no, you know what I'm saying.
- 1:18:09Speaker 2: Mister Weller's name, and he's coming for you.
- 1:18:13Speaker 1: Now you're going to get a glass of orange juice
- 1:18:16because you donated. Blow He that.
- 1:18:19Speaker 6: Sows the wind reap into the whirlwind boy and you've
- 1:18:22kicked against the pricks one two minute times for.
- 1:18:26Speaker 1: Mister Weller's Mister Weller, Laura is gonna go crazy.
- 1:18:31Speaker 2: Just got like a little like paw patrol bandage. You're like, no,
- 1:18:34it wasn't that bad.
- 1:18:35Speaker 1: It's like, mister be.
- 1:18:39Speaker 2: Na, what are you doing.
- 1:18:46Speaker 1: Riding Lord to do the to the universe. Mister Weller
- 1:18:49will be Mister Weller is now our is now the
- 1:18:52creep cast Poltergeist. He is the ghost, the.
- 1:18:56Speaker 2: Blood bank guy.
- 1:18:57Speaker 1: You just for you, I'll get legs. We'll see. I
- 1:19:01feel like in the future, as time goes on, we
- 1:19:04will I have a feeling we'll experience mister Weller again
- 1:19:07soon enough.
- 1:19:08Speaker 2: Okay, all right, thank you, thank you for that. Dear Hannah.
- 1:19:12Speaker 5: Uh, no problem, now, y'all what that we had a point,
- 1:19:17oh the whole like talking to people.
- 1:19:19Speaker 2: I had a conversation with something the other day because
- 1:19:20someone else had Tennessee tags and he's like, oh, what
- 1:19:22brings you down this way? And I'm like, ah, down here,
- 1:19:25blah blah. We start talking about Tennessee and stuff like that.
- 1:19:27It's just a not you can have nice one minute conversation.
- 1:19:32Speaker 1: Don't fucking look at my car anymore.
- 1:19:34Speaker 2: That is what I would say, are you Are you
- 1:19:36from New York because you're acting like a Yankee?
- 1:19:39Speaker 1: Okay, you know what, maybe I am. I would be like,
- 1:19:41you know what, why are you looking at my white
- 1:19:43did my license plate? Was that peculiar to you? Dude?
- 1:19:47Leave me alone. I have a feeling a lot of
- 1:19:49people in chat are going to agree with me. I
- 1:19:50think a lot of our commentaris are going to be like, yeah,
- 1:19:53if a guy came with me, he's like, oh.
- 1:19:55Speaker 2: That's because that's because.
- 1:19:58Speaker 1: That's because okay, the one your wife sure does look pretty.
- 1:20:03Speaker 6: No no, no, no, no, no no, you're describing it.
- 1:20:06Speaker 2: You're describing stopped you in the accident right now.
- 1:20:10Speaker 6: No, missus, I will tell missers.
- 1:20:17Speaker 1: Miss back in town. Now.
- 1:20:20Speaker 2: There is a difference between someone going, oh cool, it
- 1:20:23brings you this way and someone going, your wife looking
- 1:20:26real pretty in that truck.
- 1:20:28Speaker 1: Boy, I don't. I don't see a delineation. I did
- 1:20:31not see any delineation at all. What brings you to
- 1:20:33town is the same to me as oh you have
- 1:20:37a pretty set of hands. That's exact same thing to me.
- 1:20:43Your head would look great on my man tole.
- 1:20:46Speaker 2: You got soft hands, boy.
- 1:20:49Speaker 1: Yeah, Oh, that's a very tight fitting pair of blue jeans.
- 1:20:53Speaker 2: You have dear for this is a different kind of
- 1:20:55cowboy we're talking about now.
- 1:20:58Speaker 1: I guess so. Yes, in the story of I think
- 1:21:04we're at uh Steve, and I returned.
- 1:21:07Speaker 2: That that that author is like, good God.
- 1:21:12Speaker 1: He's probably siding with me. And I imagine I want
- 1:21:14people to vocalize to make sure that they know that
- 1:21:17I don't don't talk to me whenever I'm at a
- 1:21:20gas station where I don't want short that. You know,
- 1:21:22what's nice for short talk whatever is if you know
- 1:21:26you're passing by someone in a store, I mean you're
- 1:21:28doing whatever, if you're outside, don't give me an observation
- 1:21:31that you've been like looking at me from afar. That's
- 1:21:34what I don't like. I think that's the I think
- 1:21:36that's the delineation. You made an acute observation that like, yes,
- 1:21:39I am not from here. Why do you need to
- 1:21:42like vocalize that, do you know what I mean? That's
- 1:21:44where I'm at. I thought, you whatever, you get kidnapped,
- 1:21:50What if you get kidnapped, I'm gonna be like, yeah, no.
- 1:21:52Ship probably because he's a Labrador and he's just like
- 1:21:56I'm not from here. You're like, oh happy, go lucky.
- 1:21:59Oh yeah, yeah, you know I'm not from here. Okay, No,
- 1:22:01I don't know anybody. I don't person around here.
- 1:22:04Speaker 6: Don't pick a late I cannot be both mister Weller's
- 1:22:08is coming to collect his due.
- 1:22:09Speaker 2: And also like, oh hi, you got room in the
- 1:22:13back of your car. Sure, I'll breathe into this ron.
- 1:22:15Speaker 1: It depends on where you're at. It depends on where
- 1:22:17you're at. Okay, if I'm in your home today, I
- 1:22:19think that. Yeah, you're trying to.
- 1:22:20Speaker 2: Do as soon as we hang out together, I'm going
- 1:22:23to publicly embarrass you as much as possible. I'm going
- 1:22:25to I'm going to walk up to strangers and be like,
- 1:22:28im my friend here wants to know about your day
- 1:22:30or where you got that purse or something like that.
- 1:22:32I'm gonna do that constantly.
- 1:22:34Speaker 1: I'm gonna say, you know, I'm gonna say I'm like,
- 1:22:35that's really funny because my friend's been taking polaroid pictures
- 1:22:38of year for about three probably about thirty minutes, and
- 1:22:41he keeps talking about his basement, so I don't know
- 1:22:42what that means. So feel free. Yeah, no, yeah, I
- 1:22:44want to know stuff, But I just want you know,
- 1:22:46this guy's been taking pictures of the all day. Check
- 1:22:47his phone. Check his phone as well. I say, that's okay.
- 1:22:51Speaker 2: If I'm like, oh, my friend here wants to talk
- 1:22:53to you, You're like he's he's he's God, easy.
- 1:22:58Speaker 1: Good God, God, let's just continue the story.
- 1:23:03Speaker 2: What do you think you were implied with the polaroid
- 1:23:05pictures that.
- 1:23:07Speaker 1: You're gonna murder them?
- 1:23:08Speaker 2: Oh well that's not as bad debatively, Okay, all right, anyway,
- 1:23:16Steve and I returned to the car. Okay for those
- 1:23:18because it's been twenty minutes of mister Weller, So I'm
- 1:23:21just glad something took off the Jacoby story, like it's
- 1:23:26been twenty minutes since we last discussed it. But they
- 1:23:28went to the old lady who said they don't do
- 1:23:29that anymore, and then they drive back.
- 1:23:31Speaker 1: So, yeah, she went to take a shit. And now
- 1:23:34they're being like because she was the only person so
- 1:23:36far that I presume, in this town of Broken Bow
- 1:23:39that has ever actually acknowledged the shower kind of thing
- 1:23:42or even just like not even particularly just like oh
- 1:23:44the title the showers, but like I'm guessing the cavernous
- 1:23:47thing or like the children, because I'm assuming that they
- 1:23:50probably told them like, oh, you know, it's a place
- 1:23:53there's like kids or like. I assume that they probably
- 1:23:55told her a bit of the story and she made
- 1:23:57her uncomfortable.
- 1:23:59Speaker 2: Yeah. Probably. I think they started to be like, oh,
- 1:24:03you know, it's like a long tunnel and there's like
- 1:24:05shower heads, and she knows whatever's going on.
- 1:24:09Speaker 1: Yeah, I assume that they would probably also say like, oh,
- 1:24:11there's children with nightgowns like whatever. She probably giving her
- 1:24:15broad details and there was, but she probably yeah, I mean,
- 1:24:19her even giving a reaction to that is crazy. Yeah.
- 1:24:23Speaker 2: Steve and I returned to the car without a word.
- 1:24:25Both of us were thinking about what the lady had said. Again,
- 1:24:28she didn't seem to be angry at all. She just
- 1:24:30didn't want to hear another word about it. We were
- 1:24:32driving back to the hotel before Steve said something.
- 1:24:37Speaker 1: I mean, if I had to live in a place
- 1:24:39associated with an urban legend or something like that, I
- 1:24:42would totally mess with anyone who asked about it. I mean,
- 1:24:47eventually you'd get tired of people asking about it, so
- 1:24:50you'd try to scare them to get them to shut up,
- 1:24:53wouldn't you. Oh yeah, Steve's going, Steve, Steve's having a
- 1:24:57tough time. That fucked with him? Yeah for sure.
- 1:24:59Speaker 2: Yeah. I agreed with Steve and kept driving. But the
- 1:25:02whole experience wasn't sitting right with me. If this was
- 1:25:06some sort of well known legend in the area, why
- 1:25:08did no one else in the town seem to know
- 1:25:10anything about it? But I managed to shrug it off.
- 1:25:13Mind you, neither of us were scared of finding the showers.
- 1:25:17This little excursion on our road trip was more like
- 1:25:19a scavenger hunt, a cap off to an overall relaxing vacation.
- 1:25:24Steve and I were basically like tourists hunting for the
- 1:25:27site of which a famous movie was filmed, or something
- 1:25:30like that. We went into the whole situation with little
- 1:25:34to no expectations and a fleeting hope that we would
- 1:25:37be able to find this place. We spent another day
- 1:25:40in Broken Bow before we took our next trip out
- 1:25:42to try to find the showers. Nebraska isn't as terrible
- 1:25:46of a place as people make it out to be,
- 1:25:48but it really isn't all that exciting. We found a
- 1:25:51bar and spent some time there, and that was just
- 1:25:54about the extent of our activity on our quote day off.
- 1:25:58When we did get back on the road, we decided
- 1:26:00that we would attempt to stay off of main roads
- 1:26:02for as much of the day as we could. I
- 1:26:05knew that there was no way that this place was
- 1:26:06going to be off of the highway, and I remember
- 1:26:09some detail about a dirt road and mister May's story,
- 1:26:11so we went looking for those. This was a fairly
- 1:26:14feudal effort. Most of Nebraska is dirt roads. It was
- 1:26:18seven in the evening when we came upon a small
- 1:26:21but thick forest. I used the term lightly for Nebraska.
- 1:26:25This place was like an oasis. The trees were full
- 1:26:28and thick, shrouding most of its insides and darkness. The
- 1:26:32sun was setting, and even though we had run into
- 1:26:34a few of those random crops of trees, we agreed
- 1:26:37that this one showed more promise than any of the others.
- 1:26:40There wasn't really a road, but there looked to be
- 1:26:42a path where a dirt road might have been at
- 1:26:45some point, so we drove along. That if the car
- 1:26:48was able to handle the rocky mountains, a dirt path
- 1:26:51in Nebraska wouldn't give us no trouble. We moved slowly
- 1:26:55and carefully along this trail, making sure to clear any
- 1:26:58fallen trees in the road or rock that would render
- 1:27:00the car useless. When the sun finished setting, it was
- 1:27:03pretty dark in this place during the day, but when
- 1:27:06night came it was something else entirely. I had an
- 1:27:09inkling at this point that we had found the right place,
- 1:27:12but I didn't want a jinxent, so we continued onward.
- 1:27:16I didn't realize it at the time, the little bits
- 1:27:18of light that managed to penetrate the canopy and this
- 1:27:21maniature forest actually did make it look as if the
- 1:27:24tree branches were trying to grab the car. It's like
- 1:27:26mister Mason mentioned it in the story. I'm still convinced
- 1:27:30that he made up the part about the animal eyed.
- 1:27:31So the most aggressive creature we saw in the woods
- 1:27:34was a dead rabbit on the side of the trail.
- 1:27:36I didn't have any obvious signs of death. It just
- 1:27:38looked like it had simply lay down and never bothered
- 1:27:41to get up. Whichrove out of the darkness for quite
- 1:27:44a while before we found a clearing. We had to
- 1:27:47move several smaller clusters of branches out of the way before,
- 1:27:50but right in front of our exit was a giant
- 1:27:53dead on serve a tree. There was no way we
- 1:27:57were moving this one, so we got out and turned
- 1:27:59on the bride headlight lights and the hopes that it
- 1:28:00would illuminate the area in.
- 1:28:01Speaker 1: Front of us.
- 1:28:03Speaker 2: There was a feeling of excitement exed strangely with fear
- 1:28:05when I saw what lay fifty feet beyond the clearing. There,
- 1:28:10lit partially by the headlights from the car and a
- 1:28:12little bit of light from the crescent moon, so it
- 1:28:14appeared to be an old barn house. This wasn't a
- 1:28:18typical farmhouse. It was larger than the barns that I
- 1:28:22had seen in films and didn't have any sort of crest.
- 1:28:25It basically looked like a small warehouse. I wasn't entirely
- 1:28:29sure at this point if this was the place we
- 1:28:31were looking for, but this was definitely the closest.
- 1:28:34Speaker 1: We had come.
- 1:28:35Speaker 2: I moved through the brush until I was roughly twenty
- 1:28:38feet from the entrance, at which point all of the
- 1:28:41growth seemed to stop. I don't know if the owners
- 1:28:44had done something in the soil, but the whole structure
- 1:28:47had a border around it that was clear of any
- 1:28:50sort of plant life. I approached the entrance to the building,
- 1:28:54large sliding doors. Steve came up behind me with two
- 1:28:57flashlights in hand.
- 1:29:00Speaker 1: So, were you just gonna run off into the place
- 1:29:01in the dark?
- 1:29:02Speaker 2: I gave a half hearted chuckle and grabbed one of
- 1:29:04the lights from his hand. Mine was a little but
- 1:29:07pretty bright flashlight. It was the kind that hikers would
- 1:29:10most likely fasten into their backpacks, just in case they
- 1:29:12were stranded at night.
- 1:29:14Speaker 1: It worked well enough.
- 1:29:16Speaker 2: I grabbed the metal door with both hands, holding the
- 1:29:18flashlight with my mouth, and gave it a tug. It
- 1:29:21moved slightly, creaked a little bit, but there was no
- 1:29:23way I was doing this by myself. Steve came up
- 1:29:27from behind, set his flashot on the ground, grabbed the door,
- 1:29:30and said.
- 1:29:31Speaker 1: One, two, three.
- 1:29:34Speaker 2: We pulled at the door with all that we could muster.
- 1:29:36Once we had managed to move it a couple of inches,
- 1:29:38it must have latched back onto its tracks, because it
- 1:29:41slid very easily, stopping hard with the loud, tangling thud.
- 1:29:45When it was completely open, Steve picked up his flashlight
- 1:29:48and walked behind me. I'd already moved inside. The inside
- 1:29:52of the structure was exceptionally bare, almost troublingly, so I
- 1:29:56wasn't entirely sure how far we were from the nearest
- 1:29:58home or small town. But there wasn't even the slightest
- 1:30:02bit of evidence that anyone had been in this building
- 1:30:04for years. There were no broken beer bottles or empty
- 1:30:08bags of chips. There weren't even any animal droppings or
- 1:30:10eager plants that managed to grow here. The room was expansive,
- 1:30:15larger than your average farm, but not the warehouse sized
- 1:30:18monstrosity that I believe mister Mays had described in his story.
- 1:30:22I was sure that it was simply a holding area
- 1:30:25for farming equipment or something similar. At some point, disappointed,
- 1:30:29I wandered near the entrance while Steve ventured into the
- 1:30:32expanse of darkness. So I was running over the details
- 1:30:35of the story in my mind. Something struck me, like
- 1:30:37a sack of bricks in mister May's story, there was
- 1:30:41a silo near the barn. I ran outside, my eyes
- 1:30:44adjusting easily because of the very least it was brighter outside.
- 1:30:48I looked in all directions, running around the perimeter of
- 1:30:51the building. Surely, if there was ever a silo near
- 1:30:53this place, there'd be some evidence of it somewhere. But
- 1:30:57despite my hopes, there's nothing but a cluster of thick
- 1:31:00bushes on one side, brush and dirt everywhere, and the
- 1:31:03forest that we had come from. I walked back into
- 1:31:06the building, frustrated and tired. Steve was still excited, eagerly
- 1:31:10running around the inside of the building.
- 1:31:13Speaker 1: Even I could just find a shower hit or a pipe,
- 1:31:15then we know it was true. But just keep looking
- 1:31:19with me.
- 1:31:20Speaker 2: I didn't want to ruin his excitement. I told Steve
- 1:31:22the story several times, but obviously he didn't realize that
- 1:31:26this just wasn't the place. The building was weird, yes,
- 1:31:29it was out of place and oddly pristine, but it
- 1:31:32wasn't the location of the showers. I let him explore
- 1:31:35for a little bit before I called him over.
- 1:31:38Speaker 1: This is probably as close as we were going to get, man,
- 1:31:41But this isn't it. Remember the silo.
- 1:31:44Speaker 2: His face went from excitement to disappointment in an instant,
- 1:31:47much like a young child who didn't get the presence
- 1:31:49he wanted on his birthday. I patted him on the shoulder.
- 1:31:53Speaker 1: This is still pretty cool, though, I mean, we could
- 1:31:55still tell people that we founded.
- 1:31:57Speaker 2: I was reverting back to my old habits quickly, Steve laughed.
- 1:32:02Speaker 1: Yeah, man, I guess we could. It is definitely creepy enough.
- 1:32:07We should get some pictures as proof, you know.
- 1:32:09Speaker 2: I agreed with him.
- 1:32:10Speaker 1: I'm gonna go grab the camera really quick.
- 1:32:12Speaker 2: He said, as he bolted out of the entrance of
- 1:32:14the building. I was left alone in the building. It
- 1:32:18was very quiet when I was alone in there. I
- 1:32:20could hear the faint sound of Steve running through the
- 1:32:22brush and to the car. Once he was far enough away,
- 1:32:26everything was quiet. I remember not even hearing the wind
- 1:32:29or the chirping or crickets. As I walked deeper into
- 1:32:31the dark, flashlight in hand, I was convinced that there
- 1:32:35had to be something. As I approached the far corner
- 1:32:38of the room, sound of my feet scratching against the
- 1:32:40dirt was interrupted by a soft hall ove thud. I stopped,
- 1:32:45trying to figure out what it was, put my foot
- 1:32:48down hard against the ground, and heard it again. I
- 1:32:51stopped one more time, realizing that the floor that I
- 1:32:54was standing on was covering something hollow. I walked to
- 1:32:58the wall of the room, looking carefully at the floor
- 1:33:01to try to spot any holes or gaps. As far
- 1:33:04as I had known, it was solid ground that this
- 1:33:06saying set a top, so I was convinced that I
- 1:33:09had found a hatch or a basement or something. Ard
- 1:33:12Steve coming back through the brush as I.
- 1:33:14Speaker 1: Shouted, Steve, come over here, it's hot.
- 1:33:18Speaker 2: As I went to say the word hollow, I hopped
- 1:33:20a little bit, hoping to recreate the sound so that
- 1:33:23he could be able to hear it. Upon entering the door.
- 1:33:26Second that my feet made contact with the floor, I
- 1:33:28felt it give out beneath me. The memory of the
- 1:33:32falls of us, but I do recall hearing wood splinter.
- 1:33:35I remember seeing the light from Steve's flash light falling
- 1:33:38away into complete darkness. It wasn't a long fall, but
- 1:33:42I must have fallen in a terrible position, because I
- 1:33:44knowed that I lost consciousness for several seconds at the least.
- 1:33:49When I woke up, I was staring at a bright
- 1:33:51light for an instant. I had thoughts about approaching the
- 1:33:54fabled light at the end of the tunnel. I was
- 1:33:56angry at myself.
- 1:33:59Speaker 1: You died in a brass cot. Jack, Wow, you do
- 1:34:02know how to fuck up my self.
- 1:34:04Speaker 2: Depreciation in the afterlife was interrupted above what sounded like
- 1:34:07Steve's voice.
- 1:34:09Speaker 1: Jesus, Jack, Jack, can you hear me? Dude, wake up,
- 1:34:13please wake up.
- 1:34:15Speaker 2: I managed to lift my head up off the floor
- 1:34:17just enough for him to celebrate. The pain in my
- 1:34:19head was immense, but it was outweighed by the pain
- 1:34:22shooting through my knee. I knew I had a concussion,
- 1:34:25but the pain of my knee was just so much
- 1:34:27more pressing. Looked around until I found my tiny flashlight
- 1:34:31set up and reassured Steve.
- 1:34:34Speaker 1: I'm okay, it just hurt my knee. I butt my
- 1:34:37head too, really hard. Thank fuck man, I thought you
- 1:34:42were dead. Imagine that though dying can fucking Nebraska. It'd
- 1:34:47be awful.
- 1:34:48Speaker 2: His words made me laugh a little bit, but I
- 1:34:50stopped myself. The slightest shaking hurt my head and made
- 1:34:53me incredibly dizzy.
- 1:34:55Speaker 1: I guess a rope? What should I go? Get a
- 1:35:00rope to get you out of here? Or do you
- 1:35:02see a ladder?
- 1:35:03Speaker 2: I looked around the walls that set in front of me.
- 1:35:06There were smooth cement. There was no way that I
- 1:35:09was climbing out of here.
- 1:35:12Speaker 1: Yeah, get the rope bag. It's buried under all of
- 1:35:15our stuff. I think it might be in my red
- 1:35:17climbing bag, but I'm not sure.
- 1:35:19Speaker 2: Steve nodded, telling me to hang in there and that
- 1:35:21he would be back in a little bit, and then
- 1:35:23he ran off. The silence that followed was uncomfortable. After
- 1:35:27the sound of Stee's feet scraping the floor above me
- 1:35:29faded away, I was only able to hear that buzzing
- 1:35:32that occurs, and the total silence intertwined with the pulsing
- 1:35:35in my head. I pushed myself over to the nearest
- 1:35:38cement wall and braced myself against it, resting and breathing
- 1:35:41deep in an attempt to call myself. The cement was
- 1:35:44unnaturally cold against my back. It was summer, so I
- 1:35:47only had a T shirt on, but it felt like
- 1:35:49ice even through that. Again, this observation was primarily made
- 1:35:53after the fact. The moment just felt good to lean
- 1:35:56against something. I sat there waiting for Steve, even this
- 1:36:00underground basement, and I began to feel uneasy. I felt
- 1:36:03like an idiot for falling down here, felt pain for
- 1:36:06my injuries as well. This all seemed to fade into
- 1:36:09one emotion in an instant. When I heard what I
- 1:36:12could only identify as breathing somewhere to my left, I
- 1:36:17convinced myself that it was my injured mind playing tricks
- 1:36:19on me for a few moments, until my mind decided
- 1:36:22to rapidly replay mister May's story. When I had first
- 1:36:26heard it in the classroom years before, I was more
- 1:36:29impressed than I was scared. But now, sitting in the
- 1:36:32dark basement in the middle of Nebraska, felt something that
- 1:36:35I hadn't felt in a long time. It couldn't even
- 1:36:38be summed up in the word fear. As I sat there,
- 1:36:42I felt all encompassing dread. I pointed my flashlight to
- 1:36:47the left, the direction for which I thought I heard
- 1:36:49the sound. The light didn't reach the other wall it
- 1:36:52was too far away, but I was comforted to see
- 1:36:55absolutely nothing there. I breathed deeply for a couple more
- 1:36:59seconds before I heard another noise in the darkness. Very
- 1:37:02quick and I cannot be sure that it wasn't my
- 1:37:04own body moving around without my noticing, But I thought
- 1:37:08that I had heard scrapings, a scraping sound not ten
- 1:37:11feet in front of me. It sounded like the noise
- 1:37:13your feet make when you were walking across a dirt
- 1:37:15covered floor. Before I could react, I heard the breathing
- 1:37:19on my left again, closer. This time it was no
- 1:37:22way this was real. I hadn't seen so much as
- 1:37:25a spider web in this building, and now it was
- 1:37:27convincing myself that something next to me was breathing. I
- 1:37:31was angry at myself for getting so worked up. I
- 1:37:33told myself that the human brain is constantly hallucinating. I
- 1:37:37told myself that while in silence or darkness, the brain
- 1:37:39will make sounds to fill the gaps or make you
- 1:37:43think you see things that aren't there. I channeled my
- 1:37:46inner skeptic in order to call myself. It worked. It
- 1:37:49worked until I saw a flash of something in front
- 1:37:52of me. I can't be entirely sure what it was,
- 1:37:54but I heard the accompanying sounds feet scraping against the floor,
- 1:37:58and I began to swell with I saw that the
- 1:38:02best course of action at this point was to turn
- 1:38:04off my flashlight, assuming that if they couldn't see me,
- 1:38:08couldn't get to me whatever they might be. I turned
- 1:38:13off my flashlight and was left in complete and total darkness.
- 1:38:16The bulb of the flashlight faded as it cooled, and
- 1:38:19I put it into my pocket, simultaneously pushing back against
- 1:38:22the cold cement wall in an attempt to stand I
- 1:38:26managed to get up to my feet well foot, and
- 1:38:29found that I couldn't stand to put any pressure on
- 1:38:31the injured knee. I leant to the corner, humming to myself,
- 1:38:35trying to break the deafening silence. I called for Steve
- 1:38:39as loud as I can manage, which heard no response.
- 1:38:42He's probably in the back of the car, still hunting
- 1:38:44for the rope. There had to be a ladder something somewhere.
- 1:38:49I continued to hum, and my heartbeat, which had been
- 1:38:52beating almost out of my chest, slowed to a manageable rate.
- 1:38:56I moved along the cement wall, keeping my whole body
- 1:38:59against it and the weight off of my injured knee.
- 1:39:02I had traveled what I guessed to be about ten
- 1:39:04feet when my head made contact with something in front
- 1:39:07of me. I tumbled to the ground. I could cushion
- 1:39:10must have amplified the pain because it was blinding. I
- 1:39:14reached both hands to my forehead when I felt something
- 1:39:16warm and wet with my fingers. I searched for a
- 1:39:20cut anywhere on my forehead, but couldn't find one. I
- 1:39:23just really searched for my flashlight. As I set up
- 1:39:25and tried to get back against the wall, I grabbed
- 1:39:29the light in my right hand, bracing against the wall
- 1:39:31with the other, I turned it on and pointed it
- 1:39:34onto the darkness where I was just lying. The floor
- 1:39:36was wet, the dirt had muddled the color of whatever
- 1:39:40the liquid was. I tried to get my eyes to
- 1:39:43focus on the puddle, tried to convince myself that it
- 1:39:45was my blood when I saw another drop fall into
- 1:39:48the puddle. Words like the ability to describe the way
- 1:39:52I felt when I heard the drip noise again and
- 1:39:55saw yet another tiny ball of liquid fall into the puddle.
- 1:40:00I think I knew even then exactly what the source was.
- 1:40:04I was endlessly trying to convince myself that I was wrong.
- 1:40:09I listened the flashlight up and pointed it at the
- 1:40:11source of the liquid. What stared back at me was
- 1:40:14a pipe that protruded at least a foot out from
- 1:40:17the cement wall. The metal was rested and cracked a
- 1:40:21little bit so the liquid began.
- 1:40:23Speaker 1: To seep from them.
- 1:40:24Speaker 2: At the end of the pipe was a simple shower
- 1:40:27head aim down towards the ground.
- 1:40:31Speaker 1: Yeah that's awesome.
- 1:40:32Speaker 2: Yeah, Yeah, that's pretty good. You know that feeling when
- 1:40:35your stomach drops. In this case, I think mine literally did,
- 1:40:39because that was the story.
- 1:40:43Speaker 1: What. Oh no, I'm just listening.
- 1:40:44Speaker 2: Oh oh sorry, I thought you thought I asked you
- 1:40:47know when your stomach drops, like like I personally was
- 1:40:51asking you. I wasn't part of the story.
- 1:40:54Speaker 1: Oh yeah, no, I definitely do. Yeah, it's I know
- 1:40:56that feeling. It's like, oh my god. Yeah. Sorry, I'm
- 1:41:03just now realizing.
- 1:41:04Speaker 2: Yeah, yeah, that's too good. Because I kept reading the
- 1:41:07words on screen and.
- 1:41:08Speaker 1: You're like, yeah, oh yeah, boy kept I was like
- 1:41:11sitting there and I was like, yeah, my stomach did drop.
- 1:41:16Speaker 2: Wow, wow, Isaiah, A good point. I never thought of that.
- 1:41:22Speaker 1: What do you think the liquid is? Do you think
- 1:41:24it's just blood?
- 1:41:25Speaker 2: No? Because he says he wanted to convince himself it
- 1:41:28was blood.
- 1:41:29Speaker 1: I thought you said he wanted to convince himself that
- 1:41:31it was his blood. That's true. It could be his.
- 1:41:34Speaker 2: It could be some other blood. I don't know yet. Honestly,
- 1:41:37you have no clue. Could just be rusted water from
- 1:41:40whatever was done down here.
- 1:41:42Speaker 1: Sure, I don't know.
- 1:41:43Speaker 2: We'll see. You know that feeling when your stomach drops.
- 1:41:46In this case, I think mine literally did because I
- 1:41:49vomited immediately. It got all over my shoe but that
- 1:41:53wasn't the least bit important at the time. I ignored
- 1:41:56the pain in my knee and shuffled along the wall
- 1:41:58as fast as I possibly could. Or noises, but I
- 1:42:01can't be sure if it was just the sounds of
- 1:42:04my own movement or something around me. I managed to
- 1:42:07duck under the next shower head. This one was higher
- 1:42:10up on the wall and seemed to be leaking the
- 1:42:12same liquid that the other one was. I felt like
- 1:42:16I was moving along something infinite. Every now and then
- 1:42:19I would have to duck or move under another metal bar,
- 1:42:22another shower head. They began to pour more profusely. Liquid
- 1:42:27was too thick to come out easily. The room began
- 1:42:31to smell. I remembered immediately the way that mister May's
- 1:42:34had described it. I grabbed my shirt and put it
- 1:42:37over my nose, trucking onward, but it didn't stop to
- 1:42:41smell for an instant. Smelled like Vomit smelled like shit,
- 1:42:45It smelled like burnt hair, It smelled like rot. I
- 1:42:49was still moving against the wall when I fell into
- 1:42:52some sort of outlet. I hit the dirt ground hard,
- 1:42:56adrenaline coursing through my veins. The pain still managed to
- 1:42:59break through the My flashlight was still in my hand.
- 1:43:02I aimed it and examined my surroundings. Setting in front
- 1:43:05of me was a doorway. There was a door there,
- 1:43:08though it looked aged now, it had a nice little
- 1:43:11design on it, a door knob and a knocker that
- 1:43:14looked like a snarling demon. Red paint was peeling from it,
- 1:43:18flaking off and falling to the ground in front of me.
- 1:43:21I clumsily rose and busted through the door, narrowly missing
- 1:43:24a piece of hanging sheet metal in front of me
- 1:43:27who I was crawling now. There was no way that
- 1:43:30I could run. The walls and ceiling were lined with metal,
- 1:43:34the kind that you would see on the roof of
- 1:43:36a farm. Large pieces of wood seemed to brace the sheets,
- 1:43:40holding this makeshift tunnel together. I couldn't risk sliding against that,
- 1:43:45I possibly cutting myself on the metal or hitting the
- 1:43:48wood and causing a caban. So I crawled. This is interesting.
- 1:43:52He's going the opposite direction that mister May's did.
- 1:43:56Speaker 1: Yeah, just going in opposite direction. I'm wondering, Well, I'll
- 1:43:59just I haven't thought it for afterwards, but yeah, I'd
- 1:44:02keep going.
- 1:44:03Speaker 2: I pulled myself for what felt like miles, running into
- 1:44:06walls every now and then because the path seemed to
- 1:44:08curve like a snake. I had no idea where I
- 1:44:11was in relation to the hole that I had fallen through.
- 1:44:14But I told myself that there was an exit at
- 1:44:16the end of this, and had I been crawling, I
- 1:44:19would have surely hurt myself far worse. There were parts
- 1:44:22of the tunnel in which the ceiling dipped down to
- 1:44:25maybe three feet above the ground and hadn't caved in
- 1:44:28because the ceiling still lined it. Someone had built it
- 1:44:31like this. This again, is in hindsight. I ain't care
- 1:44:36at the time. I kept telling myself there's nothing behind me,
- 1:44:38but I swore that I heard feet scraping only a
- 1:44:40few inches behind my own. My genies would brush against
- 1:44:44my legs every now and then, making it feel like
- 1:44:46someone was touching me. Even now, I still can't completely
- 1:44:50convince myself that someone wasn't. I crawled and crawled until
- 1:44:53I reached an up slope with joy. I looked ahead
- 1:44:56of me. There was a cellar door. The door was
- 1:44:59made of wood. I knew this because I could see
- 1:45:02light through them. I couldn't be sure, but I thought
- 1:45:05it might have been the light from the car's headlights,
- 1:45:08sois all that.
- 1:45:10Speaker 1: I was just so.
- 1:45:11Speaker 2: Immensely happy to find an exit. I crawled the way
- 1:45:15to the door and threw my shoulder into it. It
- 1:45:17budged but didn't open. I began to scream, but my
- 1:45:21throat seared with pain. The most I can manage was
- 1:45:24a harsh, crying noise. Sounded like a dying animal. Huh what,
- 1:45:31I'm just thinking, like it sounded like a dying animal.
- 1:45:34That's the That's a weird way to phrase it, because
- 1:45:38earlier in the story, mister May's heard a dying animal
- 1:45:41when the door was opened to the showers.
- 1:45:45Speaker 1: Oh sure, yeah, Like that's It's it.
- 1:45:47Speaker 2: Seems like a specific choice, right it does.
- 1:45:50Speaker 1: I mean like it certainly does either. So are you
- 1:45:54trying to insinuate that like a time parallel thing that.
- 1:45:57Speaker 2: Maybe or like maybe that's just maybe me that noise
- 1:46:01has happened.
- 1:46:02Speaker 1: So I'm reading it that there are other people down
- 1:46:05here screaming, and it's like for some reason. What I
- 1:46:08don't know is like he's screaming, and if he's screamings,
- 1:46:11like but my throat steered with pain, if he's screaming
- 1:46:15so much or being down there causes him to have
- 1:46:19some kind I don't know, I'm kind of curious to
- 1:46:20kind of keep reading and see. Yeah.
- 1:46:22Speaker 2: So anyway, just the phrasing of that interested me.
- 1:46:27Speaker 1: Yeah, I mean it is very almost serendipitous.
- 1:46:29Speaker 2: It could could be nothing, could be coincidence, but yeah,
- 1:46:31just it just caught me for a second. I collapse
- 1:46:34in exhaustion and pain, my eyes staring up at the
- 1:46:37slits of light before me. I was so close to
- 1:46:39being out of here I could taste. It was in
- 1:46:42that moment of silent defeat that I heard a noise
- 1:46:44that was, without question, something moving in the tunnel. It
- 1:46:49sounded like something was being dragged across the floor. It
- 1:46:52would move, pause for a second, and then move again.
- 1:46:56I had nothing left in my stomach to throw up,
- 1:46:58but I began to gag. I gathered myself slightly and
- 1:47:01tried to steady my hand enough to focus the fleshlight
- 1:47:04into the tunnel. That's also an interesting point before we
- 1:47:07get into like the reveal. Have you ever been so
- 1:47:10scared you throw up?
- 1:47:12Speaker 1: No?
- 1:47:13Speaker 2: I don't think I have.
- 1:47:16Speaker 1: I haven't. I'm almost I'm wondering if he's if it's
- 1:47:19a matter or it's a mixture of tense emotions. And
- 1:47:23also I'm guessing that the smell is just absolutely revolting.
- 1:47:25I mean it's decaying bodies, which is horrible, horrible, I
- 1:47:29mean like spoiled rotten meat or something. Yeah, because now,
- 1:47:33whenever I heard the showerhead thing, it almost made me
- 1:47:36think of like like a meat grinder, how meat pours
- 1:47:39out of those holes like that.
- 1:47:41Speaker 2: I was thinking, like a whole body shoved through there, right.
- 1:47:46Speaker 1: Yeah, And that's why I was like, it's just like
- 1:47:48grease blood like I mean, just basically liquified, like a
- 1:47:53liquefied body.
- 1:47:54Speaker 2: Go liquefied people, or like some kind of animal, right
- 1:47:58being shoved through Yeah, yeah, but rotted old like it's
- 1:48:02like the become seepy, you know, almost like a corpse
- 1:48:06ran through that.
- 1:48:08Speaker 1: Right.
- 1:48:09Speaker 2: What I saw I can still not rationalize. I know
- 1:48:14what I saw, but I cannot convince myself that it
- 1:48:16was actually there. I can't stop telling myself that I
- 1:48:19was hallucinating. I saw a child in a dirty sleeping gown.
- 1:48:24The gown was stained with something dark and brown, occasional
- 1:48:27splashes of a deep red. The child was extremely frail,
- 1:48:31like the pictures that people might see of a Holocaust victim.
- 1:48:35I could only make out one eye, brightly reflecting the
- 1:48:39light of my flashlight, between huge tufts of long, dirty hair.
- 1:48:44It reached down beyond the fingertips of the child, which
- 1:48:47were caked with dirt. The boy or girl, I'm not
- 1:48:51entirely sure, which moved towards me with difficulty. It wasn't
- 1:48:55breathing hard, but it seemed that every movement of every
- 1:48:59muscle took every ounce of strength the child had. The
- 1:49:02thing that froze me, though, was the eye. It was
- 1:49:06only visible because it was reflecting my flashlight, but even
- 1:49:10in that glint I could feel anger, or deep hatred,
- 1:49:14or something like that. This is the point in which
- 1:49:17the English language really lacks the right words to explain
- 1:49:20the situation. I could tell that the child meant me harm,
- 1:49:25whether it was a hallucination or not. The thing was
- 1:49:28getting closer. I started to cry. I was getting closer
- 1:49:32and closer. I heard a voice from behind me. Hey, Jack,
- 1:49:38whispered the voice. It was Steve, I was certain. I
- 1:49:44tried to talk back, fully, intending to.
- 1:49:46Speaker 1: Say open this up and get me right out of here,
- 1:49:49right now.
- 1:49:50Speaker 2: However, given my current state, I am sure. It just
- 1:49:52sounded like garbled nonsense. I clawed the door, pushing against
- 1:49:56it with everything that I had, and finally breaking eye
- 1:49:58contact with the child. As I did this, the flashlight
- 1:50:01rolled down the slope, coming to rest somewhere near the
- 1:50:03child's feet. What do you see, the voice asked, what
- 1:50:10are you talking about? I closed my eyes. I remember
- 1:50:13hearing a reply along the lines.
- 1:50:15Speaker 1: Of just look at it, tell me what you see.
- 1:50:19Speaker 2: My own screams of frustration drowned it out. I was
- 1:50:23mumbling like a maniac when the voice told me.
- 1:50:25Speaker 1: Calmly, rest for a second. I'll get it.
- 1:50:29Speaker 2: The statement took a second to settle in, at which
- 1:50:31point I closed my eyes tight.
- 1:50:34Speaker 1: Steve, just do it, please, please just get it open.
- 1:50:38Please just get me out of here, Steve, God, damn it.
- 1:50:43Open the fucking wooden door.
- 1:50:45Speaker 2: Opened my eyes for a split second to see nothing
- 1:50:47but black hair dangling in front of my face, a
- 1:50:50small ron of light hidden in the mess of tangles.
- 1:50:53I slammed my eyes shut and screamed with every ounce
- 1:50:56of energy.
- 1:50:57Speaker 1: I had open. The fucking door.
- 1:51:00Speaker 2: Behind me gave way, and I fell onto the dark,
- 1:51:03taking in a breath of fresh air. My eyes were
- 1:51:05still closed, but the first thing that I did scrambled
- 1:51:08to find the cylind door and close it Onside. Done that,
- 1:51:11I took a deep breath and opened my eyes. I
- 1:51:15saw the barn in front of me, illuminated by the
- 1:51:17headlights of the car. My head was pulsing with pain.
- 1:51:20I was covered in dirt and liquids that I didn't
- 1:51:23even care to know. The origin of My knee was
- 1:51:25at the very least dislocated. But despite all of that,
- 1:51:29I was out of the tunnel. I took a deep breath,
- 1:51:32buried my head in my hands, and said.
- 1:51:35Speaker 1: Steve, why didn't you just open the fucking door.
- 1:51:39Speaker 2: I waited for a response, but none came.
- 1:51:43Speaker 1: Steve, Seriously, I was fucking clawing and screaming for my life.
- 1:51:49Speaker 2: I said, as I looked behind me. My stomach must
- 1:51:51have been on the verge falling out of me at
- 1:51:53this point, because it shifted again. The only thing behind
- 1:51:57me was the large mass of bushes I had seen
- 1:52:00while examining the perimeter of the building.
- 1:52:04Speaker 1: I was angry, Steve, this is not the fucking time
- 1:52:09come out of the fucking bushes, man.
- 1:52:11Speaker 2: I was getting ready to stand up when I heard
- 1:52:13a yell from the front of the building. A flashlight
- 1:52:16bobbed up and down in the semi darkness. Steve was
- 1:52:18running into the open door of the structure, yelling my
- 1:52:21name and telling me not to worry. Must have lost
- 1:52:24consciousness at that point. When I woke up, Steve was
- 1:52:27standing over me, desperately trying to wake me up. His
- 1:52:30words were almost incoherent, at least in my ears. He
- 1:52:34helped me to my feet and began to walk me
- 1:52:36to the car. As we walked away, saw my flashlight
- 1:52:39sitting just outside the cellar door. The light was fading.
- 1:52:44Steve brought me back to the car and then drove
- 1:52:46me to the nearest hospital. I fell asleep, but he
- 1:52:49told me that he drove around for an hour before
- 1:52:51he found a main road. I don't think I ever
- 1:52:54told him the whole story. I believe he thinks that
- 1:52:56I was just injured from the fall.
- 1:52:58Speaker 1: He never really asked.
- 1:52:59Speaker 2: About it, and we didn't stay in contact for much longer.
- 1:53:03It's not like we deliberately parted ways. We just sort
- 1:53:06of stopped hanging out after the trip and went our
- 1:53:08separate ways. I've never been able to fully understand what
- 1:53:12happened that night. There are many things that I can't
- 1:53:14explain away as being hallucinations. There are still many things
- 1:53:19that don't make sense. The shower heads were there and
- 1:53:23they were leaking something. The door was real, the tunnel
- 1:53:27was real. Most everything else can be semi rationalized if
- 1:53:30I can convince myself that I had a very bad concussion,
- 1:53:34a very very bad concussion. But the one thing that
- 1:53:37I couldn't have imagined.
- 1:53:39Speaker 1: Was that cell.
- 1:53:41Speaker 2: The door was locked and then it suddenly wasn't. I'm
- 1:53:46still as skeptical as I've ever been, but I believe
- 1:53:48in what happened to me at the showers. I'm not
- 1:53:51a hermit or a social recluse because of this. I
- 1:53:54drink a lot, but I'm still functional. But I will
- 1:53:58never return to Nebraska. No one will ever be able
- 1:54:01to convince me otherwise. I don't watch horror movies either.
- 1:54:05There's absolutely nothing entertaining, but being so desperately scared.
- 1:54:10Speaker 1: That's it. Really.
- 1:54:11Speaker 2: There's no typical ending for my story. I was changed
- 1:54:15by my experience, yeah, but there's no way to change
- 1:54:19anything about it or fight back against it. I can't
- 1:54:22even convince myself that I wasn't just seeing things believe me.
- 1:54:27I've been trying for years. Prior to this, there was
- 1:54:30really no way to find any information on the Showers.
- 1:54:33The legend didn't extend outside of the classroom of mister May's.
- 1:54:37No one told stories like this to keep children away
- 1:54:39from a certain place or to scare them. It just
- 1:54:42wasn't known. I guess that's really the point of this
- 1:54:46whole story. I want people to know firsthand what this
- 1:54:50place is like. Maybe it is a drugs rationale or
- 1:54:54the kid inside me wanting to spread these kinds of stories. Again,
- 1:54:58I don't know, I don't care. But it's out there
- 1:55:01now for people to mold and warp to their knees.
- 1:55:06Most importantly, it's finally out of my head. It's getting
- 1:55:10late and I'm getting another drink, cheers.
- 1:55:15Speaker 1: And that is the end of the Showers. You know,
- 1:55:20it's really interesting for a story that's so I mean,
- 1:55:22twelve years that's insane long time ago, right, It seems
- 1:55:27like such a gripping tale.
- 1:55:32Speaker 2: You know.
- 1:55:32Speaker 1: At the beginning of this story, I talked about how
- 1:55:35the older stories really don't they don't fuck with a
- 1:55:38lot of the fat, right, a lot of like really
- 1:55:41getting like really preambling and doing these things, and it
- 1:55:44seems like I like that towards the end. At the
- 1:55:47beginning what it just kind of throws us in. But
- 1:55:49being in those being in the tunnels down there, I
- 1:55:52wanted to just like be down there a lot longer
- 1:55:55to experience more of that. We have these creepy children,
- 1:55:58and we don't really know where it goes, and it
- 1:55:59leaves all these kind of ambiguous things up in the air,
- 1:56:02which I think is pretty fun. But I think I
- 1:56:04just I wanted more. I wanted to I was so invested,
- 1:56:08really wanted to see what was going on. Also to
- 1:56:10have him fall that much, to have it be pretty
- 1:56:13far down. If you think about it, if he fell
- 1:56:15from the floorboard all the way down to the ground
- 1:56:17and actually dislocated his knee, that'd be a pretty substantial drop.
- 1:56:21Speaker 2: Yeah, if it was. I mean, he also says he
- 1:56:25landed weird, and it isn't it is deep in or
- 1:56:29shallow enough. I should say that Steve was able to
- 1:56:31jump back out, But yeah, it's sure it's got to
- 1:56:34be significant. If he didn't just go out like pull
- 1:56:38himself up out of that hole right, I could maybe
- 1:56:41out of it seven feet right high or something like that.
- 1:56:44Speaker 1: Sure to where it's like it's I'm not saying it's
- 1:56:47the deepest thing, but I do think it's it's deep
- 1:56:49enough to where, yes, well he could stay up fully
- 1:56:51at first.
- 1:56:52Speaker 2: Yeah, you can stand up. I imagine it's like if
- 1:56:54you reach your hands up, you can touch it type thing.
- 1:56:57Speaker 1: Sure. Yeah, I think that it's it's high enough to
- 1:57:00where if you didn't know you were falling and you
- 1:57:01didn't like have yourself properly set to like brace yourself,
- 1:57:05you could fuck You could probably fuck up your knee.
- 1:57:07So it's interesting. I mean, what's your takeaway? What do
- 1:57:10you think? Man?
- 1:57:11Speaker 2: So, first of all, I love it. I think I
- 1:57:14think it's really good. I'm kind of glad that well.
- 1:57:19I don't know, there's a bunch of stories that I
- 1:57:21read when I was a kid that I didn't fully
- 1:57:23appreciate then, but I do now. Like I think, Pinpal,
- 1:57:26I think if I recall, right I listened to as
- 1:57:28a kid and it didn't mean as much to me
- 1:57:29as it did now, or one of those stories. So
- 1:57:33I don't know if I would have appreciated this as
- 1:57:35much as a kid, because I'd just be kind of like, oh,
- 1:57:37that's it, right, but we're really given everything we could
- 1:57:41have right about. We're giving the puzzle pieces, we're giving
- 1:57:45the experience. I love the story a lot. I'm setting here.
- 1:57:50My mind's like racking itself theorizing what it all means,
- 1:57:54like what all happened?
- 1:57:56Speaker 1: Yeah, I wonder how much the author knows versus I
- 1:57:59wonder if a story like this comes about from just
- 1:58:02the idea of a shower head leaking an unknown almost
- 1:58:06mysterious like bile or something, and then you know, just
- 1:58:09kind of like going from there. I wonder how much
- 1:58:11of it do they actually know because you have so
- 1:58:13many different things like the door, which is presumably okay, Oh,
- 1:58:17let me ask you this then too. Do you think
- 1:58:19that that was the same place as mister May's or
- 1:58:22do you think that just in this town specifically? There's
- 1:58:25multiple of them? Because it seems like the tunnels go
- 1:58:27on for how long are they interconnected? You know what
- 1:58:30I mean?
- 1:58:30Speaker 2: Ause it feels like miles, But I don't think it's
- 1:58:33actually miles per se, right, maybe maybe one mile or something.
- 1:58:38Speaker 1: But crawling that far? Ugh? No, no, no, I yeah,
- 1:58:42I definitely think I'm just wondering because the silo thing
- 1:58:45in particular kind of where I was like, well, the
- 1:58:49silo is not even there, because they like, why would
- 1:58:51the silo be gone? So that's why I'm like, Oh,
- 1:58:53I wonder if it was like an interchanging amount of
- 1:58:55tunnels and then some of them have like weird tight
- 1:58:58crawl spaces to where you get out. Yeah, sure that
- 1:59:01are kind of like interconnected between stuff, especially the idea
- 1:59:04of I don't think that mister Mays also put an
- 1:59:06emphasis on like the red door a red door, because
- 1:59:09on this one in particular, he was talking about the knob,
- 1:59:12which had some sort of demon face shape or something,
- 1:59:17but he made it an emphasis. Jack did at least
- 1:59:19made an emphasis to talk about how the door was
- 1:59:21like flaking red paint pretty much. And I feel like
- 1:59:25if the I feel like if it was a red
- 1:59:28door before, I feel like mister May's probably would have said, oh,
- 1:59:30there was a small red door, just because it's so pronounced,
- 1:59:33because whenever he was talking about it, I just imagined
- 1:59:35a regular wooden, brown door. Is kind of what made
- 1:59:38me think.
- 1:59:39Speaker 2: So the first thing that comes to mind is some
- 1:59:43so I think there's definitely a supernatural element, right at
- 1:59:48least a little bit, because how else are things appearing
- 1:59:52and disappearing, or how are they living down there without
- 1:59:55you know, supposedly food or what? I right that? Or
- 2:00:03it's some kind of cult who lives down in the tunnels?
- 2:00:06Speaker 1: Mm? The cult of children or do you think like
- 2:00:09a cult of people in they?
- 2:00:11Speaker 2: I have more like either they have children or the
- 2:00:14children are the things being summoned because they have the
- 2:00:20door that has as he describes it, a knocker that
- 2:00:23looks like a demon right right, and it leads to effectively,
- 2:00:27like you described it, a kill shoot right. So, and
- 2:00:31then there's like this fleshy fluid that comes out of
- 2:00:34the walls. There's a lot of my mind's like concocting
- 2:00:39itself right now, what do you what do you think
- 2:00:41initial theory?
- 2:00:42Speaker 1: Yeah, it's difficult. I think there's a lot of different
- 2:00:45There's a lot of things that are aesthetically put there
- 2:00:48that are fun, but they don't really add up to
- 2:00:51anything that is leading my mind, which is interesting because
- 2:00:55there's a couple of things, I mean, like the nightgowns
- 2:00:57are such an out of date thing, and have children
- 2:01:01just be there there as deprived as a Holocaust victim
- 2:01:05as he so put it, And their hair is so
- 2:01:09incredibly long, so it's like they've been living essentially this
- 2:01:12way for how long underneath there. I'm guessing that he
- 2:01:15means that the eye, the glint of the eyes being
- 2:01:18you know, angry or something. I almost read that as
- 2:01:21if it was a blind eye, like they've been living
- 2:01:23in the darkness, because he didn't put emphasis on you know,
- 2:01:28like whenever mister May said the story, he was talking
- 2:01:30about how the lights were kind of like flickering on
- 2:01:32and off or whatever, and I'm guessing that you would
- 2:01:35have to assume that that was the same for this tunnel,
- 2:01:38or he didn't really put an emphasis on the lights.
- 2:01:40I don't think he was just I think it was
- 2:01:41just a dark tunnel, right.
- 2:01:43Speaker 2: I imagine it was a dark tunnel when he goes in again,
- 2:01:45because everything's abandon because when mister Mays's story, there were
- 2:01:49lights on around the barn and the door was locked,
- 2:01:53like something was going on in there and they couldn't
- 2:01:55get in, right, So that explains why the lights are
- 2:01:58also on in the tunnel. So I would imagine it
- 2:02:02was dark in the tunnels when Jack goes to eight
- 2:02:06years later, unless, like you said, this is just a
- 2:02:11different tunnel system. It's a different location that maybe they're
- 2:02:14interconnected with.
- 2:02:15Speaker 1: Yeah, I am in belief of that, because I just
- 2:02:19feel like if it was the same, I feel like
- 2:02:22there would be more context clues that Jack himself would say, like, oh,
- 2:02:26I saw the lights that he said the lights were
- 2:02:29off this time, or so, you know what I mean.
- 2:02:30There would be more stuff of him trying to piece
- 2:02:33together that this was the place that he was looking
- 2:02:35for the thing that he's heard about and retold however
- 2:02:37many times in his life. Right, And the story is
- 2:02:41kind of taking a shape where I mean, the barn
- 2:02:43itself is just an industrial farm equipment barn essentially, which
- 2:02:46is for people that have never been one of those barns.
- 2:02:48I mean, it's basically just a giant metal structure with
- 2:02:51cement flooring of some kind, which in this case, I'm
- 2:02:54guessing it's even just wooden flooring if he's able to
- 2:02:56bust through it. But it kind of reminds me of
- 2:02:59this actually SEP story, which is SEP. I think it's
- 2:03:02zero four zero JP And it's all about like a
- 2:03:05random structure built around a well where if you look
- 2:03:08at if you look in the well, that's when you
- 2:03:10become cursed. So I'm almost wondering if these people in
- 2:03:12this town in some kind of vicinity, and I, you know,
- 2:03:16I think you're right. I don't think it has to
- 2:03:17be you know, this massive, massive thing, But think about
- 2:03:22like even a five mile radius. That's a lot in
- 2:03:25terms of like tunnels and stuff, and even just being
- 2:03:27around some kind of wooded area where you probably can't
- 2:03:29see the other structures. Who knows how close mister May's
- 2:03:32structure was if it is a separate building and they
- 2:03:36are interconnected in that way. But to me, I almost
- 2:03:40the way I'm deciphering it, and the thing that I'm
- 2:03:42having the most fun thinking about is essentially some kind
- 2:03:46of pagan like religion or some kind of cult that
- 2:03:50you're saying that is underground that has been plagued there,
- 2:03:53and now they have people have built these structures on
- 2:03:56top of it to either contain it or to monitor
- 2:03:58it in some kind of way, and has like been
- 2:04:01like like filtered out, and I by by monitoring it,
- 2:04:04I'm just mean like who knows, maybe locals. I mean,
- 2:04:07this old woman is the only person that has that
- 2:04:09has any kind of resemblance of it. So it's like
- 2:04:12maybe like back in the back in time, it was
- 2:04:15like more monitored or people, you know, kept more of
- 2:04:18an eye on it. But it's kind of faded through
- 2:04:19the generations of stuff, or maybe they have assumed that
- 2:04:22it's kind of died out. But these doors, these interconnected doors,
- 2:04:25or even a door underground, it's just like who builds that, right? Yeah?
- 2:04:30Who knows? So it's I don't know. Personally, I like
- 2:04:34to think that people build something on top of it,
- 2:04:37that it's a structure that existed underground, and that they
- 2:04:39have been building it regardless of the people that who
- 2:04:43set it up, because you know, you know, did the
- 2:04:46people who are also like who are watching this thing?
- 2:04:50Did they fabricate the lights around it? To the doors
- 2:04:52or something? Where did the showerheads come from? There's so
- 2:04:55many non sequitor like set pieces that just don't can
- 2:05:00well to where I'm trying to find. I'm trying to
- 2:05:02rationalize in my head, and while these visuals are cool,
- 2:05:05I'm like, I'm trying to like think of some kind
- 2:05:08of fun thing because the story is so ambiguous. I'm
- 2:05:10trying to think of some fun thing that ties it
- 2:05:12all together. But it's very hard because there's a lot
- 2:05:14of non sequitor set pieces that are going together.
- 2:05:17Speaker 2: I'm so fascinated.
- 2:05:20Speaker 1: There's a lot of other visually, a lot of good stuff.
- 2:05:22Speaker 2: Okay, so what do you think of this? What if
- 2:05:28the cult is summoning something or worshiping something or what
- 2:05:33have you. I'll take back what I said about the
- 2:05:35children maybe being the pieces of worship and say, maybe
- 2:05:39they're just children of the cult whatever. Maybe they're emaciated
- 2:05:44kept it. Maybe it's part of the ritual that you
- 2:05:46need to keep children around for.
- 2:05:47Speaker 1: It or whatever.
- 2:05:48Speaker 2: The mention mays has of right before they leave, how
- 2:05:52they hear what sounds like an animal screaming, you know,
- 2:05:56he says, like it sounds like a bunch of dogs.
- 2:05:58What if that is the creature being summoned back in
- 2:06:00the shower room.
- 2:06:02Speaker 1: It could be. It very well could be.
- 2:06:04Speaker 2: I mean, like, maybe, okay, maybe it's a fun when
- 2:06:08people get near the showers because they have the ritual
- 2:06:13in place or whatever. Maybe it requires someone from the
- 2:06:15outside to come in. Right, they get near the showers,
- 2:06:18and then in the demon room, which has like a
- 2:06:20demon crest over the door, these shower heads begin to
- 2:06:24fill with rot, effectively like a fluid out of hell.
- 2:06:28A fluid out of damnation. The cult does whatever they
- 2:06:31do to create that, using maybe human bodies or corpses,
- 2:06:35using the children. It fills the floor of the room
- 2:06:40with that, with the rotted water, and then the demon
- 2:06:44they're trying to summon rises out.
- 2:06:46Speaker 1: Of it some kind of like basically like summoning a
- 2:06:49ritual or something. I feel like the kids are such
- 2:06:52an important part of it, of like it'd be kind
- 2:06:54of interesting if even the kids were like a just
- 2:06:58a different take on a paranormal to do like that,
- 2:07:00because I don't think you would ever associate a demon
- 2:07:02looking like that. But it's like them being trapped down
- 2:07:06there and the door being a seal itself, like once
- 2:07:09you open the door, they're able to get out and stuff.
- 2:07:11I mean, such an emphasis too on them saying that
- 2:07:13the eyes you know that they wanted to harm me,
- 2:07:16makes the children also feel so evil, Like I really
- 2:07:18didn't feel sympathetic. I was just mostly terrified of the
- 2:07:22kids down there, you know what I mean?
- 2:07:24Speaker 2: Yeah, like they're a part of it almost.
- 2:07:27Speaker 1: Yeah, they feel like such a pivotal piece of this
- 2:07:29kind of thing, which who knows, I mean it also
- 2:07:33which I don't know if you read it like this too,
- 2:07:35But it almost made me think that, like, are the
- 2:07:37children even children? Are they just like do they have
- 2:07:39the appearance of children? But who knows how old they are, right,
- 2:07:43because almost when he said that, they were like, you know,
- 2:07:46so frail and stuff. To me, that also reads kind
- 2:07:49of like an extremely old person as well. So I
- 2:07:54don't know, I mean like they could have these kind
- 2:07:56of like you know, some kind of these to these
- 2:08:00trapped in time and they're kind of just physically decaying
- 2:08:04very slowly, like almost like a fucking mummy or something.
- 2:08:07I think it's kind of interesting, but there's a lot.
- 2:08:09There's just so much stuff of like very emphasis on,
- 2:08:12like the demon head on the door, you know, so
- 2:08:15many very peculiar things. I kind of wish we had more.
- 2:08:18I just want more, you know. And I think that
- 2:08:20if it was if this story was written God, I
- 2:08:24would say, if the story was written in like twenty seventeen,
- 2:08:27I feel like you would have had way more. I
- 2:08:29feel like I'm wondering this too. I wonder, you know,
- 2:08:32I wish I could go back and actually be a
- 2:08:33part of the culture of this at the time. But
- 2:08:35I wonder how much of this back in the day
- 2:08:37where it was like, oh yeah, this was just the
- 2:08:39way like the aesthetic, the kind of flow that people
- 2:08:43had where you're like you want to be short and
- 2:08:45sweet versus really getting into more and more or what
- 2:08:50that too.
- 2:08:50Speaker 2: Another big aspect of it was if you make some
- 2:08:55details of your story unclear and people decide to talk
- 2:08:59about it, then that's going to boost your story, right,
- 2:09:02I mean you see the same thing now, Like look
- 2:09:04at indie video games, right, they all try to do
- 2:09:06what Five Nights of Freddy's did with being like having
- 2:09:09obscure lore that YouTubers talk about. It was the same
- 2:09:12thing back then, only they would talk about like message
- 2:09:14boards and stuff. Most of them were bad, like it would.
- 2:09:19That's where beams come from of like the creature, you know,
- 2:09:22like really vague or whatever.
- 2:09:23Speaker 1: Where it's it's so ambiguous because at the point at
- 2:09:26a point when you do that, ambiguity works so well
- 2:09:29in stories because the human your own human mind is
- 2:09:31going to conjure something that really fucks with you. In particular,
- 2:09:35which is sometimes whenever people are like, oh I didn't
- 2:09:37like this ending because in your mind it was going
- 2:09:39somewhere else and it isn't as satisfying as it would
- 2:09:42have been in your mind if it would have been
- 2:09:43left kind of ambiguous. But at the same time, ambiguity
- 2:09:46can be an extreme crutch, an extreme crutch to where
- 2:09:49it feels cheap. It cheapens it to such a degree.
- 2:09:54And I think, and that's one thing too that you're
- 2:09:56right with, Like you know, Five Nights of Freddy's, even
- 2:09:58parts of like the back Rooms and stuff, or even
- 2:10:01other pieces of media online people love to theorize about
- 2:10:05like universes and worlds and stuff and like especially like environments,
- 2:10:10you know, conspiracies, these kind of things and storytelling, and
- 2:10:12I think it especially grabs people to have that discussion.
- 2:10:17And I think one thing too that I wrote down
- 2:10:19when we were about halfway through that I wanted to
- 2:10:22wait till we got to the end of was with
- 2:10:26stories like this which I'm unfamiliar and I could be,
- 2:10:29you know, saying something that is already happens. But do
- 2:10:32you think that there's a world here where people want
- 2:10:36to add on to these stories to where it's like,
- 2:10:38so let's say somebody who isn't Clover or Dylan, our
- 2:10:42author here, somebody else is like, hey, I went to
- 2:10:47Broken Bow, Nebraska and they write their own version of
- 2:10:49this years apart that is just inspired by the story,
- 2:10:53because that was one thing where I was like, this
- 2:10:55is such an awesome opportunity would be to see other
- 2:10:58people be like, Oh, I want to Broken Bow, Nebraska
- 2:11:01and this is what happened to me, and you kind
- 2:11:02of get to keep this, this, this story and this
- 2:11:06universe a live by doing so from different perspectives as well,
- 2:11:10and you get to add on to it in its
- 2:11:11own way, which granted I don't think that, you know,
- 2:11:14you could. You could have probably a lot of bad
- 2:11:17media that way, but I'd be curious just to hear
- 2:11:20other people's interpretations that are trying to pay homage and
- 2:11:23like add to the universe of something, you know, and
- 2:11:25it doesn't take away from the original story at all.
- 2:11:28You could not read those and it would still make
- 2:11:30the original story just as good. Or if you're somebody
- 2:11:33like me and you just want to see more of this,
- 2:11:36I think it could be really interesting if there was
- 2:11:37talented writers out there who are just like, oh, you know,
- 2:11:40it's cool. All the hard work too of like conceptualizing
- 2:11:43something is done and I get to just add to
- 2:11:45whatever this story is. Do you think that would be
- 2:11:49kind of interesting or does that happen at all?
- 2:11:51Speaker 2: That that does happen. There's a lot of it's really
- 2:11:55like fan fiction out there, you know. Well, no, no, I
- 2:12:00don't mean that in a bad way. I mean, like,
- 2:12:02you know, fans of the stories writing like, oh, here's
- 2:12:04my tale of what happened in this universe. You know,
- 2:12:06stuff like that. See, that kind of thing was pretty common.
- 2:12:10I can't recall any specifically that were that famous other
- 2:12:17than the author coming back later. Like The Showers actually
- 2:12:20has a sequel. The author came back and wrote a
- 2:12:23part three like years later. There's stuff like that, But
- 2:12:33I can't think. I can't think of any examples where
- 2:12:35someone else wrote their own because there's like like the
- 2:12:37Left Right Game. I've heard that some people have made
- 2:12:40their own stories about that, like within you know, like oh,
- 2:12:43this other group of people found the found the maps
- 2:12:46and you know, started charting their own course things like that.
- 2:12:50So I think it's fairly common. I'd be interested if
- 2:12:52any of them did well, you know.
- 2:12:54Speaker 1: Yeah, I mean I just think that it's a thing
- 2:12:56where it's like if you could have a different I mean,
- 2:12:58twelve years is crazy, you know, there's been so much
- 2:13:01advancement into this subreddit, into the even just like online storytelling.
- 2:13:06I think people are, you know, because people absorb these things.
- 2:13:09People are more talented at writing and everything now too.
- 2:13:11I think there's so much talent out there that it'd
- 2:13:13be kind of interesting, you know, and not in a
- 2:13:16way where you're taking away from the original at all.
- 2:13:19But I just I just wonder if there's a way,
- 2:13:21especially when something is disambiguous. You obviously can't do that
- 2:13:24with pinpal or like a berasca. Like if you tried
- 2:13:27doing a barrasca, I feel like you would just be like,
- 2:13:29that's just it's just doesn't work, you know. But something
- 2:13:31that's this ambiguous and this kind of paranormal in a way,
- 2:13:34I think they could take it a bunch of different ways,
- 2:13:36you know. And I don't think that, and I don't
- 2:13:37think that you do it from the perspective of Jack
- 2:13:39at all. I think you just put your own character
- 2:13:42into it, because if you look at some of the
- 2:13:44comments here on the reddit, so many people are like,
- 2:13:47I want to take a trip to Nebraska or whatever.
- 2:13:49It's the same kind of people that also like I
- 2:13:51want to do the left right game myself, which granted
- 2:13:53the left right game. I don't think you could do
- 2:13:56that one particularly either, just because it's it's the exact
- 2:13:59same set up every time, so it would just be
- 2:14:02like new characters going through the same thing that we've
- 2:14:03heard of before without probably you know, with just like
- 2:14:07slightly different results. But this one, it's just there's so
- 2:14:09much that is left on the table, so much that
- 2:14:13we don't know that you never know, you know, and
- 2:14:15if you do abide by the theory that there's different
- 2:14:18tunnels and there's different approaches you could take, it could
- 2:14:20just be interesting. You know, who knows.
- 2:14:23Speaker 2: I'm looking at us. So I've been reading a bit
- 2:14:25while you were talking. So the author, six five or
- 2:14:29six years after The Showers came out, he made a
- 2:14:31part three, which most people on Reddit are saying, isn't
- 2:14:37that good. I read a quick synopsis of it, and
- 2:14:41it's basically like he goes back to the Showers years later,
- 2:14:46and then the only extra thing he sees in the
- 2:14:49tunnels is there's a deer in the tunnels, which is
- 2:14:52implied to be some supernatural entity or whatever. But this
- 2:14:56is interesting, So someone points out, and this is on
- 2:15:00an analysis on the No Sleep podcast discussion.
- 2:15:06Speaker 1: So I've read it.
- 2:15:07Speaker 2: Someone in the comments, Sorel twenty five points out that
- 2:15:11a couple years before this, before the Showers came out,
- 2:15:15there was an ask Reddit post that said the showers
- 2:15:20outside of Hastings, Nebraska. My twelfth grade teacher told a
- 2:15:24story a few years ago at about a place called
- 2:15:26the Showers TLDR. He and his friends went to a
- 2:15:29Satanic ritual site in an old military barracks and heard
- 2:15:32strange voices. This is not the strange part, though. When
- 2:15:36he went back to the dorms with his friend and
- 2:15:38asked around about it and got an identical response from
- 2:15:41everyone he asked, they all went pale wide and said
- 2:15:44something like don't ever go there again.
- 2:15:47Speaker 1: He said this.
- 2:15:48Speaker 2: Searched the Internet about it and couldn't find anything on it. Well,
- 2:15:51I busted out my Internet skills and found this and this,
- 2:15:54and a few years ago I came across a website
- 2:15:56referencing it with much of the text blacked out. This
- 2:15:59has confused me for the past two.
- 2:16:00Speaker 1: Or three years.
- 2:16:02Speaker 2: And then this is that he links to are it
- 2:16:05looks like now? Deleted Yahoo post of other people who
- 2:16:12had a similar experience near Hastings, Nebraska. M so it
- 2:16:18looks like there's a chance this is kind of based
- 2:16:22on a true story a little bit, and the idea
- 2:16:25that people near this town in Nebraska had an experience
- 2:16:30like that interesting and it was described that could not
- 2:16:35be accurate because it was just the way like a
- 2:16:37guy described as teacher but said it was a Satanic
- 2:16:39ritual site in an old military barracks. Now, clearly there's
- 2:16:44some you know, there's obviously a lot of that's the
- 2:16:46inspiration for the story. It doesn't say anything about the
- 2:16:48silo or the tunnels, which, by the way, I don't
- 2:16:51think the silo was a silo. If it moved and
- 2:16:54there were no signs of it, it was maybe a
- 2:16:57storage for whatever the fluid that comes out of the
- 2:16:59shit hours were it was maybe some kind of holding true,
- 2:17:02maybe it was some kind of obelisk something they were
- 2:17:05using to worship whatever they were selling, right, and the
- 2:17:08tincher just assumed it to be a silo. Yeah, I
- 2:17:12don't think the silo was a silo.
- 2:17:14Speaker 1: Sure, I mean, I'm curious to hear what also the
- 2:17:17comment theres say to you. Usually there's always a couple
- 2:17:19good there's comments that always have a lot of really
- 2:17:22fun insider observations or takeaways and stuff. So I'm pretty curious.
- 2:17:27Speaker 2: So the interesting points about the story that I want
- 2:17:29to mention are the old lady when they see her,
- 2:17:33she says, we don't do that anymore, right, so it
- 2:17:38is something that the town was aware of, even if
- 2:17:41it still doesn't go on. And I think it involves
- 2:17:44some kind of death, either they use dead bodies or
- 2:17:47the children were killed or something like that. The other
- 2:17:50thing that I think is important is the scene when
- 2:17:54Jack is stuck in front of the door to the tunnels,
- 2:17:57or he's stuck inside of the door to the tunnels
- 2:18:00and he hears what he thinks is Steve. Remember, so
- 2:18:04he's in the tunnels and he hears the voice say,
- 2:18:06hey Jack. We later know that this is not Steve.
- 2:18:10So whatever this voice is just said his name. It
- 2:18:13knows his name, right. So the voice says, what do
- 2:18:18you see? And then it says, just look at it.
- 2:18:22Tell me what you see, and then he starts screaming,
- 2:18:27you know, like get me out of here. Then the
- 2:18:29voice says, rest for a second. I'll get it. So
- 2:18:34then it says the statement took a second to settle in,
- 2:18:36at which point I close my eyes tight, and then
- 2:18:39he starts screaming, you know, whimpering all that stuff. He
- 2:18:43opens his eyes for a split second to see nothing
- 2:18:45but hair, which is a horrifying line right, like it's
- 2:18:49in his face. He can just see the hair right there,
- 2:18:52you know.
- 2:18:52Speaker 1: Right.
- 2:18:53Speaker 2: It reminds me a lot of like the Grudge type imagery.
- 2:18:55Speaker 1: Right, yeah, definitely, very creepy and creepy and like imposing.
- 2:19:01Speaker 2: Yeah, and he sees a small glint of light from
- 2:19:04the eyes. So then that's when he starts to scream
- 2:19:08and then falls out of the cellar door. So maybe
- 2:19:12when this thing, this girl or I don't know if
- 2:19:15it's a real child or if it's a demon or what,
- 2:19:17but the thing that looks like a young girl or
- 2:19:19young boy is standing in front of him, whatever spirit
- 2:19:22is in the tunnels, or maybe the voice of the
- 2:19:25child or some entity in the tunnels is telling him
- 2:19:28to like, look, tell me what you see. Rest for
- 2:19:31a second. It kind of feels like they want him
- 2:19:34to worship whatever is being worshiped, or they want him
- 2:19:36to join them or something.
- 2:19:38Speaker 1: It feels malicious with how calm it is, like the whispering.
- 2:19:40For sure, it doesn't. It doesn't feel good yes, exact opinion.
- 2:19:45Speaker 2: So when this voice is saying, what do you see? Oh,
- 2:19:48just look at it, tell me what you see, and
- 2:19:51then it says rest for a second, I'll get it,
- 2:19:53it sounds to me like they're wanting him to look
- 2:19:56at this child and maybe become a part of the cult,
- 2:19:58worship whatever demon they are worshiping, but he fights against it.
- 2:20:02So they let him out because remember, Steve wasn't there
- 2:20:05to unlock the door. The door just became unlocked, so
- 2:20:09it had to be by some supernatural means in the cave.
- 2:20:12So maybe because he wasn't willing to worship whatever showed up,
- 2:20:16they threw him out like he's not a part of us, right.
- 2:20:20Speaker 1: It's interesting. It's interesting because that feels like a very yeah,
- 2:20:25I don't, I don't know. It does feel particularly like
- 2:20:31something did let him out, like just mysteriously the thing
- 2:20:34wasn't locked anymore.
- 2:20:35Speaker 2: Because even after that he calls attention to it, he says,
- 2:20:38all I know is that the door was locked and
- 2:20:40then suddenly it wasn't right, and yeah, exactly, And after
- 2:20:43he gets out, Steve is still running over to him,
- 2:20:47So it had to be whatever entity was down there saying, look,
- 2:20:51at it rest for a second. So either there's two
- 2:20:53competing entities, there's two competing entities in the tunnel, or
- 2:20:57because he wasn't willing this one I think is more likely.
- 2:21:00Is it willing to worship or give into whatever the
- 2:21:02present entity was that the children and the showers and
- 2:21:05everything are involved with. It doesn't want him anymore and
- 2:21:08cast him out if he won't worship, it doesn't want
- 2:21:11him in the congregation, if.
- 2:21:13Speaker 1: You know, if if that's the case, the two, because
- 2:21:16I can see how you could read it that way.
- 2:21:17If that's the case, then two, I kind of wish
- 2:21:18that there was more trials of like them trying to
- 2:21:22like pin him down to give into this thing, but
- 2:21:25his like will to get out pushes him out of
- 2:21:29their grasp, you know what I mean, kind of have
- 2:21:31like have a bit more just because I feel like
- 2:21:34it's also not that it's a stretch, but it feels
- 2:21:37like we're having to do all the heavy work of
- 2:21:39like thinking of like these things, you know what I mean.
- 2:21:43And it's like as a reader, I kind of you know,
- 2:21:45you just I want that information or that kind of thing,
- 2:21:47even if it is ambiguous to I don't have to
- 2:21:50feel like I'm reaching so hard for these explanations, I guess,
- 2:21:56but you know, that's just that's that's just my opinion.
- 2:22:00You know, it's interesting. Like I said, I'm always I'm
- 2:22:03always fascinated when I read when I read the comments
- 2:22:05on these videos and stuff. People always have such good takes.
- 2:22:09I'm always I'm I'm curious to see what people say
- 2:22:11as well. I feel like a lot of people are
- 2:22:13gonna line up with what you're saying, though, because I
- 2:22:14think that some kind of tests, some kind of divine
- 2:22:17test of some kind, or even demonic test of some
- 2:22:20kind of seems kind of interesting and plausible here.
- 2:22:24Speaker 2: If it's a test, then that explains why it activates,
- 2:22:29or hold on, let's not say a test. If it
- 2:22:31is an outreach, if it is an invitation to join,
- 2:22:35then that explains why the showers start and everything kicks
- 2:22:39into gear when someone news steps in.
- 2:22:42Speaker 1: So you think that the showers are only going on
- 2:22:45whenever people are coming in. You don't think that they're
- 2:22:47just because every time.
- 2:22:50Speaker 2: It's described as oh I start to feel something wet,
- 2:22:54it gets more. The showers are picking up pace, right.
- 2:22:57Speaker 1: That's true. So do you think that at all? Do
- 2:23:01you think that the kids could be turning on the
- 2:23:03system somehow.
- 2:23:04Speaker 2: It could be or their presence invokes it.
- 2:23:08Speaker 1: Okay, their presence is kind of the thing that's starting
- 2:23:11these things. I'd be curious too if there was some
- 2:23:13kind of like if we miss some kind of context
- 2:23:16clues is to like maybe what the showers could have
- 2:23:19been before, like some kind of because if they're saying,
- 2:23:22if what you're saying to the military bunker thing of
- 2:23:25the other story, if that's if that kind of ties
- 2:23:28in at all, then at least maybe it was like, oh,
- 2:23:30this were army barracks beforehand or something, and then something
- 2:23:33maybe they unearthed something mysterious of some way. I don't know.
- 2:23:37It's it's very interesting that this the sight too of
- 2:23:41I guess it just industrial showers is just such a
- 2:23:46there's just such a definitive thing of like you almost
- 2:23:48think of like gym class or something. Every time I
- 2:23:50think of those kind of showers, I think of like
- 2:23:51gem like old timey gym class stuff of like oh,
- 2:23:56you know, hit the showers or whatever. Is it what
- 2:23:58I always think of or like you know, the saying
- 2:24:00with like barracks or something. It's like a very outdated
- 2:24:03source of like how people used to like do that
- 2:24:05kind of shit. So I don't know. It definitely makes
- 2:24:08it feel older. It puts age on the tunnel in
- 2:24:10my opinion. But who knows. Okay, who knows.
- 2:24:14Speaker 2: Let me deliver a final theory, because this is like
- 2:24:16crack to me. Uh, what if you have it? Doesn't
- 2:24:23you know what? It doesn't even have to be a cult.
- 2:24:26Let's say it's an individual obsessed with it.
- 2:24:29Speaker 1: Right.
- 2:24:30Speaker 2: He becomes obsessed with because the only number of no way.
- 2:24:35There's a scene where they're in the tunnel and he
- 2:24:36says he sees many people and children standing in front
- 2:24:39of them, right whenever twenty yeah, yeah, yeah, when Maze
- 2:24:42is making it out. Okay, so it is a cult.
- 2:24:43So let's say there is a cult in this small
- 2:24:47town who worships the devil, some pagan entity, some something
- 2:24:52that isn't you know, a common religion, right, So maybe
- 2:24:57the entity maybe to some an it requires some level
- 2:25:03of blood or some level of rot or filth or whatever.
- 2:25:08So this cult they begin to do their worship ceremonies
- 2:25:14by either collecting dead bodies. It doesn't even have to
- 2:25:16be humans. It can be dead bodies of pigs, cows.
- 2:25:21Like you said, it's an old farm, right, has a
- 2:25:23kill shoot. Maybe that's what the bodies are being used for.
- 2:25:26Probably not even alive, just rotten corpses. And there I'm
- 2:25:29going to say they're kept in the silo or something
- 2:25:31like that. Right, So once they have amassed enough flesh
- 2:25:36and they conduct whatever their normal ritual is. When Mays
- 2:25:40was there, while the cult was still active, there was
- 2:25:45something going on in the barn that was locked up
- 2:25:48right with the lights on around it and all of
- 2:25:51the vegetation around.
- 2:25:52Speaker 1: It was dead.
- 2:25:53Speaker 2: I think what was happening in that barn was the
- 2:25:56original cult, right, So also think about this if the
- 2:26:03way Mays described it is you go through the cellar
- 2:26:08door next to the silo, and you work your way
- 2:26:10for like a mile, and then you come out of
- 2:26:12the shower room. And then when Jack does it years later,
- 2:26:16he falls through the floor and he's in the shower room,
- 2:26:18which is like fifty feet away from where the cellar
- 2:26:21door is.
- 2:26:22Speaker 1: Right.
- 2:26:22Speaker 2: That just means the tunnels snake around a lot, right,
- 2:26:26that they're actually next to each other. But there's just
- 2:26:28a lot of twist and turns to confuse people. So
- 2:26:30all within this one property. There's people conducting some kind
- 2:26:34of ritual within the barn that they use to summon something.
- 2:26:38Once they've conducted this ritual and they've brought about their God,
- 2:26:42anytime someone new shows up to the area, fresh blood,
- 2:26:46so to speak, the entity makes itself known. The showers
- 2:26:49begin to run. In my theory, the rot fills up
- 2:26:53the bottom of the floor, and then something comes out
- 2:26:56of the pool. This I love. The only description we
- 2:26:59get is it's sounds like a dying dog. It could
- 2:27:03be a Molock esque creature. It could be a goat head,
- 2:27:06a horsehead, a bull head on like this twisted body.
- 2:27:09Sure like it could be the worst parts of your imagination. Right,
- 2:27:14It rises up out of the water. And maybe these
- 2:27:16children we see, these children that are impossibly frail, that
- 2:27:20never cut their hair, and are so emaciated and dirty
- 2:27:24there's no way they could live down there. Maybe those
- 2:27:27children aren't children. Maybe those are the four erunners, so
- 2:27:32to speak. Of whatever this entity is, maybe as the
- 2:27:35ritual begins, they make their presence known and they're effectively
- 2:27:39the priest of this religion who bring converts over to
- 2:27:44the side of their God. So what mister May saw
- 2:27:47when he originally went was an active ritual in practice.
- 2:27:50He makes his way through the lit tunnels until he
- 2:27:53gets to the room that the worship is occurring in,
- 2:27:56and he sees the cult members surrounded by these children
- 2:28:01wrought from hell, so to speak, these like spirits that
- 2:28:03look like small, emaciated kids, and the group gets away.
- 2:28:08Mister May said that that guy died, Maybe he just
- 2:28:10bled out. Maybe the beet showed up and killed him.
- 2:28:13For my theory, I'm going to say that that guy
- 2:28:15bled out, that the beast didn't kill him, because I
- 2:28:18think happened. Maybe his body was used for the rot pile,
- 2:28:21if I'm right about that, But he died of the
- 2:28:25injury he sustained from the roof falling in. They leave.
- 2:28:29Years later. When Jack gets there, the ritual is no
- 2:28:33longer taking place, the cult is inactive. There's not a
- 2:28:36single person he sees while he's there, but the supernatural
- 2:28:40children that were brought forward originally still inhabit the area
- 2:28:45and still continue the customs, even though the cult no
- 2:28:48longer can we can assume they're dead gone, as the
- 2:28:50old lady at the gas station says, we don't do
- 2:28:53that anymore so. The Coult's now gone, but the forerunners
- 2:28:58of this beast, the children, are still in the tunnels,
- 2:29:01and once again, anytime someone shows up, they turn up
- 2:29:04once again to offer them this new religion, going to
- 2:29:07Jack in the tunnel saying, open your eyes, what do
- 2:29:10you see? Rest a well, And when he fights against it,
- 2:29:12they let him go. But because of what the cult did,
- 2:29:15that site underneath Broken Arrow, Nebraska, or sorry, underneath Broken Bow,
- 2:29:19Nebraska will always be the summoning grounds for whatever this
- 2:29:24crying monster is.
- 2:29:27Speaker 1: Yeah, almost like permanent, permanent altar kind of thing would.
- 2:29:30Speaker 2: Be, just like they made it a hollow ground and
- 2:29:33it won't go away. And the silo, I think disappearing
- 2:29:37is the Not only is the building that was previously
- 2:29:40had lights on and there was no grass around it
- 2:29:43and they thought they saw someone walk inside. Not only
- 2:29:47is that building being gone proof the cult isn't there,
- 2:29:50But the silo disappearing might be that the cult like
- 2:29:55the either the cult destroyed it or I think a
- 2:29:57cooler theory, maybe the cult inger the entity, and the
- 2:30:01entity dragged them and everything they had to hell, or
- 2:30:04like it took them away, it killed them and it
- 2:30:07took the silo with it, right like it destroyed it
- 2:30:09from the grounds. They're no longer worthy of it. That's
- 2:30:12why there's not even a sign that a silo was
- 2:30:14ever there, because it was a supernatural reclamation of it,
- 2:30:18so to speak. But even though the cult failed him,
- 2:30:20he's still looking for new converts within the tunnels.
- 2:30:24Speaker 1: I kind of like the idea my mind was kind
- 2:30:27of going to, which that, like everything you said, I
- 2:30:32think is really really fun my mind things. I always
- 2:30:36like the idea of entities just like high like like
- 2:30:40living in darkness. And by that I mean like because
- 2:30:43we never, like we never really push into the room
- 2:30:45and fully see past those twenty children, you know what
- 2:30:47I mean, We don't really know what's in the room
- 2:30:49past all that in the darkness. And I like to
- 2:30:51think that there's some kind of entity back in there
- 2:30:54that is like basically producing rot or something like. I
- 2:30:59don't know where exactly, I don't know. My mind hasn't
- 2:31:01connected where the rot is exactly coming from, right, But
- 2:31:03all these like flesh and guts. I like the idea
- 2:31:05of him making whatever entity it is, making its children,
- 2:31:09and they're just like these sickly children made of rot basically,
- 2:31:12and they harvest all of this dead meat and bile
- 2:31:16and bring it to him and like form them like
- 2:31:17almost like little Mannikin dolls, and then he like is
- 2:31:21able to manifest life out of these like big stacks
- 2:31:24of like flesh. And then all of these like all
- 2:31:27of these like kids are just literally born from rot,
- 2:31:29which is also why this this tunnel smells so bad.
- 2:31:32Not only from that, but the children moving perpetually smell
- 2:31:34fucking disgusting and they're nothing like that would be kind
- 2:31:39of sick.
- 2:31:39Speaker 2: Too, children made of filth, like and their their father,
- 2:31:43the architect who waits in the showers. Yeah, that's good,
- 2:31:46that's good.
- 2:31:47Speaker 1: Some kind of weird thing like that. Yeah, I think that,
- 2:31:49like you. And then like if they're born out of
- 2:31:50hate or some kind of evil nature, their eyes are
- 2:31:53perplexed with it. But then also what kind of makes
- 2:31:56sense too, of like one of them is like you know,
- 2:31:59one of them, let's them out, Like maybe they're not
- 2:32:01inherently like uh, evil or something, or you know, maybe
- 2:32:05it like just depends on which ones. But people born
- 2:32:08of these things or whatever, you know, we never really
- 2:32:10know their intentions. But just this thing lurking in the
- 2:32:13distance and creating it's like basically many children and stuff,
- 2:32:18which I don't know if he goes to Gap to
- 2:32:19get the nightgowns. But he could go to Gap. I
- 2:32:21don't know, dude knows the nightgowns.
- 2:32:25Speaker 2: I'll say. I like the I like the niche the
- 2:32:27story hits of being a like you're given a lot
- 2:32:33of clues, but you're also given a lot of room
- 2:32:36to make your own theories.
- 2:32:37Speaker 1: I like it.
- 2:32:37Speaker 2: It feels it feels fun.
- 2:32:39Speaker 1: I do too. I mean, I think that what it
- 2:32:41does well is it effectively gives you great visuals of
- 2:32:44like visuals that are very very good hooks. And what
- 2:32:49I what I think it does with that as well
- 2:32:52as you were able to run with those really great
- 2:32:54visuals because they're so pronounced at the front of your
- 2:32:57head that your mind starts going wild with it. Like
- 2:33:00I said, I really do think that if this was
- 2:33:01written even like six seven years later, I think that
- 2:33:05the author would have gone crazy with like showing exactly
- 2:33:09what their intent was. And I'm very curious to see
- 2:33:11what like like what you're saying too, of like letting
- 2:33:13theories build, because what twelve years around this time, You're
- 2:33:16probably not wrong, that's like what it was is like
- 2:33:18fanaf that old fanaff is probably that old, right, twelve
- 2:33:22years man twenty twelve or whatever. If it is, I
- 2:33:26mean like that, I mean that makes sense to have
- 2:33:28this kind of like world.
- 2:33:29Speaker 2: Building twenty fourteen and there, yeah, years old.
- 2:33:34Speaker 1: Around that time. I think, like I'd be curious if
- 2:33:37it was, if that was like a very pronounced thing.
- 2:33:38If there's people in their comment sections who were kind
- 2:33:41of around this time or remember stuff from this time,
- 2:33:43I'd love to have any insight from people who were
- 2:33:45kind of active around when those kinds of stories were happening,
- 2:33:48and if that was just kind of the flavor of
- 2:33:51the of the times, you know what I mean. So
- 2:33:53I think it's great though, I think this is cool.
- 2:33:55It was a fun story. I think that it's a
- 2:33:57this feels like a fun one. As always, two guys,
- 2:34:00if there's any suggestions, I know people keep saying Tales
- 2:34:02from the gas Station. People keep requesting that one, So
- 2:34:07I think we're definitely gonna switch up some stuff too
- 2:34:09and try to dive into different areas of horror stories
- 2:34:13as well. So any suggestions, always let us know. But
- 2:34:16I'm stoked, you know, as always, we appreciate your support
- 2:34:19and also, uh, we are always always interested in just
- 2:34:23reading new shit. That's like been my favorite thing about
- 2:34:25this podcast is being able to just continuously dive into
- 2:34:28new facets of horror, really fun stories.
- 2:34:32Speaker 2: Oh your favorite part isn't talking about old mister Weller's.
- 2:34:36Speaker 1: Mister Weller will become a new staple. He will become
- 2:34:39a featured meme on this podcast, for sure. I will.
- 2:34:42I will forcibly bring him into any kind of story
- 2:34:45at any given time. But who knows when.
- 2:34:47Speaker 2: Yeah, like you know that, you know in smiling friends,
- 2:34:51the whole Schmar move.
- 2:34:52Speaker 1: Beit.
- 2:34:53Speaker 2: Yeah, this cannot be undone.
- 2:34:58Speaker 1: Yeah, this could not be undone, except this time we
- 2:34:59don't have and you get to have a fake text
- 2:35:01to see who if he's going to be in it,
- 2:35:04it will happen. I will force this. I don't feel
- 2:35:06good about it. I'm praying to God that it that
- 2:35:09it lands well. Mister Weller.
- 2:35:12Speaker 2: Church is just going to be T shirt. It's just
- 2:35:14a white Haynes T shirt that says in black test mix,
- 2:35:18mister Weller's that's it' that's.
- 2:35:20Speaker 1: All, mister Weller. Yeah, it could not be a cheaper shirt,
- 2:35:23and it will be seventy.
- 2:35:24Speaker 2: Five dollars, not even a picture of him. It looks
- 2:35:26like the Supreme will go just the word, mister Weller.
- 2:35:31Speaker 1: It really could not be a lazier design than we
- 2:35:34are doing an extreme markup. So I don't know what
- 2:35:36else this was a second but yeah, without further is
- 2:35:40there anything else do you want to do? Or are
- 2:35:41we ready to hit the road?
- 2:35:43Speaker 2: I think that did it pretty well.
- 2:35:45Speaker 1: Again.
- 2:35:45Speaker 2: I really enjoyed this story. Everyone go, well, we'll link
- 2:35:49his Twitter or something or if.
- 2:35:51Speaker 1: All the all the links and stuff will be sure
- 2:35:54to put in the description as we always do, so
- 2:35:56you know, once again, be sure to read it yourself.
- 2:35:58Who knows, uh, or even with some of the things too,
- 2:36:01with the links uh, I like to put I like
- 2:36:03to think that maybe people like follow along with us
- 2:36:06with a text as well there show some support on
- 2:36:11the original post. If we have the socials as well,
- 2:36:14be sure to check out the people's profile and maybe
- 2:36:16some of the stuff they're doing.
- 2:36:17Speaker 2: Yeah that's Dylan Sindler. So thank you very much, Dylan
- 2:36:20for a cool story. I liked it a lot, and
- 2:36:22it's also scary, so good job.
- 2:36:24Speaker 1: We appreciate you, buddy. Well, until next time on creep Cast,
- 2:36:29we will see you. I guess when we see you.
- 2:36:32I was trying to think of an out. I don't
- 2:36:34have it. We'll see you when we see you. Are
- 2:36:37we doing? Do we still say stay spooked? Is that our?
- 2:36:40Is that our catchphrase?
- 2:36:40Speaker 2: Er? Now, did you say stay spooked or stay spooky?
- 2:36:45Speaker 1: Stay stay spooked, stay spooky, stay spook, stay spooked. We
- 2:36:53need to have a We need to have an I guess,
- 2:36:55have a have a That's what'll be our poll? What's
- 2:36:58our what's our log line? Out of here? Stay